1. Advanced (2,29 stars, 173 notes)
2. Drives You Insane (4,26 stars, 297 notes)
3. Hard (3,77 stars, 260 notes)
4. Normal (1,88 stars, 126 notes)

LiousPL wrote:

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  General
  
  

1. Hard, is a Insane diff, becouse have more than 3,75* and have patterns more like Insane... Ok, i understand u)
2. Add some tags, like - Electronic, Remix etc. I corrected it
3. Don't use Enable countdown and widescreen options when you don't have a storyboard on map! Corrected)))
4. Normal and Medium, hmmm, is not that the same? Why not? I think more normal difficulties are good. And I did both diffs From scratch!)))
   
   All diffs
   
   
5. You place objects randomly and not fit to rhythm, you must to work with your mapping style,patterns,flow and some more skills, I think you must to watch a pishifat videos, and talk with mappers about this. Other mappers give you advance, already if you learn about mapping some more you can fight for rank ^^ Thank u too much! I have never watched these videos. I will necessarily watch it) And I learnt to create mapps by myself, so I don't know how to do some things.
   - Talk with me (for example) if you wanna have some tips (I don't tell you everything about std, but I can talk with other mappers who can help you), thats all, Im wait for time when you are gonna be better in mapping than me ^^. Don't give up and still work!

CucumberCuc wrote:

Привет

[Easy]
проверь свой Distance Snap(находиться в AiMod) + проверяй на новых кружках (я имею в виду отключая New Combo у каждого нового кружка/слайдера и нажимай "Refresh" как сделаешь это, вдруг там будут ещё ошибки)
но скажу про другое:
Например 00:08:878 (3,4,5) не делай много почти таких-же путей в 3 круга, т.к. новичкам будет сложно часто нажимать(2 ещё можно,но 1 самое лучшее решение), так что замени 2 круга на слайдер и 1 круг оставь на месте
00:22:654 (5,6,7) на сложности Easy вообще НЕ РЕКОМЕНДУЕТСЯ делать таким образом, чтоб ты закрывала кругами слайдер и наоборот, т.к. новички не успеют понять что там ещё что-то было
И ещё, используй только красные и белые тики(они сверху,где твои круги и слайдеры едут влево) на Easy сложности 1/4 уже для более сложных сложностей
ну а сейчас моддинг некоторых моментов:
убери некоторое количество слайдеров/кругов, чтоб у тебя точно было Easy
00:18:062 новое комбо
00:22:041 ^
00:29:082 (5,6,7) как я уже говорил, это очень сложно будет для новичков знать, что там есть ещё что-то
00:36:123 (4,5,6) ^
00:38:266 (2,3,4) ^
02:19:592 до 02:41:633 это плохая идея копировать прошлые объекты в 01:01:225 до 01:23:266, так что лучше всего прояви фантазию и меняй так, чтоб не было хоть большую часть понятно, что ты скопировала, тоже самое относиться и к 03:01:225 до 03:39:796
03:01:225 до 03:20:740 ^
02:58:776 на сложности Easy, если ты ставишь спиннер, то нельзя как минимум 3 тика что либо ставить, т.к. новичку надо дать немного времени
и кстати, НЕ ДЕЛАЙ СЛИШКОМ СТРАННЫЕ СЛАЙДЕРЫ НА ЭТОЙ СЛОЖНОСТИ, новичкам из-за таких твоих узоров сложно будет играться

[Normal]
проверь свой Distance Snap(находиться в AiMod) + проверяй на новых кружках (хотя на этой сложности не обязательно такое делать)
добавь немного кругов/слайдеров на некоторые моменты на ГРОМКИЕ ЗВУКИ В ПЕСНЕ
кстати, на такой сложности спиннер можно закончить если у тебя останется только 2 белых тика до след. кружка/слайдера
ещё ты можешь сейчас использовать 1/4, но лучше это делать, начиная от 3*
и кстати, тут ты уже можешь начинать ложить круги друг на друга (круг на слайдер тоже), но чтоб их не было больше 2
а сейчас обычный мод:
00:07:960 новое комбо
00:09:490 (10) укороти слайдер до предыдущей белой палки
00:13:470 если ты сделаешь то, что я написал на 1 строку ниже, то тут конечно можно сделать 4 круга, но лучше всего оставить 2 круга и поставить слайдер, заместо ещё двух рядом кругов
00:14:388 поставь круг
00:42:858 новое комбо
01:35:511 убери новое комбо и поставь его на 01:36:735
01:37:960 ^ на 01:39:184 (01:40:409 тоже убери и поставь перерыв)
02:19:592 до 02:41:633 это плохая идея копировать прошлые объекты в 01:01:225 до 01:23:266, так что лучше всего прояви фантазию и меняй так, чтоб не было хоть большую часть понятно, что ты скопировала, тоже самое относиться и к 03:01:225 до 03:39:796
как и для Easy: НЕ ДЕЛАЙ СЛИШКОМ СТРАННЫЕ СЛАЙДЕРЫ НА ЭТОЙ СЛОЖНОСТИ

[Medium]
Практически тоже самое,что сделать и для Normal(имеется в виду DS и добавление кругов/слайдеров)
обычный мод:
00:18:062 новое комбо
00:19:592 убери новое комбо и поставь его на 00:20:511
00:42:552 новое комбо
немного усложни свою сложность, добавив парочку джампов (если не знаешь что это за слово, то иди на вики по осу)
02:19:592 до 02:41:633 это плохая идея копировать прошлые объекты в 01:01:225 до 01:23:266, так что лучше всего прояви фантазию и меняй так, чтоб не было хоть большую часть понятно, что ты скопировала, тоже самое относиться и к 03:01:225 до 03:39:796

[Insane]
здесь я коротко напишу что тебе надо исправить, но проверь пожалуйста это по всей сложности
00:06:123 (4) это конечно хорошо для такой сложности, но лучше сделай самый нормальный слайдер (у тебя это замечание будет по всей карте)
00:07:347 (1) лучше круги отдалять от слайдеров как это ты сделала немного позже с 2 и 3 (как и в скобках выше)
и ещё, у тебя немного странное расположение некоторых объектов, надеюсь ты это тоже исправишь
02:19:592 до 02:41:633 это плохая идея копировать прошлые объекты в 01:01:225 до 01:23:266, так что лучше всего прояви фантазию и меняй так, чтоб не было хоть большую часть понятно, что ты скопировала, тоже самое относиться и к 03:01:225 до 03:39:796

надеюсь ты это всё прочитаешь и исправишь большинство проблем на карте
и кстати, если найдёшь людей с GD, то можешь попросить их сделать тебе Extra сложность, т.к. песня позволяет сделать сложнее


Спасибо большое за мод!

Как же удобно, когда на русском

Я исправила insane полностью и постаралась изменить скопированное.

Medium тоже самое, я всё исправила и скопированное тоже^^

В normal я добавила выделяющиеся звуки, и у меня там всего один спиннер и то в конце, но все равно спасибо за инфу, я не знала про слайдеры в легкой сложности. Также я все исправила, но с фантазией в легком уровне не очень...но по сути слегка изменила скопированное. Странные слайдеры убрала

С уровнем easy все сложнее, потому что я его немного не доделала, наверное заметно, что со звуками пока не очень... И вот мне реально сложно сделать легкий уровень, просто песня такая, требует многого. Но я в дальнейшем постараюсь этот уровень сделать меньше 2*

DS во легких уровнях проверю (если честно, я не знала, что такое есть...)

Не уверенна насчет extra, можно конечно попросить (просто я не того уровня, чтобы такие сложности делать), но это не точно

LeQuack wrote:

M4M from Queue

General

1. I think offset should be 4929 Fixed
2. BPM should be 98 (Just change SV in each difficulty to double what it is now in the timing menu and all slider lengths will remain the same) I don't change BPM, for this song 98 is a little too slow...This is pretty fast song

Easy

1. Difficulty setting should be changed to somewhere around AR=3, OD=2, HP=2 Fixed
2. Generally i feel the SV is too high for an easy diff (Maybe reduce to .8 or.9) No, in osu wiki is written that for easy diff SV 1.0 and lower, and big circle size compensates this
3. SV changes are also discouraged in Easy diffs as they mess with distances between notes and can be unexpected for newer players Fixed
4. Stacks shouldn't be used for Easy diffs as beginner players associate distance with timing of the notes, low AR also makes the stacks hard to read Fixed
5. 00:07:960 (1,2,3,4) - A bit too complex for easy plus the (3) doesn't really fall on anything important try this instead:
   
   I can't understand why it's complicated, but ok, i fixed it
6. 01:08:602 (8) - This should be NC instead of the next note Fixed
   
   This diff will need to be re-mapped to remove stacks and SV changes, can't give much more advice until that is fixed
   This diff is 1.6*, my SV for easy is acceptable
   

Normal

1. Difficulty settings should be around Ar=5, OD=4, HP=3 Fixed
2. Changes in DS are discouraged unless there is a clear indication in the music for it (eg. 00:15:001 (2,3,4,5) - Should all have same spacing) Fixed
3. 00:19:592 (4,5,6) - Blanket could be improved Fixed
4. 00:20:817 (6) - NC should be here and not at 00:22:041 (1) - Fixed
5. 00:23:878 (4) - NC here I don't want to highlight this in one combo. In all song i don't highlight this places in song
6. 00:42:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern's a bit too hard for a normal try a repeat slider instead of 00:43:470 (3,4,5) - Fixed
7. 01:01:531 (2,2) - Overlap is ugly plus Distances are inconsistent, i would re-do the pattern so Distances are the same and there are no overlaps Fixed
8. 01:05:205 (5) - Manipulation of SV using slider points is discouraged especially in Normal diffs, change the shape of the slider so the pah and speed is more clear to the player I do this slider specially for this plase in the song. In other diffs i use repeat slider or strims, but for this diff it's too complicated, so i use this slider, and i will not change it
9. 01:10:103 (3) - ^
10. 01:15:001 (4) - ^
11. 01:15:613 (5,6,7) - Don't really hear anytiong in the music that would justify this at such a low difficulty, remove the (6) No, here sound of bass drum...
12. 01:18:368 (5) - NC here instead of the next note Maybe you don't notice, but i use big yellow stick as the end of combo
13. 01:19:899 (4) - Slider manipulation i mentioned above
14. 01:20:511 (5,6,7) - Remove 6 also Also bass drum
15. 01:23:878 (1,2) - Shouldn't stack as previous stack have had different gaps (1/1 or 1/2 beats) so players will be confused and may hit the slider at the wrong time Ok, i fixed it, but DS is ... But i think it's understandably

The song basically repeats itself from this spot onwards and the same suggestions will be made in the same spots, so re-do this diff with the suggestions i have said in mind

Hard

1. Difficulty settings should be around AR=7.5, OD=5, HP=5 Fixed
2. 00:09:031 (5,6) - Could be a better blanket Fixed
3. 00:38:725 (6,7) - You've associated stacks with 1/1 gaps every other time inb this section, but here you stack a 1/2 gap, i would remove this stack as it will confuse players and goes against the structure of this section Oh, OK, Fixed) But now here is jump)
4. 01:53:573 (3,4,5) - Remove overlap cus right now it looks ugly Where overlap? Stack of circles? I think now good
5. 01:57:093 (6,7) - Same as last suggestions about stacks Fixed

Insane

1. Difficulty setting should be around AR=8.7, OD=7, HP=5.5 Fixed
2. 00:10:868 (4) - No need for a repeat here Fixed
3. 00:12:552 - Add a note here to make the rhythm less akward Fixed
4. 00:13:317 - Note should be here and the slider at 00:13:470 - Fixed
5. 01:44:388 (5,6,7) - The big jump should be between the (6) and (7) because that is the most intense part of this section Fixed
6. 03:36:735 (3,4,5,6,7) - The change in spacing is so sudden and might make players assume thay have to hit (5,6,7) at a different timing to (3,4) make the spacing more consistent here Of course i thought about it... I did it specially, because I think it's so cool) and i like it)

Unfortunately i have to be a party pooper and say that this map won't get ranked until you learn more about mapping, refine the structure of your maps and then come back to it. Getting some more mods will be good to learn about aspects of mapping, but then move on to different maps to refine your style and make your maps fall better into the ranking critertia, if this is truly a song you want to rank then you should come back and re-make it once you have the skills to rank it

GL with mapping into the future

Wikozo wrote:

Easy

1. 00:04:929 (1,2,3) - this you do on beats but the second sliders circles you on lyrics. you must to decide what you do. on lyrics or on beats. Fixed
2. on 00:29:724 add circle Fixed

Normal

1. 01:15:643 (5,7,6,8) - on this circles you have 2 circles on the same time
   Fixed, i didn't motice it)))

Hard

1. you must to decide what you do. on lyrics or on beats. Hmmm, why should i do only on beat or vocal?

Insane

1. good insane I also like it)

1. Why some times 1/1 stack sometimes not? You should fix this. They are too hard to read for the beginners. Most of the time we choose to 1/2 stack and no 1/1 stack to keep consistence. you can check other new ranked map in 2k17. Most of them follow this rule.
2. use aibat or another sth to check ur space. remember the space in Normal should be equal. sth like 00:40:439 (3,1) - is not allowed. Yes everyone know those rules are too complicated,but rules are rules.
3. better mute the sliderslide. too noisy and they don't fit the music well.
   
4. 00:29:418 (7,1) - ctrl+g to make 00:30:031 - clickable
5. 00:42:888 (1) - remove this nc
6. 01:05:235 (5) - this shape will confuse the new player.
7. 01:10:133 (3) - 01:15:031 (4) - ...etc same as^
8. 01:16:255 (1,2) - could do a blanket
9. 01:21:153 (1,2) - same as^
10. 01:42:275 (4) - add nc
11. 02:19:928 (2,2) - avoid the overlap

1. remember that stack are not allowed in Easy. this diff is for the very begginers who just download the game. and the stack pattern are too hard for them. so sth like 00:14:418 (5,6) - should be removed.
2. Manipulating slider velocity is discouraged.so 01:01:255 - 0.75 suddenly changing to 1.0 is not allowed
3. don't copy one section to next section it is unrankable. you are make a super short map with a long music. try to be more creative.

General

Easy

Light Hard

Hard

Revialink wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue!

General

1. Оффсет: 4888 Такой оффсет крайне не верен, так вообще все съезжает не по музыке в конце. И мне уже подсказали с оффсетом, и я считаю, что сейчас он идеален
2. Диффы заканчиваются в разное время: Исправила
   03:40:439 - Easy
   03:44:112 - Normal
   03:42:888 - Hard
   03:42:888 - Insane

Easy

1. Тайминг линии у тебя не на тиках, а именно: Окей, исправила^^
   00:23:878
   00:24:490
   00:33:674
   00:42:552
   00:44:082
   01:01:225
   01:03:674
   01:12:858
   01:13:470
   01:22:654
   01:23:189
   01:42:245
   01:42:781
   01:52:041
   01:52:577
   02:00:766
   02:02:373
   02:19:592
   02:22:041
   02:31:225
   02:31:761
   02:41:021
   02:41:557
   03:01:225
   03:10:409
   03:10:944
   03:20:205
   03:20:740
   03:30:001
   03:30:536
   03:39:796
2. 00:06:765 (4,3) - паттерн? (подразумевается то, что это надо пофиксить) А что не так, вроде ровненько или нет?
3. 00:22:684 (2,4) - ^
4. 00:28:194 (2,4) - ^
5. 00:39:826 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:37:377 (1,3) - ^ и т.д. по карте.
7. 00:06:765 (4,4) - подставь круг под слайдер. Так логичнее и смотрится красиво. Окей
8. 00:10:898 (1,2) - для новичков будет довольно сложно подстроится под 1/2, лучше передвинь на 1/1. Я знаю, но если 1/1 то куда бы не двигала это вообще УЖАС, поэтому придётся оставить так. Да и потом, там много времени перед этим, чтобы сообразить когда нажимать)
9. 00:20:694 (1,2) - ^ Тоже
10. 00:14:418 (5,6) - стак могут не увидеть. Согласна
11. 00:23:602 (3,4) - ^
12. 00:28:806 (3,4) - ^
13. 00:34:929 (1,2,3,4) - ^ и т.д. по карте. Я все стеки убрала
14. 00:16:561 (3,1) - нелогичный флоу (путь). Исправила
15. 00:33:704 (3,1) - ^
16. 01:19:622 (4,5) - ^
17. 01:29:418 (2,3) - ^
18. 01:32:480 (7,1) - ^ и т.д. по карте. Я посмотрю, что еще можно изменить
19. 00:25:133 (1,3) - концы слайдеров подвинь в сторону след. нот. Хорошо, а разве было что то не так?
20. 00:30:337 (3,4,2) - не особо красиво. Ладно
21. 00:18:704 (2) - x:352 y:160 Ок
22. 00:30:337 (3,4) - ^ сделай похоже. Я там изменила немного, но думаю симпатично)
23. 01:20:847 (5,6) - ^ Ок
24. 01:04:316 (1) - x:400 y:192 Да
25. 01:22:684 (7) - x:272 y:296 Да
26. 01:24:520 - поставь перерыв. Да
27. Остальное ты просто скопировала и поменяла положение. Вроде это не ранкается, потому лучше мапать без копирования того, что уже было. Как??? Почему я не знала, что копировать нельзя??? Раньше это было фишкой осу, почему сейчас нет??? А я могу просто оставить как есть, но расставить объекты по другому??

остальное замодю попозже ЗамодЮ звучит как пылесосЮ XD

Ellyu wrote:

NM from my q. sorry being late ;w; I just give a very quick mod on the lower diff cuz I am super busy and lazythere are lots of works to do on ur general structure. It's ok

[Normal]

1. Why some times 1/1 stack sometimes not? You should fix this. They are too hard to read for the beginners. Most of the time we choose to 1/2 stack and no 1/1 stack to keep consistence. you can check other new ranked map in 2k17. Most of them follow this rule. I think it's my style, it's the structure of this part, but i will think about it
2. use aibat or another sth to check ur space. remember the space in Normal should be equal. sth like 00:40:439 (3,1) - is not allowed. Yes everyone know those rules are too complicated,but rules are rules. Ok
3. better mute the sliderslide. too noisy and they don't fit the music well. Ok, i will add sliderslide without sound
   
4. 00:29:418 (7,1) - ctrl+g to make 00:30:031 - clickable Fixed
5. 00:42:888 (1) - remove this nc Fixed
6. 01:05:235 (5) - this shape will confuse the new player. I understand it, but i want do it like this, it matches the music. But all modders highlight this, maybe i correct it
7. 01:10:133 (3) - 01:15:031 (4) - ...etc same as^ ^
8. 01:16:255 (1,2) - could do a blanket Fixed
9. 01:21:153 (1,2) - same as^ Fixed
10. 01:42:275 (4) - add nc Fixed
11. 02:19:928 (2,2) - avoid the overlap Fixed

[Easy]

1. remember that stack are not allowed in Easy. this diff is for the very begginers who just download the game. and the stack pattern are too hard for them. so sth like 00:14:418 (5,6) - should be removed. Fixed
2. Manipulating slider velocity is discouraged.so 01:01:255 - 0.75 suddenly changing to 1.0 is not allowed Fixed
3. don't copy one section to next section it is unrankable. you are make a super short map with a long music. try to be more creative. I will try to create

[list:1337]

I am sorry to say that this map can't get ranked if you don't learn more about mapping. though it much better than my very first map. no can can be good at their first try. Maybe you should try to find some teachers or another sth to learn more. Ok
GL with ur mapping.

Astarte wrote:

Hey! from my queue
Didn't check timing in detail but bpm isn't right, it should be half of what you have. Usually you'd want 1 beat to be the gap between a kick and a snare, not 2. Don't believe me? check the kiais. Just because you feel that the song is fast doesn't mean bpm should be doubled. That explains why you have relatively fast sv for this song with only 1x multiplier...
What I'd do is to check where are the strong beats, they're usually the downbeat. for ex 01:03:704 - 01:06:153 - 01:08:602 - are strong downbeats. You'd want to make them as big white ticks. These 01:04:928 - 01:07:377 - are not and should be just normal white ticks. Doubling bpm makes them a big white tick, which isn't right imo. Ok, i understand you)) But I will keep 196. Maybe you don't understand the rhythm of the song. Every vocal phrase begins in big yellow tick, so it's right. When you listen the song you can understand bpm right away. Just when you listen it, bpm is 196, and i never doubt about my bpm. 98 is defenetly bad. To the point, i also asked 2 persons, that understand music very well, and they also think my way. So about BPM i'm sure!

Normal

1. Cs is really low, and rhythm is really simple for something that's called "normal". I would suggest you reference maps at this bpm (or halved) to see what range of difficulty settings and sv they use. Also their rhythm choice as well. maybe cs3 at least, sv 0.8-0.9x, and use more offbeat rhythms like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8103547
2. 00:09:826 (4,1) - switch nc. Basically you need to nc every measure, which is every 1st and 3rd big white tick. when you change bpm to 98, you will see that this is a new measure that you should nc. Btw nc can help you determine bpm too, getting bpm wrong can be troublesome right?
3. 00:10:898 - i see you're following vocals. That isn't bad, something I usually do too. But I don't agree with following vocals for this kind of song as it's extremely random, doesn't any repetitive pattern really, and hard to predict kinda. what i'd do is simplifying rhythm with something mostly white tick and 1 beat apart so it follows the progression of the song which is something more appropriate for easier diffs
4. 01:05:847 - also since there's no vocals in kiai for you to follow, you make the kiai less intensive than the intro or the non-kiai parts, which doesn't really make sense, right?
5. 01:04:010 - 01:05:847 - understandable to simplify your rhythm in easier diffs, but simplify out the unimportant ones. These are pretty strong and distinctive sounds that should be mapped imo. Skipping them might make newbies click on the next one early thinking that you mapped these.
6. 00:44:265 - 02:02:633 - these breaks don't seem like they should be there as they have interesting vocal parts, which you should map on all diffs. the last break seems to be fine imo
7. 01:03:704 - for strong beats, especially a kiai start, you should make them clickable and not skipped or released. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8103366 There is no sound of drum or smth like that in the music
8. 00:11:969 - I would do something to avoid a 3/2 gap in a lower diff. Especially that this vocal is highly unpredictable. Use a 3/2 slider, or make a 1/1 gap instead
9. 00:15:643 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the look of this flow. Might be subjective but in easier diffs you should use flows that are comfortable and easy to follow such as circular/oval. What you're doing here is that (1) doesn't point to (2) directly, giving a flowdrop. I would strongly avoid that unless I run out of space or something Fixed
10. 03:20:847 - this deserves to be a kiai as well no? Yes, i also think so, but Aimod told me that more than 1/3 of the song is in kiai, so i think that because this part is last, and the power of this part lower than other parts, and now i really don't know how to solve this problem
11. 00:05:847 (1,2,3) - pay more attention to your aesthetics. They are really important, lower diffs especially since ar is lower. blanket properly, make lines straight, perfect shapes formations... that'll make your maps have a polished feeling and doesn't feel like you spent just 10 minutes making the map Ok, i fixed blankets
12. 01:03:704 - 02:22:071 - 03:01:255 - last thing. I'm really unhappy to see that the kiais are exact copy pasta. That is something you should not do. If you don't want inconsistency then copy your rhythm and rearrange your patterns. This is extremely boring and implies that you're just... lazy and doesn't spend much time on the map. Trust me BNs do not want to see this. I also see more copied stuff other than just the kiai as well too.

That's all from me, since I don't really like the song that much and the map's long I'm feeling kinda lazy (and sleepy too). Sorry xd
However, I hope you would consider what I modded for the other diffs as well. OK
Good luck~ Thanks a lot^^

Revialink wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue!

[heading]Light Hard

1. 00:18:398 (2,4) - некрасиво смотрится. ок
2. 00:20:847 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ок
3. 00:22:071 (4,5) - паттерн? (подразумевается то, что это надо пофиксить или может выглядеть лучше)ок
4. 01:11:051 (1,3) - ^ок
5. 01:33:704 (2) - ^ок
6. 00:31:255 (3) - x:288 y:200 Мне не нрав
7. 01:34:929 (4) - x:304 y:240 Мне нрав как есть
8. 00:40:439 (3) - замени на 00:39:826 (2) с реверсом. Он и был так
9. 00:37:684 (2,3,4) - флоу странный. ок
10. 00:40:439 (3,1) - ^ Ок
11. 01:05:235 (5) - некрасивый слайдер. Можно сделать так:
    *клац*

    
    Это очень похоже, мне нрав какой был, он соответствует ритму песни
12. 01:10:133 (3) - ^
13. 01:15:031 (4) - ^
14. 01:19:929 (4) - ^
15. 01:08:602 (1) - зачем ты поставила слайдер тут? Сделай как 01:03:704 (1,2,3) . Ок
16. 01:23:908 (1,2) - подальше друг от друга сделай их. Там достаточно времени чтобы понять как нажимать
17. Остальное ты просто скопировала и поменяла положение. Вроде это не ранкается, потому лучше мапать без копирования того, что уже было.Я тебе написала уже по этому поводу^^

Hard

1. 00:06:765 (8,9) - паттерн? (подразумевается то, что это надо пофиксить или может выглядеть лучше) Будет время я обязательно все паттерны проверю
2. 00:41:969 (2,3) - ^
3. 01:26:051 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:32:326 (6,7,8) - ^
5. 01:33:092 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 01:38:296 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:17:633 (7) - x:32 y:280 Ок
8. 01:01:867 (3) - некрасивый слайдер. Можно сделать так:
   *клац*

   
   Ок
9. 01:03:092 (3) - ^Ок
10. Остальное ты просто скопировала и поменяла положение. Вроде это не ранкается, потому лучше мапать без копирования того, что уже было. ^

остальное замодю попозже
Инсейн очень плохой, извини. ХММмм, а вот мне он нрав больше всего)

Good luck!

gottagof4ast wrote:

Bet you didn't expect this NM
*cough cough* 3 weeks late *cough cough* Yes, it's unexpected, but it's ok!!!))

General
I know nothing of storyboarding but I think it would be better if image change at 02:41:663 was alligned well with the previous image as now the background shifts weridly Yes, you are right! But i just don't know how to align this, so for now I just delete this picture

The NC's are really weird in the top diff (didn't check the others), just put one on every downbeat or every 2 downbeats Yes, it's right, fixed!!

Also, the same as what Astarte said about the bpm, It's probably 98 instead of 196.
Most pop songs have their bpm lower than 120, example https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1039409
The 196 bpm without slider speed reduction in the timing panel also makes the sliders feel really fast
I wrote about it in description of this song. One websait tell that bpm is 196, and i also feel it

Insane
00:04:929 (1,2) - Use the same shape for these sliders by copying them as they represent the same sound Fixed

00:09:061 (6,7) - and 00:11:510 (5,6) - are both stacked but the first is a 1/2 gap and the second is a 1/1 gap, this maybe isn't the biggest problem but can be confusing Ok, i won't use stack 00:11:510 (5,6)

00:18:398 (4,5,6) - Why stack 56 if you just showed the spacing for a 1/2 gap with 45 Fixed

00:23:908 (7,8) - Isn't this sound 1/8? Good idea!!!!!!

00:33:704 (6,7) - ^

00:35:235 (3,4,5) - What do these follow? Music, not vocal
In the case that it follows the vocals then it would not fit with 00:34:622 (1,2) - and 00:35:847 (6,7) - as these follow the vocals
In the case that it would follow the instrumentals then it would be even weirder as there is no instrumentalsound on 00:35:388 (4) -

00:40:133 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as the thing I said about showing the spacing for a 1/2 gap and than shifting it into a stack
This also keeps repeating through the entire map so I am not going to mention it anymore Fixed

00:44:112 (9) - Why put a break after this note, the music ramps up but you just stopped mapping it, it's not like the vocals stopped or anything
Done!!!

01:04:775 (4) - No sound on this note If i take off this note, structure will be collapsed

01:06:076 (2) - Also no sound on this note Fixed

01:08:143 (9) - ^, atleast not a sound that ahould be mapped with a circle If i delete this note, it seems bad, beat the repeats 3 times, it's feld bad

01:15:872 (2) - There is a drumbeat on this sliderend 01:15:643 (1) - and this sliderhead 01:15:643 (1) - but not on 01:15:872 (2) -
Fixed, it's really good now!!!!

01:36:459 (4,5,6) - If you use the same shapes than you should probably also be having the same sound to represents these sliders which is not the case Fixed
01:36:459 (4) - has sound on sliderhead
01:36:765 (5) - has sound on head and tail
01:37:071 (6) - has sound on tail
I'm not sure about what you try to tell me, but i change this place a bit

01:39:214 (5,6) - sound between these 2 notes, also 6 has no sound Fixed

01:40:439 (10,1) - why stop mapping the song here? ^

01:55:132 (3,4) - overlap pls fix ty Fixed

02:24:444 (2) - no sound Fixed
I really recommend checking if there is a sound on the place where you put your notes as right now there are a tone of random notes HeHe, i will try

02:26:510 (8) - ^ Ok

I'm going to leave it at this as I am just repeating myself overr the same problems.
So check the rest of the map to find the same things as I said as there are alot more of these as you were mapping your song quite consistently
Gl with the map

• 00:08:296 (2) - Слайдер передвинь ниже
  00:09:520 (5) - Сделай кривим и передвинь вправо
  00:12:275 (3) - x:236 y:84
  00:15:643 (3) - x:200 y:140
  00:23:908 (7) - нк
  00:27:582 (2) - Сделай кривым и зад слайдера опусти ниже
  00:34:929 (2,3,4,5) - Сделай что-то на подобие этого
  00:43:194 (4) - Ноту отпусти ниже
  01:12:888 (4) - нк
  01:18:704 (1,2,3,4) - Сделай что-то на подобие этого
  01:53:296 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  02:33:091 (3) - Ноту передвинь левее

Jennglebells wrote:

from my q

• 
  [Normal]
  

1. 00:11:510 (2,3) - this doesnt match with the music at all, perhaps you are following the lyrics? I would suggest following the music here so it doesnt sound odd It was so!!!!!! But too many modder told me not to do it odd!!!! But ok, i fixe it, because i also think that it's better
2. 00:19:622 - white ticks, especially these large ones shouldnt be ignored. this specific one has a beat to it that differs from the others, you should put something here Yes!
3. 00:21:306 (2) - this sounds off, the slider tick follows nothing, and the major beat thing is on slider tail I fixed it as in first point
4. 01:08:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo stretches out over a really long period of time, normally nc would be every measure or so, i would at least split it in half ( from fifth note 01:11:051 - ) this also repeats elsewhere Yes!
5. 01:11:969 (6,7) - intentional overlap? Ok
6. 02:19:622 (1,2,3) - are these completely silenced? i'm pretty sure thats unrankable Yes, thank you
7. 03:10:439 (7) - notes out of kiai should have a nc (why not just connect all the kiai? theres only one slider between) Kiai should be the same in all diffs

• 
  [Insane]
  
  quick note, nc is pretty weirdly across all diffs to me, maybe take a look and fix them In Insane diff i changed NC, as Big yellow tick - NC. In other diffs i don't do it, but i do it in nearest future)
  so are the silenced sliders, i noticed 1 or 2 in every diff Ok, thanks that you told me it, I fixed it, for rules)
  
  

1. 01:00:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - to me personally, the stream just appeared out of no where? and there wasnt really any continuous sound for the stream to be there Don't know if you understand me, but this moment before chorus and there is sound and beat enhancement, So...There is a place to be
2. 01:06:153 (1,2) - why not just stack them like you did for so many other notes? it would look better and feel not as out of place
3. 01:31:561 (3,4) - stack please, notes like that look really unorganized imo
   ^^many of these previously mentioned things, (some in normal as well) repeats through out the map
   About these three last points, If i do stack (i had stack here earlier), map will have different stacks: 1/1, 1/2, some modders (and i also) think that it's interrupting you. So if someone tell me about it again, i will fix it. But not now

makisokk wrote:

Привет из моей очереди
[Advanced]

• 00:08:296 (2) - Слайдер передвинь ниже Ладно
  00:09:520 (5) - Сделай кривим и передвинь вправо Ладно
  00:12:275 (3) - x:236 y:84 Нет, если посмотреть на тики сверху, то расстояние явно отличается
  00:15:643 (3) - x:200 y:140 Ладно
  00:23:908 (7) - нк С комбо я еще всё исправлю
  00:27:582 (2) - Сделай кривым и зад слайдера опусти ниже Я не буду делать кривым, но конец опущу параллельно предыдущему слайдеру
  00:34:929 (2,3,4,5) - Сделай что-то на подобие этого Ладно
  00:43:194 (4) - Ноту отпусти ниже Зачем, тут ровная прямая?
  01:12:888 (4) - нк
  01:18:704 (1,2,3,4) - Сделай что-то на подобие этого Ладно
  01:53:296 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Ладно
  02:33:091 (3) - Ноту передвинь левее Ладно

Извини я не могу такое модить, еще придется тебя огорчить - это вообще не подходит на ранк,
Слишком криво выглядит, карту играть скучно
Вот тебе гайды:
t/86329
https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
Все давай удачи, улучшай свой скилл в маппинге

SakuraKaminari wrote:

Hi! From my Q

Light Normal
00:07:990 (1,2,3) - these arent in a perfect line, move 3 two grid points to the right so its a straight line then adjust 4 Ok
00:19:622 - missed beat should be a circle yes
00:41:663 (3,4,5) - also not a straight line move 5 ok

01:04:316 (1) - is mistimed. should be half a beat before No, defenetely no
1:05:847 and 1:07:071 is a strong enough beat it should have a circle on it
so should 1:08:908 ok
01:09:214 (2) - is mistimed, should be a half beat before no... defenetly no
01:10:439 (4) - also mistimed should be a half beat before ^
01:12:888 (7) - it's weird to map percussion when the rest of the combo is mapped to vocals It's fine
01:14:112 (1) - should be a half beat before ^

i just realized you're mapping percussion here. while the beats would be correct in that case, the vocals are EXTREMELY prominent here and I would definitely map those.

same for second kiai

wait you've actually switched to mapping it to percussion even after. I'm gonna be brutally honest, most of the percussion beats that are mapped like 01:27:888 (3) or 01:31:561 (5) are quiet and hard to hear even at 50% speed. you also started the map mapping the vocals. you can't switch in a "light normal", the players cant compensate. this is technical rhythms in a super easy map. this entire thing should be remapped to the prominent sound of the song, the vocals. It's almost easy, in me opinion, now it's good, because it has understandable rhyphm)

01:29:418 (2) is just placed on no sound at all But it's starting vocal here ('the')

it appears that since beginning this mod you have deleted the beatmap so im just giving up. if my osu's just fucked up or something let me know and ill try to help more Really? you don't know why there is 'no submit'??? It's because you change smth in my map, and of course it's not submitted))) So just redonload it, and if you change smth in my map, don't save it, nd everything will be ok)

EDIT with a redownload its fixed im just gonna post a new mod sorry about this

SakuraKaminari wrote:

Remodding this already did the easy diff but here we go with the other 3

Advanced
01:16:255 (2) - has 3 strong beats. i would do a circle then a short slider or another triple imo The structure will crashed, and 01:16:255 (2) - this part not like this 01:15:643 (6,7,1) - So it will sound bad
01:31:255 (3,4,5) - 3 should be like 4,5. same clap then a beat, why erase it for 3 and emphasize for 4,5 Because i want so that clap sound will be on the head of sliders, but if i do like you said, then in (3) clap sound will be in circle
01:35:541 (1,2,3) - not a straight line. move 1 down exactly two grid points. Fixed
01:56:051 (3,4,5) - distance is wrong and also not a straight line. move 4 so it is directly on the y axis (2 to the left) and redo spacing. Fixed
02:34:622 (2) - has 3 strong beats. i would do a circle then a short slider or another triple imo ^
02:39:520 (2) - ^ ^
03:02:480 (3) - down 2 and left 3 if you wanted this in a line, might be intentional Fixed
03:11:051 (1) - down 2 Fixed
03:18:704 (2) - has 3 strong beats. i would do a circle then a short slider or another triple imo ^
03:33:398 (2) - ^ ^

Hard
00:04:929 (1,2,3) - pull 1 and 2 down 2 to make a line. no reason for it to be just a tiny bit off imo Ok
00:21:459 (5,6,7) - spaced triples NEED to be in a line imo. move 7 up 1 and over 1 i do it in one line
00:34:622 (2,3,4) - move 2 down 1 or 3 and 4 up 1 I don't understand if this part havs problems, but i do 2,3,4 in diagonal
03:03:704 (1) - as a rule i dont like sliders with points off the edge of the grid I don't think that if i use all screen, it's bad
03:04:928 (4) - one down and to the left I fixed it in other way
03:24:520 (4) - one down and to the left I fixed it in other way

Insane
01:48:704 (4,5,6) - looks nice but flows weird But it's insane, so it's good

Good luck!

CharmCaster wrote:

yo! M4M from your mod queue!

General
- I honestly think that the offset is a bit off as the beat is slightly slower to the correct one. The offset should be 4,919 i believe
Offset was moded, so it ideal now

Normal

1. 00:12:275 (1) - you should CTRL+G here for better flow to the next (2) slider Now it's ok, and if i use ctrl g ds will crashed
2. 00:38:602 (3) - this doesn't look good aesthetically and also the flow, might need to change that slider Now it's pretty
3. 00:41:663 (1,2,3) - This doesn't look like a straight line it's in one line, i checked it
4. 01:56:969 (3) - same like before, this doesn't look good aesthetically and also the flow ^
5. 02:00:031 (1,2,3) - this doesn't look like a straight line either Fixed
6. 03:26:357 (3,4) - spacing inconsistency Fixed
7. 03:35:847 (2,3,4) - ^ Ok

Advanced

1. 00:05:847 (1) - you can make this slider more curvier Fixed
2. 00:14:112 (5,1) - spacing inconsistency Fixed
3. 00:27:582 (2,3) - ^Fixed
4. 01:03:704 (1,2) - ^Fixed
5. 01:06:153 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
6. 01:07:377 (3,3) - this overlap doesn't look nice Fixed
7. 01:11:051 (1,2) - you can overlap the slider with the circle Now it's fine
8. 01:12:275 (3,4) - its being overlapped a little bit so i suggest that you move the next sliders more to the left Fixed
9. 01:16:867 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this whole section's spacing is totally different from the previous Fixed
10. 01:33:704 (2) - flip it to the other side for better flow, CTRL+H Fixed
11. 01:43:193 (2,3) - spacing inconsistency Fixed
12. 01:45:949 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
13. 01:48:092 (2,3,4) - spacing is totally off Fixed
    theres too much spacing problems, im not gonna list down any more of them Ok, i checked itt in aimod
14. 02:26:969 (1,2) - you can overlap this Fixed
15. 02:38:908 (6,7,1) - this stream isn't straight Fixed
16. 03:02:786 (4) - flip this for better flow Fixed
17. 03:21:153 (2) - make this slider more curvier Fixed a bit
18. 03:24:520 (3,3) - ugly overlap Fixed

Hard

1. Pls lower the AR! Its too high for Hard, make it to 8! It was 8 some time ago, but i do this for places like 00:30:031 (2,3) - so that this almost stack will be not so confusing. Now i'm thinking about remap some places, so maybe i fixed it
2. 00:16:255 (5) - flip this for better flow i fixed it in other way
3. 00:35:541 (6) - NC Why?? i do Nc in the second big yellow tick
4. 00:38:908 (8,1) - that's a huge jump For hard it's ok
5. 01:06:612 (2,3) - spacing is a little off No, it's ok, i checked it
6. 01:08:908 (2) - flip this Ok
7. 01:09:520 (3,2) - you could stack these Ok
8. 01:59:419 (6,7) - huge jump here For hard it's ok
9. 02:24:980 (2,3) - spacing is a little off Aimod told that it's ok
10. 02:27:276 (2) - flip this Ok
11. 03:04:163 (2,3) - spacing I fixed it in other way
12. 03:06:459 (2) - flip this Ok
13. 03:37:072 (4,5) - huge jump For hard it's ok

Insane

1. 00:15:031 (2,3) - make these sliders parallel to each other Done
2. 00:40:439 (6,7) - change this to a slider so that the section won't be too plain of a variety Ok, but i changed (5,6), it's better
3. 01:00:949 (10,2) - they're overlapping a bit Fixed
4. 01:20:541 (11,1,2) - players will get confused for its spacing, should move the circle closer to the (11) slider Yes, you are right)
5. 01:26:663 (4,5,6) - this has a weird flow Fixed
6. 01:44:571 (7,8,9) - this doesn't form a straight line Fixed
7. 01:47:479 (8,9,1) - players won't know this is a 1/2 triple because of the spacing imo I changed it, so that (9,1) have distance
8. 01:53:602 (4,5,6) - spacing inconsistency imo it's insane, so jumping is international
9. 02:18:705 (2,3,4,2) - overlapping with each other If objects dissapeared, it's not overlap
10. 02:22:989 (3,4,5) - spacing inconsistency imo it's insane, so jumping is international
11. 02:26:663 (7) - flip this slider for better flow I fixed it in other way
12. 02:40:132 (3,4,5,6) - spacing inconsistency imo it's insane, so jumping is international
13. 03:04:775 (4,5,6) - ^

Phew that was a long mod, good luck!