OMG i write fixed and unfixed part and reason but osu server is broken so all is removed..... :O
But your modding is really helpful and fixed a lot cause of you! thanks for nice modding~
But your modding is really helpful and fixed a lot cause of you! thanks for nice modding~
Greenshell wrote:
Hey, M4M from PM.
Note: I mod according to my opinion / bias, so sorry if it isn't good.messy mod thingyblue = comment
black = actual modding / suggestion
[General]
Disable Widescreen Support on all difficulties since there's no SB.
Change the hitsound sampleset at 00:50:099 - from Soft -> Normal in all difficulties.
Open the .osu for each difficulty and change the background coordinates so you can see the girls better when playing. Test around with it a little to find out what's best. Change the second coordinate after the filename.0,0,"1.jpg",0,110^my suggestion
HP Spread is a bit too forgiving for the song's length. Try 8/7.5-7-6-6
[Kantan]
I don't know that much about Kantan mapping but I'll try
Maybe try 1.3x SV so it is easier to read for beginners?
This map uses a lot of 3/2 spacings. I'm not sure if beginners can handle these rhythms well. For example,
00:29:628 (6,7,8,9) - here you could delete the first kat to give players a short break and to make the rhythm easier to understand.
00:20:452 (11) - add a finish to emphasize the cymbal like you did 00:24:687 (17,18,19) here.
00:21:687 (13) - ^
00:26:099 (1) - ^
00:38:452 (19) - delete this one, it's better to start the kiai without an 1/1 spacing imo. You didn't map the "ONE-TWO" too, so making the "THREE" stand out too much isn't necessary.
01:01:393 (8,9,10,11,1,1) - this might be too hard for beginners, I'd suggest to delete 01:02:451 (11) - to give them a break before the spinner. And make the spinner end at 01:03:510 like it does in the Futsuu
01:28:569 (4,5) - change this to d K or k K. Since 01:28:040 (3) - is a kat finisher and emphasises the cymbal, 01:28:922 (5) - should do so too. Also, there's no cymbal sound on 01:28:569 (4)
[Futsuu]
00:04:746 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - this pattern is very long for a Futsuu, you should delete some notes to give players a small break. I don't really know where it would be good tho, so it's up to you.
00:22:569 (20,21,22,23) - a 3/4 snapping is pretty hard for a Futsuu (I think?), maybe you can try something else?
can't really find things here, seems alright to me.
[Muzukashii]
there are actually a lot of ddk triplets for a Muzu, but I guess it's fine.
00:13:746 (48,49,50) - make these 1/2, triplet is out of place here.
00:22:040 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - too hard for a Muzu, this is more appropiate for an Oni. Remove the first triplet.
00:23:628 (37,38,39,40,41) - I highly recommend you to change this to something different, pattern is too hard for a Muzu (5-plets rarely appear around this difficulty at all too. Again, more appropiate for an Oni)
00:35:805 (40) - make this a K finish, and
00:36:158 (41,42) - ctrl+g this. Sounds a lot better to me.
00:43:569 (21) - change this to a kat, fits the vocal pitch better.
00:52:040 (8) - I don't know what you're following with a kat, so change to don?
01:07:834 (16) - unnecessary triplet, remove this note to have a normal 1/2 spacing
01:11:452 (32) - change to kat for better vocal emphasis.
01:12:158 (35) - ^
01:14:099 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - I don't like how this is mapped, you have a triplet where it doesn't fit the song and you're completely ignoring the drums at 01:14:805 here. My suggestion would be to change 01:14:099 to 01:15:158 to this pattern. (well that's the way how I would've mapped it, so again, it's up to you.)
[Tanoshii Onii]
00:06:334 (14) - finish for the cymbal?
00:37:746 and 00:38:099 - just an idea from my side: add kats on both timestamps and make 00:38:452 (67) - a finisher so you can emphasize the "ONE TWO THREE" as usual and make the "THREE" along with the piano still stand out from the others.
01:20:010 - add a don here, like you did at 01:08:628 (25,26,27) here, since it is the same melody and therefore would be more consistent.
01:26:010 - add a don here too?
Not that much to say about this diff, I'm not a fan of the pattern flow but it seems fine.
Alright that should be it.
You don't need to give kds and mod my map in return if it wasn't helpful.
Anyway, good luck with ranking this!