1. Flute (5,77 stars, 1361 notes)

JapanYoshiTheGamer wrote:

I can't play beatmaps this hard, but I can still pitch in.

What really caught me as bad was the overuse of Finish. They are NOT beats that should be accented.

Actual Mod

Throughout - 65% hit sample volume is DEFINITELY not enough for a Big Room House song such as this. Raise it to 80%, possibly lower it to 65% again at quieter parts, and at the drop, bring it up to 100%. ok
00:00:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - Remove this entire section. This is the part that is supposed to be used by DJs for smooth transition from one song to another, and is not for playing on a rhythm game. Controversially
00:34:643 (1) - This spinner is either 4 beats early or 12 beats early. Controversially + i put spiner star where bg "uuuu" is louder
01:19:981 (1,1,2,3,4) - I'd extend the spinner to the start of the silent part, in order to accentuate the characteristic pre-drop of Big Room House. I'd also remove everything here 01:25:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6) to put a break time. 50/50 but i think i change it, mb map, mb add break times
01:40:388 (1,1) - Double spinners should probably be avoided here. My advice would be to extend the first spinner to the start of the second spinner, and replace the second spinner with a break time.Yes
02:34:536 - Replace this spinner with a break time.Yes
04:34:810 (4) - Wrong time to use a break time. Replace 04:33:450 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - onward with a spinner that ends on 04:39:344, and restart at 04:41:132 (1). replace with a spiner , but no break times , same as not spiner end on your time, cause its totaly weired
05:38:710 (1) - Replace this spinner with a hit circle. NO, its not a problem long spiner at the end
Kiai Time is used in all the wrong spots. You put the Kiai Time in the “verse” of the song, where they should be in the drops, i.e. from 01:27:235 to 01:42:267, 03:27:581 to 03:57:634, and 04:41:132 to 05:09:694. Totaly dont get it. they are not louder, they are more like a "verse"

Bewww wrote:

Actual Mod

00:00:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - Remove this entire section. This is the part that is supposed to be used by DJs for smooth transition from one song to another, and is not for playing on a rhythm game. Controversially What's so "controversially" about not mapping this part of the song? Besides, not mapping this part will let the player ease into the song.
00:34:643 (1) - This spinner is either 4 beats early or 12 beats early. Controversially + i put spiner star where bg "uuuu" is louder You put it in the middle of a 2-measure group. This song has 2-measure groups making up 4-measure phrases and 8-measure parts. The spinner should start on the start of every 2 or 4 measures, not somewhere awkward in the middle.
04:34:810 (4) - Wrong time to use a break time. Replace 04:33:450 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - onward with a spinner that ends on 04:39:344, and restart at 04:41:132 (1). replace with a spiner , but no break times , same as not spiner end on your time, cause its totaly weired The spinner should start at 04:33:904, not 04:33:450. The 4-measure phrase starts at 04:33:904; you started the spinner 2 beats too early. You can also afford to put the spinner end 1 beat later.
05:38:710 (1) - Replace this spinner with a hit circle. NO, its not a problem long spiner at the end The song is already pretty much over at 05:09:694 (9).
There is no reason for you to put a spinner here, especially one that's overly long like that.
Spinners are perfect for builds, but there is no build here.
Kiai Time is used in all the wrong spots. You put the Kiai Time in the “verse” of the song, where they should be in the drops, i.e. from 01:27:235 to 01:42:267, 03:27:581 to 03:57:634, and 04:41:132 to 05:09:694. Totaly dont get it. they are not louder, they are more like a "verse" You don't seem to understand the structure of Big Room House. The drop is where the people in the club start dancing, not the verse that you think is "louder" than the drop.
Watch this video for the analysis of this song.

JapanYoshiTheGamer wrote:

URGENT: This audio is not of the correct song! This is what the real "Flute" by New World Sound & Thomas Newson sounds like. As you can hear, the drop in this map sounds completely different from the drop in the real song. You should replace the audio ASAP.
it's a Dj Key FULL mash up, so i dont see a reason to change the audio, but mb i shold change a title and or add it in tags?

Bewww wrote:

Actual Mod

00:00:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - Remove this entire section. This is the part that is supposed to be used by DJs for smooth transition from one song to another, and is not for playing on a rhythm game. Controversially What's so "controversially" about not mapping this part of the song? Besides, not mapping this part will let the player ease into the song. after all i delet this part
00:34:643 (1) - This spinner is either 4 beats early or 12 beats early. Controversially + i put spiner star where bg "uuuu" is louder You put it in the middle of a 2-measure group. This song has 2-measure groups making up 4-measure phrases and 8-measure parts. The spinner should start on the start of every 2 or 4 measures, not somewhere awkward in the middle. ok ok. i listen it alot, so i prefer delet the spined and just map this part till spiner end and enter a break time.
04:34:810 (4) - Wrong time to use a break time. Replace 04:33:450 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - onward with a spinner that ends on 04:39:344, and restart at 04:41:132 (1). replace with a spiner , but no break times , same as not spiner end on your time, cause its totaly weired The spinner should start at 04:33:904, not 04:33:450. The 4-measure phrase starts at 04:33:904; you started the spinner 2 beats too early. You can also afford to put the spinner end 1 beat later. still dont get it
05:38:710 (1) - Replace this spinner with a hit circle. NO, its not a problem long spiner at the end The song is already pretty much over at 05:09:694 (9).
There is no reason for you to put a spinner here, especially one that's overly long like that.
Spinners are perfect for builds, but there is no build here. still thinking
Kiai Time is used in all the wrong spots. You put the Kiai Time in the “verse” of the song, where they should be in the drops, i.e. from 01:27:235 to 01:42:267, 03:27:581 to 03:57:634, and 04:41:132 to 05:09:694. Totaly dont get it. they are not louder, they are more like a "verse" You don't seem to understand the structure of Big Room House. The drop is where the people in the club start dancing, not the verse that you think is "louder" than the drop.
Watch this video for the analysis of this song.

i try place where u said, but it seems weired, since we are not in club, and we are not dancing, i prefer dont change it now, kiai time mostly placed on intense moments, and i dont feel your timings is intense.
Also, add "big room house" and "edm" to the list of tags.already did

Ambrew wrote:

Hello!
[Flute]

Overall: really good job for mapping 5 mins. just looking at the map, I can tell you are pretty experienced. Spacing overall is good. Very polished patterns, consistent throughout. the hitsounding is good, but because it's used almost entirely throughout the map consistency lacked just a little bit in that area. Also worthy of noting is your complex NC usage. Some of them start on red ticks, others on white ticks.
Mod:
00:43:711 (4) - blanket looks a little off, make sure to double check this change curve a bit, now seems much blanket
00:55:045 (1,2,3) - I think the spacing here could be reduced a little i think about this, but not change right now.
01:01:846 (4) - this sliderend could be muted mb change
01:27:235 (7) - you could try shaping this slider to give it more emphasis It's a part of symetrical structure
02:07:635 (1,2) - NC off 1 and on 2 YES
02:11:262 (1,2) - same YES
02:25:922 (2) - why the finish on the sliderend here fixed
02:28:189 (3) - structurally this looks right, but I don't think it follows the music well enough fix a notes after slider, but still dotn see a problem with slider
02:36:803 - quieter volume fixed
03:10:202 (7) - think you misplaced a hitsound on this Yep
04:10:328 (8) - cool Thanks
04:14:862 (10) - check this sliderend hitsoundfixed
04:27:556 (5) - blanket could be improved a bitfixed
04:33:450 (1) - this spinner starts and ends too early, too big gap between this and the next note fixed
04:37:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - didn't get a chance to try this, but the shape looks good Thanks
04:39:344 (7) - NC Ok
05:01:533 (5,6,7) - again, didn't get to play, but not sure this flows well it seems and playes pretty well, dont change right now.
05:02:893 (11) - shouldn't NC start here but i didnt start NC here O_o
05:09:694 (9) - NC fixed
05:13:321 (6) - NC fixed
05:16:041 (5) - could improve blanket fixed

Closing words: great map, very fun to play. Just needs some minor edits! best of luck to you
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CookieBite wrote:

hello there, from my queue.

[Flute]

1. 00:14:543 (1) - remove this note as there is no sound coming up from the music Fixed
2. 00:26:331 (3) - line up with 00:26:029 (2,4) - so it makes the visual better Fixed
3. 00:32:830 (1) - this spinner is such a waste to this part of the song. This part here I'm sure that you can map it by using circles and sliders as this part is similar to the previous parts. Still think about, but spiner + breaktime seems much easery, anyway mb i map this part
4. 00:47:036 (2,4) - improve blanket Fixed
5. 00:48:698 (5) - NC as previously (00:45:071 (1) - ) it nced Fixed
6. 00:49:756 (2) - I would move this upward so it linear flow better its seems and played weird for me
7. 00:56:405 (8) - NC? will think
8. 01:04:264 (6,7,8) - not sure is this off-screened but recommend to move this a little upward to avoid the problem Fixed
9. 01:11:518 (6,7,8) - same thing as ^ but move it a bit downward Fixed
10. 01:13:105 - missing note? Nothing missed
11. 01:19:981 (4) - you skipped a sound, just use a reverse arrow at the middle of the slider Fixed
12. 01:23:608 (1) - I would move this spinner to 01:23:230 - and extend this to 01:25:195 - so it mapped the whole build up Fixed
13. 01:27:235 (7) - NC? it part of pattrne
14. 01:33:342 (1,2,3) - it doesn't make sense that previously you did all the triangle thing and now you make this become 3 circle line up straightly thing. I highly recommend to make them join in the triangle party (just make them to be a part of that triangle spiny thing) Fixed
15. From 01:35:221 (1) - to 01:39:918 (7) - , the ds sudden increase a lot compare to the previous parts. However, it sounds the same thing to the previous ones. Lower the distance between the objects so that it can build up to the kiai part. Fixed
16. 02:11:262 (9) - this really looks off-screen lol, consider move this upward a bit Fixed
17. 02:16:703 (1) - remove NC, and NC on next object, as the stronger sound is on the white tick
    (same with 02:18:517 (1) - , 02:20:330 (1) - , 02:23:957 (1) - , 02:25:771 (1) - , 02:27:584 (1) - ) Fixed
18. 02:19:574 (6) - NC Fixed
    (same with 02:21:388 (6) - , 02:26:828 (6) - , 02:25:015 (6) - ) Fixed
19. 02:21:388 (6,7,8,9) - lower the distance as previously it doesn't have that large ds make it a bit lower
20. 02:23:201 (4) - true off-screen lol Fixed
21. 02:29:095 (4) - NC? Fixed
22. 02:40:430 (1,2) - does it on purpose to not stack? you could stack those if you want to Fixed
23. 02:56:751 (8) - NC? will think
24. 03:09:446 (4) - another off-screen Fixed
25. 03:27:581 (7) - NC? Fixed
26. 03:33:688 (1,2,3) - same thing before: doesn't make sense that previously you did all the triangle thing and it line up together. Recommend to make them to be a part of that triangle spiny thing Fixed
27. From 03:35:567 (1) - to 03:40:264 (7) - , same thing as I mentioned before: the ds sudden increase a lot compare to the previous parts, consider reduce the ds. this part have the same DS( i mean stars patterns) +- 0.01 - 0.02, it will my opinion to make map harder a bit in every part,
28. 03:41:674 (1,2) - missed sound, consider using a 2/6 slider with reverse arrow to represent the sound
29. From 03:43:083 (1) - to 03:55:297 (7) - , again. Lower the ds, reasons are mentioned before. same as prev.
30. 04:01:261 (4,2) - try to blanket? Fixed
31. 04:03:679 (2) - move this upward so that it linear flow better will think
32. 04:10:328 (8) - NC? will think
33. 04:33:450 (4) - again, missing sound. Consider adding a 2/6 slider with reverse arrow Fixed
34. 04:39:344 (7) - NC as you did NC at 04:39:798 (1) - Fixed
35. 04:41:132 - putting a kiai time here? Since this part sounds like the kiai afterward Fixed
36. 05:07:124 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - wow thats sudden, the ds here increase a lot than the previous ones. Consider at least lower the distance It like a final stage, but i will think about lower the DS
37. 05:09:694 - remove this kiai time as it sounds kinda calm compare to the previous one Fixed
38. 05:38:710 (1) - this spinner part here is seriously undermapped, mapping with sliders and circle is absolute possible here dont see any problem with spiner like a end element for finish the map.

that's it! gl with your map
overall this actually looks soild enough =)
also mod my map back pls as m4m

1. Странное название сложности. Можно было бы что-нибудь покруче придумать
2. OD бы повыше
3. 00:32:830 (1) - вместо спинера и брейка лучше бы еще сосисок с кругами потыкать, не очень он сюда заходит (да и вообще, на протяжении всей карты слишком много вращательного экшена вместо которого следовало бы поместить объекты)
4. 00:59:126 (6) - такую значительную смену sv следует nc отметить (к последующим подобным моментам тоже относится, большая смена sv всегда должна сопровождаться nc)
5. 01:12:727 - в секции с началом в этой точке есть ноты с призвуками которые было бы неплохо как-нибудь показать (01:13:180 (2) - 01:14:994 (3) - и т.д.)
6. 01:23:230 (1) - ну реально, замапай
7. 01:27:235 (7) - nc 100%
8. 01:30:367 (6) - я бы такую смену тона как-нибудь выделил
9. 01:33:968 - сильный звук, хочется чтобы был кликабельным
10. 01:35:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - этот патерн какой-то дисбалансный, звуки одинаковые, а на 01:35:847 (5,6) - спейс другой. Нелогично же
11. 01:36:630 (8) - nc (начало нового такта, к последующим подобным моментом тоже относится)
12. 01:47:385 (5) - 01:49:198 (5) - не слышу здесь звуков (01:50:861 (4,5,6) - а вот тут уже правильно) (не буду дальше подобное указывать, суть просто в том, что почему-то там где нет звуков есть клики, а порой наоборот)
13. 01:59:626 (7) - nc
14. 02:10:960 - закончи слайдер тута и дальше там что-нибудь поставь
15. 02:14:134 (5) - nc
16. 02:28:189 (2) - почему (ну и еще его как минимум подкорректировать надо, чтобы был как 02:56:751 (8) - )
17. 03:32:905 (2,3) - чё
18. 03:39:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - а еще когда один и тот же патерн используется ну очень много раз - это не очень-то интересно
19. 04:19:698 (5,6) - трипла же
20. 04:37:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - этот стрим ну ваще не слышно (я имею в виду громкость хитсаундов)
21. 05:06:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - чё
22. 05:09:240 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
23. 05:12:641 (1,2,3,4,5) - вот эти моменты как-то неправильно замапаны

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

hi im modder c:

[Flute]

1. 00:36:457 - shouldn't the spinner start here? :thinking: no
2. 00:47:338 (4) - blanket mod, ok blanket mod is over now just check the rest of them yourself x d ok
3. 01:09:478 (5,6) - i'd really recommend you put these closer to 01:09:100 (4) - and leave this level of difficulty for the kiai, this felt too intense for a build up section ok
4. 01:14:918 - you probably had a reason to drop the synth note here? if you just happened to miss it, know that there is a triple here that you could map if you wanted i know, but i cant
5. 01:26:328 - https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1103732 lmfao first thing i thought of hahaha, sorry i got sidetracked by the sample lol
6. 01:26:328 (5) - ok on a serious note though, consider NC these? they are very audibly their own element and could be grouped separately if you wanted to. 01:26:328 (5,6) - could both be NCs NC 1 time
7. 01:33:029 (2,2) - fix stack
8. 01:58:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I think if you had these notes oriented so that their distance in between each other progressively got smaller, it would represent the music in a really cool way, this wouldn't affect your current structuring of other patterns either. something like this: from the viewpoint of 01:58:719 - oh god thx!
9. 02:36:803 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i like how these aligned, it was like the map was coming back into focus, it was cool gj
10. 03:02:570 - same as i said here 01:14:918 -
11. 03:26:674 (5,6) - same as i said here 01:26:328 (5) -
12. 04:19:773 - very audible triple right here, im sure you've listed your reasons elsewhere and i just haven't looked lol
13. 04:37:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ok i actually have a problem with this speaking as a person who can land it with no troubles, expecting the player to completely switch skillsets 3/4 the way through the map for just under 2 seconds of high bpm streaming is a little unfair. you could lower the density of this and achieve the same purpose. in fact, i think if you made 04:37:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - repeat sliders, it would emphasize the buildup even better. as you have it right now, 04:37:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - is all played at the same spacing interval. there is nothing about this stream that is building up towards anything. it is representing intensity, but it is not representing gradual intensity. would thinking
14. 04:53:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as i said here 01:58:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - , again, applying this would not have to affect the structure of combos around it at all, i implore you to consider it c: yep thx again
15. 05:16:041 (5,1) - this is actually an enormous jump in a pretty tame section in comparison to kiai. actually, you dont even use this spacing intensity in any kiai fixed
16. 05:19:668 (4,1) - this is more realisic
17. 05:23:295 (5,6) - the NC thing again c: yep

I thought this was cool as hell tbh, GL I really enjoyed playing it multiple times hahaha

EDIT: shit i forgot you wanted me to post after you, whatever lol fuck it have a mod

Rotmas wrote:

00:12:881 (1) - Спинер заканчивается не на бите какт, тем более там до конца всего 3 бита осталось, думаю стоило бы их так же нотами и забить.забить нотмаи мб, но он заканчивается на довольно громкой ноте и заканчивать его где то еще не вижу смысла
00:35:550 - я бы от сюда начал спинер И опять же заканчивается непойми где, яб тут закруглил его 00:42:804 - Закончить да,
начать нет. это гудения начинаетс именно от туда
01:13:180 (2,3,4) - странный спейсинг Может быть
01:20:434 (1,2,3) - почему раз уж ты выбрал такой спесинг вот тут он нормальный? fixed
01:20:737 (3,4) - А тут нет ?
01:22:248 (3,4,5,6) - А тут опять норм, как то странно оно идёт. то так то эдак... fixed
01:23:230 (1) - И опять непонятный для меня спинер, а ведь такой крутой стрим слышно, да и нейпоми где стартует и непойми где заканчивается.
01:33:968 (2,3) - Вот так на мой взгляд оч прикольно - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7949365 и спесинг не меняется. Подумаю, но наврятли(что за закисленность на спейсинге?
01:40:388 (1) - яб замапал этот момент, а вот дальше
Начиная от сюда 01:42:267 - и до сюда 01:45:321 - пустил спинер, и потом ещё мапнул пару нот. пару ноту там ни к чему, а в остальном все сделал
02:05:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - чот затянул комбу, тут 02:06:880 (5) - NC наверн стоило бы Да
02:09:600 (1) - раньше ты на таком же моменте слайдер ставил Почему тут нота? или почему тогда 01:54:790 (7) - слайдер?
Из-за бекграунд звука? хз крч, перестаешь пыдыгрывать одним звукам и начинаешь другим. Думаю слайдер как и раньше нормально зашел бы всеж 02:09:751 (2) - не сильный бит, на нем можно завершить слайдер. Подумаю.
02:15:796 (4,8) - ой чота овермап какойт ой нет
Ну и 02:15:796 (4,5) - тут 2 ноты 02:16:552 (7,8,1) - тут уже стак из 3-х нот, а музыка все та же, мне кажется ты чот запутался мальца...
02:17:610 (4,8) - это все очень глухие ноты на них надо слайдеры заканчивать, сделай предыдуще слайдерами и заверши их на этих тиках, их почти не слышно, сюда не ну никак неподходят наты. стак пофикшен, остальное в рассмотрении
02:47:382 (2,4) - чот мальца блакнет и подровняй и чтоб конец на тройку смотрел. микроскоп нужен
02:46:777 (4,1) - тут тоже еденицу чуть ниже чтоб слайдер смотрел на неё. нет
02:54:636 (2,4) - бланкет, совсем чуть чуть но всеж, подровняй. да
03:06:726 (9,2) - бланкет нет
03:20:327 (1) - Ну почему на самый крутых местах вместо стримов ебучие крутилки? Потому что. И выражайся нормально в тредах
Кому ваще нравятся эти спинеры? Они только чтоб пустоту забить нужны или в крайне ситуативных случаях, но не закрывать же ими стримы...В своей карте можешь хоть все из стримов делать
03:55:767 (1) - вот тут базару нет подходит, на закончил бы я его не на пустом месте, а на этом вот бите вместо слайдера 03:57:634 - Закончить спинер на сильном бите и заигнорить сильный звук? каееф
04:10:328 (8) - у этого слайдера явно тут вот 04:10:555 - угла нехватает. Там сильный бит вроде бы. А вообще нафиг он тут нужен?
Если уж очень хочется то стоило бы его начать от сюдя 04:11:235 - и на полтора таката чонить кривое накалякать но без острых углов. звук начинается от туда, в том месте и так зоворот идет.
04:32:392 (6,1) - стакнуть бы их и между ноту воткнуть, я слышу там трипл.Подумаю
04:33:904 (1) - боже избавься от них бога ради, хоть дальше стрим, а не спинер, ото ты чот помешан на спинерах я гляжу... Помешан на овермаппинге и стримах?
04:54:279 (1) - может стоило бы дальше на понижение идти а не ровнять с 6 нотой? 01:59:475 (6,1) - вот тут же ты не поровнял с ней, и выглядит норм, почему там поровнял тогда? Да
04:54:279 (1,2) - обычно на эти звуки не такие длинные слайдеры, может стоило бы их сделать как и всегда? Да
05:09:618 (8,1) - мне кажется или тут спейс какойт новый появился? Да и ваще подровняй этот стрим, он какой кривой, толи с этой нотой чот не так 05:09:542 (7) - толи эт из-за слайдера так кажется... из за слайдера мб, там все ровно
И кстати вот о чем я и говорил в начале 05:09:694 (1) - почему ты тут ставишь слайдер, а тут 02:09:600 (1) - нота?
05:13:547 - тут ты чот пропустил, закончи тут слайдер и под него ноту. сделал реверс
05:20:575 (6) - ^ ^
05:27:829 (1,3) - подровняй Да

Уххх ещё и в конце спинер, 8 спинеров, да ты маньячина какой то... Яб все убрал, эти крутилки никто не любит...
Вот по серьёзке они сделаны чтоб в сложностях изи и нормал забить чем то такие вот места, но бога ради в 5.66* карте так делать не стоит.