taka1235 wrote:

open the eyes

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Change artist name format to 'Itou Kanako'. Eastern format (Surname - Firstname) is better than western format for eastern artist if there is not any speacial reason. Also I confirmed it as 'Itou Kanako' in official website. http://steinsgate.jp/goods_01.html ok changed
- Add names into tags who gave guest diff. And make same tags in every diff. fixed, added PSPDS Eddie and taka1235 for every diff

[Insane]
00:08:760 (6) - Stack under 00:08:401 (5) to avoid spacing error. That spacing fits at music well, but it is an error in a same combo group. Stacking is also good in my opinion. However adding new combo may look weird. stacked
00:24:209 (2) - Add clap to end of slider added
00:27:443 (6) - Add clap ^
00:28:700 (2) - Add clap to return arrow ^
01:49:359 (1,2,1) - Would you expand the spacing? This anti-jump doesn't fit IMO. I saw accelerated spacing at next part, but this spacing is too small. hmm... tried 1.0x spacing, hope it looks alright

[Normal]
00:38:221 (1,2) - (nazi) one grid down fixed
00:40:736 (1,2) - Try to make them symmetry. Spacing will not so confuse. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/120470 fixed
00:43:610 (1,2) - This overlapping looks a bit messy. Try to use spacing 1.0x http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/120475 ok, this looks better
01:13:790 (1) - Extend to 01:17:383 oops, didn't realize that
01:27:622 (3) - Spacing omg why did i do this... fixed

Good luck~ ☆ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)

taka1235 wrote:

FIXED

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

Fixed~

I mended neither Tag nor Artist.
I think that tag and Artist should be made the same.
I ask that my difficulty mend Tag/Artist to Takos to make Artist and Tag the same.

>taka1235, PSPDS Eddie
Updated the map, artist, and tags.
Please re-DL when you fix anything next time.
Thank you!

>S i R i R u, Patchouli, azuki
Thanks for star~

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- yeah just fix the artist name fixed
- add the guest mappers to the tags in all diff. ^
- perharps a more balanced difficulty spread is needed. The current situation is N - light insane - insane - insane, and there's quite a big gap between N and I. D: hmm what should i do... perhaps make an easy and make normal harder?
- It's suggested that every diff ends at the same time... i'll let taka choose that

[Insane]
01:08:580 (2) - I prefer removing the whistle here since there's no vocal. removed!
01:10:916 (1) - up 1 grid to make it symmetrical fixed
nice! thank you! XD

[Normal]
00:18:281 (1,2,3,4,5) - the y-value of the notes: 335, 336, 336, 340, 340 lol plx arrange them in stright line didn't realize that because of my small screen ;w;
00:25:287 (3) - right 1 grid lv4 ok
00:38:580 (2) - down several grids if you wish, so down 1 grid as yk said already fixed
00:55:107 (3,4,1) - down 1 grid lv4 ok

P.S. I'm sorry that the mod refers to the old version (i.e. before ykcarrot mod), so if the mod is different to your current arrangement just skip it. no problem

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

00:10:377 (2) - erased it
00:22:053 (6) - Fix

Fixed~

1. 1個目のKIAI TIMEの終わりは01:17:383の方が良いと思います。

1. 00:08:401 (3,4) - whistle?
2. 00:11:275 (3,4) - ^
3. 00:38:940 (3) - ここで1grid上がっているのがちょっとだけ気になりました。1grid下げるか、(2,3)で徐々に上げるかの方が良いと思います。
4. 00:47:922 (1) - finish
5. 01:46:844 (1) - こちらにもwhistle
6. 01:48:281 (2) - 全体のwhistle音だけじゃなくて始端にもつけた方が良い感じです。
7. 01:54:029 (1) - finish
8. 02:09:119 (2,3,4) - ちょっと難しいリズムかもしれません。

• 
  言う事なしです！
  clapが無くてちょっと音が寂しいかも・・・？

1. 00:41:275 (4,5,6,7,8) - ボーカルをなぞるならこんな感じ。
   
2. 00:47:203 (2) - SV×0.75で3回折り返しのスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょうか。
3. 00:54:928 (5,8) - new comboを入れたほうがメリハリがつくかも。
4. 00:57:443 (5,6,7,8,9) - なめらかに置いてみてはどうでしょう。
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:06:065 (1) - clap
6. 01:27:622 (1) - clap?最初のAメロで入っていたので。個人的にはclapよりも01:26:724 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3)の音量を上げた方が好みです(・ω・)
7. 01:35:257 (2) - 1grid右。
8. 01:53:311 (2) - 前のと同様に。

1. 00:34:898 (4,5) - 消してしまった方がインパクトがあるかもです(主観ですが)。
2. 00:45:227 (1) - 終端を1grid右？
3. 01:15:227 (5) - スライダーの開始は01:15:047の方が合っている感じがします。
4. 01:18:087 (1) - これ以降のノートがスナップされていないです。
5. 01:38:027 (1) - clap?
6. 01:40:287 (x) - ノート追加？
7. 01:51:321 (1) - 終端を1grid左？
   最後 lol

Suzully wrote:

[General]

1. 1個目のKIAI TIMEの終わりは01:17:383の方が良いと思います。

Fixed

[PSPDS's Hard]

• 
  言う事なしです！
  clapが無くてちょっと音が寂しいかも・・・？

Clapの使い方が上手くない（五月蝿くしてしまう）ので自重してます。
ですがほんの少し追加してみました。

Suzully wrote:

[General]

1. 1個目のKIAI TIMEの終わりは01:17:383の方が良いと思います。

[Normal]

1. 00:08:401 (3,4) - whistle? 追加しました
2. 00:11:275 (3,4) - ^ ^
3. 00:38:940 (3) - ここで1grid上がっているのがちょっとだけ気になりました。1grid下げるか、(2,3)で徐々に上げるかの方が良いと思います。1grid下げて横に並べました
4. 00:47:922 (1) - finish 追加しました
5. 01:46:844 (1) - こちらにもwhistle ^
6. 01:48:281 (2) - 全体のwhistle音だけじゃなくて始端にもつけた方が良い感じです。^
7. 01:54:029 (1) - finish ^
8. 02:09:119 (2,3,4) - ちょっと難しいリズムかもしれません。スライダー２つにしてリズムを簡単にしました

[Insane]

1. 00:41:275 (4,5,6,7,8) - ボーカルをなぞるならこんな感じ。いい方法が思いつかなかったので変えませんでした
   
2. 00:47:203 (2) - SV×0.75で3回折り返しのスライダーにしてみてはどうでしょうか。ナイスアイデア！
3. 00:54:928 (5,8) - new comboを入れたほうがメリハリがつくかも。NC入れました
4. 00:57:443 (5,6,7,8,9) - なめらかに置いてみてはどうでしょう。なめらかにしました。ぬるーん
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:06:065 (1) - clap 追加しました
6. 01:27:622 (1) - clap?最初のAメロで入っていたので。個人的にはclapよりも01:26:724 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3)の音量を上げた方が好みです(・ω・) Aメロに入ってたclapを消してこちらは変えませんでした。音量は5%上げました。
7. 01:35:257 (2) - 1grid右。修正しました
8. 01:53:311 (2) - 前のと同様に。変えました

ないすまっぷっぷ(((・ω・)))
たこすさんの譜面は見るごとに成長しててびっくりです

Suzully wrote:

[General]

• 
  
  [taka]

1. 00:45:227 (1) - 終端を1grid右？fix
2. 01:38:027 (1) - clap? fix
3. 01:51:321 (1) - 終端を1grid左？fix
   最後 lol

MODありです～。

taka1235 wrote:

Suzully wrote:

[General]

• 
  
  [taka]

1. 00:45:227 (1) - 終端を1grid右？fix
2. 01:38:027 (1) - clap? fix
3. 01:51:321 (1) - 終端を1grid左？fix
   最後 lol

MODありです～。

1. Would you unify the Stack Leniency?It' not necessary I know but you better to do it.
2. I would prefer Offset:487 (-10) That seem better for me.Please check the mod before you consider this one!

1. 00:16:125 (x) - How about follow the music vocal?Just add a note here.
2. 00:20:616 (1) - Probably add a clap and finish here?Clap is for fitting the music and finish is for the accent point,well,change or not are depend on you.
3. 00:44:688 (2) - Tiny spacing problem,please fix it!Remember,don't make any kind of jump in Normal and all should follow the distance snap Since this diff is the lower difficulty in this mapset!
4. 00:58:520 - I highly recommend you add a note here because you're follow the music at 00:58:700 (3) - so I think you should add a note at 00:58:520 - to fit the music perfectly!
5. 01:46:844 (1,2) - Orz...Would you make it more beautiful?It is a little bit ugly now.
6. 01:54:029 (1) - For consistent the rhythm of (2.3)- please make this slider to 1/1 and add a reverse.Than add a note at 01:55:107 - .Thats hounds better for me!
7. 02:09:838 (3) - Oh,no!Please fix the spacing :/ Jump in "Normal" doesn't fair to newbie,so please don't do that!
8. 02:14:149 (x) - I suggest you stop this spinner at 02:16:305 - then newbie can use more time to catch the next slider and it won't be really weird.

1. 00:20:616 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you increase the spacing of them because here has 4 accent point and it is really appropriate for jump :3 and it can make more fun during gameplay!(But the spacing don't be too large ><)
2. 01:10:197 (1) - Please!Remove this slider D: I can't found any reason that it need to add any note/slider here,if you really want,just add a note at 01:10:556 (1) - with a finish!
3. 01:17:383 (x) - How about change this green line to soft-5%?It will works better imo.
4. 01:50:257 (1) - In this case/arrangement,you don't need to add a new combo here because player can read it clarity!Remove the new combo please!
5. 02:24:119 (x) -Please remove this unnecessary green line!

1. 00:22:862 (x) - Listen to Playback Rate:25% you can hear you miss a note here \:D/ Add it if possible!btw,this stream is little bit ugly imo,can you make it more beautiful?
   
   example

   
   ^For this one!

   424,104,22053,5,0
   406,122,22143,1,0
   384,135,22233,1,0
   359,142,22323,1,0
   334,147,22413,1,0
   307,142,22502,1,0
   283,133,22592,1,0
   259,123,22682,1,0
   241,102,22772,1,0

2. 00:32:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - IMO,these 1/4 doesn't fit the music very well,I think some of the 1/2 here is good enough!No need to stuff such a huge 1/4.
3. 00:42:173 (8) - A slider doesn't show a good effect during gameplay!If I were you,I would add a note at 00:42:173 - instead of a slider then use a Spinner at 00:42:263 - and end at 00:42:892 -
4. 00:45:227 (6) - Probably Vertically with (4)- ?
5. 01:12:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Be honest,I don't love this pattern very much >~< only for me!So let you decide to change it or not!
6. 01:17:293 - Please remove this unnecessary green line!
7. 01:28:970 (x) - Same as 00:22:862 -,you need to add a note here.
8. 01:51:874 (1,2,3,4) - This jump are totally broken the flow,previous jump are ok,only this jump are really awkward for me!
9. 02:24:209 (x) - How about change this green line to soft-5%?It will works better imo.

1. I love this diff!!!!!!
2. 00:22:862 (x) - Same as Insane diff,you need to add a note here to follow the music,however consider the jump pattern at 00:22:952 (1,2,3) - so just let you decide how to do it :/
3. 00:32:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Oh no!This is a ridiculous stack,Due to the Stack Leniency it's really ugly during gameplay.
   
   lol

   
4. 01:15:227 (5) - oh!I think the shape of this slider is a little bit weird!I recommend you use a spinner instead of it.I'm sure here has macron so I guess a spinner is more appropriate.
5. 01:23:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Wow this,I know you make this on purpose,however this part is really calm,so too many 1/4 isn't that good here.
6. 01:41:455 (x) - This break is really weird because the vocal is still singing here,so I prefer you map this.(Also thought about insane diff so you don't need a break for a short song \:D/.2:30 is count as a short song imo.)
7. 02:24:209 - How about change this green line to soft-5%?It sounds better for me.

Takos wrote:

>taka-san, Eddie-san
updated~
特別な理由がなければstack leniencyを7に統一しますがよろしいでしょうか?
waiting for taka's reply~ [/color]

akrolsmir wrote:

General:
00:20:616- Kiai here to 00:23:850? I definitely expected one after the sudden volume increase.
01:26:724- ^, to 01:29:958


PSPDS's Hard:
00:38:401 (2,3) - Space out more, to feel consistent with the distance spacing. meybe fix
00:41:275 (2) - Not symmetric meybe fix
01:33:730 (4,5,6) - Even out the spacing (it's noticeable since it's meant to be a mirror image). Consider making 4 just a copy of 6 or vice versa.
Fixed
01:44:329 (1,2,3) - Space out more. meybe fix

Takos wrote:

>taka-san, Eddie-san
updated~
特別な理由がなければstack leniencyを7に統一しますがよろしいでしょうか?
waiting for taka's reply~ [/color]

taka1235 wrote:

stack leniencyって何でしょうか?
ごめんなさい初耳なので

Takos wrote:

taka1235 wrote:

stack leniencyって何でしょうか?
ごめんなさい初耳なので

Song Setup>Advanced>Stackingから設定出来ます
音符を重ねた時に次の音符が少しズレて見えますよね？
そのズレの度合いの調整する機能で、0~10まで設定出来ます。(確か0がほとんど見えなくて10がズレて見えるはず
たかさんの譜面では多くの音符を重ねてる部分があって、そのズレ具合を変えられるのでどうするべきかなーと思いまして...

taka1235 wrote:

こんな機能あったんですね!ご丁寧に説明thxです。
いつの間に追加されてたのやら...
７で統一、了解しました。

kioukiou wrote:

-7 ms to all offset,don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.
fixed for all diffs

[taka]
01:23:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1) - Move them down a bit,they touched the hp bar. waiting for taka's response

banvi wrote:

まずは墓から脱出しないと…　 reviveしたのですがまた墓行ってました

[All diffs]
notepad開いてbreak periodsのところをこれに書き換えてみては？
そしてbreakのところをTestで見てみてください(takaさん以外)

SPOILER

//Break Periods
2,78115,85284

直しました!

Resnap all notes!! 直しました
01:18:094 このtiming pointは不要？消しました

[Normal]
一番簡単な難易度にしてはARが高すぎかと、AR -2 or -1? AR-2
00:59:419 (1) add finish?
01:10:916 (1) 最初の方にfinish
01:12:353 (3) ^
02:02:652 (5) new combo
02:04:628 (1) remove new combo
02:05:526 (1) add finish?
02:11:275 (1) 最初の方にfinish
02:14:149 (1) 01:08:041 (1)みたいに最後をvolume 5%に
02:17:023 (1,2) 最初の方にfinish
All fixed

[Insane]
00:30:496 (6,7,8) 正直このspacingは見た目的にも変なので直した方がいいかと
00:40:736 (1) add finish?
00:59:419 (1) ^
01:05:167 (1) ^
01:10:916 (1) ^
01:13:790 (1,2,3) こんな風にするとどうでしょう？

SPOILER

[attachment=0:7caa0]1.jpg[/attachment:7caa0]

01:46:844 (1) 最初の方にfinish
01:54:029 (1) add finish?
02:05:526 (1) 最初の方にfinish
02:11:275 (5) ^
02:14:771 (1) 01:08:041 (1)みたいに最後をvolume 5%に
All fixed

えっと...エル・プサイ・コンガリィ......
墓だと★あげれないようなのでreviveしたらあげます！(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

banvi wrote:

[PSPDS's Hard]
00:45:766 (1) reverse arrowが見えにくい！ 反対向きに反転しました
00:47:922 (1) add finish?
00:59:419 (1) 最初の方にfinish
01:05:167 (1) add finish?
01:10:100 (T) この緑線を01:10:549にsnap
01:10:916 (1) 最初の方にfinish
01:29:599 (2) ^
01:54:030 (1) add finish
02:05:527 (1) 最初の方にfinish
02:11:268 (1) add finish
02:16:208 (T) この緑線を02:16:657にsnap
02:17:024 (1) 最初の方にfinish

reverse arrow　反対向きに反転しました
それ以外もAll Fixed