1. Francioszek's Insane (4,64 stars, 214 notes)
2. Hard (3,47 stars, 247 notes)
3. Normal (1,97 stars, 112 notes)
4. nyu's Easy (1,11 stars, 53 notes)

Mapset

Easy by: Nyu -
Normal by: Me
Hard by: Me
Insane by: Francioszek

Hitsounding in progress !

francioszek wrote:

Requested GD for insane!

Francioszek's Insane

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Asherz007 wrote:

Speed mod! PMs are nice, aren't they?

Hitsounds and kiai still to do, right?

Normal

Quick heads up. Offset on the current GD is better than yours. I'd suggest you use it.

I now understand why you said it didn't flow very well. It really doesn't, and I would suggest a remap, unfortunately. Bear in mind at this difficulty you may be better off sticking to a set distance spacing (say 1.0-1.2x). As the crazy jumps and anti-jumps aren't good for this difficulty. Below are a few pointers for what to follow and such.

Also, I would suggest reducing the slider tick rate to 1, rather than 2.
(Please note list does not take into account any offset changed that may have happened while I wasn't looking.

1. 00:21:911 (1,2,3) - This doesn't really follow the vocals, and I reckon they should.
2. 00:24:153 (2) - finish this at 00:24:670 instead to follow the vocals
3. 00:26:911 (2,3,4) - Change setup to slider to 00:27:256, then slider from 00:27:601 have a slider to 00:28:118.
4. 00:38:636 (1,2,3,1) - This isn't following anything, realistically speaking. Change the offset and I'll tell you what could be there (too long to be here...)
5. 00:55:705 (1) - Don't put the spinner here. There's not enough recovery time.
6. 01:08:292 (3) - Move to 01:08:119 (follows vocals)
7. 01:13:464 (2,1) - Switch to circle then slider. The isolated circle might be difficult to hit. (Happens more than once too, but I'll leave you to spot that.)
8. 01:25:534 (1,2) - Use this pattern more often. It's good that it follows the bass line (and it's an easy pattern)
9. 01:26:740 (1,2,3) - You're creating some syncopation on thin air (not really following anything) which would make it very difficult to read.

Man, if I did any more I'd be worried that it wasn't a small mod.

If you want me to do other diffs etc etc etc... find someone for the Easy GD and come back to me in around a month.

1. From 00:22:109 (1) - until 00:42:799 (2) - There many issues with the sliders here (rythm), for example the first one 00:22:109 (1) - finishes on an really weird place and doesn't give enough feedback about what's the rythm you're trying to do. It happens everywhere during the time section I've highlighted. I suggest you make a more simplistic and consistent rythm using the big white ticks for reference of clickable notes ^^ (you can also check the ranked mapset for a bit of advice of rythms on this beginning)
   
2. 01:14:524 (3) - the idea was good but it didn't quite work properly as intended, I suggest you replace this huge slider with a different rythm
   
   the rest of the map is quite simple and consistent, nothing much to talk about..

1. 00:12:454 (1) - following your logic, it should've started here at 00:11:074 -
2. 00:17:971 (1) - same, but starting here at 00:16:592 -
3. The Intro overall: the sliders are too fast and the rythm choice with that inconsistent DS is kinda confusing, making it much more agressive than what the music is like...I highly suggest you remake that intro with a slower SV and with more fitting patterns/intensities
4. 00:46:248 (1,2,3) - the problem with the SV being too high is perfectly explained here, the sliders give a speed of flow incredibly high, but the DS between notes is too small, making it play awkward, you should always make a map consistent, you can have ''inconsistent DS'' and speeds, but you must make a mapping structure that doesn't make it play ''weird'', in this case for example, the high SV would be more fitting if you increase the DS between notes on patterns
5. 00:49:696 (1) - the song still the same, why stop the kiai? and why the massive SV change ? the map is entirely inconsistent, I suggest you make things more padronized and with a mapping structure that doesn't change agressively without warning like that
6. 00:56:248 (4) - another problem with rythm, make that long slider end on a big white tick really makes playing confusing....avoid that always. there are few exceptions where it works, but you must have a good structure that allows it, in this case, it didn't work

benqbenq wrote:

First of all, i want to say that i am not a good mapper or modder, so i just write some of my thoughts about the map.

Easy

SPOILER

00:37:799 (4) - maybe place this a little bit closer to the prev. slider
01:11:766 (1) - the time between the objects allow you to place it a bit farther
01:29:008 - here you can place the spinner to 01:33:835
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Normal

SPOILER

00:35:903 (1) - i think this rhythm is more better(placement is yours) Yes, changed !
00:38:661 (1) - here too Changed also ^-^
00:47:282 (1) - your rhythm is changing every new beat, for example here 00:45:386 (2) note follow right after slider, but here 00:50:041 (1) the other rhythm, just two sliders. so i think you should cnahge 00:47:282 (1) like this Indeed, it's better like that. anyway. there's a problem. hope you get it
01:19:007 (2) - slider starts too fast, place it on 01:19:180 Yes fixed !
01:21:249 (3) - here should be a fast slider on the same soun, like here 01:19:869 (3) Yes, fixed for all
01:24:352 (1,2,3,4) - place it a bit further, so it starts on 01:24:524 (1) This part is already been changed ^^'

01:25:904 (1) - ^place it on 01:26:249 (1) Indeed, fixed !

Hard

SPOILER

00:23:144 (5) - here you dont stop, compare to 00:28:489 (4) I added a few things
at 00:28:489
00:33:144 (1) - slider would be better to start and then note and reverse slider Yes, fixed ! :3
00:34:179 (4) - again, you dont stop before "oh oh" like here 00:28:489 (4) I added a few things, AGAIN x)

00:42:799 (1) - ^ ^
00:44:006 (1) - this better start on 00:44:179 (1) Yes, fixed !
01:06:249 (2,3) - better placce it like this fixed ! so they overlap each other
Also, the note's placement is not so good, so you'd better to remap this diff, or maybe i could try to make a GD I do not think it deserves this, but I will take careful to the placement and others things...

Francioszek's Insane

SPOILER

00:40:730 (2,3,4,5) - square looks weird, maybe try an another pattern?
00:48:662 (2) - there's no need to Inherited Point, player probably won't guess about this fast slider
00:49:524 (4,1) - too big distance for Insane
00:50:213 (2,3) - if you use circular flow, why not to place these 2 sliders on the right
00:51:765 (7,8) - place it in the circular flow, like this
00:58:662 (3) - ctrl+G
00:59:869 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too difficult, make spacing slightly less and with a circular flow
01:04:869 (1,2,3) - after this follow the square pattern, but maybe better to make another triangle, but with higher spacing like this?
01:10:041 (4,5) - too high spacing
01:12:800 (4,5) - CF could be better
01:19:180 (1) - dont afraid of long sliders, you dont need to add IP
01:27:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think you'll get it, too high spacing beetwen the last 2 notes. you can just make a star pattern

Also, HP 8 is not good actually cnahge it on 6-7

OK, i've tried my best, so i hope this will help you. Thanks a lot for your mod !
Btw, can you check my map please? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/593773

-NeBu- wrote:

Hard:

00:24:523 (5,1) - wrong rhythm, one reverse too much (kinda bounces on the rest of map, but its something you can fix) Yep i'll try to fix that
00:27:627 (1,2) - this blanket is to close comparing to the rest of map Fixed
00:29:351 (1,2) - / 00:30:730 (2,3) - / and in some places blankets aren't done well :p (just two so you can check whole map) Okey
00:26:075 (1,2,3,4) - gap between sliders and two circles on the middle is different Fixed
00:30:040 - fil the gap I tried, I hope it's good xd
00:32:627 (5) - make it reverse Yep
00:38:144 (4) - ^ ^
00:43:662 (4) - overlap slider end on 00:43:145 (2) - Okey
01:06:249 (2) - NC should start here since theres slow down Indeed, fixed

but overall it's good, just some blankets I found and upper things, gl! Thanks a lot for the mod !! ^^

1. 00:34:868 (2) - i would place it like this to make it look.. beautiful?
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2. 00:42:799 (2) - u can make it reversed and place it comfortable to play because of next slider
3. 01:20:042 (1,2) - maybe place it a bit more interesting like this?
   
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   and u can also place the spinner at the end of the map as in the other diffs, why not?

• 
  SV is a bit high IMO, so i would make it lower

1. 00:30:730 (2,3) - stack it, and the all the same notes too
2. 00:44:524 (1) - should start here 00:44:179 (1)
3. 00:57:800 (3) - compare to all prev. objects, i can't i understand why this note is placed here, remove it and place 2 notes on 00:59:007 and 00:59:352
4. 01:01:076 (4) - remove this note and place the prev. slider 1 tick(?) later, here 01:00:731
5. 01:03:317 (3) - remove
6. 01:07:628 (1,2) - the rhythm is chainging, idk why. make it as the previous one
   
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7. 01:10:559 (1) - remove
8. 01:14:352 (2,1) - again, change the rhythm to the previous one
9. 01:18:662 (1) - ^, i tired of this mistake, u probably understood what rhythm should be here and the rest of the map
10. 01:26:938 (1) - spinner starts too early, map this part and place spinner here 01:28:318 (1)

• here SV is absolutely too high in the beggining, make it lower
  so, i dont know why do u map every sound, i mean, there s no blank between combos. i find it wrong, or definitely not good, so change the rhythm or place notes on the same distance, not so far from each other

1. 00:38:144 (4) - why is here a blank lol? all the rest map doesn't have a blank on this sound
2. 00:52:283 (1) - it's a single long slider in the map i guess, why did u put it here? idk, if u want to put it, make the same thing in the other parts of the song, on the same sounds (sorry for a tautology )
   in general, there's a lot of stacks with 2 notes, there's no difference between the spacing, because u just dont listen to music and randomly place notes, no matter what it is - slow or intensive part

• SV, again. I can't understand what make u decide to set high SV, especially in some parts of the song. Examples :

1. 00:21:937 (1) - if u want to change SV throughout the song, do it properly and logical, where it fits. This is where the song starts, and it starts slowly, so why don't u just make sliders slow?
2. 00:48:662 (2) - i hear and understand why u cnahged SV here, but it's not good, really. Better just skip it without any SV'changes
3. 01:19:180 (1) - why is it so slow?
4. 01:21:421 (1) - ^why is it fast now? where's the reason?
   
   Other stuff :
5. 00:40:730 (2,3,4,5) - squares? dunno, there's no rule or guideline about them, but i think they don't fit the song, especially if it's(square) so ugly.
6. 00:38:661 (1) - this would be better
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7. 00:51:765 (7) - it would fit better for the circular flow
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8. 00:56:248 (4) - there's no need in this long slider, shorten it
9. 00:58:489 (2,3,4) - flow is ruined
10. 01:00:386 (4,5) - i guess it's a bit big distance for insane, u probably did it for the starrate
    01:03:490 (1) - before this moment, u mapped same sounds of voice with a long sliders [for example 00:57:972 (1) or this 01:00:731 (1)], but here there's no this long slider
11. 01:04:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - think about some different pattern of jumps, this is not so interesting and beatiful
12. 01:10:041 (4,5) - too big distance
13. 01:12:800 (4,5) - flow is ruined
14. 01:13:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ugly pattern, hard to read because it's placed on the previous slider
15. 01:15:042 (2,3,4) - ruined flow
16. 01:23:145 (3) - here u can cnahge direction of the flow like this, this would be better
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17. 01:28:145 (6,7) - overmapping, yeeey
18. 01:28:318 (7) - time for sliderart(it's just an idea, would be cool, instead of pause and spinner with a single note)
    
    In general, u need to change placement of the notes. There are some moments, when u need to place the note farther from the previous one, because of the rhythmical difference(u can use a "distance snap" option to check it). Make the slilders more organazied, rotate them always at the same angle, put them beatifully and logically, not like a just bunch of sounds. Also, dont forget about the flow.
    Also, dont be afraid of low starrate, dont do overmapping, it's an Insane diff. Instead of this, cnahge the jump patterns, flow of other sliders and notes. Actually, if new combo starts, u can place first object of this combo a bit farther from the previous object, this way u ll raise the starrate if it's too low.

benqbenq wrote:

nyu's Easy

1. 00:34:868 (2) - i would place it like this to make it look.. beautiful?
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2. 00:42:799 (2) - u can make it reversed and place it comfortable to play because of next slider
3. 01:20:042 (1,2) - maybe place it a bit more interesting like this?
   
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   and u can also place the spinner at the end of the map as in the other diffs, why not?

Normal

• 
  SV is a bit high IMO, so i would make it lower

1. 00:30:730 (2,3) - stack it, and the all the same notes too
2. 00:44:524 (1) - should start here 00:44:179 (1)
3. 00:57:800 (3) - compare to all prev. objects, i can't i understand why this note is placed here, remove it and place 2 notes on 00:59:007 and 00:59:352
4. 01:01:076 (4) - remove this note and place the prev. slider 1 tick(?) later, here 01:00:731
5. 01:03:317 (3) - remove
6. 01:07:628 (1,2) - the rhythm is chainging, idk why. make it as the previous one
   
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7. 01:10:559 (1) - remove
8. 01:14:352 (2,1) - again, change the rhythm to the previous one
9. 01:18:662 (1) - ^, i tired of this mistake, u probably understood what rhythm should be here and the rest of the map
10. 01:26:938 (1) - spinner starts too early, map this part and place spinner here 01:28:318 (1)

Hard

• here SV is absolutely too high in the beggining, make it lower I have slightly decreased it
  so, i dont know why do u map every sound, i mean, there s no blank between combos. i find it wrong, or definitely not good, so change the rhythm or place notes on the same distance, not so far from each other

1. 00:38:144 (4) - why is here a blank lol? all the rest map doesn't have a blank on this sound Yep, fixed
2. 00:52:283 (1) - it's a single long slider in the map i guess, why did u put it here? idk, if u want to put it, make the same thing in the other parts of the song, on the same sounds (sorry for a tautology ) I changed this slider
   in general, there's a lot of stacks with 2 notes, there's no difference between the spacing, because u just dont listen to music and randomly place notes, no matter what it is - slow or intensive part I listened to the music, but as you probably know, I really struggle with the placements of the notes. ^^'
   

Insane

• SV, again. I can't understand what make u decide to set high SV, especially in some parts of the song. Examples :

1. 00:21:937 (1) - if u want to change SV throughout the song, do it properly and logical, where it fits. This is where the song starts, and it starts slowly, so why don't u just make sliders slow?
2. 00:48:662 (2) - i hear and understand why u cnahged SV here, but it's not good, really. Better just skip it without any SV'changes
3. 01:19:180 (1) - why is it so slow?
4. 01:21:421 (1) - ^why is it fast now? where's the reason?
   
   Other stuff :
5. 00:40:730 (2,3,4,5) - squares? dunno, there's no rule or guideline about them, but i think they don't fit the song, especially if it's(square) so ugly.
6. 00:38:661 (1) - this would be better
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7. 00:51:765 (7) - it would fit better for the circular flow
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:56:248 (4) - there's no need in this long slider, shorten it
9. 00:58:489 (2,3,4) - flow is ruined
10. 01:00:386 (4,5) - i guess it's a bit big distance for insane, u probably did it for the starrate
    01:03:490 (1) - before this moment, u mapped same sounds of voice with a long sliders [for example 00:57:972 (1) or this 01:00:731 (1)], but here there's no this long slider
11. 01:04:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - think about some different pattern of jumps, this is not so interesting and beatiful
12. 01:10:041 (4,5) - too big distance
13. 01:12:800 (4,5) - flow is ruined
14. 01:13:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ugly pattern, hard to read because it's placed on the previous slider
15. 01:15:042 (2,3,4) - ruined flow
16. 01:23:145 (3) - here u can cnahge direction of the flow like this, this would be better
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17. 01:28:145 (6,7) - overmapping, yeeey
18. 01:28:318 (7) - time for sliderart(it's just an idea, would be cool, instead of pause and spinner with a single note)
    
    In general, u need to change placement of the notes. There are some moments, when u need to place the note farther from the previous one, because of the rhythmical difference(u can use a "distance snap" option to check it). Make the slilders more organazied, rotate them always at the same angle, put them beatifully and logically, not like a just bunch of sounds. Also, dont forget about the flow.
    Also, dont be afraid of low starrate, dont do overmapping, it's an Insane diff. Instead of this, cnahge the jump patterns, flow of other sliders and notes. Actually, if new combo starts, u can place first object of this combo a bit farther from the previous object, this way u ll raise the starrate if it's too low.

If u probably cant understand something i wrote (u know my english skills is not so good as it could be), write me in-game Thanks a lot for the mod, I applyed it to the hard, I'll apply it to the Normal tomorrow, I will modifie the post when it's done.