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Konomi Suzuki - One Day Sky

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Deception2011
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Deception2011
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 8. Mai 2017 at 03:45:23

Artist: Konomi Suzuki
Title: One Day Sky
Tags: No Game No Life Zero Movie
BPM: 185
Filesize: 14756kb
Play Time: 04:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,65 stars, 990 notes)
Download: Konomi Suzuki - One Day Sky
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Let me know if you have any suggestions/want to add a diff or maybe even want to add this diff to your set

I want to add more diffs but I'm a total noob when it comes to mapping easy/normal

This Song is sho good ;...;

I look forward to the Movie :D
Last edited by Deception2011 , edited 24 times in total.
Cheesey
2 posts
Joined September 2014
Cheesey
00:39:941 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you dont need to have the stream stop just keep it going, no point in it stopping (00:34:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one is a good stream stop dont change that one)

01:06:050 (1,2,3,4) - May just be a pet peeve. but make these Jumps instead of double stops. may make it better imo (01:12:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are good Stops.)

another issue i see is that the difficulty of the map changes from jumps a lot to slow. and it alternates to fast Example: 00:44:644 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Try adding in vocal sliders and such. What im trying to say is try to keep it consistant
Deception2011
65 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Deception2011
Thank you for your mod :D

Good Idea, I'll change it like that!

I'll think about this later


Cheesey wrote:

00:39:941 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you dont need to have the stream stop just keep it going, no point in it stopping (00:34:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one is a good stream stop dont change that one)
Yeah you're right, that plays much better

Cheesey wrote:

01:06:050 (1,2,3,4) - May just be a pet peeve. but make these Jumps instead of double stops. may make it better imo (01:12:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are good Stops.)
I guess I wanted to slow it down a little bit but jumps fit in there really good

Cheesey wrote:

another issue i see is that the difficulty of the map changes from jumps a lot to slow. and it alternates to fast Example: 00:44:644 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Try adding in vocal sliders and such. What im trying to say is try to keep it consistant
I want to have it slower when Konomi sings thats why I slowed her part down this much
Luken
2 posts
Joined September 2015
Luken
(listen to the song without sound effects at the following parts)

00:24:212 (2,3,4,5) - Feels wrong when playing, may destroy the flow
00:34:671 (2) - not necessary but you can remove this hitcircle since theres no beat
00:45:617 (1,2) - i would place a hitcircle between the slider and the next circle
00:46:590 (3) - delay this slider by one tick to make it flow better on the song
00:57:293 (3) - the slider ends well but starts too late
01:02:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the second object of the last double is not on a beat, but consider replacing this beatchanging pattern by a short kickslider and a stream of 4 notes
02:17:725 (3) - the slider ends well but starts too late (same as 00:57:293 (3) )
03:15:779 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern (paired in 3) seems to be a bit late for me
Deception2011
65 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Deception2011

LukenSkyne wrote:

(listen to the song without sound effects at the following parts)
Great Idea, I'll try that out, thank you

LukenSkyne wrote:

00:24:212 (2,3,4,5) - Feels wrong when playing, may destroy the flow
I made the slider longer and changed the tripple to a double, that should be better now

LukenSkyne wrote:

00:34:671 (2) - not necessary but you can remove this hitcircle since theres no beat
I removed (2) and I am using (1) as a "bridge" from the slider to the stream

LukenSkyne wrote:

00:45:617 (1,2) - i would place a hitcircle between the slider and the next circle

I want Konomis part to be way slower and as of now I don't want to add anymore circles or slider there


00:46:590 (3) - delay this slider by one tick to make it flow better on the song

LukenSkyne wrote:

00:57:293 (3) - the slider ends well but starts too late
Changed the beginning to 00:57:131 -

LukenSkyne wrote:

01:02:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the second object of the last double is not on a beat, but consider replacing this beatchanging pattern by a short kickslider and a stream of 4 notes
You have good ears man, changed it just like you suggested

LukenSkyne wrote:

02:17:725 (3) - the slider ends well but starts too late (same as 00:57:293 (3) )
Changed

LukenSkyne wrote:

03:15:779 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern (paired in 3) seems to be a bit late for me
Already thought so too, I'll start the pattern a bit earlier

Thanks alot for your mod, it was very helpful.

have a great day o/
Aerxia
22 posts
Joined January 2013
Aerxia
00:34:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream feels awkward at the end, perhaps you could change direction of them instead of them overlapping.

00:52:752 (2) - right where this timing point is there is a triple beat that you could maybe somehow implement

00:57:779 (4,5,6) - these three notes could even be blanketed closer into the slider, it would look neater aswell if the 6 and 7 slider ends were raised up more

01:38:644 (1) - maybe remove this spinner and map this part in since there is a break very soon after. it also makes 01:39:458 (1,2,1) - seem out of place.

01:39:458 (1,2,1) - i believe the last note doesnt require a new combo

02:49:509 (4) - this slider just feels odd imo, smoothen it out and i feel it will transition into the stream more seamlessly

03:13:834 (3) - 03:15:131 (3) - 03:16:428 (3) - if you made these all the same slider and just copy paste it would look cleaner

03:19:671 (1,2,3,4) - i like the idea of kicksliders here, but maybe make them symmetrical to eachother

other than that i like the map, good song and you have good flow in many parts, good job dude!
Deception2011
65 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Deception2011

Aerxia wrote:

00:34:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream feels awkward at the end, perhaps you could change direction of them instead of them overlapping.

00:52:752 (2) - right where this timing point is there is a triple beat that you could maybe somehow implement

00:57:779 (4,5,6) - these three notes could even be blanketed closer into the slider, it would look neater aswell if the 6 and 7 slider ends were raised up more

01:38:644 (1) - maybe remove this spinner and map this part in since there is a break very soon after. it also makes 01:39:458 (1,2,1) - seem out of place.

01:39:458 (1,2,1) - i believe the last note doesnt require a new combo

02:49:509 (4) - this slider just feels odd imo, smoothen it out and i feel it will transition into the stream more seamlessly

03:13:834 (3) - 03:15:131 (3) - 03:16:428 (3) - if you made these all the same slider and just copy paste it would look cleaner

03:19:671 (1,2,3,4) - i like the idea of kicksliders here, but maybe make them symmetrical to eachother

other than that i like the map, good song and you have good flow in many parts, good job dude!
I've applied everything except the last last suggestion about the kicksliders, I like them the way they are right now and don't want to change them, but I'll think about it!

thank you for the mod! These are some usefull tips =3=
Rishe
Rishe
Hello, quick mod since I'm looking forward to the movie ;)

[Insane]
  1. 01:25:347 (4) - I suggest making this into two circles since you miss a loud beat on white tick
  2. 01:26:320 (3) - Make it into a circle and move the next slider onto the previous white tick (you did this correctly in the other parts of the song where this
  3. rhythm repeated :D)
  4. 01:39:455 (3,4,5) - These are supposed to be 1/3 :)
  5. 02:34:428 (3) - Loud clickable beat on white tick, so two circles would be better imo rather than the slider
  6. 02:51:131 (5) - http://puu.sh/v9Z54.jpg (or make the 5th kick slider into a circle) this plays better because you are missing clickable beat on the red tick at
  7. 02:51:293 - then put whistle on the slider head on 1?
Good job on the map :D
Deception2011
65 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Deception2011

Rishe wrote:

Hello, quick mod since I'm looking forward to the movie ;)

[Insane]

  1. Rishe wrote:

    01:25:347 (4) - I suggest making this into two circles since you miss a loud beat on white tick
    If I change the slider to two circles it somehow sounds so... "wrong" to me, I don't know maybe it's just me but I've just replaced it with a reverseslider there. That plays better then before now :V

    Rishe wrote:

  2. 01:26:320 (3) - Make it into a circle and move the next slider onto the previous white tick (you did this correctly in the other parts of the song where this
  3. rhythm repeated :D)
Applied the changes

Rishe wrote:

01:39:455 (3,4,5) - These are supposed to be 1/3 :)
Yee you're right, and a circle on the white tick at the end was missing too, just noticed it

Rishe wrote:

02:34:428 (3) - Loud clickable beat on white tick, so two circles would be better imo rather than the slider
I want to decrease the speed a little bit there thats why I used a slider there ^^ And I think it fits quite well for that purpose :D

Rishe wrote:

02:51:131 (5) - http://puu.sh/v9Z54.jpg (or make the 5th kick slider into a circle) this plays better because you are missing clickable beat on the red tick at
I've changed (5) to a stream now, I didn't want to do that at first but it seems right now since this part is supposed to be the climax of the map anyways

Rishe wrote:

02:51:293 - then put whistle on the slider head on 1?
✔
I'm not really good when it comes to hitsounds :V I'm sure there are still a lot of "wrong" or out of place

Good job on the map :D

Thank you for testing and modding my map =3=
I'm glad you like it
Deception2011
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Deception2011
osu won't let me edit my response QQ
sry that it looks like that now D:
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