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keekihime * Yuumi & JUMA - Eiya no Parade

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- Frontier -
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Joined April 2014
- Frontier -
forum pm xd
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:25:889 (1,2,3,4) - okay. this part, the rhythm is the same as 00:18:447 (1,2,3,4) but you mapped differently. i recommend to make it same.
  2. 00:23:796 (3,5) - you may stack these together. (5) is slightly move so it's not stack perfectly
  3. 00:23:796 (3,4) - maybe blanket these by adjust a (3)'s slider
    if you want clearer explanation
    move the last anchor to x:480 y:72
  4. 00:30:773 - You should add a note here since there's a sound here
  5. 01:06:819 (1) - weird slider here. imo you could make just a curve slider.
  6. Not much mod here because there are not that much notes than Light Insane should.
[Insane]
  1. 01:17:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is the hardest part compared to the other parts. I mean... you shouldn't make jumps. I'd recommend to do that in kiai.
  2. 01:25:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
idk how to say here. yeah
sorry for being rude but.. please find more mods. your map needs more polishing. When your map is polish enough, BN will come forwards to you. :D
GL

no more kd again thx
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo
Hello~ From Q


  • [General]
  1. Disable Widescreen support on every diff since you're not using a .osb
  2. Convert the .ogg files into .wav because they're unrankeable
  3. normal-hitclap6.wav seems to be unused.

    [Normal]
  4. 00:14:726 (4) - I'd make the spinner start 00:14:726 - here instead of adding a circle. Mainly because people will click at it and then won't have much time to start spinning because it happens so sudden. Hope I explained myself xd Same for 02:00:773 (4,1) -
  5. 00:23:796 (3) - I feel like this sliderend isn't very accurate. Why not try to do https://puu.sh/vm9oe/5afaae428c.jpg this? I think starting with a slider on the big white ticks is better because of the emphasis.
  6. 00:31:238 (3) - 00:38:680 (3) - 00:46:122 (3) - ^
  7. 00:53:331 - 00:55:191 - 00:57:052 - etc... Don't really know why are you skipping those strong beats... I mean they're quite notorious, and even being a Normal diff, they should be mapped. I'd also add some slider on this sections too.
  8. 01:10:540 (1,2) - Ctrl+g the rhythm only? Will have to fix some DS but it'd fit better the music imo.
  9. 01:34:494 - maybe add a circle here to follow vocals?
  10. 01:35:424 (5,6) - Idk but they are similar in shape but following different sounds.. Right now I'd make 01:35:889 (6) - this into 2 circle in order to make both drum sounds clickable + it'll also differ from previous sliders.
  11. 01:42:866 (4,5) - 01:50:308 (4,5) - ^
  12. 02:04:959 - Same as before about skipping important beats.

    [Insane]
  13. 00:25:191 (1,2) - This jump here feels really overspaced. Why not doing something similar like 00:21:238 (5,6) - ?
  14. 00:28:215 (3,4,5) - There's no need to increase to that DS considering the previous one 00:27:750 (1,2,3) - . I highly suggest you to reduce them
  15. 00:41:238 (3,4,5) - Consdering you are all the time using back and fourth jumps, I'd prefer if you change this linear flow into something like the rest of the jumps
  16. 01:17:982 - Oh boy... Idk but this kind of song isn't really suggesting for those jumps tbh.. The music offer lots of things that could be mapped with some sliders + something more creative. At a very first try, I'd suggest you to add some 1/2 sliders at 01:17:982 - 01:18:912 - 01:19:377 - 01:20:773 - etc..
  17. 01:21:703 (1,2,3) - Okay I respect the jumps in some way, but this DS is way too much. It doesn't fit the map nor the music so yeah. Really suggest you to reduce them.
  18. 01:44:610 (4,6,3,5) - Those bell hitsound doesn't really play good right there imo... Maybe try to delete them and add 01:44:959 (7,6) - here instead?

Okay that's all from me. GL!
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia
ok idk
[insane]
  1. 00:05:424 (1,2) - preference - i dont really like these slider shapes, just looks very out of the ordinary in your map
  2. 00:21:238 (5) - would say split into 2 hitcircles because the sliderend of this sounds loud enough that it should be emphasised with clickbeat, compare to 00:25:191 (1,2) -
  3. 00:25:657 - i guess i see no reason to not map this, so either just add another hitcircle here or make 00:25:424 (2) - a slider
  4. 00:28:680 (5) - split into 2 hitcircles as mentioned before
  5. 00:31:238 (6,1) - you made this a 1/1 slider in the previous section, see no reason to not make it similar for such a similarly structured song
  6. 00:33:098 - similarly, why dont just map this
  7. 00:36:122 (3) - split into 2 hitcircles
  8. 00:38:680 (8,1) - 1/1 slider
  9. 00:40:540 - map
  10. 00:46:122 (6,1) - 1/1
  11. 00:48:912 - i hear an instrument AND vocal on this, why is it not mapped?
  12. 00:50:773 (2,3,4,5,6) - if you arent mapping vocal here you might as well make this whole thing a stream because thats what it sounds like
  13. 00:52:633 (3,4,5) - vocal inflection shouldnt require a mapped note, technically this should just be a 2 hitcircles 1/2 apart
  14. 00:54:029 - i hear vocal and instrument on this
  15. 00:54:494 (3,4,5,6) - this should be a 5 note stream
  16. 00:55:889 - from now i'll be assuming you're deliberately skipping this instrument for the sake of vocal, which i can agree on
  17. 00:56:354 (3,4,5,6) - 5 note stream
  18. 00:57:750 - you gotta map stuff like that though, because the vocal is obvious and it makes your pattern more consistent and structured
  19. 00:57:052 (7,1) - pretty strong drum on 00:57:401 - tbh, would suggest you make it a doublet or something since it doesnt affect your vocal structure
  20. 00:58:215 (3,4,5,6) - 5 note stream
  21. 01:05:889 (7,8,9,10) - the rhythm should be flipped; its triplet first THEN single

    im too lazy to continue this mod because it seems like your errors are all rhythm based and very consistent. for all i know its some weird structure you're trying to follow which makes no sense to me rhythmically. as i've mentioned, you've skipped over certain instruments for the sake of the vocal mapping structure, which is ok, but please exercise in discretion. try not to overmap the rhythm with wrong triplets that dont emphasise anything and dont reflect itself accurately in the song.
    though the flow structure is generally ok
[light insane]
  1. 00:10:075 (3) - perhaps the length of the slider makes more sense rhythmically, but the rhythm in Insane is imo a little more natural, since i feel that the vocal should be clickable
  2. 01:44:029 (1,2) - i think the reverse slider should start being clickable on the white tick, which is actually the sliderend of the first slider. its a lot less misleading that way
  3. from 02:03:098 (1) - onwards, its a lot less rhythmically dense compared to the intro, which sounds exactly the same. consider this part more similar to the intro

    i think this diff is better than your insane even though you didnt emphasise a lot of notes. i like the idea of vocal mapping when its consistent enough to follow, so i think this is pretty nice

gl
squirrelpascals
982 posts
Joined March 2015
squirrelpascals
hi! from my q

insane
• 00:05:424 (1,2) - 00:12:866 (1,2) - I think you should use some sort of symmetry with these aesthetics to make them appear more structured. right now it just looks messy atm. Also, if you want to use these aesthetics at all i suggest doing so throughout the map, rather than just the intro

• 00:21:238 (5) - moving this down will flow better in the pattern

• 00:24:959 (3,1,2) - why the huge spacing?

• 00:28:447 (4,5) - ^

• 00:33:331 (1,2) - aesthetically, consider making 2 a transformation of 1

• 00:41:238 (3,4,5) - doesnt look like this flows well with 00:40:773 (1,2,3) - in the same pattern. i would put 5 between 1 and 2

• 00:48:912 - 00:54:029 - 00:57:750 - put a circle or something here?

• 00:55:657 (1) - 00:59:377 (1) - sounds like it would work better as a slider

• 01:13:563 (8,9,10) - sounds like the tripe should be at the note at 01:13:447 -

• 01:14:726 - dont you usually make this note clickable?

• 01:16:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - why the sudden stream? opposed to the stacked triples you've been using, it would work if there was a stronger sound but there isnt one here

• 01:18:912 (5,6,7,8) - move this pattern to the left more? the flow at 01:18:447 (3,4,5) - doesnt fit in with the sharp angles you're using here

• 01:21:703 (1,2,3,4) - try this for a better transition https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7869925

• 01:24:494 (3) - shouldnt this be spaced like 01:23:563 (1) - is, considering the sound you exaggerate here?

• 01:36:354 (3) - moving this to the right of 2 would flow nicer

• 01:51:238 (3) - 01:54:959 (3) - same

• 02:03:098 (1) - why is there nothing on the red ticks surrounding this note? the rest of this part from here feels undermapped because of the notes you choose to ignore

• 02:09:145 (3,4,5) - compare this spacing with 02:03:563 (2,3,4) -

• 02:12:866 (4,5,6) - same, space this closer. it causes the pattern to lack in spacing contrast due to 02:12:401 (3,4) -

light insane
• 00:05:424 (1,2) - same type of thing with the aesthetics i mentioned in the top diff. something you should consider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7869993

• 00:08:215 - put something here

• 00:11:005 - make this clickable

• 00:22:168 (1,2,3,4) - why is this rhythm so different from 00:18:447 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - ? it looks like youre mapping this for the sake of the patterns, not the music

• 00:25:889 (1,2,3,4) - etc. same issue here with rhythm. the music isnt really different in these parts so the rhythm should vary this drastically (but you can still add some variance if wanted).

• 00:30:773 - 00:45:657 - 00:48:912 - nothing here?

• 00:52:866 (3) - sounds like this should also be a 1/2 slider

• 00:54:029 - 00:57:750 - same, why isnt there anything here?

• 00:58:447 - this is a stronger note, i feel like it should be clickable

• 01:00:540 - put a circle here, because of 01:00:075 (2,3) -

• 01:04:959 (1) - 01:12:401 (1) - start this a red tick earlier. you currently ignore the red ticks surrounding this slider

• 01:08:912 - put something ehre

• 01:17:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - take this as an example as what you should do for rhythm. you choose to map to vocals, and put clickable notes on places where the vocals are exagerated

• 01:27:517 (2) - if youre mapping to vocals here, this should be 2 circles

• 01:33:796 - 01:33:796 - undermapped here. same for all parts like this

• 01:38:215 (1) - 01:37:284 (2,3) - should be 1/2 slider to a circle for both of these imo

• 01:45:191 - 01:46:122 - try putting circles here, considering what the instrument you mapped 01:44:610 (2,3) - to

• 01:46:354 (1) - make this a 1/2 slider?

• 02:01:005 - should be clickable

• 02:07:750 (4) - make this two circles?

I think the main thing you should focus on in your mapping is prioritizing your rhythms. That means decide exactly what youre mapping to and figure out how youre going to consistently express your given rhythms in the song

Hard
• 00:22:633 (2,3,1) - space 3 closer to 1, differnt timeline gaps here

• 00:30:075 (2,3,1) - 00:37:517 (2,3,1) - 00:44:959 (2,3,1) - same

• 00:41:703 (3,4) - compare this spacing with parts like 00:28:680 (3,1,2) - and differentiate them. i would try spacing 4 more

• 00:48:215 (1) - space more

• 01:06:354 (3) - space this more like 01:06:819 (1,2) -

• 01:07:284 - make this clickable? and put something at 01:07:982 - ?

• 01:10:075 (4) - make this a 1/2 slider?

• 01:11:936 (4) - move the nc here

• 01:15:424 - this vocal nore is ignored

• 01:17:750 (6,1) - space this similar to 01:17:284 (4,5,6) - . for a hard player this is difficult to read

• 01:37:517 - 01:38:680 - ignored notes

• 01:56:122 (2,3) - space these farther from 01:55:191 (1) - , this spacing can be confused with 01:54:726 (3,1) - atm

Good luck! :)
ArThasCD
792 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
ArThasCD
I could only use the computer 2.5hr this time, and I spent it all to fix many things without replying everyone. I fixed the flow and the rhythm for Normal, fixed the jump for Hard, fixed the rhythm for Light Insane, fixed spacings, slider shape, placement for Insane, transfer the .ogg files to .wav ones and do some general stuff. Not gonna add Easy difficulty for the set though. I'll make more improvement next time. C u next Thursday！ Thanks everyone who modded my map and told me your thoughts. They are truly helpful ！
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
[Normal]

  1. 00:18:447 - Like, and important thing to keep in mind when mapping DS is that you shouldn't use the same kind of flow for too long, in this case your flow literally went counter-clockwise until 00:35:191 which I found very repetitive zzz, actually you could try to be more in-depth with flow, something like "I'm gonna switch the flow rotation every [x] measure(s)" or "I will break the flow on downbeat/strong sounds" etc etc
  2. 00:46:819 (4,5,6) - Should be placed in a less complicated way like 00:31:936 (4,5,6) considering this might be too edgy for an easiest diff.
  3. 00:49:843 (2,1) - Not really recommend breaking DS for the sake of visuals, since you don't usually blanket stuff like this so this one looks inconsistently done compared to other things in the diff.
  4. 00:55:657 (1,5) - The pattern here should be polished a bit more. 00:51:936 (1,3,4) - is actually well-thought but idk what are you trying to do on this one, try polishing this more for a better visual spacing, something like this would work too, but up to you.
  5. 01:24:029 (4) - 2 circles instead? Vocals on this are slightly different than 01:21:703 (1,2) so it should be represented differently.
  6. Slider shapes in kiai could be more consistent too. For instance 01:55:191 (1,2,3) - all have the same shape, have you ever thought of doing the same thing in other measures like 01:40:308 (1,2,3) as well? I don't mind if you're intending to do slider shapes differently in one measure, but I would like to see a more consistent idea of slider shapes across all measures 01:32:866 (1,2,3) - 01:40:308 (1,2,3) - 01:47:750 (1,2,3) - 01:55:191 (1,2,3) - in kiai.
Also AR should be 4 for the sake of diff spread cuz I assume this is supposed to be an easy-ish Normal?

[117's Normal]

  1. 00:27:517 - Might as well add a circle here like 00:42:401 (4) and also because you don't suddenly have a rhythm gap in a middle of each measure anyways.
[Hard]

  1. 00:21:238 (3,1) - 00:28:680 (3,1) - 00:31:936 (2,1) - and a few more until the end of that section. Using combo thing to indicate a jump is one thing, but you shouldn't:
    1. Do 2 jumps consecutively in Hard (techincally it's possible to do so but I don't really recommend doing this since you do this once every 2 or whatever measures which is pretty frequent)
    2. Do the jump before the NC which is the indicator of the difference in distance, it might be intuitively playable since you're doing this consistently but it's also outright confusing at the same time.
  2. 00:22:633 (2,3,1) - 00:30:075 (2,3,1) - You're giving out the same visual spacing with different beat snaps which is confusing. I read your older mod replies which you seemed to nerfed this to some extent already but it's still not enough, probably need a more noticeable indication for those jumps. 00:23:563 (3,1) - Swapping NC on these might work to some extent, you can do it any other way too if you can come up with something better to indicate that 00:23:563 (3,1) is a jump and has different beat spacing than 00:22:633 (2,3) . Same also applies to whenever you did this in other measures as well.
  3. 00:51:936 (1,2,3) - 00:54:029 (1,2,3) - Are you not going to use the same rhythm between measures like what you did in other diffs?
  4. 00:59:377 (1) - Vocal faded out midway of the slider so 2 circles could work better.
  5. 01:01:238 (1,2) - Using 4 circles would fit better than jumps, you're already using jumps on downbeats so forcing another one here would be confusing and not really intuitive in gameplay.
  6. 01:02:401 (1,2) - This shouldn't be a jump really, you're forcing consecutive jumps 01:02:401 (1,2,1) which is uhhh as explained before, could do something else with 01:02:401 (1,2) if you wish to emphasize them, stacking 01:02:401 (1) on 01:02:633 (2) could work, changing 01:02:401 (1,2) to a 1/2 repeat slider could work as well, there are a number of ways to do this, so up to you then.
  7. 01:16:354 (1,2,3) - 01:17:284 (4,5,6) - You shouldn't do the same pattern twice if they're not based on the same instruments zzz, actually in other diffs you never do this kind of thing so I wonder why you did it here.
  8. 01:21:703 (1,2) - Move this so that the head of 01:22:401 (2) will be stacked under the tail of 01:20:308 (2) ? The visual spacing on 01:20:308 (2,1) seems unintentionally uneven compared to how you visually spaced 01:19:843 (1,2,3) - 01:19:843 (1,4) . You have to move things around a bit too if you apply this so take note of that.
  9. 01:24:494 (2,3,1) - Same consecutive jumps thing as mentioned before zz
  10. 01:42:168 (1) - 01:55:191 (1) - 1.3 DS pls
  11. 01:44:610 - 01:45:540 - I wouldn't put strong bell hitsounds on blue ticks lol. Hitsounding is not just about putting them on where the sound exists, it's also about providing appropriate feedback when clicked in game play. If your hitsounds fail to do so, then you should do something with them.
  12. 01:57:750 (2,3) - Not the most intuitive rhythm choice to do so, you're starting off the measure with the same rhythms 01:57:052 (1,2) as others but you moved 01:57:750 (2) to the red tick which can be confusing since you suddenly broke the consistency from other measures without any real change from the song itself, if you want to emphasize 01:58:215 (3) then doing something like this would be much more suitable to vocals.
Even though I mentioned many times about how I disagreed with doing consecutive (2+) jumps in a row in Hard, I still found them somewhat acceptable for those you've done in kiai since it's supposed to be the most intense section in the song and the rhythm used is repetitive enough to be intuitive while playing.

[Light Insane]

  1. 00:23:796 (3) - Shouldn't have the same shape as 00:22:168 (1,2) since it's musically different from those two.
  2. 00:38:680 (1) - Same as above I guess, actually the NC here is inconsistent with 00:23:796 (3) .
  3. 00:28:912 (1) - 00:43:796 (3) - NC thing again zzzzzzz
  4. 00:57:517 - Clap is missing.
  5. Actually I'm too tired so I'm gonna stop here lol, I only skimmed this diff a bit though, also I'm curious on what is your spacing concept(like, how do you space objects in each sections) in this diff, would you mind elaborate?
As far as I have modded on lower diffs so far, overall the mapset is actually pretty good lmao. I can see these diffs are interesting and well-thought, keep that up. Could do some more polishing on aesthetics to make things more consistent though, good luck~
CircleFairy
221 posts
Joined January 2015
CircleFairy
Hi from my mod queue :-)

Hard
00:14:726 (3) - This might be too much spacing for a hard difficulty, I used 1.2 distance snapping and that looked better.
00:17:052 (1,2,3) - I would use 1.2 distance snap here too, it's only slight but makes a small difference.
00:40:075 (1,2) - Spacing looks like too much for hard.
00:43:796 (1,2) - Same here.
00:47:517 (1,2) - And here (won't add any more of these, you get it by now)
01:59:610 (2,3) - These 2 need better placement

Light Insane
00:53:796 (1) - Look at the spacing here and then here 00:56:587 (3) - the song doesn't change but the spacing does, keep it consistent. "Avoid major composition differences in similar sections of a song. The basic spacing and rhythm should be similar, while patterning can vary. This ensures that rhythm and intensity in all similar sections reflect a song similarly." - Ranking criteria.

Insane
01:16:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - The tempo of the song doesn't increase enough to justify this spacing.

Good luck! :-)
Ellyu
429 posts
Joined May 2014
Ellyu
From my q

[Insane]
slider tick rate 感觉调到1比较好，不然很多1/1的滑条中间的tick都audioable就很难受
00:07:750 (2,3) -可以加个blanket
00:51:703 (7,1) - 间距有点大，这部分比较安静这么大不太合适
01:16:955 - 这个串的间距也是，有点偏大了
01:17:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 连续的单点过多了，有点冗杂
01:31:936 (1,2,3,4) - 二连之间隔很大的话，无论从读图还是移动上来说都很难
01:50:773 (1,2,3) - 间距变化太大，（1）和（2）很容易读成1/1的gap
01:54:494 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这个也是，至少要把01:54:959 (3,1) - 和01:55:191 (1,2) - 区分清楚

[light insane]
00:23:796 (3) - 最好可以换个形状，因为在3上和弦升调了做个不同的feedback就很好
00:52:866 (3) - add nc
01:32:401 (5) - ctrl+g让flow好些
01:35:424 (2,3,1,2) - 这个也是间距变化太大了
01:38:912 (2,3,4,1,2) - 01:53:796 (2,3,4,1,2) - same as^
01:44:494 (2) - 把之前（1）最好弄到3/4，然后把（2）提前一个1/4拍让他折返4次或者在01:44:959 处加一个circle让它clickable，99%的时候，3次1/4折返从蓝线起都很糟糕
01:45:424 (4) - 如果上面改了的话，这里也弄成折返3次加一个circle的
01:47:750 (1) - 换成1/1，然后去掉01:48:215 (2) - ，在01:48:680 加个1/2，（其实就是跟01:55:191 (1,2,3) - 保持consistence）


[Normal]
是我的话我可能会删这个难度，因为已经有一个normal了，从spread角度来看太拥挤了。而且就单论diff的质量……flow比较糟糕，全图感觉都在绕圈，明明那么多折返可以利用来切一下方向
00:10:075 (4,1) - 搞个blanket
00:54:726 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 尽量避免在normal里放这么多连续的单点
02:07:750 (3,4) - 根据之前的梗来看，这里4应该对应两个clap音，但这没有，就把consistence毁的一干二净，我的建议是把（4）延长到1/1，这样还能保持更好的一直跟synth轨的规律

GL
Vanillas
397 posts
Joined October 2014
Vanillas
先射个星~有生之年也许会摸（跑）
cjn1508
37 posts
Joined April 2015
cjn1508
[normal]
01:24:959 (5,6,1) - 可以出现分配一下节奏
01:27:052 (3) - 有些别扭
01:31:005 (4,5) - 中间可以用一个音符
02:13:796 (1) - 左右翻转

[117's]
很流畅

[hard]
00:14:843 (1) - 转盘早一点完 再塞个音符进去
00:34:261 (3,4,3,4) - 这两个地方 抓的音都跟其它小节不一样啊
01:31:470 (2) - nc放这儿
01:46:354 (2) - 同理
有些三角形的三连没必要都可以换掉
听起来有些别扭

[light insane]
00:14:843 (1) - 转盘跟hard的一个道理
00:32:866 (2) - 摆下去一点
01:09:145 (2,3,4) - 有些奇怪了
01:31:936 (3,4) - 打的时候会误解其节奏

[insane]
01:15:889 (1) - 远了
01:47:284 (4,5) - 放开一点
01:17:982 (1) - 01:23:331 (8) - 好雾 后面那段同理
转盘尾也需要考虑一下呢
02:12:401 (3) - 弄成滑条

很好听的歌
原来mp时有人点了那首
一直留在电脑上
还拷了一份在手机上打
铺面不错
又涨了作图姿势
我就射一星吧
ArThasCD
792 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
ArThasCD
@- Frontier -: have made the object stacked and adjuxt the slider. I think the jumps before kiai time fit the music tho.

@iYiyo: fixed almost everything ! About a point you mentioned:
00:53:331 - 00:55:191 - 00:57:052 - etc... Don't really know why are you skipping those strong beats... I mean they're quite notorious, and even being a Normal diff, they should be mapped. I'd also add some slider on this sections too.
I'd like to reduce the ryhthm to make this part "slow down" since the music is softer than another part. I like to see the kind of changing for maps.

@Emilia: fixed some ryhthm errors. I think the slider looks fine.

@squirrelpascals: fixed the triplets, pattern for Insane, changed the slider shape for Light Insane, fixed the spaces between objects and fixed the rhythms for Hard. About Light Insane you mentioned, I'd like to make more 1/1 ryhthms to express the song and this diff bcz I like the style tho.

@Electoz: fixed all except:
00:49:843 (2,1) - Not really recommend breaking DS for the sake of visuals, since you don't usually blanket stuff like this so this one looks inconsistently done compared to other things in the diff. it looks fine for me.

And about Hard diff: After your suggestion I adusted some stuff to make some patterns more sense and looked better. I use jumps basic on some strong beats, like strong vocals and claps. Also according to the music is going, changing the rhythm for different part to compare with the others works well to me, same as Insane and Light Insane, so I'd like to keep some patterns and jumps I previous made.
Thank you for your mod and star ! :)

@CircleFairy: adjusted the spacing a bit but I think the jumps are fine.

@Ellyu: 修了點細部的東西。話說Normal，是我的話一定不會刪這個難度，我比較希望看到的是不一樣感覺的圖，而不是誰來做都可以做出來的符合市場口味的圖，對我來說刪了略蠢。折返滑條切flow用來做音樂軌道轉換的方式的確很不錯，下次會運用上這個技巧，感謝你告訴我 ;)

@cjn1508: 修了個Insane的艱鉅，不過其他看起來都還好。好霧是看不清楚的意思嗎 ? 不太懂，不過還是謝謝你看圖，這麼晚回抱歉了，現實有些事要處理。感謝射星，可是我來不及點KD給你了，真不好意思... :o

@Hikawa Hina 謝謝你的星星！


sorry for late reply. Thank you so much for your mods <3
-Aerith-
843 posts
Joined March 2015
-Aerith-
NM FROM MY QUEUE ~


Normal
-00:03:563 this slider is pretty ugly imo (in my opinion) , try to fix it maybe ?
-01:10:540 (1,2,3) blanket maybe ?
-01:17:982 rather than circle what about making it into 1/1 slider ? cause i think thats too much for a new player ~
-01:19:843 could use 1/2 slider in here and in here -01:20:308
-01:20:773 and then change this to circle rather than a kick slider

117's Normal
-01:08:447 can you make this into a normal curve like this one instead -01:07:750 ?

Hard
AR(Approach rate) for should be 7 rather than 6 and OD is 6 and HP is 6
-00:14:494 add circle in here pls ~ it feels empty imo
-02:09:145 ctrl + g
-02:13:331 ctrl + g
-00:28:447 (2,3) ctrl + g

Actually , you can fade the song from here -02:02:633 lol ~
Anyway , Good Luck !!!
July - San
137 posts
Joined July 2016
July - San
hi-Hi

From my queue !
Okay let's see here..

Normal

00:57:517 (4) - NC Here (new combo)

01:01:238 (3) - NC here too

02:07:982 (4) - change this slider for a circle, It's better :D

117's Normal

01:22:633 (3) - NC

Hard

00:38:680 (2) - This slider actually starts here 00:38:912 -

put a circle here 00:38:680 -

00:23:796 (2) - This slider actually starts here 00:24:029 -

put a circle here 00:23:796 -

Do the same with these 00:31:238 (2) - 00:46:122 (2) -

01:17:284 (4) - NC

put a circle here 01:37:517 -

02:00:308 (4) - NC

Light Insane

00:38:680 (1) - This does not follow any rhythm ! , it should start here 00:38:912 - /or put a circle here 00:38:912 - and here 00:38:680 -

00:58:214 (2) - Do not you think a lap would look good on this slider?

01:01:703 (2) - in this, another lap too.

01:17:052 (3) - This does not follow any rhythm :?

02:15:424 (5) - in this, another lap too.

Insane

put a circle here 00:46:354 -

01:05:889 (7) - NC here or here 01:05:424 (5) -

01:12:866 (5) - Nc here

02:00:773 (8) - Maybe looks better a NC here

02:16:587 (7) - NC

I'm sorry for the late
Anyway---Good map !

I'll wait for the ranking :D

bye ! :)
ArThasCD
792 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
ArThasCD
@-Aerith- : I feel fine with what you pointed out. The slider looks good to me. Also I think AR6 fits Hard well.

@July - San : added NCs for Insane. The rhythm you mentioned follows music for sure though.

thank you for mod !
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Lafayla
Beatmap Nominator
348 posts
Joined December 2014
Lafayla
Nice mapset
take a star :3~
ArThasCD
792 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
ArThasCD

Lafayla wrote:

Nice mapset
take a star :3~
thank you ~ :D
Shanipika
114 posts
Joined April 2015
Shanipika
Hai from mod queue

[Insane]

  1. 01:21:703 (1,2) - I think you could ctrl-g this and this 01:22:168 (3,4) - to create a rotation change in the movement here would feel nicer to play imo

    I usually dont like this type of spaced jump map but for some reason I kinda enjoy this one owo
[Light Insane]

  1. 01:34:029 - I think you should put a circle here to map the vocal
  2. 01:48:912 - Same here
[Hard]

  1. 01:27:517 - Think you should put a circle here to map the vocal
  2. 01:43:098 (2) - This slider could be on the red tick here to catch both vocal? Or just put a circle on it like you did here 01:57:750 (2) -
[Normal]

Im really not sure about this normal diff tho? I think first of all you should adapt your DS so that 1/2 gaps dont just barely overlap so like either boosting it just a little so that the have a small space between them or reducing it to make a nicer overlap. Then for the rhythm choices I feel like you leave a lot of huge gap because its a normal and stuff but thats not really necessary to leave so many huge 2/1 gap everywhere. You can fill most of them with atleast a 1/1 slider end would already be much better. Also some places you could add 1/2 slider to catch vocals maybe, you kinda only used 1/2 to catch those clap sounds 01:35:889 (5) - but I feel vocals are often stronger in the song and you kinda just ignore them a lot? So that would also help this diff a lot. Unless you want to make an Easy diff then like the 1/2 stuff is meh :/



I actually find this set interessting although really not a fan of this normal diff but mostly really nice set owo
hi-mei
784 posts
Joined June 2014
hi-mei
hi, form my queue

Insane

00:05:424 (1) - Maybe change these to something like that? https://puu.sh/ynhRs/0b3883e39f.png looks a lot better

00:06:354 (2) - https://puu.sh/ynhSr/41b2c60276.png

00:12:866 (1) - https://puu.sh/ynhU8/f5c6f69198.png

00:13:796 (2) - https://puu.sh/ynhVb/6479042cd3.png
ArThasCD
792 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
ArThasCD
@Shanipika : about what you described to Normal. I'd say it's personal taste and feeling. I did many rhythm changing with 2/1, 1/1 and a bit 1/2 to the Normal. using 2/1 made this diff not only easier but more difficult since you don't click too much beats in the same time (easier) but you need to read more careful (more difficult), it's interesting to me. Also, the Normal is lowest diff, it's necessary to skip beats so I couldn't follow every beats for the song. Maybe you want to see higher* Normal to follow every beats but no, I don't want to do this for Normal. I'd say why you don't just play 3*↑ Hard or something ? :P I think those claps are strong enough to follow every of them. That's my taste :P anyway Thank you for mod ! :)

@hi-mei : thank you for your 12 seconds check, fixed the slider shape.

@- Squishi : I think spacings are fine, also the slider plays no problem to me though. Thank you for mod ~
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audinor
audinor
ok hey
top diff
00:43:563 (3,4,5,6) - these are spaced out way too far for the same noise, move it to the left some
01:15:424 (5) - change these to circles, as the sound in the song is too important to not be clickable
01:21:703 (1,2,3,4) - move to the left, notes are overemphasized
01:31:005 (1,2) - it's kinda hard to tell if this is 1/1th or 1/2th due to the previous extreme spacing shown
rest of diffs alright
the only problem i found in the light insane was 01:29:610 (2,3) - these sliders. if they had 1 or 2 points they would look a lot more appealing
hard
00:23:563 (1,2) - this is spaced a little too big. it's pretty unnecessary
00:31:005 (1,2) - this is basically the exact same thing as ^
00:32:633 (1,2,1) - spacing makes it hard to tell if it is 1/1th or 1/2th
00:38:447 (1,2) - the same as 00:23:563 jeez man im on a roll
rest of set's fine
J1_
104 posts
Joined February 2015
J1_
Heyo from my mod queue,

Normal:

01:41:238 (2) - I feel like this slider shape is out of place, it's only used once in the entire map and it doesn't really represent a certain sound in the song

Hard:

00:09:610 (2) - No need for 3 white anchors

01:07:750 (3) - Can be replaced with a 1/2 slider

02:16:587 (3) - NC

Light Insane:

01:06:819 (1) - This slider is just not aesthetically pleasing, it can definitly look much better. Not only for this one, but I suggest looking up or trying out making long good looking slider shapes (or steal from other mappers but that's no fun :P)

General:

It's a nice mapset, flows nicely and just needs a little bit of retouches, Good luck~!
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
eww DNA style is it, can I mod this
ArThasCD
792 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
ArThasCD

Delis wrote:

eww DNA style is it, can I mod this
Wow really? Feel free to mod this please :)
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
yea should avoid using ogg files lol

[General]
I think renaming the Insane to "Lunatic" and the Light Insane to "Insane" makes more sense to how the difficulty name in touhou maps is structured, we don't really see the combination with Light Insane and Insane in any touhou maps xD.

you could've finished mapping at 02:02:633 - because the feed out at 02:15:889 - feels awkward, well I don't really care much though!

speaking of metadata, I've brought up some links that may be helpfully working, http://com.nicovideo.jp/community/co436515 / http://profile.ameba.jp/keeki-hime / http://dic.nicovideo.jp/a/%E3%82%B1%E3% ... A%E6%B5%B7 / https://delisha.s-ul.eu/ay3qo7nm (the 10th) / http://www16.big.or.jp/~zun/html/th08top.html
so as you can see in the first and second links, she apparently prefers the way writing her name in all romaji, in the third link you can just get to know the way how to read "優海" in her name (it's just fanmade but should be most reliable information for her so far), in the forth link you will have everything what you need for artist/title and the fifth link does speak the source it self.
so this is the stuff what I've got from them, prob you just can copy them into .osu lol
Artist:keekihime * Yuumi & JUMA
ArtistUnicode:ケーキ姫☆優海＆JUMA
and replace the current source with 東方永夜抄　～ Imperishable Night. move 東方Project to tags instead.

finally you might wanna add 千年幻想郷 ～ history of the moon and 竹取飛翔 ～ lunatic princess in the tags, for options for the original songs.

soft-hitfinish6.wav is too loud imo, it occasionally hurts my ears during playing, maybe reduce the volume by editing the file. also normal-hitclap6.wav is unused, delete it.
[Insane]
00:38:447 (7) - how about having a new combo here, probably it can spice up the jump since it plays differently from 00:37:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so separate it visually for better looking.
01:02:401 (1,2) - did this jump need to be this huge? I mean, this still plays fine but the kind of same spacing as 01:01:703 (3,4) - can apply to 01:02:401 (1,2) - as well, it could be more intuitive imo. https://delisha.s-ul.eu/wOkx36Gg this actually feels decent that how it flows to 01:03:098 (1) - should give a shot!
01:10:075 (7) - unstack and place this in the equal spacing like 01:03:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - is, I don't really think this stack works well here lol.
01:17:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the circles chain is too long, especially the song isn't really at an intense section that calls a plenty of circles. to fix it, 01:19:843 (1,2,3,4) - for example is good place to have 2 1/2 sliders because 01:19:843 (1,2,3,4) - is irrelevant to 01:20:773 (5,6,7,8) - in comparison with 01:17:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - as this is built up to be one pattern with the 8 circles. https://delisha.s-ul.eu/PhJ2v76Z like this can give it a great room to take a break from the circles, and so you can start playing the circles again with less tiredness in your hands.
01:33:796 (3,4) - could make a bigger jump maybe? I thought the flow here doesn't look clearn compared to the other patterns, https://delisha.s-ul.eu/Z9BtGa2H it's up to you after all but you still could use some polish for the 2 circles i think.
01:57:982 (1) - remove the nc, it looks odd when you didn't do this anywhere else.
[Light Insane]
cs3 on this looks really pleasant for me but whatever lol
00:41:936 (3) - 00:43:796 (3) - you forgot nc or what lol
01:45:191 - a circle would fit really nicely, otherwise this section is really underwhelming as on the kick sliders what all you need to do is holding the sliders, plus two 1/1 blanks in a measure can be too undermapped xD.
[Hard]
I'm not against the idea at all, but having insane-ish jumps in an ar6 map may be really cancerous. you could try to decrease the spacing where have a 1/2 jump such as 00:21:470 (1,2) -, 00:23:563 (1,2) -, 00:25:424 (2) - etc.. nerfing the 1/2 jumps wouldn't hurt you much if the patterns are similar. 01:07:517 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern will be extremely harder if the 1/2 jumps were as it is lol.
the fact above makes the set a bit further from ranking section because the concept is fundamentally something that should be introduced in Insane+ diff.
[117's Normal]
it's always better to have a spinner in lower diffs :<
00:20:308 (5) - should remove the extra tick of the slider it might cause unrankable shit
01:16:122 (4) - feels like this slider should've been 1/2 tick earlier (at 01:15:889 - ) for the vocal, the rhythm you're relying on is the vocals thus you can actually move it right there and add a note at 01:16:587 - to fulfill the rhythm for the drum here.
01:20:773 (5) - could consider replace this with 2 circles, i think the combo chain here is too long because sliders are usually harder than circles lol.
[Normal]
these x2 1/2 sliders combo is the only thing that might be "too hard" in this difficulty a.k.a the lowest diff, the rest seems fine.
02:03:563 - the outro here has very weird rhythm imo, in this difficulty 2/1 blanks were not common at all but all of sudden you have a lot of it in the ending of the map, maybe fulfill the 2/1 blanks by circles or whatever.

I still have things to write up here about the rankability thing but posting the main concerns for now :P great set except the unrankable things!! hit me up once you are done with this and the other mods
ArThasCD
792 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
ArThasCD
Thank you for mod Delis ! I'll check mods once I get home tomorrow :)

EDIT: okay I borrowed someone's computer to do this now
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DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er

Delis wrote:

yea should avoid using ogg files lol
[117's Normal]
it's always better to have a spinner in lower diffs :<
00:20:308 (5) - should remove the extra tick of the slider it might cause unrankable shit
01:16:122 (4) - feels like this slider should've been 1/2 tick earlier (at 01:15:889 - ) for the vocal, the rhythm you're relying on is the vocals thus you can actually move it right there and add a note at 01:16:587 - to fulfill the rhythm for the drum here. >all part follow vocal
01:20:773 (5) - could consider replace this with 2 circles, i think the combo chain here is too long because sliders are usually harder than circles lol.
All fixed

Actually, it's an old GD for me. :)

Thanks Delis.

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ArThasCD
792 posts
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ArThasCD
@xJ1 : fixed sliders you mentioned. The other things are fine to me. thank you for mod ~

@Delis : all fixed. that was really helpful :) Thanks a lot !


updated 117's diff.
Delis
1,433 posts
Joined May 2012
Delis
you need the . in the end of the source :P

https://delisha.s-ul.eu/enHXBRGS replace the soft-sliderslide files with them, I don't think it would be a big problem but we're recommended to use the official blank files which are 44bytes so.

00:20:308 (5) - in dream117er's diff it's still suspicious you can delete the slider tick that the pic indicates for him lol

that's it from me, I think the outro in normal would be nice if you mapped the rhythm denser like this it works better with the rest in this diff.

send me pm again when you're done with them.
Delis
1,433 posts
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Delis
yes
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
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DreaM117er
Sure, do it do it :) :)
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
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Garden
Normal:
可以考虑hp3od3，比117normal低一点

117's Normal:
用s sample开头音量低一点，那个sliderslide有一点吵

Hard:
01:11:238 (2,3,4,5) - 这里容易想到之前那段前奏的折返跳而读成1/2的间隔，建议换种摆法试试
01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏很模糊，不容易抓到跟的什么，insane那里就比较直观
01:35:424 - 01:42:866 - 01:50:308 - 像 01:57:750 - 一样跟到人声? 我感觉kiai里就没必要这么空那么多了，也不会难很多
02:03:563 (2,3,4) - 02:05:424 (3,4) - 我感觉这两组节奏应该反过来，让 02:05:657 - 02:05:889 - 两个clap都clickable，后面类似节奏的地方也是，你insane里就做得挺好

Insane:
00:23:796 (3,4) - 视觉上太挤了，可以把 00:24:494 (4,2) - 都移下来一点
01:34:029 - 01:48:912 - 也是人声，建议加个圈。或者用 01:40:308 (1,2,3) - 一样的节奏，这样也能保持1/1间隔的想法。

Lunatic:
比起 01:17:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ，01:19:843 - 这里连续的1/2音节才更适合连续用圈吧
DreaM117er
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DreaM117er
幫我加一個無聲的滑條音 :)
ArThasCD
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ArThasCD

Garden wrote:

Hard:
01:11:238 (2,3,4,5) - 这里容易想到之前那段前奏的折返跳而读成1/2的间隔，建议换种摆法试试 這邊不用擔心，因為我沒有在前面用過這種跳，所以之前看別人測試圖的時候大家也沒誤讀
01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏很模糊，不容易抓到跟的什么，insane那里就比较直观 這裡跟背景音，不過我把01:15:657 (5) - 改成2個circles重疊，這樣應該明顯多了!
01:35:424 - 01:42:866 - 01:50:308 - 像 01:57:750 - 一样跟到人声? 我感觉kiai里就没必要这么空那么多了，也不会难很多我還是想保持Hard應有的難度，這樣它跟Insane的難度差別才會保持比較好~
02:03:563 (2,3,4) - 02:05:424 (3,4) - 我感觉这两组节奏应该反过来，让 02:05:657 - 02:05:889 - 两个clap都clickable，后面类似节奏的地方也是，你insane里就做得挺好 比較低難度的這樣做是因為滑條跳比較簡單但又比重疊的2個circles有趣多，難度降低又比較有趣是我希望看到的

Lunatic:
比起 01:17:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ，01:19:843 - 这里连续的1/2音节才更适合连续用圈吧 這裡其實我覺得整段的音都蠻適合circles的(刪掉物件聽原曲)，只是為了circles和sliders平衡所以才這麼下
其他都改了，謝謝你的mod !! :)
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omg thanks garden
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