thank you for nice wallpaper.XD

頑張って下さい。,,Ծ‸Ծ,,

Hi ~ As per your request XD

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

• ●There are 3 ".osb" files in your folder.Delete them and then do a full-submission.
  ●If you can, plz make the normal diff easier in order to make it below 3 star rating. It's not necessary but most of modders will ask you to do it.

[Normal]

• ●The audio lead-in time is different from the other 2 diffs. Unify it to 1500 plz ~ (Actually I don't think this song needs audio lead-in time @_@ , but okay I don't mind though. )
  ●00:39:606 (1) - Too close to the spinner for a normal diff. I suggest you to remove this and add a circle at 00:39:981.
  ●00:57:418 (x) - Here is a vocal so your pattern will confuse beginners to click earlier. So, to deal with it,
  
  My suggestion

  
  ●01:00:606 (1) - The same issue to above. Deal with it by your own way to make them more readable.
  ●01:03:606 (3) - Add New Combo here.
  ●01:35:481 (6) - ^
  ●01:39:606 (1) - Too close to the spinner.
  
  My suggestion

  
  ●01:45:606 (1) - The same issue to above. Deal with it by your own way.
  ●02:00:606 (1) - ^. I suggest to remove this and add a circle on 02:00:981.
  ●02:42:606 (1) - Remove this and lengthen the spinner to here.
  ●02:52:918 (1) - End this at 02:53:856.
  ●03:12:418 (7) - Add New Combo.

[Hard]

• ●02:15:981 (2) - Add a circle ?

[Insane]

• ●00:46:731 (1,2,3) - Very confused spacing.

• Some nazi mod for normal but I think they're necessary to be fixed for beginners. Hard and Insane are good enough and I hate nazi though .. ;_;
  I suck at hitsound xD, maybe next one could help you about hitsound ~
  
  Good luck ~ And sorry my last 2 KD were denied so I have no KD remaining now and can't star this ..TwT Really sorry ><

>Patchouli
MODありがとう！
とても参考になりました
Hardのhit sound付けるの忘れてましたΣ(°Д°；)

>JoJo
thanks mod!
sometimes no,sorry

追記ちゃんでございます【,,Ծ‸Ծ,,】

No kds!

Patchouli wrote:

追記ちゃんでございます【,,Ծ‸Ծ,,】
box=Normal MOD]
00:15:606 (7) - こんな位置はどうでしょう？

SPOILER

00:56:106 (4,5) - 5を削除して4の終点を5のあった位置まで？
00:57:231 (6) - delete(Easyなので完全にVocalfollowのつもりで見ています。)
01:11:106 (4,5) - 2つ上と同じ
01:47:856 (1) - スライダーが若干被さったりしてるので少しずらしてみては？(その後のスライダーと対象配置みたいなので保留でもいいかも)
02:51:418 (1,2) - 折り返しのスライダーに

[/box]

No kds!

再modありがとう！
01:47:856は変えないでおきます。

遅くなってすいませんー

[General]

1. 02:27:606 (T) - 2つ目のKIAI TIMEを終えるタイミングはここだと思います。

[Normal]

• 
  HP +1, OD +2。今の設定はunrankableです。

1. 前奏部分 - もう少しwhistleを増やしましょう。
2. 00:38:106 (1) - 開始を00:37:543にしてみては。
3. 00:52:356 (1,2,3) - だんだんとボリュームを上げていってみてはどうでしょう。
4. 01:20:106 (4,5) - (2,3)と比べて間隔が狭すぎます。
5. 02:03:981 (1,2,3) - 一番下の難易度でこの並びはやや難しすぎます。
6. 02:25:918 (x) - ノート追加。
7. 02:51:418 (1,2) - 初心者にこのスライダーは読めません。

[Hard]

• 
  Difficultyの設定が低すぎます。
  HP +1, OD +3or4.

1. 00:06:231 (T) - ここのKIAIは不要ではないでしょうか。それに加えて緑線がスナップされてません。もしKIAIを加えるとしたら、ここではなく00:06:606の方だと思います。
2. 00:14:856 (1) - 始端のfinish削除で終端のfinishの代わりにclap？
3. 00:39:231 (T) - こちらのKIAIも不要では。もしも加えるなら00:39:606。
4. 00:50:106 (1,2,3,4) - この前の00:48:606 (1,3)が折り返しの多いスライダーで戸惑いやすく、そこからこの(1,2,3,4)で一気にスペーシングが広がるのは、Hardとしては少し難しすぎるパターンに思います。この譜面はInsaneがそこまで難しくないので尚更そう感じてしまいます。
5. 00:51:606 (T) - こちらのKIAIも。2番以降の同様のKIAIパターンについては同じことなので省きます。
6. 01:00:418 (1) - 始端にfinish。
7. 01:12:418 (1) - ^
8. 01:42:793 (x) - ノート追加？
9. 01:45:606 (1) から 01:56:668 (4) まで - No 丸ごとコピペ。
10. 02:11:856 (6) - new combo?
11. 03:05:106 (1) - スペーシングが狭いのと、重なっていて見えづらいです。
12. 03:06:606 (1) から サビ終わりまで - 2番が1番の反転コピペなのはまだいいですが、さすがに3番ではパターンを変えた方がいいのでは。
13. 03:10:262 (x) -
14. 03:10:356 (x) - バックサウンド的に、この2つのノートを加えて3連打にした方が良いと思います。
15. 03:10:731 (x) - こちらにもノート追加。このバックサウンドで赤線から赤線の音取りはタイミングも取りづらいです。
16. 03:20:856 (5,6,7) - もっと広げるか、(5)にnew combo。

[Insane]

• 
  OD+1.

1. 00:04:356 (5,6) - ここのスペーシングはその前の00:04:168 (4,5)と合わせた方が良いと思います。
2. 00:05:856 (1) - new combo削除？
3. 00:08:856 (1) - ^
4. 00:09:043 (2) - 終端にclap？
5. 00:12:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - やや(5,6)の間隔が狭くてごちゃごちゃして見えるので、離してみて下さい。(1-5)の連打もgrid lv3で間隔がバラバラになってしまっているので、形を整えてみては。参考までに画像を下に。
   
   SPOILER

   
   もし画像通りに変更するのならば、以下のコードをコピペしてください。
   

   320,248,12606,5,0
   313,269,12699,1,0
   300,288,12793,1,0
   283,303,12887,1,0
   261,309,12981,1,2
   168,312,13168,1,0

6. 00:13:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
7. 00:28:918 (8) - 1grid上？
8. 00:35:481 (3,4,5) - ここのスペーシングは1.0xで置きましょう。
9. 00:46:731 (1) - ここのnew comboは削除して(3)に追加しましょう。ここまでの間にnew comboが欲しかったら00:46:356 (7)にも追加で。
   それと、このノートだけこの位置にあるのは違和感があるので、これまでのスペーシング通りに配置してください。
10. 00:49:168 (6) - 1.0xで配置。
11. 00:49:918 (6) - ^
12. 00:50:106 (1) - 1 grid上。(2,3)に比べて広いため。
13. 00:50:856 (5) - ちょっとコンボが長いのでここでnew comboを入れたほうが良いかもしれません。
14. 01:01:731 (7,8) - リズムが合っていません。
    
15. 01:03:418 (1) - finishを入れるならこっちではなく(3)の始端です。
16. 01:04:168 (4) - 同様にfinishは(6)の始端。
17. 01:11:106 (8) - new combo。
18. 01:12:418 (1,2,3) - このスペーシングは戸惑うと思います。
19. 01:14:856 (10) - new combo。
20. 01:15:418 (1) - 前のと同様にfinishの位置を。
21. 01:16:168 (1) - ^
22. 01:16:918 (1) - ^ 始端ではなく折り返しです。
23. 01:45:231 (5,6) - ここは1.0xで。
24. 01:49:168 (6) - ^
25. 01:49:918 (6) - ^
26. 01:55:168 (6) - ^
27. 01:55:918 (6) - ^
28. 01:56:856 (3) - new combo？
29. 02:00:606 (T) - この緑線は02:00:418に移動。
30. 02:05:106 (6) - コンボがやや長いのでここでnew combo。
31. 02:10:168 (1) - new combo削除。
32. 02:10:918 (4) - こちらにnew combo。
33. 02:13:168 (2) - (3)に比べて(1)との距離が近いです。
34. 02:14:106 (8) - 完全に7と重ねた方が良いと思います。それとnew combo。
35. 02:15:418 (1,3,4,5,6) - Stack Leniencyによってプレイ時にかなりズレるので、(1)とは重ねない方がいいと思います。
36. 02:18:418 (7) - new combo？
37. 02:25:168 (2) - 1grid下？
38. 02:27:606 (1) - new combo削除？
39. 02:52:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - スペーシングを統一してください。
40. 02:55:918 (4,5,6) - (4,5)がStackLeniencyによりズレるので、(6)との間隔がおかしくなります。3つとも完全に重ねた方が良いと思います。
41. 02:57:231 (11,1) - new combo追加と削除。
42. 03:05:856 (10) - 1.0xで。
43. 03:07:168 (2) - 前の同じパターンと同様に。
44. 03:06:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - Ctrl+Hで左右反転して前の同パターンとの違いをつけてみては。
45. 03:18:793 (x) - ノート追加？

Insaneはイイ感じです！
頑張ってください～。

Suzully wrote:

遅くなってすいませんー

[General]

1. 02:27:606 (T) - 2つ目のKIAI TIMEを終えるタイミングはここだと思います。

[Normal]

• 
  HP +1, OD +2。今の設定はunrankableです。

1. 前奏部分 - もう少しwhistleを増やしましょう。
2. 00:38:106 (1) - 開始を00:37:543にしてみては。
3. 00:52:356 (1,2,3) - だんだんとボリュームを上げていってみてはどうでしょう。
4. 01:20:106 (4,5) - (2,3)と比べて間隔が狭すぎます。
5. 02:03:981 (1,2,3) - 一番下の難易度でこの並びはやや難しすぎます。
6. 02:25:918 (x) - ノート追加。
7. 02:51:418 (1,2) - 初心者にこのスライダーは読めません。

[Hard]

• 
  Difficultyの設定が低すぎます。
  HP +1, OD +3or4.

1. 00:06:231 (T) - ここのKIAIは不要ではないでしょうか。それに加えて緑線がスナップされてません。もしKIAIを加えるとしたら、ここではなく00:06:606の方だと思います。
2. 00:14:856 (1) - 始端のfinish削除で終端のfinishの代わりにclap？
3. 00:39:231 (T) - こちらのKIAIも不要では。もしも加えるなら00:39:606。
4. 00:50:106 (1,2,3,4) - この前の00:48:606 (1,3)が折り返しの多いスライダーで戸惑いやすく、そこからこの(1,2,3,4)で一気にスペーシングが広がるのは、Hardとしては少し難しすぎるパターンに思います。この譜面はInsaneがそこまで難しくないので尚更そう感じてしまいます。
5. 00:51:606 (T) - こちらのKIAIも。2番以降の同様のKIAIパターンについては同じことなので省きます。
6. 01:00:418 (1) - 始端にfinish。
7. 01:12:418 (1) - ^
8. 01:42:793 (x) - ノート追加？
9. 01:45:606 (1) から 01:56:668 (4) まで - No 丸ごとコピペ。
10. 02:11:856 (6) - new combo?
11. 03:05:106 (1) - スペーシングが狭いのと、重なっていて見えづらいです。
12. 03:06:606 (1) から サビ終わりまで - 2番が1番の反転コピペなのはまだいいですが、さすがに3番ではパターンを変えた方がいいのでは。
13. 03:10:262 (x) -
14. 03:10:356 (x) - バックサウンド的に、この2つのノートを加えて3連打にした方が良いと思います。
15. 03:10:731 (x) - こちらにもノート追加。このバックサウンドで赤線から赤線の音取りはタイミングも取りづらいです。
16. 03:20:856 (5,6,7) - もっと広げるか、(5)にnew combo。

[Insane]

• 
  OD+1.

1. 00:04:356 (5,6) - ここのスペーシングはその前の00:04:168 (4,5)と合わせた方が良いと思います。
2. 00:05:856 (1) - new combo削除？
3. 00:08:856 (1) - ^
4. 00:09:043 (2) - 終端にclap？
5. 00:12:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - やや(5,6)の間隔が狭くてごちゃごちゃして見えるので、離してみて下さい。(1-5)の連打もgrid lv3で間隔がバラバラになってしまっているので、形を整えてみては。参考までに画像を下に。
   
   SPOILER

   
   もし画像通りに変更するのならば、以下のコードをコピペしてください。
   

   320,248,12606,5,0
   313,269,12699,1,0
   300,288,12793,1,0
   283,303,12887,1,0
   261,309,12981,1,2
   168,312,13168,1,0

6. 00:13:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
7. 00:28:918 (8) - 1grid上？
8. 00:35:481 (3,4,5) - ここのスペーシングは1.0xで置きましょう。
9. 00:46:731 (1) - ここのnew comboは削除して(3)に追加しましょう。ここまでの間にnew comboが欲しかったら00:46:356 (7)にも追加で。
   それと、このノートだけこの位置にあるのは違和感があるので、これまでのスペーシング通りに配置してください。
10. 00:49:168 (6) - 1.0xで配置。
11. 00:49:918 (6) - ^
12. 00:50:106 (1) - 1 grid上。(2,3)に比べて広いため。
13. 00:50:856 (5) - ちょっとコンボが長いのでここでnew comboを入れたほうが良いかもしれません。
14. 01:01:731 (7,8) - リズムが合っていません。
    [attachment=0:1faff]e5b71a408572ba604333e26aa4bd9a02.png[/attachment:1faff]
15. 01:03:418 (1) - finishを入れるならこっちではなく(3)の始端です。
16. 01:04:168 (4) - 同様にfinishは(6)の始端。
17. 01:11:106 (8) - new combo。
18. 01:12:418 (1,2,3) - このスペーシングは戸惑うと思います。
19. 01:14:856 (10) - new combo。
20. 01:15:418 (1) - 前のと同様にfinishの位置を。
21. 01:16:168 (1) - ^
22. 01:16:918 (1) - ^ 始端ではなく折り返しです。
23. 01:45:231 (5,6) - ここは1.0xで。
24. 01:49:168 (6) - ^
25. 01:49:918 (6) - ^
26. 01:55:168 (6) - ^
27. 01:55:918 (6) - ^
28. 01:56:856 (3) - new combo？
29. 02:00:606 (T) - この緑線は02:00:418に移動。
30. 02:05:106 (6) - コンボがやや長いのでここでnew combo。
31. 02:10:168 (1) - new combo削除。
32. 02:10:918 (4) - こちらにnew combo。
33. 02:13:168 (2) - (3)に比べて(1)との距離が近いです。
34. 02:14:106 (8) - 完全に7と重ねた方が良いと思います。それとnew combo。
35. 02:15:418 (1,3,4,5,6) - Stack Leniencyによってプレイ時にかなりズレるので、(1)とは重ねない方がいいと思います。
36. 02:18:418 (7) - new combo？
37. 02:25:168 (2) - 1grid下？
38. 02:27:606 (1) - new combo削除？
39. 02:52:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - スペーシングを統一してください。
40. 02:55:918 (4,5,6) - (4,5)がStackLeniencyによりズレるので、(6)との間隔がおかしくなります。3つとも完全に重ねた方が良いと思います。
41. 02:57:231 (11,1) - new combo追加と削除。
42. 03:05:856 (10) - 1.0xで。
43. 03:07:168 (2) - 前の同じパターンと同様に。
44. 03:06:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - Ctrl+Hで左右反転して前の同パターンとの違いをつけてみては。
45. 03:18:793 (x) - ノート追加？

Insaneはイイ感じです！
頑張ってください～。

modありがとう！
almost fixed!

Normal
00:49:356- 1 Grid left
01:37:356- 1 Grid down
01:51:606- ^
02:03:981- 2 grid right because circle will stay center u_u
02:12:606- Finish

自分からは言うことなしだｗ
ナイス譜面だった

これからも頑張って！！

29yuto12 wrote:

自分からは言うことなしだｗ
ナイス譜面だった

これからも頑張って！！

ありがとーう(*ﾟーﾟ)

HellDawn wrote:

Normal
00:49:356- 1 Grid left
01:37:356- 1 Grid down
01:51:606- ^
02:03:981- 2 grid right because circle will stay center u_u
02:12:606- Finish

thx mod!
fixed!

Mod End~


Nomal
01:21:231(6)New combo
01:35:490(6)New combo
01:59:106(1)スピンの始めを1個前の白線にしてもいいかもしれません
02:27:231(5)New combo

Hard
00:09:043(8)New combo
00:35:106(6)^
00:35:293(1)Remove new combo
00:59:668(1)^
03:17:293(1)^
03:20:856(1~3)場所を変えてみると綺麗にみえるかもしれません！

Insane
01:01:293(8)New combo
02:02:106(8)^
02:16:543(6)^
02:17:762(1)Remove new combo
02:22:168(1)^
02:22:918(3)New combo
03:10:918(6)^
03:13:918(7)^
03:17:012(7)^
03:19:918(7)^
あとはスライダーに形を整えてみても譜面がきれいにみえるかもしれないです。

やっぱりましろいいですね！
がんばってください

KoHaRuN wrote:

Mod End~


Nomal
01:21:231(6)New combo
01:35:490(6)New combo
01:59:106(1)スピンの始めを1個前の白線にしてもいいかもしれません
02:27:231(5)New combo

Hard
00:09:043(8)New combo
00:35:106(6)^
00:35:293(1)Remove new combo
00:59:668(1)^
03:17:293(1)^
03:20:856(1~3)場所を変えてみると綺麗にみえるかもしれません！

Insane
01:01:293(8)New combo
02:02:106(8)^
02:16:543(6)^
02:17:762(1)Remove new combo
02:22:168(1)^
02:22:918(3)New combo
03:10:918(6)^
03:13:918(7)^
03:17:012(7)^
03:19:918(7)^
あとはスライダーに形を整えてみても譜面がきれいにみえるかもしれないです。

やっぱりましろいいですね！
がんばってください

modありがとう！
almost fixed!
とても参考になりました～

Hi, as requested, my mod.

[General]

- Keep slider tick rate the same. Change to 2 for all difficulties.
- Remove audio lead-in for all difficulty, not needed for this beatmap

[Normal]

00:30:231 (4) Grid level 4 > 1 grid down. Adjust the following note accordingly.
00:59:106 (4,5) Remove one repeat from (4) and add a slider? Like this? http://puu.sh/5ImM
01:08:856 (6) Make it like this http://puu.sh/5Inc Don't use kick sliders (slider with more than one repeat).
01:19:918 (3,4) Slider instead.
01:42:231 (4) Touching (3) a little bit. Move up and readjust spacing for this section.
02:25:918 (3) Make it the same as (2)
02:56:856 (5) Like this... http://puu.sh/5Io0 Circle > Repeating Slider
03:02:106 (3) Like this instead http://puu.sh/5Ioh Circle > Repeating slider
03:13:356 (2) Kick slider, look at previous suggestion
03:14:856 (4) ^
03:21:606 (1) Ctrl+J the slider and adjust section.

Nice, try not to use kick slider (repeating slider with more than one repeat).

[Hard]

00:47:856 (6) Perhaps like this http://puu.sh/5Ips.
01:05:856 (3) http://puu.sh/5IpC so that it is symmetrical to (1)
01:08:106 (3) Ctrl + H then put back in same spot. Feel better
02:11:856 (1,2,3) Keep spacing the same for this combo.

Pretty nice , but not fond of the repeating slider with 5 repeats.

[Insane]

00:05:481 (3) Better like this http://puu.sh/5IqI
00:35:293 (1,2,3) Nicer http://puu.sh/5Ird
01:14:856 (10) Anti jump doesn't fit well. Keep spacing the same. Adjust all notes in this combo to 1.5x distant snapping.
03:04:543 (3) Don't change spacing in the middle of a combo. Use 1.6x distant snapping for this combo.

Fun map to play

You get a star from me No real major issues with your map. Consider asking a mat to check your map
Good luck on getting this ranked.

Hi~

Normal
00:33:606 (1) - Add finish
00:59:106 (4) - Make this slider point down and center it
01:18:606 (1) - Add finish and the following notes expect for yellow combo (1)
01:35:481 (6) - New combo
01:39:606 (1) - Add finish
02:24:606 (1) - Same like 01:18:606
02:42:606 (X) - Too soft pump UP the volume

Hard
00:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo
01:12:418 (1,3) - They look ugly when overlapping
02:01:356 (2) - Looks too close to (1)

Insane
I-I have no idea how to mod thix. Jumps are fun though.
___________________________________________________--
Star~

Hi. From My modding queue.


[Normal]
02:48:606 (1) - move to 02:48:418 and increase slide note to 02:49:356
03:09:606 - 03:15:418 - note and beat are strange when I look them...
Consider them.
03:18:606 (1) - move to 03:18:418. Remember not only note but also timing bar(Green bar)


[Hard]
02:03:606 (1) - move to 02:03:418. Length is your choice.
02:45:606 (1) - move to 02:45:418. then, you need to change note..t_t


[Insane]

Ahh....max score is little high....
(16,453,554...)

You will want to rank this map, max score is under at least 15 million(15,000,000) -> (My experience)


ehhh.....First decrease max score at least under 15 mil...

Pettern is great.


Good Beatmap!

>merchat7,DragonSparta,Tanmak
thanks mod! fixed,but sometimes no sorry

>merchat7,DragonSparta
thanks KDstar!!

( ノﾟДﾟ)こんにちわ

全て提案です

[General]

●Tags: psp を追加（このショートverについていたので）

[Normal]

●HP+1
●00:37:356 (7) - circle 削除。00:37:543 (1) - このスピナーの開始を00:37:356にする　終わりは00:39:231
●00:57:418 (1) - きれいな形に・・・　

●01:08:856 (6) - 短いです

●01:17:856 (5) - ctrl+Jで向きを変えて　配置してみてください
●02:55:731 (3) - 前の(2)と対称に

[Hard]

●00:08:106 (5) - new combo add
●00:57:231 (8) - 前の(6,7)と対称に
●01:45:606~01:45:699 - KIAIがついてますが　消しますか？
●03:13:356~03:13:543 - slider add

[Insane]

●00:30:606 (6) - new combo add
●00:41:293 (5) - ^
●00:45:793 (4) - ^
●00:59:106 (1) - 始点を00:58:356 (6)に重ねる
●01:14:106 (6) - new combo add
●01:47:106 (7) - ^
●01:53:293 (7) - ^
●02:27:231 (1,2) - 02:26:106 (4) - のまっすぐ上に配置(横にいくつか(4)の真上にくるように移動）
●02:44:293 (7) - new combo add
●03:12:043 (4,5) - 前の(3)の始点に置いた方がいいです


いい譜面でいい曲でした

-Gamu- wrote:

( ノﾟДﾟ)こんにちわ

全て提案です

[General]

●Tags: psp を追加（このショートverについていたので）

[Normal]

●HP+1
●00:37:356 (7) - circle 削除。00:37:543 (1) - このスピナーの開始を00:37:356にする　終わりは00:39:231
●00:57:418 (1) - きれいな形に・・・　

●01:08:856 (6) - 短いです

●01:17:856 (5) - ctrl+Jで向きを変えて　配置してみてください
●02:55:731 (3) - 前の(2)と対称に

[Hard]

●00:08:106 (5) - new combo add
●00:57:231 (8) - 前の(6,7)と対称に
●01:45:606~01:45:699 - KIAIがついてますが　消しますか？
●03:13:356~03:13:543 - slider add

[Insane]

●00:30:606 (6) - new combo add
●00:41:293 (5) - ^
●00:45:793 (4) - ^
●00:59:106 (1) - 始点を00:58:356 (6)に重ねる
●01:14:106 (6) - new combo add
●01:47:106 (7) - ^
●01:53:293 (7) - ^
●02:27:231 (1,2) - 02:26:106 (4) - のまっすぐ上に配置(横にいくつか(4)の真上にくるように移動）
●02:44:293 (7) - new combo add
●03:12:043 (4,5) - 前の(3)の始点に置いた方がいいです


いい譜面でいい曲でした

mod ありがとう！
fixed!
modを参考に他も少し改良しました。

申し訳ない><;今更ですが

↓my mod↓

[General]
ボリュームが100%メインになっているので70か80%メインくらいがいいかと思います。

[Normal]
00:57:231(4,1) - サークル追加＆00:57:418スライダーを00:57:606始まりに(01:11:106(4,5,1)と同じリズムの方がやりやすい気がします）

[Hard]
01:12:418(1,2,3) - 2のサークルを消して、1スライダーを終点01:13:731に変更。01;13;356(3)スライダーを終点01:13:731に。01:13:918にサークル追加
00:39:606 - KIAI TIME 削除
01:21:606(2) - 左右対称x:88,y:192に
02:27:606(2) - ^ x:424,y:192
03:05:106(1) - 前との距離が近いような気がします
03:09:606(2) - 左右対称x:88,y:192に

[Insane]
00:15:043(2) - サークル削除？
00:33:606(1,2) - 3,4が左右対称なのでここも直したほうがいいかも？ http://puu.sh/603A　 こういうのはどうでしょうか？

01:48:606(1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1:49:356(1,2,3,4,5,6)と対称に。1:49:356(1,2,3,4,5,6)のほうをコピーしてCtrl+H,J
02:00:606 - KIAI TIME ここから始め？
03:22:918(2) - 左右対称にx:432,y:64

気になったところだけ直してみてください～

ではがんばー

kosiga wrote:

申し訳ない><;今更ですが

↓my mod↓

[General]
ボリュームが100%メインになっているので70か80%メインくらいがいいかと思います。

[Normal]
00:57:231(4,1) - サークル追加＆00:57:418スライダーを00:57:606始まりに(01:11:106(4,5,1)と同じリズムの方がやりやすい気がします）

[Hard]
01:12:418(1,2,3) - 2のサークルを消して、1スライダーを終点01:13:731に変更。01;13;356(3)スライダーを終点01:13:731に。01:13:918にサークル追加
00:39:606 - KIAI TIME 削除
01:21:606(2) - 左右対称x:88,y:192に
02:27:606(2) - ^ x:424,y:192
03:05:106(1) - 前との距離が近いような気がします
03:09:606(2) - 左右対称x:88,y:192に

[Insane]
00:15:043(2) - サークル削除？
00:33:606(1,2) - 3,4が左右対称なのでここも直したほうがいいかも？ http://puu.sh/603A　 こういうのはどうでしょうか？

01:48:606(1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1:49:356(1,2,3,4,5,6)と対称に。1:49:356(1,2,3,4,5,6)のほうをコピーしてCtrl+H,J
02:00:606 - KIAI TIME ここから始め？
03:22:918(2) - 左右対称にx:432,y:64

気になったところだけ直してみてください～

ではがんばー

fixed!
modありがとう！いくつか採用しました

request via modding queue, let's start
[Normal]
you must have diff below or equal 3 star rating, make this diff easier. some suggestions :
00:49:356 (5) - this note doesn't follow anything, delete it
00:56:106 (4) - a little long slider, shorten until 00:56:481 and add note at 00:56:856
00:57:418 (1) - slider seems late, move to 00:57:231, lenghten until 00:57:981
01:06:606 (1,2,3,4) - make these 1 repeating slider
01:09:606 (3) - change finish at the end of slider to whistle, doesn't fit the music
01:41:106 (3) - NC
01:55:356 (2) - this note doesn't follow anything
02:03:231 (6) - make to 1 circle
02:06:231 (6) - ^
02:11:106 (3,4,5,6) - make these 1 repeating slider
02:51:418 (1) - delete, add note 2 ticks ahead
02:52:168 (2) - ^
02:56:856 (5) - delete note
02:57:043 (6) - move to 02:56:856, add 1 repeat
03:02:106 (3,4) - same suggestion as 5&6 above
03:07:262 (2) - delete, add note 2 ticks ahead
03:07:918 (3) - delete note
03:16:918 (4) - stack to end of slider 3

[Hard]
00:33:325 (3) - move 2 grid upper
00:37:356 (1) - spinner seems too fast, change it to slider?
01:12:418 (1) - a little long slider , shorten 1 tick back
01:43:356 (1) - same suggetion as 00:37:356
02:03:418 (1) - better remove whistle at the end of slider and add it at start of slider (2)
02:15:981 (X) - add a note
02:56:106 (4) - a little long slider , shorten 1 tick back

[Insane]
00:04:356 (5) - better add whistle at start of slider
01:01:731 (7) - ^
01:52:356 (5) - add finish at start of slider

that's all

shikyu wrote:

request via modding queue, let's start
[Normal]
you must have diff below or equal 3 star rating, make this diff easier. some suggestions :
00:49:356 (5) - this note doesn't follow anything, delete it
00:56:106 (4) - a little long slider, shorten until 00:56:481 and add note at 00:56:856
00:57:418 (1) - slider seems late, move to 00:57:231, lenghten until 00:57:981
01:06:606 (1,2,3,4) - make these 1 repeating slider
01:09:606 (3) - change finish at the end of slider to whistle, doesn't fit the music
01:41:106 (3) - NC
01:55:356 (2) - this note doesn't follow anything
02:03:231 (6) - make to 1 circle
02:06:231 (6) - ^
02:11:106 (3,4,5,6) - make these 1 repeating slider
02:51:418 (1) - delete, add note 2 ticks ahead
02:52:168 (2) - ^
02:56:856 (5) - delete note
02:57:043 (6) - move to 02:56:856, add 1 repeat
03:02:106 (3,4) - same suggestion as 5&6 above
03:07:262 (2) - delete, add note 2 ticks ahead
03:07:918 (3) - delete note
03:16:918 (4) - stack to end of slider 3

[Hard]
00:33:325 (3) - move 2 grid upper
00:37:356 (1) - spinner seems too fast, change it to slider?
01:12:418 (1) - a little long slider , shorten 1 tick back
01:43:356 (1) - same suggetion as 00:37:356
02:03:418 (1) - better remove whistle at the end of slider and add it at start of slider (2)
02:15:981 (X) - add a note
02:56:106 (4) - a little long slider , shorten 1 tick back

[Insane]
00:04:356 (5) - better add whistle at start of slider
01:01:731 (7) - ^
01:52:356 (5) - add finish at start of slider

that's all

thanks mod!
fixed ,but sometimes no sorry

Here's my mod!:D

[General]

1. You really need to practise with the patterns and with the slider,since this map has got many bad sliders/patterns. For the sliders you should visit this page:http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

[Normal]

1. 00:28:356 (3) - Move the final waypoint 2 grids left to make the shape of the slider better
2. 00:52:356 (1,2,3) - Try to move them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Also,if you are doing this,make the slider 3 like the slider 1 (select the slider 1 and press CTRL+C,then paste it using CTRL+V where is the slider 3,and go to edit->flip horizontally to do that)
3. 01:09:981 (1) - Spacing (when you have fixed that,remember to fix the spacing of the other notes as well!
4. 01:21:231 (1) - You should remove the new combo here
5. 01:33:231 (4) - 2 grids left and 2 grids down to make the pattern look better
6. 02:06:606 - You should add a note here
7. 02:27:231 (1) - You should remove the new combo here
8. 02:46:731 (2) - Spacing
9. 02:48:606 (1) - Move the final waypoint 1 grid up to make the shape of the slider better
10. 02:50:106 (2) - ^
11. 03:07:168 (2) - Make this slider curvy as the slider 03:07:918 (3) -

[Hard]

1. 00:05:106 (5) - Move the waypoint of the slider 1 grid right
2. 00:14:856 (1) - Move the first waypoint 2 grids right
3. 00:55:356 (2,3) - Try to move them 1 grid up
4. 01:18:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid right
5. 02:04:356 (3) - Spacing
6. 02:05:668 (7) - C'mon,this shape it's pretty horrible D: Try to change it
7. 02:15:981 (2) - 1 grid up
8. 02:17:481 (6) - 3 grids up and 1 grid down
9. 02:24:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid left
10. 03:06:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid right

[Insane]

1. You should check the spacing of all the streams,since there are incorrect spacings
2. 00:38:856 (4,5,6) - Try to do something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:418 (7) - Put this where the note 5 was
4. 01:12:418 (1) - Please,make this shape better D:
5. 02:05:481 (3,4,5) - Try to make them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:13:731 (7) - Make this slider shorter by 1/4
7. 02:39:981 - The break here is not needed,remove it
8. 03:03:606 (2) - Move this 6 grids right and 2 up

You really should rearrange the patterns and make the sliders better.

-kevincela- wrote:

Here's my mod!:D

[General]

1. You really need to practise with the patterns and with the slider,since this map has got many bad sliders/patterns. For the sliders you should visit this page:http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

[Normal]

1. 00:28:356 (3) - Move the final waypoint 2 grids left to make the shape of the slider better
2. 00:52:356 (1,2,3) - Try to move them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Also,if you are doing this,make the slider 3 like the slider 1 (select the slider 1 and press CTRL+C,then paste it using CTRL+V where is the slider 3,and go to edit->flip horizontally to do that)
3. 01:09:981 (1) - Spacing (when you have fixed that,remember to fix the spacing of the other notes as well!
4. 01:21:231 (1) - You should remove the new combo here
5. 01:33:231 (4) - 2 grids left and 2 grids down to make the pattern look better
6. 02:06:606 - You should add a note here
7. 02:27:231 (1) - You should remove the new combo here
8. 02:46:731 (2) - Spacing
9. 02:48:606 (1) - Move the final waypoint 1 grid up to make the shape of the slider better
10. 02:50:106 (2) - ^
11. 03:07:168 (2) - Make this slider curvy as the slider 03:07:918 (3) -

[Hard]

1. 00:05:106 (5) - Move the waypoint of the slider 1 grid right
2. 00:14:856 (1) - Move the first waypoint 2 grids right
3. 00:55:356 (2,3) - Try to move them 1 grid up
4. 01:18:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid right
5. 02:04:356 (3) - Spacing
6. 02:05:668 (7) - C'mon,this shape it's pretty horrible D: Try to change it
7. 02:15:981 (2) - 1 grid up
8. 02:17:481 (6) - 3 grids up and 1 grid down
9. 02:24:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid left
10. 03:06:606 (1) - Move the third waypoint 1 grid right

[Insane]

1. You should check the spacing of all the streams,since there are incorrect spacings
2. 00:38:856 (4,5,6) - Try to do something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:418 (7) - Put this where the note 5 was
4. 01:12:418 (1) - Please,make this shape better D:
5. 02:05:481 (3,4,5) - Try to make them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:13:731 (7) - Make this slider shorter by 1/4
7. 02:39:981 - The break here is not needed,remove it
8. 03:03:606 (2) - Move this 6 grids right and 2 up

You really should rearrange the patterns and make the sliders better.

thanks mod!
fixed

Konnichiwa!!! Sorry for long delay

General
* Please note that using white combo color are not allowed, because it will hurt someone's eyes during kiai. I suggest you to change it

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
* Make sure all slider has not 2 or more repeating slider (Example : 00:42:606 (1)). If you keep this, newbies will tough to tell when the slider is end. You should fix this by removing 1 or more repeating slider, and make a nice pattern

* Spinner should be longer in Easy/Normal diff. This makes some newbies have a time to spin until the spinner gauge is full. Short spinner (Example : 02:52:918 (1)) should be avoided. You need to make it longer, like 00:37:356 (1)

00:28:356 (3,4) - Make (3) slider is symetric and put (4) on center of slider to make a blanket combo (Just ignore this if you can't fix this due to spacing)
00:47:106 (4,1) - Fill the objects between this object. Like the object between 00:42:231 (6) and 00:45:606 (1)
01:06:606 (1) - Make sure this curve is perfect, like 00:53:106 (2)
01:07:356 (2) - ^
01:41:106 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza, like 01:32:106 (1)
01:42:606 (3) - New combo for following stanza
01:47:856 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:51:606 (1,1) - Fill the objects between this notes?
01:59:106 (1) - You don't need more spinner, you have a spinner in previous spinner, so this is seems useless for me. Try to remove this spinner and make a good pattern?
02:06:606 (7) - New combo for following stanza
02:06:981 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Hard
* Use AR 7. If the Approach Rate speed and Slider Velocity speed is different, It'll be break the flow.

00:41:106 (1) - Ummm, remove new combo? For following stanza, like 00:42:606 (1). But, I'm not sure because it has a different pattern. But, it's your choice to remove it or not
01:03:606 (3) - Move the tail slider to previous red tick for following vocal?
01:04:356 (3) - ^
01:12:418 (1) - Repeating slider snap in blue ticks is kinda makes no sense for me. Snap the repeating slider to long white tick (downbeat), and add the note at 01:12:981
01:15:606 (3) - Same issue as 01:03:606 (3)
02:11:106 (4) - New combo for changing pattern
02:11:856 (1) - Remove new combo

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
00:51:981 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
00:57:418 (6) - The spacing is too short. Because the distance is not same as 00:57:231 (4,5) (Nazi)
02:16:543 (6) - New combo for following stanza, like 02:12:606 (1)
02:20:106 (6) - ^
03:12:231 (5) - Not stack perfectly with previous slider, or it'll be having a weird stack during gameplay

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Also, sorry for long mod

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa!!! Sorry for long delay

General
* Please note that using white combo color are not allowed, because it will hurt someone's eyes during kiai. I suggest you to change it

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
* Make sure all slider has not 2 or more repeating slider (Example : 00:42:606 (1)). If you keep this, newbies will tough to tell when the slider is end. You should fix this by removing 1 or more repeating slider, and make a nice pattern

* Spinner should be longer in Easy/Normal diff. This makes some newbies have a time to spin until the spinner gauge is full. Short spinner (Example : 02:52:918 (1)) should be avoided. You need to make it longer, like 00:37:356 (1)

00:28:356 (3,4) - Make (3) slider is symetric and put (4) on center of slider to make a blanket combo (Just ignore this if you can't fix this due to spacing)
00:47:106 (4,1) - Fill the objects between this object. Like the object between 00:42:231 (6) and 00:45:606 (1)
01:06:606 (1) - Make sure this curve is perfect, like 00:53:106 (2)
01:07:356 (2) - ^
01:41:106 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza, like 01:32:106 (1)
01:42:606 (3) - New combo for following stanza
01:47:856 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:51:606 (1,1) - Fill the objects between this notes?
01:59:106 (1) - You don't need more spinner, you have a spinner in previous spinner, so this is seems useless for me. Try to remove this spinner and make a good pattern?
02:06:606 (7) - New combo for following stanza
02:06:981 (1) - Remove new combo for following stanza

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Hard
* Use AR 7. If the Approach Rate speed and Slider Velocity speed is different, It'll be break the flow.

00:41:106 (1) - Ummm, remove new combo? For following stanza, like 00:42:606 (1). But, I'm not sure because it has a different pattern. But, it's your choice to remove it or not
01:03:606 (3) - Move the tail slider to previous red tick for following vocal?
01:04:356 (3) - ^
01:12:418 (1) - Repeating slider snap in blue ticks is kinda makes no sense for me. Snap the repeating slider to long white tick (downbeat), and add the note at 01:12:981
01:15:606 (3) - Same issue as 01:03:606 (3)
02:11:106 (4) - New combo for changing pattern
02:11:856 (1) - Remove new combo

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
00:51:981 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
00:57:418 (6) - The spacing is too short. Because the distance is not same as 00:57:231 (4,5) (Nazi)
02:16:543 (6) - New combo for following stanza, like 02:12:606 (1)
02:20:106 (6) - ^
03:12:231 (5) - Not stack perfectly with previous slider, or it'll be having a weird stack during gameplay

-----------------------------------------------------------------------

Also, sorry for long mod

thx mod
fixed

Insane:
00:53:106 (1) - The endpoint is overlapping with the slider, causing a glitch. Please make it end at another tick, behind the slider.

Edit: sorry if I don't know the proper way to put it D: I don't really know the terminology D:

DivineRage wrote:

Insane:
00:53:106 (1) - The endpoint is overlapping with the slider, causing a glitch. Please make it end at another tick, behind the slider.

Edit: sorry if I don't know the proper way to put it D: I don't really know the terminology D:

thanks advice!!
i over looked the mistake.

fixed

Request from Queue

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)

Insane

1. 00:03:606 (1) - use finish instead of whistle
2. 00:09:606 (1) - finish
3. 00:11:106 (5) - make it more shapely.here's my code
   

   224,288,11106,6,0,B|176:240|216:200|256:144|284:192,1,135,0|2

4. 00:27:606 (1) - finish at start
5. 00:33:606 (1) - ^
6. 00:54:606 (1) - ^
7. 00:50:856 (1) - add break time
8. 01:18:606 (1) - reduce some volume from here will better
9. 01:33:606 (1) - finish
10. 01:39:418 (1) - finish at second circle
11. 02:17:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - put this stream again.they're not in same spacing.
12. 02:20:856 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

Hard

1. 00:03:606 (1) - finsih
2. 00:09:606 (1) - ^
3. 01:33:606 (1) - finish at start
4. 01:44:293 (1) - remove finish
5. 01:45:606 (1) - finish at start
6. 02:42:606 (1) - ^

Normal

1. NOTICE:Keep at least one diff under 3.00star or it won't be ranked
2. 00:03:606 (1) - finish
3. 00:09:606 (1) - finish at start
4. 00:27:606 (1) - finish
5. 00:39:606 (1) - finish at start
6. 01:47:856 (1) - reverse sign of this slider will be overlap by combo fire!it's unrankable
7. 01:51:606 (1) - ^
8. 02:00:606 (1) - finish at start
9. 02:06:606 (1) - finish

thx mod

Red = You NEED to change.
Orange = You should change.
Black = If possible, change.
Blue = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.


Normal
背景がかわいい

1. 00:04:356 (2) - whistle
2. 00:05:106 (3) - 始点終点whistle削除、折り返しwhis追加
3. 00:07:356 (2) - 始点whis削除、終点whis追加
4. 00:08:106 (3) - 00:05:106 と同じ
5. 00:09:231 (4) - finish
6. 00:09:606 (1) - 始点finish削除
7. 00:14:856 (4) - 終点whis削除
8. 01:00:606 (1) - 始点finish
9. 01:05:856 (5) - 終点finish
10. 01:10:731 (3) - finish -> whis
11. 01:21:231 (5) - Clap !
12. 01:38:106 (1) - finish
13. 01:41:106 (3) - 1grid下
14. 01:51:606 (1) - 普通に配置した方がいいです
15. 01:55:356 (2) - finish -> whistle
16. 02:18:606 (1) - 始点finish
17. 02:27:231 (5) - Clap !
18. 02:43:356 (2) - whis
19. 02:44:106 (3) - 終点whis
20. 02:45:606 (1) - 折り返しwhis
21. 02:46:731 (2) - whis
22. 02:48:231 (4) - finish
23. 02:48:606 (1) - 終点whis削除
24. 02:50:106 (2) - ^
25. 02:56:856 (5) - 折り返しfinish
26. 03:06:606 (1) - finish

Hard

1. 00:12:606 (1,2) - (2) を (1) にスタックさせた方がいいです
2. 00:13:356 (1,2) - ^ 後、1からNew Combo削除
3. 00:32:293 (1) - 前のサークルと近すぎです
4. 01:04:168 (1) - RNC
5. 01:16:168 (1) - RNC
6. 01:36:606 (6) - NC
7. 01:38:106 (1) - RNC
8. 02:06:418 (1) - 始点にfinish
9. 02:08:106 (5) - NC
10. 02:10:168 (1) - RNC
11. 02:15:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 出来るだけ正三角形に近い形にする
12. 02:20:856 (6) - スライダーの折り返しと終点にfinish追加
13. 02:22:168 (1) - RNC
14. 03:04:168 (1) - RNC

Insane

1. 00:08:106 (1) - RNC.
2. 00:09:606 (1) - もう少し遠くに置いた方がいいかもしれないです
3. 00:13:168 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/9aVh
4. 00:15:043 (*) - Add a note.
5. 00:15:418 (*) - ^
6. 00:27:043 (5) - NC
7. 00:27:606 (1) - RNC
8. 00:30:606 (1) - RNC
9. 00:36:418 (6,1) - New Combo入れ替え
10. 00:38:293 (1) - RNC
11. 00:38:481 (3) - NC
12. 00:39:043 (5) - whistle
13. 00:43:356 (1) - RNC
14. 00:49:356 (1) - RNC
15. 00:57:043 (3) - ここから3連打を始めた方が音に合います
16. 01:00:043 (5,6) - Add finish. 5,6,1で徐々にhitsoundの音量を上げる
17. 01:05:856 (11) - 折り返しと終点にfinishを追加
18. 01:11:293 (2,3,4) - Add finish. 音量を徐々に上げる
19. 01:12:231 (3) - ↑を修正したならここにfinish
20. 01:15:231 (8) - Add finish
21. 01:21:231 (2) - Clap!
22. 01:33:043 (5) - NC
23. 01:33:606 (1) - RNC
24. 01:36:699 (7) - Remove this note
25. 01:39:043 (5,1) - New Combo入れ替え
26. 01:44:856 (1) - RNC
27. 01:49:356 (1) - ^
28. 01:55:356 (1) - ^
29. 01:56:856 (1) - ^
30. 02:02:106 (1) - 次にある (2) とスタック
31. 02:04:918 (5,1) - NC入れ替え
32. 02:26:106 (4) - NC ? 多分入れた方がいいと思う
33. 02:45:231 (7) - ここを3連打にした方が音に合います
34. 02:55:918 (4) - NC. もしくは、スタックさせない方がいいです
35. 03:08:106 (4) - NC
36. 03:09:231 (1) - RNC
37. 03:09:606 (1) - ^
38. 03:09:981 (2) - NC
39. 03:10:918 (1) - RNC
40. 03:22:543 (1) - スライダーの始点にwhistle
41. 03:22:918 (2) - ^

Apricot wrote:

Red = You NEED to change.
Orange = You should change.
Black = If possible, change.
Blue = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.


Normal
背景がかわいい

1. 00:04:356 (2) - whistle
2. 00:05:106 (3) - 始点終点whistle削除、折り返しwhis追加
3. 00:07:356 (2) - 始点whis削除、終点whis追加
4. 00:08:106 (3) - 00:05:106 と同じ
5. 00:09:231 (4) - finish
6. 00:09:606 (1) - 始点finish削除
7. 00:14:856 (4) - 終点whis削除
8. 01:00:606 (1) - 始点finish
9. 01:05:856 (5) - 終点finish
10. 01:10:731 (3) - finish -> whis
11. 01:21:231 (5) - Clap !
12. 01:38:106 (1) - finish
13. 01:41:106 (3) - 1grid下
14. 01:51:606 (1) - 普通に配置した方がいいです
15. 01:55:356 (2) - finish -> whistle
16. 02:18:606 (1) - 始点finish
17. 02:27:231 (5) - Clap !
18. 02:43:356 (2) - whis
19. 02:44:106 (3) - 終点whis
20. 02:45:606 (1) - 折り返しwhis
21. 02:46:731 (2) - whis
22. 02:48:231 (4) - finish
23. 02:48:606 (1) - 終点whis削除
24. 02:50:106 (2) - ^
25. 02:56:856 (5) - 折り返しfinish
26. 03:06:606 (1) - finish

Hard

1. 00:12:606 (1,2) - (2) を (1) にスタックさせた方がいいです
2. 00:13:356 (1,2) - ^ 後、1からNew Combo削除
3. 00:32:293 (1) - 前のサークルと近すぎです
4. 01:04:168 (1) - RNC
5. 01:16:168 (1) - RNC
6. 01:36:606 (6) - NC
7. 01:38:106 (1) - RNC
8. 02:06:418 (1) - 始点にfinish
9. 02:08:106 (5) - NC
10. 02:10:168 (1) - RNC
11. 02:15:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 出来るだけ正三角形に近い形にする
12. 02:20:856 (6) - スライダーの折り返しと終点にfinish追加
13. 02:22:168 (1) - RNC
14. 03:04:168 (1) - RNC

Insane

1. 00:08:106 (1) - RNC.
2. 00:09:606 (1) - もう少し遠くに置いた方がいいかもしれないです
3. 00:13:168 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/9aVh
4. 00:15:043 (*) - Add a note.
5. 00:15:418 (*) - ^
6. 00:27:043 (5) - NC
7. 00:27:606 (1) - RNC
8. 00:30:606 (1) - RNC
9. 00:36:418 (6,1) - New Combo入れ替え
10. 00:38:293 (1) - RNC
11. 00:38:481 (3) - NC
12. 00:39:043 (5) - whistle
13. 00:43:356 (1) - RNC
14. 00:49:356 (1) - RNC
15. 00:57:043 (3) - ここから3連打を始めた方が音に合います
16. 01:00:043 (5,6) - Add finish. 5,6,1で徐々にhitsoundの音量を上げる
17. 01:05:856 (11) - 折り返しと終点にfinishを追加
18. 01:11:293 (2,3,4) - Add finish. 音量を徐々に上げる
19. 01:12:231 (3) - ↑を修正したならここにfinish
20. 01:15:231 (8) - Add finish
21. 01:21:231 (2) - Clap!
22. 01:33:043 (5) - NC
23. 01:33:606 (1) - RNC
24. 01:36:699 (7) - Remove this note
25. 01:39:043 (5,1) - New Combo入れ替え
26. 01:44:856 (1) - RNC
27. 01:49:356 (1) - ^
28. 01:55:356 (1) - ^
29. 01:56:856 (1) - ^
30. 02:02:106 (1) - 次にある (2) とスタック
31. 02:04:918 (5,1) - NC入れ替え
32. 02:26:106 (4) - NC ? 多分入れた方がいいと思う
33. 02:45:231 (7) - ここを3連打にした方が音に合います
34. 02:55:918 (4) - NC. もしくは、スタックさせない方がいいです
35. 03:08:106 (4) - NC
36. 03:09:231 (1) - RNC
37. 03:09:606 (1) - ^
38. 03:09:981 (2) - NC
39. 03:10:918 (1) - RNC
40. 03:22:543 (1) - スライダーの始点にwhistle
41. 03:22:918 (2) - ^

modありがとう
almost fixed!

Mod Request as Modding Queue . Sorry for Delay

Normal:
00:12:043 (5): Whistle in Reverse Arrow
00:26:106 (Spin): This spinner is too short, specially in Normal. You have to make another think.
00:28:356 (3): You have to make more symetric this slider
00:30:231 (4): A New Combo plays well with vocal
00:35:856 (4): ^
00:48:981 (5): For consistency with last part, add a New Combo here
01:38:106 (Spin): The same in 00:26:106
01:44:106 (Spin): ^
02:07:731 (3): Flow better if you move (3) to x:96 y:192

03:09:231 (x): Add a Note with Hitfinish, sounds well

Hard:
00:29:856 (4): New Combo plays well with vocal
00:38:293 (Spin): This spinner is too short. Try to change it.
00:50:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner, since the autoplay can't make 3000 points
00:51:793: This break is really short and unnecesary. Remove it please
01:39:231 (4): New Combo plays well with vocal
01:44:293 (Spin): The same in 00:38:293
01:51:606 (1): If you follow the vocal, I think that it's better if you Remove New Combo here, and add a New Combo in 01:52:168
01:56:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner (The same in 00:50:856)
01:57:793: This break is too short and unnecesary. Remove it Please
02:03:043 (4): Whistle in Reverse Arrow
02:38:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner
02:29:793: This break is really short and unnecesary. Remove it please

Insane:
01:57:793: This break is too short and unnecesary. Remove it Please
02:38:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner
Maybe some antijump doesn't play well, but it's ok.

Nice map in General
That's all. Good Luck with your map

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request as Modding Queue . Sorry for Delay

Normal:
00:12:043 (5): Whistle in Reverse Arrow ok
00:26:106 (Spin): This spinner is too short, specially in Normal. You have to make another think. hum,sorry no
00:28:356 (3): You have to make more symetric this slider !? oh,i thought it's symetic.ok,try
00:30:231 (4): A New Combo plays well with vocal ok
00:35:856 (4): ^ ^
00:48:981 (5): For consistency with last part, add a New Combo here huuuum.......ok
01:38:106 (Spin): The same in 00:26:106 sorry,no
01:44:106 (Spin): ^ ^
02:07:731 (3): Flow better if you move (3) to x:96 y:192 fixed

SPOILER

03:09:231 (x): Add a Note with Hitfinish, sounds well done

Hard:
00:29:856 (4): New Combo plays well with vocal fixed
00:38:293 (Spin): This spinner is too short. Try to change it. fixed
00:50:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner, since the autoplay can't make 3000 points fixed
00:51:793: This break is really short and unnecesary. Remove it please fixed
01:39:231 (4): New Combo plays well with vocal fixed
01:44:293 (Spin): The same in 00:38:293 fixed
01:51:606 (1): If you follow the vocal, I think that it's better if you Remove New Combo here, and add a New Combo in 01:52:168 hum,no change
01:56:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner (The same in 00:50:856) fixed
01:57:793: This break is too short and unnecesary. Remove it Please fixed
02:03:043 (4): Whistle in Reverse Arrow ok
02:38:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner fixed
02:29:793: This break is really short and unnecesary. Remove it please fixed

Insane:
01:57:793: This break is too short and unnecesary. Remove it Please fixed
02:38:856 (Spin): Unrankable Spinner fixed
Maybe some antijump doesn't play well,but it's ok.

Nice map in General
That's all. Good Luck with your map

thank you modding

Sorry for a 4-month delay!!

Blue: Suggestions

Overall
No big problems~ Nice mapset

Normal

1. 00:31:356 (3) - Put it like this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227974
2. 02:15:606 (1) - I prefer a slider like this to prevent overlapping with the next note -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227976

Hard

1. 00:13:168 (2) - Put it to the actual center of the playfield, since it is a little bit hard to jump to the next note if stacked with the slider. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227968)
2. 00:50:856 (1) - Remove New Combo and Make this nearer to the previous note
3. 00:51:231 (2) - New Combo
4. 00:51:606 (4) - Add Finish (Better be Normal hitsound with 50% volume)
5. 01:56:856 (1) - Remove New Combo and Make this nearer to the previous note
6. 01:57:231 (2) - New Combo
7. 01:57:606 (4) - Add Finish (Better be Normal hitsound with 50% volume)
8. 02:01:356 (2) - Better move this further from the previous slider or add a note between (1) and (2)
9. 02:20:856 (6) - Stack the slider head to (2)'s slider head
10. 02:38:856 (1) - Remove New Combo
11. 02:39:231 (6) - New Combo
12. 02:39:606 (8) - Add Finish (Better be Normal hitsound with 50% volume)

Insane

1. 00:43:356 (6) - New combo
2. 00:49:356 (7) - ^
3. 01:50:856 (3) - Remove Whistle
4. 01:56:668 (2) - Remove this and reverse (1) one more time instead?
5. 02:21:793 (4) - Ctrl+R
6. 03:12:418 (1) - Too close to the previous note

Good luck!

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