This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 19, 2012 at 2:41:11 PM

Artist: Janne Da Arc
Title: Shining ray (TV Size)
Source: ONE PIECE
Tags: Luffy Ruffy Zoro Zolo Nami Sanji Chopper Robin Franky Brook Ace Vivi Crocodile Alabasta Arc Ending Theme 8 Eight Manga Ocean Ray Pirate
BPM: 159.9
Filesize: 12050kb
Play Time: 01:06
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.66 stars, 46 notes)
2. Hard (4.86 stars, 131 notes)
3. Insane (4.95 stars, 171 notes)
4. Normal (3.59 stars, 77 notes)
5. Shining Taiko (4.8 stars, 256 notes)

Download: Janne Da Arc - Shining ray (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Shining ray! Find your brand new way!
Let's paint a story of the future.
By lifting up all our hopes for the new wind to carry, now.

Shining ray! Find your brand new way!
A never ending journey to be together.
I'll chase it anywhere, Shining Ray.

~Latest Update~ June 9th 2012+
Huge thanks to TheVileOne for being my first mod in a long time. I've made good sized changes to Easy and Normal.
+I've given Shining ray more tags.

Difficulty Name: Progress ~ Max Combo
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Easy: 100% ~ 174x
Normal: 100% ~ 184x
Hard: 100% ~ 240x
Insane: 100% ~???x
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Shining Taiko: 120% ~ 251x

Here we go.

[General]:

1. While your offset settings suit you okay, it would be much better if you used offset 56. I don't play or mod taiko (I do take a look and say some stuff sometimes though), but many taiko maps start exactly when any kind of music starts, there is no delay at the start, atleast from what I know.
2. Add "ending" without quotes to tags, as this is an ED from one piece.

[Hard]:

1. AR+2. AR5 is something you would want in a normal diff, with faster notes and this low AR it becomes really hard to read stuff. AR7 fits the map nicely.
2. 00:12:056 (2) - Add a finish to this circle.
3. 00:30:056 (1) - Finish on the start of the slider.
4. 00:32:868 (1,2,3) - Fix these so they look something like this. Currently they look really ugly.
5. 00:36:056 - I think you should map this break, your song is already quite short and there is no real physical need to have a break at all, also there is nice music here you can map.
6. 00:54:618 - I strongly suggest to add a note here. Sounds really good.
7. 01:03:431 - Same here, add a note and place a clap on it.
8. 01:06:056 (1) - Instead of this spinner, have a circle with a finish on this timeline. Move the spinner to 01:06:243 and make it end like it ends currently.

[Normal]:

1. AR+1. AR3 feels kinda slow and you get too much stuff on screen.
2. 00:12:056 (1) - Add a finish on the start of the slider.
3. 00:17:493 (7) - Maybe turn this circle into a slider which ends at 00:17:681? Sounds better and is not really hard. Also put a clap on the end of the slider.
4. 00:30:056 (1) - Finish on the start of the slider.
5. 00:36:056 - Same thing as in your hard, you should map this break.
6. 00:54:618 - Add a note, circle maybe and stack it on top of the previous note. Fix the spacings of the next combo afterwards.
7. 01:06:056 - Just like in Hard, place a circle with a finish here and shift the spinner after it, just don't forget to adjust the spinner end properly.

[Shining Taiko]:

1. I'm no taiko expert but maybe you should just take this as an advice. Use offset 56 for all diffs and start the taiko from the start. Don't forget lead in.

That's about it, a fairly short mod because the map is really short and it looks clean more or less. I strongly suggest to map that break though, the scores seem low as well. Technically the diff spread is alright, so you may not really need an easier diff, but you should take it into consideration because your normal is above 3 stars rated, and in most cases not having a below 3 star rating map is unrankable (there are exceptions obviously).
Hopefully you find this useful, and good luck!

star~

Don't know how to mod taiko >< Sorry~~

[Easy]
00:12:056 (1) - Finish on sliderstart?
00:18:056 (1) - ^
00:24:056 (1) - ^
00:30:056 (1) - ^
00:41:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - For me, something like this fits better imo http://puu.sh/3FM1
00:48:618 (1) - And onward, you're landing on like the 2nd and 4th white tick. I think getting them on the 1st and 3rd tick is better
00:57:056 (2,3,4) - idk, might be a bit fast on [Easy]?
01:01:931 (3,4) - CTRL+H, right now their not really spaced right
01:06:243 (1) - Finish?

[Normal]
This one looks pretty neat The sliders feels a tad bit fast for my tastes, but it's alright I guess~~

00:18:056 (1) - Finish?
00:36:431 - Add note?
00:42:056 (3) - Finish?
01:03:056 (5) - New combo?

[Hard]
00:18:056 (1) - Finish?
00:19:368 (5) - New combo to follow the same pattern as before?
00:24:056 (1) - Finish?
00:25:368 (6) - New combo
00:31:368 (4) - ^
00:35:493 (6,1) - Swap new combo
00:42:056 (2) - Finish
01:06:243 (1) - Remove clap, add finish
01:09:056 (4) - Try add finish on start and endpoint?

Generally this looks nice. Imo [Easy] doesn't play as well as the other 2 diffs, but then again I have no idea how a newbie would do on it xD
Here's a star~~

Easy:
Nothing to say, but:
1.06.243: Let it finish when kiai time finishes too
Normal:
Well, star rating's too high max one for a normal is 3 stars. Sooo... I'm gonna send u this .osu file. It has some corrections, and star rating is rankable. http://puu.sh/3FVX
Hard:
Nothing to say here too. Sorry for my poor mod. STAR

Alright, quick IRC mod before you had to leave, savelog's down there since I couldn't really find anything else on your Taiko, this is actually pretty good map-wise, nice Muzukashii you mapped there, good job. It's true that it could base itself on the drums a bit more, but that's actually quite well done for your first Taiko (I assume it is since you didn't know about the Taiko Guidelines.)


I do not mod the taiko map in itself because I'm bad at it and it's pretty much fine BUT:
00:23:118 (5) - That slider end is snapped to 1/4 which sounds terrible and probably plays too. I'd suggest shortening it (or lengthening it) to a 1/2.
00:49:556 (7) - ^
01:01:556 (7) - ^
01:07:931 (10) - ^

So yeah in a nutshell it's pretty good for your first taiko, and I'd like to encourage you to make more now that you've learned about the Taiko Guidelines, so here's a star for you.

This mod is rather short and shabby, so I'm perfectly fine if you decide not to give me kudosu. Up to you. :p

EDIT: 01:09:243 - Kiai flashes are forbidden in Taiko difficulties, please remove it.

[General]
I always orz at 'ONE PIECE' vs 'One Piece' but whatever :3 (I would suggest 'ONE PIECE')
The song title is 'Shining ray' not 'Shining Ray' Sauce
Actually, the source would be 'ONE PIECE' as official name ;___;

[Shining Taiko]
00:37:368 (6) - Change into slider :3?
00:40:556 - Add slider :3
00:47:306 (5) - Make sure end point is on 1/1 or Taiko tick glitch would be happened like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157171
00:54:431 - Move this Kiai end into 00:54:056 :3
01:09:431 - Delete this Kiai end so 01:09:431 (3) this note would get Kiai bonus :3



Else diffs are fine but since [Insane] is not done ;___;
:3.

:3

Hey :3

[General]

1. Maybe add a video since it's a ending from an anime?

[Insane]

1. It's a bit easy for an Insane imo.
2. 00:23:587 (X) - Add a circle here?
3. 00:43:087 (X) - Add a circle here? I like it more like this^^

[Shining Taiko]

1. I don't really like most of the sliders, but still, nice diff :3

[Hard]

1. AR-1?

[Easy]

1. First part (00:12:056 - 00:40:368) needs moar claps imo :3

Nice map Good luck :3

General
The last and 3rd kiai doesn't fit.


Easy
Nothing much

Normal
Nothing much

Hard
I must be out of practice, nothing really important here

Insane
I'm also not saying any nazis so wtf


solid mapset.

Hello~~

Thank you mod4mod

IMO -> My opinions

General

You combo color are similiar then this will be confused IMO

Some Suggestions
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Easy

I Suggest HP-1or 2 because i did play this and HP drain is littler faster low IMO

01:00:618 (2,3) - Sorry this is litter jump pleasse fix this if you fix carefully fix spacing at 01:02:681 (4,1)

good diff
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Normal

00:15:056 (1) - add finish only begin slider
00:27:056 (1,2) - i can see is insocsiente spacing
00:33:056 (1) - add finish only begin slider
00:33:056 (1,2) - Incosciente spacing
00:38:493 (1) - IMO i not like slider dioginal try curve or something IMO ok
00:54:431 (6) - put new combo and at 00:54:993 (1) - remove new combo

nice
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Hard

00:13:556 (2) - add finish
00:15:056 (2) - add finish only begin slider because i can hear men voice higher start IMO
00:16:556 (2) - ^
00:15:618 (3,4) - IMO Stack i did test play and i did this 100 score hit ever i will like if you unstack this IMO if you fix this you have fix spacing at 00:15:993 (4,1)
00:25:368 (1) - add finish only end slider
00:28:556 (2) - another men voice higher voice that should add finish IMO
00:34:556 (4) - put new combo and at 00:35:493 (1) - remove new combo and 00:36:431 (4) - put new combo this is better combo IMO
00:33:056 (2) - add finish only begin slider
00:53:118 (2,3) - try good blanket? like this http://puu.sh/72fk if you wanna blanket good you have use slider 4 point you can use 3 point but sometime can little weird IMO
00:54:431 (4) - put new combo and at 00:54:993 (1) - remove new combo
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Insane

Can be HP-1 ? IMO

00:13:556 (2) - add finish
00:15:056 (2) - add finish only begin slider
00:16:556 (6) - ^
00:19:556 (1) - ^
00:21:056 (1) - ^
00:25:556 (1) - ^

sorry nazi finish modding because this is fit IMO good dif but combo color are weird by me
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That all i think
Gameplay is everthing so good so STAR !
sorry later because yesterday i very tired for school
good luck

OK, m4m I guess XD

Overall: Good vocal following beatmap!

Easy:
00:49:931(2,3,4)- This is only my opinion, but I would predict that some newbies would not be able to follow this. Up to you then.
00:51:431(4)- New combo, to make it the same as the later part of the map.

Normal:
00:38:493 (1) - From the whole front part, this slider seems to be out of pattern, want to make it symmetric as the others?
00:53:681 (5) - Dangerous trick

Hard: Seems to have no problem

Insane:
00:13:368 (1) - Delete new combo and,
00:13:556 (2) - new combo here?
00:14:868 (1) - Delete new combo and,
00:15:056 (2) - new combo here?
01:08:306 (1) - Delete new combo
01:08:681 (1) - ^

Nice map!

termerys wrote:

OK, m4m I guess XD

Overall: Good vocal following beatmap!

Easy:
00:49:931(2,3,4)- This is only my opinion, but I would predict that some newbies would not be able to follow this. Up to you then. I don't see how I could change this to keep it Easy level.
00:51:431(4)- New combo, to make it the same as the later part of the map. Sure!

Normal:
00:38:493 (1) - From the whole front part, this slider seems to be out of pattern, want to make it symmetric as the others? Fixed it by changing the slider's angle.
00:53:681 (5) - Dangerous trick Not dangerous anymore. This pattern has been replaced with a single slider.

Hard: Seems to have no problem
^_^

Insane:
00:13:368 (1) - Delete new combo and,
00:13:556 (2) - new combo here?
00:14:868 (1) - Delete new combo and,
00:15:056 (2) - new combo here?
I didn't change any of this because of the way the song was sung, each line starts 1/2 a beat early. Thus, following the vocals, my combos are correct.
01:08:306 (1) - Delete new combo
01:08:681 (1) - ^ These I did change though.

Nice map!

Thanks for modding! Sorry for the cruddy mod, I think I was having an off day.

hi
[Easy]

If the stack is better anyway without all

[Normal]

good map

[Hard]

00:56:306 (5) - (4) suggest that the symmetrically
01:00:993 (3,4,5,6) - (3,4,5) to make a triangle, (6) The form of (2) symmetrically

[Insanel]

AR +1?
00:39:618 (5) - I seem to strain this slider. Remake　slider.


Hard and Insane may be more difficult to do.
But I think that a good map.
I hope this was helpful to you!


________________________
-My Pending Map-
Mizuki Nana - Jyunketsu Paradox (TV Size)
Yasunori Mitsuda - Frog's Theme

hi there :3
M4M requested, so there you go ...
[General]
Isn't "Zoro" actually spellt "Zorro"?

[Easy]
00:33:056 (1,1) - Either try to make the spinner shorter or make a bigger gap between spinner and slider
00:45:056 (1,1) - ^

[Shining Taiko]
Set Circle Size to 5
Besides from that, simple but still a nice Taiko map :3

[Hard]
00:33:618 (3) - the Clap at the end of this slider does sound kinda weird :/

the changing clap-patterns kinda irritated me x3

[Insane]
00:16:181 (4) - haven't seen this one at first :/

sorry, but I haven't modded for quite a long time :/
small modpost is small

hi~
thank you m4m request :3

[General]
Shining Ray (TV Size)

[Insane]
00:38:329(x) - add note and stack slider start point
00:56:341(7,8) - not suited. to enlarge by 00:56:716
01:04:596(6) - new combo
01:09:286(2,3) - I think this is better

[Hard]
nothing


[Normal]
01:06:284(1) - change spiner end 01:09:474→01:08:723 and add slider 01:09:099 like this

[Easy]
nothing


good map and song
these are all suggestion
good luck~

Mixagji wrote:

hi~
thank you m4m request :3

[General]
Shining Ray (TV Size)

Fun Fact, the song is actually capitalized Shining ray. No joke. I was using Shining Ray until someone informed me of the mistake.

General:

1. Ends the first kiai time at 00:55:027

Insane:

1. 00:22:382 (1) - If you use a blanket here, it's better. Like this: http://puu.sh/8Jma
2. 00:22:945 (2) to 00:46:209 (3) - If you follow it ^ Select all this beats and distance snap it. I can advise you to move all starting to move the (2) on x412 y92 http://puu.sh/8Jni
3. 00:28:010 (5) - Second waypoint at x124 y236, so you could do a blanket with the next slider. http://puu.sh/8JnA
4. 00:46:585 (1) - I don't like the clap here, remove it? :C
5. 00:49:774 - Add a circle?
6. 00:50:149 - The same^
7. 00:54:089 (5) - Finish
8. 01:05:534 (2) - Fix waypoints in this way plz http://puu.sh/8Jp2

Hard:

1. 00:54:465 (1) - Remove new combo
2. 00:55:027 (3) - New combo here

Normal:

1. Seems k

Easy:

1. 00:58:592 Add circle

That's all, good beatmaps and good luck o/

MOD4MOD thx

[Easy]
too fast Slider Velocity for easy
00:48:648(1,2) - these feel out of place in an easy
00:58:592(4) - ^

[Normal]
too fast Slider Velocity for normal
00:13:001(2) - y:89
00:14:502(4) - x:169
00:19:005(2) - add clap?
00:20:506(4) - ^
00:22:007(2) - ^
00:28:010(2) - too far
00:27:072(1,2) - I feel a bit weird, try making a pattern like this?
00:31:012(2) - x:332 y:189
00:32:513(4) - x:32 y:193
00:36:453 - let's put note
01:00:468 - ^

[Shining Taiko]
sorry I can't taiko

[Hard]
00:17:129(3) - y:192
00:38:142 - let's put note
00:41:144 - ^

[Insane]
I think too few newcombo, so let's put more it !
00:35:315(7) - add newcombo
00:38:142 - let's put note
00:41:144 - ^
01:06:284 - I think spinner is better off without, and put some note and slider


good luck

offset : 70


[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:35:515 (3) - add new combo

[Insane]
00:49:038 (5) - add new combo
00:59:357 (6) - add new combo
01:00:295 (1) - delete new combo
01:01:045 (4) - add new combo
01:06:298 (1) - delete spin and add 1/3 beat?

Following are my personal suggestions:

Easy:
00:43:221 Add a circle here, sounds more coherent

Normal:
perfect

Hard:

00:21:270 out of bound
00:32:903 1 and 3 out of bound
00:38:343 May add a circle here
00:41:345 Sounds better if add two circles, here and 00:41:533
01:06:111 out of bound

Insane:

00:38:343 May add a circle here
00:41:345 Sounds better if add two circles, here and 00:41:533
00:43:409 How about this?

and
add Finish on 3 and 6's slider tails
and
00:44:910 Delete finish
and
00:45:098 Add finish
00:45:660 ^
00:46:223 ^

01:07:987 to 01:09:019 Add timing section here to control the sample volume. It's too loud now, which cover up the small drum sound, I think 25% volume is ok

I think everything's perfect. Good job. Star

In general, I really like this map. I just think that you could use some more hitsounds--mostly claps at the start of Normal and whistles during kiai time. For the whistles, I'll just mention them in [Insane] as a rough guide. Hopefully, this post isn't too confusing to read, but feel free to ignore the more elaborate parts.

[Insane]

Definitely stick with AR8, because it suits the tempo better, distinguishes this from [Hard] and makes that one back-and-forth thing easier to read.

00:17:518 (8,9,10)- I think that this would play and read better as an actual pattern, instead of a back-and forth. With AR7, this actually confused me a little bit, but then I was feeling pretty hazy at the time. Here's what I came up with:


00:36:655 (3)- I would make this slider curve more, so that it doesn't create an overlap. Not a big thing, but then it didn't take me long to modify this. Also, moving (4) away from the slider's end could be nice as well. See here:


00:45:098 (1,2,3)- Finishes and turn this into an actual pattern; preferably, one which rises. Feels like that'd be appropriate for the rising synth strings or whatever they are.

00:48:100- From here, I'd try to use some whistles. I came up with with whistles at the following times:

00:49:600- on the end of (2)
00:50:726- (6)
00:51:664- the entire slider (4)
00:52:602- (1)
00:53:165- the entire slider (3)
00:56:355- start and middle of (6)
00:58:606- start of (5)
00:59:357- the entire slider (1)

Similar pattern for everything up to last spinner and possibly something similar for the other difficulties. I know that this might be a bit overdone, but I felt like being specific, in case you couldn't imagine how the whistles could be applied.

00:59:357 (1)- by the way, associate this with one of the combos around it. I suggest removing the new combo.

[Hard]

I'll also mention whistles here, if only for this slider so that you know what I'm on about.

00:49:600 (3)- This entire slider would be perfect for a whistle.
00:52:602 (1)- Also here and (2)?
01:01:608 (4)- A whistle here would be nice.
01:04:610 (1,2)- Whistles here? They wouldn't sound offensive on the sliders in this map in the slightest imo.
01:09:113 (4)- I'd definitely remove the clap from this.

Everything else is fine.

[Normal]

00:13:015 (2)- Add a clap here and on every similar instance of this. Basically, every red tick after the sliders. I shouldn't need to list everything for this. I assume that you want to save the claps for kiai, but the start sounds pretty bland without them and I already suggested the use of whistles anyway.

[Easy]

00:12:077 (1)- Claps on the ends of these long sliders. Same principle as [Normal].

00:23:709 (4;1)- Finish on slider end; slider start.

00:29:713 (4;1)- Finish on slider end; slider start.

00:37:030 (1)- Clap on end to spice it up and complement the snare.

00:37:405 (2)- Finish on start to spice it up and complement the vocal stress.

[SHIIIINING TAIKO]

Okay, so I decided to suggest a couple of things for this, even though I don't know much about taiko mapping.

00:36:092 (1)- Big don here.

00:56:542 (7)- I don't know if this would flout the sacred authentic TnT rules, but this should be moved 1/4 later.

01:09:113 (1,2,3)- Big dons here.

I could get picky about the placement of other sounds, but I won't.

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Very nice map!

General:
Wow ^^
Cool map ^^
Cannot find many mistakes here.

Easy

00:40:970: MAYBE add a cirle (?)
00:41:345: ^

Normal

00:48:662: (1,2,3) Move 1 to 00:48:850, 2 to 00:49:600 and stretch it to 00:50:351, delete 3 ^^

Taiko

I'm not able to mod Taiko-diffs ;_;

Hard

Can't find anything

Insane

00:49:788: Maybe like this http://puu.sh/ayDr


I'm a Hitsound noob ^^
So I can only mod the mapping ^^
But nice Mapset ^^

Good luck!