fhana - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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Asherz007
It's like a reply chain. :P

Rivals_7 wrote:

my response is in Bold Blue

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00:17:751 (17751|1) - aw cmon this is the hardest diff and you still mapping clap with singles? Yup. Because the opening section focuses more around the vocals than anything else, these remained as singles. 4 sometimes isn't enough. Would have liked to have kept everything, but I think with clap doubles the section lost its playability. Also, being the easiest section in the song, I don't think it's too much of a problem. Being the easiest huh? although the song pace are being the fastest among all the section? that sounds contradicted. Oh,
good point. Felt like I wrote some fluff earlier. :D


00:18:862 (18862|1,18862|3) - and then a random doubles appear for a kick? where's the consistency? Not changing. I'll tell you the consistency. Not in the immediate vicinity, but the 8-bar phrase from 00:17:084. On each of the new measures, it goes triple-double-double-double, then triple-double-double-double again. Not random imo. i saw the intention now xd but reconsider this if you change something around Will do. :)

00:21:084 (21084|3,21084|2,21306|0,21306|3) - apparently this doesnt seem to be consistent with - 00:19:306 (19306|3,19417|0,19529|1,19640|2) - even though they are musically the same and have the same instruments as well What? 00:20:862 (20862|2,20862|0,21084|3,21084|2,21306|0,21306|3,21529|2,21529|3,21751|0,21751|1) follows the strings and that weird perc sound. Besides, bars 2 and 3 of a 4-bar pattern aren't normally the same.
well then you missing a kick at - 00:21:195 - and - 00:21:417 - in representing the consistency with - 00:17:751 (17751|1,17862|2) - and - 00:19:417 (19417|0,19529|1,19640|2) - Fair enough. Still, quite mean of the song's kicks not quite landing on the 1/4s.


00:26:640 (26640|2) - clap is here. not - 00:26:751 (26751|1,26751|3) - therefore the clap should have a double since its musically make sense Also musically makes sense to emphasise the syncopation, which both vocals and backgroun synth are on.
so why is this - 00:28:417 (28417|1,28417|3,28529|0) - not the same? iirc syncopation is a condition where there's some unusual beats on a certain measure. from what i see here - 00:26:417 (26417|0,26529|1,26640|2,26751|3,26751|1) - these rythm are kick-kick(altho sounds quite faint idk)-clap-kick. You see the 3 out of 4 rythm are kicks, with clap occured on 3/4. if you want it to follow the term syncopation, you should at least change it to something similar with - 00:28:195 (28195|3,28306|2,28417|1,28417|3,28529|0) - PS: there's no synth i could hear of :u Seems I don't know what I'm talking about either. xD I, uh, don't know what they are by name lol. Synthy trumpet things? In any case, they're the same now. Both of initial highlights are doubles.

00:33:084 (33084|1,33084|0,33084|3) - now you see you didnt use a full 1/4 like you do in the HD so.... HD changed so... I MEAN MX AAAAA BRAIN DAMMIT. anyways i see it now and i think should be ok as of now. I mean MX too. :lol:

just to clarify something because i was modding this at early morning so my explanation is really messed ahahaha xD
Thanks for the clarification. Seems I still need to think some things through. Still annoyed at the rounding that I need to do, since most of these 1/4 graces are actually not really on any bit of the beat... :s
zigizigiefe
Bubble incoming? o:
Topic Starter
Asherz007

zigizigiefe wrote:

Bubble incoming? o:
I wish xD
Gonna search around for a few more mods before that happens I reckon. Soon™ :P
Nevertary
hello asherz o/

maybe u can add sv on this xD
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1084.62437163143,444.444444444444,4,2,1,0,1,0
50862,-100,4,2,1,0,0,1
57973,-100,4,2,1,0,0,0
65084,-100,4,2,1,0,0,1
72195,-100,4,2,1,0,0,0
87862,-333.333333333333,4,2,1,0,0,0
88195,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,0,0,0
88251,-333.333333333333,4,2,1,0,0,0
88584,-100,4,2,1,0,0,0
88640,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,0,0,0
88973,-100,4,2,1,0,0,0
00:06:640 (6640|2) - move to col 2
00:25:306 - add on col 1
00:40:195 - add 1 note
00:42:640 - ^
00:43:751 - ^
01:21:084 - ^
00:23:529 - add 1 on col 1, same sound with double pattern above
00:30:640 (30640|0) - move to col 3
00:51:751 - because it's hd diff, i recommend to add more note on white thick like this
01:28:640 (88640|1,88640|2,88640|3) - change to LN like MX/SC diff

great song, good luck x'D
Topic Starter
Asherz007

Nevertary wrote:

hello asherz o/

maybe u can add sv on this xD sddfgnjkserghufvkjnsd,fg...
Er... I might think about it. It looks a little messy imo. But if I get other recommendations about it I'll think about adding them in.

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57973,-100,4,2,1,0,0,0
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72195,-100,4,2,1,0,0,0
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00:06:640 (6640|2) - move to col 2 Sure
00:25:306 - add on col 1 I'm a bit eh on this one. I went one note for the clap, one for vocals. As long as it wasn't in a 1/4 stream for this section.
00:40:195 - add 1 note Section reworked slightly to accomondate this
00:42:640 - ^ SC also has this as double, so I reckon it's better not to.
00:43:751 - ^ Fair enough.
01:21:084 - ^ SC has double
00:23:529 - add 1 on col 1, same sound with double pattern above Whoopsy daisy.
00:30:640 (30640|0) - move to col 3 Sure.
00:51:751 - because it's hd diff, i recommend to add more note on white thick like this But that's what the NM does... and doubles don't fit D:
01:28:640 (88640|1,88640|2,88640|3) - change to LN like MX/SC diff Sure, why not.

great song, good luck x'D
Thanks for the mod! :)
Mykaterasu
Impromptu mod exchange for Kanna's diff.

2017-04-27 16:24 Asherz007: No I mean for the chat log lol
2017-04-27 16:24 Asherz007: Just so kds doesn't get denied for no reason
2017-04-27 16:24 Mykaterasu: oh right
2017-04-27 16:31 Mykaterasu: so what happened 00:03:973 - here
2017-04-27 16:32 Asherz007: Uh... XD
2017-04-27 16:32 Asherz007: single col 3?
2017-04-27 16:32 Mykaterasu: yeah
2017-04-27 16:32 Mykaterasu: that would be good
2017-04-27 16:32 Mykaterasu: :s
2017-04-27 16:32 Asherz007: Whoops lol
2017-04-27 16:33 Mykaterasu: This diff as a whole has a lot fewer objects than mine
2017-04-27 16:33 Mykaterasu: so it feels empty for me
2017-04-27 16:33 Mykaterasu: but it's still right so that's good
2017-04-27 16:33 Asherz007: ikr
2017-04-27 16:34 Mykaterasu: might be too much tension on lane 3 here 00:08:195 (8195|2) -
2017-04-27 16:35 Mykaterasu: you've got like 3 lane 1,3 chords
2017-04-27 16:35 Mykaterasu: four even
2017-04-27 16:35 Mykaterasu: while this lane 4 LN is happening
2017-04-27 16:36 Mykaterasu: maybe if you find a way to turn one 1,3 chord into a 2,3 chord you could ease the tension in lane 3 by putting more singles in lane 1
2017-04-27 16:36 Asherz007: It's tough this one.... hmm...
2017-04-27 16:36 Mykaterasu: one of these 00:09:529 (9529|0,9529|2,9973|2,9973|0) - preferably
2017-04-27 16:37 Asherz007: I'll try lol
2017-04-27 16:39 Asherz007: I think the only reason col 3 was strained was because of 00:08:862 (8862|1,8973|2,9084|1,9195|2,9306|1) - I'd rather this not be one-handed
2017-04-27 16:39 Mykaterasu: you can still do that by transferring 00:09:306 (9306|1) - to column 1
2017-04-27 16:40 Mykaterasu: makes it pitch relevent with the piano bass note in between the chord riff ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
2017-04-27 16:40 Asherz007: Oh nice idea.
2017-04-27 16:42 Mykaterasu: oh i missed one of the things
2017-04-27 16:42 Mykaterasu: there's a decent amount of tension in the right lanes 00:07:306 (7306|2,7306|3,7473|3,7529|2,7751|2,7751|3,8195|3,8195|2) - here
2017-04-27 16:43 Asherz007: I could just ctrl h a giant section lol
2017-04-27 16:44 Mykaterasu: You don't have to, I'd make 00:07:751 (7751|2,7751|3,7973|1,7973|0) - these chords 2,3 and 1,4
2017-04-27 16:44 Asherz007: Alright not a bad idea
2017-04-27 16:46 Mykaterasu: honestly for 00:17:084 (17084|0,17084|3,17084|1) - this section there really isn't much or anything wrong
2017-04-27 16:46 Mykaterasu: its quite a safe way to map it
2017-04-27 16:46 Mykaterasu: you could maybe give a bit of love to the offbeat phrases
2017-04-27 16:47 Mykaterasu: but it's good
2017-04-27 16:47 Asherz007: Maybe. Throughout the map I was predominantly following vocals.
2017-04-27 16:47 Mykaterasu: yeah exactly
2017-04-27 16:48 Mykaterasu: I still think you should have this rhythm 00:18:862 (18862|1,19084|0,19306|1,19417|0,19640|2,19862|3,20084|2,20195|3,20417|2) - as singles though
2017-04-27 16:48 Mykaterasu: the bass part is pretty interesting in this section
2017-04-27 16:49 Mykaterasu: (megalovania motif, people like it)
2017-04-27 16:50 Asherz007: Not quite understanding what you want to get at.
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: o shit I typoed
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: I meant throughout
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: not though
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: like have that bass part running through the whole section
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: not just in that one bar
2017-04-27 16:51 Asherz007: Oh I see. That was not intended lol
2017-04-27 16:51 Mykaterasu: its cause the vocals do that same rhythm once or twice
2017-04-27 16:52 Asherz007: I was following everything but the bass there hehe
2017-04-27 16:53 Mykaterasu: not really a fan of the LNs in this 00:33:084 (33084|0) - section
2017-04-27 16:53 Mykaterasu: I don't really know what they're representing
2017-04-27 16:53 Mykaterasu: I can guess the harmonic structure maybe
2017-04-27 16:54 Mykaterasu: but then 00:33:751 (33751|2,34417|3) - nothing changes here chordwise
2017-04-27 16:54 Mykaterasu: i just overall don't think that the standard dotted rhythm is appropriate here
2017-04-27 16:54 Mykaterasu: it's better for 00:34:862 (34862|1,35529|0,36195|3) - this bar
2017-04-27 16:55 Mykaterasu: and I think you kinda played your cards too early for this section
2017-04-27 16:55 Asherz007: I think I would lose myself in explanation lol
2017-04-27 16:55 Mykaterasu: because you have a similar LN structure in the chorus
2017-04-27 16:55 Mykaterasu: except 1 per measure
2017-04-27 16:55 Asherz007: Sort of a half-follow of chord, vocals and strings.
2017-04-27 16:56 Mykaterasu: in terms of movement and strain it feels like this is more important than the chorus
2017-04-27 16:56 Mykaterasu: or at least on an equal footing with it
2017-04-27 16:58 Asherz007: It's an interesting point you raise. It's just the LNs in the chorus follow different things, I guess.
2017-04-27 16:59 Mykaterasu: it is a toughie
2017-04-27 16:59 Mykaterasu: this section is in general way more rhythmically interesting than the chorus
2017-04-27 16:59 Mykaterasu: it's really annoying
2017-04-27 16:59 Asherz007: mhm definitely.
2017-04-27 17:00 Mykaterasu: honestly the only advice I can give to stop that is to tone back the LNs slightly
2017-04-27 17:00 Asherz007: Definitely want to continue LNs through the entire section though, since I feel the music calls for it.
2017-04-27 17:00 Mykaterasu: it's a big impasse
2017-04-27 17:00 Mykaterasu: you'll need time to decide
2017-04-27 17:00 Mykaterasu: also another missing single 00:54:751 - here
2017-04-27 17:00 Asherz007: So... something similar to the MX diff at this point?
2017-04-27 17:01 Asherz007: Whoops lol
2017-04-27 17:01 Mykaterasu: possibly
2017-04-27 17:01 Mykaterasu: have you experimented with shorter LNs in either section?
2017-04-27 17:02 Mykaterasu: perhaps you don't need to have them fully going into each other
2017-04-27 17:02 Asherz007: I think I tried in the chorus but it felt a little cluttered to me
2017-04-27 17:02 Asherz007: I think I ended up focussing on playability for these sections more than anything else.
2017-04-27 17:03 Mykaterasu: alright then
2017-04-27 17:03 Mykaterasu: I recommend a little shuffle to these repeated 00:43:751 (43751|3,43751|2,43751|0,44195|0,44195|2,44195|3) - 3note chords
2017-04-27 17:04 Mykaterasu: cause they're coming up 00:45:529 (45529|3,45529|2,45529|0) - again a measure later
2017-04-27 17:04 Mykaterasu: 00:44:640 (44640|1,44640|3,44640|2) - and this one too I guess
2017-04-27 17:04 Asherz007: ctrl h 00:43:973 (43973|2,44084|1,44195|3,44195|2,44195|0) - ?
2017-04-27 17:04 Mykaterasu: pretty much yeah that would work
2017-04-27 17:05 Asherz007: Not too sure whether there's a problem with the second one.
2017-04-27 17:06 Mykaterasu: well these chords 00:43:751 (43751|0,43751|3,43751|2,44640|2,44640|1,44640|3) - are a part of this 00:45:529 (45529|0,45529|3,45529|2,45640|2,45640|1,45640|3,45862|3,45862|2,45862|0,45973|1,45973|3,45973|2,46195|0,46195|2,46195|3,46306|3,46306|1,46306|2,46529|3,46529|2,46529|0,46640|2,46640|1,46640|3) - pattern
2017-04-27 17:06 Mykaterasu: so I think something has to give to releave the right lane tension
2017-04-27 17:07 Mykaterasu: but it's a very broad balance point
2017-04-27 17:07 Asherz007: What about moving 00:45:084 (45084|3) - ?
2017-04-27 17:08 Mykaterasu: if you moved that to lane 1 then 00:44:862 (44862|2) - this to lane 4 that would probably distribute it nicely
2017-04-27 17:08 Mykaterasu: also what about 00:45:306 - this vocal?
2017-04-27 17:10 Asherz007: I ignored the vocals for a bar to focus on the strings. Might make the following triples a little awkward mapping both
2017-04-27 17:10 Asherz007: You sure about moving that note to lane 4?
2017-04-27 17:11 Mykaterasu: yeah, cause of this note 00:44:417 (44417|2) - here earlier
2017-04-27 17:11 Mykaterasu: it'd be better to have it in the open space at 4
2017-04-27 17:11 Asherz007: Fair enough.
2017-04-27 17:12 Mykaterasu: and if you're not going to put in 00:45:306 - this vocal you might want to make the string LN a two note chord
2017-04-27 17:12 Mykaterasu: gives a sense of finality that a single LN doesn't really have
2017-04-27 17:13 Mykaterasu: then you can get away with not mapping the vocal
2017-04-27 17:13 Asherz007: One normal one LN?
2017-04-27 17:13 Mykaterasu: yeah
2017-04-27 17:13 Mykaterasu: 2,3 would be awesome
2017-04-27 17:14 Asherz007: That's what I was thinking hehe
2017-04-27 17:14 Mykaterasu: since it's vertically symettricaly
2017-04-27 17:14 Mykaterasu: al*
2017-04-27 17:14 Asherz007: mhm
2017-04-27 17:15 Mykaterasu: I don't really like how 00:49:306 (49306|3,49306|2,49417|1) - this is done
2017-04-27 17:15 Mykaterasu: I feel like the single is stronger than the double
2017-04-27 17:16 Asherz007: Uh... I got no explanation for that...
2017-04-27 17:16 Asherz007: Move col 3 note forward 1/4?
2017-04-27 17:16 Mykaterasu: yep
2017-04-27 17:16 Asherz007: Nice catch
2017-04-27 17:17 Mykaterasu: did I already talk about this note 00:54:751 - here
2017-04-27 17:18 Asherz007: Yeah
2017-04-27 17:18 Asherz007: Put one in already
2017-04-27 17:18 Mykaterasu: nice
2017-04-27 17:19 Mykaterasu: The chorus' structure is rhythmically sound but I'm not sure if you're going for pitch relevancy or some other type of pattern
2017-04-27 17:19 Mykaterasu: at first glance it looks like 00:51:306 (51306|3,51306|1) - these chords are support to be precursors to the chords that will contain the next LN 00:51:751 (51751|1,51751|3) - which would be a really fresh structure
2017-04-27 17:20 Mykaterasu: supposed*
2017-04-27 17:20 Mykaterasu: but sometimes it doesn't happen like that 00:52:195 (52195|2,52195|0,52640|0,52640|1) -
2017-04-27 17:31 Mykaterasu: Aaaand we're back?
2017-04-27 17:36 Asherz007: I guess?
2017-04-27 17:36 Mykaterasu: sweet
2017-04-27 17:36 Mykaterasu: banchub can't keep running for long
2017-04-27 17:36 Asherz007: I'm going through a separate irc client though
2017-04-27 17:37 Asherz007: Hope you got the logs for this one
2017-04-27 17:37 Mykaterasu: I save all my chatlogs clientside ingame
2017-04-27 17:37 Mykaterasu: with the standard function
2017-04-27 17:37 Asherz007: Oh awesome
2017-04-27 17:38 Asherz007: I forgot how you do that lol
2017-04-27 17:38 Mykaterasu: its just an option
2017-04-27 17:38 Asherz007: nvw found it
2017-04-27 17:38 Asherz007: I turned it off somehow lol
2017-04-27 17:38 Mykaterasu: its so useful
2017-04-27 17:38 Mykaterasu: I once forgot my input sensitivity
2017-04-27 17:38 Asherz007: Was there anything else that you wanted to say?
2017-04-27 17:38 Mykaterasu: um maybe
2017-04-27 17:39 Mykaterasu: did you see what I said about 00:51:306 (51306|1,51306|3,51751|3,51751|1) - these chords matching
2017-04-27 17:40 Mykaterasu: back again?
2017-04-27 17:41 Asherz007: Bancho absolutely sucks today lol
2017-04-27 17:42 Mykaterasu: If bancho disconnects again I'm going to finish the mod on the forums
2017-04-27 17:42 Asherz007: Fair enough lol
2017-04-27 17:43 Mykaterasu: so yeah if you're going to have chords like 00:51:306 (51306|3,51306|1,51751|1,51751|3) - this where they match
2017-04-27 17:43 Mykaterasu: try to do it as often as you can
2017-04-27 17:43 Mykaterasu: cause if you do stuff like this 00:52:195 (52195|2,52195|0,52640|1,52640|0) - after wards it might make it look random
2017-04-27 17:43 Mykaterasu: you can always have the first section of the chorus as matching 2note chords
2017-04-27 17:44 Mykaterasu: and then the second half can be variations of 2note chords
2017-04-27 17:44 Mykaterasu: that way it doesn't seem quite as random
2017-04-27 17:45 Asherz007: Hmm...
2017-04-27 17:47 Asherz007: Goddammit lol
2017-04-27 17:47 Mykaterasu: yeah I'll just do the last points on the forum
2017-04-27 17:48 Asherz007: Alrighty then. I think I might try for symmetry on that section you highlighted
2017-04-27 17:48 Mykaterasu: sweet
2017-04-27 17:48 Mykaterasu: thanks for the mod exchange
2017-04-27 17:48 Mykaterasu: good luck with your map
2017-04-27 17:48 Asherz007: dw you too :)

And a couple extra points;
  1. 01:19:751 (79751|2,79751|1,79862|0,79862|3,79973|1,79973|2,80084|3,80084|0,80195|1,80195|0,80195|3) - There is still a push rhythm 01:20:084 - here that should probably take the 3-note chord.
  2. 01:21:529 (81529|3,81529|2,81529|0,81751|3,81751|0,81973|3,81973|1,81973|0,82195|2,82195|0,82417|1,82417|2,82417|0,82640|3,82640|1,82751|0,82751|2,82862|3,82862|1,82862|0) - Random nitpick, if you ctrl-h this whole section, you keep the same tension but make this 01:22:640 (82640|1,82640|3,82751|0,82751|2) - upward movement instead of downward, making it pitch relevant. In reality, you could do some reshuffling and get the same thing, which would be better.
  3. 01:27:862 (87862|1,87862|2,87862|3,88640|1,88640|3,88640|2,88640|0) - I actually really like this rhythm, but I think that using 3LNs is a bit too much.
    2 LNs and a note or 1 LN and a note (like the previous time you did this here 00:45:195 (45195|1) - ) would be a little more appropriate imo.
Topic Starter
Asherz007

Mykaterasu wrote:

Impromptu mod exchange for Kanna's diff.

2017-04-27 16:24 Asherz007: No I mean for the chat log lol
2017-04-27 16:24 Asherz007: Just so kds doesn't get denied for no reason
2017-04-27 16:24 Mykaterasu: oh right
2017-04-27 16:31 Mykaterasu: so what happened 00:03:973 - here
2017-04-27 16:32 Asherz007: Uh... XD
2017-04-27 16:32 Asherz007: single col 3?
2017-04-27 16:32 Mykaterasu: yeah
2017-04-27 16:32 Mykaterasu: that would be good
2017-04-27 16:32 Mykaterasu: :s
2017-04-27 16:32 Asherz007: Whoops lol
2017-04-27 16:33 Mykaterasu: This diff as a whole has a lot fewer objects than mine
2017-04-27 16:33 Mykaterasu: so it feels empty for me
2017-04-27 16:33 Mykaterasu: but it's still right so that's good
2017-04-27 16:33 Asherz007: ikr
2017-04-27 16:34 Mykaterasu: might be too much tension on lane 3 here 00:08:195 (8195|2) -
2017-04-27 16:35 Mykaterasu: you've got like 3 lane 1,3 chords
2017-04-27 16:35 Mykaterasu: four even
2017-04-27 16:35 Mykaterasu: while this lane 4 LN is happening
2017-04-27 16:36 Mykaterasu: maybe if you find a way to turn one 1,3 chord into a 2,3 chord you could ease the tension in lane 3 by putting more singles in lane 1
2017-04-27 16:36 Asherz007: It's tough this one.... hmm...
2017-04-27 16:36 Mykaterasu: one of these 00:09:529 (9529|0,9529|2,9973|2,9973|0) - preferably
2017-04-27 16:37 Asherz007: I'll try lol
2017-04-27 16:39 Asherz007: I think the only reason col 3 was strained was because of 00:08:862 (8862|1,8973|2,9084|1,9195|2,9306|1) - I'd rather this not be one-handed
2017-04-27 16:39 Mykaterasu: you can still do that by transferring 00:09:306 (9306|1) - to column 1
2017-04-27 16:40 Mykaterasu: makes it pitch relevent with the piano bass note in between the chord riff ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
2017-04-27 16:40 Asherz007: Oh nice idea.
2017-04-27 16:42 Mykaterasu: oh i missed one of the things
2017-04-27 16:42 Mykaterasu: there's a decent amount of tension in the right lanes 00:07:306 (7306|2,7306|3,7473|3,7529|2,7751|2,7751|3,8195|3,8195|2) - here
2017-04-27 16:43 Asherz007: I could just ctrl h a giant section lol
2017-04-27 16:44 Mykaterasu: You don't have to, I'd make 00:07:751 (7751|2,7751|3,7973|1,7973|0) - these chords 2,3 and 1,4
2017-04-27 16:44 Asherz007: Alright not a bad idea
2017-04-27 16:46 Mykaterasu: honestly for 00:17:084 (17084|0,17084|3,17084|1) - this section there really isn't much or anything wrong
2017-04-27 16:46 Mykaterasu: its quite a safe way to map it
2017-04-27 16:46 Mykaterasu: you could maybe give a bit of love to the offbeat phrases
2017-04-27 16:47 Mykaterasu: but it's good
2017-04-27 16:47 Asherz007: Maybe. Throughout the map I was predominantly following vocals.
2017-04-27 16:47 Mykaterasu: yeah exactly
2017-04-27 16:48 Mykaterasu: I still think you should have this rhythm 00:18:862 (18862|1,19084|0,19306|1,19417|0,19640|2,19862|3,20084|2,20195|3,20417|2) - as singles though
2017-04-27 16:48 Mykaterasu: the bass part is pretty interesting in this section
2017-04-27 16:49 Mykaterasu: (megalovania motif, people like it)
2017-04-27 16:50 Asherz007: Not quite understanding what you want to get at.
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: o shit I typoed
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: I meant throughout
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: not though
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: like have that bass part running through the whole section
2017-04-27 16:50 Mykaterasu: not just in that one bar
2017-04-27 16:51 Asherz007: Oh I see. That was not intended lol
2017-04-27 16:51 Mykaterasu: its cause the vocals do that same rhythm once or twice
2017-04-27 16:52 Asherz007: I was following everything but the bass there hehe
2017-04-27 16:53 Mykaterasu: not really a fan of the LNs in this 00:33:084 (33084|0) - section
2017-04-27 16:53 Mykaterasu: I don't really know what they're representing
2017-04-27 16:53 Mykaterasu: I can guess the harmonic structure maybe
2017-04-27 16:54 Mykaterasu: but then 00:33:751 (33751|2,34417|3) - nothing changes here chordwise
2017-04-27 16:54 Mykaterasu: i just overall don't think that the standard dotted rhythm is appropriate here
2017-04-27 16:54 Mykaterasu: it's better for 00:34:862 (34862|1,35529|0,36195|3) - this bar
2017-04-27 16:55 Mykaterasu: and I think you kinda played your cards too early for this section
2017-04-27 16:55 Asherz007: I think I would lose myself in explanation lol
2017-04-27 16:55 Mykaterasu: because you have a similar LN structure in the chorus
2017-04-27 16:55 Mykaterasu: except 1 per measure
2017-04-27 16:55 Asherz007: Sort of a half-follow of chord, vocals and strings.
2017-04-27 16:56 Mykaterasu: in terms of movement and strain it feels like this is more important than the chorus
2017-04-27 16:56 Mykaterasu: or at least on an equal footing with it
2017-04-27 16:58 Asherz007: It's an interesting point you raise. It's just the LNs in the chorus follow different things, I guess.
2017-04-27 16:59 Mykaterasu: it is a toughie
2017-04-27 16:59 Mykaterasu: this section is in general way more rhythmically interesting than the chorus
2017-04-27 16:59 Mykaterasu: it's really annoying
2017-04-27 16:59 Asherz007: mhm definitely.
2017-04-27 17:00 Mykaterasu: honestly the only advice I can give to stop that is to tone back the LNs slightly
2017-04-27 17:00 Asherz007: Definitely want to continue LNs through the entire section though, since I feel the music calls for it.
2017-04-27 17:00 Mykaterasu: it's a big impasse
2017-04-27 17:00 Mykaterasu: you'll need time to decide
2017-04-27 17:00 Mykaterasu: also another missing single 00:54:751 - here
2017-04-27 17:00 Asherz007: So... something similar to the MX diff at this point?
2017-04-27 17:01 Asherz007: Whoops lol
2017-04-27 17:01 Mykaterasu: possibly
2017-04-27 17:01 Mykaterasu: have you experimented with shorter LNs in either section?
2017-04-27 17:02 Mykaterasu: perhaps you don't need to have them fully going into each other
2017-04-27 17:02 Asherz007: I think I tried in the chorus but it felt a little cluttered to me
2017-04-27 17:02 Asherz007: I think I ended up focussing on playability for these sections more than anything else.
2017-04-27 17:03 Mykaterasu: alright then
2017-04-27 17:03 Mykaterasu: I recommend a little shuffle to these repeated 00:43:751 (43751|3,43751|2,43751|0,44195|0,44195|2,44195|3) - 3note chords
2017-04-27 17:04 Mykaterasu: cause they're coming up 00:45:529 (45529|3,45529|2,45529|0) - again a measure later
2017-04-27 17:04 Mykaterasu: 00:44:640 (44640|1,44640|3,44640|2) - and this one too I guess
2017-04-27 17:04 Asherz007: ctrl h 00:43:973 (43973|2,44084|1,44195|3,44195|2,44195|0) - ?
2017-04-27 17:04 Mykaterasu: pretty much yeah that would work
2017-04-27 17:05 Asherz007: Not too sure whether there's a problem with the second one.
2017-04-27 17:06 Mykaterasu: well these chords 00:43:751 (43751|0,43751|3,43751|2,44640|2,44640|1,44640|3) - are a part of this 00:45:529 (45529|0,45529|3,45529|2,45640|2,45640|1,45640|3,45862|3,45862|2,45862|0,45973|1,45973|3,45973|2,46195|0,46195|2,46195|3,46306|3,46306|1,46306|2,46529|3,46529|2,46529|0,46640|2,46640|1,46640|3) - pattern
2017-04-27 17:06 Mykaterasu: so I think something has to give to releave the right lane tension
2017-04-27 17:07 Mykaterasu: but it's a very broad balance point
2017-04-27 17:07 Asherz007: What about moving 00:45:084 (45084|3) - ?
2017-04-27 17:08 Mykaterasu: if you moved that to lane 1 then 00:44:862 (44862|2) - this to lane 4 that would probably distribute it nicely
2017-04-27 17:08 Mykaterasu: also what about 00:45:306 - this vocal?
2017-04-27 17:10 Asherz007: I ignored the vocals for a bar to focus on the strings. Might make the following triples a little awkward mapping both
2017-04-27 17:10 Asherz007: You sure about moving that note to lane 4?
2017-04-27 17:11 Mykaterasu: yeah, cause of this note 00:44:417 (44417|2) - here earlier
2017-04-27 17:11 Mykaterasu: it'd be better to have it in the open space at 4
2017-04-27 17:11 Asherz007: Fair enough.
2017-04-27 17:12 Mykaterasu: and if you're not going to put in 00:45:306 - this vocal you might want to make the string LN a two note chord
2017-04-27 17:12 Mykaterasu: gives a sense of finality that a single LN doesn't really have
2017-04-27 17:13 Mykaterasu: then you can get away with not mapping the vocal
2017-04-27 17:13 Asherz007: One normal one LN?
2017-04-27 17:13 Mykaterasu: yeah
2017-04-27 17:13 Mykaterasu: 2,3 would be awesome
2017-04-27 17:14 Asherz007: That's what I was thinking hehe
2017-04-27 17:14 Mykaterasu: since it's vertically symettricaly
2017-04-27 17:14 Mykaterasu: al*
2017-04-27 17:14 Asherz007: mhm
2017-04-27 17:15 Mykaterasu: I don't really like how 00:49:306 (49306|3,49306|2,49417|1) - this is done
2017-04-27 17:15 Mykaterasu: I feel like the single is stronger than the double
2017-04-27 17:16 Asherz007: Uh... I got no explanation for that...
2017-04-27 17:16 Asherz007: Move col 3 note forward 1/4?
2017-04-27 17:16 Mykaterasu: yep
2017-04-27 17:16 Asherz007: Nice catch
2017-04-27 17:17 Mykaterasu: did I already talk about this note 00:54:751 - here
2017-04-27 17:18 Asherz007: Yeah
2017-04-27 17:18 Asherz007: Put one in already
2017-04-27 17:18 Mykaterasu: nice
2017-04-27 17:19 Mykaterasu: The chorus' structure is rhythmically sound but I'm not sure if you're going for pitch relevancy or some other type of pattern
2017-04-27 17:19 Mykaterasu: at first glance it looks like 00:51:306 (51306|3,51306|1) - these chords are support to be precursors to the chords that will contain the next LN 00:51:751 (51751|1,51751|3) - which would be a really fresh structure
2017-04-27 17:20 Mykaterasu: supposed*
2017-04-27 17:20 Mykaterasu: but sometimes it doesn't happen like that 00:52:195 (52195|2,52195|0,52640|0,52640|1) -
2017-04-27 17:31 Mykaterasu: Aaaand we're back?
2017-04-27 17:36 Asherz007: I guess?
2017-04-27 17:36 Mykaterasu: sweet
2017-04-27 17:36 Mykaterasu: banchub can't keep running for long
2017-04-27 17:36 Asherz007: I'm going through a separate irc client though
2017-04-27 17:37 Asherz007: Hope you got the logs for this one
2017-04-27 17:37 Mykaterasu: I save all my chatlogs clientside ingame
2017-04-27 17:37 Mykaterasu: with the standard function
2017-04-27 17:37 Asherz007: Oh awesome
2017-04-27 17:38 Asherz007: I forgot how you do that lol
2017-04-27 17:38 Mykaterasu: its just an option
2017-04-27 17:38 Asherz007: nvw found it
2017-04-27 17:38 Asherz007: I turned it off somehow lol
2017-04-27 17:38 Mykaterasu: its so useful
2017-04-27 17:38 Mykaterasu: I once forgot my input sensitivity
2017-04-27 17:38 Asherz007: Was there anything else that you wanted to say?
2017-04-27 17:38 Mykaterasu: um maybe
2017-04-27 17:39 Mykaterasu: did you see what I said about 00:51:306 (51306|1,51306|3,51751|3,51751|1) - these chords matching
2017-04-27 17:40 Mykaterasu: back again?
2017-04-27 17:41 Asherz007: Bancho absolutely sucks today lol
2017-04-27 17:42 Mykaterasu: If bancho disconnects again I'm going to finish the mod on the forums
2017-04-27 17:42 Asherz007: Fair enough lol
2017-04-27 17:43 Mykaterasu: so yeah if you're going to have chords like 00:51:306 (51306|3,51306|1,51751|1,51751|3) - this where they match
2017-04-27 17:43 Mykaterasu: try to do it as often as you can
2017-04-27 17:43 Mykaterasu: cause if you do stuff like this 00:52:195 (52195|2,52195|0,52640|1,52640|0) - after wards it might make it look random
2017-04-27 17:43 Mykaterasu: you can always have the first section of the chorus as matching 2note chords
2017-04-27 17:44 Mykaterasu: and then the second half can be variations of 2note chords
2017-04-27 17:44 Mykaterasu: that way it doesn't seem quite as random
2017-04-27 17:45 Asherz007: Hmm...
2017-04-27 17:47 Asherz007: Goddammit lol
2017-04-27 17:47 Mykaterasu: yeah I'll just do the last points on the forum
2017-04-27 17:48 Asherz007: Alrighty then. I think I might try for symmetry on that section you highlighted
2017-04-27 17:48 Mykaterasu: sweet
2017-04-27 17:48 Mykaterasu: thanks for the mod exchange
2017-04-27 17:48 Mykaterasu: good luck with your map
2017-04-27 17:48 Asherz007: dw you too :)

And a couple extra points;
  1. 01:19:751 (79751|2,79751|1,79862|0,79862|3,79973|1,79973|2,80084|3,80084|0,80195|1,80195|0,80195|3) - There is still a push rhythm 01:20:084 - here that should probably take the 3-note chord. Crud. I fixed the HS here but not the actual notes XD
  2. 01:21:529 (81529|3,81529|2,81529|0,81751|3,81751|0,81973|3,81973|1,81973|0,82195|2,82195|0,82417|1,82417|2,82417|0,82640|3,82640|1,82751|0,82751|2,82862|3,82862|1,82862|0) - Random nitpick, if you ctrl-h this whole section, you keep the same tension but make this 01:22:640 (82640|1,82640|3,82751|0,82751|2) - upward movement instead of downward, making it pitch relevant. In reality, you could do some reshuffling and get the same thing, which would be better. Nice idea.
  3. 01:27:862 (87862|1,87862|2,87862|3,88640|1,88640|3,88640|2,88640|0) - I actually really like this rhythm, but I think that using 3LNs is a bit too much.
    2 LNs and a note or 1 LN and a note (like the previous time you did this here 00:45:195 (45195|1) - ) would be a little more appropriate imo. Minor bit of shuffling. c:
Thanks a lot for the mod! :)
Bancho you absolute $%@!&% jk but seriously down over 5 times within an hour wth
Protastic101
2017-04-28 18:59 Protastic101: 00:21:967 (21967|2,22116|3,22265|2,22415|1,22564|0,22713|1) - u fuk
2017-04-28 18:59 Protastic101: 00:21:519 (21519|2,21967|2,22265|2) -
2017-04-28 19:00 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7947914
2017-04-28 19:00 Asherz007: 00:20:922 (20922|0) -
2017-04-28 19:12 Protastic101: 00:02:265 (2265|2,2340|3,2415|0,2415|2,2489|1,2564|2,2638|3) -
2017-04-28 19:15 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7948011
2017-04-28 21:11 Asherz007: 01:43:593-
2017-04-28 21:11 Asherz007: 01:43:01:43:593 (103593|1) -
2017-04-28 21:11 Asherz007: 01:43:593 (103593|1) -
2017-04-29 10:23 Asherz007: Still thinking of staying sub 10k? You're at 9993... :P
2017-04-29 10:23 Protastic101: Im going to be 10k and you cant stop me D:<
2017-04-29 10:37 Asherz007: :P
2017-04-29 10:39 Protastic101: :D
2017-04-29 10:39 Asherz007: I am mega bored and I don't know what to do ;-;
2017-04-29 10:40 Protastic101: map!
2017-04-29 10:40 Protastic101: or mod!
2017-04-29 10:40 Protastic101: or uh, idk, study for exams!
2017-04-29 10:40 Asherz007: >.>
2017-04-29 10:40 Protastic101: that's what I should be doing actually lol
2017-04-29 10:40 Asherz007: XD
2017-04-29 10:41 Protastic101: have osu in one window, have my notes in another, I'm set lol
2017-04-29 10:42 Asherz007: I used to have an extra monitor to do modding but it broke. ;-;
2017-04-29 10:42 Protastic101: aw, what happened to it?
2017-04-29 10:42 Asherz007: Idk just doesn't wanna turn on :/
2017-04-29 10:43 Protastic101: rip D:
2017-04-29 12:40 Asherz007: still modding, as ever...
2017-04-29 12:41 Protastic101: modding!
2017-04-29 19:22 Asherz007: Hai :3
2017-04-29 22:02 Protastic101: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1248396 fhana - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY (TV Size) [Elma [EZ]]]
2017-04-29 22:02 Protastic101: 00:11:751 -
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2017-04-29 22:03 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959102
2017-04-29 22:06 Protastic101: 00:23:751 -
2017-04-29 22:07 Protastic101: 00:33:084 -
2017-04-29 22:13 Protastic101: 00:45:529 -
2017-04-29 22:14 Protastic101: 00:13:529 -
2017-04-29 22:16 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959160
2017-04-29 22:17 Protastic101: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1248398 fhana - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY (TV Size) [Kanna [SC]]]
2017-04-29 22:17 Protastic101: 00:21:195 (21195|1,21417|1) -
2017-04-29 22:18 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959169
2017-04-29 22:19 Protastic101: 00:32:417 -
2017-04-29 22:20 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959187
2017-04-29 22:28 Protastic101: boop
2017-04-29 22:32 Protastic101: 01:19:529 (79529|1) -
2017-04-29 22:32 Protastic101: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1248398 fhana - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY (TV Size) [Kanna [SC]]]
2017-04-29 22:33 Protastic101: 01:20:084 (80084|1) -
2017-04-29 22:33 Protastic101: 01:25:529 (85529|2,85751|2,85973|2,86195|2,86417|2) -
2017-04-29 22:35 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959260
2017-04-29 22:37 Protastic101: 01:21:084 -
2017-04-29 22:39 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959282
2017-04-29 22:42 Protastic101: 01:23:751 (83751|1,83973|1,84195|1,84417|1,84640|1,84862|1,85084|1) -
2017-04-29 22:42 Protastic101: 01:24:195 (84195|0,84195|1,84195|2,84417|1,84417|0,84417|2,84640|0,84640|2,84640|1) -
2017-04-29 22:44 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959303
2017-04-29 22:44 Protastic101: 01:24:195 -
2017-04-29 22:47 Protastic101: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1248401 fhana - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY (TV Size) [Tohru [MX]]]
2017-04-29 22:47 Protastic101: 01:24:640 -
2017-04-29 22:47 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959326
2017-04-29 22:50 Protastic101: 01:21:751 -
2017-04-29 22:50 Protastic101: 01:21:751 (81751|1,82195|1,82640|1,83084|1) -
2017-04-29 22:50 Protastic101: 01:22:640 (82640|1,83084|1) -
2017-04-29 22:50 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959340
2017-04-29 22:57 Protastic101: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1248398 fhana - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY (TV Size) [Kanna [SC]]]
2017-04-29 22:57 Protastic101: 00:33:084 (33084|1) -
2017-04-29 23:08 Asherz007: 00:13:529 -
2017-04-29 23:13 Protastic101: 00:45:529 -
2017-04-29 23:14 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959439
2017-04-29 23:15 Protastic101: 00:47:306 -
2017-04-29 23:20 Asherz007: SC 00:07:306 (7306|3,7306|2,7362|1,7417|0,7473|3,7529|2) -
2017-04-29 23:20 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959467
2017-04-29 23:23 Protastic101: 00:11:417 (11417|0,11473|3) -
2017-04-29 23:25 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959486
2017-04-29 23:30 Protastic101: 00:08:195 (8195|3) -
2017-04-29 23:30 Protastic101: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1248398 fhana - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY (TV Size) [Kanna [SC]]]
2017-04-29 23:34 Protastic101: 00:05:084 - 00:05:973 - 00:06:862 - 00:07:751 -
2017-04-29 23:36 Asherz007: 00:13:529 -
2017-04-29 23:37 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959539
2017-04-29 23:37 Protastic101: Could do something like that where you just focus on the crashes
2017-04-29 23:37 Protastic101: It's a bit difficult tho since it doesn't start exactly on a downbeat
2017-04-29 23:38 Asherz007: Hmm...:/
2017-04-29 23:38 Protastic101: :thinking:
2017-04-29 23:38 Asherz007: idk ;-;
2017-04-29 23:39 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959545 then like that I guess?
2017-04-29 23:41 Protastic101: 00:32:640 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959552
2017-04-29 23:49 Protastic101: 01:12:195 -
2017-04-29 23:51 Protastic101: 101:21:084 -
2017-04-29 23:51 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959600
2017-04-29 23:57 Protastic101: 01:12:195 -
2017-04-29 23:58 Protastic101: 01:21:084 -
2017-04-29 23:59 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959600
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2017-04-30 00:00 Protastic101: 01:25:084 (85084|2,85529|3,85973|1,86417|0,86862|3) -
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2017-04-30 00:10 Protastic101: 00:19:973 (19973|1,20084|2,20195|3,20306|1,20417|2,20529|0,20640|1) -
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2017-04-30 00:19 Protastic101: 00:29:084 (29084|2,29306|1,29417|0) -
2017-04-30 00:20 Protastic101: 00:29:529 (29529|3,29529|2) -
2017-04-30 00:20 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959710
2017-04-30 00:23 Protastic101: 00:30:862 (30862|1,30973|0) -
2017-04-30 00:23 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7959726
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Topic Starter
Asherz007
Man, mapping is hard... ;-;

Remaps suck even more...
And (aaaaaaa) audio change, BGs change and HS change too. Somebody help me... >.<

But hopefully, one day, this will get ranked.



Thanks for the support! cough...
Captain Cusheen
YOH [color=#FF00FF]TUWUBBTWUWBTUBWTUBUTBUWTBUTWBUWTUTBWIPWIPWIPWIPWIPIPWIPS[color=#FF00FF]

it's all good what do I need to mod D:

maybe just add notes more on SC
in MX make it more balance that's all I can say wahehehe
L A U R A
hey heeey~~~


Quetzalcoatl

00:00:862 (862|1) - move to 3 coz having the same sound as before
00:03:084 - 1 note here 00:03:529 - here too or you can just use ln to cover it to follow that yaa voice XD
00:06:417 (6417|2,6862|3) - same as above
01:04:640 - one more note here maybe

Fafnir

00:00:640 (640|1,862|2) - move it in one row for same reason as quetzalcoatl
00:23:973 - delete one and add 1 note at 00:24:084 -


Tohru

00:00:640 (640|1,862|2) - for the same reason as the difficulty before
00:12:640 - one more note here since all previous snare sound you make it 2
00:23:084 - make it double since i hear it as snare and 00:23:195 - here become triple coz of the cymbal sound
00:23:973 (23973|1,23973|0) - move it to 00:23:862 - 00:23:973 - a note here and 00:24:084 -
00:24:195 - one more note here
00:24:862 - one more note here for snare sake >.<
00:27:301 - delete one of em
00:27:751 - make it 1 note
00:27:529 - and 00:27:751 - you can change one of em as ln for that synth sound
00:28:529 (28529|3) - move it one line lower since the snare is there
00:29:529 - make it 3 for cymbal
00:30:306 - here too
00:31:306 - here too
00:31:640 - like this maybe? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8011903
00:33:640 (33640|1) - delete
00:33:751 - here sound of tom tom ( or kick drum or something like that)
00:33:973 - here too
00:35:195 - 1 note here
00:37:306 - here a note and 00:37:529 -
00:38:751 - here a note
00:50:417 - double note here


sowwy thats all i can do since im too lazy to do the last one XD good luck btw
Topic Starter
Asherz007

L A U R A wrote:

hey heeey~~~


Quetzalcoatl

00:00:862 (862|1) - move to 3 coz having the same sound as before Vocal pitch change here. Thought about it before though,
didn't seem to make much sense to me.

00:03:084 - 1 note here 00:03:529 - here too or you can just use ln to cover it to follow that yaa voice XD Ehh this one's a little difficult imo,
since they seem to come on the 1/1 and then the 1/4. The only time where I actually note this is in the SC diff. In any case the overall pattern is more of a 1-measure burst followed by a 1-measure break. If anyone else suggests this then I will consider adding this in again.

00:06:417 (6417|2,6862|3) - same as above ^
01:04:640 - one more note here maybe Hmm... not so sure on this one. Don't really see the extra emphasis for the double.

Fafnir

00:00:640 (640|1,862|2) - move it in one row for same reason as quetzalcoatl See above.
00:23:973 - delete one and add 1 note at 00:24:084 - A scaling pattern with other diffs (it's awkward to copy this pattern for SC meant that I couldn't do this pattern here. Oh well... :(


Tohru

00:00:640 (640|1,862|2) - for the same reason as the difficulty before ^
00:12:640 - one more note here since all previous snare sound you make it 2 Nice spot. Removed that super-long LN since everything became too cramped.
00:23:084 - make it double since i hear it as snare Fair enoughand 00:23:195 - here become triple coz of the cymbal sound I'll save this thought for SC. :P
00:23:973 (23973|1,23973|0) - move it to 00:23:862 - 00:23:973 - a note here and 00:24:084 - More of that pattern thing again. Not particularly following this, though if someone else brings it up I'll take another look at it.
00:24:195 - one more note here Ehhh...
00:24:862 - one more note here for snare sake >.< Oh >.<
00:27:301 - delete one of em Sure.
00:27:751 - make it 1 note New measure double? Not sure about removing one.
00:27:529 - and 00:27:751 - you can change one of em as ln for that synth sound Might make it a little cramped.
00:28:529 (28529|3) - move it one line lower since the snare is there Sure. Changed the pattern slightly here as well.
00:29:529 - make it 3 for cymbal Ehhh I'd rather not. Haven't done it on any of the other diffs.
00:30:306 - here too ^
00:31:306 - here too ^
00:31:640 - like this maybe? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8011903 Changed, but not exactly like that.
00:33:640 (33640|1) - delete Follows vocals though... (don't kill me pls)
00:33:751 - here sound of tom tom ( or kick drum or something like that) Not mapped for simplicity, basically. I tried and it made it a little awkward for me. Will reconsider if brought up again though.
00:33:973 - here too ^
00:35:195 - 1 note here Sure
00:37:306 - here a note and 00:37:529 - As previously
00:38:751 - here a note Sure.
00:50:417 - double note here As with HD.


sowwy thats all i can do since im too lazy to do the last one XD good luck btw Not a problem. :P
Thanks for the mod! :)
Stug
Yo!

From mine and vortex- modding queue

First of all, this song is the best :)

Only doing SC difficulty today, might mod the others later, not very good at modding <3* maps
00:11:306 - Feels like these 1/8ths are really random, not sure what sound you mapped these to

00:13:529 - 00:13:862 - 00:14:195 - 00:14:529 - I feel like all these should be doubles, fits the drum sound better, same goes for the hands in the part after

00:15:306 - Replacing the current pattern after this part with a jumpstream-ish kind of pattern fits the sound of the drums alot better, improves the flow of the gameplay

00:19:640 - Add note to make it a double

00:19:862 - 00:20:195 - ^Same as above

00:17:084 - Some of the notes (alot of them) are supposed to be mapped in 1/3rd 1/6th, for example here 00:18:047 - is supposed to be here 00:18:121 - instead, rework this part ;)

I will stop my mod here as I feel like the map needs a lot of nitpicky work :?


Love the song, GL with the map :)
Topic Starter
Asherz007

cpotfangirl wrote:

Yo!

From mine and vortex- modding queue

First of all, this song is the best :)Yay \^o^/

Only doing SC difficulty today, might mod the others later, not very good at modding <3* maps
00:11:306 - Feels like these 1/8ths are really random, not sure what sound you mapped these to Same as at 00:07:362 (7362|1,7417|0,7473|3,7529|2).

00:13:529 - 00:13:862 - 00:14:195 - 00:14:529 - I feel like all these should be doubles, fits the drum sound better, same goes for the hands in the part after I know what you mean, but I couldn't really find a way of representing a double-triple without it looking awkward. At least this way it captures the semi-repetitive chords.

00:15:306 - Replacing the current pattern after this part with a jumpstream-ish kind of pattern fits the sound of the drums alot better, improves the flow of the gameplay Again, I understand. I deliberately didn't map some of the drums because I could then create a mirrored pattern. (Plus this scenario is like the only time the drums do this)

00:19:640 - Add note to make it a double Sure.

00:19:862 - 00:20:195 - ^Same as above Yeah, why not.

00:17:084 - Some of the notes (alot of them) are supposed to be mapped in 1/3rd 1/6th, for example here 00:18:047 - is supposed to be here 00:18:121 - instead, rework this part ;)Oh boy, the can of worms, and the reason I've had trouble with this song lol.

I will stop my mod here as I feel like the map needs a lot of nitpicky work :?


Love the song, GL with the map :)
Okay. So, yeah, I know that most of one of the sections is in 1/6s. But... with the rest of the song in 1/4, I felt that 100% accurately mapping this section would have broken playability, since it wasn't completely intuitive to do this. (Y'know, fhána drums n stuff being oddly syncopated sometimes) Thus, I rounded everything to 1/4s. Of course to see for yourself, I made a copy for the MX diff in 1/6 style for this section, and it just felt a little jerky. Perhaps it's just me, but I'm still going to pool more opinions on this. Some have said yes, some no, so I'm still thinking about it. For the time being, no change. It's a toughie...

Thanks for the mod! :)
Cipse
RRM Modding Queue

I said I'd try to make this short but I obviously failed at that. Sorry :/
It's still shorter than my typical mod so there's that, I guess
The suggestions in the consistency section will ruin the patterns made in the patterning section. However, I've placed the patterning section before the consistency section to show you some uncomfortable patterns, which should make it easier for you to identify them yourself

If any of the suggestions create new uncomfortable patterns, make sure you fix them as well
0 1 2 3

MX
Patterning
Move 00:05:084 (5084|2,5529|2) - to {3} and 00:05:306 (5306|3) - to {2}. 00:04:417 (4417|2,4640|2,5084|2) - is heavy on {2}

Move 00:09:306 (9306|2) - to {3} and 00:09:529 (9529|3) - to {2}, 00:08:640 (8640|2,8973|2,9306|2) - is heavy on {2}

00:26:417 (26417|0,26529|1,26751|0,26973|1,27084|0,27306|1) - is LH heavy

00:27:529 (27529|2,27529|3,27973|3,27973|2,28417|2,28417|3,28862|3,28862|2) - makes the RH part pretty bland

00:29:751 (29751|0,29862|1,29973|2,30084|3) - feels like weird patterning to me, cause a {0,1,2,3} pattern makes it seem like there's going to be an ascending part in the melody. This feels slightly more weird, cause the notes are mapping three different sounds. Not really that important but I'd change 00:29:751 (29751|0,29862|1,29973|2,30084|3) - to {0,2,1,3}

00:30:306 (30306|2,30640|2,30973|2,31306|2) - is heavy on {2}. Since I still kinda want 00:30:862 (30862|1,30973|2,31084|3,31195|0,31306|2,31306|1) - to have an ascending pattern, I'd just move all the notes by two spaces; like 00:30:862 (30862|1) - to {3}. 00:30:973 (30973|2) - to {0}, etc

00:39:306 (39306|3) - should go in the LH, as you don't want 00:38:751 (38751|2,38862|3,39084|2,39306|3) -

00:40:417 (40417|3,40640|2,40751|3,40973|2,41306|3) - is very heavy on the RH

01:25:973 (85973|3,86084|2,86195|0,86195|1,86306|3,86417|2,86529|1,86640|3,86640|0,86751|2,86862|1,86973|0,87084|2,87084|3,87195|1,87306|0,87417|3,87529|1,87529|2) - uses a very basic {3,2,1,0,3...} pattern. You probably want to change that a bit

Consistency
00:04:195 (4195|3) - can't hear any sounds that support an LN, remove it

00:10:973 (10973|3) - can't hear anything, remove note. It sounds like a single LN starting at 00:10:862 - and ending at 00:10:973 - for the violin

00:11:417 (11417|0) - I don't hear any sustained note here. If you're mapping the violin, it starts at 00:11:306 -

00:20:084 (20084|3) - ghost note

00:22:751 - is missing a double for the snare, same sound as 00:22:640 (22640|1,22640|2) -

There are missing notes at 00:23:417 -, 00:23:640 -, 00:23:862 - and 00:24:084 -, which have a mix of kicks and drums

00:27:862 - is technically missing a note for the violin. It's weird to leave out, considering that you have mapping the violin in other places with a single SN

I can't hear any sounds supporting 00:30:973 (30973|2) - and 00:31:195 (31195|0) -

00:32:529 (32529|2) -, 00:32:751 (32751|2) - and 00:32:973 (32973|2) - are missing notes for kicks/drums

The LNs between 00:33:084 - and 00:40:973 - don't seem to be mapped to anything in particular. I'd remove them all. In addition, you're ignoring a lot of the sounds in this section. You should be adding notes in like at 00:33:417 -, 00:33:751 - and 00:33:973 - for kicks, etc. Whilst it might make it similar to SC, the current version doesn't feel very nice to play, considering that you're ignoring a lot of the sounds in a seemingly inconsistent manner

00:42:084 - is missing notes for a snare
00:42:973 - ^

00:43:640 (43640|1) - ghost note

00:46:973 - and 00:47:195 - are missing notes for the drum. Same with 00:48:751 - and 00:48:973 -

00:49:529 (49529|0) - ghost note

Like with the section before, I don't see a reason for the LNs between 00:50:862 - and 01:14:862 -. They don't seem to be mapped to any specific instrument and they don't change at the same time as the chords of the song. I also can't tell why 00:53:529 (53529|1,53973|0) - has two LNs

01:04:973 (64973|2,64973|3) - ghost notes

01:16:751 (76751|2,76862|3,76862|1,77084|3,77084|0,77306|1,77306|2,77529|0,77529|3) -, 01:18:529 (78529|2,78640|3,78640|1,78862|0,78862|2,79084|3,79084|2,79306|0,79306|1) - and 01:20:306 (80306|0,80417|2,80529|3,80529|0,80640|2,80640|1,80751|0,80751|3,80862|2,80862|1,80973|0,80973|3,81084|2,81084|1) - all have the same sounds. Therefore, each instance should have the same amount of notes as each other

There are two sounds at 01:21:751 - and 01:21:862 - that can be mapped. The same applies to 01:22:195 - and 01:22:306 -, 01:22:640 - and 01:22:751 -, etc

Between 01:24:640 - and 01:27:084 - are a lot of ghost notes. I can't hear any supporting sounds for 01:24:751 (84751|0) -, 01:24:973 (84973|3) -, 01:25:195 (85195|1) -, 01:25:862 (85862|1) -, etc

There is a snare at 01:27:640 -

Personally, I'd map the snares at 01:27:973 - and 01:28:084 - instead of using a double LN like 01:27:862 (87862|0,87862|1) -. The snares are much more prominent than the violins, if you ask me

Another opinion of mine is that quads, like 01:28:640 (88640|2,88640|1,88640|0,88640|3) -, look bad. Plus I can't see any justification for them being quads because the sound is about as strong as those which you have used triples for

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Topic Starter
Asherz007

Cipse wrote:

RRM Modding Queue

I said I'd try to make this short but I obviously failed at that. Sorry :/
It's still shorter than my typical mod so there's that, I guess
The suggestions in the consistency section will ruin the patterns made in the patterning section. However, I've placed the patterning section before the consistency section to show you some uncomfortable patterns, which should make it easier for you to identify them yourself

If any of the suggestions create new uncomfortable patterns, make sure you fix them as well
0 1 2 3

MX
Patterning Put it simply, I've tried to make changes at every point highlighted. I'll keep checking these.
Move 00:05:084 (5084|2,5529|2) - to {3} and 00:05:306 (5306|3) - to {2}. 00:04:417 (4417|2,4640|2,5084|2) - is heavy on {2}

Move 00:09:306 (9306|2) - to {3} and 00:09:529 (9529|3) - to {2}, 00:08:640 (8640|2,8973|2,9306|2) - is heavy on {2}

00:26:417 (26417|0,26529|1,26751|0,26973|1,27084|0,27306|1) - is LH heavy

00:27:529 (27529|2,27529|3,27973|3,27973|2,28417|2,28417|3,28862|3,28862|2) - makes the RH part pretty bland

00:29:751 (29751|0,29862|1,29973|2,30084|3) - feels like weird patterning to me, cause a {0,1,2,3} pattern makes it seem like there's going to be an ascending part in the melody. This feels slightly more weird, cause the notes are mapping three different sounds. Not really that important but I'd change 00:29:751 (29751|0,29862|1,29973|2,30084|3) - to {0,2,1,3}

00:30:306 (30306|2,30640|2,30973|2,31306|2) - is heavy on {2}. Since I still kinda want 00:30:862 (30862|1,30973|2,31084|3,31195|0,31306|2,31306|1) - to have an ascending pattern, I'd just move all the notes by two spaces; like 00:30:862 (30862|1) - to {3}. 00:30:973 (30973|2) - to {0}, etc

00:39:306 (39306|3) - should go in the LH, as you don't want 00:38:751 (38751|2,38862|3,39084|2,39306|3) -

00:40:417 (40417|3,40640|2,40751|3,40973|2,41306|3) - is very heavy on the RH

01:25:973 (85973|3,86084|2,86195|0,86195|1,86306|3,86417|2,86529|1,86640|3,86640|0,86751|2,86862|1,86973|0,87084|2,87084|3,87195|1,87306|0,87417|3,87529|1,87529|2) - uses a very basic {3,2,1,0,3...} pattern. You probably want to change that a bit

Consistency
00:04:195 (4195|3) - can't hear any sounds that support an LN, remove it Would it sound weird if I told you this was following the vocals?

00:10:973 (10973|3) - can't hear anything, remove note. It sounds like a single LN starting at 00:10:862 - and ending at 00:10:973 - for the violin Another vocal thing, though not at strong. Removed anyway since not consistent with other diffs.

00:11:417 (11417|0) - I don't hear any sustained note here. If you're mapping the violin, it starts at 00:11:306 - Vocals again, but still not consistent anyway. Changed.

00:20:084 (20084|3) - ghost note Vocal-ish (and violin I guess), as well as better pattern readability.

00:22:751 - is missing a double for the snare, same sound as 00:22:640 (22640|1,22640|2) - Doesn't feel as strong for me. I've put a single in.

There are missing notes at 00:23:417 -, 00:23:640 -, 00:23:862 - and 00:24:084 -, which have a mix of kicks and drums I know... I've kind of ignored these because of their awkward 1/6 placements (plus I have no idea how I would scale this up on SC while still having smooth play.

00:27:862 - is technically missing a note for the violin. It's weird to leave out, considering that you have mapping the violin in other places with a single SN The violin is sort of falling off of the previous note, I would think a 1/4 LN would be better. Except I don't want to do that.

I can't hear any sounds supporting 00:30:973 (30973|2) - and 00:31:195 (31195|0) - Fair enough.

00:32:529 (32529|2) -, 00:32:751 (32751|2) - and 00:32:973 (32973|2) - are missing notes for kicks/drums Doesn't properly scale with SC imo, so I decided to leave them out.

The LNs between 00:33:084 - and 00:40:973 - don't seem to be mapped to anything in particular. I'd remove them all. In addition, you're ignoring a lot of the sounds in this section. You should be adding notes in like at 00:33:417 -, 00:33:751 - and 00:33:973 - for kicks, etc. Whilst it might make it similar to SC, the current version doesn't feel very nice to play, considering that you're ignoring a lot of the sounds in a seemingly inconsistent manner Clearly something that still needs work. I'll figure something out soon, probably...

00:42:084 - is missing notes for a snare
00:42:973 - ^ Whoops

00:43:640 (43640|1) - ghost note So it is.

00:46:973 - and 00:47:195 - are missing notes for the drum. Same with 00:48:751 - and 00:48:973 - Eh... >.<

00:49:529 (49529|0) - ghost note Very slight change in bg vocals (new syllable? idk how I'd phrase that one lol)

Like with the section before, I don't see a reason for the LNs between 00:50:862 - and 01:14:862 -. They don't seem to be mapped to any specific instrument and they don't change at the same time as the chords of the song. I also can't tell why 00:53:529 (53529|1,53973|0) - has two LNs I'll figure something out... probably. (2 LNs are following violins)

01:04:973 (64973|2,64973|3) - ghost notes So they are. Huh.

01:16:751 (76751|2,76862|3,76862|1,77084|3,77084|0,77306|1,77306|2,77529|0,77529|3) -, 01:18:529 (78529|2,78640|3,78640|1,78862|0,78862|2,79084|3,79084|2,79306|0,79306|1) - and 01:20:306 (80306|0,80417|2,80529|3,80529|0,80640|2,80640|1,80751|0,80751|3,80862|2,80862|1,80973|0,80973|3,81084|2,81084|1) - all have the same sounds. Therefore, each instance should have the same amount of notes as each other Arguably, the third time has the additional violins, which I can't accurately map without looking messy. (maybe I'm noob mapper :/)

There are two sounds at 01:21:751 - and 01:21:862 - that can be mapped. The same applies to 01:22:195 - and 01:22:306 -, 01:22:640 - and 01:22:751 -, etc A bit faint imo to be mapped. (the current mapping was a sheep suggestion lol)

Between 01:24:640 - and 01:27:084 - are a lot of ghost notes. I can't hear any supporting sounds for 01:24:751 (84751|0) -, 01:24:973 (84973|3) -, 01:25:195 (85195|1) -, 01:25:862 (85862|1) -, etc Yeah spotted that and decided not to change it while you were modding it lol, thanks for the reminder~

There is a snare at 01:27:640 - D:

Personally, I'd map the snares at 01:27:973 - and 01:28:084 - instead of using a double LN like 01:27:862 (87862|0,87862|1) -. The snares are much more prominent than the violins, if you ask me Vocals? I'll think about this one, considering I mapped both in SC.

Another opinion of mine is that quads, like 01:28:640 (88640|2,88640|1,88640|0,88640|3) -, look bad. Plus I can't see any justification for them being quads because the sound is about as strong as those which you have used triples for A quad for the sake of a quad because it's at the end. Only kidding. Same emphasis as like 00:13:640 (13640|1,13640|3,13640|0) for example, plus 1 note for the vocals.

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Thanks for the mod! :)
Still some work to do, huh...
Cipse

Asherz007 wrote:

Still some work to do, huh...
There's almost always work to be done :P
At the very least, the patterning is mostly fine
Mentholzzz
CHU CHU YEAH !
I suggest to add a note at 00:15:862 - 00:16:195 - 00:16:529 - but u might need to change the pattern a bit , for example >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077461
00:23:417 - >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077490 because the drum here is every 1/4 beat

00:33:417 - there is a sound here suggestion >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077571
00:35:195 - ^ suggestion >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077547

00:34:084 - add note here at column 2

00:37:195 (37195|3) - ghost note ?
00:36:862 (36862|3) - move the note to 00:36:973 -

00:39:529 - the sound here is actually should be more trill-y than now , suggestion >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077591

00:54:751 - add a note here , example>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077609
00:57:417 - add a note here as well

01:16:973 - add a note here , same as 01:18:751 -

01:22:195 - add a note here.

01:25:417 - double here instead of 01:25:529 -

01:27:195 - double here.
00:47:306 (47306|1,47306|2) - I'm not sure but i feel like double should be at 00:47:417 - instead
00:49:751 - remove one note.
Topic Starter
Asherz007

Mentholzzz wrote:

CHU CHU YEAH ! PLEASE ME!
I suggest to add a note at 00:15:862 - 00:16:195 - 00:16:529 - but u might need to change the pattern a bit , for example >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077461 It feels a little too awkward to map the drums as well. I want to keep the current pattern while leaving this relatively playable. (the suggestion brings in too much jacking for a difficulty at this level imo)
00:23:417 - >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077490 because the drum here is every 1/4 beat Technically they're on the 1/6... I wanted to highlight those on the beat more (since this follows the idea through from HD and MX). I did add the first one though.

00:33:417 - there is a sound here suggestion >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077571 Yeah why not.
00:35:195 - ^ suggestion >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077547 Sure.

00:34:084 - add note here at column 2 Sure.

00:37:195 (37195|3) - ghost note ? Vocal + pattern I guess.
00:36:862 (36862|3) - move the note to 00:36:973 - 10/10 for consistency, well done me. >.< Added a note

00:39:529 - the sound here is actually should be more trill-y than now , suggestion >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077591 I chose to follow to drums here, 00:39:751 (39751|3,39862|2,39973|1,40084|0) follows the falling drum pitch.

00:54:751 - add a note here , example>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8077609 10/10 for consistency, well done me. >.<
00:57:417 - add a note here as well Much to do in this middle section it seems lol

01:16:973 - add a note here , same as 01:18:751 - Fixed

01:22:195 - add a note here. Not sure why it needs an extra note here compared to the others. Ignore that I'm dumb lol. Added XD

01:25:417 - double here instead of 01:25:529 - Nice idea.

01:27:195 - double here. Sure.
00:47:306 (47306|1,47306|2) - I'm not sure but i feel like double should be at 00:47:417 - instead You're probably right. Trouble is, it's an easy diff, so I don't really want to put too many things off the beat. Plus it them copies the pattern(?) of 00:45:529 (45529|2,46306|0,46306|3).
00:49:751 - remove one note. I hear a cymbal crash though.
Thanks for the mod! :)
Moku_Hazushi
(From my modding queue~)

I used to play this song a lot on ITG lately so this is funny to mod an osu!mania version xD
I find the map already well advanced, the mapping fits the song pretty well and the HS is overall well done. As usual only apply the mod if you are 120% agree with it, also best of luck to get it ranked >w<)b

Chu Chu Yeah~


Legend is 0|1|2|3



00:32:640 (32640|2) - Maybe a clap here, it somehow makes me think of 00:39:751 (39751|1) and 00:50:417 (50417|2)

00:36:417 - What about addind a note here ?

00:57:973 (57973|2) - I think i would move it to (0) or (1) (and then also moving a bit what is after). The reason is you end the kiai and the song start a new vocal phrase but the stair with 00:57:529 (57529|3,57973|2,58417|1,58862|0) doesnt not mark this transition.

01:25:306 (85306|0,85751|3) - What about CTRL+H those 2 ? The idea is from 01:21:084 you had a certain repetitive pattern (01:21:084 (81084|3,81529|1,81973|2,82417|0)) and since at 01:24:640 you are mapping a different instrument i think you could indicate it by not following this pattern anymore

Really clean diff and nice hitsounding, nothing much to say its ready to be ranked in my opinion :3


00:03:306 (3306|2) - I would move this one to (0) and
00:03:751 (3751|0) - This one to (2), The reason is the introducing pattern you are using are really one direction oriented (first right to left for example) which is nice, but i think at the end of the pattern you should introduce the next one by going to the opposite direction

00:06:862 (6862|3) - To (1) for the same reasons

00:07:751 (7751|2,7973|1) - Im not sure but maybe consider adding whistle here

00:16:640 (16640|3,16862|0) - I think those 2 finish are a bit too much, maybe replace them with whistles

00:36:417 (36417|1) - Pretty sure you should add a whistle here
00:39:973 (39973|2) - Here too

00:45:084 (45084|2) - Maybe to (0) and
00:45:306 (45306|0) - To (2), afterward you have many note pair going from right to left so maybe make this one left to right so it wont be too repetitive

01:24:417 - I would add a note at (2) here. At the beginning you mapped the "Chuchu~" vocal 00:00:640 (640|2,862|1,1084|0) so i think you should do the same in the end

Nice diff too, fun to play with good mapping ideas, good job owo)b


00:03:084 (3084|1,3306|2) - I think i would CTRL+H those 2, the thing is you had many left-right pattern before 00:00:640 (640|1,862|2) + 00:02:640 (2640|1,2751|2) + 00:01:306 (1306|1,1529|2,1751|3) so i think its nice to invert the direction here

00:07:751 (7751|2,7973|1) - What about addind whistle for those 2 ?

00:09:973 - Why not double chords here ? Like before

00:16:640 (16640|0,16862|2) - Same remark as the previous diff, maybe those 2 finish are a bit too much

00:22:306 - Maybe add a note here to keep consistency

00:30:529 - I think you should add a note at (3) here, to be consistent with 00:29:751 (29751|1,29862|2) and 00:31:529 (31529|3,31640|2)

00:31:640 (31640|2) - Maybe a whistle here just like 00:29:751 (29751|1,29862|2)

00:51:751 (51751|1) - Missing whistle here

00:54:862 (54862|1) - Missing clap here i think

00:57:862 - What about addind a note here ? To mark the end of the kiai

00:58:417 (58417|2) - Clap here too

01:05:529 (65529|3,65973|1) - Why not HS here ?
01:07:306 (67306|1,67751|2) - And here too, maybe i missed something, but i dont see why you are not following the usual HS here

01:09:084 (69084|2) - Same clap here i think

At 01:19:751 i think you should go for this mapping. I found the one at 01:16:195 really fun, so re-using it at 01:17:973 was a good surprised, but then at 01:19:751 i was so sad :(



Great diff again, maybe some missing HS and some pattern are not 100% consistent but except that its really good. Nice drum mapping variation all over the song :3


00:07:751 (7751|3,7973|0) - As the other diff, maybe whistle here

At 00:08:862 maybe you should go for this :


Consider this :
00:04:417 (4417|2,4529|1,4640|0) +
00:06:195 (6195|2,6306|1,6417|0) +
00:07:306 (7306|2,7417|1,7529|0) +
00:08:862 (8862|3,8973|2,9084|1) +
This is way too much speedy part going on the same direction i think, thats why change the one at 00:08:862 to keep balance

00:16:417 (16417|3,16640|0) - As the other diff, i think those finish are too much

00:17:306 (17306|2) - Maybe just move this one to (1) otherwise 00:16:862 (16862|3,16862|2,17084|0,17084|1,17306|3,17306|2) looks like a chords trill while its not really the case

00:22:306 (22306|1) - Clap here i think like 00:18:640 (18640|0,18751|1,18862|2)

At 00:33:973 + 00:37:529 + 00:41:084 - Maybe you should add a note here if you want to map the drum exactly

00:36:417 (36417|3) - Maybe whistle here

00:44:195 - Whilste here too ?

00:44:973 (44973|3,45195|1) - Maybe you should remove those 2 and use double chords
00:44:862 - here
00:45:084 - and here
The thing is you seem to map more the vocal here and the drum is not really playing notes at 00:44:973

01:03:084 (63084|3,63195|2) - Maybe whistle here (or clap)

01:08:529 - What about adding a note here ?

01:19:751 (79751|1,79862|3,79973|0,80084|2,80084|3) - I think you should have a stair like pattern like you did at 01:16:195 or 01:17:973

01:24:306 (84306|3,84529|1) - I really dont think you should have this note here, the drum restart a bit later

Nice balance between drum and vocal mapping, you kept the structure of the previous diff while making it harder, maybe some parts can be even better but good map anyway ;3


00:03:084 (3084|3,3195|2,3306|1,3306|0) +
00:03:751 (3751|1,3751|0,3862|3,3973|2) - Those 2 map the same choir part but why making them so different ? (i mean one end with a double chords, another add a note when the LN begin...) I would recommend using the same kind of mapping as 00:03:751 (3751|1,3751|0,3862|3,3973|2) for the first one
00:06:640 (6640|0,6751|1,6862|3,6862|2) - Same remark

00:07:751 (7751|2,7973|1) - Same as the other diff, maybe you should add whistle here

00:10:973 - Maybe add a note here if you want to be consistent in the choir mapping

00:16:640 (16640|0,16862|2) - As the other diff, i think those 2 finish are too much

00:27:751 (27751|0,27751|3) - Those 2 feels a bit weird, usually at that moment you are using a single note, but what you did is fine too so i dont really know, just wanted to point it out

00:30:529 (30529|0) - Maybe a whilte but not sure

00:33:417 (33417|1,33640|1,33862|1,34084|1) - Careful, anchor here

00:33:973 (33973|2) - Whistle here
00:35:751 (35751|2) - here too no ?

00:35:862 - Maybe you should add a note here

00:41:084 (41084|3) - Here too i think you should add a whistle

01:11:084 (71084|3) - I would move it to (2)

01:11:640 - Not missing here or is it me ?

01:14:417 (74417|3,74640|3,74862|3,75084|3) - Careful anchor

01:28:195 - Im pretty sure you should add a note at (1) here

The kiais might feel a bit light compared to the rest of the map but in fact i dont know what you could have done more so its nice like this.
Also nice difficulty balance, this is a good 4*, challenging but whitout overmapping. Best of luck to get it ranked >w<)b

Please make this ranked, im counting on you :3
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