Verniy_Chan wrote:

Belum di HSin ya? :3

Shinzo- wrote:

M4M

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01:05:288 (65288|0) - saran aja sih LN nya jadiin normal note yg ini karna di part 01:06:700 (66700|3,66965|2,67229|0) - kmu cuman layer yg keras aja suaranya, sementara 01:06:347 - ga dilayer. biar seimbang juga di 01:05:288 - 3 LN kecil di 01:06:700 - juga 3. lagian 01:06:347 - lebih kedengeran suaranya dari 01:05:288 - (referensi 03:21:876 - ) make them all consistently have short LN.
01:10:847 - unnesecary SV. necessary, the instrument has sudden stop feeling there.
01:40:935 - salah satu jadiin LN ? saran aja sih soalny ssemua suara begini dibikin LN ? i'm sure there's only crash?
01:41:818 (101818|3,101994|2) - tuker ? pitch ny sama 3x dan di part ini cuman itu yg ga sampe 3 same collumn nya, yang laen sampe 3 (01:35:465 (95465|3,95818|3,96170|3) - 01:46:759 (106759|3,107112|3,107465|3) - I know what you meant, but 01:41:818 (101818|3) - is still higher than 01:41:994 (101994|2) - , if i reverse it just for sake of that consistency, the pitch distinction will be incorrect inconsistent, so i prefer sacrifice the one that i find more minor there.
02:13:670 (133670|0) - mungkin ini dibikin 1 note doang karna patternnya mo divariasiin di 02:13:759 - tapi yang 02:13:318 - malah jadi gaje gitu kenapa cuman satu note, mungkin maxudmu biar konsisten ama 02:13:670 - tapi nantinya 02:14:023 - ini yg gaje knp 2 note. saran ane sih 02:14:023 - aja yg dibikin1 note biar konsisten ama 02:15:082 - ato kalo ngga pattern 02:13:406 (133406|3,133406|2,133494|1,133494|0,133582|2,133582|3) - diganti aja biar ga gaje (rerferensi 04:28:935 (268935|2,268935|1,269023|0,269023|3,269112|2,269112|1) - ) well the core basic of my jumptrill pattern is that, every three double like 02:13:053 (133053|2,133053|3,133141|0,133141|1,133229|3,133229|2) - , it will have single note except for the one direct to the LN simply because it's too short to give the transition, I do the consistent one at 04:29:288 - too so i won't try to break it as it has coordination with other pattern too.
02:18:700 - ini kiai nya ga brenti di sini aja ? biar sama kek 04:34:229 - nais
02:40:318 (160318|0) - aga gangerti sih ini kenapa jack xD cuman denger sih ada drum kecil kek exho doang, mending gausah jack vocal,
and that's one of core pattern i think make the section flows naturally
03:14:112 (194112|0) - saran ane sih ini di move aja ke kolom 3 biar player ngerti ini udah ngikut suara 03:13:759(193759|2,193935|3,194112|0,194288|3,194465|0,194641|1,194818|0,194994|1) - udah bukan 03:12:347 (192347|0,192612|0,192876|0,193141|0,193406|0,193582|3) - karna kalo 03:13:935 (193935|3,194288|3) - kayak begini nanti dikira masih ngikut suara yg tadi tapi 1/2 jadi malah bingung nanti i move to 03:14:023 - instead, just realize i still suppose to follow the col 1 sound.
03:35:112 - missing LN ? denger lagi coba (referensi 03:57:700 - ) changed, quite nice
03:41:641 (221641|1,221641|0,221729|0,221729|1) - jack nya di 34 aja gimana ? xD soalnya tadi ditangan kiri 03:38:818 (218818|0,218818|1,218906|1,218906|0) - iya ane tau sih bakal ribet nge re-pattern, tapi ya terserah deh ane cuman bilang aja xD felt like for consistency of same sound also alright, the current isn't that heavy left tbh even with those jack.
03:47:994 (227994|0,228082|0) - saran aja sih gausah jack.. aneh aja gitu gatau napa jack good point, switch column to avoid that
03:57:523 - mungkin diatur lagi LN nya kebanyakan di kolom 3 4 padahal pitch nya aga merendah There's three repeating pitch occured there, at 03:57:788 (237788|2,237876|3,238053|2,238141|3,238582|3,238759|2,238847|3) - if you heard the instrument synth repeating so i make LN repeating too, it's similar concept with how i went from 03:35:200 -
04:28:053 (268053|2,268141|0,268406|3,268494|2) - gimana kalo ini dibikin jack ato apa kek buat nge emphasize 1/4 kick nya soalny kyk contoh 04:25:670 (265670|0,265670|1) - kan di bikin 2 note yeah it can
04:32:288 - harusnya 2 note sih biar konsisten sama 04:31:759 (271759|0,271759|1,271935|1,271935|2,272641|0,272641|3) - (referensi 02:16:406) Wrong reference, the correct one is at 02:16:715 - , the third finish is at 1/8, it's awkward but somehow that the composer want, so i just follow since it is accurate snap but doesn't hinder playability anyway

GL ay

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Maxus aka DixonBW

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4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Berhubungan mapnya belum di HS, baiklah saya yang HS kan (gak asik ngemod gak ada HSnya XD)
   Download contohnya https://puu.sh/wTzJP.rar

yay makasih >w<

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OD : 7,8
HP : 8,7

1. 00:08:818 (8818|2,8994|0) - 00:11:641 (11641|2,11818|3) - mungkin ini bisa dijadikan satu kolom untuk vocal, biar ngikutin mirror pattern dari 00:05:994 (5994|1,6170|1) - atau mungkin sebaliknya ga disngaja prtamany si itu, ane jg ga ktmu cra buat bkin smuany sama kolom tanpa ngeremap smua wkwk, jdi mnurut ane rda "ngmksa" klo remap cma untuk itu, jadi keep dulu.
2. 00:46:229 - add note untuk konsistensi suara clap seperti 00:39:170 - 00:44:818 - ok sip
3. 01:10:759 - apakah disini sengaja gak pasang note untuk suara tom drum seperti 01:10:406 - 01:10:582 - ? oh ya, ada SV rupanya XD dipasang note pun suarany buyar bgt dsitu xd, lebih krasa klo emphasize pake SV -w-
4. 01:15:700 (75700|3,76053|2) - bukannya harus satu kolom karena pitchnya mirip sepeti 01:12:876 (72876|2,73229|2) - ngghh ane ykin yg ini pitchny beda ._. , LN prtama soalny kasa bgt tinggi pitchny dibanding yg kdua , klo yg di example mlah bner2 sama pitch imo
5. 01:27:170 - mungkin tertarik jadiin LN untuk suara 'Auu' seperti 01:26:465 (86465|0,86818|3) - lel saya tertarik disini >w<
6. 01:38:288 (98288|2,98641|1,98994|2) - sama seperti di atas, tapi kalau untuk variasi pattern gpp sih ga ad auu tapi ._.
7. 01:49:759 (109759|1,109847|1) - sepertinya gak cocok ini dijadiin mini jack, karena agak beda pitchnya dari sebelumnya 01:49:229 (109229|3,109318|3,109582|3,109670|3) - kalau bisa 01:49:759 (109759|1,109847|1) - salah satu pindah ke |1| dimodifikasi agar cocok dsini
8. 02:49:935 (169935|1,170112|1,170288|1,170465|1) - mungkin hindari anchor ringan seperti ini, 02:49:935 (169935|1) - pindah ke |1|
9. 02:55:670 - 02:56:376 - 02:57:082 - ini sengaja ya, gak pasang note seperti konsistensi dari blue line 02:53:553 - 02:54:259 - 02:54:965 - iya , klo setiap kali ketemu wall LN seperti itu, ane ga pake 1/4 karena bakal ngmaksa bgt disitu, jadi konsistensinya wktu tiap kali ada wall LN , 1/4 ga bakal mncul.
10. 03:43:053 - mungkin add note disini untuk impact suara keras + vocal effect, atau kalau tidak jadikan LN salah satu SN, sama halnya di bagian 04:05:641 - hmm , klo jadi triple disana jdi agak mmbingungkan soalny 03:43:406 - ja double tp malah lebih keras soundnya (karena jumptrillnya biar ga ngemaksa jg sih xd)

Notes : Hadeh~ sulit nyari yang error lagi selain di atas, sangat solid patternnya

msih noob x.x

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score

88,5

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Nice Mapset, terutama LN Sectionnya >w<
Tebar bintang kejora
Хорошо~ Good Luck..

Kawawa wrote:

Hello Maxus! bloblob 'W' wawa moeee >w<>w< :blopblop owo!!!:

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01:08:553 (68553|2,68641|3) - This rhythm kinda weird to me.
I recognized that around LNs are followed vocal rhythm, and the start vocal place is here 01:08:465 -
Recommend this :: http://puu.sh/xdAV5/83d9fedb7b.jpg yeah this is kinda my mistake x_x , thank you for catching this!

02:18:347 - to 02:18:700 - It's 1/6 rhythm from 02:17:994 -
Just a feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdBEn/b251329fa1.jpg
(If you want to use those case LNs bundle, then the SV timing also should be changed something)
or just change that rhythm as 1/6th. Anyway It's up to what you want! yeah should be 1/6 rythm there, i hear it wrongly before xd , changed!

02:28:406 (148406|3,148450|2) - reverse it as 3 to 4 column?
because It's same patterning with below 02:27:347 (147347|3,147391|2,147435|0,147479|1) - so can have a various patterns. yeah it should be for different feeling owo

02:30:700 (150700|0) - I think you can add "W" hitsound here. add it, and also to all similar part.

02:32:994 - Add a note for kick drum, there is a drum added. compared with 02:31:229 -
you can ignore that, but I considered your structure that you added some note by snare durm sound. hmm I consider it too small sound for double note considering the density of the pattern around the section. If i add that, would be too dense because i need to add for other small snare too.

03:37:406 (217406|0,217494|2,217582|0,217670|2) - If you're not use 1/8th, then personally I prefer to jack for vocal vibration.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdCrR/24ad74f999.jpg
It's not really difficult, and It follow the concept of the vocal vibration jack that you expressed from the below part. I tried to make the vocal vibration here consistent with 01:21:876 - , My pattern before also use jack here, but i consider them to have different feeling with vocal bundle in kiai i use for jack.

04:03:965 - You can make here two, I feel it also intense like 04:04:141 -
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdCzU/a8b38eb85e.jpg I consider 04:03:876 - To also have big sound, so i will make this double LN too.

04:28:406 (268406|3,268494|3) - It also should be same hitsound with 04:28:053 (268053|0,268141|0) - as your intention. Sorry my mistake x.x

04:31:053 - to 04:31:406 - here is synth sound part.
04:31:406 - to 04:31:759 - here is drum roll.
What I mean that they have different feelings to each other, but chart is same stair-ing.
If you can seperate the two part visually, then It can be better to feel when playing.
The first part is a good as an example 02:15:523 - to 02:16:229 - yeah i understand, will change here.

That's it. I could finish all the confirmation quickly
pretty cool!

Critical_Star wrote:

'x' hug cat 'x'
some little stuff before we get to qualify >w<

NYEELL!
00:24:259 - suggestion to break at 4th col so it look much neater , > http://puu.sh/xkQDi/1e23cc8e23.png really nice uwu
01:32:818 - double like 01:33:170 - i think they just having the same vocal clap yeah correct -w-
01:48:700 (108700|3) - make normal note? before u did with double LN + normal note hmm 3 LN is from synth like 01:48:347 (108347|2) -
(1 LN) + Hey sound (2 LN)
02:08:112 (128112|1,128112|3,128112|2,128818|0,128818|2,128818|3,129523|2,129523|3,129523|1) - make double here to differentiate the sound impact? The beat sound almost the same here so i wanna make them all triple. to differentiate with part before at 01:41:288 (101288|0,101288|1,101641|0,101641|1,101641|3) -
03:02:818 (182818|1,182818|0,183170|2,183523|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/xkR0y/b2b4d30d70.png i love it , but i have SV here, so the impact makes the 1/4 shield a bit too surprising imo, but i rearrange according to yours >w<
04:33:523 - suggestion > http://puu.sh/xkRas/b53e8367a6.png err maybe nvm lol tbh i really like it 'w' , really flowy for me >w<
04:40:935 - missed a double note here nice catch owo
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