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Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP - Youkoso Japari Park e [Taiko]

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Ozu
644 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Ozu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 4월 26일 수요일 at 오후 9:37:03

Artist: Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP
Title: Youkoso Japari Park e
Source: けものフレンズ
Tags: opening KEMONO FRIENDS tanoshi sugoi AsukaLangley asuasu_yura
BPM: 100
Filesize: 2576kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. AsuLan's Oni (3.47 stars, 459 notes)
  2. Futsuu (2.21 stars, 212 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.58 stars, 147 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.8 stars, 319 notes)
  5. Oni (3.76 stars, 471 notes)
  6. Yura's Inner Oni (4.4 stars, 563 notes)
Download: Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP - Youkoso Japari Park e
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たーのしー！
now fixing to follow rank criteria. really sorry GDers ;w;

Kantan by me
Futsuu by me
Muzukashii by me
AsuLan's Oni by AsukaLangley ♥
Oni by me
Yura's Inner Oni by asuasu_yura ♥

modding Freinds~♬
DDM
Karee Pan
katacheh
Akemi_Homura
Surono
Quizmaegi
Diva Days
Labyr
Sylphi
lilligantEX
Q____X
Kayano-
Smallwu
gaston_2199
Shooting Friends~★
milr_
Karee Pan
Smallwu
Akemi_Homura
Diva Days
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ddm
207 posts
Joined February 2016
ddm
m4m
general
Title : ようこそジャパリパークへ（TVサイズver.）
Romanised Title : Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (TV size ver.)
스탠 랭맵에서 그대로 태그 들고 오신 것 같은데 불필요한 태그 지워주세요
kantan
오디오 프리뷰타임 다른 난이도랑 같게 수정해주세요

HP7 로 올려주세요

두번째 키아이에서 대부분의 패턴이 3/2로 되어있는데 2/1로 바꾸시는걸 추천합니다.
01:04:746 (2) - 01:04:922 로 이동
01:06:158 (4) - 01:06:334 로 이동 - 이런 식으로요
이게 난이도 상승의 주요 원인이 되고, 2/1로 해도 문제 없어보이네요
futsuu
HP6.5 로 올려주세요

00:08:099 (14) - d
00:08:805 (16) - k

01:02:804 (22) - 지우고 스피너 시작을 여기로?

노트 넣기 진짜 애매하네요 노래가...
muzu
OD5 HP6 으로 올려주세요

00:08:099 (14) - d
00:08:805 (16) - k

개인적으론 00:22:040 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - 여기 빼고는 3연타를 넣을 필요성을 못 느끼겠네요

00:26:628 (4,5) - ctrl + g
00:27:334 (8) - delete

00:35:628 (44) - delete

00:43:040 (18,19,20,21,22) - d d k k d

00:50:099 ~ 00:59:981 - 그냥 제가 음이 없는곳을 빈 공간으로 두는걸 좋아해서 그럴지도 모르겠지만 상당히 어색해 보이는 부분이 많았습니다
타노시이
너는 큰동캇이 특기인 프렌즈구나!

OD6 으로 올려주시고 수정 후에 오브젝트 수가 많이 적어지면 HP5.5로 올려도 될것같네요

00:17:628 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 패턴을 조금씩 바꿔보심이...? 앞부분이랑 너무 겹치는 것 같네요

00:25:393 (64) - d

00:26:099 ~ 00:28:216 - 무즙이랑 똑같이 하셔도 될듯요, 3연타 넣을 소리를 못잡겠네요
00:28:481 - d 추가 (1/4)

00:37:746 - d 추가
00:38:099 - ^

00:50:099 ~ 00:55:393 - 피아노 음에 맞춰서 3연타를 넣어보는건 어떨까요?
슥ㅡ고이
Karee Pan
185 posts
Joined December 2015
Karee Pan
Hey there :)

Hope we don't overlap with our mods too much with DDM

These are all just my opinions if you feel it changes your maps too much just ignore them.



Kantan
00:43:040 (8) - maybe k cause the next note is significantly lower
00:51:510 (3,4) - ctrl -g
00:54:334 (8,9) - ctrl -g and make all these 00:55:746 (1,2) doubles kd
01:10:393 (11) - k, like the others
01:21:687 (2) - ^
01:28:393 (4) - I like this more at 01:28:569
Futsuu
00:06:334 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Please consider dkkddkkkd ( 00:43:569 too)
00:41:628 (9,10,11,12) - ^ if you applied that we should stay consistent here too
00:43:569 (15) - move triplet one note left and kkd
00:50:805 (3) - delete and move 00 :51:158 (4) to 00:50:981
00:54:334 (11,12) - ctrl -g
01:06:687 (7) - d and 01:07:746 (10) - k
01:13:746 (25,26,27) - kdk and delete 01:14:452 (28)
01:17:981 (7) - d
01:25:040 (11,12,13) - kdkd and 01: 25:922 (14,15) dd
Muzukashii
00:06:334 - What is said in Futsuu about the pattern
00:23:628 (38,39,40,41,42) - Too hard for muzukashii
00:42:334 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - reverse all these notes
00:47:981 (16,17) - ctrl -g
00:51:863 (8,9,10,11,12) - dkdkd ?
00:52:922 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - could go dkkkddk
00:55:569 (23,1) - ctrl -g
01:11:275 (33) 01:11:805 (36) - k's and 01:12:158 (37,38) - ctrl -g
01:16:922 (7) - k
01:23:452 (11,12) - ctrl -g
Tanoshi Oni
00:37:040 (65) - d
00:42:334 (16,17) - i would reverse this again like in muzu and make the next triplet kkd
00:47:981 (16,17) - and here
00:54:158 (28,29) - kkk for the "bell sound" like the 2 before in this pattern ?
00:54:863 (33,34,35) - here too
01:11:275 (39,43) - k's and 01:12:158 (44,45) - ctrl -g

Great mapset! Good luck!
Ozu
644 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Ozu
언제나 테스트플레이 및 모딩에 친절하게 응해주시는 점 감사드립니다!


DDM wrote:

m4m
general
Title : ようこそジャパリパークへ（TVサイズver.）
Romanised Title : Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (TV size ver.)
스탠 랭맵에서 그대로 태그 들고 오신 것 같은데 불필요한 태그 지워주세요 넵! 들켰네요 ㄷㄷ
kantan
오디오 프리뷰타임 다른 난이도랑 같게 수정해주세요 같아요!

HP7 로 올려주세요 넵

두번째 키아이에서 대부분의 패턴이 3/2로 되어있는데 2/1로 바꾸시는걸 추천합니다.
01:04:746 (2) - 01:04:922 로 이동
01:06:158 (4) - 01:06:334 로 이동 - 이런 식으로요
이게 난이도 상승의 주요 원인이 되고, 2/1로 해도 문제 없어보이네요 확실히 1/2 로 해도 이상하지 않고 오히려 더 간단 답네요!
futsuu
HP6.5 로 올려주세요 6이 적당할 것 같아요.

00:08:099 (14) - d
00:08:805 (16) - k
이렇게 하니까 지루함도 방지되고 좋네요!

01:02:804 (22) - 지우고 스피너 시작을 여기로? y

노트 넣기 진짜 애매하네요 노래가... 타노시-
muzu
OD5 HP6 으로 올려주세요 y

00:08:099 (14) - d
00:08:805 (16) - k
y

개인적으론 00:22:040 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - 여기 빼고는 3연타를 넣을 필요성을 못 느끼겠네요 사운드 뒤에 원숭이?가 우끼끼 거리는거같은 부분 있는데 거기를 모델로 썼어요.

00:26:628 (4,5) - ctrl + g y
00:27:334 (8) - delete 멜로디가 이어지는 부분이라 섣불리 지우지를 못하겠네요...

00:35:628 (44) - delete y

00:43:040 (18,19,20,21,22) - d d k k d kdddk 로 했습니다!

00:50:099 ~ 00:59:981 - 그냥 제가 음이 없는곳을 빈 공간으로 두는걸 좋아해서 그럴지도 모르겠지만 상당히 어색해 보이는 부분이 많았습니다 음... 제가 매핑해서 그런지는 모르겠는데 제가 보기에는 어색하지는 않은거같아요.
타노시이
너는 큰동캇이 특기인 프렌즈구나! 스-고이-

OD6 으로 올려주시고 수정 후에 오브젝트 수가 많이 적어지면 HP5.5로 올려도 될것같네요 y

00:17:628 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 패턴을 조금씩 바꿔보심이...? 앞부분이랑 너무 겹치는 것 같네요 몇몇 패턴을 수정하고 중간에 1/2 박자를 넣었습니다.

00:25:393 (64) - d y

00:26:099 ~ 00:28:216 - 무즙이랑 똑같이 하셔도 될듯요, 3연타 넣을 소리를 못잡겠네요 멜로디가 이어지는 부분인데 제가 생각하기에 이부분을 1/2로만 구성하면 어색해질것 같아 넣었습니다.
00:28:481 - d 추가 (1/4) 위의 것을 수정하지 않으면 어울리지 않는 것 같습니다.

00:37:746 - d 추가
00:38:099 - ^ 이부분은 빈부분으로 남겨두고 싶네요

00:50:099 ~ 00:55:393 - 피아노 음에 맞춰서 3연타를 넣어보는건 어떨까요? 이부분이 뭔가 애매하긴 한데 종소리(?) 가 너무 커서 거기에 포인트를 뒀습니다.
슥ㅡ고이 타노시-
Ozu
644 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Ozu
Thanks for Modding <3

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey there :)

Hope we don't overlap with our mods too much with DDM it occured..... ;w;

These are all just my opinions if you feel it changes your maps too much just ignore them.



Kantan
00:43:040 (8) - maybe k cause the next note is significantly lower looks better!
00:51:510 (3,4) - ctrl -g y
00:54:334 (8,9) - ctrl -g and make all these 00:55:746 (1,2) doubles kd look so hard in kantan
01:10:393 (11) - k, like the others use this to avoid same pattern
01:21:687 (2) - ^
01:28:393 (4) - I like this more at 01:28:569 so hard in kantan. i moved this to 01:28:569
Futsuu
00:06:334 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Please consider dkkddkkkd ( 00:43:569 too) have more hit power so, sorry
00:41:628 (9,10,11,12) - ^ if you applied that we should stay consistent here too not applied above part, but this seems good in this part :)
00:43:569 (15) - move triplet one note left and kkd look so good!
00:50:805 (3) - delete and move 00 :51:158 (4) to 00:50:981 y
00:54:334 (11,12) - ctrl -g sorry
01:06:687 (7) - d and 01:07:746 (10) - k y
01:13:746 (25,26,27) - kdk and delete 01:14:452 (28) kdk ok ;)
01:17:981 (7) - d y
01:25:040 (11,12,13) - kdkd and 01: 25:922 (14,15) dd sorry but i think present is better
Muzukashii
00:06:334 - What is said in Futsuu about the pattern ^
00:23:628 (38,39,40,41,42) - Too hard for muzukashii eazy 5 stream pattern looks good for me in Muzu
00:42:334 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - reverse all these notes y but kdddk is remain!
00:47:981 (16,17) - ctrl -g y
00:51:863 (8,9,10,11,12) - dkdkd ? kkddk
00:52:922 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - could go dkkkddk dkkkdkk
00:55:569 (23,1) - ctrl -g y
01:11:275 (33) 01:11:805 (36) - k's and 01:12:158 (37,38) - ctrl -g sorry
01:16:922 (7) - k
01:23:452 (11,12) - ctrl -g
Tanoshi Oni
00:37:040 (65) - d y
00:42:334 (16,17) - i would reverse this again like in muzu and make the next triplet kkd y
00:47:981 (16,17) - and here y
00:54:158 (28,29) - kkk for the "bell sound" like the 2 before in this pattern ? nice advice!!! txs~
00:54:863 (33,34,35) - here too changed kkk
01:11:275 (39,43) - k's and 01:12:158 (44,45) - ctrl -g want to diffrence both same part

Great mapset! Good luck! thanks a lot!!!
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Akemi_Homura
M4M 입니다~

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [General]
  1. 'Kantan'의 'Preview time'이 다른 난이도들과 달라요~!
  2. 개인적인 생각으로 중간중간에 0.9배속으로 떨어졌다가 다시 1배속으로 돌아오는걸 없애고 1배속으로 계속 가셔도 될 것 같아요~
  • [Kantan]
  1. HP 7로 설정해주세요.

  2. 00:47:981 (7) - (6)과 같은 음이니까 k로 바꿔서 dkk dkk로 같은 패턴을 쓰면 좋을 것 같아요.
  3. 01:09:863 (10,11,12,13) - k d d k가 좀 더 보컬변화에 맞지 않을까요~? 이렇게 바꾸면 01:04:216 (1,2,3,4)와 반대 패턴이 되니까 일관성도 있어보여요.
  4. 01:21:158 (1,2,3,4) - 마찬가지로 k d d k.
  5. 01:25:393 (8) - 01:26:099 (9)와 음이 거의 같거나 약간 더 높기 때문에 k가 좋을 것 같습니다.
  • [Futsuu]
  1. HP 6.5로 설정해주세요.

  2. 두번째 'kiai'가 도입부에 비해서 약간 노트가 적고 쉬는 타임이 많다보니 심심한 느낌이 드는 것 같아요. '-'
  3. 00:07:040 (11,12) - 보컬을 따라서 kd로 바꿔주세요~
  4. 00:18:334 (7,8,9) - (7)과 (9)의 드럼 사운드가 거의 같기 때문에 ddk로 만들어서 k리듬을 일정하게 하는게 더 쉬울 것 같아요.
  5. 00:19:746 (12,13,14) - 위와 마찬가지로 ddk로 바꿔주세요.
  6. 00:34:216 (23) - 드럼사운드가 있으니 k로 바꿔서 ddk로 만들어 주세요.
  7. 00:34:922 (25,26) - dk~! '츠,나이!'
  8. 00:35:805 (28) - 보컬이 계속 올라가고 있으니 k로 해주세요.
  9. 00:36:158 (29,30) - 여기서는 올라간 보컬이 내려가는 지점이니 kd가 좋을 것 같아요.
  10. 00:43:216 (14) - 00:43:569 여기로 옮기는게 좀 더 보컬을 따르는 것 같아요.
  11. 00:43:393 (14) - k로 바꿔주세요~!
  12. 00:47:099 (7) - d로 바꿔서 kkdd 패턴을 만들어주세요.
  13. 01:05:275와 01:10:922와 01:16:569와 01:22:216 - 여기에 k를 추가해서 'Kiai'의 속도감을 높여주세요.
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:23:628 (38,39,40,41,42) - 무즈카시에서 앞에서 연속된 노트가 나온후에 kkddk 패턴은 어렵지 않을까요~?
  2. 00:26:099 (1) ~ 00:28:569 (15) - 콤보가 너무 긴 것 같아요. 00:27:334 (8)를 삭제해서 7,7콤보로 만드는 편이 좋을 것 같아요.그런데 7,7도 긴 콤보끼리 붙어있기 때문에, 중간에 노트를 더 지워서 1,5,1,5콤보나 1,1,3,1,1,3 콤보로 나누셔도 될 것 같아요~! 개인적으로 나누는걸 추천합니다.
  3. 00:34:216 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - kdkkdk 로 바꾸는게 좀 더 보컬이나 k 사운드 일관성에 맞는 것 같아요.
  4. 00:43:216 (19) - (18)이랑 거의 같은 음이고,같은 가사이니 k가 더 맞는 것 같아요.
  5. 00:50:628 (2) - 드럼 사운드가 있으니 k.
  6. 00:50:805 (3) - 00:50:628 (2)의 연장되는 소리말고는 없으니까 지워도 될 것 같아요.
  7. 00:56:628 (4) ~ 00:59:099 (17) - 여기도 7,7 콤보를 좀 더 작게 나눠도 될 것 같아요~!

  8. 두번째 'Kiai' 구간에서 01:07:040 (13) ~ 01:08:981 (24)와 같은 긴 콤보가 보이는데, 무즈카시에서는 너무 길다고 생각됩니다.
    그리고 도입부분에서 kkk나 ddk 같이 연타를 사용하셨는데, 오히려 키아이는 단조로워서 변화가 필요할 것 같아요~!
    그래서 이렇게 바꾸면 좋지 않을까 제안해봅니다.
  9. 우선 삭제 해야하는 노트들 입니다~
  10. 01:07:216 (14) - 삭제.
  11. 01:08:275 (19) - ^
  12. 01:12:863 (38) - ^
  13. 01:13:216 (39) - ^
  14. 01:14:275 (44) - ^
  15. 01:18:510 (14) - ^
  16. 01:19:569 (19) - ^
  17. 01:24:158 (14) - ^
  18. 01:24:510 (15) - ^
  19. 이 상태에서 적당한 곳에 3연타를 섞어주면 완벽한 'Kiai'파트가 될 것 같습니다.
    아래는 개인적으로 제안하는 3연타 추가 장소입니다.
  20. 01:07:834 - 노트를 추가하셔서 k k ddk d 패턴이나, k k ddd k 를 쓰면 좋을 것 같아요.
  21. 01:14:187랑 01:14:275 - 노트추가 하셔서, d d k d kkk d k d 로 만드는 것도 나쁘지 않은 것 같습니다.
  22. 01:19:218 - 01:07:834의 제안과 마찬가지로 노트 추가하셔서, k k ddk d 나 k k ddd k를 쓰면 될 것 같아요.
  23. 01:14:187랑 01:14:275 - 두번째 제안과 마찬가지 입니다.
  24. 01:19:128 - 첫번째와 같은 제안 입니다! 같은 패턴..!
  25. 01:25:481랑 01:25:569 - 두번째 제안과 같습니다.
  • [Tanoshi Oni]
  1. 00:43:040 (18,19,20,21) - kkd k로 바꿔서 보컬을 살려줍시다.
  2. 01:12:687 (46) ~ 01:26:099 (32) - 콤보가 너무 긴 것 같아요~ 중간에 쉬는 부분이 있으면 좋을 것 같아요.

    오니에서 d를 k로 바꾸라는 자잘한 제안들을 더 쓰다보면 너무 길어질 것 같아서 여기서 마치겠습니다. ._.

노래도 좋고, 전체적으로 잘 만들어진 맵이라고 생각합니다~
랭크되길 바랄게요! 화이팅~ '-'
Ozu
644 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Ozu
언제나 친절한 m4m 고마워요~!

Akemi_Homura wrote:

M4M 입니다~

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [General]
  1. 'Kantan'의 'Preview time'이 다른 난이도들과 달라요~! 수정했습니다.
  2. 개인적인 생각으로 중간중간에 0.9배속으로 떨어졌다가 다시 1배속으로 돌아오는걸 없애고 1배속으로 계속 가셔도 될 것 같아요~ 배.속.조.아
  • [Kantan]
  1. HP 7로 설정해주세요. 7로 수정했습니다!

  2. 00:47:981 (7) - (6)과 같은 음이니까 k로 바꿔서 dkk dkk로 같은 패턴을 쓰면 좋을 것 같아요. dkd dkd 로 바꿨습니다.
  3. 01:09:863 (10,11,12,13) - k d d k가 좀 더 보컬변화에 맞지 않을까요~? 이렇게 바꾸면 01:04:216 (1,2,3,4)와 반대 패턴이 되니까 일관성도 있어보여요. 허걱 완전 좋아요!!
  4. 01:21:158 (1,2,3,4) - 마찬가지로 k d d k. ^
  5. 01:25:393 (8) - 01:26:099 (9)와 음이 거의 같거나 약간 더 높기 때문에 k가 좋을 것 같습니다.
네
  • [Futsuu]
  1. HP 6.5로 설정해주세요. 네

  2. 두번째 'kiai'가 도입부에 비해서 약간 노트가 적고 쉬는 타임이 많다보니 심심한 느낌이 드는 것 같아요. '-' 마지막줄을 참고해 조금 더 기아이 느낌이 나게 수정했습니다.
  3. 00:07:040 (11,12) - 보컬을 따라서 kd로 바꿔주세요~ 네
  4. 00:18:334 (7,8,9) - (7)과 (9)의 드럼 사운드가 거의 같기 때문에 ddk로 만들어서 k리듬을 일정하게 하는게 더 쉬울 것 같아요.
  5. 00:19:746 (12,13,14) - 위와 마찬가지로 ddk로 바꿔주세요.
  6. 00:34:216 (23) - 드럼사운드가 있으니 k로 바꿔서 ddk로 만들어 주세요.
  7. 00:34:922 (25,26) - dk~! '츠,나이!'
  8. 00:35:805 (28) - 보컬이 계속 올라가고 있으니 k로 해주세요.
  9. 00:36:158 (29,30) - 여기서는 올라간 보컬이 내려가는 지점이니 kd가 좋을 것 같아요. 34초부터 여기까지 말씀하신 사항들을 보완해 수정 완료했습니다!
  10. 00:43:216 (14) - 00:43:569 여기로 옮기는게 좀 더 보컬을 따르는 것 같아요. 그렇네요
  11. 00:43:393 (14) - k로 바꿔주세요~! ddk가 앞뒤 패턴을 고려하면 조금 더 나은 것 같습니다.
  12. 00:47:099 (7) - d로 바꿔서 kkdd 패턴을 만들어주세요. kk d 로 수정했습니다
  13. 01:05:275와 01:10:922와 01:16:569와 01:22:216 - 여기에 k를 추가해서 'Kiai'의 속도감을 높여주세요.
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:23:628 (38,39,40,41,42) - 무즈카시에서 앞에서 연속된 노트가 나온후에 kkddk 패턴은 어렵지 않을까요~? 앞의 k 를 삭제했습니다.
  2. 00:26:099 (1) ~ 00:28:569 (15) - 콤보가 너무 긴 것 같아요. 00:27:334 (8)를 삭제해서 7,7콤보로 만드는 편이 좋을 것 같아요.그런데 7,7도 긴 콤보끼리 붙어있기 때문에, 중간에 노트를 더 지워서 1,5,1,5콤보나 1,1,3,1,1,3 콤보로 나누셔도 될 것 같아요~! 개인적으로 나누는걸 추천합니다. 1 5 5 1 로 나누었습니다.
  3. 00:34:216 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - kdkkdk 로 바꾸는게 좀 더 보컬이나 k 사운드 일관성에 맞는 것 같아요. 말씀하신 패턴 등을 참고하여 이부분의 노트수를 줄이고 패턴을 조금 바꿨습니다.
  4. 00:43:216 (19) - (18)이랑 거의 같은 음이고,같은 가사이니 k가 더 맞는 것 같아요. 네
  5. 00:50:628 (2) - 드럼 사운드가 있으니 k.
  6. 00:50:805 (3) - 00:50:628 (2)의 연장되는 소리말고는 없으니까 지워도 될 것 같아요. 6 스트림이 정말 신경쓰였었는데 명쾌하게 해결됫습니다!!!
  7. 00:56:628 (4) ~ 00:59:099 (17) - 여기도 7,7 콤보를 좀 더 작게 나눠도 될 것 같아요~! 5 1 4 2 로 바꿨습니다.

  8. 두번째 'Kiai' 구간에서 01:07:040 (13) ~ 01:08:981 (24)와 같은 긴 콤보가 보이는데, 무즈카시에서는 너무 길다고 생각됩니다.
    그리고 도입부분에서 kkk나 ddk 같이 연타를 사용하셨는데, 오히려 키아이는 단조로워서 변화가 필요할 것 같아요~! 밑의 부분 많은 참고가 되었습니다!!!! 감사합니다!!!!!
    그래서 이렇게 바꾸면 좋지 않을까 제안해봅니다.
  9. 우선 삭제 해야하는 노트들 입니다~
  10. 01:07:216 (14) - 삭제.
  11. 01:08:275 (19) - ^
  12. 01:12:863 (38) - ^
  13. 01:13:216 (39) - ^
  14. 01:14:275 (44) - ^
  15. 01:18:510 (14) - ^
  16. 01:19:569 (19) - ^
  17. 01:24:158 (14) - ^
  18. 01:24:510 (15) - ^
  19. 이 상태에서 적당한 곳에 3연타를 섞어주면 완벽한 'Kiai'파트가 될 것 같습니다.
    아래는 개인적으로 제안하는 3연타 추가 장소입니다.
  20. 01:07:834 - 노트를 추가하셔서 k k ddk d 패턴이나, k k ddd k 를 쓰면 좋을 것 같아요.
  21. 01:14:187랑 01:14:275 - 노트추가 하셔서, d d k d kkk d k d 로 만드는 것도 나쁘지 않은 것 같습니다. 조금 긴거같아서 d d k kkk d d k 로 하였습니다.
  22. 01:19:218 - 01:07:834의 제안과 마찬가지로 노트 추가하셔서, k k ddk d 나 k k ddd k를 쓰면 될 것 같아요.
  23. 01:14:187랑 01:14:275 - 두번째 제안과 마찬가지 입니다.
  24. 01:19:128 - 첫번째와 같은 제안 입니다! 같은 패턴..!
  25. 01:25:481랑 01:25:569 - 두번째 제안과 같습니다.
  • [Tanoshi Oni]
  1. 00:43:040 (18,19,20,21) - kkd k로 바꿔서 보컬을 살려줍시다. kkd k 로 바꾸고 이어지는 뒤의 스트림을 치기 쉽도록 몇몇 패턴을 변경하였습니다.
  2. 01:12:687 (46) ~ 01:26:099 (32) - 콤보가 너무 긴 것 같아요~ 중간에 쉬는 부분이 있으면 좋을 것 같아요. 기아이 후반 부분이라 조금 빡세게 가려고 생각하고 찍었었는데 지금보니 너무 길군요... 중간중간 쉴 구간을 만들었습니다.

    오니에서 d를 k로 바꾸라는 자잘한 제안들을 더 쓰다보면 너무 길어질 것 같아서 여기서 마치겠습니다. ._. 넵! 모딩에 담긴 정성이 어마어마하다는게 느껴질 정도로 좋은 모딩이었습니다! 감사합니다~~~

노래도 좋고, 전체적으로 잘 만들어진 맵이라고 생각합니다~
랭크되길 바랄게요! 화이팅~ '-'
Sylphi
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Sylphi
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HomieLove
Beatmap Nominator
305 posts
Joined July 2016
HomieLove
Hey, M4M from PM.
Note: I mod according to my opinion / bias, so sorry if it isn't good.

messy mod thingy
blue = comment
black = actual modding / suggestion

[General]
Disable Widescreen Support on all difficulties since there's no SB.
Change the hitsound sampleset at 00:50:099 - from Soft -> Normal in all difficulties.
Open the .osu for each difficulty and change the background coordinates so you can see the girls better when playing. Test around with it a little to find out what's best. Change the second coordinate after the filename.
0,0,"1.jpg",0,110
^my suggestion

HP Spread is a bit too forgiving for the song's length. Try 8/7.5-7-6-6

[Kantan]

I don't know that much about Kantan mapping but I'll try
Maybe try 1.3x SV so it is easier to read for beginners?

This map uses a lot of 3/2 spacings. I'm not sure if beginners can handle these rhythms well. For example,
00:29:628 (6,7,8,9) - here you could delete the first kat to give players a short break and to make the rhythm easier to understand.

00:20:452 (11) - add a finish to emphasize the cymbal like you did 00:24:687 (17,18,19) here.

00:21:687 (13) - ^

00:26:099 (1) - ^

00:38:452 (19) - delete this one, it's better to start the kiai without an 1/1 spacing imo. You didn't map the "ONE-TWO" too, so making the "THREE" stand out too much isn't necessary.

01:01:393 (8,9,10,11,1,1) - this might be too hard for beginners, I'd suggest to delete 01:02:451 (11) - to give them a break before the spinner. And make the spinner end at 01:03:510 like it does in the Futsuu

01:28:569 (4,5) - change this to d K or k K. Since 01:28:040 (3) - is a kat finisher and emphasises the cymbal, 01:28:922 (5) - should do so too. Also, there's no cymbal sound on 01:28:569 (4)


[Futsuu]

00:04:746 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - this pattern is very long for a Futsuu, you should delete some notes to give players a small break. I don't really know where it would be good tho, so it's up to you.

00:22:569 (20,21,22,23) - a 3/4 snapping is pretty hard for a Futsuu (I think?), maybe you can try something else?

can't really find things here, seems alright to me.

[Muzukashii]

there are actually a lot of ddk triplets for a Muzu, but I guess it's fine.

00:13:746 (48,49,50) - make these 1/2, triplet is out of place here.

00:22:040 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - too hard for a Muzu, this is more appropiate for an Oni. Remove the first triplet.

00:23:628 (37,38,39,40,41) - I highly recommend you to change this to something different, pattern is too hard for a Muzu (5-plets rarely appear around this difficulty at all too. Again, more appropiate for an Oni)

00:35:805 (40) - make this a K finish, and

00:36:158 (41,42) - ctrl+g this. Sounds a lot better to me.

00:43:569 (21) - change this to a kat, fits the vocal pitch better.

00:52:040 (8) - I don't know what you're following with a kat, so change to don?

01:07:834 (16) - unnecessary triplet, remove this note to have a normal 1/2 spacing

01:11:452 (32) - change to kat for better vocal emphasis.

01:12:158 (35) - ^

01:14:099 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - I don't like how this is mapped, you have a triplet where it doesn't fit the song and you're completely ignoring the drums at 01:14:805 here. My suggestion would be to change 01:14:099 to 01:15:158 to this pattern. (well that's the way how I would've mapped it, so again, it's up to you.)

[Tanoshii Onii]

00:06:334 (14) - finish for the cymbal?

00:37:746 and 00:38:099 - just an idea from my side: add kats on both timestamps and make 00:38:452 (67) - a finisher so you can emphasize the "ONE TWO THREE" as usual and make the "THREE" along with the piano still stand out from the others.

01:20:010 - add a don here, like you did at 01:08:628 (25,26,27) here, since it is the same melody and therefore would be more consistent.

01:26:010 - add a don here too?

Not that much to say about this diff, I'm not a fan of the pattern flow but it seems fine.

Alright that should be it.
You don't need to give kds and mod my map in return if it wasn't helpful.
Anyway, good luck with ranking this! :)
Ozu
644 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Ozu
OMG i write fixed and unfixed part and reason but osu server is broken so all is removed..... :O
But your modding is really helpful and fixed a lot cause of you! thanks for nice modding~

Greenshell wrote:

Hey, M4M from PM.
Note: I mod according to my opinion / bias, so sorry if it isn't good.

messy mod thingy
blue = comment
black = actual modding / suggestion

[General]
Disable Widescreen Support on all difficulties since there's no SB.
Change the hitsound sampleset at 00:50:099 - from Soft -> Normal in all difficulties.
Open the .osu for each difficulty and change the background coordinates so you can see the girls better when playing. Test around with it a little to find out what's best. Change the second coordinate after the filename.
0,0,"1.jpg",0,110
^my suggestion

HP Spread is a bit too forgiving for the song's length. Try 8/7.5-7-6-6

[Kantan]

I don't know that much about Kantan mapping but I'll try
Maybe try 1.3x SV so it is easier to read for beginners?

This map uses a lot of 3/2 spacings. I'm not sure if beginners can handle these rhythms well. For example,
00:29:628 (6,7,8,9) - here you could delete the first kat to give players a short break and to make the rhythm easier to understand.

00:20:452 (11) - add a finish to emphasize the cymbal like you did 00:24:687 (17,18,19) here.

00:21:687 (13) - ^

00:26:099 (1) - ^

00:38:452 (19) - delete this one, it's better to start the kiai without an 1/1 spacing imo. You didn't map the "ONE-TWO" too, so making the "THREE" stand out too much isn't necessary.

01:01:393 (8,9,10,11,1,1) - this might be too hard for beginners, I'd suggest to delete 01:02:451 (11) - to give them a break before the spinner. And make the spinner end at 01:03:510 like it does in the Futsuu

01:28:569 (4,5) - change this to d K or k K. Since 01:28:040 (3) - is a kat finisher and emphasises the cymbal, 01:28:922 (5) - should do so too. Also, there's no cymbal sound on 01:28:569 (4)


[Futsuu]

00:04:746 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - this pattern is very long for a Futsuu, you should delete some notes to give players a small break. I don't really know where it would be good tho, so it's up to you.

00:22:569 (20,21,22,23) - a 3/4 snapping is pretty hard for a Futsuu (I think?), maybe you can try something else?

can't really find things here, seems alright to me.

[Muzukashii]

there are actually a lot of ddk triplets for a Muzu, but I guess it's fine.

00:13:746 (48,49,50) - make these 1/2, triplet is out of place here.

00:22:040 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - too hard for a Muzu, this is more appropiate for an Oni. Remove the first triplet.

00:23:628 (37,38,39,40,41) - I highly recommend you to change this to something different, pattern is too hard for a Muzu (5-plets rarely appear around this difficulty at all too. Again, more appropiate for an Oni)

00:35:805 (40) - make this a K finish, and

00:36:158 (41,42) - ctrl+g this. Sounds a lot better to me.

00:43:569 (21) - change this to a kat, fits the vocal pitch better.

00:52:040 (8) - I don't know what you're following with a kat, so change to don?

01:07:834 (16) - unnecessary triplet, remove this note to have a normal 1/2 spacing

01:11:452 (32) - change to kat for better vocal emphasis.

01:12:158 (35) - ^

01:14:099 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - I don't like how this is mapped, you have a triplet where it doesn't fit the song and you're completely ignoring the drums at 01:14:805 here. My suggestion would be to change 01:14:099 to 01:15:158 to this pattern. (well that's the way how I would've mapped it, so again, it's up to you.)

[Tanoshii Onii]

00:06:334 (14) - finish for the cymbal?

00:37:746 and 00:38:099 - just an idea from my side: add kats on both timestamps and make 00:38:452 (67) - a finisher so you can emphasize the "ONE TWO THREE" as usual and make the "THREE" along with the piano still stand out from the others.

01:20:010 - add a don here, like you did at 01:08:628 (25,26,27) here, since it is the same melody and therefore would be more consistent.

01:26:010 - add a don here too?

Not that much to say about this diff, I'm not a fan of the pattern flow but it seems fine.

Alright that should be it.
You don't need to give kds and mod my map in return if it wasn't helpful.
Anyway, good luck with ranking this! :)
AsukaLangley
135 posts
Joined November 2012
AsukaLangley
겟난입니다! 타-노시-! BG는 일단 그대로.
조만간 모딩도 해 드릴 수 있을 것 같네요.
참 그리고 곡명이나 태그같은 내용은 스탠에 랭된 맵 참고하시면 도움이 됩니다 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1218888

AsuLan's Oni
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38805
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Youkoso Japari Park e
TitleUnicode:ようこそジャパリパークへ
Artist:Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP
ArtistUnicode:どうぶつビスケッツ×PPP
Creator:404 AccNotFound
Version:AsuLan's Oni
Source:けものフレンズ
Tags:opening KEMONO FRIENDS tanoshi
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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katacheh
273 posts
Joined June 2015
katacheh
Hi~ For M4M<3

Kantan
This diff should have more 4/1 break? but idk where can do that...xD
just for suggestion, maybe you can ask modder who has more experience.
00:09:510 (10,11) - delete?
00:13:393 (18,19,20) - change to slider?
00:26:805 (2) - delete?
00:50:805 (2) - delete?
01:14:805 (18) - delete?

Futsuu
00:32:628 (13) - move to 00:32:275 -
00:34:040 (17) - move to 00:33:687 -
01:08:099 - add d
01:13:746 - add k
01:28:393 - add d

Muzu
I think you should use with less ddk/kkd
00:09:510 (25) - change to d?
00:12:334 (41) - change to d?
00:17:981 (8) - ^
00:22:040 (28,29,30) - change to kkk and add d at 00:22:393 - ?
00:23:716 (36) - del?
00:23:716 (36) - add d
00:27:687 (8) - move to 00:28:393 -
00:33:334 - del?
00:34:216 (33,34) - ctrl+G
01:01:745 (23) - change to d?
01:13:569 (39) - move to 01:13:922 -
AsuLan's Oni
00:27:158 - add d bucs drum sound?
00:35:100 (92,93,94) - change to kkd ?
00:37:217 (105) - change to k?
00:57:159 (208) - k?
00:58:570 (217) - k?
00:59:453 (222,223,224) - k k k?
00:46:041 (148,149,150) - change to kdd or kkd?
00:47:100 (155) - change to k
01:26:806 (377) - missed finisher?

Tanoshi Oni
00:10:481 (35) - del
00:13:305 - del
00:14:452 - del?
00:33:246 - del? feel weird.
00:54:158 (28,29,30,31) - kkk d

no.... the BG xD? School-Live... are you mean to do that xD?

Good luck!
Ozu
644 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Ozu

katacheh wrote:

Hi~ For M4M<3

Kantan
This diff should have more 4/1 break? but idk where can do that...xD
just for suggestion, maybe you can ask modder who has more experience. i feel so too, and fixing everytime, but it's very difficult to find break point ;w;
00:09:510 (10,11) - delete?
00:13:393 (18,19,20) - change to slider?
00:26:805 (2) - delete?
00:50:805 (2) - delete?
01:14:805 (18) - delete?

Futsuu
00:32:628 (13) - move to 00:32:275 -
00:34:040 (17) - move to 00:33:687 -
01:08:099 - add d
01:13:746 - add k great xD
01:28:393 - add d

Muzu
I think you should use with less ddk/kkd
00:09:510 (25) - change to d?
00:12:334 (41) - change to d?
00:17:981 (8) - ^
00:22:040 (28,29,30) - change to kkk and add d at 00:22:393 - ?
00:23:716 (36) - del?
00:23:716 (36) - add d
00:27:687 (8) - move to 00:28:393 -
00:33:334 - del?
00:34:216 (33,34) - ctrl+G
01:01:745 (23) - change to d?
01:13:569 (39) - move to 01:13:922 -
AsuLan's Oni
00:27:158 - add d bucs drum sound?
00:35:100 (92,93,94) - change to kkd ?
00:37:217 (105) - change to k?
00:57:159 (208) - k?
00:58:570 (217) - k?
00:59:453 (222,223,224) - k k k?
00:46:041 (148,149,150) - change to kdd or kkd?
00:47:100 (155) - change to k
01:26:806 (377) - missed finisher?

Tanoshi Oni
00:10:481 (35) - del
00:13:305 - del
00:14:452 - del?
00:33:246 - del? feel weird.
00:54:158 (28,29,30,31) - kkk d

no.... the BG xD? School-Live... are you mean to do that xD? time to say goodbye to japari park :)

Good luck! Thanks for nice modding xD
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono


I will point some problem spread in this mapset

* on muzukashii 00:03:687 - 00:04:569 - 00:06:158 - you can delete these bcus its close with Oni density and far with Futsuu density.
* 00:13:393 (14) - why this slider on kantan, not on futsuu? kantan need simple pattern right than slider that hit like stream
* futsuu from 00:19:040 - until 00:24:334 - here, it seems the density notes are a bit close with kantan and far with muzukashii. you can add notes more in Futsuu but you could reduce the density notes on muzukashii to safe the spread between oni diffs
* Muzukashii 00:38:805 - until 00:42:687 - here its same density with your Tanoshii Oni density, should be reduced on muzukashii notes density
* 00:44:452 - same above

sorry for my mod because Im not interested to point out the emphasize sounds of this mapset and lower diffs are really simple mapped. on Futsuu still have problem spread density with Muzukashii because its far and a bit close with Kantan, you can add notes mores on Futsuu and adjust the density of kantan too.

GL
AsukaLangley
135 posts
Joined November 2012
AsukaLangley

katacheh wrote:

Hi~ For M4M<3

AsuLan's Oni
00:27:158 - add d bucs drum sound? ✔
00:35:100 (92,93,94) - change to kkd ? ✔
00:37:217 (105) - change to k? ✔
00:57:159 (208) - k? ✔
00:58:570 (217) - k? ✔
00:59:453 (222,223,224) - k k k? ✔
00:46:041 (148,149,150) - change to kdd or kkd? ✔
00:47:100 (155) - change to k ✔
01:26:806 (377) - missed finisher? ✔ I missed :lol: ty.
AsuLan's Oni V0.2
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Ozu
644 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Ozu
Thanks for modding spread problem!
i haven't thought the spread of this map.
Really nice advice xD


Surono wrote:


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I will point some problem spread in this mapset

* on muzukashii 00:03:687 - 00:04:569 - 00:06:158 - you can delete these bcus its close with Oni density and far with Futsuu density.
* 00:13:393 (14) - why this slider on kantan, not on futsuu? kantan need simple pattern right than slider that hit like stream
* futsuu from 00:19:040 - until 00:24:334 - here, it seems the density notes are a bit close with kantan and far with muzukashii. you can add notes more in Futsuu but you could reduce the density notes on muzukashii to safe the spread between oni diffs
* Muzukashii 00:38:805 - until 00:42:687 - here its same density with your Tanoshii Oni density, should be reduced on muzukashii notes density
* 00:44:452 - same above


sorry for my mod because Im not interested to point out the emphasize sounds of this mapset and lower diffs are really simple mapped. on Futsuu still have problem spread density with Muzukashii because its far and a bit close with Kantan, you can add notes mores on Futsuu and adjust the density of kantan too.

all of this is fixed and now Futsuu looks more "Futsuu" !

GL Thanks~
Quizmaegi
177 posts
Joined December 2012
Quizmaegi
심심풀이 모오딩
안 타노시 모딩
[General]
  1. 태그 수정
    Tags:opening kemono friends oishi masayoshi 大石昌良 オーイシマサヨシ iyasine サーバル serval cat フェネック fennec アライグマ common raccoon 尾崎由香 yuka ozaki 本宮佳奈 AsukaLangley -tanoshi
  2. BG 바꾸는 거 추천드림
[타노시이 오니이]
  1. 00:14:805 (1,2,3) - 큰 노트들 중간에 뭐 좀 넣어야 할 듯 ㅇㅅㅇ?
  2. 01:15:510 - 큰 캇
  3. 00:22:569 (45,46,47) - kkd로 바꾸고 피니셔
  4. 00:35:805 - 큰 동
  5. 00:37:746 - 1,2,3 하는 거 맞춰서 ddk 이나 kdk 넣으시면 좋을 듯
  6. 00:38:805 - (음이 다음 노트보다 높은 듯)캇으로
  7. 00:55:569 - 큰 동 넣으실 거 아니면 ddd로 일관되게
  8. 01:00:687 - 캇
  9. 01:04:216 ~ 01:26:805 - 키아이 전체가 난이도가 갑자기 낮아진 느낌이랄까 ㅇㅅㅇ... 난이도 상향 좀
Ozu
644 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Ozu

Quizmaegi wrote:

심심풀이 모오딩
안(x) 타노시 모딩
[General]
  1. 태그 수정
    Tags:opening kemono friends oishi masayoshi 大石昌良 オーイシマサヨシ iyasine サーバル serval cat フェネック fennec アライグマ common raccoon 尾崎由香 yuka ozaki 本宮佳奈 AsukaLangley -tanoshi tanoshi 수정했습니다
  2. BG 바꾸는 거 추천드림 적당한 bg 찾기가 힘들어요 ㅜ
[타노시이 오니이]
  1. 00:14:805 (1,2,3) - 큰 노트들 중간에 뭐 좀 넣어야 할 듯 ㅇㅅㅇ? 음이 아예 없고 보컬만 있어서 드럼만 큰놋들로 따라갔습니다.
  2. 01:15:510 - 큰 캇 스고-이!
  3. 00:22:569 (45,46,47) - kkd로 바꾸고 피니셔 타노시-!
  4. 00:35:805 - 큰 동 스고-이!
  5. 00:37:746 - 1,2,3 하는 거 맞춰서 ddk 이나 kdk 넣으시면 좋을 듯 123은 일부러 뺐어요! 종소리 띠링을 강조하려구요 헤헤/color]
  6. 00:38:805 - (음이 다음 노트보다 높은 듯)캇으로
  7. 00:55:569 - 큰 동 넣으실 거 아니면 ddd로 일관되게 큰캇을 넣었습니다
  8. 01:00:687 - 캇 스고---이!
  9. 01:04:216 ~ 01:26:805 - 키아이 전체가 난이도가 갑자기 낮아진 느낌이랄까 ㅇㅅㅇ... 난이도 상향 좀 난이도는 일부러 낮췄어요! 그다음 같은 부분 반복되는 부분에서 분위기를 더 고조시키려고 일부러 조금 쉽게 만들었어요


랜덤모딩 감사합니다!
별까지 쏴주시고 진짜 고마워요 (つ﹏<。)
Diva Days
291 posts
Joined October 2016
Diva Days
From Queue (forgot to make img for this..)


[Muzukashii]

00:22:393 (31),(32) - swap this. the following voice (28),(29),(30) finish at here.
00:23:628 (36),(37),(38) - change to kdd or kkk. those triples not recommend for muzukashii.

00:36:158 - better change to this than 1/2 streams.


00:57:334 (8) - better delete than than 1/2 streams. the vocals don't need to follow always.

[Tanoshi Oni]

00:09:158 - i think use dons more than kats at here like this for play. the followed voice isn't require to follow.


00:17:805 - ^
00:22:393 - change to kkd, the following voice start at (42) and end at (44).

00:41:628 (14) - forgot finish that u did.
00:42:334 (16) - ^
00:47:275 (14) - ^
00:47:981 (16) - ^

00:53:099 (19) - there's no sound for this note, delete.
00:59:452 - kkkkkkd isn't match on song, better change to ddddddk. also the following one(33) lost consistency cuz of u did d on (32).

that's all.

gl for rank
Labyr
186 posts
Joined February 2014
Labyr
Hi~, mod via M4M.

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. 00:05:275 - change k　high pitch of the voice.
  2. 00:05:806 - change k　keep consistency 00:41:100 -
  3. 00:18:863 - move to 00:18:422 -
  4. 00:35:453 (95,96,97) - reverse a color　follow vocal.
  5. 00:48:334 - add finish
  6. 01:07:040 - from here, add note in this way. follow vocal.
  7. 01:18:334 - ^
  8. 01:12:688 - similarly, add note in this way.
  9. 01:23:981 - ^
[Tanoshi Oni]
in kiai time from 00:38:805 - , there are few notes even if I look overall.
  1. 00:21:334 (36,37) - swap　follow Vocal.
  2. 00:31:922 - add d　follow drum.
  3. 00:41:628 (14,16) - add finish　keep intro and consistency.
  4. 00:43:393 - change k　follow vo.
  5. 00:43:922 (24,25) - add k　there isn't 2/1 break along a flow, and follow drum.
  6. 00:44:628 (2,3,4) - reverse a color.　prevent monotone.
  7. 00:47:275 (14,16) - add finish
[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:04:747 - change D
  2. 00:05:188 - delete, 00:05:100 (4,5) - swap, 00:05:452 - change K and 00:05:806 - change k
    これらはkiai timeと配色を揃える意図の提案です。曲の〆の部分はそれらとは違う（主にvocal）ので変更しません。
  3. 00:09:070 - delete, and 00:09:158 - add finish　vocalもmelodyも強めになってるため
  4. 00:14:100 - remove finish, 00:14:717 - move to 00:14:187 - and change d, 00:14:806 - add finish　00:15:511 (81,82) - これらと同様にBIGをフォローする提案
    or
  5. 00:14:276 (74,75) - change d, and 00:14:628 (78,79,80) - kkd → kkkd (1/6)?　00:14:100 - ここをBIGでどうしても拾いたいなら、後に続くグリッサンドを1/6でフォローする提案です。
    modderの私から言うと前者を勧めますが好みな気がします
  6. 00:20:982 (119,120) - swap color?
  7. 00:21:423 (122,123) - swap　follow Vo.
  8. 00:49:482 - move to 00:49:305 -, 00:49:394 - change k, 00:49:570 - change d.　1/2リズムで言う d k k d d k k d のパターンが単調すぎて違和感を感じたので、vocal（とdrum）を意識した提案です。
  9. 01:01:394 - イントロ（00:11:982 - ～）と比較しても勢いが落ちてる間が否めないので、最低でも1/1リズムでキック音を拾ってもいいのではと思いました
I will do the Kantan ~ Muzu check tomorrow. :o
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