Hey.
First of all,make sure that Source is correct.
I mean,should the letters be capitalized?
Aren't
Dog and
1 should be separated?
I haven't found original source related to this song,so it'd be great if you prove it somehow.
Folder and map setting are fine.
[GAME]It's too hard for the easiest difficulty.
Seriously,with 130 BPM you could make another much easier difficulty.
Set Slider Velocity to 1,00 with 0.8 distance spacing,for example,use simple 1/1 rhytm,mostly following music,but not the lyrics and you'll get a precious Easy difficulty.
Otherwise you might have some troubles with the ranking.
00:20:639 (3,4) - Spacing is odd,stack (4) with (5) instead,or place it somewhere between (3) and (5).
00:26:178 (6) - I don't really like such traps.You can't say if there will be another repeat or 1/1 gap because of spacing.It might confuse beginner players.
00:38:178 (1) - Finish.
00:47:870 (3) - I read it well from the first attempt,but such moments pissed me off all the way long.It'd be much easier to hit if there were another stacked circle at 00:47:639. Also,isn't a clap missing here?
00:55:255 (3) - ^
01:02:639 (3) - ^
01:10:024 (3) - ^
01:22:485 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move all this stuff few grids to the right to make this pattern symmetrical?
[LOVE]00:01:254 (1) - Finish?
00:04:947 (1) - ^
00:23:408 - The note is missing here,you should add one,it's a downbeat after all.And finish hitsound,yeah.
00:45:562 (1) - Uh,shape is alright,but not perfect..I'd move red waypoint few grids down.
00:52:947 (1) - ^,now few grids upper.
00:58:024 (4) - This jump doesn't fit here and with the rest of the map overall,I'd reduce distance.
01:00:101 (7) - Don't really like how it overlaps..
01:10:485 (6,1) - Ah..blue tick is stacked.It wasn't that obvious from the first attempt,I'd unstack.
[SHOW TIME]00:19:947 (1,2,3,4,1) - Such things are a bit odd..you should have another slider mirrored from 00:21:101 (4) within this pattern.
01:05:408 (3,4) - A bit awkward jump,maybe because of uneven symmetrical spacing,but I'd suggest to rebuild this pattern a little.
[LUCKY DOG]00:04:255 (1) - Distance snap lies here,it's not correct. You don't have any idea about slowdown,so you're reading 1x spacing up to the slowdowned object. So you should consider this in future,and manually place objects with the 1x spacing in such moments.
What's about this one,I'd simply suggest to stack 00:03:908 (7) with 00:04:255 (1).
00:18:793 (4) - I suggest to use new combo to point out slightly changed spacing.
00:19:716 (1,2,3,4) - Plays well,but looks a bit wrong..Spacing between (3) and (4) is 2x higher from the others in this pattern.
00:40:485 (3,4) - Use reverse selection.
01:03:331 (2,3,4,5,6) - Looks a bit untidy.I'd suggest to place (5) somewhere between (4) and (6).
01:14:524 (5) - Not sure about this. Compared to previous jumps it feels like 1/2 space here,sooo..maybe add a note to 01:14:408 or rebuild this pattern to clear up the spacing?
This is very solid mapset for a novice mapper.
I wish you best of luck,make more maps.
And yeah,song is cool
Star~
谢谢！
