Hello hello, here from my modding queue :-)
You were right in thinking that your map is overmapped, therefore this mod will be more focused towards identifying why certain sections are overmapped and how to fix them.
00:00:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The pattern here just doesn't flow well enough to justify it. (better placement)
00:00:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The song doesn't change enough intensity wise to justify this spacing. (Spacing increases as song intensity increases, same for decreases)
00:03:001 (3,4,5) - The spacing here looks fine but the angle is awkward making it not flow as well as it could. (better flow placement)
00:05:335 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Coming back to intensity, the spacing here is too little so the intensity isn't getting taken advantage of. (higher intensity, higher spacing)
00:11:668 (3,4,5) - Too much spacing. Spacing like this is better 00:18:835 (1,2,3)
00:13:501 (2,3,4) - This is very unexpected and doesn't flow well. (this is very bad for the flow of the map as random unexpected notes will cause people to miss unfairly and get frustrated at the map because of it)
00:14:835 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This is too hard to hit. (simply too hard to hit, aka overmapped)
00:15:668 (2) - This slider should end on a red tick.
00:25:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These don't fit well with the stream, very awkward.
00:29:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - While this is probably able to be hit, it's very hard to hit it and will feel awkward, better to stick to normal type of streams.
00:32:668 (6) - 00:33:335 (11) - These sliders need to be reversed.
00:50:668 (1,2,3,4,5) - Simply overmapped here.
00:52:668 (1) - Confusing slider.
01:18:668 (1,2) - This part is completely missing the sounds of the song and theres a lot of the same types of sections throughout the map, listen more closely to the song and map in correlation with it.
Overall
Your map is overmapped and you've mistimed some beats with the song, I chose not to identify every part that you overmapped because that's not helping you in the long run, if you stay true to the intensity of the song then it should always be clear to you when things need to intensify or calm down.
I don't think you need anything more in order to make this map work better, so good luck! :-)
You were right in thinking that your map is overmapped, therefore this mod will be more focused towards identifying why certain sections are overmapped and how to fix them.
00:00:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The pattern here just doesn't flow well enough to justify it. (better placement)
00:00:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The song doesn't change enough intensity wise to justify this spacing. (Spacing increases as song intensity increases, same for decreases)
00:03:001 (3,4,5) - The spacing here looks fine but the angle is awkward making it not flow as well as it could. (better flow placement)
00:05:335 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Coming back to intensity, the spacing here is too little so the intensity isn't getting taken advantage of. (higher intensity, higher spacing)
00:11:668 (3,4,5) - Too much spacing. Spacing like this is better 00:18:835 (1,2,3)
00:13:501 (2,3,4) - This is very unexpected and doesn't flow well. (this is very bad for the flow of the map as random unexpected notes will cause people to miss unfairly and get frustrated at the map because of it)
00:14:835 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This is too hard to hit. (simply too hard to hit, aka overmapped)
00:15:668 (2) - This slider should end on a red tick.
00:25:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These don't fit well with the stream, very awkward.
00:29:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - While this is probably able to be hit, it's very hard to hit it and will feel awkward, better to stick to normal type of streams.
00:32:668 (6) - 00:33:335 (11) - These sliders need to be reversed.
00:50:668 (1,2,3,4,5) - Simply overmapped here.
00:52:668 (1) - Confusing slider.
01:18:668 (1,2) - This part is completely missing the sounds of the song and theres a lot of the same types of sections throughout the map, listen more closely to the song and map in correlation with it.
Overall
Your map is overmapped and you've mistimed some beats with the song, I chose not to identify every part that you overmapped because that's not helping you in the long run, if you stay true to the intensity of the song then it should always be clear to you when things need to intensify or calm down.
I don't think you need anything more in order to make this map work better, so good luck! :-)