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sana - Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief

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Lokidoki

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as you requested via PM

[general]
speaking about metadata it isn't correct. firstly Sana is always written as sana http://puu.sh/vAhOG/8447eee9d0.png and also the title doesn't really have the official english translation so the title should be Sayounara, Hana Dorobou-san the english one can be moved to tags http://sanapri.com/?page_id=17 https://puu.sh/vAi2U/0414f2f8f4.png
(un)sentimental spica can be added to tags since it is the album from where the song got released
in easy the artist unicode and title unicode look like this: さようなら、花泥棒さん // гЃ•гЃЄ which is inconsistent throughout all diffs so the artist should be さな and the title さようなら、花泥棒さん
idk why all diffs have countdown except polka's normal it's pretty useless so better disable the countdown
N D and S samples in timing panel? it means that the hitsounds from your map's folder aren't even used so set them all to D:C2 in order to use the hitsounds from your maps's folder also soft-hitwhistle2 can be drum-hitwhistle 2 instead
the volume is too low and the hitobjects are barely audible so you have to increase the volume to 50 - 60% at all diffs in order to make the hitobjects audible
disable widescreen support there's no any sb or video

[collab easy]
00:01:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this whole section is NOT hitsounded therefore it feels kinda empty without hitsounds you must add hitsounds here in order to fullfill
00:31:180 (3) - the hitclap doesn't sound really good on its tail so better remove it // 00:36:827 (3) - same goes here // 00:42:474 (3) - // 00:52:356 (1) - and so on both done
00:52:356 (1,2) - i don't like this rhythm choice here because on 00:53:062 - there's the new stanza and it would be nice to have it clickable then a sliderend imo which would fit better the song tbh https://puu.sh/vAnCN/977e7dcc73.jpg uhh, i like the current since it's repetative and easy
01:00:121 (4) - remove the whistle from sliderbody it doesn't even fit ;w; kay


mostly lack of hitsound on this diff ;_;

[sayounara]
00:04:356 (1) - the instruments are pretty intensive here and they need more emphasis and this 1/1 slider doesn't give so much emphasis so would be good a rhythm like 1/2 slider + 1/1 or viceversa note in order to give more emphasis to the instruments than nothing http://puu.sh/vCrIH/11645c9c37.jpg// 00:07:180 (1) - same applies here // 00:08:591 (1) - and so on i wanted this to be repetative. The map follows this everywhere on the slower parts and i don't see the problem here.
00:27:650 (3) - blanket xd xd
01:01:180 (2,3) - spacing them more? the vocal is pretty intensive and a jump would give more emphasis to the intensive vocal imo // 01:12:474 (2,3) - same goes here hmm, i don't feel like it, but note that
01:11:768 (4) - tbh i feel like this 1/2 slider doesn't work at all because the hihats are becoming more and more intensive and also noticeable so a rhythm like this one would work and would give more emphasis to the hihats http://puu.sh/vCsi0/21ff4e35d5.jpg i feel like this should be emphasize less though. the first part of kiai is over and just before the "pah, pah, pah" vocal starts, i wanted to lessen the spacing for a better start at the first part
01:14:062 (4,5) - what happened with this spacing? with this low spacing the players would get frustated and also confused so better space them more the "no" has more emotion and sound compared to "mi" letter here, so no change
01:22:356 (1) - remove nc to avoid any nc inconsistencies but it will look kind of gross, and i feel like this (1,2) jumps are doing okay while representing the music
01:24:474 (5) - i think you exaggerated a bit when you tried to curve this slider try to curve it less so it will look much better visually speaking yeah
01:28:268 - maybe put an 1/4 note here? the hihats are calling for doublets here imo i rarely use triples so no
01:30:474 (1) - with this 1/1 slider it sounds pretty weird and lame imo if you listen carefully the vocal for improving the rhythm here you need an 1/2 slider + 1/1 note to follow the vocal more properly than before changed
01:31:180 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this one sounds a bit lame tho try to fix the rhythm like in the image below it would follow the hihats more properly tbh http://puu.sh/vCsGG/b1ccdaf432.jpg
voynich
Hey from #modreq.
Here's my side of the deal. (difficulty doesn't matter,and don't stress yourself too much with doing all of them!)
Sayounara
I think there should be more emphasis on hitsounds.Though you might disagree with me on this,a lot of the map seems a bit empty without them.Not saying you should go overboard on them (like i tend to do),but you should at least include more into your map.

00:02:944 (1,2) - I think these would work better as 4 1/2 beats rather than 2 1/2 sliders as they go against 00:01:533 (1,2,3,4,5) was using before; emphasizing strong beats with clicks and softer beats with slider ends.By making these 1/2 sliders,sure they might be better at PP farming,but they're a stark contrast to what was done before,and I think changing it up would fit the map better.
00:04:003 (5) - Debating whether or not this should have an NC on it or not.
00:06:827 (4) - This might work better as a 3/4 slider moving into 00:07:180 (1) .See below:

00:08:238 (4) - This might work better at x:246 y:209,unless you're specifically emphasizing the kick without changing the hitsound.
00:08:591 (1,2) - To better follow the music,I think 2 1/2 sliders would look better,play better,and match with the precedent from 00:05:768 (1,2) .
00:11:415 (1,2) - Same as above,though if you're not going to do that at least space out 00:11:944 (2) .Because of time/distance equality,this beat seems like it'd be on 00:11:856 ,but since it isn't,this beat comes off as a bit jarring.Move it down a bit nearer 00:12:121 (3) .
00:14:944 (3,4,5) - This is a good example of how important hitsounds are.
00:22:709 (1,2) - I don't understand why this is part of the map,but it seems like such a detraction from what was set before.Unless you're changing the style because of 00:15:650 (1) having an important sound,I don't get this.
00:26:591 (6) - Works better as a 3/4 slider.
00:26:944 - Since the song's style changes,I think soft hitsounds would work nicely here.
00:26:944 (1) - There's important sounds at the slider end,which doesn't bode well for rhythm.Recommend changing these to 1/2 sliders.If you're not going to do this,at least change up the spacing for 00:19:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) to reflect the change in style.
00:35:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The sound of the music changes a bit at this section.Maybe do a rhythm similar to this?

00:38:238 (1,2) - This is a really good example of changing up the spacing to reflect the change in style.Do more of this and you're golden.
00:46:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Don't forget what you (might do) with 00:35:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) .
00:50:944 - Move the green tick from here to 00:49:532 .
00:49:532 (1,2) - The tone of the song shifts a bit at this point.A change in spacing may not do this section well,so a change in how the rhythm goes or the shapes of the sliders might work well for this section.Like for example,you could blanket these two notes for each part,like at 00:52:356 (1,2) .
00:59:415 (2) - Offscreen,and with an insane diff like this you might wanna pull this up.
01:00:121 (3) - There should be a long slider easing into 01:00:827 (1) .
01:05:768 (5,6) - This detracts a bit from the jumps at 01:02:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) .
01:11:768 (4) - This would be better as a stream.
01:27:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this would work better if you dropped down into the slider instead of keeping your cursor on the previous note,as this is a contrast from what the rest of the map incorporated.If you did this throughout the map,I'd have no problem with it,though as you're already nearing the end,I'd find it a bit bizarre as well to implement a gimmick this far in,so something like this might work nicer:


Mind I do a GD?I know a lot of my maps don't seem like "ideal GD material",especially for the quality of this mapset,but I'm a bit obsessed with this song and didn't want to leave it hanging.
Here's a short ~30s clip.

Overall,this is a really fun map!The general flow to the map matches the rhythm and sound associated with the music,there weren't any real major problems I had with a lot of the decisions in this map,and,as a bonus,it's a good PP map :^)
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

-Nishiki- wrote:

Hey from #modreq.
Here's my side of the deal. (difficulty doesn't matter,and don't stress yourself too much with doing all of them!)
Sayounara
I think there should be more emphasis on hitsounds.Though you might disagree with me on this,a lot of the map seems a bit empty without them.Not saying you should go overboard on them (like i tend to do),but you should at least include more into your map.

00:02:944 (1,2) - I think these would work better as 4 1/2 beats rather than 2 1/2 sliders as they go against 00:01:533 (1,2,3,4,5) was using before; emphasizing strong beats with clicks and softer beats with slider ends.By making these 1/2 sliders,sure they might be better at PP farming,but they're a stark contrast to what was done before,and I think changing it up would fit the map better. they flow better and feel better when playing
00:04:003 (5) - Debating whether or not this should have an NC on it or not. it shouldn't. the sounds only gets stronger, not changing,
so no NC

00:06:827 (4) - This might work better as a 3/4 slider moving into 00:07:180 (1) .See below:
i had 1 3/4 slider only to change the song's pace, everything else shouldn't be that much emphasized
00:08:238 (4) - This might work better at x:246 y:209,unless you're specifically emphasizing the kick without changing the hitsound. it's okay at where it's at
00:08:591 (1,2) - To better follow the music,I think 2 1/2 sliders would look better,play better,and match with the precedent from 00:05:768 (1,2) . i disagree with it, it's fine with me
00:11:415 (1,2) - Same as above,though if you're not going to do that at least space out 00:11:944 (2) .Because of time/distance equality,this beat seems like it'd be on 00:11:856 ,but since it isn't,this beat comes off as a bit jarring.Move it down a bit nearer 00:12:121 (3) . the song has it's own repetative style to it, so no
00:14:944 (3,4,5) - This is a good example of how important hitsounds are. uhhh, i keep the hs like that repetative as well. don't like to overdo them
00:22:709 (1,2) - I don't understand why this is part of the map,but it seems like such a detraction from what was set before.Unless you're changing the style because of 00:15:650 (1) having an important sound,I don't get this. well, it's repetative.
00:26:591 (6) - Works better as a 3/4 slider. i don't think so, i only had one 3/4 slider to change the song's pace.
00:26:944 - Since the song's style changes,I think soft hitsounds would work nicely here. not really, the instruments stay the same, just with the lowered volume
00:26:944 (1) - There's important sounds at the slider end,which doesn't bode well for rhythm.Recommend changing these to 1/2 sliders.If you're not going to do this,at least change up the spacing for 00:19:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) to reflect the change in style. this map is repetative, why should i bring variety then if the main purpose for this is it's repetativeness?
00:35:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The sound of the music changes a bit at this section.Maybe do a rhythm similar to this?
no, it doesn't change
00:38:238 (1,2) - This is a really good example of changing up the spacing to reflect the change in style.Do more of this and you're golden. thanks, appreciate that
00:46:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Don't forget what you (might do) with 00:35:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) . i don't understand what you mean by that
00:50:944 - Move the green tick from here to 00:49:532 . no reason
00:49:532 (1,2) - The tone of the song shifts a bit at this point.A change in spacing may not do this section well,so a change in how the rhythm goes or the shapes of the sliders might work well for this section.Like for example,you could blanket these two notes for each part,like at 00:52:356 (1,2) . the spacing does change a little if you look closer
00:59:415 (2) - Offscreen,and with an insane diff like this you might wanna pull this up. not offscreen though
01:00:121 (3) - There should be a long slider easing into 01:00:827 (1) . i was following the drums and those long sliders don't give enough time to prepare for kiai
01:05:768 (5,6) - This detracts a bit from the jumps at 01:02:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) . no, it doesn't. it makes it easier to get over them since they are intense
01:11:768 (4) - This would be better as a stream. i like it the wat it is since it doesn't give that much variety to the song and keeps it simple and pp
01:27:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this would work better if you dropped down into the slider instead of keeping your cursor on the previous note,as this is a contrast from what the rest of the map incorporated.If you did this throughout the map,I'd have no problem with it,though as you're already nearing the end,I'd find it a bit bizarre as well to implement a gimmick this far in,so something like this might work nicer: that's intentional


Mind I do a GD?I know a lot of my maps don't seem like "ideal GD material",especially for the quality of this mapset,but I'm a bit obsessed with this song and didn't want to leave it hanging.
Here's a short ~30s clip.
sorry, the set was full already, but nyu -'s GD just felt so right, so i decided to put it in the set nevertheless

Overall,this is a really fun map!The general flow to the map matches the rhythm and sound associated with the music,there weren't any real major problems I had with a lot of the decisions in this map,and,as a bonus,it's a good PP map :^) thanks for the mod
Ashton
// High Quality! //







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2017-05-13 19:59 Loreley: 00:06:474 (3) - тебе предлагали сделать здесь 1/1?
2017-05-13 19:59 Lokidoki: нет
2017-05-13 19:59 Lokidoki: но мне чего-то не хочется
2017-05-13 19:59 Loreley: я бы вообще сделал 3/4
2017-05-13 20:00 Loreley: но лучше потестить
2017-05-13 20:00 Loreley: тут явно звук длинне
2017-05-13 20:00 Lokidoki: а вот 3\4 предлагали но я не согласен с этим
2017-05-13 20:00 Lokidoki: я в основном на барабаны ориентировался
2017-05-13 20:00 Loreley: 00:06:827 (4) - я не знаю что это
2017-05-13 20:00 Loreley: но между синем и красным
2017-05-13 20:00 Loreley: там гитара
2017-05-13 20:00 Loreley: или барабан
2017-05-13 20:01 Loreley: синем и красым тиком
2017-05-13 20:01 Lokidoki: но интуитивней чтобы было везде расстояние в 1\2 между объектами
2017-05-13 20:02 Loreley: смари
2017-05-13 20:02 Loreley: 00:05:768 (1,2) -
2017-05-13 20:02 Loreley: тут везде на красном тике
2017-05-13 20:02 Loreley: звук
2017-05-13 20:03 Loreley: 00:06:474 (3) - тут его нет
2017-05-13 20:03 Loreley: это просто принципиально разные моменты в музыке
2017-05-13 20:03 Loreley: а ты делашеь одинаково
2017-05-13 20:03 Loreley: но ладно, твой выбор
2017-05-13 20:03 Lokidoki: потому и происходит смена движения
2017-05-13 20:04 Loreley: тогда правильнее будет вот так, что ли http://puu.sh/vOPrG/9b74604ee0.png
2017-05-13 20:04 Loreley: если играть со сменой движения
2017-05-13 20:04 Lokidoki: ты имеешь ввиду чтобы они ровные были?
2017-05-13 20:04 Loreley: как хочешь
2017-05-13 20:05 Loreley: вроде
2017-05-13 20:05 Loreley: на скрине все неараллельны
2017-05-13 20:05 Lokidoki: угу
2017-05-13 20:05 Lokidoki: я поменял
2017-05-13 20:05 Lokidoki: 00:06:474 (3) -
2017-05-13 20:05 Loreley: ну
2017-05-13 20:06 Lokidoki: ctrl+g шнул вообщем
2017-05-13 20:06 Loreley: если поменял
2017-05-13 20:06 Loreley: то придется все по схожей концепции делать
2017-05-13 20:06 Loreley: хотя
2017-05-13 20:06 Loreley: это такое
2017-05-13 20:07 Loreley: 00:14:238 (1) - ты же тут 1/1 обычно делаешь
2017-05-13 20:07 Lokidoki: 00:14:238 (1,2) - чтобы потом на джамп удобнее переходить было
2017-05-13 20:08 Lokidoki: и хоть немного разбавляю паттерн
2017-05-13 20:08 Loreley: в 00:28:356 (1) - слишком близко
2017-05-13 20:08 Loreley: 00:29:415 (4,1) -
2017-05-13 20:08 Loreley: для сравнения
2017-05-13 20:08 Loreley: хотя бы
2017-05-13 20:09 Loreley: 00:30:827 (4,1) -
2017-05-13 20:09 Lokidoki: 00:28:003 (4) - мне кажется так просто удобней играть
2017-05-13 20:09 Loreley: конечно удобнее
2017-05-13 20:09 Lokidoki: чтобы за далеким спейсингом не вести далеко
2017-05-13 20:09 Loreley: но как же консистенция?
2017-05-13 20:10 Lokidoki: 00:30:827 (4,1) - а здесь спейсинг самих краев слайдеров помогает
2017-05-13 20:10 Loreley: в этом то и мастерство, сделать удобно и консистентно
2017-05-13 20:10 Loreley: ну так сделать такой же круговой флоу
2017-05-13 20:10 Loreley: как и там
2017-05-13 20:10 Lokidoki: 00:29:062 (3,4) - здесь вокал чуть ярче, вот и спейсинг побольше
2017-05-13 20:11 Loreley: скорее не вокал
2017-05-13 20:11 Loreley: а звук
2017-05-13 20:11 Lokidoki: и ноты она повыше взяла
2017-05-13 20:12 Loreley: так на даунбите же вокала нет
2017-05-13 20:12 Loreley: он с клапа начинает
2017-05-13 20:12 Loreley: в вдох с красного тика
2017-05-13 20:12 Loreley: лан
2017-05-13 20:12 Loreley: проехали
2017-05-13 20:12 Lokidoki: вобщем, я оставляю пока как есть
2017-05-13 20:13 Loreley: 00:34:709 (3,4) - тут же явно серклы должны быть
2017-05-13 20:13 Loreley: судя по интенсивности сонга
2017-05-13 20:14 Loreley: ты же все это время вокал мапал
2017-05-13 20:14 Loreley: просто сказать, что слайдеры легче
2017-05-13 20:14 Loreley: не очень-таки смахивает на аргумент
2017-05-13 20:14 Loreley: для меня он пойдет
2017-05-13 20:14 Loreley: но не для бнов
2017-05-13 20:15 Loreley: сейчас же 2017 год, все варианты типо "это мой стиль", "так легче" и т.д. не катят
2017-05-13 20:15 Loreley: если у тебя не 30 ранков
2017-05-13 20:15 Lokidoki: спейсинг побольше
2017-05-13 20:16 Lokidoki: вот мой аргумент
2017-05-13 20:16 Lokidoki: это для легкого ДТ фарма, не хочу усложнять слишком
2017-05-13 20:19 Loreley: 01:03:650 (1,2) -
2017-05-13 20:19 Loreley: вокал ярче
2017-05-13 20:19 Loreley: но спейсинга меньше
2017-05-13 20:19 Loreley: чем тут 01:05:768 (5,6) -
2017-05-13 20:20 Lokidoki: 01:04:003 (2,3) - здесь спейсинг чуть больше за счет повтора
2017-05-13 20:21 Loreley: 01:03:650 (1,2) - а я про этот
2017-05-13 20:21 Lokidoki: но (1,2) - там просто повторяются, интенсивность звука не меняется
2017-05-13 20:21 Lokidoki: 01:04:003 (2,3) - а здесь сильнее
2017-05-13 20:22 Loreley: 01:14:238 (5) -
2017-05-13 20:23 Loreley: и почему тут такой маленький
2017-05-13 20:23 Loreley: если ты выделяешь сильные звуки большим спейсингом
2017-05-13 20:23 Lokidoki: для плавного поворота
2017-05-13 20:23 Lokidoki: чтобы не делать слишком сложный разворот
2017-05-13 20:23 Lokidoki: и паттерн легкий
2017-05-13 20:24 Loreley: и ты не можешь придумать как одновременно выделить 5 и сделать удобно?
2017-05-13 20:25 Lokidoki: честно, я считаю что так удобней, проще и хорошее изменении флоу
2017-05-13 20:25 Lokidoki: изменение*
2017-05-13 20:26 Loreley: может и проще
2017-05-13 20:26 Loreley: можн обыло и просто в одну точку накидать серклов
2017-05-13 20:26 Loreley: так было бы вообще просто
2017-05-13 20:26 Lokidoki: не, слишком просто
2017-05-13 20:26 Loreley: 01:17:768 (1) -
2017-05-13 20:26 Loreley: тоже мало
2017-05-13 20:27 Loreley: 01:19:180 (1) - даже тут больше
2017-05-13 20:27 Loreley: а
2017-05-13 20:27 Loreley: оно удобно
2017-05-13 20:27 Loreley: я понял
2017-05-13 20:27 Lokidoki: хД
2017-05-13 20:27 Loreley: 01:22:003 (1,1,1) - грязновато немного
2017-05-13 20:27 Lokidoki: Ну в принципе
2017-05-13 20:27 Loreley: 01:23:062 (3,4,5,6) - такие стаки лучше не делать
2017-05-13 20:27 Loreley: вот со стримами
2017-05-13 20:28 Loreley: они просто в эдите не очень сморятся
2017-05-13 20:28 Loreley: ну хз, просто использовать острые углы
2017-05-13 20:28 Loreley: удобно, да
2017-05-13 20:29 Loreley: но я просто не согласен с спейсинг концепцией
2017-05-13 20:29 Lokidoki: 01:23:062 (3,4,5,6) - поменял
2017-05-13 20:30 Loreley: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1256065 sana - Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief [Collab Easy]]
2017-05-13 20:30 Loreley: 00:01:533 (1) - он такой нарочно?
2017-05-13 20:31 Lokidoki: моя часть с 00:26:944 (1) -
2017-05-13 20:31 Lokidoki: и по 01:00:827 (1) -
2017-05-13 20:32 Loreley: 00:46:003 (4,5) - лучше не делать ничего в линию
2017-05-13 20:32 Loreley: в изи диффах
2017-05-13 20:32 Loreley: сложно
2017-05-13 20:33 Lokidoki: но играется-то вроде просто
2017-05-13 20:33 Loreley: легко говорить
2017-05-13 20:33 Lokidoki: но 00:46:356 (5) - поставил пониже
2017-05-13 20:33 Loreley: с 3к пп
2017-05-13 20:33 Loreley: мне тоже легко играется
2017-05-13 20:34 Lokidoki: 2.9к хД
2017-05-13 20:34 Loreley: 01:31:180 (4,5,1) - чет хз
2017-05-13 20:34 Lokidoki: не моя часть хД
2017-05-13 20:35 Loreley: если выделять барабаны
2017-05-13 20:35 Loreley: то 1 слайдер лучше
2017-05-13 20:35 Loreley: просто, как 1 длинный звук выделить
2017-05-13 20:35 Loreley: или реверс
2017-05-13 20:35 Loreley: а если вокал
2017-05-13 20:35 Loreley: то нота и слайдер
2017-05-13 20:35 Lokidoki: Я спрошу у него
2017-05-13 20:36 Loreley: ну
2017-05-13 20:36 Loreley: это все
2017-05-13 20:37 Lokidoki: хмм, спасибо огромное сейчас апдейчу
2017-05-13 20:39 Lokidoki: запости ирук
2017-05-13 20:39 Lokidoki: ирк*
2017-05-13 20:40 Lokidoki: я кудоску кину
Yamicchi
Hi M4M from #modreqs :3
[Easy]
• 00:17:415 (4,5) - I would make these a reverse slider like 00:06:122 (4) - because (5) is not such a strong beat to be clickable here
[Polka]
• 00:05:768 (3) - Did you intend to overlap them like this?
• 00:24:121 (1) - You should really fix the half start of the slider lol. If your idea was to blanket them, do it properly
• 00:49:532 (1) - The 2 half of the slider are not perfectly parallel.
• 00:58:709 (3,4) - imo the slider doesn't really show anything. If it's the vocal I believe it should end 00:59:238 - here. If it's the instrumental then I hope it would be like this. I don't think simplifying the pattern is a g - ood idea
• 01:00:121 (1) - 01:02:238 (1) - 01:05:062 (1) - ... I think you're overusing the NCs. They are not really necessary to NC too much like that.
[Hard]
• 00:03:474 (4) - Why is the stack here? The drums are literally the same, so why not continue overlapping?
• 00:08:944 (2) - What does this slider show, vocal or instrument? Imo it feels odd.
• 00:35:415 (2) - It is weird that the note with higher pitch (2) is stacked, while the low pitch note (1) is doubled the spacing. Might wanna take a look again at this pattern
• 01:05:062 (1) - That's such a weird slider shape you got there :? are you trying to blanket or something, because it looks ugly
• 01:31:885 - I would make this clickable. It's a strong beat, why not?
[Insane]
• 00:02:238 (3,3) - One way or another, these must be clickable for sure. The drums need the intensity they deserve to have
• Idk if you intend to do this but you seems to increase spacing for low beats and decrease spacing for strong beats all the time. Ex: 00:06:121 (2) - 00:11:238 (4) - 00:14:238 (1) - 00:19:709 (4) - 00:23:944 (4) -
• 00:27:650 (3) - Stack it? :d
• 01:00:827 (1,2,3,4) - mute those slider end omg it hurts to hear them like that
• 01:31:885 (1) - But why does this have lower spacing?
[Is it Sayonara or Sayounara?]
• 00:03:650 (3) - You could just remove this to increase the intensity for (4,5) don't you think?
• I find some weird pattern you're doing. So, why did you skip a beat on 00:04:356 (1) - red tick? And I believe making 00:05:415 (4) - this 2 circles would be a better idea. A slider makes it feel weak tbh. The suggestion applies to the next patterns too
• 00:10:709 (3) - Meh it's awkwardly curved. Less curve would be nice.
• 00:53:062 (3,4) - not parallel? I think they're better when they're parallel
• 00:58:709 (3,4,1,2) - Ok the spacing here is kinda confusing. Here's what you can do: Move 00:58:885 (4) - to somewhere around X112 Y128. That's what I always do in my map lol
• 01:23:062 (3,4,5,6) - That's such a dangerous stream, because you're forcing players to go up and down in zigzag, but then this stream, goes the other way, which might confused players. Might wanna check it out.

The last 2 diffs needs a lot of work :3 good luck then
polka

Yamicchi wrote:

[Polka]
• 00:05:768 (3) - Did you intend to overlap them like this? :arrow: ...? Overlap what :o
• 00:24:121 (1) - You should really fix the half start of the slider lol. If your idea was to blanket them, do it properly :arrow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8164244 it's blanketed perfectly.
• 00:49:532 (1) - The 2 half of the slider are not perfectly parallel. :arrow: Looks good to me. Any ideas on how to improve it?
• 00:58:709 (3,4) - imo the slider doesn't really show anything. If it's the vocal I believe it should end 00:59:238 - here. If it's the instrumental then I hope it would be like this. I don't think simplifying the pattern is a g - ood idea :arrow: Its too instruments. I wanted to challenge myself to map only using 1/1. So this is staying. Sorry on o
• 01:00:121 (1) - 01:02:238 (1) - 01:05:062 (1) - ... I think you're overusing the NCs. They are not really necessary to NC too much like that. :arrow: If you listen to the music, it matches perfectly...
Thanks for modding!!
Lully
Its sayonara.
Not sayounara. please fix. PLEASE. in description and diff name. its さよなら sa yo na ra uwu

Yamicchi wrote:

Hi M4M from #modreqs :3

[Insane]
• 00:02:238 (3,3) - One way or another, these must be clickable for sure. The drums need the intensity they deserve to have
• Idk if you intend to do this but you seems to increase spacing for low beats and decrease spacing for strong beats all the time. Ex: 00:06:121 (2) - 00:11:238 (4) - 00:14:238 (1) - 00:19:709 (4) - 00:23:944 (4) - now imagine i did that on purpose and thats why its repeated that often
• 00:27:650 (3) - Stack it? :d fixed? owo
• 01:00:827 (1,2,3,4) - mute those slider end omg it hurts to hear them like that im lazy af
• 01:31:885 (1) - But why does this have lower spacing? because the music ends

The last 2 diffs needs a lot of work :3 good luck then
wa
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Topic Starter
Lokidoki
http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E ... roubou-san)
sorry, the diff name is taken from the name of the song itself so i'm keeping it that way.
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Yamicchi wrote:

[Is it Sayonara or Sayounara?]concerning the diff name i told in my prev post that it is taken from the original romaji of the song

• 00:03:650 (3) - You could just remove this to increase the intensity for (4,5) don't you think? this is meant to have the same kind of structure with 00:02:238 (3,4,5) -
• I find some weird pattern you're doing. So, why did you skip a beat on 00:04:356 (1) - red tick? And I believe making 00:05:415 (4) - this 2 circles would be a better idea. A slider makes it feel weak tbh. The suggestion applies to the next patterns too uhhh, i explained so many tiiiimes, i want to keep this map as simple as possible
• 00:10:709 (3) - Meh it's awkwardly curved. Less curve would be nice. i think it's fine
• 00:53:062 (3,4) - not parallel? I think they're better when they're parallel kay
• 00:58:709 (3,4,1,2) - Ok the spacing here is kinda confusing. Here's what you can do: Move 00:58:885 (4) - to somewhere around X112 Y128. That's what I always do in my map lol that's pretty much the only gimmick this map has so i want to keep that
• 01:23:062 (3,4,5,6) - That's such a dangerous stream, because you're forcing players to go up and down in zigzag, but then this stream, goes the other way, which might confused players. Might wanna check it out. it has a somewhat circular flow to it, and as many times as i've playtested this myself, never had trouble with it

good luck then Thanks!
EijiKuinbii
Collab Easy
00:46:003 (4,5) - аимод ругается на спейсинг
00:58:709 (2) - по-моему этот слайдер должен заканчиваться 00:58:885 - здесь
Sayounara
01:00:121 (3) - если здесь свисток выделить х0.5 слайдером то получится круто по-моему
01:11:768 (4) - ctrl+G и чуть сдвинуть влево для лучшего флоу?
01:14:062 (4,5) - резкий скачок спейсинга, в прошлом подобном парте такого не было. выдели это через НК что ли, или поставь 01:14:238 (5) - куда-нибудь на х=427, у=329, правда после этого лучше стакнуть 01:14:591 (7) - эту ноту с 01:16:003 (4) - чтобы флоу не был неприятным
01:14:944 (1,2,3,4) - а вообще этот парт играется слишком легко, поменяй 01:15:297 (2) - и 01:15:650 (3) - местами, так куда лучше по-момему
01:22:356 (1,1) - не совсем понял зачем тут НК
приятная мапа, удачи
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

EijiKuinbii wrote:

Collab Easy
00:46:003 (4,5) - аимод ругается на спейсинг кк
00:58:709 (2) - по-моему этот слайдер должен заканчиваться 00:58:885 - здесь не люблю 1\2 слайдеры в изи
Sayounara
01:00:121 (3) - если здесь свисток выделить х0.5 слайдером то получится круто по-моему я ориентировался на три симбал звука
01:11:768 (4) - ctrl+G и чуть сдвинуть влево для лучшего флоу? это мне предложил сделать Полька, и мне она так нравится, я пока оставлю
01:14:062 (4,5) - резкий скачок спейсинга, в прошлом подобном парте такого не было. выдели это через НК что ли, или поставь 01:14:238 (5) - куда-нибудь на х=427, у=329, правда после этого лучше стакнуть 01:14:591 (7) - эту ноту с 01:16:003 (4) - чтобы флоу не был неприятнымобъяснялось мною так же большое кол-во раз, здесь я переворачиваю флоу, и чтобы сделать немного проще разобраться, я ставлю низкий спейсинг
01:14:944 (1,2,3,4) - а вообще этот парт играется слишком легко, поменяй 01:15:297 (2) - и 01:15:650 (3) - местами, так куда лучше по-момему на самом деле, это сделано специально просто, ведь до этого шли джампы и так просто проще переходить на более спокойный флоу.
01:22:356 (1,1) - не совсем понял зачем тут НК так джампы смотрятся лучше
приятная мапа, удачи
09kami

09kami wrote:

[aaa m4m]

Title
さようなら、花泥棒さん(short ver.)
Sayonara、Hanadorobou san(short ver.)

Tag
さな

[Sayounara]

emmm...i think the hitsound is too small

00:37:885 (4) - this slider might be better if it slows down .mabey x0.75

00:50:238 (3) - move up a little

00:58:709 (1) - add nc?

01:17:062 (5,6) - mabey
https://puu.sh/wpllE/cbac4abac3.png

01:30:474 (1) - revise to slider?
https://puu.sh/wplqr/f6585d00e9.png

01:31:532 (7,1) - In fact, you can put a little farther

[nyu's Insane]

01:13:885 (2,3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/wplzB/7221c77072.png


[Mirash's Hard?]

I think it's a light insane .If want to change to hard .pls reduce some stack and overlap > <
09kami
:)
Lully

09kami wrote:

[nyu's Insane]

01:13:885 (2,3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/wplzB/7221c77072.png oh
updat
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Topic Starter
Lokidoki

09kami wrote:

[aaa m4m]

Title
さようなら、花泥棒さん(short ver.)
Sayonara、Hanadorobou san(short ver.)

Tag
さな
Concerning metadata, it's complicated, but this metadata is the one approved by KwaN

IamKwaN wrote:

okie dokie

Unicode Title: さようなら、花泥棒さん
Romanised Title: Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief
Unicode Artist: 鎖那
Romanised Artist: sana

References:
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm28168595
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm25943367 (romanisation of the title)
https://twitter.com/sanapri (romanisation of the artist)

good luck!
[Sayounara]

emmm...i think the hitsound is too small

00:37:885 (4) - this slider might be better if it slows down .mabey x0.75 i don't know really, i don't want it to look like a x1.0 1/2 slider when it's not.

00:50:238 (3) - move up a little yeah

00:58:709 (1) - add nc? the sound remains kinda the same, it's just that it is repeated faster, and it is highlighted by spacing

01:17:062 (5,6) - mabey yeah, sure
https://puu.sh/wpllE/cbac4abac3.png

01:30:474 (1) - revise to slider? tbh it was a slider before, but modders noted that it seems a bit dull, at least, i found it a bit dull, so no for now
https://puu.sh/wplqr/f6585d00e9.png

01:31:532 (7,1) - In fact, you can put a little farther nah, not feeling like it tho
thanks a bunch!
Jabba
hey, m4m

easy
00:05:062 (2,3) - idk about this kind of flow in easies, for me it seems a bit too harsh
00:11:415 (1) - remove NC, 00:05:768 (3) - doesn't have one
00:46:003 (4,5) - smth happened with ds there
00:53:415 (2) - not the best idea to use a repeat here cause the music still goes 1-2-1-2 and 00:53:768 - should definitely be clickable
01:17:062 (4) - higher ds yet again
01:21:650 (2) - ^^

normal
uh so overall the diff is good but I don't think it fits the spread, it's basically 1/1 spam, just like easy (with easy having some more sliders and 2/1s), whilst hard already has 1/4s and 8 1/2s in a row. consider buffing this diff by adding more 1/2 rhythms
also AR5 OD5 to fit the spread better
00:15:650 (1) - this is not perfectly symmetrical pls
01:07:885 (3,4) - blanket
yeah good diff but should be buffed, else you'll need another diff inbetween this and hard

hard
00:03:297 (3,4) - any reason to stack those? all four of them are literally the same sound
00:09:297 (3) - uh, for me it seems too big in a section where you use simplified 1/1 rhythm lol
00:20:591 (3) - same, this sound is not even that important
00:22:003 (3) - e.g. this is better
00:26:062 (3,4,5) - don't really get what you're following there, (3)'s end and (4) are the same sound, feels too strange to play. smth like this would be better imo
00:29:591 (5,1) - blanket?
00:45:650 (4) - nc? you NCd all those new vocal lines before
01:10:003 - unclear rhythm tbh cause of this not being mapped
01:11:768 (3,1) - uh, weird flow smh
01:19:709 (2,3) - blanket

insane
unsnapped sliderends, check aimod
OD7.5 maybe? cause hard has OD7 as well

00:02:238 (3) - two circles pls
00:12:121 (3,4) - blanket
00:28:356 (5) - not having a NC on this downbeat seems weird cause later you NC this 00:29:768 (1) - , even though you can map it as 1/2+circle and NC the circle, so I'd nc the downbeat just to be consistent
01:01:885 (4) - why the flow change? the lyrics are the same on those four
01:04:708 (4) - ^
01:31:885 (1) - y u no space

who the hell puts u in sayonara
k I don't really like this stuff 00:32:591 (1,2) - but it seems like you used it all over so it should be fine
00:50:591 (4) - this one is a bit too big compared to the rest of the section
00:58:356 (2,3,4) - ugh, this spacing isn't a good idea at all cause 2-3 and 3-4 are visually the same but stand for different gaps in the timeline. stacking (2) and (3) would help. applies to 00:59:238 (1,2) - as well
01:00:121 (3) - idk I'd do a slider ther einstead to emphasize that whistle
01:01:532 (3) - the ds on this one is too low, though the vocals are the same
01:07:885 (1) - and this one is a bit too overkill, basically a fullscreen jump on a new vocal line that's not even that important
01:12:826 (3) - ^^
01:14:062 (4,5) - tf is this ds? makes literally no sense to not space (5) there

decent set overall, gl!
Lully
ill update my diff asap
i have no wlan and all that stuff atm :c
Kyouren
Sorry for late, as request!



[General]
  1. Metadata is fine since IamKwaN and Lokidoki tell to me in Discord and chat!
[Collab Easy]
  1. 00:45:297 (3,4,5,1) - Why this snap is diffrecent than others?
[Polka's Normal]
  1. 00:11:062 (2,4) - Bad overlap
[Mirash's Hard]
  1. 00:02:944 (1,2,3,4) - I'm disagree with this. Why you stack 00:03:474 (4)? It's totally uncomfortable
  2. 00:53:768 (2,5) - Bad overlap
  3. 00:56:591 (2,5) - Blanket is look bad
  4. 00:59:944 - Are you sure to not add something here? Or 01:00:121 (1)?
  5. 01:02:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - OK, I totally disagree with this. This flow is too hard for hard diff and the newbies feel it's really confused and can't pass it
  6. 01:07:532 (4) - I not sure with this rhythm, why you not used same rhythm like 01:18:474 (3,4,1,2)?
  7. 01:11:415 (1,3) - Here too, bad overlap
  8. 01:13:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same like 01:02:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
  9. 01:28:356 (7) - Hmm, trap? OK
[nyu's Light Insane]
  1. 00:04:709 (2,3) - Blanket in tail?
  2. 00:50:591 (4,5) - Blanket is look bad
  3. 01:01:885 (4) - Hmm? I think it's look weird for me, how about CTRL+J, CTRL+H, and CTRL+G and you fix it the position?
  4. 01:04:708 (4) - ^
  5. 01:31:885 (1) - This snap is look diffrecent than 01:31:532 (2,3,4,5)
[Insane]
  1. I think your diff has a problem with "bad" overlap, like 00:03:297 (2,3) - 00:11:415 (1,2) - 00:17:062 (1,2) - 00:19:885 (1,2) - 00:22:709 (1,2) - and many. I stopped here because the big problem in overlap, but overall, I think it's fine

No KDS if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

MadHypnofrog wrote:

hey, m4m

easy
00:46:003 (4,5) - smth happened with ds there not anymore i believe
00:53:415 (2) - not the best idea to use a repeat here cause the music still goes 1-2-1-2 and 00:53:768 - should definitely be clickable i was following the guitar sound

who the hell puts u in sayonara apparently, Mel does lol
k I don't really like this stuff 00:32:591 (1,2) - but it seems like you used it all over so it should be fine well, technically, it represents that the music gets less intense, so the rhythm get a bit more simple and the spacing is lowered
00:50:591 (4) - this one is a bit too big compared to the rest of the section spacing wise yes, but between the objects and how spaced 00:50:062 (2,3,4) - it is alright
00:58:356 (2,3,4) - ugh, this spacing isn't a good idea at all cause 2-3 and 3-4 are visually the same but stand for different gaps in the timeline. stacking (2) and (3) would help. applies to 00:59:238 (1,2) - as well tbh i don't really see the problem, a lot of maps nowadays do that, and this has to to have at least some kind of gimmick, i know this is a shitty excuse, but i'd like to keep that as it is
01:00:121 (3) - idk I'd do a slider ther einstead to emphasize that whistle yeah, i've been told that, but i'm representing the cymbal sound here, not the whistle
01:01:532 (3) - the ds on this one is too low, though the vocals are the same i just don't want to ruin the flow, it seems fine to me actually,
spacing it too much is uncomfortable to play if i keep the same pattern

01:07:885 (1) - and this one is a bit too overkill, basically a fullscreen jump on a new vocal line that's not even that important if you listen closely, there is a stronger guitar sound on it
01:12:826 (3) - ^^ well, i explained it up there as well
01:14:062 (4,5) - tf is this ds? makes literally no sense to not space (5) there i've explained that so many times before tho, (5) is reversing the flow here, so to not overspace (5,6) i decided to give (5) a lower spacing

decent set overall, gl!

KittyAdventure wrote:

[Collab Easy]
  1. 00:45:297 (3,4,5,1) - Why this snap is diffrecent than others? yea, i dunno what happened here
[Insane]
  1. I think your diff has a problem with "bad" overlap, like 00:03:297 (2,3) - 00:11:415 (1,2) - 00:17:062 (1,2) - 00:19:885 (1,2) - 00:22:709 (1,2) - and many. I stopped here because the big problem in overlap, but overall, I think it's fine i don't find it bad, they're still readable and they are presented in a strict pattern
[/notice]
Thank you for the mods
_DT3

Yamicchi wrote:

Hi M4M from #modreqs :3
[Easy]
• 00:17:415 (4,5) - I would make these a reverse slider like 00:06:122 (4) - because (5) is not such a strong beat to be clickable here I made the second half of my first part intentionally a bit more harder rhythm-wise to make the contrast to the next part more visible and it fits imo

MadHypnofrog wrote:

hey, m4m

easy
00:05:062 (2,3) - idk about this kind of flow in easies, for me it seems a bit too harsh This angle is fine tho, it's the same as the rest pretty much e.g. 01:05:768 (4,5,1) -
00:11:415 (1) - remove NC, 00:05:768 (3) - doesn't have one Why is this there
01:17:062 (4) - higher ds yet again Yep
01:21:650 (2) - ^^ This is a .01 difference
Thanks for the mods and sorry for the delay!

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Asaiga
good luck
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Title:Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief
TitleUnicode:さようなら、花泥棒さん
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Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Asaiga wrote:

good luck
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Title:Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief
TitleUnicode:さようなら、花泥棒さん
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thxa lot
Lully

Jabba wrote:

unsnapped sliderends, check aimod w
OD7.5 maybe? cause hard has OD7 as well

00:02:238 (3) - two circles pls did the same for the others so its fine
00:12:121 (3,4) - blanket
00:28:356 (5) - not having a NC on this downbeat seems weird cause later you NC this 00:29:768 (1) - , even though you can map it as 1/2+circle and NC the circle, so I'd nc the downbeat just to be consistent i focus ncing vocals and i changed patterns so its ok
01:01:885 (4) - why the flow change? the lyrics are the same on those four
01:04:708 (4) - ^
01:31:885 (1) - y u no space song ends myspace

KittyAdventure wrote:

[nyu's Light Insane]
  1. 00:04:709 (2,3) - Blanket in tail?
  2. 00:50:591 (4,5) - Blanket is look bad
  3. 01:01:885 (4) - Hmm? I think it's look weird for me, how about CTRL+J, CTRL+H, and CTRL+G and you fix it the position?
  4. 01:04:708 (4) - ^
  5. 01:31:885 (1) - This snap is look diffrecent than 01:31:532 (2,3,4,5) already explained

No KDS if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~
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Rin Desu
hellow :D

Easy

00:17:415 (4,5) - why is here no repeat?
00:20:238 (4) - and why is here a repeat xD thats kinda inconstent u should check that parts again
00:26:238 (4,1) - blanket
00:49:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - what are u representing with these?
00:52:356 (1,2) - that repeats feel rly random
00:49:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - in this parts i dont get your hitsounds, recheck them pls the feel random

Normal

00:26:944 (1) - that shape , why xD?
00:53:062 (1) - u should do first round than that intense slider, it makes more sense to do them before the chorus
so change 00:49:532 (1,2,3,1,2) - with 00:54:121 (2,3,1,2,3) -
01:28:356 (3,1) - blanket

Hard

01:22:709 (1,2,3,4) - any reason for this random looking pattern :D?
01:28:003 - add circle
01:28:709 - here too
01:05:062 (1) - this is much more intense maybe change shapes with 01:02:944 (3) -

Light Insane

00:49:180 (4,1) - blanket
cause of this parts 01:14:944 (1,2,3,4) - u should consider change the drumroll sound to a silent one

Insane

i have one big concern about this diff.
00:26:944 (1,2,3,4,1) - till 00:58:003 (1,2) - feel like the part before and i dont think this reflects the song good. im fine with the other parts and find them comprehensibly.But this part has the same flow and rhythm as the part before while the music is changed alot. when u turn off the music and listen to your map u notice no difference between that parts at all ;/

for example this sliderend 00:26:944 (1) - is a strong sound
00:28:356 (1) - here to

00:05:415 (4,1,2,3) - in comprehension to 00:11:944 (2,3,4) - 00:17:591 (2,3,4) - ,... this is random, infact its the same melodie.

good luck :)
Asaiga

Rin Desu wrote:

Hard

01:22:709 (1,2,3,4) - any reason for this random looking pattern :D? to make it play more interesting
01:28:003 - add circle follow vocal
01:28:709 - here too same
01:05:062 (1) - this is much more intense maybe change shapes with 01:02:944 (3) - I don't see the necessity
thanks
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Rin Desu wrote:

hellow :D

Easy


00:49:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - what are u representing with these? strong guitar sounds
00:52:356 (1,2) - that repeats feel rly random in what way? it seems pretty reasonable, i just changed the rhythm a bit, which is normal
00:49:532 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - in this parts i dont get your hitsounds, recheck them pls the feel random they are on strong drum sounds tho


Insane

i have one big concern about this diff.
00:26:944 (1,2,3,4,1) - till 00:58:003 (1,2) - feel like the part before and i dont think this reflects the song good. im fine with the other parts and find them comprehensibly.But this part has the same flow and rhythm as the part before while the music is changed alot. when u turn off the music and listen to your map u notice no difference between that parts at all ;/ the song really slows down here, so it feels natural that it doesn't only lower the ds, but also simplifies the rhythm.

for example this sliderend 00:26:944 (1) - is a strong sound
00:28:356 (1) - here to

00:05:415 (4,1,2,3) - in comprehension to 00:11:944 (2,3,4) - 00:17:591 (2,3,4) - ,... this is random, infact its the same melodie. yeah,
reamapped that


good luck :)
_DT3
I can't check in game rn but since I can see that it's the same thing as in Yamicchi's post, see my elaboration there
Also @Lokidoki: You have permission to fix the blanket xd
polka

Jabba wrote:

normal
uh so overall the diff is good but I don't think it fits the spread, it's basically 1/1 spam, just like easy (with easy having some more sliders and 2/1s), whilst hard already has 1/4s and 8 1/2s in a row. consider buffing this diff by adding more 1/2 rhythms :arrow: Gimmick ouo/
also AR5 OD5 to fit the spread better :arrow: That so high for normal what
00:15:650 (1) - this is not perfectly symmetrical pls :arrow: It wasnt supposed to be
01:07:885 (3,4) - blanket :arrow: It is?
yeah good diff but should be buffed, else you'll need another diff inbetween this and hard :arrow: the spread is fine geez
@Kitty Adventure: What makes it bad? It looks fine to me.

Rin Desu wrote:

Normal

00:26:944 (1) - that shape , why xD? :arrow: Why what? It pairs with 00:25:532 (3) - .
00:53:062 (1) - u should do first round than that intense slider, it makes more sense to do them before the chorus :arrow: I'm confused I picked that shape to map the guitar.?
so change 00:49:532 (1,2,3,1,2) - with 00:54:121 (2,3,1,2,3) - :arrow: Ahhhhh i think what I have works aight
01:28:356 (3,1) - blanket :arrow: It is
No changes! Thank you all!!
Lully

Rin Desu wrote:

hellow :D


Light Insane

00:49:180 (4,1) - blanket y
cause of this parts 01:14:944 (1,2,3,4) - u should consider change the drumroll sound to a silent one no need mapping vocals
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Nao Tomori
[sayonara]
00:03:827 (4,5) - would b better to delete 3 imo, theres nothing there.

00:08:591 (1,2,3,4) - dunno i think following the high pitched thing is better here cuz its so dense. like ctrl g on this is nice

00:13:532 (3,4,1,2) - overall seems a bit to high spacing

00:36:474 (4,1) - blanket ..

00:40:709 (4,1) - d

00:53:415 (4) - 2 circles pls

overall u should vary your rhythms a bit more lol this is just the exact same over and over kinda boring

01:00:121 (3) - think a long slider with a whistle n the body could be really cute here actually

01:08:591 (3,4) - think 1/1 slider + circle works better here cuz then the clicks are on vocals. and then 01:09:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can change the rhythm here to follow the vocals too, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9263033 would follow the vocals much more closely.

01:11:768 (5,1) - not a quint? the drums are pretty clear plus nice for buildup.

01:14:062 (4,5) - weirdly low spacing

01:21:121 (4,5) - ctrl g rhythm plz

01:27:297 (4,1) - the vocal changes dramatically here, please follow it

yea i think you should change up your rhythms to follow the main melodies more since atm its kinda just metronome type

[nyu]
00:01:533 (1,2) - silence?
00:02:238 (3) - 2 clicks plz

00:03:650 (4) - the slider end is so much stronger than the head.. like i get you're following the whistles but this sounds really weird

00:07:003 (4) - tbh dont like these notes, the intro isn't that intense that you need overmapping 1/2 to keep the intensity correct..

seems like you kinda ignore slider leniency in some of your patterns, like 00:10:003 (1,2) - the spacing here is really freaking small, and its basically played like a 1/1 gap cuz the slider goes in the same direction. same 00:13:180 (2,3) - or 00:19:885 (1,2) -

basically i think you should space them out some more so that both the head and the tail have importance cuz atm its only the head

you also need some rhythm variation.. just copy pasting the same rhythm for 30 seconds is so boring...

00:28:356 - tbh constant 1/2 isn't that good here. the song is obviously calmer but your rhythm density is the same. try to remove some, map a less dense layer. not every sound needs an object on it.

00:59:062 (3) - ee just put a circle on the red tick lol

01:07:180 (3,4) - 2 1/2 sliders works better here with the vocals

01:10:003 (3,4,1,2) - try to follow the vocals a bit better here too

01:20:944 (2,3) - ^

01:28:532 (2,3) - ctrl g ?


a lot of the kiai patterns look a bit awkward visually. like 01:06:474 (1,2,3) - the spacing between 1 and 3 is tiny, and the follow points dont really lead into 3 so it looks meh imo

01:14:238 (3,4,5,1) - same here, the 4-5 thing looks weird cuz 5 is angled the opposite way, and 5-1 visual spacing is fucked

a lot of your other patterns have the same issue with randomly off visual spacing so they look kinda disorganized


[asaiga]
00:08:944 (2) - looks weird cuz its curved so much lo

yea i think 00:30:213 - this area should be nerfed a bit, it's basically constant 1/2 gaps but you could undermap it a bit more to make more contrast

also for the love of god make a direction change this is literally 15 seconds of going in a clockwise circle

asaiga cutest former mentee

[polka]
u need more rhythm variation in the intro its boring

01:27:297 (2) - this sounds like ass cuz of the vocal being on the offbeat

ye think the top diffs need work in rhythming patterning.. good luck
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Naotoshi wrote:

[sayonara]
overall u should vary your rhythms a bit more lol this is just the exact same over and over kinda boring
yea i think you should change up your rhythms to follow the main melodies more since atm its kinda just metronome type
diff remapped, all suggestions have been taken into account
thanks a lot, Nao
Asaiga
Almost forgot I made a gd for this set xd

Naotoshi wrote:

[asaiga]
00:08:944 (2) - looks weird cuz its curved so much lo made it less curve :D

yea i think 00:30:213 - this area should be nerfed a bit, it's basically constant 1/2 gaps but you could undermap it a bit more to make more contrast

also for the love of god make a direction change this is literally 15 seconds of going in a clockwise circle improved this part's rhythm & patterns :oops:

asaiga cutest former mentee
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polka
@nao its like 20 seconds theyll be ok

i think it sounds fine can you explain
Asaiga
i think spread is fine, are you pushing it forward?
Topic Starter
Lokidoki
yeah, gonna start finding bns now
Mafumafu
M4M as requested.

[General]
Why you have so many usernames in tags?

[Polka's Normal]
Raise AR by 0.5 for balance

[Hard]
00:10:003 (1) - This sharp curved slider looks really odd amongst your smooth sliders and flows.

00:23:062 (2,2,3) - Please avoid this slight overlap.

00:36:121 This should be mapped out as well.

00:46:709 (1,2,3,1) - Rhythm here is a bit off-vocal, recommend: https://puu.sh/zydhT/483af510f1.png

01:05:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - Questionable rhythm here. 01:05:591 is ignored, and 01:05:768 (2,3,4,5) - four singletaps are creating a difficulty spike here. I'd recommend such rhythm: https://puu.sh/zydr8/b22f120670.png

01:10:356 (4,5) - Same reason for difficulty spike above, try changing them into a slider. 01:21:650 (4,5) - Same.

01:14:062 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Generally placement here is a bit uncomfortable. 01:14:238 (3,1) - weird blanket. 01:14:944 (1,3) - off-blanket

01:17:062 (2,3,4) - Try a 1/1 slider here. vocal on 3 is not strong enough for singletaps.

[Sayonara]
00:37:709 (4,5) - I think that the spacing here is oddly enlarged between these two notes. 5 is not that strong to deserve that.

01:00:121 (3) - I do expect this to be a slider since the sound here is extended.

01:02:238 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 01:13:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Should be nerf'ed for sure. They are imbalanced large as to spacing compared to any other spacing within this diff.

01:31:797 (8) - Weird slider here. Keep the stream here too.

Call me back when you think it is ready.
Topic Starter
Lokidoki

Regraz wrote:

[General]
Why you have so many usernames in tags? prev gder, now fixed

[Sayonara]
00:37:709 (4,5) - I think that the spacing here is oddly enlarged between these two notes. 5 is not that strong to deserve that. tbh, it has visual consistency with 00:37:532 (3,4) - , so it should be fine

01:00:121 (3) - I do expect this to be a slider since the sound here is extended. sure

01:02:238 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 01:13:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Should be nerf'ed for sure. They are imbalanced large as to spacing compared to any other spacing within this diff. well, the song is calm up until this part and i wanted to represent the intense guitar sounds which is also not present before this part. i'll keep the jumps for now, but i'll also increase spacing in other parts for less contrast

01:31:797 (8) - Weird slider here. Keep the stream here too. okay
Asaiga

Regraz wrote:

[Hard]
00:10:003 (1) - This sharp curved slider looks really odd amongst your smooth sliders and flows. fixed shapee

00:23:062 (2,2,3) - Please avoid this slight overlap. okay

00:36:121 This should be mapped out as well. fixed rhythm here

00:46:709 (1,2,3,1) - Rhythm here is a bit off-vocal, recommend: https://puu.sh/zydhT/483af510f1.png fixed in a different way

01:05:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - Questionable rhythm here. 01:05:591 is ignored, and 01:05:768 (2,3,4,5) - four singletaps are creating a difficulty spike here. I'd recommend such rhythm: https://puu.sh/zydr8/b22f120670.png || 01:05:591 - this is too faint. Normal is 2.02* and Insane is 4.49* so Hard should be something more towards Insane diff that's what I think. If you don't like it I can always change but keep for now.

01:10:356 (4,5) - Same reason for difficulty spike above, try changing them into a slider. 01:21:650 (4,5) - Same. Same

01:14:062 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Generally placement here is a bit uncomfortable. 01:14:238 (3,1) - weird blanket. 01:14:944 (1,3) - off-blanket I don't intend to make blankets there and the flow is fine

01:17:062 (2,3,4) - Try a 1/1 slider here. vocal on 3 is not strong enough for singletaps. ok

update
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Title:Good-bye, Ms. Floral Thief
TitleUnicode:さようなら、花泥棒さん
Artist:sana
ArtistUnicode:鎖那
Creator:Lokidoki
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330,12,47238,1,2,2:0:0:0:
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376,217,47944,5,2,2:0:0:0:
376,217,48121,2,0,L|296:224,1,60,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
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319,81,51297,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,81,51474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,25,51650,2,0,P|234:24|204:25,1,60,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,79,52003,2,0,P|93:82|65:80,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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47,181,52885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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152,230,53415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,230,53591,1,2,2:0:0:0:
223,261,53768,6,0,L|222:345,1,60,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
290,360,54121,1,8,0:0:0:0:
290,360,54297,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,328,54474,2,0,P|358:289|361:256,1,60,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,223,54827,2,0,P|424:188|417:154,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,40,55180,6,0,P|305:37|245:38,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,67,55710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,67,55886,2,0,L|176:138,1,60,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,159,56239,2,0,P|63:161|42:158,1,60,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
169,210,56592,6,0,L|169:270,1,60,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
135,333,56945,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,333,57122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,364,57298,2,0,P|228:363|258:364,1,60,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,314,57651,2,0,P|343:316|314:317,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,270,58003,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,236,58356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,119,58709,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,119,58885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,109,59238,5,0,0:0:0:0:
239,109,59415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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254,362,62768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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74,331,65062,6,0,P|60:268|74:198,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,71,65768,1,2,2:0:0:0:
233,105,65944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,68,66121,1,8,0:0:0:0:
391,92,66297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,67,66474,6,0,P|472:139|472:212,1,132.00000402832,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,270,67003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,237,67180,2,0,P|347:293|345:315,1,66.0000020141602,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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195,243,67885,6,0,P|132:258|52:235,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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54,113,68591,2,0,B|190:106,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,56,69121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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460,168,69650,2,0,P|466:246|466:318,1,132.00000402832,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
402,357,70180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,324,70356,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,344,70532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,305,70709,5,2,2:0:0:0:
106,328,70885,2,0,P|94:246|94:181,1,132.00000402832
115,82,71415,5,2,2:0:0:0:
99,179,71591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,195,71768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,97,71944,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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281,295,74062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,311,74238,2,0,B|169:317|145:323|145:323|112:301|76:289,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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308,49,77062,2,0,P|248:74|183:49,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,75,77591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
30,41,77768,6,0,P|24:113|24:186,1,132.00000402832,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,235,78297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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238,294,79179,6,0,P|309:290|380:289,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,318,79709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
495,258,79885,2,0,B|503:159|503:159|478:110,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,80,80415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,291,81474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,267,81650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,188,81826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18,143,82003,5,2,2:0:0:0:
48,70,82180,2,0,P|130:70|195:81,1,132.00000402832,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,115,82709,5,8,0:0:0:0:
322,86,82885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
407,138,83062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
426,61,83238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
482,162,83415,6,0,P|494:227|437:273,1,132.00000402832,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,279,83944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,339,84121,2,0,P|295:263|321:218,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,187,84650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,220,84827,6,0,L|171:208,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,53,86238,6,0,P|348:120|327:192,1,132.00000402832,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,245,86768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,325,87297,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,361,87474,6,0,L|102:351,1,132.00000402832
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259,27,88885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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51,306,90297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,347,90474,5,8,0:0:0:0:
188,203,90827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,281,91180,2,0,L|376:275,3,33.0000010070801,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
389,253,91532,2,0,L|434:244,3,33.0000010070801,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
460,255,91885,5,4,0:0:0:0:
ACOMG
Hi there :)

[Insane]
Found some place where you can emphasize more (to reflect better the song and make the diff more interesting!)
Word highlighted are some lyrics I think you may want to emphasize

00:34:356 So re da ke de shiawase

00:45:650 So re da ke de shiawase

00:53:591 Mata yu me o

01:27:297 Uso o tsuku toki kimi wa

Some other opinions

Generally speaking, I find the hitsound volume too low. I cannot gain enough feedback during playing. Suggest to increase to at least 60%

00:59:944 (1,2) Are these two 1/4 notes necessary? If you want to slow down here, then removing these two notes would be a good idea

01:00:827 (1) A little bit weird to me. Not expecting the slider to overlap. Would be better if put somewhere above the slider tail?

01:23:415 (1) Slider direction a little bit weird again. Why is it antiparallel to the stream direction?

01:29:062 Why Kiai here? The chrous ends alreay.

Hope this map get ranked soon

Sana! :) :) :)
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