• The artist should be 分島花音 "Wakeshima Kanon" and not Asterisk he did the remix but he already have this name in the title
  You can add more tag
  You can go HP6 i think

• 00:00:250 - at 00:11:050 - I'm bit sad that you follow this "bell" sound instead of the song but that's your choice :c
  00:11:221 - at 00:20:650 - I have two complain about this part. First: you didn't add hitsound in this part. And my second complain is that you make this all part with streamand slider 1/4 but i didn't hear something for that
  00:23:564 - I'm okay if you follow the voice but pls make this "bell" sound clickable at least D: And you have a ton of it like 00:26:307 - 00:26:992 -00:29:050- (I'm not going to mention all of them you can check by yourself for that)
  00:23:907 (7,8,9) - not a big fan of this slider overlap, i prefer use somthing like that instead https://puu.sh/v0kLE/333853da39.jpg
  01:04:021 (1,1,1) - Mute the end of your sliders
  01:14:478 (8,9,10) - I don't hear something for a triple here
  01:17:907 (4,5,6) - ^
  01:19:278 - ^
  01:22:364 - ^
  01:24:078 - ^
  01:24:764 - ^
  01:48:935 (3) - ctrl+g ?
  01:45:678 (6) - ^
  03:43:792 (1) - This reverse should be in 1/3 and not in 1/6
  03:46:535 (1) - ^
  04:46:192 (1,1,1) - Mute the end of this three sliders
  04:47:907 (5) - ctrl+g ? I think this slider is more comfortable too take in that way
  04:51:678 (1) - Same as above

Shapy wrote:

[General]

• The artist should be 分島花音 "Wakeshima Kanon" and not Asterisk he did the remix but he already have this name in the title
  You can add more tag
  You can go HP6 i think

ohh.... Thanks!!!!

[:*Rondo_-]

• 00:00:250 - at 00:11:050 - I'm bit sad that you follow this "bell" sound instead of the song but that's your choice :c umm... sryyyyyyy add "bell" hitsound insted of XDXDXD
  00:11:221 - at 00:20:650 - I have two complain about this part. First: you didn't add hitsound in this part. And my second complain is that you make this all part with streamand slider 1/4 but i didn't hear something for that add hitsound. but no change overmap part
  00:23:564 - I'm okay if you follow the voice but pls make this "bell" sound clickable at least D: And you have a ton of it like 00:26:307 - 00:26:992 -00:29:050- (I'm not going to mention all of them you can check by yourself for that) yea, your sugestion so good, but keep for now.
  00:23:907 (7,8,9) - not a big fan of this slider overlap, i prefer use somthing like that instead https://puu.sh/v0kLE/333853da39.jpg sry keep for now.
  01:04:021 (1,1,1) - Mute the end of your sliders ok
  01:14:478 (8,9,10) - I don't hear something for a triple here intentional overmapping. i think no probrem at approval and asterisk remix map
  01:17:907 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
  01:19:278 - ^ ^
  01:22:364 - ^ ^
  01:24:078 - ^ ^
  01:24:764 - ^ ^
  01:48:935 (3) - ctrl+g ? its fine imo. → https://gyazo.com/c61783e49f3721a8e252bd19ba4e46f7
  01:45:678 (6) - ^ ok i feel little bad flow too. change next(1) thanks.
  03:43:792 (1) - This reverse should be in 1/3 and not in 1/6 ok fixed
  03:46:535 (1) - ^ ^
  04:46:192 (1,1,1) - Mute the end of this three sliders ok
  04:47:907 (5) - ctrl+g ? I think this slider is more comfortable too take in that way i see. change flow (not ctrl+g sryxd) → https://gyazo.com/57702290b56b7b24c34970c52b63fd84
  04:51:678 (1) - Same as above yea, change flow (not ctrl+g sryxdxdxd)

Sorry if my mod was a bit short i find the most issue than i can ^^'
Your map is pretty fun to play tho good luck :3

Dubturt wrote:

short mod (cause you asked lol)

(for slider shapes ill mention, make the slider path clearer (could be followed properly)
00:08:478 (1), 00:52:364 (1), 05:30:764 (1) - for this one jsut adjust the tail end, 05:34:878 (1) and this 01:04:707 (1) little change

02:22:021 (3,4,5,6,7) - this could be simplified instead, nothing from the song shows the stream could be like this and also so it could be similar to other streams
oh.. nice
01:54:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - you could divide this stream's NC (can make 9 the NC) ok~
04:39:335 - there is a drum sound here keep for now

well this is it for my short mod (pm me if you want more lol)
fun map

p.s why not make it od8 so it could be really hard : DDDDDDDD (*^^)v

• BG should be 1920x1080 or 1360x768

• 00:52:364 (1) - maybe do so
  01:11:392 (1,2,3,4) - Can be put flow so?
  02:33:850 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Personally, I think that you need to make this part in the form of streams of notes with different space
  04:08:821 (1) - Can make it more beautiful?

makisokk wrote:

Hi my friend
Short mod
[General]

• BG should be 1920x1080 or 1360x768 oh.. I'll change

[:*Rondo_-]

• 00:52:364 (1) - maybe do so littele change
  01:11:392 (1,2,3,4) - Can be put flow so? no but fixed stack
  02:33:850 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Personally, I think that you need to make this part in the form of streams of notes with different space keep for now
  04:08:821 (1) - Can make it more beautiful? ok xD

Sorry for short mod
Good luck with map

cooldude4232 wrote:

From my qu

I honestly couldn't find much wrong with it. It played really well and was lots of fun

you should probably put the hp drain around 7 instead of 6 no because too hard for HR player in case of 7

:*Rondo_-

1. 00:40:365 (7,9) - I would say that these two sliders curves are so low they don't need that middle anchor nice
2. 01:17:050 (1) - ^ ^
3. 01:11:907 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - do something with the changing audio channels similar to what you did here 04:03:335 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3)
   yea, it is true. but i think it is fine.
4. 01:26:821 (2) - I think this slider should have a more special shape to it because the sound it is mapped to is really pronounced ok
5. 01:38:821 (8) - it would flow a bit better if you placed this not like this http://puu.sh/v3ZiQ.jpg little change
6. 01:48:078 (5,6,7) - these should probably be mapped to 1/4 sliders because that's what you did for similar sound in a similar section earlier 01:42:421 (4,5,6,7)
   i want to emphasize 01:48:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - than it.
   Certainly, 01:47:907 (4,5,6,7) - is more suitable for 1/4 slider from a viewpoint of sound.
   But, i want to put 1/4 slider in 01:48:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , so I put circle in 01:47:907 (4,5,6,7) - to take a break before 01:48:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - for player.
   i think it is no problem and fun in testplay.
7. 02:37:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - here you have the stream go from less spaced to more spaced, I think that it would better represent the slowdown if you went from more spaced to less spaced instead little change
8. 02:59:564 (7,8,9,10,1) - there doesn't seem like there's really much justification to up the stream spacing so suddenly ok fixed
9. 04:03:335 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - here I can see you using the left and right placement of the notes to represent the left and right audio channels the vocals are on, and right here 04:05:221 (4,5,6,1,2) the song still kinda does that so I think you should do kinda what you were doing already
   hmmm.... I think 04:05:221 (4,5,6) - is bit different from 04:03:164 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - . 04:05:564 (6) - is better to be clickable, i think.
   keep for now.

GL on rank!

Koalazy wrote:

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2017-03-31 16:50 Asuka_-: こんちゃー　テストプレイお願いしていいですか！？！？！？
2017-03-31 16:50 Koalazy: おｋでーす
2017-03-31 16:50 Asuka_-: あざーす！
2017-03-31 16:50 Asuka_-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1251009 Wakeshima Kanon - World's End, Girl's Rondo(Asterisk DnB Remix)]
2017-03-31 16:51 Koalazy: ﾜｸﾜｸ
2017-03-31 16:51 Asuka_-: ｵﾈｶﾞｲｼﾏｽw
2017-03-31 16:51 Asuka_-: ｸｿﾌ
2017-03-31 16:51 Koalazy: いきましょう
2017-03-31 16:57 Asuka_-: つっよｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
2017-03-31 16:57 Koalazy: なんだか
2017-03-31 16:58 Koalazy: 精度取らなくてもfcしたい
2017-03-31 16:58 Asuka_-: ｗｗｗ
2017-03-31 16:58 Koalazy: 01:11:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - ここがいちばん楽しかった
2017-03-31 16:59 Asuka_-: 精度も俺にとったら十分やったけどな。。ｗ
2017-03-31 16:59 Asuka_-: そこかあああｗ
2017-03-31 16:59 Koalazy: 音楽とのコンビネーションがいい
2017-03-31 16:59 Koalazy: それと
2017-03-31 16:59 Koalazy: 01:54:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ここの連打を
2017-03-31 17:00 Koalazy: 01:54:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - これを近くして01:54:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - これを遠くすれば面白くなりそうです
2017-03-31 17:01 Asuka_-: うぉ。。すごいｗｗ　採用ですわｗ
2017-03-31 17:02 Koalazy: あと、気合タイムにある短いスライダー群
2017-03-31 17:02 Koalazy: 01:48:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - たとえばここ
2017-03-31 17:02 Asuka_-: ほい
2017-03-31 17:02 Koalazy: 何かのパターンをすれば気持ちが良くなりそうＷ
2017-03-31 17:03 Koalazy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7699665
2017-03-31 17:03 Koalazy: だいたいこんな感じ
2017-03-31 17:04 Koalazy: まぁ視覚的にねｗ
2017-03-31 17:04 Asuka_-: 了解ｗ
2017-03-31 17:04 Asuka_-: いやいや　ものすごい助かるわぁ。。ｗ
2017-03-31 17:05 Koalazy: 勝手に意見をたくさん出てしまった；
2017-03-31 17:05 Asuka_-: これ確約はできないけど app目指そうかなーって思ってるから
2017-03-31 17:05 Koalazy: おお
2017-03-31 17:05 Asuka_-: いやいや　違和感あったらどんどんくださいなｗ
2017-03-31 17:05 Koalazy: 違和感じゃないけどね
2017-03-31 17:06 Koalazy: ただもし私だったらこんな感じにするかなーとか

good luck!