sana - Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief · forum

Lokidoki

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Lokidoki 2017-03-24T17:53:12+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 11 апреля 2018 г. at 12:52:03

Artist: sana
Title: Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief
Tags: sayounara hanadoroubou san mel vocaloid cover hatsune miku flower _dt3 turtle polkamocha veridian asaiga (un)sentimental spica
BPM: 170
Filesize: 3115kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:

Asaiga's Hard (3,12 stars, 251 notes)
Collab Easy (1,53 stars, 140 notes)
Polka's Normal (2,02 stars, 146 notes)
Sayonara (4,49 stars, 307 notes)

Download: sana - Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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sana map
18+ lyrics
Sayonara - me
Insane - nyu -
Hard - Asaiga
Normal - PolkaMocha
Easy - _DT3 and me

nyu's insane

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60827
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
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[Metadata]
Title:Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief
TitleUnicode:さようなら、花泥棒さん
Artist:sana
ArtistUnicode:鎖那
Creator:Lokidoki
Version:nyu's Insane
Source:
Tags:sayounara hanadoroubou san mel vocaloid cover hatsune miku flower _dt3 turtle polkamocha asaiga nyu_- nyu cookiekivi (un)sentimental spica
BeatmapID:1392321
BeatmapSetID:590092

[Difficulty]
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Last edited by Lokidoki 2018-04-11T05:52:20+00:00, edited 51 times in total.

Kyouren

5,583 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-03-25T16:30:17+00:00

sana <3

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-04-01T19:38:48+00:00

Osu has enough Sana

Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Lokidoki 2017-04-02T09:34:24+00:00

nextplay wrote:
Osu has enough Sana

why you so mean? ;w;

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2017-04-16T17:16:17+00:00

didnt you say i should map the extra öwö

Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Lokidoki 2017-04-17T10:49:37+00:00

nyu - wrote:
didnt you say i should map the extra öwö

that was for a different map ;w;

PandaHero

662 posts

Joined November 2011

PandaHero 2017-04-17T17:28:39+00:00

Osu needs more Mirash

polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2017-04-18T21:15:43+00:00

gd

osu file format v14

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Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Lokidoki 2017-04-19T10:57:01+00:00

PolkaMocha wrote:

gd

osu file format v14

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ty~

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-04-22T16:27:50+00:00

Collab Easy

need hitsounds ;_;
00:26:238 (4,1) - misblanket
00:49:180 (4) - visually, DS is off
00:51:650 (4) - nudge this like 2px to the left
00:58:709 (2,3) - 1/2 sliders not recommended for Easy as they are too short for new players. Consider replacing this with a 1/1 slider?

Polka's Normal

00:02:238 (3) - and 00:04:356 (1) - perhaps stack these? same could apply for 00:05:768 (3) - and 00:04:003 (4) -
00:10:003 (1) - finish on slider head? drum cymbal crash audible in music
00:43:532 (4) - remove finish? that hihat in the music is actually on the red tick. also because you didn't finish at 00:32:238 (4) -

Mirash's Hard

00:03:297 (3,4) - manually move this? stacking in osu makes this look weird
00:04:709 (2,3) - the way you space this section of music is pretty inconsistent. It's spaced here but not at 00:07:532 (2,3) - until 00:16:003 (2,3) - where it's spaced again. perhaps space them all since the majority of these instances have them spaced
00:27:297 (2) - perhaps a 1/2 slider then 1/1 slider instead? that drum sound on the first red tick should be clickable imo since it's rather prominent in the music. applies for next upcoming ones too like 00:32:944 (1) - , 00:41:415 (1) - , etc.
00:32:944 (1) - whistle? as you have done so at 00:44:238 (1) -
00:41:415 (1) - whistle? as you have done so at 00:30:474 (3) -
00:50:944 (2) - I don't agree with these types of extended sliders as there is a prominent beat on the red tick. consider shortening to 1/2? ones like 00:49:532 (1) - and 00:52:356 (2) - are ok though since the red tick isn't that loud
00:59:238 (5) - space this out a bit more? spacing at 00:58:885 (4,5) - can be misread as 1/2 rhythm
01:17:768 (1,2,3) - imo spacing at 2-3 should be larger than 1-2 since 3 has the more significant beat
01:31:180 (3,4,5,6,7) - too difficult imo, you didn't have streams before this (albeit the music didn't provide a chance for streams). consider changing to two repeat sliders instead

Sayounara

00:04:356 (1,2,3) - this is like the only time you follow that "rrerrr" instrument. imo it would be ideal to follow it for all instances but the rest of the time it comes up in the diff, you don't follow it as shown at 00:07:180 (1) - , 00:08:591 (1) - , etc. perhaps not follow it here too for consistency
00:09:297 (3,4) - doesn't make sense to give circle 4 that much spacing imo, the sound on that tick isn't that strong
00:37:885 (4,1) - perhaps stack slider 4 tail to slider 1 head? you kinda established that spacing to be 1/2 with instances such as 00:36:827 (1,2) -
00:48:827 (1) - space this out? doesn't make sense to stack this imo since the percussion is rather prominent
01:06:474 (1) - give more spacing? same reason as ^
01:23:150 (4) - overmapped, percussion not present to support it
01:27:827 (2,4,5) - looks like you were aiming for something like this. consider readjusting it slightly
you need to use the finish addition hitsound more often at places where it'll fit nicely due to drum cymbal crashes in the music like at 01:00:827 (1) - , 01:12:121 (1) - , etc. current hitsounding is rather lackluster ;(

good luck!

Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Lokidoki 2017-04-22T17:16:01+00:00

Rizen wrote:
Collab Easy
need hitsounds ;_;
00:26:238 (4,1) - misblanket
00:49:180 (4) - visually, DS is off
00:51:650 (4) - nudge this like 2px to the left
00:58:709 (2,3) - 1/2 sliders not recommended for Easy as they are too short for new players. Consider replacing this with a 1/1 slider?
yup yup all fixed

Sayounara
00:04:356 (1,2,3) - this is like the only time you follow that "rrerrr" instrument. imo it would be ideal to follow it for all instances but the rest of the time it comes up in the diff, you don't follow it as shown at 00:07:180 (1) - , 00:08:591 (1) - , etc. perhaps not follow it here too for consistency
00:09:297 (3,4) - doesn't make sense to give circle 4 that much spacing imo, the sound on that tick isn't that strong but (3) provides a lot of feedback for a bigger jump there, so it wouldn't ruin the flow too much, i'll keep it as it is for now
00:37:885 (4,1) - perhaps stack slider 4 tail to slider 1 head? you kinda established that spacing to be 1/2 with instances such as 00:36:827 (1,2) - I moved it a bit the other way around so it shouldn't feel like a 1/2 now
00:48:827 (1) - space this out? doesn't make sense to stack this imo since the percussion is rather prominent This was meant to be a change of movement, so it wouldn't make the map that much unreadable, plus this is what i like to follow in my style as well
01:06:474 (1) - give more spacing? same reason as ^ This is a part on which i can almost agree, but i tried to lower the spacing as it moved from 01:05:062 (1) - you can see the spacing going down bit by bit
01:23:150 (4) - overmapped, percussion not present to support it i haven't used much jumps with a pattern of a note - triple - note before so it just feels natural to put a curved stream there. But this is very much, noted.
01:27:827 (2,4,5) - looks like you were aiming for something like this. consider readjusting it slightly
you need to use the finish addition hitsound more often at places where it'll fit nicely due to drum cymbal crashes in the music like at 01:00:827 (1) - , 01:12:121 (1) - , etc. current hitsounding is rather lackluster ;( i'm rather terrible at hitsounding, but i mixed in a few finishes here and there
unreplied = fixed
good luck!

Thanks a bunch, Rizen!~

Mirash

Beatmap Nominator

705 posts

Joined June 2013

Mirash 2017-04-22T18:18:11+00:00

thx Rizen

Mirash's Hard

00:03:297 (3,4) - manually move this? stacking in osu makes this look weird
00:04:709 (2,3) - the way you space this section of music is pretty inconsistent. It's spaced here but not at 00:07:532 (2,3) - until 00:16:003 (2,3) - where it's spaced again. perhaps space them all since the majority of these instances have them spaced variety in spacing isn't bad, since it is hard, people will learn aiming faster
00:27:297 (2) - perhaps a 1/2 slider then 1/1 slider instead? that drum sound on the first red tick should be clickable imo since it's rather prominent in the music. applies for next upcoming ones too like 00:32:944 (1) - , 00:41:415 (1) - , etc. i like how it follow vocals here
00:32:944 (1) - whistle? as you have done so at 00:44:238 (1) -
00:41:415 (1) - whistle? as you have done so at 00:30:474 (3) -
00:50:944 (2) - I don't agree with these types of extended sliders as there is a prominent beat on the red tick. consider shortening to 1/2? ones like 00:49:532 (1) - and 00:52:356 (2) - are ok though since the red tick isn't that loud following vocals here, want to keep non kiais simple so no triplets here
00:59:238 (5) - space this out a bit more? spacing at 00:58:885 (4,5) - can be misread as 1/2 rhythm
01:17:768 (1,2,3) - imo spacing at 2-3 should be larger than 1-2 since 3 has the more significant beat i like that, players will snap at (3) so it has enough emphasize
01:31:180 (3,4,5,6,7) - too difficult imo, you didn't have streams before this (albeit the music didn't provide a chance for streams). consider changing to two repeat sliders instead i think that hard diff should represent such rhythms and i dont like two reverses here, i'll keep

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polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2017-04-29T17:06:24+00:00

Rizen wrote:
Polka's Normal
00:02:238 (3) - and 00:04:356 (1) - perhaps stack these? same could apply for 00:05:768 (3) - and 00:04:003 (4) - First one goes out of screen. The second one doesnt stack because its a circle from a star pattern and a circle from a right triangle pattern.
00:10:003 (1) - finish on slider head? drum cymbal crash audible in music okay.
00:43:532 (4) - remove finish? that hihat in the music is actually on the red tick. also because you didn't finish at 00:32:238 (4) - True.
[/notice]

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TitleUnicode:さようなら、花泥棒さん
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meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2017-04-29T23:14:11+00:00

as you requested via PM

[general]
speaking about metadata it isn't correct. firstly Sana is always written as sana http://puu.sh/vAhOG/8447eee9d0.png and also the title doesn't really have the official english translation so the title should be Sayounara, Hana Dorobou-san the english one can be moved to tags http://sanapri.com/?page_id=17 https://puu.sh/vAi2U/0414f2f8f4.png
(un)sentimental spica can be added to tags since it is the album from where the song got released
in easy the artist unicode and title unicode look like this: РіРѓвЂўРівЂљв‚¬РіРѓвЂ РіРѓР„РівЂљвЂ°РіР‚РѓРёР‰В±Р¶С–ТђР¶Р€вЂ™РіРѓвЂўРівЂљвЂњ // РіРѓвЂўРіРѓР„ which is inconsistent throughout all diffs so the artist should be さな and the title さようなら、花泥棒さん
idk why all diffs have countdown except polka's normal it's pretty useless so better disable the countdown
N D and S samples in timing panel? it means that the hitsounds from your map's folder aren't even used so set them all to D:C2 in order to use the hitsounds from your maps's folder also soft-hitwhistle2 can be drum-hitwhistle 2 instead
the volume is too low and the hitobjects are barely audible so you have to increase the volume to 50 - 60% at all diffs in order to make the hitobjects audible
disable widescreen support there's no any sb or video

[collab easy]
00:01:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this whole section is NOT hitsounded therefore it feels kinda empty without hitsounds you must add hitsounds here in order to fullfill
00:31:180 (3) - the hitclap doesn't sound really good on its tail so better remove it // 00:36:827 (3) - same goes here // 00:42:474 (3) - // 00:52:356 (1) - and so on
00:52:356 (1,2) - i don't like this rhythm choice here because on 00:53:062 - there's the new stanza and it would be nice to have it clickable then a sliderend imo which would fit better the song tbh https://puu.sh/vAnCN/977e7dcc73.jpg
01:00:121 (4) - remove the whistle from sliderbody it doesn't even fit ;w;
01:10:356 (3) - here would be much better to start with a circle so it would follow the vocal properly imo http://puu.sh/vAnSw/18cef9c76a.jpg // 01:21:650 (2,3) - same here but you have just to ctrl+g them

mostly lack of hitsound on this diff ;_;

[polka's normal]
why 100%? it sounds pretty loud tbh set the volume to 50-60% to fit the song's pace
00:43:532 (4) - remove the hitfinish because there's no any cymbal here and replace it with hitclap as you did before
00:51:650 (1) - remove the nc since you added nc after every two beats
01:00:121 (1) - ^
01:00:827 (1) - idk how to say that but for a normal it could be frustating to click many circles in row tbh you can map this section as 1/1 note + 1/1 note + 1/1 slider than many 1/1 notes in row // 01:03:650 (1) - same here // 01:12:121 (1) - // 01:14:944 (1) -
01:10:003 (2,3) - tbh the flow seems to be a bit...forced...ctrl+g'ing 01:10:709 (3) - would give a nice flow than before and a nice playability

nice diff

[mirash's hard]
00:14:591 (2) - maybe space them more? because of the high intensity of the song some players might confuse this one with triplets
00:32:415 (6) - i would like to have 00:32:591 - clickable than a sliderend so it will give more emphasis to the vocal so the rhythm would be 1/2 note plus 1/2 slider in order to give more emphasis to the vocal and also to make the piano clickable than a sliderend https://puu.sh/vAp4P/75bec5373d.jpg // 00:43:709 (5) - same here // 00:43:709 (6) -
00:33:827 (1) - the nc isn't supposed to be here
00:39:474 (1,2) - i don't think this rhythm fits at all because that beat from that big 1/1 tick is pretty dominant and needs to be clickable than a sliderend imo so having a rhythm like this https://puu.sh/vApIq/935e5f697b.jpg would follow the song properly and also it will give more emphasis to the dominant beat which is also the new stanza
00:42:297 (1) - remove nc it looks like you're going to overuse the ncs
00:45:121 (1) - ^
00:54:121 - that hihat is pretty dominant and it needs more emphasis imo so this rhythm should work in order to make that dominant hihat clickable http://puu.sh/vAqfJ/4eecc323af.jpg
00:58:885 (4,5,6) - maybe space them more? some players might confuse it with a regular square pattern
01:10:003 - missing 1/1 note? there the beat is pretty dominant and you just slightly ignore it a 1/1 note would give more emphasis to that dominant beat than nothing
01:11:415 (1,2,3) - better space them more because these 3 circles are followed by triplets and some players might confuse them with triplets which would be for them double triplets
01:13:885 (1) - remove nc and same for 01:14:591 (1) - tho
01:28:356 - missing 1/1 note perhaps since the vocal is very intensified and needs more emphasis than nothing

[nyu's insane]
from my q lol xD
HP Drain 0?? Set it to 6 for instance
00:03:297 (3,4) - maybe spacing them more? on 00:03:650 (4) - the vocal is getting more intensive and it lacks of emphasis imo so spacing them more wouldn't hurt
00:04:003 (5,1) - unproper stack
00:04:356 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole section is pretty monotonous i mean you mapped only 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + 1/1 slider +1/2 note in row also at 00:14:591 (2,3) - the hihats are pretty intensive and they lack of emphasis because of monotonous mapping try to change the rhythm a bit throughtout the whole section than repeating and repeating the same rhythm http://puu.sh/vCpEE/5c89f3ace4.jpg -> for 00:14:238 (1,2,3,4) - // https://puu.sh/vCpL7/de165f3de3.jpg -> for 00:05:768 (1,2,3,4) - and so on
00:28:356 (5,6) - idk why this jump is meant for i don't see that the guitar is very intensive so this jump is kinda "useless" let's say so why don't you make a jump between 00:28:003 (4) - and 00:28:356 (5) - instead? the vocal is intensive and that jump would give some emphasis tbh // 00:34:003 (5,6) - same goes here tho
for sliders like 00:30:827 (4) - you can replace with two notes instead because of the stronger hihats which needs more emphasis than that
00:37:532 (3) - this 1/1 sliders slightly ignores the hihats which is not really good i would replace this 1/1 slider with 3 notes instead for giving more emphasis to the hihats http://puu.sh/vCqeO/243a6f7313.jpg
00:41:062 (1,2,3,4) - i don't really like how this pattern flows imo you can try a pattern like this one for a better flow and movement of the cursor https://puu.sh/vCqtu/c6a3ab6746.jpg
00:49:180 (1,1) - instead of having an "useless" 1/2 stack why don't you stack 00:49:532 (1) - from its tail to give more emphasis to the cymbal?
00:49:532 - // 00:58:003 - i don't really like how you left this whole gap empty there are still hihats and another instruments which wants emphasis not being slightly ignored so would be better to map this whole gap
01:01:180 (1,1,1) - even if you used 3/4 sliders it doesn't mean that you have to overuse the ncs so remove the ncs from 01:01:532 (1,1) - // 01:04:003 (1,1,1) - same goes here // 01:12:121 (1,1,1,1) - and so on
01:10:356 (4,3) - due to really low stack leniency the player might misread 01:11:062 (3) - so better unstack both of them
01:31:180 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - this one plays a little tho hard in comparison with Sayounara diff imo try to reduce the note density of this pattern if possible

lacks of emphasis and jumps

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[sayounara]
00:04:356 (1) - the instruments are pretty intensive here and they need more emphasis and this 1/1 slider doesn't give so much emphasis so would be good a rhythm like 1/2 slider + 1/1 or viceversa note in order to give more emphasis to the instruments than nothing http://puu.sh/vCrIH/11645c9c37.jpg // 00:07:180 (1) - same applies here // 00:08:591 (1) - and so on
00:27:650 (3) - blanket xd
01:01:180 (2,3) - spacing them more? the vocal is pretty intensive and a jump would give more emphasis to the intensive vocal imo // 01:12:474 (2,3) - same goes here
01:11:768 (4) - tbh i feel like this 1/2 slider doesn't work at all because the hihats are becoming more and more intensive and also noticeable so a rhythm like this one would work and would give more emphasis to the hihats http://puu.sh/vCsi0/21ff4e35d5.jpg
01:14:062 (4,5) - what happened with this spacing? with this low spacing the players would get frustated and also confused so better space them more
01:22:356 (1) - remove nc to avoid any nc inconsistencies
01:24:474 (5) - i think you exaggerated a bit when you tried to curve this slider try to curve it less so it will look much better visually speaking
01:28:268 - maybe put an 1/4 note here? the hihats are calling for doublets here imo
01:30:474 (1) - with this 1/1 slider it sounds pretty weird and lame imo if you listen carefully the vocal for improving the rhythm here you need an 1/2 slider + 1/1 note to follow the vocal more properly than before
01:31:180 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this one sounds a bit lame tho try to fix the rhythm like in the image below it would follow the hihats more properly tbh http://puu.sh/vCsGG/b1ccdaf432.jpg

needs some work especially on nyu's insane and sayounara diff in rest everything is good
gl!

Last edited by meii18 2017-05-01T20:52:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Lokidoki 2017-04-30T14:58:42+00:00

fixed stuff concerning metadata, going to find someone to confirm it
will be back for hs and stuff later

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

_DT3 2017-04-30T20:21:07+00:00

About the things on my diff, I think the current rhythm fits more because in the kiai I wanted to leave the three 1/1-clickable patterns exclusive to 01:02:944 (4,5,1) - etc. I did change the rhythm on the first to be like the second one though. Thanks for modding ByBy!
@Lokidoki: I'm going to send the whole .osu, so please fix your parts after I do or notify me whenever you do =3=

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polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2017-05-01T01:28:10+00:00

ByBy wrote:
[polka's normal]
why 100%? it sounds pretty loud tbh set the volume to 50-60% to fit the song's pace reduced thx
00:43:532 (4) - remove the hitfinish because there's no any cymbal here and replace it with hitclap as you did before There wasnt one there that was the music. But since theres one in the music, now I have a finish there instead of a clap
00:51:650 (1) - remove the nc since you added nc after every two beats Emphasizing vocals
01:00:121 (1) - ^ ^
01:00:827 (1) - idk how to say that but for a normal it could be frustating to click many circles in row tbh you can map this section as 1/1 note + 1/1 note + 1/1 slider than many 1/1 notes in row // 01:03:650 (1) - same here // 01:12:121 (1) - // 01:14:944 (1) -
01:10:003 (2,3) - tbh the flow seems to be a bit...forced...ctrl+g'ing 01:10:709 (3) - would give a nice flow than before and a nice playability Fits the vocals very nicely. Sliders would kill the emphasis. No ty. Also appearance > flow to me. So as long as it looks nice, im happy ouo

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Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2017-05-03T17:27:27+00:00

ByBy wrote:
as you requested via PM

[nyu's insane]
from my q lol xD
HP Drain 0?? Set it to 6 for instance you know.. this thing was officially a joke diff uwu
00:03:297 (3,4) - maybe spacing them more? on 00:03:650 (4) - the vocal is getting more intensive and it lacks of emphasis imo so spacing them more wouldn't hurt focussing on bg music
00:04:003 (5,1) - unproper stack whoops
00:04:356 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole section is pretty monotonous i mean you mapped only 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + 1/1 slider +1/2 note in row also at 00:14:591 (2,3) - the hihats are pretty intensive and they lack of emphasis because of monotonous mapping try to change the rhythm a bit throughtout the whole section than repeating and repeating the same rhythm http://puu.sh/vCpEE/5c89f3ace4.jpg -> for 00:14:238 (1,2,3,4) - // https://puu.sh/vCpL7/de165f3de3.jpg -> for 00:05:768 (1,2,3,4) - and so on since this section is really monotonous and such stuff, i would love to keep it.. if its really that boring and stuff ill change it.
00:28:356 (5,6) - idk why this jump is meant for i don't see that the guitar is very intensive so this jump is kinda "useless" let's say so why don't you make a jump between 00:28:003 (4) - and 00:28:356 (5) - instead? the vocal is intensive and that jump would give some emphasis tbh // 00:34:003 (5,6) - same goes here tho
for sliders like 00:30:827 (4) - you can replace with two notes instead because of the stronger hihats which needs more emphasis than that id like to keep this, the sliders fit pretty well with the vocals buuut.. ill make the jump a bit smaller
00:37:532 (3) - this 1/1 sliders slightly ignores the hihats which is not really good i would replace this 1/1 slider with 3 notes instead for giving more emphasis to the hihats http://puu.sh/vCqeO/243a6f7313.jpg fixu
00:41:062 (1,2,3,4) - i don't really like how this pattern flows imo you can try a pattern like this one for a better flow and movement of the cursor https://puu.sh/vCqtu/c6a3ab6746.jpg imo it flows very nice owo
00:49:180 (1,1) - instead of having an "useless" 1/2 stack why don't you stack 00:49:532 (1) - from its tail to give more emphasis to the cymbal?
00:49:532 - // 00:58:003 - i don't really like how you left this whole gap empty there are still hihats and another instruments which wants emphasis not being slightly ignored so would be better to map this whole gap ya ik fix
01:01:180 (1,1,1) - even if you used 3/4 sliders it doesn't mean that you have to overuse the ncs so remove the ncs from 01:01:532 (1,1) - // 01:04:003 (1,1,1) - same goes here // 01:12:121 (1,1,1,1) - and so on ya
01:10:356 (4,3) - due to really low stack leniency the player might misread 01:11:062 (3) - so better unstack both of them
01:31:180 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - this one plays a little tho hard in comparison with Sayounara diff imo try to reduce the note density of this pattern if possible ya

lacks of emphasis and jumps ( uwu

gl!

ty for modding owo
sorry if i didnt reply to everything but im sure i either fixed or denied it òuó

meow

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Lokidoki

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Lokidoki 2017-05-07T20:22:44+00:00

ByBy wrote:
as you requested via PM

[general]
speaking about metadata it isn't correct. firstly Sana is always written as sana http://puu.sh/vAhOG/8447eee9d0.png and also the title doesn't really have the official english translation so the title should be Sayounara, Hana Dorobou-san the english one can be moved to tags http://sanapri.com/?page_id=17 https://puu.sh/vAi2U/0414f2f8f4.png
(un)sentimental spica can be added to tags since it is the album from where the song got released
in easy the artist unicode and title unicode look like this: РіРѓвЂўРівЂљв‚¬РіРѓвЂ РіРѓР„РівЂљвЂ°РіР‚РѓРёР‰В±Р¶С–ТђР¶Р€вЂ™РіРѓвЂўРівЂљвЂњ // РіРѓвЂўРіРѓР„ which is inconsistent throughout all diffs so the artist should be さな and the title さようなら、花泥棒さん
idk why all diffs have countdown except polka's normal it's pretty useless so better disable the countdown
N D and S samples in timing panel? it means that the hitsounds from your map's folder aren't even used so set them all to D:C2 in order to use the hitsounds from your maps's folder also soft-hitwhistle2 can be drum-hitwhistle 2 instead
the volume is too low and the hitobjects are barely audible so you have to increase the volume to 50 - 60% at all diffs in order to make the hitobjects audible
disable widescreen support there's no any sb or video

[collab easy]
00:01:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this whole section is NOT hitsounded therefore it feels kinda empty without hitsounds you must add hitsounds here in order to fullfill
00:31:180 (3) - the hitclap doesn't sound really good on its tail so better remove it // 00:36:827 (3) - same goes here // 00:42:474 (3) - // 00:52:356 (1) - and so on both done
00:52:356 (1,2) - i don't like this rhythm choice here because on 00:53:062 - there's the new stanza and it would be nice to have it clickable then a sliderend imo which would fit better the song tbh https://puu.sh/vAnCN/977e7dcc73.jpg uhh, i like the current since it's repetative and easy
01:00:121 (4) - remove the whistle from sliderbody it doesn't even fit ;w; kay

mostly lack of hitsound on this diff ;_;

[sayounara]
00:04:356 (1) - the instruments are pretty intensive here and they need more emphasis and this 1/1 slider doesn't give so much emphasis so would be good a rhythm like 1/2 slider + 1/1 or viceversa note in order to give more emphasis to the instruments than nothing http://puu.sh/vCrIH/11645c9c37.jpg// 00:07:180 (1) - same applies here // 00:08:591 (1) - and so on i wanted this to be repetative. The map follows this everywhere on the slower parts and i don't see the problem here.
00:27:650 (3) - blanket xd xd
01:01:180 (2,3) - spacing them more? the vocal is pretty intensive and a jump would give more emphasis to the intensive vocal imo // 01:12:474 (2,3) - same goes here hmm, i don't feel like it, but note that
01:11:768 (4) - tbh i feel like this 1/2 slider doesn't work at all because the hihats are becoming more and more intensive and also noticeable so a rhythm like this one would work and would give more emphasis to the hihats http://puu.sh/vCsi0/21ff4e35d5.jpg i feel like this should be emphasize less though. the first part of kiai is over and just before the "pah, pah, pah" vocal starts, i wanted to lessen the spacing for a better start at the first part
01:14:062 (4,5) - what happened with this spacing? with this low spacing the players would get frustated and also confused so better space them more the "no" has more emotion and sound compared to "mi" letter here, so no change
01:22:356 (1) - remove nc to avoid any nc inconsistencies but it will look kind of gross, and i feel like this (1,2) jumps are doing okay while representing the music
01:24:474 (5) - i think you exaggerated a bit when you tried to curve this slider try to curve it less so it will look much better visually speaking yeah
01:28:268 - maybe put an 1/4 note here? the hihats are calling for doublets here imo i rarely use triples so no
01:30:474 (1) - with this 1/1 slider it sounds pretty weird and lame imo if you listen carefully the vocal for improving the rhythm here you need an 1/2 slider + 1/1 note to follow the vocal more properly than before changed
01:31:180 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this one sounds a bit lame tho try to fix the rhythm like in the image below it would follow the hihats more properly tbh http://puu.sh/vCsGG/b1ccdaf432.jpg

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

voynich 2017-05-10T12:36:22+00:00

Hey from #modreq.
Here's my side of the deal. (difficulty doesn't matter,and don't stress yourself too much with doing all of them!)

Sayounara

I think there should be more emphasis on hitsounds.Though you might disagree with me on this,a lot of the map seems a bit empty without them.Not saying you should go overboard on them (like i tend to do),but you should at least include more into your map.

00:02:944 (1,2) - I think these would work better as 4 1/2 beats rather than 2 1/2 sliders as they go against 00:01:533 (1,2,3,4,5) was using before; emphasizing strong beats with clicks and softer beats with slider ends.By making these 1/2 sliders,sure they might be better at PP farming,but they're a stark contrast to what was done before,and I think changing it up would fit the map better.
00:04:003 (5) - Debating whether or not this should have an NC on it or not.
00:06:827 (4) - This might work better as a 3/4 slider moving into 00:07:180 (1) .See below:

00:08:238 (4) - This might work better at x:246 y:209,unless you're specifically emphasizing the kick without changing the hitsound.
00:08:591 (1,2) - To better follow the music,I think 2 1/2 sliders would look better,play better,and match with the precedent from 00:05:768 (1,2) .
00:11:415 (1,2) - Same as above,though if you're not going to do that at least space out 00:11:944 (2) .Because of time/distance equality,this beat seems like it'd be on 00:11:856 ,but since it isn't,this beat comes off as a bit jarring.Move it down a bit nearer 00:12:121 (3) .
00:14:944 (3,4,5) - This is a good example of how important hitsounds are.
00:22:709 (1,2) - I don't understand why this is part of the map,but it seems like such a detraction from what was set before.Unless you're changing the style because of 00:15:650 (1) having an important sound,I don't get this.
00:26:591 (6) - Works better as a 3/4 slider.
00:26:944 - Since the song's style changes,I think soft hitsounds would work nicely here.
00:26:944 (1) - There's important sounds at the slider end,which doesn't bode well for rhythm.Recommend changing these to 1/2 sliders.If you're not going to do this,at least change up the spacing for 00:19:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) to reflect the change in style.
00:35:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The sound of the music changes a bit at this section.Maybe do a rhythm similar to this?

00:38:238 (1,2) - This is a really good example of changing up the spacing to reflect the change in style.Do more of this and you're golden.
00:46:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Don't forget what you (might do) with 00:35:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) .
00:50:944 - Move the green tick from here to 00:49:532 .
00:49:532 (1,2) - The tone of the song shifts a bit at this point.A change in spacing may not do this section well,so a change in how the rhythm goes or the shapes of the sliders might work well for this section.Like for example,you could blanket these two notes for each part,like at 00:52:356 (1,2) .
00:59:415 (2) - Offscreen,and with an insane diff like this you might wanna pull this up.
01:00:121 (3) - There should be a long slider easing into 01:00:827 (1) .
01:05:768 (5,6) - This detracts a bit from the jumps at 01:02:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) .
01:11:768 (4) - This would be better as a stream.
01:27:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this would work better if you dropped down into the slider instead of keeping your cursor on the previous note,as this is a contrast from what the rest of the map incorporated.If you did this throughout the map,I'd have no problem with it,though as you're already nearing the end,I'd find it a bit bizarre as well to implement a gimmick this far in,so something like this might work nicer:

Mind I do a GD?I know a lot of my maps don't seem like "ideal GD material",especially for the quality of this mapset,but I'm a bit obsessed with this song and didn't want to leave it hanging.
Here's a short ~30s clip.

Overall,this is a really fun map!The general flow to the map matches the rhythm and sound associated with the music,there weren't any real major problems I had with a lot of the decisions in this map,and,as a bonus,it's a good PP map :^)

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