1. 01:48:507 (1) - In fact 01:48:519 - is the more accurate timing point. You can change or keep the BPM whatever since it doesn't matter.
2. 01:48:822 - accurate timing should be at 01:48:834 -
3. 01:58:540 (1,2) - kinda curious what are you following here. If you're just merely following vocal, adding a finish there sounds kinda frustrating
4. 03:32:755 (1) - should go for 03:32:789 -
5. 03:50:558 (7) - no hitsound? at least a clap

F D Flourite wrote:

Some small points need reconsideration.

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1. 01:48:507 (1) - In fact 01:48:519 - is the more accurate timing point. You can change or keep the BPM whatever since it doesn't matter. // fixed
2. 01:48:822 - accurate timing should be at 01:48:834 - // fixed
3. 01:58:540 (1,2) - kinda curious what are you following here. If you're just merely following vocal, adding a finish there sounds kinda frustrating // actually im following the instrument
4. 03:32:755 (1) - should go for 03:32:789 - // fixed
5. 03:50:558 (7) - no hitsound? at least a clap // fixed

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ah2190 wrote:

I've been having a look at it, and while I suspect you intend this to be for the main OSU mode, it seems to work very well in both Takio and Mania modes. Especially Takio, as the BPM changes means certain notes move towards the point where you have to hit them at various rates, meaning some may go over others. Which for a challenging map, is something I am happy with.

Sonnyc wrote:

Both slider border and body colors must be manually set or not set. Setting only one may conflict with a user's custom skin choices.

According to this rule, you should be setting a slider border too. // fixed

02:55:384 (1) - I think using this slider shape along felt to be too abnormal to interact with the surrounding patterns. Unlike 02:18:743 (1) - 02:19:659 (1) - where the shape was used at a short period of time which created a concept, the usage here felt too random. // changed it to straight slider
04:00:139 - 04:01:687 - Why did you ignored these rhythms? Other vocal parts like 04:03:236 - 04:07:881 - etc were expressed as circles which made the rhythm concepts quite inconsistent. // fixed by adding circles

Great work, call me back for a rebubble.

Naotoshi wrote:

wtf my rebubble got sniped -_-

edit: hey cookiebite let me rebubble instead of flourite so we can farm bn points!!!

Kyujuroku 96 wrote:

I dont want to rain on your parade but Im pretty sure the artist is Tenacious D feat. Dave Grohl. Thats how appears credited in the soundtrack album and also in the film credits. I can provide an screenshot if needed since I have the flim somewhere but the imdb page is quite definite to my eyes

Kyujuroku 96 wrote:

Sorry but I have to disagree here. In the case of imdb, the credits are taken directly from the film, series, etc. Either way, I can provide a screenshot from the credits of the film if you want, as I said before

Kyujuroku 96 wrote:

I dont want to rain on your parade but Im pretty sure the artist is Tenacious D feat. Dave Grohl. Thats how appears credited in the soundtrack album and also in the film credits. I can provide an screenshot if needed since I have the flim somewhere but the imdb page is quite definite to my eyes

CookieBite wrote:

tho i think it should be fine as Dave Grohl is in the tags, right?