00:49:577 (1,2) - hmm 1/1 slider here because 2 circles make the rhythm a bit dense imo
01:00:929 - should be a circle here for the vocal
01:14:875 - emphatize the drum here for avoid the awkward rhythm
01:38:875 (1) - 3/2 reverse slider here? for the vocal,same as you did at 01:41:469 (1,2) - isnt too much of a problem imo
01:48:604 (2,1) - this is not 100% parallel
01:59:307 - circle here for make the rhythm same as 00:55:739 (3) (and also for emphatize the vocal and for increase the rhythm in kiai time section)
02:01:902 - ^
02:06:118 (2) - make the rhythm here same as 01:02:550 (2,3,4) -
02:10:983 - circle here for vocal (the reason same as before)
02:15:199 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - ok tbh the rhythm here's make me confused,what are you trying to emphatize with these rhythm? vocal or drum? cause the rhythm is not fit with the music at all (make the rhythm same as 01:11:631 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - for make the rhythm consistent)
02:46:334 - 3/2 reverse slider here? for represent the vocal at more 02:46:820 -
02:48:280 (5,6,7) - 1/2 reverse slider is enough imo lets better not.. there are too much reversals in here.
03:10:983 (1,2) - blanket
03:15:523 - emphatize the drum here for avoid the awkward rhythm on the next notes
03:20:712 - ^
03:22:010 - ^
03:32:226 - clap
03:33:523 - ^ since i did all that stuff repeatedly it should be fine and shoudnt create awkward rythm.
00:22:334 (1,2,3) - increase the ds for avoid the misreading
00:44:388 (1,2,3,4) - ^ for better pattern (cause this is expert diff so i think it would be great if you make the ds a bit far)
00:58:010 (3) - increase spacing here cause theres a vocal and drum sounds (player would be misreading if you using current spacing) how
01:04:821 (4,1,2) - blanket
01:09:037 (1,2,3) - 1/2 reverse slider is not strong enough to emphatize the music here (tried to copy rhythm from kotachi's insane for great example) there is no 1/2
01:12:604 (5,6) - im really confused xd (just increase the spacing pls)
01:44:064 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - considering to add more circles here for emphatize the music well music isnt forcing poitn
01:49:253 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:00:604 (5,6) - same as before
02:33:199 - circle here for vocal woudnt make sense at all
02:34:658 - ^
02:38:388 - ^
02:39:847 - ^
02:50:875 (3,4) - too far imo (theres no sound on (4) so you dont need to make a big jump here)
03:22:010 (3) - ctrl g for a jump here cause theres a vocal and drum sound ??
03:52:010 (5) - 1/1 slider here for better rhythm ~ circle is nice also
ok gl ~
M4M from modreqs http://i.imgur.com/FPW9bvm.pngno reply is fix
00:17:145 (1) - placing it here might make it look better http://i.imgur.com/p048ydj.jpg nah.
00:17:469 (2,4) - Maybe turn these 2 into cirlces? They have key sounds on their slider end. not really imo
00:18:766 (2) - think that you'll need a timing section for these one, sounds out of beat. fuck
00:24:279 (3) - maybe make it into circles wwwwhhhhyy??????????
00:36:929 (1) - why is this 3/4 but the next slider is 1/2 long? because it fits to the music
00:37:496 - 00:37:658 - 00:37:820 - i'd use them to mke a stream makes no sense
00:38:226 (2,3) - you reduced jump spacing here, to me it sounds like it's getting intense not gentle.
00:46:172 (2,3) - isn't this spacing a bit too low?
00:52:172 (1) - why'd you reduce the spacing to this note. Also i suggest making it into a 1/2 reverse slider, would be nice. because voice fades
00:53:469 (1) - how bout make this have insane SV? xd no.
00:55:415 (4) - I'd delete this and place 2 circles, the vocals are strong on red and white tick, so following them would be much better with circles rather than 3/4 slider.
00:56:064 (1) - this is going out of screen lie
00:57:685 - I wouldn't end a slider on a snare, especially since you didn't do it often in the section vocals allow me to
00:54:118 (4,5,6) - just noticed that only here you use these 3 for cirlces, 01:04:496 (4) - you don't use it here different
01:03:199 (1,2,3,4) - you use this here but not here 00:55:415 (4) - ITS DIFFERENT
01:02:226 (7) - i'd make it into 2 circles i woudnt
01:07:739 (1) - i'd make the slider end clickable, feels weird from that going into a stream that soon appears. if someone different mentiones that..
01:08:712 (7) - if you want to make the turn you should do it from here. Or justify on what strong beat are you changing the direciton 01:08:875 (9) - here. players hear "NOW" some seconds later they cant just get that after 1ms. they got it there and change direction
01:09:361 (3,1,3,1,3,1) - They should seriously have some emphasis compared to other jumps more spacing? you are crazy
01:12:280 (4,4) - i'd put emphasis on these notes, make spacing to them bigger
01:14:875 (3,1) - fix blanket
01:16:172 (4,5,6,7) - increase spacing on them
01:40:496 (6,7,8) - i'd make them into circles to follow the vocals why
01:44:064 (5,6) - i wouldn't really make them into long sliders as they don't follow vocals like you usually do with sliders why they fit perfectly
01:58:010 (5) - http://i.imgur.com/AVPQzWP.jpg consider placing it here for better aesthetics
01:58:334 (6) - NC here or unNC here 00:54:766 (1) -
01:58:983 (9,10) - compare them 00:55:415 (4,5,6) - , not same, also i also suggest doing on the latter pattern the same as i suggested before on the former. switch
01:59:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:56:064 (1,2,3,4) - same intensity, different patterning id like to have the beginning a bit easier than the ending
02:04:496 (2,3) - fix blanket
02:05:793 (7) - think i suggested this before on similalr pattern, but making it in 2 circles would be nice already said
02:07:415 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/LCPRGB8.jpg wouldn't placing it here be better looking
02:10:011 (1,2,3,4) - isn't the spacing a bit overboard for 1/4 . Also you stacked 02:10:335 (2,4) - sliderends here (or at least attempted). 02:10:011 (1,3) - but here you didn't even try. i never wanted them to stack also spacing isnt overboard already did same so.. should b fine
02:37:902 - make it clickable pls why when i never did that before
02:39:037 (1,2) - fix blanket
02:39:847 (3) - place it here for better aesthetics http://i.imgur.com/12kblT6.jpg
02:39:847 (3) - reverse it once more and make 02:40:496 - clickable would be stupid
02:51:199 (8) - make it a bit farther from the 3stack and 02:51:199 (8,1) - fix blanket
02:51:523 (1,2) - oh no this blanket needs fixing, needs SERIOUS repair
02:52:496 (1,2) - why dont you just copy paste this one here ^
02:52:983 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - make the blanket better okay i will blanket it!
02:59:307 (6) - NC here
03:04:496 (5,6,7,8) - How about doing this for better flow? http://i.imgur.com/q3b7Swo.jpg
03:05:631 (4,1) - this jump is way too small, and it should be the biggest. 01:03:685 (4,1) - like u did here
03:09:037 (3,4) - fixy blankety
03:09:685 (5) - NC here? 03:10:334 (1) - hier
03:10:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - let me explain what i mean by emphasizing: http://i.imgur.com/aTh4KGn.jpg
Explanation: 03:11:307 - 03:11:469 - these beats follow vocals, intesne vocals, meaning that they should have biggest spacing. 03:11:631 - this is a pickup note, and doesn't have same weight as the previous two, meaning it needs less spacing.
03:14:226 (4) - this one also is kinda strong and could be emphasized by making it more spaced
03:18:766 - I wouldn't ignore this beat, it is strong
03:21:523 (1,3) - blanket fixc
03:22:010 (3,1) - blanket fix
03:22:982 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:15:847 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - literally copy pasted, but the latter has more intensity, fix pls.
03:25:739 (3) - making it into circles would be nice i dont get it.
03:23:956 (1) - Shouldn't this be 3/4?
03:32:388 (3,5,7) - really weird patterning, make 5/7 like 3/5 not weird
03:32:712 (4,6) - should you make it like symmetrical to 03:33:037 (5,7) - it is
maybe i forgot stuff..