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Rhodanthe* - Happy*Pretty*Clover

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vekt0r

Momochikun wrote:

im very late sorry :d

this song is so cute, i wonder why they didnt make this one the opening instead hahaha yea this would have been nice as a season opening or something

[clover]
btw could you use silent sliderslide, the sound on earlier part is so disturbing ok muted N:C1 and S:C3
00:30:391 - this stop feel weird somehow, could you add note 00:30:061 - and start this 1/2 later ?
00:40:940 - same^ added a reverse for these
00:44:402 (1,1,1,1) - there's so much unnecessary nc's here, i think those one dont need nc's idk which ones this is referring to; got rid of two but don't want to add follow points that look weird
01:04:842 (4) - how about nc for kiai transition ? also vocal here oh yea this is nice
01:13:413 - what's with the sudden volume drop ? kiai is still going on intensity drops early but made the drop much smaller

[advanced]
00:04:842 (3,1) - naziiiii overlap tbh it looks bad ok blanketed instead
00:49:347 (1) - delete nc ? and 01:04:347 (1) - too did second one, for the first one the note is separated from previous tho
01:17:205 (1) - would be better if you just stick with drums here, the vocal isnt so strong which make this kinda weird
01:18:193 - note pls
01:19:842 (1,2) - ^literally same
01:22:644 - cymbal doe ok last 4 are the same thing, when i originally mapped i thought vocals were the main thing here but according to most people guess not w

gl
thanks for the mod! idc about lateness

edit updated both below
Gaia
My Angel Mir

My Angel Mir wrote:

Hi! Short mod

[Gaia]

01:04:017 (7,1) - Might be kinda hard to read after all those 1/2 stacks even with the nc so you could make it slightly different visually (like idk move 1 a bit to top right so it'd make a linear pattern with 01:04:017 (7,1,3) - ? ) don't think it's hard to read at all, pretty common 1/1 antijump
Momokun

Momochikun wrote:

im very late sorry :d

this song is so cute, i wonder why they didnt make this one the opening instead hahaha

[Hard]
00:23:303 (1) - delete whistle ? it sounds bad along with soft finish , so many though
00:58:578 (3,4) - kinda weird to see this got huge spacing when 00:59:732 (6,7,1) - this one only normal spacing and moreover a stack i think it's because stack (circle + slider) that i kept it lower spacing, big spacing is to emphasize the strong trumpets here
01:27:589 (3) - drum finish better

gl

ty for mods! else are fixed

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[Metadata]
Title:Happy*Pretty*Clover
TitleUnicode:Happy★Pretty★Clover
Artist:Rhodanthe*
ArtistUnicode:Rhodanthe*
Creator:vekt0r
Version:Gaia's Hard
Source:きんいろモザイク Pretty Days
Tags:kin-iro kiniro mosaic kinmoza kinmosa ova opening short ver tanaka manami alice cartelet nishi asuka oomiya shinobu taneda risa komichi aya uchimiya yumi inokuma youko touyama nao kujou karen yuiko meis clauson
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Kami-senpai

Momochikun wrote:

[Insane]
00:22:314 - delete the clap ? no snare here
00:24:622 (1) - tbh this slider look weird for me
00:31:050 - the pause doesnt seems necessary here imo, try adding note i think its fine for now. i like the stop sensation. might change if more people say stuff about it
01:38:468 (1) - how about 3 notes jump here ? more fun and fit the song tense imo
update
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Title:Happy*Pretty*Clover
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Version:Kami's Insane
Source:きんいろモザイク Pretty Days
Tags:kin-iro kiniro mosaic kinmoza kinmosa ova opening short ver tanaka manami alice cartelet nishi asuka oomiya shinobu taneda risa komichi aya uchimiya yumi inokuma youko touyama nao kujou karen yuiko meis clauson
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Rizen
hi, from my m4m q

Normal
  1. 00:17:204 - add a circle here? you kinda follow that trumpet when it's present, as you have done at 00:14:072 (4) - , 00:21:490 (3,4,5) - , etc. This part is like the only place where you choose to follow the percussion over the trumpet
  2. 00:58:907 (3) - change to a 1/1 slider? It appears you are following mostly the percussion during the kiai so far, so mapping the trumpet like this isn't very intuitive to follow
  3. 01:16:050 (1) - clap missing at slider end? same at 01:18:688 (1) - .
  4. 01:34:512 (4) - don't like where the slider head is positioned, too close to 01:33:688 (2) - . Consider adjusting like this, I think it'll be much cleaner this way. Also, you have a tendency to position like this, as shown at 00:15:886 (2,3,4) - , 00:20:666 (1,2,3) - , etc. It would also eliminate the overlap at 01:34:512 (4,3) -
  5. 01:41:105 (1) - personally not a fan of this slider, looks a bit sharp around the end (compared to first curve)
Advanced
  1. I'll be honest, not a very big fan of this difficulty. The spacing concept used here is kinda messy...
  2. 00:06:160 (1) - following your spacing concept to increase spacing at piano chords, shouldn't the spacing here be increased?
  3. 00:19:347 (1,2) - can try rotating these a little to avoid the overlap at 00:18:523 (3,2) -
  4. 00:29:237 (3,1) - 1.6x spacing instead? the correct place to use increased spacing is at 00:29:897 (2) - , which you have done correctly
  5. 00:39:787 (3) - spacing should be increased after this slider, rather than before it because of vocals
  6. 00:41:106 (1,2) - spacing consistencyyyy, compare to 00:30:556 (1,2) -
  7. 00:58:578 (4,3) - overlap here pretty messy. try adjusting the pattern around here so slider 3 tail stacks on top of slider 4 head
Gaia's Hard
  1. 00:10:776 (2) - the other sliders are (i think) following the trumpet, but there's no trumpet for this slider, making it rather unsupported imo. Consider deleting this slider, and extending 00:10:116 (1) - into a repeat slider. I think this rhythm would suit the music better
  2. 00:27:259 (5,6) - spacing here a bit too big imo, especially since there's nothing really distinct happening at this tick/beat
Kami's Insane
  1. 00:29:072 (4) - the other times u used this pattern, the repeat slider would be spaced out a bit more. this one doesn't follow that concept though. e.g. 00:30:061 (4) - , 00:39:621 (4) - , 00:40:611 (4) -
  2. 00:30:886 (3) - use an extended slider here as you have done at 00:41:435 (3) - ? stop sensation doesn't really work well here sinec the song is rather flowy
  3. 00:35:089 (5) - I think this is overmapped (no beats in music at this tick)
  4. 00:38:962 (5) - did u clap this by accident?
  5. 00:43:743 (5,6) - possible to space these sliders a little more so the slider heads aren't touching?
  6. 01:00:721 (2) - overmapped imo, no beat on this tick to support the circle
Five Leaf Clover
  1. 00:15:061 (5,1) - looks rather messy, positioning these liek this will make it neater imo
  2. 00:23:303 (1) - flow from previous slider here is rather icky, try ctrl+h'ing this slider for a smoother flow path
  3. 00:44:072 (2,1) - kinda spaced a bit too much imo. as in, it doesn't flow very well to a relatively calm section of the song
  4. 00:49:017 (2,3) - spacing here a bit overdone imo
  5. 00:51:325 (5) - would be good to keep consistency with bigger spacing with 00:50:336 (5) -
  6. 01:04:842 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here a bit overdone imo, especially since the spacing used here is similar to the one you use for 1/2 beats
  7. 01:08:633 (3) - would be nice to hitsound the cymbal crash here with a N:1 finish addition imo. same at 01:09:292 -
  8. 01:22:479 (5) - possible to make the large white tick clickable? audible cymbal crash there

good luck!

map to mod back: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/623638
Kami-senpai

Rizen wrote:

Kami's Insane
  1. 00:29:072 (4) - the other times u used this pattern, the repeat slider would be spaced out a bit more. this one doesn't follow that concept though. e.g. 00:30:061 (4) - , 00:39:621 (4) - , 00:40:611 (4) -
  2. 00:30:886 (3) - use an extended slider here as you have done at 00:41:435 (3) - ? stop sensation doesn't really work well here sinec the song is rather flowy
  3. 00:35:089 (5) - I think this is overmapped (no beats in music at this tick) triplet is used to map to held vocal plus the downbeat (could search for quote from kibbleru, but lazy)
  4. 00:38:962 (5) - did u clap this by accident?
  5. 00:43:743 (5,6) - possible to space these sliders a little more so the slider heads aren't touching?
  6. 01:00:721 (2) - overmapped imo, no beat on this tick to support the circle used as a support and preparation for the jumps
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Kami-senpai

Yukiyo wrote:

Insane:
00:15:061 (4,1) - aren't you missing abit of emphasis for this downbeat? ? i think its pretty emphasized?
00:20:666 (1) - ^? same
00:23:798 (2) - why exactly is there a jump here? I don't see a reason to emphasize this honestly i mean its not that big of a jump...
00:25:281 (3) - I can understand this in contrast to the above but the above doesn't really makes sense still idk what youre saying lol
00:37:809 (1) - you are pretty inconsistant with your emphasis on downbeats compare it to 00:36:490 (1) - ok let me explain why those two have similar emphasis. To emphasize something, there are two ways one can go about it. One way is the way that you think: jumps. Higher jumps do indeed mean more emphasis. However, another way to emphasize is through change in flow, which is the way that I chose for the ones that you have pointed out. A change in flow can emphasize a note in amounts that could be comparable to a bigger jump while keeping the flow. That is also why some of the "big jumps" that I made aren't really emphasized at all.
01:00:226 (1,4) - umm overlap? doesn't really look good imo
01:06:820 (1) - again inconsitency with the downbeat emphasis
01:16:050 - is this kiai trigger really necessary? yes, i like it therefore i do it

other than that rather clean I must say. hey thanks
sorry for long responses although i doubt you'll even read this from so long ago lul
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Topic Starter
vekt0r
i'm going to respond, update, and mod back tomorrow, will edit this post
yea i've been meaning to rework adv, will update when that's done

Rizen wrote:

hi, from my m4m q

Normal
  1. 00:17:204 - add a circle here? you kinda follow that trumpet when it's present, as you have done at 00:14:072 (4) - , 00:21:490 (3,4,5) - , etc. This part is like the only place where you choose to follow the percussion over the trumpet don't want clicking 1/2 rhythm but made it clickable
  2. 00:58:907 (3) - change to a 1/1 slider? It appears you are following mostly the percussion during the kiai so far, so mapping the trumpet like this isn't very intuitive to follow okay, true
  3. 01:16:050 (1) - clap missing at slider end? same at 01:18:688 (1) - . yep
  4. 01:34:512 (4) - don't like where the slider head is positioned, too close to 01:33:688 (2) - . Consider adjusting like this, I think it'll be much cleaner this way. Also, you have a tendency to position like this, as shown at 00:15:886 (2,3,4) - , 00:20:666 (1,2,3) - , etc. It would also eliminate the overlap at 01:34:512 (4,3) - personally don't think it looks bad at all, but why not, other way looks better
  5. 01:41:105 (1) - personally not a fan of this slider, looks a bit sharp around the end (compared to first curve) messed around with it a bit but yea that's the point
Advanced
  1. I'll be honest, not a very big fan of this difficulty. The spacing concept used here is kinda messy... yea i realized having such a complicated concept is useless, reworked (all fixed lol)
  2. 00:06:160 (1) - following your spacing concept to increase spacing at piano chords, shouldn't the spacing here be increased?
  3. 00:19:347 (1,2) - can try rotating these a little to avoid the overlap at 00:18:523 (3,2) -
  4. 00:29:237 (3,1) - 1.6x spacing instead? the correct place to use increased spacing is at 00:29:897 (2) - , which you have done correctly
  5. 00:39:787 (3) - spacing should be increased after this slider, rather than before it because of vocals
  6. 00:41:106 (1,2) - spacing consistencyyyy, compare to 00:30:556 (1,2) -
  7. 00:58:578 (4,3) - overlap here pretty messy. try adjusting the pattern around here so slider 3 tail stacks on top of slider 4 head
Five Leaf Clover
  1. 00:15:061 (5,1) - looks rather messy, positioning these liek this will make it neater imo yeah sure
  2. 00:23:303 (1) - flow from previous slider here is rather icky, try ctrl+h'ing this slider for a smoother flow path intentional antiflow, but changed to a more conventional antiflow entry
  3. 00:44:072 (2,1) - kinda spaced a bit too much imo. as in, it doesn't flow very well to a relatively calm section of the song not really the most calm but in either case it’s better without
  4. 00:49:017 (2,3) - spacing here a bit overdone imo didn't lower spacing because i think it's fine, but rearranged to make 1-2 > 2-3
  5. 00:51:325 (5) - would be good to keep consistency with bigger spacing with 00:50:336 (5) - because it’s the weak beat it doesn’t really have the same emphasis even tho it’s a repeated vocal, it’s more like 00:50:006 (3) -
  6. 01:04:842 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here a bit overdone imo, especially since the spacing used here is similar to the one you use for 1/2 beats i do this with 1/4 sliders a lot tho; nerfed a bit but the 4 is quite strong
  7. 01:08:633 (3) - would be nice to hitsound the cymbal crash here with a N:1 finish addition imo. same at 01:09:292 - yes
  8. 01:22:479 (5) - possible to make the large white tick clickable? audible cymbal crash there yes

good luck!

map to mod back: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/623638
thanks for the mod!
also will update with kami's diff once bss works
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  1. This Hitsound has artists soft-hitfinish LordRaika?
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  • [Normal]
  1. 00:04:842 (1,2,3) - Please decide whether to pick up the piano sound or lyrics
    00:04:842 (1) - This (1) picks up the lyrics 00:06:160 (2,3) - This (2,3) picks up the piano
  2. 00:13:248 (2,2) - I think we can stack
    00:18:523 (2,2) - just like here
  3. 00:17:204 - You should pick up the sound here
  4. 00:22:479 (4) - The appearance is better (3) copy
  5. 00:23:303 (1,2,3,4) - It does not have to be 1/1 rhythm
    If it is Normal, I think that rhythm like image is good
  6. 00:26:600 (2,3,5,6) - Slider reverse or think the rhythm like the previous image is good
  7. 00:47:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can understand using blanket
    However, blanketing restricts the place and becomes overlap or stack emphasis
    I think this is difficult to change. I think that keep may be good if you think that you can not change
  8. 00:51:655 (3) - 00:54:622 (7) - and 00:52:314 (1,1) - It is better to stack
  9. 00:57:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is not good in the excitement part
    It is better to put the beat snap at 1/2
    01:08:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is very good
  10. 01:07:479 (5,6) - 00:56:929 (5,6) - Why are the rhythms different?
  11. 01:10:611 - I should pick up this sound
    01:10:446 - Let's use 1/2 slider
  12. 01:23:633 (5,4) - stack miss?
  13. 01:25:281 (4) - Add NC
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
vekt0r

Yasaija 714 wrote:

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  • [Normal]
  1. 00:04:842 (1,2,3) - Please decide whether to pick up the piano sound or lyrics since the clickable rhythm is the piano it shouldn't be a problem but w/e reducing the intensity here doesn't hurt
    00:04:842 (1) - This (1) picks up the lyrics 00:06:160 (2,3) - This (2,3) picks up the piano
  2. 00:13:248 (2,2) - I think we can stack
    00:18:523 (2,2) - just like here impossible since 00:15:391 (1) - is curved, also shouldn't matter since it's so far apart
  3. 00:17:204 - You should pick up the sound here changed in rizen mod
  4. 00:22:479 (4) - The appearance is better (3) copy double blanket ok
  5. 00:23:303 (1,2,3,4) - It does not have to be 1/1 rhythm
    If it is Normal, I think that rhythm like image is good ok but too complicated for calm verse so i made a 3/2 repeat slider to match with later
  6. 00:26:600 (2,3,5,6) - Slider reverse or think the rhythm like the previous image is good eh that rhythm doesn't work here, just did 1/1s; idk why i chose to map those drums here anyway
  7. 00:47:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can understand using blanket
    However, blanketing restricts the place and becomes overlap or stack emphasis
    I think this is difficult to change. I think that keep may be good if you think that you can not change tried and stacking is better
  8. 00:51:655 (3) - 00:54:622 (7) - and 00:52:314 (1,1) - It is better to stack ok except the 7
  9. 00:57:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is not good in the excitement part
    It is better to put the beat snap at 1/2 sure used rhythm from earlier
    01:08:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is very good thanks w
  10. 01:07:479 (5,6) - 00:56:929 (5,6) - Why are the rhythms different? fixed
  11. 01:10:611 - I should pick up this sound
    01:10:446 - Let's use 1/2 slider i think two of those in a row is too hard for simplistic normal
  12. 01:23:633 (5,4) - stack miss? yea, nice catch
  13. 01:25:281 (4) - Add NC eh i want to keep nc's consistent in this diff
Good luck :)
thanks for the mod!
Osuology
sorry I'm a month late I have no excuses I'm just a terrible person

[Five leaf clover]
Mostly wanted to say that flow kinda bothered me since sometimes it seems like you have circular flow but then there are sudden disruptions of it which don't really fit the song I think. Otherwise map is pretty good from a 20 minute perspective.

[kami hi btw]
nothing from quick glance

yeah tbh not anything really to point out, you really need a large mod or something, probably ready for BN tbh. No KD for me probably
Topic Starter
vekt0r
meh it's fine i don't really have expectations for nm's tbh

regarding the flow, i often use antiflow in slider entries for emphasis on specific sounds; i'll check for consistency there though

thanks anyway!
Sidetail
[normal]
01:02:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pretty sophisticated rhythms for being lowest diff (you should save harder rhythms for higher diff). would be nice if you can simply a bit more for overall diff but it guess its passable since its lower than 2 sr
nothing really to point out.

[advanced]
01:15:638 - ~ audio drop off is too much, and i noticed it immediately. its more weird then vol is that low suddenly so please fix. (seems like this applies to other diffs as well)

[gaia]
00:17:204 (7) - having double whistle on head and entire slider body makes this pretty obnoxious. whistle on sliderhead seems enough.

[kami]
00:30:886 (3) - add clap on head

[clover]
00:41:270 (2,3) - not sure if i really like this flow into slider
01:01:545 (1) - this should have whistle instead of 01:01:710 (2) - . consistency with previous parts like 00:58:907 (1) - &01:00:226 (1) - ... (etc)

nice map, ask my modding partner - yoshimaro - after he mods this map for kibbleru's bn check.
Topic Starter
vekt0r

Sidetail wrote:

[normal]
01:02:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pretty sophisticated rhythms for being lowest diff (you should save harder rhythms for higher diff). would be nice if you can simply a bit more for overall diff but it guess its passable since its lower than 2 sr no change for now since this is the simplest i can get without losing parts of the music, but i'll phone a 6-digit to get another opinion on this lol
nothing really to point out.

[advanced]
01:15:638 - ~ audio drop off is too much, and i noticed it immediately. its more weird then vol is that low suddenly so please fix. (seems like this applies to other diffs as well) okay, raised 25->30% for all diffs

[clover]
00:41:270 (2,3) - not sure if i really like this flow into slider don't think it's bad but moved to be similar to 00:30:556 (1,2,3) -
01:01:545 (1) - this should have whistle instead of 01:01:710 (2) - . consistency with previous parts like 00:58:907 (1) - &01:00:226 (1) - ... (etc) problem is music isn't consistent; it differs from 01:12:094 (1) - in the second half of the kiai because here there's a significant trumpet on the (2)
the right thing to do should then be a double whistle, but that sounds terrible


nice map, ask my modding partner - yoshimaro - after he mods this map for kibbleru's bn check.
thanks for the mod!
- yoshimaro - already modded this before, but i'll pm him i guess
Shunao
hello!

m4m

  • advanced
  1. 00:04:842 (3,4,1,2,1) - feels really confusing when we play because there is same spacing as 00:02:205 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - and they have 1/1 gaps :/
  2. 00:27:919 (3) - ctrl+h for a better flow imo
  3. 01:09:951 - add a note for emphasize trumpet
  4. 01:12:589 (2,3) - blanket it's more attractive
  5. 01:15:226 - add note for the strong sounds
  6. 01:31:545 (5,2) - stack them?
  7. 01:34:018 (4,2) - ^
  • gaia's hard
  1. 00:12:094 (4) - nc to be consistent with 00:08:798 (1,2,1,2)
  2. 00:19:017 (3,4) - spacing should be similar as 00:13:743 (3,4)
  3. 00:15:061 (6,1) - ^ 00:20:336 (6,1)
  4. 00:21:490 (3,4) - stack? like you did at 00:21:160 (2,3)
  5. 01:01:050 (2,3) - sould be stack for vocals like you did before for example: 00:36:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
  6. 01:04:017 (7,1) - it's should be confusing for the player because 01:02:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is 1/2 stacks, it's not similar and not easy to read
  7. 01:15:061 (2) - you can make a slider renverse for emphasize the strong sound (start here 01:14:896 )
  8. 01:28:907 (3,4) - should be similar as 01:34:182 (3,4)
  9. 01:40:281 (7) - curved like the others?
  • kami's insane
  1. 00:10:116 (1,1) - blanket should be a netter appearance
  2. 00:13:907 (5,1) - spacing should be similar as 00:19:182 (5,1)
  3. 00:17:039 (2,3) - i think it should be unstack because there is a strong sound here 00:17:204 - it's better to make a jump that stack imo
  4. 00:25:940 (1,2) - maybe less spacing, vocals are not very strong try something like this http://i.imgur.com/Wy12YlZ.jpg?1
  5. 00:36:490 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:44:402 (1,2) - this stack it's not necessary
  7. 00:52:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these jumps are not beautiful tbh i think if you try this http://i.imgur.com/Tea5w64.jpg?1 it's should be better (circle 7 is below circle 2)
  8. 00:59:567 (3,1) - blanket should be more attractive
  9. 01:10:116 (3,5) - to close it's doesn't looks good
  10. 01:29:072 (5,1) - jump? like you did before 00:13:907 (5,1)
  11. 01:31:709 (5,1) - like i said before a jump should preferable that to see a stack :/
  12. 01:34:346 (5,1) - need jump like before 00:19:182 (5,1) - but spacing need to be similar
  • Five Leaf Clover
  1. 00:58:907 (1,2) - need to be similar for a better appearance when you play
  2. 01:38:138 (6,1) - little contact
gl!
Topic Starter
vekt0r

ShogunMoon wrote:

hello!

m4m

  • advanced
  1. 00:04:842 (3,4,1,2,1) - feels really confusing when we play because there is same spacing as 00:02:205 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - and they have 1/1 gaps :/ fair, increased spacing on 1/1 to avoid confusion
  2. 00:27:919 (3) - ctrl+h for a better flow imo did it more because section looked cluttered before
  3. 01:09:951 - add a note for emphasize trumpet don't think that's possible with 1,3 blanketed, plus with the spacing between 2 and 3 the blanket would be too far
  4. 01:15:226 - add note for the strong sounds if i were to map the instrumental stream it would be with a 3/4 slider (1/4 with repeats only for drums), but i don't want two 3/4s in a row
  5. 01:31:545 (5,2) - stack them? yea why not
  6. 01:34:018 (4,2) - ^ impossible with the spacing
  • Five Leaf Clover
  1. 00:58:907 (1,2) - need to be similar for a better appearance when you play hmm actually i made this two circles instead lol
  2. 01:38:138 (6,1) - little contact okay, fixed
gl!
thanks for the mod! i'll mod back the day after tomorrow at the latest

updated kami and gaia below, thanks!
Kami-senpai

ShogunMoon wrote:

  • kami's insane
  1. 00:52:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these jumps are not beautiful tbh i think if you try this http://i.imgur.com/Tea5w64.jpg?1 it's should be better (circle 7 is below circle 2) Did by pitch, plays well, fits well to me
  2. 00:59:567 (3,1) - blanket should be more attractive flow is better like this
update
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Gaia
Rizen

Rizen wrote:

hi, from my m4m q

Gaia's Hard
  1. 00:10:776 (2) - the other sliders are (i think) following the trumpet, but there's no trumpet for this slider, making it rather unsupported imo. Consider deleting this slider, and extending 00:10:116 (1) - into a repeat slider. I think this rhythm would suit the music better guitars kick in here so ya
  2. 00:27:259 (5,6) - spacing here a bit too big imo, especially since there's nothing really distinct happening at this tick/beat
good luck!

Alphatail

Sidetail wrote:

[gaia]
00:17:204 (7) - having double whistle on head and entire slider body makes this pretty obnoxious. whistle on sliderhead seems enough.

nice map, ask my modding partner - yoshimaro - after he mods this map for kibbleru's bn check.

ShogunMoon

ShogunMoon wrote:

hello!

m4m

  • gaia's hard
  1. 00:12:094 (4) - nc to be consistent with 00:08:798 (1,2,1,2) that wouldnt make it consistent either tho i still prefer mine
  2. 00:19:017 (3,4) - spacing should be similar as 00:13:743 (3,4) similar enuf to me
  3. 00:15:061 (6,1) - ^ 00:20:336 (6,1) ^
  4. 00:21:490 (3,4) - stack? like you did at 00:21:160 (2,3) the 2nd timestamp gets me back to the same link, tho i didnt stack cuz ds wouldnt allow for it so ya
  5. 01:01:050 (2,3) - sould be stack for vocals like you did before for example: 00:36:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) fine imo
  6. 01:04:017 (7,1) - it's should be confusing for the player because 01:02:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is 1/2 stacks, it's not similar and not easy to read unless u have good suggestions to fix i think the nc helps with readability
  7. 01:15:061 (2) - you can make a slider renverse for emphasize the strong sound (start here 01:14:896 ) im not following that tho
  8. 01:28:907 (3,4) - should be similar as 01:34:182 (3,4) similar enough
  9. 01:40:281 (7) - curved like the others?variety lul
gl!

thx for mods no reply are fixed

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79,93,46215,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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163,62,47699,2,0,P|218:82|283:97,1,111.999996582031,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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327,210,48853,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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225,111,50995,2,0,P|225:144|212:193,1,71.9999978027344,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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415,200,51820,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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141,67,53138,1,4,0:3:0:0:
66,123,53303,1,0,1:0:0:0:
70,216,53468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
70,216,53550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
70,216,53633,5,4,1:2:0:0:
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279,214,60061,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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266,77,62204,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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485,64,70116,2,0,P|492:106|468:158,1,88.000002685547,2|4,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
402,209,70446,1,2,1:0:0:0:
427,302,70611,1,2,1:2:0:0:
351,362,70776,6,0,P|305:353|225:342,1,88.000002685547,6|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,290,71105,2,0,P|139:303|96:314,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,252,71435,1,4,0:3:0:0:
19,155,71600,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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256,193,72094,2,0,B|385:165|385:165|405:114,1,176.000005371094,2|0,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
406,26,72589,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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224,229,75556,1,0,1:0:0:0:
224,229,75638,1,0,1:0:0:0:
224,229,75721,2,0,P|261:227|343:188,1,88.000002685547,0|8,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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492,180,76545,2,0,P|508:246|434:339,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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358,255,80336,2,0,P|319:250|260:235,1,80,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,203,80666,1,4,0:3:0:0:
244,126,80831,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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276,205,82479,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,205,82644,2,0,P|364:217|445:227,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
495,140,83138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
495,140,83303,2,0,P|491:100|455:54,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,26,83633,2,0,P|345:64|346:123,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,205,83962,6,0,B|254:82|254:82|205:57,1,167.999994873047,6|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
116,40,84457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,40,84622,2,0,P|72:56|21:68,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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215,62,85281,5,6,1:0:0:0:
147,136,85446,2,0,P|139:177|135:232,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
221,44,85776,5,6,1:0:0:0:
299,115,85940,2,0,P|311:157|316:204,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
282,308,86270,2,0,P|313:298|397:281,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,209,86600,6,0,P|385:205|295:193,1,136.000002593994,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,78,87259,2,0,P|217:111|232:165,1,68.0000012969971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,307,87589,2,0,P|219:272|240:222,1,68.0000012969971,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
226,141,87918,6,0,P|133:162|52:174,1,160,6|0,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
18,89,88413,2,0,P|31:34|139:48,1,160,2|4,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
215,48,88907,2,0,L|303:57,1,80,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,13,89237,2,0,B|440:96|388:96|415:181,1,160,2|0,2:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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219,157,90226,2,0,P|256:150|304:140,1,80,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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polka


[Normal:]
  1. I don't like how cramped everything looks. I think an increase in DS could keep this map from looking so crowded and unpolished.
  2. 01:32:534 (5,1) - Blanket :D?
[Hard:]
  1. Excellent hitsounding!! 8-)
  2. 01:00:226 (1) - This sliders really not all that attractive at all. May I suggested lowering the side after the anchor? Like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8494779 ?
  3. 01:31:545 (3,4) - Blanket could be touched up
  4. 01:40:776 (8,1) - what (1) is mapping is far different and more important than what (8) is mapping, and I don't think stacking them is a good idea. If anything, I think there should be a jump here.
[Afteword:]
  • Not a whole lot to find here! Good job.
Topic Starter
vekt0r

PolkaMocha wrote:



[Normal:]
  1. I don't like how cramped everything looks. I think an increase in DS could keep this map from looking so crowded and unpolished. hmm i don't think it really looks crowded, also any increase in ds would push the map over 2* xd
  2. 01:32:534 (5,1) - Blanket :D? fixed
[Afteword:]
  • Not a whole lot to find here! Good job.
thanks for the mod!

already edited my post earlier but both gds are updated
edit fixed gaia's blanket for him, other points are denied
Affirmation
Q

[highest]
00:17:369 - has a beat here.
00:24:787 - ^
01:00:556 (2) - set same thing with 01:00:226 (1) -
01:14:072 (3,4) - stack

GL
Topic Starter
vekt0r

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[highest]
00:17:369 - has a beat here. ye but in this section i'm following only the trumpet line
00:24:787 - ^ here it's just a background instrumental repeating one note so it doesn't really matter
01:00:556 (2) - set same thing with 01:00:226 (1) - ok made it kind of tangent to the curve
01:14:072 (3,4) - stack fixed

GL
thanks!
Yahuri
HALLO
m4m return from my q

Five Leaf Clover
00:15:391 (1,2,3) - the DS of 1-2 should be the same or higher than the DS of 2-3 bc 2 has a snare on it, and the melody has the same intensity
00:18:028 (1,2,3) - ^
00:17:204 (4,5) - DS way too high imo, its only snare and no melody
00:25:940 (1,2,3) - DS should be higher from 2-3 than 1-2 cuz the vocal is more stressed on 3 imo
00:37:809 (1,2,3) - ^
00:49:676 (1,2,3,4,5) - so the DS gradually increases here, but not here 00:50:666 (1,2,3,4,5). i would like to see the increasing pattern in both sections
01:21:820 (3,4) - could use some more spacing here since 4 has about the same vocal intensity as 3
seems pretty clean in general, nice

Normal
00:07:479 (1,2) - you can nudge 2 up a bit so it makes an equilateral triangle w/ the head/tail of 1 xd
00:27:259 (4,5,6,1) - u could make this flow in a straight line
01:21:984 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^
00:59:237 (5,6) - dont like how this looks visually very much since the tail of 6 is closer to 5 than the head
01:06:160 (2,4) - fix blanket
01:18:358 (3,1) - ^
01:41:105 (1) - whooo thats a lots of slider points but its cute XD

Hard
00:39:127 (1,2) - blanket?
00:44:402 (1,2,3) - this pattern might be a bit edgy/confusing tbh since the tail of 2 is closer to 1 than its head, also since 3 stacks under 1
01:19:677 (3,1) - fix blanket
01:23:962 (1,2,3) - could make these flow in a straight line, or move 3 to make an equilateral triangle with head1-2-head3
01:24:622 (3,4) - why is the DS so high here? theres only snare
01:16:380 (2,3) - reduce DS, this is the only jump in this section you did for vocals
01:25:611 (2,3) - 01:26:106 (4,5) - these spots would be pretty good for jumps imo
01:29:237 (1,2) - right now it kinda looks like a really poorly executed blanket so you can try to separate them a bit more
01:36:984 (1) - the jump isnt necessary imo, this note isnt very strong.
01:38:633 (2,3) - 01:39:292 (1,2) - 01:39:952 (1,2) - you could put jumps here

Gaia's Hard
00:08:798 (1,2,1) - the last slider has the most stressed note. right now the flow from 1-2 appears to be more uncomfortable than 2-1, so i would switch that around
00:58:578 (3,4,5,6) - arent these jumps kinda big for a Hard diff?
01:04:512 (2,3) - ^
01:25:446 (2,1) - ^
01:30:556 (1,2) - ^

Good luck~
Topic Starter
vekt0r

Yahuri wrote:

HALLO
m4m return from my q

Five Leaf Clover
00:15:391 (1,2,3) - the DS of 1-2 should be the same or higher than the DS of 2-3 bc 2 has a snare on it, and the melody has the same intensity
00:18:028 (1,2,3) - ^ i disagree; 3 is definitely emphasized more
00:17:204 (4,5) - DS way too high imo, its only snare and no melody yea whoops
00:25:940 (1,2,3) - DS should be higher from 2-3 than 1-2 cuz the vocal is more stressed on 3 imo nerfed both 1-2s
00:37:809 (1,2,3) - ^
00:49:676 (1,2,3,4,5) - so the DS gradually increases here, but not here 00:50:666 (1,2,3,4,5). i would like to see the increasing pattern in both sections oh that's because 3 is a downbeat and has vocal emphasis too
01:21:820 (3,4) - could use some more spacing here since 4 has about the same vocal intensity as 3 this is true
seems pretty clean in general, nice

Normal
00:07:479 (1,2) - you can nudge 2 up a bit so it makes an equilateral triangle w/ the head/tail of 1 xd ok
00:27:259 (4,5,6,1) - u could make this flow in a straight line that squishes it into the other row tho xd
01:21:984 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^ ok
00:59:237 (5,6) - dont like how this looks visually very much since the tail of 6 is closer to 5 than the head should be fixed
01:06:160 (2,4) - fix blanket both fix
01:18:358 (3,1) - ^
01:41:105 (1) - whooo thats a lots of slider points but its cute XD thanks w

Hard
00:39:127 (1,2) - blanket? it is tho; also distance from slider doesn't matter as much
00:44:402 (1,2,3) - this pattern might be a bit edgy/confusing tbh since the tail of 2 is closer to 1 than its head, also since 3 stacks under 1 maybe a bit but i don't think it's bad; keeping for now
01:19:677 (3,1) - fix blanket yea
01:23:962 (1,2,3) - could make these flow in a straight line, or move 3 to make an equilateral triangle with head1-2-head3 did line
01:24:622 (3,4) - why is the DS so high here? theres only snare that's not a snare here
01:16:380 (2,3) - reduce DS, this is the only jump in this section you did for vocals actually i just made the other one a jump
01:25:611 (2,3) - 01:26:106 (4,5) - these spots would be pretty good for jumps imo spread used to be too tight for this but it's actually fine now
01:29:237 (1,2) - right now it kinda looks like a really poorly executed blanket so you can try to separate them a bit more looks better than if you separate them tho
01:36:984 (1) - the jump isnt necessary imo, this note isnt very strong. if you look at the trumpet line it acts like a syncopated downbeat, though the drums are normal
01:38:633 (2,3) - 01:39:292 (1,2) - 01:39:952 (1,2) - you could put jumps here sure

Good luck~
thanks for the mod!
Nao Tomori
[five leaf clover]
the main issue i have with this map is massive lack of differentiation between unique parts. if you compare spacing in the intro to that of the kiai, you can see that the intro uses very similar rhythm and spacing and patterning etc so it doesn't really feel like the map changes when the song does.
i highly suggest nerfing 00:12:754 (1) - this part, or using a different set of patterns, or something to differentiate it from the kiai.

anyway

00:01:545 (1,2,3) - the spacing here is also ridiculously high. yes it's 1/1 but having high spacing 1/1 in the very calm piano intro seems out of place.

00:04:182 (1,2) - same here, overdone

00:16:545 (6,1) - i know you're separating the patterns cuz it's a new section, which is good and all, but this jump is fucking huge

00:21:984 (1,2) - for the entire part before this, you've been focusing on the trumpet; having a fullscreen jump that is larger than any other spacing in the map on something that isn't a trumpet is really weird

00:23:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - in this part i suggest following the vocals instead of tons of 1/2 circle spam, which, again, lowers the amount of contrast between parts

00:25:940 (1) - these kinds of sliders are kinda weird to use cuz they make you pause at the start. additionally it seems like you didn't really use the shape, like it's just there and there's no blankets / interlocking patterns/use of the different motion. why not just use normal ones?

00:28:248 (5) - personally i think this kind of notes suck cuz

00:31:710 (2,3) - should definitely be a slider cuz of vocal focus from earlier

00:35:006 (7,1) - o look a strong vocal on the red tick
o wait its ignored =(

00:42:094 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - wat are these following? 00:42:259 (3) - is overmapping, 00:42:424 (4,5) - should be stacked according to how you handle that drum sound earlier...

00:58:907 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i think the jump to 1 is a bit too big, yea you're switching sections but this is still 2x the size of base spacing here

01:01:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm here is kinda muddled cuz 1-2 follows trumpet, 34 is on vocal and 567 are on trumpet again

01:05:831 (1,2) - these aree the same thing in the song shouldnt your nc be consistent? just remove the one on 1

01:13:413 (1,2,3) - random tiny spacing

01:14:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the sound that the burst follows appears where the 3/4 slider is too, map it the same way both times

01:41:105 (1) - http://puu.sh/wJjlR/2f90767b72.jpg
going to bed, can continue later if u want

for now, good luck
Topic Starter
vekt0r

Naotoshi wrote:

[five leaf clover]
the main issue i have with this map is massive lack of differentiation between unique parts. if you compare spacing in the intro to that of the kiai, you can see that the intro uses very similar rhythm and spacing and patterning etc so it doesn't really feel like the map changes when the song does.
i highly suggest nerfing 00:12:754 (1) - this part, or using a different set of patterns, or something to differentiate it from the kiai.

anyway

00:01:545 (1,2,3) - the spacing here is also ridiculously high. yes it's 1/1 but having high spacing 1/1 in the very calm piano intro seems out of place. also changed nc's to downbeat here, not sure if better

00:04:182 (1,2) - same here, overdone this one should be fine, sv doesn't increase that much

00:16:545 (6,1) - i know you're separating the patterns cuz it's a new section, which is good and all, but this jump is fucking huge

00:21:984 (1,2) - for the entire part before this, you've been focusing on the trumpet; having a fullscreen jump that is larger than any other spacing in the map on something that isn't a trumpet is really weird

00:23:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - in this part i suggest following the vocals instead of tons of 1/2 circle spam, which, again, lowers the amount of contrast between parts

00:25:940 (1) - these kinds of sliders are kinda weird to use cuz they make you pause at the start. additionally it seems like you didn't really use the shape, like it's just there and there's no blankets / interlocking patterns/use of the different motion. why not just use normal ones? well just normal arcs don't work well imo (i had those before), but turns out having the movement change at the end fits the song better and actually lets me use the movement

00:28:248 (5) - personally i think this kind of notes suck cuz

00:31:710 (2,3) - should definitely be a slider cuz of vocal focus from earlier

00:35:006 (7,1) - o look a strong vocal on the red tick
o wait its ignored =(

00:42:094 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - wat are these following? 00:42:259 (3) - is overmapping, 00:42:424 (4,5) - should be stacked according to how you handle that drum sound earlier... kept all circles, i think it shows intensity increase and differentiates it from before, but stacked 4,5 and reduced spacing a lot (also 3 is vocal)

00:58:907 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i think the jump to 1 is a bit too big, yea you're switching sections but this is still 2x the size of base spacing here

01:01:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm here is kinda muddled cuz 1-2 follows trumpet, 34 is on vocal and 567 are on trumpet again but if i were to follow trumpet then just 3 would be removed and imo that's worse

01:05:831 (1,2) - these aree the same thing in the song shouldnt your nc be consistent? just remove the one on 1 nc has to do with a concept w/ *strong* trumpets

01:13:413 (1,2,3) - random tiny spacing

01:14:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the sound that the burst follows appears where the 3/4 slider is too, map it the same way both times

01:41:105 (1) - http://puu.sh/wJjlR/2f90767b72.jpg "Also the curve on 01:41:223 (1) - could be improved but you used so many points it's hard to edit it lol." *slider editing intensifies*
going to bed, can continue later if u want

for now, good luck
computer's having internet problems; i'll update with response (and mod your other map (!)) once that's fixed
for now, the trumpet part is imo pretty high in intensity, but yea i'll differentiate the sections more, not just in spacing (also should nerf verse more)

ok no reply=fixed
a lot of these points are literally fixed in the old clover i saved about a month ago xd, so i kind of reverted some things while keeping the good parts and improved from there
Ongaku
from my queue \o

Five Leaf Clover
  1. 00:24:622 (1) - It wouldn't hurt to just add a slider here right? It can be a follow up to 00:24:457 - 's vocals. To be honest, I'll let it slider since you've done it for the others, but just consider it.
  2. 00:30:061 (4,3) - Any way to rearrange this so it won't get an overlap like this?
  3. 00:58:907 (1) - Mmm. This part is pretty awkward since you can't actually just map 00:59:402 - since it'd get in the ways of the vocal. Why not make 00:58:907 (1) - a 3/4 slider into 00:59:237 (2) - being a 1/2 slider? That way you can get the trumpet notes 00:59:237 (2,3) - here while still being able to hit 00:59:567 - vocals without interference.
  4. 01:00:556 (2) - Awkward pause is awkward. Maybe just make it a slider?
  5. 01:02:534 (6,7) - I'd say add a slider here, just to balance out the jumps and sliders. It'd make the jumps less "redundant," if you get what I mean, since there will also be jumps in this section 01:02:864 - .
  6. 01:07:809 (5,1) - Good lord please stack.
  7. 01:23:962 (1,3) - Stack screwed up
  8. 01:35:501 (5,1) - Unnatural overlapping, Maybe rearrange 01:35:831 (1) - in a different postion?
  9. 01:42:342 - Drums here.
Kami's Insane
  1. 00:02:864 - Would you wanna hitsound this since you hitsound'd 00:04:182 - ?
  2. 00:09:457 (2) - maybe move this slightly to the left to avoid an overlap.
  3. 00:28:413 (4,4) - why not stick with the stacking here?
  4. 00:35:006 (4,5,1) - Sudden triple, I don't think it follows anything.
  5. 00:44:896 (3) - Intentional stacking? its slightly off.
  6. 01:04:347 (2) - why not overlap the slider end over 01:03:853 (6) - ? Aesthetic wise, it'd be great.
  7. 01:06:490 (4) - ctrl+g? I think it'd play a bit more fancier lol
Everything else seems fine. Nothing much more needs to be done. GL
Topic Starter
vekt0r

Ongaku wrote:

from my queue \o

Five Leaf Clover
  1. 00:24:622 (1) - It wouldn't hurt to just add a slider here right? It can be a follow up to 00:24:457 - 's vocals. To be honest, I'll let it slider since you've done it for the others, but just consider it. yea i agree that it doesn't matter too much; want to keep gap tho for break before next vocal phrase, and after that the vocals dont really break again for a while
  2. 00:30:061 (4,3) - Any way to rearrange this so it won't get an overlap like this? sliderbody still overlaps a bit but should be fine
  3. 00:58:907 (1) - Mmm. This part is pretty awkward since you can't actually just map 00:59:402 - since it'd get in the ways of the vocal. Why not make 00:58:907 (1) - a 3/4 slider into 00:59:237 (2) - being a 1/2 slider? That way you can get the trumpet notes 00:59:237 (2,3) - here while still being able to hit 00:59:567 - vocals without interference. changed the two notes into a 1/2 slider because yea that transition from trumpet to vocal wasn't good; didn't want a 3/4 slider though because that would conflict with the high sv 1/2 slider concept for strong trumpets
  4. 01:00:556 (2) - Awkward pause is awkward. Maybe just make it a slider? sure, also made it differentiate from 01:11:105 (2) - which has a trumpet thing
  5. 01:02:534 (6,7) - I'd say add a slider here, just to balance out the jumps and sliders. It'd make the jumps less "redundant," if you get what I mean, since there will also be jumps in this section 01:02:864 - . doesnt really work tho cuz 01:02:204 (4,5,6,7) - is mapping a trumpet buildup, and in particular 7 is quite an important trumpet
  6. 01:07:809 (5,1) - Good lord please stack. ok
  7. 01:23:962 (1,3) - Stack screwed up ok
  8. 01:35:501 (5,1) - Unnatural overlapping, Maybe rearrange 01:35:831 (1) - in a different postion? moved so it overlaps more; it's supposed to be a backwards movement so overlap is inevitable
  9. 01:42:342 - Drums here. they're not that noticeable and mapping a triple there doesn't work well
Everything else seems fine. Nothing much more needs to be done. GL
thanks for the mod! will mod back soon
ItashaS13
o//


  • Five Leaf Clover
    00:09:457 (2) - just copy paste this 00:08:798 (1) - and ctrl+j - ctrl+h for aesthetics this triggered me :< http://prntscr.com/g1gkad
    00:11:435 (1,2) - this flows a bit awkward, 00:11:600 (2,3) - ctrl+g these that would flow better
    00:17:699 (5,1) - shapes should not be the same since they have different sounds I feel like a curvy slider for 00:17:699 (5) - would fit better, something to catch the 1/4 better like http://prntscr.com/g1gm0o
    00:20:666 (1,2,3,4) - tbh I don't like how this plays because the flow keeps almost exactly the same as 00:19:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - so it feels like playing the same thing 2 times
    00:49:182 (3,4) - flow here it's really awkward because stream shape, maybe if you move this up 00:49:182 (3) - or if the stream shape was more like this instead http://prntscr.com/g1gp6g
    00:49:676 (1,2) - this also plays kinda awkward but w/e
    01:35:831 (1,3) - same shapes instead? same sound
    01:11:435 (1,2,3,4) - 01:09:787 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - both of these plays almost exactly the same, and again, both sounds are different since one has that trumpet sound, so I think you should make them different or at least, reduce spacing on 01:11:435 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:12:589 (2) - move this circle closer to 1-3 since it doesn't have trumpet sound so it's jump is too large, nothing emphasized

    Kami's Insane
    00:07:314 (3,1) - shouldn't these be stacked? it's spacing looks more like this 00:03:523 (1,2) - which is 1/1, 00:07:314 (3,1) - this is 1/2 so stacked makes more sense
    00:08:303 (2,1) - avoid that small overlap :< http://prntscr.com/g1gw6m
    00:14:896 (3,4) - 00:20:171 (3,4) - should stack the first one too or unstack the 2nd
    00:25:611 (4,2) - tbh this overlap looks awkward xd
    00:27:259 (1) - this would work better if you ctrl+g and move the 00:27:754 (2) - up, like http://prntscr.com/g1gxok
    00:31:545 (2,3) - I don't think this stacks works good because you have to make a stop but the music doesn't support that so just stack 00:31:545 (2) - with 00:30:721 (2) -
    00:35:006 (4,5,1) - should delet this triplet, because you have the stream before it and you didnt used it at 00:24:457 (4,1) - which is practically the same, overmapped for a 4.36* map
    00:44:732 (2,3) - rythm choice here was not the best imo, 00:45:061 - should be clickable instead
    01:02:699 (5,1) - awkward flow because of 01:02:534 (4,5) -
    01:03:358 (4,5) - ^ 01:03:523 (5) - should be stacked with 01:02:864 (1,3) - it's current position may be confusing

    das it
You can ask me for a mod whenever you want :p
Topic Starter
vekt0r

Itasha_S13 wrote:

o//


  • Five Leaf Clover
    00:09:457 (2) - just copy paste this 00:08:798 (1) - and ctrl+j - ctrl+h for aesthetics this triggered me :< http://prntscr.com/g1gkad this would detract from flow into the next slider, and also visually conflict with it; did make angle larger though
    00:11:435 (1,2) - this flows a bit awkward, 00:11:600 (2,3) - ctrl+g these that would flow better both play the same because kicksliders are played like circles; but this arrangement has better visual flow into 00:12:094 (1,2,3,4) -
    00:17:699 (5,1) - shapes should not be the same since they have different sounds I feel like a curvy slider for 00:17:699 (5) - would fit better, something to catch the 1/4 better like http://prntscr.com/g1gm0o k just changed it back to a straight slider
    00:20:666 (1,2,3,4) - tbh I don't like how this plays because the flow keeps almost exactly the same as 00:19:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - so it feels like playing the same thing 2 times that's the point, this helps differentiate it from the sharp motion used on notes like 00:18:523 (3) -, since there's a musical change in the last phrase; basically flow is same because it's used for the same reason
    00:49:182 (3,4) - flow here it's really awkward because stream shape, maybe if you move this up 00:49:182 (3) - or if the stream shape was more like this instead http://prntscr.com/g1gp6g moved 3 up, should be better now
    00:49:676 (1,2) - this also plays kinda awkward but w/e ye this type of flow is standard coming out of streams xd
    01:35:831 (1,3) - same shapes instead? same sound ^^^ same reasoning
    01:11:435 (1,2,3,4) - 01:09:787 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - both of these plays almost exactly the same, and again, both sounds are different since one has that trumpet sound, so I think you should make them different or at least, reduce spacing on 01:11:435 (1,2,3,4) - hmm i like this idea; tried switching the spacings to show general decreasing intensity in second half of kiai (though the vocals are still intense)
    01:12:589 (2) - move this circle closer to 1-3 since it doesn't have trumpet sound so it's jump is too large, nothing emphasized rotated it a bit to be closer to 1

    das it
You can ask me for a mod whenever you want :p
thanks for the mod! also updated kami below
Kami-senpai

Ongaku wrote:

Kami's Insane
  1. 00:02:864 - Would you wanna hitsound this since you hitsound'd 00:04:182 - ? but i didnt hitsound either...
  2. 00:09:457 (2) - maybe move this slightly to the left to avoid an overlap.
  3. 00:28:413 (4,4) - why not stick with the stacking here? the vocal emphasis on 4 is bigger, so it deserves higher spacing
  4. 00:35:006 (4,5,1) - Sudden triple, I don't think it follows anything. to simulate holding the vocals while also making the downbeat clickable
  5. 00:44:896 (3) - Intentional stacking? its slightly off.
  6. 01:04:347 (2) - why not overlap the slider end over 01:03:853 (6) - ? Aesthetic wise, it'd be great.
  7. 01:06:490 (4) - ctrl+g? I think it'd play a bit more fancier lol

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Kami's Insane
00:07:314 (3,1) - shouldn't these be stacked? it's spacing looks more like this 00:03:523 (1,2) - which is 1/1, 00:07:314 (3,1) - this is 1/2 so stacked makes more sense
00:08:303 (2,1) - avoid that small overlap :< http://prntscr.com/g1gw6m
00:14:896 (3,4) - 00:20:171 (3,4) - should stack the first one too or unstack the 2nd
00:25:611 (4,2) - tbh this overlap looks awkward xd
00:27:259 (1) - this would work better if you ctrl+g and move the 00:27:754 (2) - up, like http://prntscr.com/g1gxok
00:31:545 (2,3) - I don't think this stacks works good because you have to make a stop but the music doesn't support that so just stack 00:31:545 (2) - with 00:30:721 (2) -
00:35:006 (4,5,1) - should delet this triplet, because you have the stream before it and you didnt used it at 00:24:457 (4,1) - which is practically the same, overmapped for a 4.36* map
00:44:732 (2,3) - rythm choice here was not the best imo, 00:45:061 - should be clickable instead
01:02:699 (5,1) - awkward flow because of 01:02:534 (4,5) -
01:03:358 (4,5) - ^ 01:03:523 (5) - should be stacked with 01:02:864 (1,3) - it's current position may be confusing

das it
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Mafumafu
M4M from my queue, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/645502
[Normal]
For a normal less than 2 stars, AR5 seems a bit too high. Try 4.5 instead.

01:36:655 (3,1) - I think you need to avoid this overlap

[Advanced]
Spacing a bit messy.

00:21:820 (1,2,1) - For these three similar sounds, it is better to apply a slider for 2 as well. Also because of the stack at 00:21:490 (4,1) - , 00:22:150 (2,1) - could be easily read as a 1/2 jump and could cause confusion to players.

00:28:413 (4,1) - Need a blanket here.

00:34:347 (2,3,4) - Follow the vocal here is a better choice I think.

[Gaia's Hard]
01:10:611 (8,1) - Consider a jump here?

01:20:995 (8,1) - ^

[Kami's Insane]
I think OD8 is a bit overdosed. You might think to lower it by 0.5.

00:12:754 (1) - Strongly suggest to take this apart into 3/4 slider+circle for the downbeat at 00:13:083

00:15:391 (1) - 00:18:028 (1) - same

00:25:281 (3,4) - Visual spacing too close.

00:38:468 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - These tricky stacks are really challenging with AR8.5

00:43:743 (5,6) - Too close. It looks like the gap is as if 1/4.

00:54:622 (1) - I'm afraid this is unsnapped

00:59:567 (3,1) - Why not take a blanket here?

[Five Leaf Clover]
00:12:424 (4) - Is this snapped, I wonder.

00:57:259 (5,1) - Flow a bit meh and the slider shape is quite twisted

01:07:809 (5,1) - Same here, this is a bit better though.

01:17:204 (1,2,3) - I think spacing here needs to be emphasized.

01:19:842 (1,2,3) - Same
Topic Starter
vekt0r

Regraz wrote:

M4M from my queue, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/645502
[Normal]
For a normal less than 2 stars, AR5 seems a bit too high. Try 4.5 instead. hm ok

01:36:655 (3,1) - I think you need to avoid this overlap it's intentionally stacked; if you mean readability even on ar4.5 3 ends pretty much when 1 comes in so shouldn't be a problem

[Advanced]
Spacing a bit messy. hmm for the most part its ds with jumps on downbeats but i changed some minor things

00:21:820 (1,2,1) - For these three similar sounds, it is better to apply a slider for 2 as well. Also because of the stack at 00:21:490 (4,1) - , 00:22:150 (2,1) - could be easily read as a 1/2 jump and could cause confusion to players. yep, and it's not even stacked anymore lol

00:28:413 (4,1) - Need a blanket here. sure

00:34:347 (2,3,4) - Follow the vocal here is a better choice I think. trying to keep it to the beat to avoid confusion; also same thing as 00:23:303 (1,2,3,4,1) -

[Five Leaf Clover]
00:12:424 (4) - Is this snapped, I wonder. snapped to 1/8 wat

00:57:259 (5,1) - Flow a bit meh and the slider shape is quite twisted okay improved angle of entry into the slider, also i dont see it but "twisted" might be because of the angle of the slider so that should be fixed too

01:07:809 (5,1) - Same here, this is a bit better though. ^

01:17:204 (1,2,3) - I think spacing here needs to be emphasized. what part? the movement is slow because calm line in a calm section;
in fact i made it so cursor movement is even slower than sv


01:19:842 (1,2,3) - Same ^
thanks for the mod! will mod back tomorrow/soon

edit updated kami below
Kami-senpai

Regraz wrote:

[Kami's Insane]
I think OD8 is a bit overdosed. You might think to lower it by 0.5.

00:12:754 (1) - Strongly suggest to take this apart into 3/4 slider+circle for the downbeat at 00:13:083

00:15:391 (1) - 00:18:028 (1) - same

00:25:281 (3,4) - Visual spacing too close.

00:38:468 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - These tricky stacks are really challenging with AR8.5

00:43:743 (5,6) - Too close. It looks like the gap is as if 1/4.

00:54:622 (1) - I'm afraid this is unsnapped

00:59:567 (3,1) - Why not take a blanket here?
All fixed

update
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