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Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my modding queue

[General]

> Tags conflic on kantan.


[Muzukashi]

> 00:10:040 (26,27) - You can add kkk here to follow the rhythm, you can keep this with d 00:10:746 (29,30,31) - for variety but if you do the first suggestion, add other kkk triplet here 00:11:452 (34,35) - and here 00:12:863 (42,43) - to keep the consistency.
> 00:17:628 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Do the same as I suggested earlier
> 00:23:628 (36,37,38) - not sure about this. I suggest this
> 00:25:746 - 00:25:922 - d

[Tanoshi Oni]

> 00:21:422 (37) - change to k, I think sounds better
> 00:23:628 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) -
> 00:25:922 - add d
> 00:26:099 (1) - If you do the previous suggestion, change this to k.
> 00:26:452 (3) - k
> 00:26:628 (4,5,6) - change to dkd.
> 00:27:334 (9,10) - ctrl+g
> 00:28:481 - here's a drum sound, so add d here.
> 00:43:922 - 00:44:099 - add d and add k here 00:44:275 - to follow the background music.
> 00:47:010 - add d, drum sound.
> 00:47:099 (13) - change to k.
> 00:49:305 (22) - ^
> 00:49:658 - add d.

[Yura's Inner Oni]

> 01:15:776 (97) - move to 01:15:687 - It sounds more fluid to me.
The rest it's fine, good diff.

Nice mapset :)
Good luck with rank.
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Diva Days wrote:

From Queue (forgot to make img for this..)


[Muzukashii]

00:22:393 (31),(32) - swap this. the following voice (28),(29),(30) finish at here.
00:23:628 (36),(37),(38) - change to kdd or kkk. those triples not recommend for muzukashii.

00:36:158 - better change to this than 1/2 streams.


00:57:334 (8) - better delete than than 1/2 streams. the vocals don't need to follow always.

[Tanoshi Oni]

00:09:158 - i think use dons more than kats at here like this for play. the followed voice isn't require to follow.


00:17:805 - ^
00:22:393 - change to kkd, the following voice start at (42) and end at (44).

00:41:628 (14) - forgot finish that u did.
00:42:334 (16) - ^
00:47:275 (14) - ^
00:47:981 (16) - ^

00:53:099 (19) - there's no sound for this note, delete.
00:59:452 - kkkkkkd isn't match on song, better change to ddddddk. also the following one(33) lost consistency cuz of u did d on (32).

that's all.

gl for rank

Labyr wrote:

Hi~, mod via M4M.

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. 00:05:275 - change k high pitch of the voice.
  2. 00:05:806 - change k keep consistency 00:41:100 -
  3. 00:18:863 - move to 00:18:422 -
  4. 00:35:453 (95,96,97) - reverse a color follow vocal.
  5. 00:48:334 - add finish
  6. 01:07:040 - from here, add note in this way. follow vocal.
  7. 01:18:334 - ^
  8. 01:12:688 - similarly, add note in this way.
  9. 01:23:981 - ^


[Tanoshi Oni]
in kiai time from 00:38:805 - , there are few notes even if I look overall.
  1. 00:21:334 (36,37) - swap follow Vocal.
  2. 00:31:922 - add d follow drum.
  3. 00:41:628 (14,16) - add finish keep intro and consistency.
  4. 00:43:393 - change k follow vo.
  5. 00:43:922 (24,25) - add k there isn't 2/1 break along a flow, and follow drum.
  6. 00:44:628 (2,3,4) - reverse a color. prevent monotone.
  7. 00:47:275 (14,16) - add finish


[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:04:747 - change D
  2. 00:05:188 - delete, 00:05:100 (4,5) - swap, 00:05:452 - change K and 00:05:806 - change k
    これらはkiai timeと配色を揃える意図の提案です。曲の〆の部分はそれらとは違う(主にvocal)ので変更しません。
  3. 00:09:070 - delete, and 00:09:158 - add finish vocalもmelodyも強めになってるため
  4. 00:14:100 - remove finish, 00:14:717 - move to 00:14:187 - and change d, 00:14:806 - add finish 00:15:511 (81,82) - これらと同様にBIGをフォローする提案
    or
  5. 00:14:276 (74,75) - change d, and 00:14:628 (78,79,80) - kkd → kkkd (1/6)? 00:14:100 - ここをBIGでどうしても拾いたいなら、後に続くグリッサンドを1/6でフォローする提案です。
    modderの私から言うと前者を勧めますが好みな気がします
  6. 00:20:982 (119,120) - swap color?
  7. 00:21:423 (122,123) - swap follow Vo.
  8. 00:49:482 - move to 00:49:305 -, 00:49:394 - change k, 00:49:570 - change d. 1/2リズムで言う d k k d d k k d のパターンが単調すぎて違和感を感じたので、vocal(とdrum)を意識した提案です。
  9. 01:01:394 - イントロ(00:11:982 - ~)と比較しても勢いが落ちてる間が否めないので、最低でも1/1リズムでキック音を拾ってもいいのではと思いました


I will do the Kantan ~ Muzu check tomorrow. :o

lilligantEX wrote:

from my modding queue

[muzukashii]
01:03:510 (1) - spinner is too short and makes it hard to read

my shortest mod ever
sorry this mod is so short, i can't play above muzukashii cause i suck and i didnt see anything wrong with the kantan and futsuu diffs

Sylphi wrote:

늦은 등장, 죄송합니다.

[General]
  1. 현재 Kantan난이도만 태그가 다릅니다. 본 바로는 Kantan 난이도에만 수정한 태그 적용시키고 나머지엔 안한것 같은데 똑같이 적용시켜주세요.
  2. 배경 이미지의 해상도를 고정하라는 소리는 없지만, 되도록이면 와이드스크린의 경우엔 :9나 :10 으로 맞춰주는게 좋을거라 봅니다.
  3. 난이도명에 대해서입니다만, 최고 난이도가 아닌 이상엔 난이도명 변경을 특이하게 하는건 안되는걸로 알고있습니다. 현 시점에서 제일 높은 난이도는 asuasu_yura님의 난이도라서, Tanoshi Oni가 허용될지는 잘 모르겠네요.
  4. 볼륨이 100%로 되있는데, 개인적으로는 이거 소리 너무 큰것같습니다. 한 70%정도가 적당하지 않을까 싶네요.
  5. 오니 난이도랑 하위 난이도랑 난이도 차이가 좀 크게 나는것 같습니다. 그부분 고려하고 어느 한쪽 난이도를 조금더 내려주는게 좋지 않을까 싶습니다.


[Kantan]
  1. 00:03:511 (1,2,3,4) - 원래는 박자랑 엄청 잘 맞는 부분도 있어서 안잡으려고 했던 부분입니다만 (키아이에도 있긴 하지만 흐음...), 이게 생각보다 초보자들에게는 리딩이 힘들수도 있을것 같습니다. 보컬이 위치한 부분 자체가 1/2에 대부분이 집중되있고 그 거리도 지속적으로 변하다 보니, 이 난이도에서는 난이도가 좀 있지 않나 싶습니다.
  2. 00:35:099 (11) - 개인적인 생각으로는 키아이가 아닌 다른 부분에 비해서 패턴이 살짝 길어지는듯한 느낌이 드는것 같습니다. 일단 제일 쉬운 난이도라는걸 고려해서 여기정도는 비워줘도 되지 않을까 싶긴 합니다.
  3. 00:36:687 (13,14) - 각각 k, d 혹은 k, k 적용시키는게 전체적인 곡과 더 잘맞는다고 봐요. 이 두개는 확실하게 비슷한 음이고, 앞에있는것을 d으로 둘만큼 임팩트가 모자라다고는 보기 힘드네요.
  4. 00:41:628 (5,6,7) - 00:47:275 (5,6,7) - 실질적으로 살짝 밀도가 높아지는듯한 느낌이 듭니다. 키아이라 괜찮을거라는 생각이 들긴 하지만, 바로 다음 난이도에서도 저부분만 잘라서 보면 완전히 같은 패턴을 가지고 있고요. 그러니 가운데 있는 노트는 제거해주는게 좋지 않을까 싶기도 합니다.
  5. 00:43:393 (9,10) - 보컬에 맞춘다면 kd이 훨씬 나을겁니다. 나중에 뒤에 나오는 dkk하고 패턴이 매칭되기도 하고요.
  6. 00:55:746 - 이 구간에서는 은근 노트 2개를 3/2 간격으로 두는 경우가 자주 나오는데, 솔직하게 말해서 인식하기 좀 힘듭니다. 여기는 01:04:216부분이랑은 다르게 확실하게 보컬이나 멜로디쪽이 강하게 들리는건 아니라...
  7. 01:26:099 (8) - 바로 앞쪽에 비슷한 파트랑은 패턴을 다르게 하려는 의도는 알겠지만, 이건 오히려 패턴이 살짝 길어지게 만들어서 역효과라 봅니다. 이부분은 그냥 전과 똑같에 노트 없는쪽으로 유지하는게 낫지 않을까 싶습니다.


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:06:334 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 정말 개인적인 생각입니다만, 이거보다는 dkd dkk과 비슷한 식으로 찍는게 더 자연스럽게 넘어갈수 있지 않나 싶습니다.
  2. 00:18:687 (8) - 지금 상황대로라면, 00:23:275 부분과는 일관성에 좀 안맞는게 될수도 있겠네요.
  3. 00:31:569 - 이쪽은 키아이보다도, 아니 전체적으로 상당히 높은 밀도를 가지게 되버리는 상황이 되네요. 패턴 개선이 필요하지 않을까 싶습니다.
    1. 00:32:099 (12) - 00:33:510 (17) - 사실상 많이 어색해지기야 하겠지만, 보컬이 없는 이쪽 노트만 지워도, 밀도 자체가 그나마 낮아보이는 효과는 줄수 있을거라 봅니다.
    2. 00:32:452 (14) - 00:33:863 (19) - 바로 위의 방식을 적용시켰다면 이거 두개도 색을 바꾸는게 하기는 편할거라 생각합니다. (전자는 k, 후자는 d)
  4. 00:41:981 (8,9) - 하위 난이도나 상위난이도에서는 8번에 위치한 노트는 확실하게 k이네요. 실질적으로 보컬, 멜로디도 저쪽이 더 높은음이니 개인적으로는 kd 추천합니다.
  5. 01:15:510 (1) - 일관성을 위해 피니시 제거, 앞쪽에서는 없었습니다.
  6. 01:19:393 (12) - 좀 길어지는 느낌이 있으니 이건 지워줘도 되지 않나 싶습니다. 지운다고 해도 충분히 앞쪽이라는 차이가 있다고 보기에...


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:746 (15,16,17,18) - ddd k쪽으로 나누는것보다는 d kdk쪽으로 나누는게 전체적으로 좋다고 봅니다. 실제로 자세히 들어보시면 좀더 다양한 음을 가지고 있는건 00:07:922 보다는 00:08:275 이기에...
  2. 00:09:158 - 이쪽 파트는 왠지 이전 난이도에 비해서는 밀도가 꽤 높아서, 좀더 심플하게 가도 될것같다는 생각이 드네요. 패턴은 글쎄요, 제일 비슷한 예로 01:01:393 부분하고 비슷한 식이네요.
  3. 00:23:275 (35,36,37,38,39) - 아무래도 멜로디쪽 스트림에 맞춰서 찍은것 같긴 한데, 00:17:628와 비슷한 느낌을 가지고 있음에도 불구하고 전체적으로 비어있으니 어색하다고밖에 말하기가 힘드네요. 아예 변화를 줘서 다음 스크린샷처럼 만들어버리는것도 답중 하나라 봅니다 e.g. http://sylphi.s-ul.eu/4IevTRoW or http://sylphi.s-ul.eu/Hic81sG0
  4. 00:26:981 (5) - 이부분을 지워서 왠지 점점 노트밀도가 늘어나는듯한 느낌을 주는것도 나쁘진 않다고 봐요. 어짜피 이 파트 자체도 좀 다른부분에 비해서 텐션이 낮은 느낌도 있고...
  5. 00:37:393 (46) - 멜로디가 좀 내려가는걸 표현하기 위해서 d?
  6. 00:52:922 (11,12,13) - 보컬 느낌만으로 보면 dkd이 더 잘 어울리는것 같네요.
  7. 00:55:569 - 힛사 샘플 바꾸는건 확실하게 느낌 자체가 달라지는 부분인 00:55:746 부터 적용하는게 좋지 않나 싶습니다.
  8. 00:57:334 (8) - 이부분 느낌으로 봤을땐 이 노트는 좀 억지라는 느낌이 강하네요. 제거해주는게 좀더 자연스럽게 플레이가 될거라 믿습니다.
  9. 01:03:334 - 사실 이쪽에도 노트 놔도 언랭요소가 되진 않습니다. 단지 어느쪽이든간에 다음에 나오는 스피너가 너무 갑갑하게 나온다는 느낌이 강하네요.
  10. 01:11:452 (31) - 바로 이전 노트에 비하면 높은 멜로디긴 해서 k 두고 dkkd 해주는것도 괜찮을것 같네요.
  11. 01:15:510 (1) - 하위 난이도에서 설명했다시피, 일관성을 위해 피니시 제거 필요하다 봅니다.
  12. 01:18:510 (14) - 마찬가지로 너무 앞쪽 패턴하고는 다르게 두려고 노트를 늘린듯한 느낌이 강하네요. 이거정도는 지워주는게 느낌상으론 좋을것 같아요.


[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 太鼓ではあまり意味ない機能なので、Widescreen Support解除お願いします。
  2. 00:11:806 (53) - 俺にはこれ、次の54番と似た音に聞こえますが…k使ってみるのはどうですか?
  3. 00:23:100 (131) - 周りと比べ、けして弱い感じの音じゃないと思いますので、そのままK使ったほうが自然じゃないかと…
  4. 00:38:409 (209,210) - (色んな意味で困惑)まあ、リズムも合ってるし、問題無いんですけど…楽しいから多分大丈夫…でしょ、たぶん…


전체적으로 나쁘지는 않았는데, General쪽에서도 말했다시피 후반부 무즈랑 오니쪽의 난이도 격차가 좀 신경이 쓰이기에, 오니쪽은 모딩을 안했습니다.
그래도 신경쓰였던걸 말하자면 AsukaLangley님 난이도의 변속은 줄이는게 좋다고 생각합니다. 특히 스트림쪽에서의 변속은 난이도를 올리는 요소가 될수 있으니 고려해보시면 좋겠습니다.

Q____X wrote:

Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my modding queue

[General]

> Tags conflic on kantan.


[Muzukashi]

> 00:10:040 (26,27) - You can add kkk here to follow the rhythm, you can keep this with d 00:10:746 (29,30,31) - for variety but if you do the first suggestion, add other kkk triplet here 00:11:452 (34,35) - and here 00:12:863 (42,43) - to keep the consistency.
> 00:17:628 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Do the same as I suggested earlier
> 00:23:628 (36,37,38) - not sure about this. I suggest this
> 00:25:746 - 00:25:922 - d

[Tanoshi Oni]

> 00:21:422 (37) - change to k, I think sounds better
> 00:23:628 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) -
> 00:25:922 - add d
> 00:26:099 (1) - If you do the previous suggestion, change this to k.
> 00:26:452 (3) - k
> 00:26:628 (4,5,6) - change to dkd.
> 00:27:334 (9,10) - ctrl+g
> 00:28:481 - here's a drum sound, so add d here.
> 00:43:922 - 00:44:099 - add d and add k here 00:44:275 - to follow the background music.
> 00:47:010 - add d, drum sound.
> 00:47:099 (13) - change to k.
> 00:49:305 (22) - ^
> 00:49:658 - add d.

[Yura's Inner Oni]

> 01:15:776 (97) - move to 01:15:687 - It sounds more fluid to me.
The rest it's fine, good diff.

Nice mapset :)
Good luck with rank.




all fixed to refer your advice xD
really sorry to not reply each other, because suddenly many advice so i can't apply each ;w;
Thanks for mod~
posted

Q____X wrote:

[Yura's Inner Oni]

> 01:15:776 (97) - move to 01:15:687 - It sounds more fluid to me. fixed :)
The rest it's fine, good diff.

Nice mapset :)
Good luck with rank.
posted
M4M req! :D


[Kantan]

hhhmmm.... All of ur kantan is a little bit weird in snap, its too many note in 1/2 snap but its still good because each note diff still in 1/1 or 2/1
consider to check ur offset or BPM. example like this 00:39:334 (2,3,4) - and 00:30:158 (4,5,6) -

00:13:393 (11) - this slider is weird I think,instead put kat in 00:12:687 (10) -

00:36:687 (10) - delete this,the sounds is too low

01:02:805 (8) - ^same like the slider issues but just delete the slider

[Futsuu]

00:41:452 (7) - its better to put don here since the duplet in 00:41:099 (5,6) - too weird when u make a gap in 00:41:452 (7) -

00:47:099 - ^

00:55:040 (9) - delete this,don't follow the vocal sounds

01:02:805 (1) - I little bit confuse when u used spinner here. but in 00:13:393 (20) - u use slider maybe change to note more better like this


[Muzukashii]

00:09:422 (22) - delete this, u must look over in 1/4 note Muzukashii. its very hard for Muzukashii players because of 1/4 at the same time here 00:09:334 (21,22,23,26,27,28) -

00:12:952 (43) - ^

00:18:599 (12) - ^

00:21:687 (27) - put the fnisher more better I think *it have more loud sounds

00:22:040 (28,29,30) - wtf ddk lol XD . change this to kkk, u can only put the 1/4 note ddd and kkk (just triplet or duplet) in Muzukashii

00:27:510 (6) - change to kat? its like cymbal sound and prefer to change it in kat

00:28:481 - u can put the note here like this

00:36:599 (42) - ^

01:02:805 (1) - change the over from the spinner to 01:03:510 -

01:13:481 (39) - delete this note, its not fit when u used it into triplet lol

01:24:687 (16) - ^

01:14:452 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - this one more better i think

01:25:746 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - ^

[AsuLan's Oni]

00:48:775 (161,164) - delete this more better, I only found the triplet drum in 00:49:394 (164,165,166,167,168,169) -

00:09:335 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - I think u must make a gap here,the triplet is too long and I assume this is for the beginner players in basic oni :/


[Yura's Inner Oni]

00:06:952 (13) - delete this, its't fit I think to make a note here *feels weird when I test it

00:41:893 (228) - ^

00:47:540 (270) - ^

01:12:952 (76) - ^

01:24:246 (165) - ^

01:02:805 (364) - make this one more better than using slider

Good Luck :D//

Edit: Sorry for forget to upload the image :(
posted

Kayano- wrote:

M4M req! :D


[Kantan]

hhhmmm.... All of ur kantan is a little bit weird in snap, its too many note in 1/2 snap but its still good because each note diff still in 1/1 or 2/1
consider to check ur offset or BPM. example like this 00:39:334 (2,3,4) - and 00:30:158 (4,5,6) - thanks (*´∀`)

00:13:393 (11) - this slider is weird I think,instead put kat in 00:12:687 (10) - stream length is more long then, so keep

00:36:687 (10) - delete this,the sounds is too low same piano melody is main in here, so keep

01:02:805 (8) - ^same like the slider issues but just delete the slider same reason

[Futsuu]

00:41:452 (7) - its better to put don here since the duplet in 00:41:099 (5,6) - too weird when u make a gap in 00:41:452 (7) - 4 stream and no rest pattern seems so harsh so keep now

00:47:099 - ^ same reason

00:55:040 (9) - delete this,don't follow the vocal sounds yes right but if i do so, became empty space, and it looks more worse.

01:02:805 (1) - I little bit confuse when u used spinner here. but in 00:13:393 (20) - u use slider maybe change to note more better like this [img] no image ;w; prevent boring, put slider. fixed both to all slider


[Muzukashii]

00:09:422 (22) - delete this, u must look over in 1/4 note Muzukashii. its very hard for Muzukashii players because of 1/4 at the same time here 00:09:334 (21,22,23,26,27,28) - i don't think this is difficult. star rating is nearly 3, and not suitable in Oni.

00:12:952 (43) - ^

00:18:599 (12) - ^

00:21:687 (27) - put the fnisher more better I think *it have more loud sounds more better!

00:22:040 (28,29,30) - wtf ddk lol XD . change this to kkk, u can only put the 1/4 note ddd and kkk (just triplet or duplet) in Muzukashii ddd

00:27:510 (6) - change to kat? its like cymbal sound and prefer to change it in kat fixed

00:28:481 - u can put the note here like this [img] i think this is more harder than 00:09:422 .

00:36:599 (42) - ^ [img]

01:02:805 (1) - change the over from the spinner to 01:03:510 - fixed

01:13:481 (39) - delete this note, its not fit when u used it into triplet lol keep

01:24:687 (16) - ^

01:14:452 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - [img] this one more better i think pointed in "hai! hai! " so keep

01:25:746 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - ^



Good Luck :D// Thanks~ xD
Thanks for modding~
posted

Labyr wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. 00:05:275 - change k high pitch of the voice.
  2. 00:05:806 - change k keep consistency 00:41:100 -
  3. 00:18:863 - move to 00:18:422 -
  4. 00:35:453 (95,96,97) - reverse a color follow vocal.
  5. 00:48:334 - add finish 00:47:276 (158,159,160) - とはvocalとvolume的に区別したいと思ったので、次に同じmodがあれば変えたいと思います。
  6. 01:07:040 - from here, add note in this way. follow vocal. 曲と合うかに関しては、たーのしー!ですが、この単純な4拍子のリズムも捨てがたい(主に 00:41:628 - のパターンとおなじ意味で)のと、また難しくなるのでバランス面も考慮して、このmodを受けてから全体的に難易度を見直すか、もしくはそのままにするかもう少し考えてみます。
    Edit: 全体を少し見直してから例より少々簡単なものにしました

  7. 01:18:334 - ^ ^
  8. 01:12:688 - similarly, add note in this way. ^
  9. 01:23:981 - ^ ^

Kayano- wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]

00:48:775 (161,164) - delete this more better, I only found the triplet drum in 00:49:394 (164,165,166,167,168,169) -

00:09:335 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - I think u must make a gap here,the triplet is too long and I assume this is for the beginner players in basic oni :/ I agree for that, I'll try it 8-)
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posted

AsukaLangley wrote:

Labyr wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. 00:05:275 - change k high pitch of the voice.
  2. 00:05:806 - change k keep consistency 00:41:100 -
  3. 00:18:863 - move to 00:18:422 -
  4. 00:35:453 (95,96,97) - reverse a color follow vocal.
  5. 00:48:334 - add finish 00:47:276 (158,159,160) - とはvocalとvolume的に区別したいと思ったので、次に同じmodがあれば変えたいと思います。
  6. 01:07:040 - from here, add note in this way. follow vocal. 曲と合うかに関しては、たーのしー!ですが、この単純な4拍子のリズムも捨てがたい(主に 00:41:628 - のパターンとおなじ意味で)のと、また難しくなるのでバランス面も考慮して、このmodを受けてから全体的に難易度を見直すか、もしくはそのままにするかもう少し考えてみます。
    Edit: 全体を少し見直してから例より少々簡単なものにしました

  7. 01:18:334 - ^ ^
  8. 01:12:688 - similarly, add note in this way. ^
  9. 01:23:981 - ^ ^

Kayano- wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]

00:48:775 (161,164) - delete this more better, I only found the triplet drum in 00:49:394 (164,165,166,167,168,169) -

00:09:335 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - I think u must make a gap here,the triplet is too long and I assume this is for the beginner players in basic oni :/ I agree for that, I'll try it 8-)
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asuasu_yura wrote:

Q____X wrote:

[Yura's Inner Oni]

> 01:15:776 (97) - move to 01:15:687 - It sounds more fluid to me. fixed :)
The rest it's fine, good diff.

Nice mapset :)
Good luck with rank.



both updated~♪(*´∀`)
posted
continuation of last time. (no kudosu)
Futsuu need some 1/2notes?, I think that a spread with Muzukashii opens too much :?
[Kantan]
  1. 00:24:687 (12,13) - remove finish and 00:25:040 - add note. fit a guitar and vocal.

Because many notes are put in the RedLine, SR of Kantan is very high...
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:687 - change k? use a pattern unlike 00:32:099 (23,24,25) -
  2. 00:34:393 (32,33) - swap fit a vocal.
  3. 00:56:628 (4,5,6,7) - reverse a color.
  4. 00:58:040 (10,11,12,13) - ^
  5. 01:02:275 - add note?
  6. 01:07:746 (15,16,17) - change d d k? fit a vocal.
  7. 01:18:687 (14,15,16,17,18) - change k k d d k ^
posted

Labyr wrote:

continuation of last time. (no kudosu) Thanks <3
Futsuu need some 1/2notes?, I think that a spread with Muzukashii opens too much :?
[Kantan]
  1. 00:24:687 (12,13) - remove finish and 00:25:040 - add note. fit a guitar and vocal. fixed

Because many notes are put in the RedLine, SR of Kantan is very high... this song has many offbeat, so this is my best present to make eazist ;w;
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:687 - change k? use a pattern unlike 00:32:099 (23,24,25) - present pattern looks little better to me. sorry
  2. 00:34:393 (32,33) - swap fit a vocal. fixed
  3. 00:56:628 (4,5,6,7) - reverse a color. fixed
  4. 00:58:040 (10,11,12,13) - ^
  5. 01:02:275 - add note? because of spinner after this stream, i delete it.
  6. 01:07:746 (15,16,17) - change d d k? fit a vocal. dkd fixed
  7. 01:18:687 (14,15,16,17,18) - change k k d d k ^ fixed kkdkd
Thanks for not-forgetting and nice modding~♪(*´∀`)
posted
たのしー! (mod from in-game m4m request)
[General]
  1. Roma Title : Change to Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (It just a suggest, because the Ranked map uses that)

  2. I think your OD/HP set at Oni can change to 5.5/6 or 5.5/5.5
    Slowly rising is good. The map has 3 Onis, in my opinion u can let their OD/HP set become different

[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:21:334 (121,122,123) - kdk or ddk - (120) sounds higher than (122), so uses d. (121) can use d or k because the drum (Suggest you to use k, because seems you follow voice this part)
  2. 00:23:805 (137) - k - Although it's a little harder than before, the piano sounds same as (136) and (135) clearly
  3. 00:26:099 (150) - D? You also use Finisher at (155) and (163). Finisher it can keep consistency
  4. 00:26:099 - You dont need this green line, it's useless
  5. 00:28:216 (157,158,159,160,161) - ddkkk or dddkk - Follow drums pitches, they sound like that :3
  6. 00:32:452 (178) - d because the drum
  7. 00:32:805 (179) - k ^
  8. 00:33:510 (181) - k - The real pattern I think is "kdd", but seems you want to use it at next part, So it is compromise way : kkd. (181) is really good to use kat =w=
  9. 00:38:496 (210) - Move to 00:38:408 cuz the original place has no any sound
  10. 00:41:628 (228) - d - First reason is that the voice is the lowest at the part. Second is here is drum, not cymbals. Last, you use same pattern at 00:47:275
  11. 00:52:128 and 00:52:216 - Add something like 00:51:334 (296,297,298) to follow the rings. You follow they at the other three places, so why not?
  12. 01:02:805 (367) - Change to ddddd d? Just a suggest, because i hate Sliders >//>
  13. 01:08:716 (43,44) - Ctrl+G?
  14. 01:21:158 (141) and 01:22:569 (153) - K to keep consistency (K K D D)

[Oni]
  1. 00:14:275 - 00:14:628 - Add "ddk k" to fill the blank - This is Oni, the piano sounds is good theme for you to add something
  2. 00:20:452 (31) and 00:21:158 (35) and 00:21:687 (39) - Finisher - It sounds good ^q^
  3. 00:34:922 (51,52) - Ctrl+G? because (52) has loud drum sound, use k to highlight it
  4. 00:38:805 (1) - K - The voice same as 00:38:805 (1)
  5. 00:50:628 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, then remove don - 00:50:805 has no sound, shouldn't add anything, and the drum at 00:50:628 sounds higher than the others
  6. 01:28:393 (6,7) - d k to let the last D shows better effect

    I think you can let the first Kiai Time follow more music. (This is my though)
    Red=followVoice , Green=followMusic . You follow too much voice in this version (It just a suggest :3)

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. All Volume change to 75%? Only your diff different the other diffs

  2. 00:04:747 (5) - K because the pitch of voice
  3. 00:09:158 - 00:13:393 - Good part, but you use too many notes - even more than Oni! I think you need to cut down some :3
  4. 00:21:159 (32,34) - Finisher to keep consistency
  5. 00:23:716 [and[00:23:893]?] - Add something to follow piano?
  6. 00:33:159 (86,92) - Finisher
  7. 00:38:100 (110) - d to follow voice pitch
  8. 00:46:217 (152) - d? Because i like <3
  9. 00:48:335 (162) - K? You also use K at 00:42:688 (131)

GL with Rank! >w<
posted

Smallwu wrote:

たのしー! (mod from in-game m4m request)
[General]
  1. Roma Title : Change to Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (It just a suggest, because the Ranked map uses that) Um, is it diffrent.....? ;w;

  2. I think your OD/HP set at Oni can change to 5.5/6 or 5.5/5.5
    Slowly rising is good. The map has 3 Onis, in my opinion u can let their OD/HP set become different Changed 3 3 4 5 5.5 6

[Oni]
  1. 00:14:275 - 00:14:628 - Add "ddk k" to fill the blank - This is Oni, the piano sounds is good theme for you to add something add spinner like 01:03:510 (1)
  2. 00:20:452 (31) and 00:21:158 (35) and 00:21:687 (39) - Finisher - It sounds good ^q^ add finisher in 00:21:687 (39)
  3. 00:34:922 (51,52) - Ctrl+G? because (52) has loud drum sound, use k to highlight it followed vocal sound, and not BIG loud, keep
  4. 00:38:805 (1) - K - The voice same as 00:38:805 (1) Ummm, that's right and i put K previous ver, but i think it's little awkward so changed D.
  5. 00:50:628 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, then remove don - 00:50:805 has no sound, shouldn't add anything, and the drum at 00:50:628 sounds higher than the others this stream is following vocal line and bell sound only, so sorry
  6. 01:28:393 (6,7) - d k to let the last D shows better effect

    I think you can let the first Kiai Time follow more music. (This is my though)
    Red=followVoice , Green=followMusic . You follow too much voice in this version (It just a suggest :3)


GL with Rank! >w<
Thanks for nice modding >w<
because im sooooo lazy, really sorry to late modding, but i'll do it at first priority to your map!!!
posted

Smallwu wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. All Volume change to 75%? Only your diff different the other diffs

  2. 00:04:747 (5) - K because the pitch of voice
  3. 00:09:158 - 00:13:393 - Good part, but you use too many notes - even more than Oni! I think you need to cut down some :3
  4. 00:21:159 (32,34) - Finisher to keep consistency
  5. 00:23:716 [and[00:23:893]?] - Add something to follow piano?
  6. 00:33:159 (86,92) - Finisher
  7. 00:38:100 (110) - d to follow voice pitch
  8. 00:46:217 (152) - d? Because i like <3 <3
  9. 00:48:335 (162) - K? You also use K at 00:42:688 (131) I think this sound is lower than 00:42:688 (131).
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posted

Smallwu wrote:

[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:21:334 (121,122,123) - kdk or ddk - (120) sounds higher than (122), so uses d. (121) can use d or k because the drum (Suggest you to use k, because seems you follow voice this part) keep
  2. 00:23:805 (137) - k - Although it's a little harder than before, the piano sounds same as (136) and (135) clearly keep
  3. 00:26:099 (150) - D? You also use Finisher at (155) and (163). Finisher it can keep consistency fixed
  4. 00:26:099 - You dont need this green line, it's useless fixed
  5. 00:28:216 (157,158,159,160,161) - ddkkk or dddkk - Follow drums pitches, they sound like that :3 fixed
  6. 00:32:452 (178) - d because the drum fixed
  7. 00:32:805 (179) - k ^ fixed
  8. 00:33:510 (181) - k - The real pattern I think is "kdd", but seems you want to use it at next part, So it is compromise way : kkd. (181) is really good to use kat =w= fixed
  9. 00:38:496 (210) - Move to 00:38:408 cuz the original place has no any sound fixed
  10. 00:41:628 (228) - d - First reason is that the voice is the lowest at the part. Second is here is drum, not cymbals. Last, you use same pattern at 00:47:275 fixed
  11. 00:52:128 and 00:52:216 - Add something like 00:51:334 (296,297,298) to follow the rings. You follow they at the other three places, so why not? fixed
  12. 01:02:805 (367) - Change to ddddd d? Just a suggest, because i hate Sliders >//> hmm i like sliders so keep c:
  13. 01:08:716 (43,44) - Ctrl+G? ok
  14. 01:21:158 (141) and 01:22:569 (153) - K to keep consistency (K K D D)fixed
posted

Kayano- wrote:

[Yura's Inner Oni]

00:06:952 (13) - delete this, its't fit I think to make a note here *feels weird when I test it keep

00:41:893 (228) - ^

00:47:540 (270) - ^

01:12:952 (76) - ^

01:24:246 (165) - ^

01:02:805 (364) - make this one more better than using slider slider is better i think

Good Luck :D//

Edit: Sorry for forget to upload the image :(
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no kudosu please

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komasy wrote:

no kudosu please

00:38:716 - preview point?
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Hi!
Sorry for delay :o
Mod from your request~
[ Kantan]
  1. This hasn't problem but... Can you remove notes? Because in my opinion is a bit hard to a Kantan (This make as "Normal"). I suggest remove some notes in the patterns 1/1.
  2. Also avoid the use of 1/2
[ Futsuu]
  1. I think also remove notes here, overall in the patterns kkd ddk 1/2 for example, for make this more easy to futsuu players
  2. 00:11:275 (18) - Maybe change to don? because the drum is lower
  3. 00:28:216 (5,6) - Ctrl + G to follow better the drum
  4. 00:32:099 (14) - I think is better follow the vocal, so remove this
  5. 00:33:510 (19) - I think the same as above
  6. 00:36:158 (28,29,30,31) - Im not sure if this pattern is fine, I'll only mark this (long imo)
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:20:628 (22) - Change to kat to follow the vocal
  2. 00:22:393 - Add triple 1/4 here?
[ AsuLan Oni]
  1. Overall is fine, nice!
[ Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:12:775 (60) - Remove? Because is the same that 00:09:952 -
  2. 00:18:687 - Hmmm, what about remove 00:18:775 (101) - and change this 00:19:305 (106) - to kat? Sound is good and follow the previous patterns
  3. 00:46:746 (265,266,267,268,269,270,271) - ddkkddk? Follow the flow of the vocal imo
That's all. Really sorry for delay :cry:
Good luck~
posted

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!
Sorry for delay :o
Mod from your request~
[ Kantan]
  1. This hasn't problem but... Can you remove notes? Because in my opinion is a bit hard to a Kantan (This make as "Normal"). I suggest remove some notes in the patterns 1/1. removed and fixedsome note so that more easy :)
  2. Also avoid the use of 1/2
[ Futsuu]
  1. I think also remove notes here, overall in the patterns kkd ddk 1/2 for example, for make this more easy to futsuu players
  2. 00:11:275 (18) - Maybe change to don? because the drum is lower follow cymbal sound so keep
  3. 00:28:216 (5,6) - Ctrl + G to follow better the drum fixed
  4. 00:32:099 (14) - I think is better follow the vocal, so remove this fixed
  5. 00:33:510 (19) - I think the same as above
  6. 00:36:158 (28,29,30,31) - Im not sure if this pattern is fine, I'll only mark this (long imo) deleted 00:36:510 (28)
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:20:628 (22) - Change to kat to follow the vocal for emphasize a circle after here so keep
  2. 00:22:393 - Add triple 1/4 here? really awesome but little hard ;w;

That's all. Really sorry for delay :cry:
Good luck~
Thanks for modding~
posted

gaston_2199 wrote:

[ Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:12:775 (60) - Remove? Because is the same that 00:09:952 -ok
  2. 00:18:687 - Hmmm, what about remove 00:18:775 (101) -fixed and change this 00:19:305 (106) - to kat?keep Sound is good and follow the previous patterns
  3. 00:46:746 (265,266,267,268,269,270,271) - ddkkddk? Follow the flow of the vocal imo keep:v
That's all. Really sorry for delay :cry:
Good luck~
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harder diffs could be improved but i want to concentrate on easier ones for now since they always have more problems

[Kantan]

Diff can use more breaks imo. Some parts are pretty dense and could be reduced in difficulty a bit. Also many notes do not match the true pitch of the song sounds and that's pretty strange.

The beginning is pretty dense to me both before and after the slider a bit, could be improved by deleting just one note before it - 00:09:863 (12). Since the previous note expresses that the following part is finished it would be nice to make a break to show that there will be one more part incoming. Kind of to show that they are different sections.
00:17:628 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - really boring repeating structure, also seems like a bit too many notes imo.
00:22:569 (16) - pitch on this is decreasing, maybe there is quite good point to show it with don.
00:26:099 (1,2) - these notes have the same pitch, just a comment though.
00:27:510 (3) - it's better to make this finisher imo if you want to emphasize the cymbals. Otherwise it's strange to make it a kat since the pitch of the voice is decreasing.
00:39:158 (2,3,6,7,8) - i don't think that this kind of patterns is allowed in kantan since it's too complex for the beginners. Too much pressure, too many notes on just two ticks. It would be much better if it was reduced in difficulty. Also this part needs changes in pitch since it feels really weird. Something like this would give it a go i think.
00:44:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same for this, it's too complex. You can refer to my previous suggestion to make it easier.
00:47:275 (9,10,11) - these notes have different pitch, keeping them monotone seems pretty strange. 00:47:628 (10,11) - these have slightly increased pitch than the first one.
00:49:040 (13) - pitch here is decreasing pretty noticeable.
00:54:334 (5) - this note has even higher pitch than the previous one, why is it d?

So the second kiai is messed up in pitch way, we need to fix that.

01:04:216 (1) - make it k since the pitch is higher than the next note.
01:10:216 (12,13) - swap these to be consistent with what i mentioned above. Consistency is important.
01:11:628 (15) - pitch is starting to increase on this note, it's better to make it k.
01:14:099 (19,20) - swap these only if you don't follow the pitch of the "hai" thing on second note.
01:15:510 (1) - k for consistency 01:04:216 (1).
01:22:569 (16,17) - swap to match the pitch better.
01:25:393 (23) - maybe will be monotone but pitch here is higher than two previous notes so make it k.

[Futsuu]

This diff is much more better than the previous.

00:20:805 (14) - k since the pitch is increasing since this note?
00:38:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - don't you think that this part is quite dense there? Maybe delete some notes to make it better. Same for 00:44:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) and 00:55:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) and 01:21:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16).
01:07:393 (10) - k since the pitch is increasing from this note?

that's all for now
maybe will write something for other diffs too
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