I love this song so much that I even made a mania map of it
[Normal]
00:33:311 (1) - I am not ok with those multiple reverses because it was once a nightmare for me when I started playing osu
[Sergio's Hard]
00:06:479 (5,1) - I think you might need a larger spacing here (cymbal sound)
00:18:312 (6) - 3/4 slider might be a better choice? That sound here is long.
01:13:312 (1,2,3) - Hmm wont they need larger spacing?
For the second part of Kiai I think it is better to make the rhythm harder? For now it is so simple with only 1/1s and 1/2s I think adding some 1/4 would be great because the second kiai is the most intense part within this song.
01:39:312 - 01:41:979 - and so on: Missing note?
[Insane]
01:36:895 - You might consider adding a 1/4 note here, for drum sound.
[Brightness]
01:20:395 (5) - unsnapped?
00:54:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Look at those huge and not cute 1/4s, they should not appear in such a calm section! They are even more intense than 00:11:979 (1) - and even Kiai!
[Normal]
00:33:311 (1) - I am not ok with those multiple reverses because it was once a nightmare for me when I started playing osu
[Sergio's Hard]
00:06:479 (5,1) - I think you might need a larger spacing here (cymbal sound)
00:18:312 (6) - 3/4 slider might be a better choice? That sound here is long.
01:13:312 (1,2,3) - Hmm wont they need larger spacing?
For the second part of Kiai I think it is better to make the rhythm harder? For now it is so simple with only 1/1s and 1/2s I think adding some 1/4 would be great because the second kiai is the most intense part within this song.
01:39:312 - 01:41:979 - and so on: Missing note?
[Insane]
01:36:895 - You might consider adding a 1/4 note here, for drum sound.
[Brightness]
01:20:395 (5) - unsnapped?
00:54:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Look at those huge and not cute 1/4s, they should not appear in such a calm section! They are even more intense than 00:11:979 (1) - and even Kiai!