[size=85:1337]This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2019年8月11日 at 22:45:22[/size:1337]

[b:1337]Artist:[/b:1337] YURIA
[b:1337]Title:[/b:1337] MAH-JONG
[b:1337]Source:[/b:1337] Neko Go-Shuunen Kinen Soft Mahjong
[b:1337]Tags:[/b:1337] Neko Sound Collection mjw5150
[b:1337]BPM:[/b:1337] 135
[b:1337]Filesize:[/b:1337] 4535kb
[b:1337]Play Time:[/b:1337] 03:27
[b:1337]Difficulties Available:[/b:1337]
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5150 no Sanbaimann =Hard

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good song,good map,good mapper,star this map absolutely!

问题蛮多咧
黄线咧?
音效咧?

你需要找能提高质量的mod 而不是路人mod
I diff 不是很满意

hihi~
一些建議:

[General]
normal和hard的bg因為過于暴露有被戳泡的危險,尤其是normal
224kbps的mp3應該是unrankable的...
另外請將osb文件刪掉吧

[Easy]&[Normal]
雖然這麼說有點失禮,不過感覺這兩個難度完成度實在不高...因此就先大致提一些建議,希望能用得上:
1:多加些音效;就現在而言感覺音效太少了...而這也是unrankable的
2:就算加了音效,clap也要下準;比如easy的00:33:366(1,2,3,4),最后(4)的clap其實應該下在(2)的結尾...請盡量把clap這樣的音效扔在24白線上
3:請盡量規范spacing;尤其是在easy,normal這樣的新手難度,請盡可能避免出現像easy的00:40:477(1,2,3)這樣明顯的spacing差異
4:有些地方note密集,而有些地方卻什麼都沒有;舉例來說,easy的00:49:365 - 00:51:144和00:51:144 - 00:53:810就有很大的差異...這樣會讓你的圖看上去"非常像是新人做的"
5:規范combo數量;easy的combo數量請控制在3-5,normal則為4-7左右

[5150 no Yakuman]
00:06:698(1) - 這slider的開頭用00:04:920(1)的開頭遮一下比較好
00:08:476(3) - new combo.
00:12:032(11) - ^
01:49:143(4) - clap.
01:49:365(6) - ^

[Insane]
有必要AR9嗎...這歌沒有快到那個地步吧
這個難度槽點也不少,還是用建議的方式來mod比較好:
1:需要注意的是如果你根據歌詞map,那麼很多地方會有必要用到藍線;比如00:04:921(1)的結尾就應該落在00:05:254
2:重疊;這個東西對于map的工整性有很大影響,比如00:17:810 (10,11,12)就最好能被00:16:032 (2)重疊,否則看上去太那啥了XD
3:音效;這難度從各種意義上來講音效還是太少,而且說實話N的聲音有點太大了...先把總體音量降到50%上下,在加些clap在24白線吧~起碼這樣聽上去不會像是"沒什麼音效的圖"...
這些都僅僅是最最基本的建議,希望你能夠盡量找著這個方向改...此外:
01:56:810(T) - 這里有個沒用的綠線,請刪掉

加油!

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
一些建議:

[General]
normal和hard的bg因為過于暴露有被戳泡的危險,尤其是normal
224kbps的mp3應該是unrankable的...
另外請將osb文件刪掉吧

[Easy]&[Normal]
雖然這麼說有點失禮,不過感覺這兩個難度完成度實在不高...因此就先大致提一些建議,希望能用得上:
1:多加些音效;就現在而言感覺音效太少了...而這也是unrankable的
2:就算加了音效,clap也要下準;比如easy的00:33:366(1,2,3,4),最后(4)的clap其實應該下在(2)的結尾...請盡量把clap這樣的音效扔在24白線上
3:請盡量規范spacing;尤其是在easy,normal這樣的新手難度,請盡可能避免出現像easy的00:40:477(1,2,3)這樣明顯的spacing差異
4:有些地方note密集,而有些地方卻什麼都沒有;舉例來說,easy的00:49:365 - 00:51:144和00:51:144 - 00:53:810就有很大的差異...這樣會讓你的圖看上去"非常像是新人做的"
5:規范combo數量;easy的combo數量請控制在3-5,normal則為4-7左右

[5150 no Yakuman]
00:06:698(1) - 這slider的開頭用00:04:920(1)的開頭遮一下比較好
00:08:476(3) - new combo.
00:12:032(11) - ^
01:49:143(4) - clap.
01:49:365(6) - ^

[Insane]
有必要AR9嗎...這歌沒有快到那個地步吧
這個難度槽點也不少,還是用建議的方式來mod比較好:
1:需要注意的是如果你根據歌詞map,那麼很多地方會有必要用到藍線;比如00:04:921(1)的結尾就應該落在00:05:254
2:重疊;這個東西對于map的工整性有很大影響,比如00:17:810 (10,11,12)就最好能被00:16:032 (2)重疊,否則看上去太那啥了XD
3:音效;這難度從各種意義上來講音效還是太少,而且說實話N的聲音有點太大了...先把總體音量降到50%上下,在加些clap在24白線吧~起碼這樣聽上去不會像是"沒什麼音效的圖"...
這些都僅僅是最最基本的建議,希望你能夠盡量找著這個方向改...此外:
01:56:810(T) - 這里有個沒用的綠線,請刪掉

加油!

谢谢你的建议
自己确实是作图新手，第一次尝试做这种图，确实犯了很多错误，多谢你的指导
另mp3格式码率貌似没问题，虽然码率很畸形

mod on mod

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
一些建議:

[General]
normal和hard的bg因為過于暴露有被戳泡的危險,尤其是normal 所言很对 很多外国人 特别是 不是 动画宅的那种 他们 那方面的 很那个的
而且 NM的BG 图长宽比例 不对 看起来很不舒服
224kbps的mp3應該是unrankable的...这个MP3文件是VBR 就看文件容量就知道不会是恒定224的比特率 音质和容量 方面肯定是没问题的

另外請將osb文件刪掉吧 这个删不删已经没有规定了 我个人有洁癖 还是赞成删掉的好


[Insane]
有必要AR9嗎...這歌沒有快到那個地步吧 AR9不能接受 在读图方面没有任何帮助 而且违和度满载 建议降到7 不错

00:14:921 (12) - 后面加两个note 是不是节奏更完整一点呢 后面还有很多这种类似的地方

00:41:144 (4) - cancel this note 这里跟歌词感觉好很多

00:50:477 (13) - add this note & 00:50:699 (14) - added 注意节奏的完整性

这个....
这样来说吧 注意下 某些节奏的完整性 和 一些地方 的节奏感的体现 比如说
01:55:144 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 如个地方 10 的节奏就很鸡肋 不如删掉 跟歌词 之后的那个slider延续下 节奏就挺好的
总体来说 加上一些后缀的note 和删掉一些鸡肋的note 会使你的图的节奏感体现得更好

还有
02:22:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串 肯定不合剧情 换节奏

音效方面 可以参考一下mjw的 他那个很不错

加油! 再加油

nice~不过我这渣技术怎么玩都不能FC啊><
mjw你就是个hentai啊

N的BG换成男人了 再也不怕吐槽了

先STAR再说
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STAR
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STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR

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Thank you mod request!

All of them just a suggestion



Nice map~!!

[General]

• Source: Neko Go-Shuunen Kinen Soft Mahjong (full romaji title name of the game)
  
  Tags: Neko Sound Collection mjw5150
  
  Remove all countdowns since they aren't used?

[Eazy]

Slider velocity is too high imo..try 1.0?

The volume is so low tht I can't hear the hitsounds...try 70%~90%? ... Also...you'd better have more hitsounds...

Err...why don't you map something at these parts...

1. 00:45:810~00:47:588
2. 00:49:365~00:51:143
3. 01:48:032~01:49:810
4. 02:12:921~02:23:588
   
   01:34:699 (4,1) - Spacing.
   01:56:474 (1) - break instead of spinner, or follow pattern at 00:56:477 (1)? next note is too close to this spinner...
   02:14:254 (X) - add note?
   02:16:032 (X) - ^
   02:17:810 (X) - ^
   02:19:588 (X) - ^
   02:21:365 (X) - ^
   02:23:143 (X) - ^

[Normal]

what the f@ck is this BG ._.

The volume is so low tht I can't hear the hitsounds...try 70%~90%? ... Also...you'd better have more hitsounds...

• 00:07:144 (6) - Extend this slider for 1/2 beat?
  00:14:255 (5) - Remove the reverse and extend this for 1/2 beat?
  02:12:921 (1) - straighten this slider?
  02:18:699 (2) - Move right for a little?

[5150 no Yakuman]

hmm, you'd better use AR7 or higher...some parts are hard to read like 02:09:365 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5)..

• 00:14:698 (7) - Move to here?
  00:51:143 (4) - New combo?
  00:55:143 (2,3) - I prefer not to stack these...make a simple symmetry like this
  00:57:365 (3) - New combo here to show the slow down like 01:56:032 (1) ?
  01:28:477 (1,2,3) - Hard to read ._. especially in AR6
  01:37:365 (5) - New combo?
  02:27:143~02:40:921 - this diff is a hard, right? is there any reason for this insane part?
  02:44:254 (4) - ._. why jump+stack...make just like this ?
  02:47:810 (4) - ^
  03:11:588 (6) - New combo?

[Insane]

• 01:00:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read. make a symmetry like this?
  01:37:810 (8,10) - 10 isn't perfectly stacked
  01:44:477 (7) - err..intentional? I mean...spacing?

鬼畜玩家对这种懒B卖萌送分行为表示强烈谴责

音效和摆法这么简单根本没法mod啊(掀桌

fxed~~thx for your mod
just very lazy in summer holiady lol

Sorry to late mod.

[Easy]

1. 02:10:699 (3,1) - It's hard for newbie to read imo.

[Normal]

• 
  Some of sound pattern are kinda random, but overall mapset is good.

1. 02:50:254 (1) - Replace whistle with finish?

[Hard]

1. 00:14:699 (3) - Change it to slider, and add finish at the end?
   
2. 01:13:365 (3) - ^

[Insane]

• 
  Why is countdown enabled?

1. 00:03:810 (x) - Add a note?
2. 00:58:255 (1) - Add whistle as well as 01:58:255 (6)?
3. 01:00:032 (1) - Add finish?
4. 01:01:365 (6) - Add whistle?
5. 01:58:699 (1) - Add finish at the start of slider?
6. Why aren't there two-beat-clap sound pattern in 2nd and 3rd KIAI?
7. 02:56:477 (x) - How about adding spinner here? If so, end it at 02:58:699.
8. 02:59:144 (1) - Add finish?

Very clear mapset~
Good luck~

Suzully wrote:

Sorry to late mod.

[Easy]

1. 02:10:699 (3,1) - It's hard for newbie to read imo.

[Normal]

• 
  Some of sound pattern are kinda random, but overall mapset is good.

1. 02:50:254 (1) - Replace whistle with finish?

[Hard]

1. 00:14:699 (3) - Change it to slider, and add finish at the end?
   [attachment=0:80512]screenshot125.jpg[/attachment:80512]
2. 01:13:365 (3) - ^

[Insane]

• 
  Why is countdown enabled?

1. 00:03:810 (x) - Add a note?
2. 00:58:255 (1) - Add whistle as well as 01:58:255 (6)?
3. 01:00:032 (1) - Add finish?
4. 01:01:365 (6) - Add whistle?
5. 01:58:699 (1) - Add finish at the start of slider?
6. Why aren't there two-beat-clap sound pattern in 2nd and 3rd KIAI?
7. 02:56:477 (x) - How about adding spinner here? If so, end it at 02:58:699.
8. 02:59:144 (1) - Add finish?

Very clear mapset~
Good luck~

thx a lot

Hi Nymph here and request from my mod queue~

General:
Source are not the same, please check them.
Tags are not the same too, please check.

Easy:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:15:588 - maybe drag the breaktime to let it starts here?
01:14:254 (7) - add a note with finish?
01:56:032 (4) - maybe add a break after here?

Beatmap design/suggestion
02:26:699 - I suggest to add a note here? and with finish hitsound.
02:27:144 - ^
02:44:032 - add a note here? feel empty.
02:47:143 - ^
02:47:588 - ^
03:27:588 - maybe add a note with finish here?

Hitsound
02:59:144 (1) - finish on the head of this slider?
03:06:255 (1) - ^
03:13:366 (1) - ^
03:20:477 (1) - ^


Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
01:56:032 (4) - same as easy. won't mention about this again~
01:14:254 (7) - same as easy.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:46:254 - add a note here? don't make it so empty =.=
00:46:699 - ^
00:50:254 - ^
00:50:699 - ^
01:45:365 - ^
01:48:921 - ^
01:49:365 - ^
02:44:032 - ^
02:47:588 - ^
02:48:032 - ^
03:27:588 - ^
...so many add note suggestion...

Hitsound
00:35:588 (4) - I suggest to delete the finish on the slider tail, just feel a little werid that 2 finishs together, kinda of loud.


5150 Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
03:27:588 - still suggest to add a note with finish here.
Hitsound
nothing to complain, just suggest maybe you can use some more finish. Sometimes whistles are not strong enough.


Insane:
Beatmap design/suggestion
02:56:477 (1) - all 1/2 beats after this spinner? add some 1/4 will fit very well. add some more claps here too? this is the last kiai, you should make here more excited.
03:27:588 -
Hitsound
01:01:365 (6) - whistle is better imo, finish is too early to use here.
01:03:143 (11) - actually I think clap is better here. clap with finish is not very good here imo...
01:14:254 (9) - =.= again I think the finish should be here... this is the heavy beat, but no note here.. Sorry for keep saying things like this, just personal opinion, won't be montioned again.
02:00:255 (6) - weird finish here..maybe delete it?
02:01:810 (12) - shouldn't have a clap on the tail of this slider...clap on 11 is better, just like what you did before.
02:08:699 (11,12) - ^
03:13:366 (2) - suggest finish here.


that is all I think. then good luck! have my star.

顺便跟SELEE吐槽一下 =A= 真是够简单的...