Konnichiwa!!! Sorry for long delay
General* Please note that using white combo color are not allowed, because it will hurt someone's eyes during kiai. I suggest you to change it
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Normal* Make sure all slider has not 2 or more repeating slider (Example : 00:42:606 (1)). If you keep this, newbies will tough to tell when the slider is end. You should fix this by removing 1 or more repeating slider, and make a nice pattern
* Spinner should be longer in Easy/Normal diff. This makes some newbies have a time to spin until the spinner gauge is full. Short spinner (Example : 02:52:918 (1)) should be avoided. You need to make it longer, like 00:37:356 (1)
00:28:356 (3,4) - Make (3) slider is symetric and put (4) on center of slider to make a blanket combo (Just ignore this if you can't fix this due to spacing)
00:47:106 (4,1) - Fill the objects between this object. Like the object between 00:42:231 (6) and 00:45:606 (1)
01:06:606 (1) - Make sure this curve is perfect, like 00:53:106 (2)
01:07:356 (2) - ^
01:41:106 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza, like 01:32:106 (1)
01:42:606 (3) - New combo for following stanza
01:47:856 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:51:606 (1,1) - Fill the objects between this notes?
01:59:106 (1) - You don't need more spinner, you have a spinner in previous spinner, so this is seems useless for me. Try to remove this spinner and make a good pattern?
02:06:606 (7) - New combo for following stanza
02:06:981 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza
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Hard* Use AR 7. If the Approach Rate speed and Slider Velocity speed is different, It'll be break the flow.
00:41:106 (1) - Ummm, remove new combo? For following stanza, like 00:42:606 (1). But, I'm not sure because it has a different pattern. But, it's your choice to remove it or not
01:03:606 (3) - Move the tail slider to previous red tick for following vocal?
01:04:356 (3) - ^
01:12:418 (1) - Repeating slider snap in blue ticks is kinda makes no sense for me. Snap the repeating slider to long white tick (downbeat), and add the note at 01:12:981
01:15:606 (3) - Same issue as 01:03:606 (3)
02:11:106 (4) - New combo for changing pattern
02:11:856 (1) - Remove new combo
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Insane00:51:981 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
00:57:418 (6) - The spacing is too short. Because the distance is not same as 00:57:231 (4,5) (Nazi)
02:16:543 (6) - New combo for following stanza, like 02:12:606 (1)
02:20:106 (6) - ^
03:12:231 (5) - Not stack perfectly with previous slider, or it'll be having a weird stack during gameplay
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Also, sorry for long mod