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배경 사이즈 적절히 수정해주세요
16:9 16:10 4:3 비율 맞춰주셔야 해요
kantan
hp 7.5 써도 될것같아요

1/2에 스냅된게 너무 많은 것 같네요
이건 반드시 강조해야한다!!!! 하는 거 빼고 전부 1/1에 스냅하셔도 괜찮을 것 같네요
도입부는 전부 1/1로 밀어도 될것같아요

비슷한 부분인데도 노트간 간격이 일정하지 않은 부분이 많은 것 같아요
futsuu
00:02:470 ~ 00:11:899 랑 01:27:499 ~ 01:36:928 여기를 통일시키는게 나아보이네요
muzu
잠깐 얘기나눴던 도입부/마지막 부분 큰 동캇
작은 노트로 전부 바꾸셔도 문제 없을 것 같아요, 개인적으로 큰 노트의 경우는 히트사운드가 커서 부자연스러워 보여요
00:11:899 (26) - 01:27:499 (1) - 01:32:985 (15) - 01:36:927 (26) - 심벌 소리가 확실히 들리는 곳에만 쓰는걸 추천합니다 (imo)
oni
무즙처럼 도입부/마지막 부분 전부 작은노트로 바꾸시고 심벌소리 있는것만 바꿔주세요 - 역시 부자연스러워 보여요

00:04:013 (7) - k
00:04:184 - d 추가
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00:07:270 (19) - d
ㄴ 반복되는 부분도 같습니다 (마무리 부분도)

버려지는 드럼 소리가 너무 많은 것 같아요
inner
같습니다. 도입부/마지막 부분 전부 작은노트로 바꾸시고 심벌소리 있는것만 바꿔주세요

00:04:184 - d 추가
00:04:356 (8) - k
00:06:927 - k 추가
00:07:270 (19) - d
ㄴ 반복되는 부분도 같습니다 (역시 마무리 부분도)
이너 오니까지 나올만한 노래는 아닌 것 같읍읍
조언 수준이라 쿠도스 안주셔도 될듯요
필요하시면 다시 불러주세요
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Ozu

DDM wrote:


general
배경 사이즈 적절히 수정해주세요
16:9 16:10 4:3 비율 맞춰주셔야 해요 아직 적당한 bg를 못찾아서 그냥 귀여운 사진 넣어뒀어요!
futsuu
00:02:470 ~ 00:11:899 랑 01:27:499 ~ 01:36:928 여기를 통일시키는게 나아보이네요 fixed
muzu
잠깐 얘기나눴던 도입부/마지막 부분 큰 동캇
작은 노트로 전부 바꾸셔도 문제 없을 것 같아요, 개인적으로 큰 노트의 경우는 히트사운드가 커서 부자연스러워 보여요 첫마디 시작 부분 빼고 작은얘들로 바꿔보았습니다.
00:11:899 (26) - 01:27:499 (1) - 01:32:985 (15) - 01:36:927 (26) - 심벌 소리가 확실히 들리는 곳에만 쓰는걸 추천합니다 (imo)
oni
무즙처럼 도입부/마지막 부분 전부 작은노트로 바꾸시고 심벌소리 있는것만 바꿔주세요 - 역시 부자연스러워 보여요

00:04:013 (7) - k
00:04:184 - d 추가
00:04:356 (8) - k
00:06:927 - k 추가
00:07:270 (19) - d
ㄴ 반복되는 부분도 같습니다 (마무리 부분도) 보컬에 초점을 맞추고 작업을 해서 그런것 같습니다. keep

버려지는 드럼 소리가 너무 많은 것 같아요
inner
같습니다. 도입부/마지막 부분 전부 작은노트로 바꾸시고 심벌소리 있는것만 바꿔주세요

00:04:184 - d 추가
00:04:356 (8) - k
00:06:927 - k 추가
00:07:270 (19) - d
ㄴ 반복되는 부분도 같습니다 (역시 마무리 부분도) 큰놋이 많이 있는데 그 중간중간 작은놋들 있으면 너무 헷갈릴 것 같아서 일단 keep 해둘께요~
이너 오니까지 나올만한 노래는 아닌 것 같읍읍
조언 수준이라 쿠도스 안주셔도 될듯요
필요하시면 다시 불러주세요
모딩 감사합니다~♪(*´∀`)
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    Inner Oni
    모딩하던 중에 맵이 업데이트가 되서 불필요해진 부분 취소선 그었습니다.
  • 00:04:356 (8,9,10) - KD k 이렇게 하면 뒤에 오는 00:05:213 ~ 00:07:956 파트와 딱 반전이 되어서 좋을 듯 합니다. 큰노트로 한건 앞 큰노트와 소리 음량이 같기 때문에 제안
    00:09:842 (28,29,30) - ^
    01:29:385 (8,9,10) - ^
    01:34:871 (1,2,3) - ^
  • 00:07:098 (18) - D 위를 적용한다면 같이
    01:32:127 (18) - ^
  • 00:20:556 (86) - move to 00:20:384 여기만 앞 두개의 같은 구간과 패턴이 달라 통일성 고려해서 써둡니다.
    00:50:813 (9,10,11,12) - ddk d?
  • 00:53:384 (21) - remove? 지워도 될 듯
  • 맵 앞뒤에도 있기 때문에, 구체적으로 어디라고 하긴 뭐하지만, 키아이 타임 전반의 보이스 강조되는 부분에 큰노트를 더 배치해도 좋을 것 같아요.
  • 01:09:670 (35,36,37,38) - KKKK?
    01:20:641 (100,101,102,103) - ^
Topic Starter
Ozu

AsukaLangley wrote:


  • 공짜 모딩!!
    General
    1. Futsuu,Oni,Inner OniWidescreen Support가 체크되어 있어요!!
    2. 볼륨이 100%에요!
    Futsuu
    어떻게 해야할 지 잘 모르겠어서 하나를 만들었습니다. 참고하는데 써주시면 감사합니다

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    ArtistUnicode:チノ (CV.水瀬いのり)
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    Inner Oni
    모딩하던 중에 맵이 업데이트가 되서 불필요해진 부분 취소선 그었습니다.
  • 00:04:356 (8,9,10) - KD k 이렇게 하면 뒤에 오는 00:05:213 ~ 00:07:956 파트와 딱 반전이 되어서 좋을 듯 합니다. 큰노트로 한건 앞 큰노트와 소리 음량이 같기 때문에 제안 이부분 개인적으로 가장 마음에 들어서 섣불리 손을 대기가 쉽지 않네요... 일단 keep 해둘게요!
    00:09:842 (28,29,30) - ^
    01:29:385 (8,9,10) - ^
    01:34:871 (1,2,3) - ^
  • 00:07:098 (18) - D 위를 적용한다면 같이
    01:32:127 (18) - ^
  • 00:20:556 (86) - move to 00:20:384 여기만 앞 두개의 같은 구간과 패턴이 달라 통일성 고려해서 써둡니다.
    00:50:813 (9,10,11,12) - ddk d? 뒤의 패턴들과 붙었을 시 dk ddk 의 반복이 되어서 keep할게요.
  • 00:53:384 (21) - remove? 지워도 될 듯
  • 맵 앞뒤에도 있기 때문에, 구체적으로 어디라고 하긴 뭐하지만, 키아이 타임 전반의 보이스 강조되는 부분에 큰노트를 더 배치해도 좋을 것 같아요. 01:10:870 (42) , 01:21:841 (107) - 이부분들 K 놓는 식으로 한번 바꾸어보았습니다.
  • 01:09:670 (35,36,37,38) - KKKK? 이생각도 해봤었는데 큰놋 4개는 조금 심한거같아서...ㅠㅠ
    01:20:641 (100,101,102,103) - ^

깜짝모딩 너무 고맙습니다 ㅜㅜ
별까지 주시다니 진짜 고마워요~♪(*´∀`)
Akemi_Homura

DDM wrote:


kantan
hp 7.5 써도 될것같아요

1/2에 스냅된게 너무 많은 것 같네요
이건 반드시 강조해야한다!!!! 하는 거 빼고 전부 1/1에 스냅하셔도 괜찮을 것 같네요
도입부는 전부 1/1로 밀어도 될것같아요

비슷한 부분인데도 노트간 간격이 일정하지 않은 부분이 많은 것 같아요
감사합니다. 의견 반영해서 수정했습니다.
수정본
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Aisha
Hi! mod request from my queue t/579972 . Remember they're just suggestions so feel free to deny :P
lovely song ~

[General]
wow the gap between Kantan -> Futsuu is almost 1* and Futsuu -> Muzu is around 0,3*, take care about GD's (I don't mean it's bad, just try to be equilibrate)

[Kantan]
hmm why HP 7,5? I think HP 7 is good since it's a low bpm song :3
i recommend you in the beggining you should follow more the vocal, i mean for example moving 00:03:499 (2) - to 00:03:156 (2) - and making it kat :p (it follows greater the song ^^)
00:15:156 (15) - try moving this to 00:15:327 (15) - and making d d :p
on both suggestions try to make it consistent :p
00:17:899 (19) - k?
00:20:299 (22) - ^
00:24:756 (28) - idk if this deserves a finish note D: isn't bad but if you don't do it here it gives a better emphasis to next K
00:25:099 - add don here too maybe, it's not that difficult imo
00:49:099 (52) - don here, kat is too louder :c
00:49:099 - i think in this section you can give more rhythm, for example 00:52:527 (57) - adding don here
00:55:956 - ^
try to get kiai more difficult, add triplet here 01:09:670 - for consistency too
01:19:956 (7) - change to don and 01:21:156 - add note here
01:19:956 (7,8,9,10,11) - so much kats on a row D:
01:28:527 (2) - -> 01:28:184 (2) -
01:29:899 - add some here too

[Futsuu]
I suggest you OD: 4
i'm not good at futsuus so i'm gonna skip D:
00:03:670 (3) - finish? :c
just some random comment that i noticed randomly xD, 01:09:670 (22,23) - make them don :3

[Muzukashii]
00:01:099 - delete the red line xD
00:03:670 (4) - it doesn't deserve finisher imo
00:04:356 (6,7) - ctrl+g?
00:09:842 (20,21) - ^
00:23:384 (75) - make it kat for some dinamicy?
00:25:784 (82,83,84,85) - i don't like these 4 K, are kinda hard imo D:
00:28:699 (8) - you should delete notes like this, and give some breaks for this part :c
00:39:670 (8) - ^
01:09:670 (29,30) - dons? same at futsuu
01:13:099 (42) - don too
01:20:641 (73,75) - ^
01:34:869 (20,21) - ctrl+g

[Oni]
00:02:470 - this section have a lot of finishers, try to don't overuse them :c


Sorry about this short mod, i haven't so much time this days but i'll mod your Oni and Inner when i have more, call me back whenever you want to :)
Good luck with this cute song! :3
Topic Starter
Ozu

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi! mod request from my queue t/579972 . Remember they're just suggestions so feel free to deny :P
lovely song ~

[General]
wow the gap between Kantan -> Futsuu is almost 1* and Futsuu -> Muzu is around 0,3*, take care about GD's (I don't mean it's bad, just try to be equilibrate)


[Futsuu]
I suggest you OD: 4 fixed
i'm not good at futsuus so i'm gonna skip D:
00:03:670 (3) - finish? :c remove finish at each second.
just some random comment that i noticed randomly xD, 01:09:670 (22,23) - make them don :3 this is my point of this map, so keep

[Muzukashii]
00:01:099 - delete the red line xD ?_?
00:03:670 (4) - it doesn't deserve finisher imo fixed
00:04:356 (6,7) - ctrl+g? all fixed
00:09:842 (20,21) - ^
00:23:384 (75) - make it kat for some dinamicy? fixed some of these patterns.
00:25:784 (82,83,84,85) - i don't like these 4 K, are kinda hard imo D: i fixed but not updated ;w; really agree it
00:28:699 (8) - you should delete notes like this, and give some breaks for this part :c fixed and put some break time
00:39:670 (8) - ^
01:09:670 (29,30) - dons? same at futsuu same reason keep
01:13:099 (42) - don too fixed
01:20:641 (73,75) - ^ same reason keep
01:34:869 (20,21) - ctrl+g fixed

[Oni]
00:02:470 - this section have a lot of finishers, try to don't overuse them :c this section's Big notes is first point of this map. keep


Sorry about this short mod, i haven't so much time this days but i'll mod your Oni and Inner when i have more, call me back whenever you want to :)
Good luck with this cute song! :3 thanks <3

Thanks for nice modding~
really helpful modding of futsuu and muzu!
Akemi_Homura
xfraczynho

xfraczynho wrote:

[General]
wow the gap between Kantan -> Futsuu is almost 1* and Futsuu -> Muzu is around 0,3*, take care about GD's (I don't mean it's bad, just try to be equilibrate) changed some part. so gap is reduce.

[Kantan]
hmm why HP 7,5? I think HP 7 is good since it's a low bpm song :3 fix.
i recommend you in the beggining you should follow more the vocal, i mean for example moving 00:03:499 (2) - to 00:03:156 (2) - and making it kat :p (it follows greater the song ^^)
00:15:156 (15) - try moving this to 00:15:327 (15) - and making d d :p fix.
on both suggestions try to make it consistent :p
00:17:899 (19) - k? fix.
00:20:299 (22) - ^ fix.
00:24:756 (28) - idk if this deserves a finish note D: isn't bad but if you don't do it here it gives a better emphasis to next K fix.
00:25:099 - add don here too maybe, it's not that difficult imo fix.
00:49:099 (52) - don here, kat is too louder :c fix.
00:49:099 - i think in this section you can give more rhythm, for example 00:52:527 (57) - adding don here fix.
00:55:956 - ^ fix.
try to get kiai more difficult, add triplet here 01:09:670 - for consistency too fix.
01:19:956 (7) - change to don and 01:21:156 - add note here changed this part.
01:19:956 (7,8,9,10,11) - so much kats on a row D: fix.
01:28:527 (2) - -> 01:28:184 (2) - chagned this part.
01:29:899 - add some here too fix.
Thank you~! :3
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JUDYDANNY
No Kudosu please

Requested from Akemi Homuhomu~.
Quick checking Kantan.

  • |00:02:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - its a little over dense (as Intro , beginning).
    remove somewhere?
  1. I suggest you to remove 3 spots: 00:03:156 - , 00:05:899 - , 00:08:641 - ?
  2. If you prefer, can remove more 3 spots too: 00:04:527 - , 00:07:270 - ,00:10:013 -. It can more emphasized the calmer part.
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7882466
|From 00:27:156 - , nerf the more to make the gap of density with 00:38:127 - ~.
  1. 00:29:213 - , 00:33:670 - remove?
00:37:270 - add finisher K?

|From 00:49:099 - , Its over dense. You can remove the more. Drums and Instrumental sounds relatively mild.
  1. 00:49:784 - , 00:51:156 - remove?
  2. 00:53:899 - remove?
  3. 00:54:927 - , 00:56:299 - , 00:56:641 - remove too?
01:02:813 - Add Finish Don. and make spinner shorter plz.
01:05:556 - add finish too please..01:16:527 - ^.01:19:956 (7,10) - change to k? the gap ...01:08:299 (8,9,10,11,12) - .
01:23:899 - and 01:24:584 - , move to 1/2 right.

|From 01:27:499 - , same as Intro.
  1. 01:28:184 - , 01:29:899 - , 01:30:927 - ,01:32:641 - , 01:35:384 - remove?
Good luck ~~
Topic Starter
Ozu
little updated ( ,,Ծˇ​ ‸ ˇ​Ծ,,)

fixed kiai time
remapping Muzukashii
remapping all of diff part that kiai is starting.
fixed some of Inner Oni
Akemi_Homura
SPOILER

JUDYDANNY wrote:

No Kudosu please

Requested from Akemi Homuhomu~.
Quick checking Kantan.

  • |00:02:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - its a little over dense (as Intro , beginning).
    remove somewhere?
  1. I suggest you to remove 3 spots: 00:03:156 - , 00:05:899 - , 00:08:641 - ?
  2. If you prefer, can remove more 3 spots too: 00:04:527 - , 00:07:270 - ,00:10:013 -. It can more emphasized the calmer part.
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7882466
|From 00:27:156 - , nerf the more to make the gap of density with 00:38:127 - ~.
  1. 00:29:213 - , 00:33:670 - remove?
00:37:270 - add finisher K?

|From 00:49:099 - , Its over dense. You can remove the more. Drums and Instrumental sounds relatively mild.
  1. 00:49:784 - , 00:51:156 - remove?
  2. 00:53:899 - remove?
  3. 00:54:927 - , 00:56:299 - , 00:56:641 - remove too?
01:02:813 - Add Finish Don. and make spinner shorter plz.
01:05:556 - add finish too please..01:16:527 - ^.01:19:956 (7,10) - change to k? the gap ...01:08:299 (8,9,10,11,12) - .
01:23:899 - and 01:24:584 - , move to 1/2 right.

|From 01:27:499 - , same as Intro.
  1. 01:28:184 - , 01:29:899 - , 01:30:927 - ,01:32:641 - , 01:35:384 - remove?
Good luck ~~
All fixed. :D and fixed some part refer to your advice.
Thank you so much~ JuDa san~! :3
It's really help to me that find out direction of this map.
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streeteelf
From my SEE's Taiko M4M Queue

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:23:041 (48) - change to d to be constant with 00:17:556 (36,37,38)
  2. 00:27:156 - I'd change this to something like this , 'cause red ticks are a little strange for me here and 00:38:127 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - as well
  3. 01:23:041 (21) - delete to make a little break before finish
  4. 01:23:556 (23) - add finish
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:156 - Like in Futsuu, but I'd use this pattern here: to follow the same rhythm w/o changing whole patterning
  2. 00:38:127 - Same as above, add 2 notes
  3. I'd also add some (2, maybe 3) 1/4 patterns in Kiai like ddd or kkk eg. 01:24:413 - There's sound in background you are not using in map
[Oni]
  1. 00:23:727 (99) - I'd change to k for better gameplay w/o changing diffuculty of map
  2. 01:26:813 (1) - change to d
  3. 01:38:470 (41) - change to K
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:28:527 - Feels empty, I suggest adding d here
  2. 00:40:184 - Same as above, also d
  3. 00:49:099 - You can add here timing point and slow a little map by using like x0.9 SV (the same in Oni if you want and in other diffs with x1.0 SV so timing points will be the same in all diffs
  4. 01:26:813 (1) - Same as Oni, change to d
  5. 01:38:470 (16) - change to K like in Oni to be constant with Futsuu and Muzukashii
Generally nice mapset, good luck~ :3
Topic Starter
Ozu

streeteelf wrote:

From my SEE's Taiko M4M Queue

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:23:041 (48) - change to d to be constant with 00:17:556 (36,37,38) fixed
  2. 00:27:156 - I'd change this to something like this , 'cause red ticks are a little strange for me here and 00:38:127 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - as well remapped this part
  3. 01:23:041 (21) - delete to make a little break before finish ' little break time < rhythm' imo so keep
  4. 01:23:556 (23) - add finish fixed
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:156 - Like in Futsuu, but I'd use this pattern here: to follow the same rhythm w/o changing whole patterning keep now. so confused this part's pttern @o@
  2. 00:38:127 - Same as above, add 2 notes
  3. I'd also add some (2, maybe 3) 1/4 patterns in Kiai like ddd or kkk eg. can't rashly add cause of big note and rhythm ;w;
    01:24:413 - There's sound in background you are not using in map i did on purpose because of little break time xD
[Oni]
  1. 00:23:727 (99) - I'd change to k for better gameplay w/o changing diffuculty of map fixed front pattern to kkk
  2. 01:26:813 (1) - change to d fixed
  3. 01:38:470 (41) - change to K fixed
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  1. 00:28:527 - Feels empty, I suggest adding d here follow piano sound, so keep
  2. 00:40:184 - Same as above, also d
  3. 00:49:099 - You can add here timing point and slow a little map by using like x0.9 SV (the same in Oni if you want and in other diffs with x1.0 SV so timing points will be the same in all diffs awesome!!!
  4. 01:26:813 (1) - Same as Oni, change to d fixed
  5. 01:38:470 (16) - change to K like in Oni to be constant with Futsuu and Muzukashii fixed
Generally nice mapset, good luck~ :3

Thanks for modding~ <3
JessiChan
Hi! M4M request from your queue òwó)9

Akemi's Kantan


  1. 00:20:299 (20) - Red for consistency
  2. 00:23:041 (24) - Same^
  3. 00:31:956 (35) - Delete for more space 00:32:641 (36) - Change to blue and 00:34:699 (39) - Delete for more space
  4. 00:40:870 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - ^ Same
  5. Try this: 01:06:241 (4) - 01:08:984 (9) - 01:11:727 (14) - 01:14:470 (19) - Delete to give them space to read the patterns of three that you put. Since these players are hardly adapting to the colors, it is best to give them a little respite to see these three together.
  6. 01:17:213 - same ^

Futsuu


  1. 00:04:527 (7) - Delete to make it a little simpler and easier.
  2. 00:07:270 (14) - Same
  3. 00:10:013 (21) - ^
  4. 01:00:413 (2,4) - Erase these two, give them a break since all of the above is very often and has almost no rest, and change this note: 01:01:441 (5) - to blue.
  5. 01:15:156 (29) - It is better that this slider arrives here: 01:15:841 - It is less confusing for them.
  6. 01:29:556 (7) - From here just like the start.

Muzukashii


  1. 00:29:384 (8,9) - Erase these two, try not to place as many doubles. In Muzukashii you can put triplets but the best thing is to place them unicolor, it is almost the same with the doubles, if you can put them of different color but very often it can confuse. If you delete these, you will give a small space to continue playing.
  2. 00:34:870 (24,25) - Same^
  3. 00:40:356 (40,41) - ^
  4. 00:45:841 (56,57) - ^
  5. 00:58:870 (100) - I think it would be fine if you delete this note, it does not sound bad, it is more relaxed.
  6. 01:18:584 (9) - Red

Oni


  1. 00:15:156 (49) - Blue
  2. 00:20:641 (80) - Same^
  3. 00:23:813 (100,101) - ctrl + g sounds better :3

    Nice diff.

Inner Oni


  1. 00:04:184 - add note :3 red if you want
  2. 00:05:898 (14) - Blue and 00:06:927 - add note
  3. 00:09:670 - add note
  4. 00:22:441 (97,98) - ctrl + g
  5. 01:29:213 - add note
  6. 01:30:927 (14) - Blue and 01:31:956 - add note
  7. 01:34:699 - add note

Good Luck! :)
Topic Starter
Ozu
JessiChan <3

JessiChan wrote:

Hi! M4M request from your queue òwó)9


Futsuu


  1. 00:04:527 (7) - Delete to make it a little simpler and easier. awesome!! fixed <3
  2. 00:07:270 (14) - Same
  3. 00:10:013 (21) - ^
  4. 01:00:413 (2,4) - Erase these two, give them a break since all of the above is very often and has almost no rest, and change this note: 01:01:441 (5) - to blue. removed two circle, and change color
  5. 01:15:156 (29) - It is better that this slider arrives here: 01:15:841 - It is less confusing for them. fixed
  6. 01:29:556 (7) - From here just like the start.

Muzukashii


  1. 00:29:384 (8,9) - Erase these two, try not to place as many doubles. In Muzukashii you can put triplets but the best thing is to place them unicolor, it is almost the same with the doubles, if you can put them of different color but very often it can confuse. If you delete these, you will give a small space to continue playing. seems great xD
  2. 00:34:870 (24,25) - Same^
  3. 00:40:356 (40,41) - ^
  4. 00:45:841 (56,57) - ^
  5. 00:58:870 (100) - I think it would be fine if you delete this note, it does not sound bad, it is more relaxed. fixed
  6. 01:18:584 (9) - Red fixed dkkd

Oni


  1. 00:15:156 (49) - Blue fixed
  2. 00:20:641 (80) - Same^
  3. 00:23:813 (100,101) - ctrl + g sounds better :3 keep now

    Nice diff. Thanks <3

Inner Oni


  1. 00:04:184 - add note :3 red if you want keep this part now, cause im studying this streams...
  2. 00:05:898 (14) - Blue and 00:06:927 - add note
  3. 00:09:670 - add note
  4. 00:22:441 (97,98) - ctrl + g fixed
  5. 01:29:213 - add note
  6. 01:30:927 (14) - Blue and 01:31:956 - add note
  7. 01:34:699 - add note

Good Luck! :)

Thanks for mod!
Great help at low diff xD
Akemi_Homura
JessiChan

JessiChan wrote:

Hi! M4M request from your queue òwó)9

Akemi's Kantan


  1. 00:20:299 (20) - Red for consistency
  2. 00:23:041 (24) - Same^
  3. 00:31:956 (35) - Delete for more space 00:32:641 (36) - Change to blue and 00:34:699 (39) - Delete for more space
  4. 00:40:870 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - ^ Same
  5. Try this: 01:06:241 (4) - 01:08:984 (9) - 01:11:727 (14) - 01:14:470 (19) - Delete to give them space to read the patterns of three that you put. Since these players are hardly adapting to the colors, it is best to give them a little respite to see these three together.
  6. 01:17:213 - same ^

Good Luck! :)

All fixed. Thank you~! :3
owo
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Stefan
hi owo/

[General]
It feels weird that the kiai starts 2/1 later while the music rather sounds to start with the kiai at 01:05:556 - . If you prefer that, that's fine. I just find it pretty odd.

[Kantan]
00:30:584 (33,34) - Personally I'd switch them so you have k d k first, then d k d and again k d k. However, nothing major so feel free to disagree.
00:41:556 (45,46) - ^
00:57:327 (4,5) - I'd remove (5) and change (4) to d - it's a nicer build up to 00:58:699 (6,1) - and sounds more consistent.
01:17:899 (2,3,4) - and 01:20:641 (6,7,8) - I made some thoughts about these two parts and maybe we could use some mirroring to 01:06:927 (4,5,6) - 01:09:670 (8,9,10) - . 01:17:899 (2,3,4) - should be dkk and 01:20:641 (6,7,8) - to kkd.

[Futsuu]
00:02:470 - 00:11:899 - Comparing this with the Muzukashii difficulty, you should nerf this part since both are really similar in this part. That's one example you could follow: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/qeMX4Esq.png I'd generally exclude 1/2 notes for this part since Muzukashii uses them too, also that part in Kantan is quite calm, you should also keep that calm for the Futsuu difficulty here.
00:17:899 (34,35) - how about switching them? It'd add a little note of variation in this part of the difficulty. Apply this for 00:23:384 (46,47) - too.
00:38:127 (22,23,24) - I felt that k d d sounds better, the previous loop with d k d was nice but repeating it is boring and it's good you do something else here. But like said, personally I find k d d better. Same for 00:43:613 (32,33,34) - .

[Muzukashii]
So I've been testplaying the difficulty and noticed how easy it actually is. I was quite surprised and checked the Oni difficulty afterwards and.. well, the Muzukashii is too easy. The only thing I'd suggest to do is to add some triplets in the difficulty since Oni works with many multi-colour triplets and even five-lets. Having some single-colour triplets in the Muzukashii will regulate the spread better and the jumps between the difficulties are smoother.

Good places for triplets would be 00:48:327 - , 01:01:956 - , 01:07:356 - , 01:12:841 - , 01:18:327 - , 01:38:041 - (also add a note on 01:37:956 - ). If you find other places to use them, that's also good.

[Oni]
00:23:813 (100,101) - Wouldn't you just switch them? Because of the light sound at 00:23:899 - it'd be a better choice.
01:05:727 - Since the Kiai starts at 01:05:899 - the SV of 0.95x still applies for 01:05:727 (13) - . Add here a green line with 1.00x but without the kiai. It looks pretty weird that 01:05:727 (13) - is apart of 01:05:899 (14) - .

I think I found something I want to check again. I will come back and check out the map after you guys applied to my mod.
Akemi_Homura
Stefan

Stefan wrote:

hi owo/
[Kantan]
00:30:584 (33,34) - Personally I'd switch them so you have k d k first, then d k d and again k d k. However, nothing major so feel free to disagree. I think 00:31:270 little high pitch than previous two. but It's not huge gap. so changed d k d. now we can highlight next k. it's better. :3 Thank you~
00:41:556 (45,46) - ^ fixed too. :3
00:57:327 (4,5) - I'd remove (5) and change (4) to d - it's a nicer build up to 00:58:699 (6,1) - and sounds more consistent. fixed.
01:17:899 (2,3,4) - and 01:20:641 (6,7,8) - I made some thoughts about these two parts and maybe we could use some mirroring to 01:06:927 (4,5,6) - 01:09:670 (8,9,10) - . 01:17:899 (2,3,4) - should be dkk and 01:20:641 (6,7,8) - to kkd. That's nice. Fixed.

Thank you~! Stefan~ ><

owo/
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Topic Starter
Ozu

Stefan wrote:

hi owo/ hi~ owo/

[General]
It feels weird that the kiai starts 2/1 later while the music rather sounds to start with the kiai at 01:05:556 - . If you prefer that, that's fine. I just find it pretty odd. add futsuu and muzukashii k at the kiai start line

[Futsuu]
00:02:470 - 00:11:899 - Comparing this with the Muzukashii difficulty, you should nerf this part since both are really similar in this part. That's one example you could follow: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/qeMX4Esq.png I'd generally exclude 1/2 notes for this part since Muzukashii uses them too, also that part in Kantan is quite calm, you should also keep that calm for the Futsuu difficulty here. now looks better and more like futsuu! fixed, thanks xD
00:17:899 (34,35) - how about switching them? It'd add a little note of variation in this part of the difficulty. Apply this for 00:23:384 (46,47) - too. fixed little pattern to follow your opinion.
00:38:127 (22,23,24) - I felt that k d d sounds better, the previous loop with d k d was nice but repeating it is boring and it's good you do something else here. But like said, personally I find k d d better. Same for 00:43:613 (32,33,34) - . 00:38:127 (22,23,24) - kdd fixed and to make little mirroring pattern to avoid boring, 00:43:613 (32,33,34) - ddk used.

[Muzukashii]
So I've been testplaying the difficulty and noticed how easy it actually is. I was quite surprised and checked the Oni difficulty afterwards and.. well, the Muzukashii is too easy. The only thing I'd suggest to do is to add some triplets in the difficulty since Oni works with many multi-colour triplets and even five-lets. Having some single-colour triplets in the Muzukashii will regulate the spread better and the jumps between the difficulties are smoother.

Good places for triplets would be 00:48:327 - , 01:01:956 - , 01:07:356 - , 01:12:841 - , 01:18:327 - , 01:38:041 - (also add a note on 01:37:956 - ). If you find other places to use them, that's also good. all added, and add triple to some other places.

[Oni]
00:23:813 (100,101) - Wouldn't you just switch them? Because of the light sound at 00:23:899 - it'd be a better choice. fixed
01:05:727 - Since the Kiai starts at 01:05:899 - the SV of 0.95x still applies for 01:05:727 (13) - . Add here a green line with 1.00x but without the kiai. It looks pretty weird that 01:05:727 (13) - is apart of 01:05:899 (14) - . fixed

I think I found something I want to check again. I will come back and check out the map after you guys applied to my mod. (。◕ˇдˇ​◕。) thank you!!
Thanks for nice modding and icon, Stefan xD
toara_fict
Hiya M4M desu ~

[ General]
  1. kiai time : 01:05:384 - ~ ?
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[Akemi's Kantan]
  1. fine.
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[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:28:356 (4,5,6) - move 00:28:528 (4,5,6) - ( むずかしい :( )

  2. 00:33:841 (14,15,16) - ^

  3. 00:39:327 (25,26,27) - ^

  4. 00:44:813 (35,36,37) - ^
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:28:356 - move 00:28:527 - & 00:28:699 - delete ( follow vocal. )

  2. 00:39:327 (37,38,39) - ( some ^ )

  3. 00:44:127 (51) - move 00:44:299 (50) - & 00:44:641 (53) - delete ( follow drum & Vocal )

  4. 00:57:413 - 00:58:784 - delete :3

  5. 01:01:870 - or 01:01:527 - delete :3

  6. The difficulty of this diff : kiai part <<<<< other part :(
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[ Oni]
  1. 00:45:327 - add d here :3 ( follow Vocal )

  2. 01:11:899 - add d here ( follow vocal )

  3. 01:12:756 - 01:12:841 - add k & 01:12:927 (51) - change d :3 ( follow vocal & back sounds. )

  4. 01:14:813 - add d here ( feeling ww & Vocal)

  5. 01:18:756 - add k here ( some ^ )

  6. 01:24:756 - add d ( drum sounds. )
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Topic Starter
Ozu

toara_fict wrote:

Hiya M4M desu ~

[ General]
  1. kiai time : 01:05:384 - ~ ? omg, what i did xp ~ 01:25:956 fixed


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[Akemi's Kantan]
  1. fine.
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[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:28:356 (4,5,6) - move 00:28:528 (4,5,6) - ( むずかしい :( ) 少し難しいビートであるが、、ピアノ音に合わせたので一度keepしています。

  2. 00:33:841 (14,15,16) - ^

  3. 00:39:327 (25,26,27) - ^

  4. 00:44:813 (35,36,37) - ^
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:28:356 - move 00:28:527 - & 00:28:699 - delete ( follow vocal. ) こちらもピアノ音に重点を置いて配置したので、一度keepしています。

  2. 00:39:327 (37,38,39) - ( some ^ )

  3. 00:44:127 (51) - move 00:44:299 (50) - & 00:44:641 (53) - delete ( follow drum & Vocal ) すごくいい!ありがとう〜

  4. 00:57:413 - 00:58:784 - delete :3 fixed

  5. 01:01:870 - or 01:01:527 - delete :3 01:01:870 deleted

  6. The difficulty of this diff : kiai part <<<<< other part :( kiai部分少し難しく改めました xD
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[ Oni]
  1. 00:45:327 - add d here :3 ( follow Vocal ) fixed

  2. 01:11:899 - add d here ( follow vocal ) fixed

  3. 01:12:756 - 01:12:841 - add k & 01:12:927 (51) - change d :3 ( follow vocal & back sounds. )
    for more emphasize 01:12:241 (47,49,50) - this k, keep

  4. 01:14:813 - add d here ( feeling ww & Vocal) fixed

  5. 01:18:756 - add k here ( some ^ ) fixed

  6. 01:24:756 - add d ( drum sounds. ) added and 01:24:413 (107,108,109) - fixed kkd
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modding ありがとう〜( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ
Stefan
Two things before we can go:

  1. The artist is labeled as "チノ (CV.水瀬いのり)" while I am wondering if the space between "チノ" and "(CV.水瀬いのり)" is needed. Checking the mp3 it's without that space and I'd assume the mp3 is directly coming from the CD. I can't confirm it's to 100% correct so can you give some informations?

  2. Just to be secure; go to the Timing Tab and then choose "Resnap all notes", since it happens that some notes are unsnapped for 1ms. Not tragic or anything but since we can do this before bubbling it doesn't hurt to do that quickly. Be sure to have the snap divisor on 1/4.
After that, pm me.
Stefan
Made a quick fix for the BG in the Kantan difficulty and updated it.

Who cares for double posts. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Bubbled.
Topic Starter
Ozu

Stefan wrote:

Made a quick fix for the BG in the Kantan difficulty and updated it.

Who cares for double posts. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Bubbled.

Thanks you Stefan!!!!!!! xD
Surono
spontaneous the owner mapper ask me about bubble map or idk.. dem I guess he want me check his map but actually just missunderstanding with his words :"D gj sir Stefan makes ppl happy looooool


Stefan wrote:

Who cares for double posts. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
bosshh of double possht
ddm
각이다
milr_
오오 축하드려영 !!
Aisha
gratz bro! i'm envy about it ;; waiting for the ranked:3
Surono
sir stefan dem...
14:48 Surono: 00:27:156 - would finish finish it for alteration of sounds. yeah and that is cymbal sounds
14:49 Surono: *just finish, sry typing it twice lmao
14:49 Surono: for Oni
14:50 Surono: wait.. this overall.. follow........... vocal?????? at emphasize finish?? dem idk
14:50 404 AccNotFound: oh, fixed D~
14:50 Surono: nice.. I will help to point out some that need finish
14:51 404 AccNotFound: thanks <3
14:51 404 AccNotFound: 00:38:127 (1) -
14:51 404 AccNotFound: here, i think same point, changed D
14:52 Surono: good
14:52 Surono: 00:54:584 -
14:53 Surono: 00:57:327 - and 01:05:727 - move to 01:05:556 - here and give finish
14:54 404 AccNotFound: wow, like magic xD
14:54 404 AccNotFound: very awesome xDDDDD
14:54 404 AccNotFound: all fixed~
14:54 Surono: ;w; why sir Stefan forget to care all cymbal to finish lol
14:55 Surono: its applied for your muzukashii too
14:55 404 AccNotFound: ok
14:56 Surono: 01:11:213 - and again, move to 01:11:041 - here and give it finish.. music is important in rhytm games
14:56 404 AccNotFound: ok fixed
14:57 Surono: 01:13:956 - to left with tick and finish, and on muzukashii just give finish right? lol
14:57 404 AccNotFound: 01:16:527 (72) -
14:57 404 AccNotFound: same fixed maybe
14:57 Surono: yes
14:57 404 AccNotFound: 01:22:013 (99) -
14:57 Surono: 01:16:184 - and give it finish
14:58 Surono: yes that.
14:58 404 AccNotFound: ok fixed >:3
14:59 Surono: and now update it, I will test this.
14:59 404 AccNotFound: is it ok that bubble poped?
15:00 Surono: yes, since is not bubble poped from BN
15:00 Surono: after I test it, and I think is good.. I can Rank this :P
15:00 404 AccNotFound: and i fix muzu finish
15:00 Surono: good
15:01 Surono: done update?
15:01 404 AccNotFound: yes
15:03 404 AccNotFound: muzu updated!
15:05 404 AccNotFound: and last futsuu, updated
15:09 *Surono is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1266087 Chino(CV.Minase Inori) - Okashina yume o Ohitotsu douzo [Oni]]
15:09 Surono: 01:13:956 - to 01:13:784 - and finish
15:10 Surono: yeah
15:10 Surono: damn conection
15:11 404 AccNotFound: xD 1 second = 1 hour to me now lol
15:11 Surono: 01:13:956 - done?
15:11 404 AccNotFound: finish?
15:12 Surono: yes
15:12 Surono: 01:13:784 - to here
15:12 404 AccNotFound: oh, didn't do that, fixed now :)
15:12 Surono: 01:16:527 - finish, that cymbal
15:13 Surono: idk why stefan hurry bubble this, because he really like map like.. such 2014~2015 stye mapping...
15:15 404 AccNotFound: lul sorry... fixed all <3
15:15 Surono: 01:37:870 - why not move to 01:38:213 - here for piano bcus is strong than the current, more emphasized
15:15 *Surono is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1273954 Chino(CV.Minase Inori) - Okashina yume o Ohitotsu douzo [Muzukashii]]
15:16 404 AccNotFound: fixed
15:17 Surono: 00:27:156 - 00:32:641 - 00:43:613 - 00:55:956 - finish and 00:57:499 - wow.. delete this.. muzukashii is ddkdk but in Oni is just d kdk
15:18 404 AccNotFound: ok
15:19 404 AccNotFound: 00:57:327 (93) -
15:19 404 AccNotFound: added finish, is it ok?
15:19 Surono: should and 00:57:327 (93) - here, then 00:58:870 - delete this...
15:20 404 AccNotFound: ok fixed
15:20 Surono: I just realised in Futsuu.. the density is too far
15:21 Surono: eh, I will continue and will ask it at end to you..
15:21 Surono: 01:05:556 (21,22) - finish
15:22 Surono: 01:05:556 - ohh this doesnt need finish, just 01:05:899 - this
15:22 404 AccNotFound: all same point fixed
15:22 Surono: and now I asking you, are you ready if this map is qualified?
15:23 Surono: do you feel its ready or not?
15:23 404 AccNotFound: wait, play once time muzu,
15:23 404 AccNotFound: sorry waiting
15:25 404 AccNotFound: ready for qualified.
15:25 Surono: but I have bad feeling, your map good enough but I feel know if community will point out for your map.. bcus this style and spread are really worrying
15:25 Surono: but okay, lets try...

fixed some notes that forget to give finish and improve some awkward notes on Oni... and dem Muzukashii fine.

2014~2015 mapping style, Let's try.....

Qualified , good luck .
Smallwu
Nice! ^q^
Chromoxx
Gratz on first ranked map! :D
Topic Starter
Ozu

Smallwu wrote:

Nice! ^q^

Chromoxx wrote:

Gratz on first ranked map! :D
Thank you guys x)
alacat
Which site did you take the romanised title from ?
If that is not the official title, The title should be "Okashi na Yume o Ohitotsu Douzo"
Let me know if you want to fix it.
Skylish
From my modding queue. I am sorry to post a veto mod here, due to timing problem, primarily, and the overall quality of the beatmap.

[General]

> As Stefan had mentioned, the Kiai starting time is weird. The start of Kiai should be the starting note (either the Vocal/ Instrument) of Chorus, i.e. 01:05:556 - in Kantan - Muzukashii, / 01:05:384 - in Oni . Otherwise, please explain why do you want to start the Kiai at 01:05:899 - . With shifted Kiai, 01:05:899 - these Finishers are weird after all, please remove the Finish as well.

EDIT: > The metadata is wrong. 'CV.' should be excluded from the title based on the official info.
Source ref.: http://www.gochiusa.com/contents/cd/index03440000.html /

[Timing]

> A new red timing point should be set at 00:02:470 - . It is the 'real' start of the music and thereby by needing a red timing point for indicating a re-set metronome (on-beat). A further evidence for its presence is 00:13:441 - , which is the 9th bar. Normally, music is divided in 8 bars for a section. My suggestion should work.

> In addition, as you are not going to map anything before 00:02:470 - , 00:01:099 - can be removed. (Just directly use ONE inherited timing point at 00:02:470 - .)

[Akemi's Kantan]

> Looks good

[Futsuu]

> 00:28:356 (4,5,6) - They are out of track. 00:27:156 - / 00:28:527 - in terms of melody, they are the same. A same or similar structure is expected (nnn nnn on the on-beat starting). Maybe you can also try using patterns that fit the vocal completely (like what you did in Muzukashii at 00:27:156 - ).

Give you some suggestion 00:27:156 (1) - :

> ^ I prefer this pattern since it is less complicated and able to show consistencies with the music.

> ^ This pattern may be too complicated for Futsuu and does not bring a good density spread later on, not really preferred any way.

> 00:34:184 - / 00:45:156 - remove it since you left a gap at 00:31:441 - / 00:42:413 - , the pattern of 00:33:841 - & 00:31:099 - should be consistent.

> 00:37:270 - K suits more than D does due to the high pitch.

> 00:39:327 - same as 00:28:356 - , fix it on your own based on what you are going to fix at 00:28:356 - .

> 01:00:070 - add Finish to state the strong and high-pitch vocal?

> 01:05:899 - As mentioned above in General, please remove Finish effect, or please explain why you would like to do so (I guess you want to emphasize the trumpet, but that is not necessary to do so because you mapping channel follows the vocal pretty solidly). 01:05:556 - The on-beat cymbal crash is more noticable comparing with the trumpet, therefore it worths a Finish instead of putting it at 01:05:899 - .(In normal situation Finisher is used in the first beat except special cases, and yours is not)

^ 01:11:384 - same as above ^

> 01:12:756 - how about shifting 1/2 backward to 01:12:584 - for the sake of vocal presence there? Check 01:23:556 - as well, the vocal rhythm is the same, and hence the pattern you mapped should also be the same and consistent.

> 01:23:899 - please shift this note to 01:24:070 - . It should be consistent with 01:13:099 - .

> 01:38:127 - how about changing it to k for the consistency?
[Muzukashii]

> 00:27:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pretty much the same with Futsuu's situation. 00:28:013 (4,5,6,7,8) - is completely off from instrumental part or vocal part.

How about 00:27:156 (1) - :


00:27:156 - / 00:28:527 - show the vocal perfectly by d kd
00:28:527 (6) - is d because there are higher pitches of vocal at 00:28:184 (4,5) - .

> 00:30:413 - shift 1/2 forward to 00:30:584 - in order to match the vocal please.... The current position sounds really off.

> 00:33:156 - same as above, shift it to 00:33:327 - this time. If you follow vocal, then keep following it.

> 00:33:499 - you may change it to k for variation purpose.

> 00:37:270 - K here sounds better especially you have D at 00:36:927 - . K D K can show the vocal pitch flow very well.

> 00:38:127 - same as 00:27:156 - , also please fix it on your own.

> 00:41:384 - same case at 00:30:413 -

> 00:41:727 - k may be changed as you use 'kat' as the main theme in this section.

> 00:58:699 (98) - Shouldn't it also be a Finisher? Be consistent with 00:54:584 - / 00:55:956 - / 00:57:327 -

! 01:05:899 - same question about the use of Kiai and Finisher here, you need to explain why you would like to map like this.

[Oni]

> 00:25:784 (106,107,108,109) - Finishers here should make more sense than small notes since their dynamic is identical to 00:24:756 (104,105) - . Meanwhile, you use Finishers in the same in other difficulties (Futsuu and Muzuashii). Consistency across difficulties should be well considered.

> 00:37:270 - same as above

> 00:44:299 - Here's an obvious density drop comparing with the patterns at 00:33:327 - , they are meant to be rhymatically similar, but now they are not.

> 00:51:499 (9,10) - how about ctrl+G (d k) considering their pitch differences?

> 01:00:070 (45) - You definitely missed a Finisher right here.

> 01:05:384 - as mentioned in General, you can start the Kiai at this timing since you emphasize the start with this don on the vocal note.

> 01:09:841 - It is fine for being a kat in Muzukashii, but you need some appropriate changes in Oni since players should be able to play more complicated patterns like polychrome 1/2 patterns. This note should be a d to represent the vocal pitch flow more clearly.

> 01:18:070 - similar case at 00:44:299 - . This time, it shows an extra progression by mapping both trumpets and vocal. While 01:07:099 - is straightly mapping to the vocal. 01:18:756 - should be empty hence. A progression is not really needed in this song as there is no obvious stronger music at the second part of Chorus.

> 01:09:156 - absolutely the same case as above, remove it due to the blank at 01:20:127 -

> 01:25:784 - you can put a kat here to fulfil all musical elements before the spinner, if you like.

> 01:26:813 - I don't think it is good to add a little stream right here since the drum set is pretty weak and you are not likely following the drum along the whole song anyway. It is strange and out of your mapping channel. Just ending the spinner at 01:27:156 - would be fine.

> 01:37:870 - if you put a kat at 01:38:213 - , you should also put one at 01:37:870 - since your mapping style here is like completely following the drum set. Two clear triplets can be heard at 01:37:784 - and 01:38:127 - , so kkd kkd K is more suitable.

[]

I should have posted this mod earlier before Surono's work....

GL with this mapset now.

EDIT: > The metadata is wrong. 'CV.' should be excluded from the title based on the official info.
xxdeathx

Skylish wrote:

I should have posted this mod earlier before Surono's work....
but we had irl stuff going on :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hello, this map has been disqualified for some general quality issues in Futsuu and Muzukashii.

  • [General]
  1. Please consider alacat's post for a more proper way of title romanisation: p/6004047
  2. Kiai should start more naturally at 01:05:556 - for all difficulties.
  3. The green line at 01:05:727 - in Oni is unused, so you may remove it.
  • [Futsuu]
  1. From 00:27:156 to 00:49:099 - pattern arrangement in this session sounds a bit out of place and does not accompany the song well since you followed the background bass guitar at 00:28:356 (4,5,6) - while mapping the main rhythm at 00:27:156 (1,2,3) - , resulting in a loose structure. You may refer to Skylish's post for a fix.
  2. 00:32:641 (12) - consider adding finish to cohere with 00:27:156 (1) - ?
  3. 00:43:613 (34) - same as ^
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:13:527 (28,32) - these notes could be deleted for a better spread considering that there are only 1/1 notes in Futsuu and the current density is quite similar to that in Oni.
  2. 00:16:270 (39,43) - 00:19:013 (50,54) - 00:21:756 (61,65) - same as ^
  3. From 00:23:556 to 00:24:070 - maybe try ddd k k to reduce its gap with Oni ?
  4. From 00:27:156 to 00:49:099 - same as Futsuu
Please reply to Skylish's (and Charlotte's) suggestions as well. You may call me back after that.
Charlotte
Hi via game-in chat.

quick suggestion.

OD spread -> 3-3.5-4-5 or 3-4-5-5.5 or 3-4-4.5-5 How about you think? I think more good spread.

Oni 00:02:470 - 00:11:899 - hmm...I think excessive finish.not strong part & This finish is Oni only.
Topic Starter
Ozu

alacat wrote:

Which site did you take the romanised title from ?
If that is not the official title, The title should be "Okashi na Yume o Ohitotsu Douzo"
Let me know if you want to fix it.
site from http://www.gochiusa.com/contents/cd/index03440000.html.
fix romanised title, and also removed 'CV.' word.
thank you~




Skylish wrote:

From my modding queue. I am sorry to post a veto mod here, due to timing problem, primarily, and the overall quality of the beatmap.

[General]

> As Stefan had mentioned, the Kiai starting time is weird. The start of Kiai should be the starting note (either the Vocal/ Instrument) of Chorus, i.e. 01:05:556 - in Kantan - Muzukashii, / 01:05:384 - in Oni . Otherwise, please explain why do you want to start the Kiai at 01:05:899 - . With shifted Kiai, 01:05:899 - these Finishers are weird after all, please remove the Finish as well. fixed. thanks for timing advice :) finish is same with my opinion at your futsuu diff mod at 01:05:899

EDIT: > The metadata is wrong. 'CV.' should be excluded from the title based on the official info.
Source ref.: http://www.gochiusa.com/contents/cd/index03440000.html /

[Timing]

> A new red timing point should be set at 00:02:470 - . It is the 'real' start of the music and thereby by needing a red timing point for indicating a re-set metronome (on-beat). A further evidence for its presence is 00:13:441 - , which is the 9th bar. Normally, music is divided in 8 bars for a section. My suggestion should work. ok

> In addition, as you are not going to map anything before 00:02:470 - , 00:01:099 - can be removed. (Just directly use ONE inherited timing point at 00:02:470 - .) ok

[Akemi's Kantan]

> Looks good

[Futsuu]

> 00:28:356 (4,5,6) - They are out of track. 00:27:156 - / 00:28:527 - in terms of melody, they are the same. A same or similar structure is expected (nnn nnn on the on-beat starting). Maybe you can also try using patterns that fit the vocal completely (like what you did in Muzukashii at 00:27:156 - ). fixed to follow vocal, refer your suggestion.

Give you some suggestion 00:27:156 (1) - :

> ^ I prefer this pattern since it is less complicated and able to show consistencies with the music.

> ^ This pattern may be too complicated for Futsuu and does not bring a good density spread later on, not really preferred any way.

> 00:34:184 - / 00:45:156 - remove it since you left a gap at 00:31:441 - / 00:42:413 - , the pattern of 00:33:841 - & 00:31:099 - should be consistent. ok

> 00:37:270 - K suits more than D does due to the high pitch. both bass and vocal melody is lowing, keep

> 00:39:327 - same as 00:28:356 - , fix it on your own based on what you are going to fix at 00:28:356 - . ^

> 01:00:070 - add Finish to state the strong and high-pitch vocal? ok

> 01:05:899 - As mentioned above in General, please remove Finish effect, or please explain why you would like to do so (I guess you want to emphasize the trumpet, but that is not necessary to do so because you mapping channel follows the vocal pretty solidly). 01:05:556 - The on-beat cymbal crash is more noticable comparing with the trumpet, therefore it worths a Finish instead of putting it at 01:05:899 - .(In normal situation Finisher is used in the first beat except special cases, and yours is not) as you guess, it is right to emphasize trumpet sound, and i think the trumpet sound is the big point that has worth to use finish. also fit the finish on 01:05:555 (9) - this crash, so determined to 01:05:555 (9,10) - D K . and 01:11:041 (20,21) - here, not emphasized sound to me, so little discrimination against before part. and same 01:16:527 (1,2) - D K , 01:22:013 (12,13) - d K all D K fixed

^ 01:11:384 - same as above ^ ^

> 01:12:756 - how about shifting 1/2 backward to 01:12:584 - for the sake of vocal presence there? Check 01:23:556 - as well, the vocal rhythm is the same, and hence the pattern you mapped should also be the same and consistent. fixed to your advice, and K D KK to fit.

> 01:23:899 - please shift this note to 01:24:070 - . It should be consistent with 01:13:099 - . ^

> 01:38:127 - how about changing it to k for the consistency? ok
[Muzukashii]

> 00:27:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pretty much the same with Futsuu's situation. 00:28:013 (4,5,6,7,8) - is completely off from instrumental part or vocal part.
fix
How about 00:27:156 (1) - :


00:27:156 - / 00:28:527 - show the vocal perfectly by d kd
00:28:527 (6) - is d because there are higher pitches of vocal at 00:28:184 (4,5) - .

> 00:30:413 - shift 1/2 forward to 00:30:584 - in order to match the vocal please.... The current position sounds really off. ok

> 00:33:156 - same as above, shift it to 00:33:327 - this time. If you follow vocal, then keep following it. following vocal, so d k dkdk fixed

> 00:33:499 - you may change it to k for variation purpose. ok

> 00:37:270 - K here sounds better especially you have D at 00:36:927 - . K D K can show the vocal pitch flow very well. ok

> 00:38:127 - same as 00:27:156 - , also please fix it on your own. ^

> 00:41:384 - same case at 00:30:413 - ^

> 00:41:727 - k may be changed as you use 'kat' as the main theme in this section. ok

> 00:58:699 (98) - Shouldn't it also be a Finisher? Be consistent with 00:54:584 - / 00:55:956 - / 00:57:327 - ok

! 01:05:899 - same question about the use of Kiai and Finisher here, you need to explain why you would like to map like this. fixed

[Oni]

> 00:25:784 (106,107,108,109) - Finishers here should make more sense than small notes since their dynamic is identical to 00:24:756 (104,105) - . Meanwhile, you use Finishers in the same in other difficulties (Futsuu and Muzuashii). Consistency across difficulties should be well considered. ok

> 00:37:270 - same as above ok

> 00:44:299 - Here's an obvious density drop comparing with the patterns at 00:33:327 - , they are meant to be rhymatically similar, but now they are not. ok

> 00:51:499 (9,10) - how about ctrl+G (d k) considering their pitch differences? i focused on drum sound in here, so keep.


> 01:00:070 (45) - You definitely missed a Finisher right here. right, fixed

> 01:05:384 - as mentioned in General, you can start the Kiai at this timing since you emphasize the start with this don on the vocal note. ok

> 01:09:841 - It is fine for being a kat in Muzukashii, but you need some appropriate changes in Oni since players should be able to play more complicated patterns like polychrome 1/2 patterns. This note should be a d to represent the vocal pitch flow more clearly. focusing on vocal, but also considerate synth's staccato sound to k, so keep

> 01:18:070 - similar case at 00:44:299 - . This time, it shows an extra progression by mapping both trumpets and vocal. While 01:07:099 - is straightly mapping to the vocal. 01:18:756 - should be empty hence. A progression is not really needed in this song as there is no obvious stronger music at the second part of Chorus. ok

> 01:09:156 - absolutely the same case as above, remove it due to the blank at 01:20:127 - ok

> 01:25:784 - you can put a kat here to fulfil all musical elements before the spinner, if you like. put d in here

> 01:26:813 - I don't think it is good to add a little stream right here since the drum set is pretty weak and you are not likely following the drum along the whole song anyway. It is strange and out of your mapping channel. Just ending the spinner at 01:27:156 - would be fine. ok

> 01:37:870 - if you put a kat at 01:38:213 - , you should also put one at 01:37:870 - since your mapping style here is like completely following the drum set. Two clear triplets can be heard at 01:37:784 - and 01:38:127 - , so kkd kkd K is more suitable. fixed kkd kdd k

[]

I should have posted this mod earlier before Surono's work....

GL with this mapset now.

EDIT: > The metadata is wrong. 'CV.' should be excluded from the title based on the official info.

Thank you xD
best modding i've seen !!
Topic Starter
Ozu

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hello, this map has been disqualified for some general quality issues in Futsuu and Muzukashii.

  • [General]
  1. Please consider alacat's post for a more proper way of title romanisation: p/6004047 fixed with formal site.
  2. Kiai should start more naturally at 01:05:556 - for all difficulties. fixed, and oni kiai also fixed same.
  3. The green line at 01:05:727 - in Oni is unused, so you may remove it. fixed
  • [Futsuu]
  1. From 00:27:156 to 00:49:099 - pattern arrangement in this session sounds a bit out of place and does not accompany the song well since you followed the background bass guitar at 00:28:356 (4,5,6) - while mapping the main rhythm at 00:27:156 (1,2,3) - , resulting in a loose structure. You may refer to Skylish's post for a fix. refer with his post, fixed
  2. 00:32:641 (12) - consider adding finish to cohere with 00:27:156 (1) - ? ok
  3. 00:43:613 (34) - same as ^ ok
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:13:527 (28,32) - these notes could be deleted for a better spread considering that there are only 1/1 notes in Futsuu and the current density is quite similar to that in Oni. fixed
  2. 00:16:270 (39,43) - 00:19:013 (50,54) - 00:21:756 (61,65) - same as ^ ^
  3. From 00:23:556 to 00:24:070 - maybe try ddd k k to reduce its gap with Oni ? fixed
  4. From 00:27:156 to 00:49:099 - same as Futsuu same with his post, fixed focusing on vocal melody.
Please reply to Skylish's (and Charlotte's) suggestions as well. You may call me back after that.

Thanks :D
Topic Starter
Ozu

Charlotte wrote:

Hi via game-in chat.

quick suggestion.

OD spread -> 3-3.5-4-5 or 3-4-5-5.5 or 3-4-4.5-5 How about you think? I think more good spread. 3 3.5 4 5 fixed. looks better spread now :)

Oni 00:02:470 - 00:11:899 - hmm...I think excessive finish.not strong part & This finish is Oni only. wanna emphasize vocal sound in this part, and wanna big emphasize, so keep.

Thanks :)
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