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Hi~!! ><

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [Together]

  1. 00:06:570 (21) - change to D~? (I think it's same sound with 00:01:085 and 00:12:056. :3)
  2. 00:22:685 (105) - change to D. (consistent with 00:44:627(291), and 02:12:399 (170).)
    If you don't like d d D, we can change 00:22:513 (104) - k. then sound is better~ :)

  3. 02:01:427 - add k here. and add d 02:01:599. so make kkd. then we can express eletronic sound~
  4. 02:33:142 - just suggestion~ maybe we can express electronic sound continuously. like this. '-'
  5. 02:37:599 (389) - change to k this.(electonic accompaniment here.)
  6. 03:27:656 (213) - chage to k~? (I feel k sound is cut here.)
  7. 03:41:885 (338) - k (consistent with 01:30:227.)
  8. 03:43:256 (339) - d (consistent with 01:31:599.)
  9. 03:45:313 (341, 342) - Ctrl + g. so make d k.
  10. 04:24:227 - same suggstion. with 02:33:142. ><

sorry for short mod. I can't find problem anymore.
It's really Nice map already.
I hope this ranked soon. GL~~~! >w</
posted

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~!! ><

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [Together]

  1. 00:06:570 (21) - change to D~? (I think it's same sound with 00:01:085 and 00:12:056. :3)
  2. 00:22:685 (105) - change to D. (consistent with 00:44:627(291), and 02:12:399 (170).)
    If you don't like d d D, we can change 00:22:513 (104) - k. then sound is better~ :)

  3. 02:01:427 - add k here. and add d 02:01:599. so make kkd. then we can express eletronic sound~
  4. 02:33:142 - just suggestion~ maybe we can express electronic sound continuously. like this. '-'
  5. 02:37:599 (389) - change to k this.(electonic accompaniment here.)
  6. 03:27:656 (213) - chage to k~? (I feel k sound is cut here.)
  7. 03:41:885 (338) - k (consistent with 01:30:227.)
  8. 03:43:256 (339) - d (consistent with 01:31:599.)
  9. 03:45:313 (341, 342) - Ctrl + g. so make d k.
  10. 04:24:227 - same suggstion. with 02:33:142. ><


    All fixed exept 02:01:427 - add k here. and add d 02:01:599. so make kkd. then we can express eletronic sound~ This is a calm part, so if I put kkd it can change very soon the calm of the patterns.

sorry for short mod. I can't find problem anymore.
It's really Nice map already.
I hope this ranked soon. GL~~~! >w</
Thank you very much for your nice mod and your star! >w<


Updated
posted
Heyho o/

[General]
You could make better use of the volume settings. The intro and the calm parts between the kiais should be much quieter imo to give the kiais more impact.

[Together]
00:11:370 (40) - Here's not a clicking sound so a don fits better
00:17:542 (67) - kat instead to match the upcoming kat-only part?
00:28:342 (153,154,155) - A kkd pattern for the high pitch here?
00:42:913 (275) - This kat should be 1/4 later imo
01:55:770 (67,68,69) - Actually I hear a k k k d (1/2) pattern
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - ^

Nice variations and fun patterns during the kiai times. Nothing to say there, good luck with your map! :)
posted

DarkVortex wrote:

Heyho o/

[General]
You could make better use of the volume settings. The intro and the calm parts between the kiais should be much quieter imo to give the kiais more impact.

[Together]
00:11:370 (40) - Here's not a clicking sound so a don fits better Fixed
00:17:542 (67) - kat instead to match the upcoming kat-only part? No because many k can cause confusing and tt can be annoying.
00:28:342 (153,154,155) - A kkd pattern for the high pitch here? Very nice! Fixed
00:42:913 (275) - This kat should be 1/4 later imo No, is better the stream to make very fun the song and to variate a bit.
01:55:770 (67,68,69) - Actually I hear a k k k d (1/2) pattern Fixed
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - ^ No because the note 90 have a low drum.

Nice variations and fun patterns during the kiai times. Nothing to say there, good luck with your map! :)
Thank you so much for you mod! Wait for my mod please ;;


Updated
posted
hi there
here's my m4m part
hope it will help

Together

00:29:113 (160) - imo this note should be k since it's similar to 00:29:027 (159). And 00:29:799 (166) should be d since pitch is decreased on it.
00:30:999 - if i were you i'd actually added a note here to fill a bit strange imo gap.
00:37:599 (229,230,231,232,233,234) - this seems to be inconsistent with all of the previous patterns you've used in this part. If this is for variety it still is really strange because it's the only one throughout all this part.
00:48:142 (318,319) - ctrl+g to follow the pitch correctly? In other reasons i don't understand why this should be a kd. Same for 00:49:513 (329,330). And this 00:50:885 (343,344) too for the same reason.
00:52:342 (356) - pitch is increased on this note, set is as k. Also on 00:53:113 (362) pitch is decreased so d is better.
00:59:114 (414,415) - ctrl+g for the same i've written before.
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - rhythm on these is not right. It should be smth like this.
Just a comment but i like this 02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444) part since it reminds me of climbb's taiko maps :cries:

Dunno but all other seems to be fine i think.
Random lul. Actually i wanna your tokyo soda to be approved so do it pls :DDD
I will sprinkle it with starssssssss
posted

Hitsu wrote:

hi there
here's my m4m part
hope it will help

Together

00:29:113 (160) - imo this note should be k since it's similar to 00:29:027 (159). And 00:29:799 (166) should be d since pitch is decreased on it. Fixed
00:30:999 - if i were you i'd actually added a note here to fill a bit strange imo gap. No. It's better as it is
00:37:599 (229,230,231,232,233,234) - this seems to be inconsistent with all of the previous patterns you've used in this part. If this is for variety it still is really strange because it's the only one throughout all this part. I really like it, sounds very nice with the song
00:48:142 (318,319) - ctrl+g to follow the pitch correctly? In other reasons i don't understand why this should be a kd. Same for 00:49:513 (329,330). And this 00:50:885 (343,344) too for the same reason. Fixed
00:52:342 (356) - pitch is increased on this note, set is as k. Also on 00:53:113 (362) pitch is decreased so d is better. Fixed
00:59:114 (414,415) - ctrl+g for the same i've written before. Fixed
02:01:256 (88,89,90) - rhythm on these is not right. It should be smth like this. No. It's better as it is
Just a comment but i like this 02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444) part since it reminds me of climbb's taiko maps :cries: EDIT: I really like that part *O* This streamis really amazing and surprising! Thanks :3


Dunno but all other seems to be fine i think.
Random lul. Actually i wanna your tokyo soda to be approved so do it pls :DDD Thanks! I will try owo
I will sprinkle it with starssssssss
Thank you so much for your mod Hitsu! >w<
posted
I really like that part ;www; This streamis really amazing and surprising! I will not change it sorry ;uu;
i said that i like it too xDDDD
don't worry

< random kudosu smbd please deny :DDD
posted

Hitsu wrote:

I really like that part ;www; This streamis really amazing and surprising! I will not change it sorry ;uu;
i said that i like it too xDDDD
don't worry
Wrong color XDDD Thanks :D


My knowledge in English is really bad sorry ;w;
posted

game rock wrote:

Wrong color XDDD Thanks :D


My knowledge in English is really bad sorry ;w;
aaa, np with that
i have to deal with many people irl with the same problem :x
can't say my knowledge is really good or smth, i make a lot of mistakes too
posted
Hola gemu, mi corazón. uwu ♥

Together

  1. 00:11:713 (42) - Podrías cambiarlo a k, no sonaría nada mal.
  2. 00:51:999 (352,353,354,355,356) - Este patrón podría ser dkkdk así hace combinación con este: 00:50:627 (340,341,342,343,344) -
  3. 01:56:285 (69,70) - Sonaría muchísimo mejor si le haces ctrl + g
  4. Corre esta nota: 02:01:513 (89) - para aca: 02:01:427 - y agrega nota aca: 02:01:599 - Preferiblemente azul
  5. 02:23:971 (269) - Podrías cambiarlo a azul, si quieres

    Y eso es todo amigos(?) Está muy bien hecho. D: Te amo(?) ♥ Que tengas mucha suerte.
posted
:c mod pobre...
02:01:513 - prueba moviendola a 02:01:427 - porque como está al jugarlo se siente muy engañoso. parecido a lo que puso jessi :c
02:01:599 - si aplicas la de arriba, prueba poniendo una nota ahí.

04:02:627 - borra esa(? 04:03:142 (13) - y esa(? , pienso que el stream es demasiado precipitado al lado de esas notitas que habían antes, por lo que el dk dkddk dkkd le da como una subida de intensidad(?

el mapa está muy bueno, los streams y los patrones son muy interesantes, me gusta mucho como interpretas la canción también uwu.
m a s t e r p i e c e.
posted

JessiChan wrote:

Hola gemu, mi corazón. uwu ♥ Mi vida ♥ >//<

Together

  1. 00:11:713 (42) - Podrías cambiarlo a k, no sonaría nada mal.
  2. 00:51:999 (352,353,354,355,356) - Este patrón podría ser dkkdk así hace combinación con este: 00:50:627 (340,341,342,343,344) -
  3. 01:56:285 (69,70) - Sonaría muchísimo mejor si le haces ctrl + g
  4. Corre esta nota: 02:01:513 (89) - para aca: 02:01:427 - y agrega nota aca: 02:01:599 - Preferiblemente azul
  5. 02:23:971 (269) - Podrías cambiarlo a azul, si quieres

    Y eso es todo amigos(?) Está muy bien hecho. D: Te amo(?) ♥ Que tengas mucha suerte.
Apliqué todo >w< Excelentes sugerencias :33 gracias baby ♥ Yo también Te amo (?) ^w^


Ulqui wrote:

:c mod pobre... Claro que no uwu
02:01:513 - prueba moviendola a 02:01:427 - porque como está al jugarlo se siente muy engañoso. parecido a lo que puso jessi :c
02:01:599 - si aplicas la de arriba, prueba poniendo una nota ahí. Vale :3

04:02:627 - borra esa(? 04:03:142 (13) - y esa(? , pienso que el stream es demasiado precipitado al lado de esas notitas que habían antes, por lo que el dk dkddk dkkd le da como una subida de intensidad(? No ya que se escucha fuertes sonidos más a fondo

el mapa está muy bueno, los streams y los patrones son muy interesantes, me gusta mucho como interpretas la canción también uwu.
m a s t e r p i e c e.
Muchísimas gracias Ulqui >ww<


Updated
posted
hi~ :3/
request from forum PM

[Together]
  1. 00:20:114 (81,82,83) - kkd~~~~? consistent with 00:18:742 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ?

  2. 00:49:942 (333) - k? Because the high pich sound is continuing so far.
  3. 01:00:914 (429) - ^?

  4. 01:55:770 (67,68,69,70) - I think this rhythm is strange ...
    for example (center lane 01:56:113 - )
  5. 02:07:085 (125) - k? 02:04:170 (102,103,104,105,106) -

  6. 02:11:456 (161) - delete. The rhythm sounds clear.

  7. 02:13:685 (178,179) - dk?

  8. 02:16:770 (203) - delete. I feel unnecessary.
  9. 02:22:256 (252) - delete
  10. 02:27:742 (301) - delete

  11. 02:38:885 (403,404) - move to 02:38:970 -

  12. 02:45:227 (468) - d
  13. 02:45:313 (469,470,471,472) - ctrl+g
    Make cymbals sound stand out 02:45:656 (473) -

  14. 03:21:142 (149) - d. consistent with03:26:627 (203,204,205) -
  15. 03:32:113 (256) - ^

  16. 03:39:227 (328) - move to 03:39:056 -

  17. 04:02:970 - 1/6? wwwww


short mod sorry ;w;
good song , god mapper game rock >w<
good luck for rank~ owo/
posted

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

hi~ :3/
request from forum PM

[Together]
  1. 00:20:114 (81,82,83) - kkd~~~~? consistent with 00:18:742 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - ? Fixed

  2. 00:49:942 (333) - k? Because the high pich sound is continuing so far. Fixed
  3. 01:00:914 (429) - ^? Fixed

  4. 01:55:770 (67,68,69,70) - I think this rhythm is strange ...
    for example (center lane 01:56:113 - ) No, It's better as it is
  5. 02:07:085 (125) - k? 02:04:170 (102,103,104,105,106) - Fixed

  6. 02:11:456 (161) - delete. The rhythm sounds clear. I delete 02:11:285 - for consistency with 00:43:599 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291) -

  7. 02:13:685 (178,179) - dk? Fixed

  8. 02:16:770 (203) - delete. I feel unnecessary. No owo
  9. 02:22:256 (252) - delete No owo
  10. 02:27:742 (301) - delete No owo

  11. 02:38:885 (403,404) - move to 02:38:970 - No owo

  12. 02:45:227 (468) - d Fixed
  13. 02:45:313 (469,470,471,472) - ctrl+g Fixed
    Make cymbals sound stand out 02:45:656 (473) -

  14. 03:21:142 (149) - d. consistent with03:26:627 (203,204,205) - Fixed
  15. 03:32:113 (256) - ^ Fixed

  16. 03:39:227 (328) - move to 03:39:056 - No owo

  17. 04:02:970 - 1/6? wwwww No, It can be very surprising with the low notes 04:01:085 (1,2,3,4) -


short mod sorry ;w; Dw <3
good song , god mapper game rock >w< Thaaaanks!! *u*
good luck for rank~ owo/
Thank you very much yuzu!! >w<




Updated
posted
hi! m4m

I'm really sorry that I was late for a long time...

[Together]
00:47:542 (313,314) - kd or dd? following pitch. 00:53:027 (361,362,363) - is kdk

00:58:514 (409,410) - same

01:06:913 - ~ 01:50:456 - I think that is good to slow down the SV. Because the density is low, players may feel tired.So we aim to slow the SV and increase the visual density.And I think you can take more vocals.Even if it is a rest area, I feel a little unsatisfactory.

02:04:342 - d? This area seems to have a little k proportion too much...

02:06:913 - same

02:11:456 - change to k and move to 02:11:285 - ? you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better.

02:12:913 (170,171,172,173,174) - I think that the pattern beginning with k should be better.Because the other parts are like that.

02:12:742 (169) - If you accept the above suggestion, it is preferable to make this a D

02:20:285 (235,236) - ctrl+g? contrast with 02:21:656 (246,247,248,249) -

02:23:885 (268,269,270,271,272) - ^^^

02:34:856 (362,363,364,365,366) - same... high pitch sound ringing here 02:34:856 -

02:40:342 (416) - same

02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443) - It is very unbalanced here. I recommend placing d according to kick, or placing d according to the melody.

02:45:827 (473,474) - ctrl g hith pitch sound ringing here 02:45:827 -

03:19:856 - k and 03:21:227 - d following pitch

03:25:342 - 03:26:713 - same

03:30:827 - 03:32:199 - same

03:39:227 - change to k and move to 03:39:056 - you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better.

03:40:513 - ~ I feel that the density is a little low and not enough.

04:03:827 - D and 04:03:998 (21,22,23,24,25) - high pitch sound ringing here 04:03:999 -

04:14:970 (126,127,128,129,130) - same

04:20:970 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - It is very unbalanced here too.

Outro looks good

Good Luck :)
posted

komasy wrote:

hi! m4m Hii

I'm really sorry that I was late for a long time... Dw :3

[Together]
00:47:542 (313,314) - kd or dd? following pitch. 00:53:027 (361,362,363) - is kdk Fixed to kdk

00:58:514 (409,410) - same Fixed

01:06:913 - ~ 01:50:456 - I think that is good to slow down the SV. Because the density is low, players may feel tired.So we aim to slow the SV and increase the visual density.And I think you can take more vocals.Even if it is a rest area, I feel a little unsatisfactory. Ok, fixed

02:04:342 - d? This area seems to have a little k proportion too much... Sound the same

02:06:913 - same same ^

02:11:456 - change to k and move to 02:11:285 - ? you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better. I want consistency in that parts with the others, but i hear a sound here 02:11:456 - so for now i don't apply it

02:12:913 (170,171,172,173,174) - I think that the pattern beginning with k should be better.Because the other parts are like that. No becasue beginning with a d and then with a k 02:14:285 (181) -

02:12:742 (169) - If you accept the above suggestion, it is preferable to make this a D ^

02:20:285 (235,236) - ctrl+g? contrast with 02:21:656 (246,247,248,249) - Fixed

02:23:885 (268,269,270,271,272) - ^^^ ^^^

02:34:856 (362,363,364,365,366) - same... high pitch sound ringing here 02:34:856 - I want variate a bit because many k can be tired

02:40:342 (416) - same Fixed

02:40:856 (420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443) - It is very unbalanced here. I recommend placing d according to kick, or placing d according to the melody. No, I really love this stream ;;

02:45:827 (473,474) - ctrl g hith pitch sound ringing here 02:45:827 - I want to follow the melody 02:47:199 (486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495) -

03:19:856 - k and 03:21:227 - d following pitch Fixed

03:25:342 - 03:26:713 - same ^

03:30:827 - 03:32:199 - same ^

03:39:227 - change to k and move to 03:39:056 - you take drums until just before, so I think that this one is better. No for the similar reason previously.

03:40:513 - ~ I feel that the density is a little low and not enough. You're right, fixed

04:03:827 - D and 04:03:998 (21,22,23,24,25) - high pitch sound ringing here 04:03:999 - No, in the finish D the sound is very high but not low, and about the high pitch i want to variate a bit and to leep consistency with the previous parts.

04:14:970 (126,127,128,129,130) - same ^

04:20:970 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - It is very unbalanced here too. No, I really love this stream ;;

Outro looks good

Good Luck :)
Thank you so much for you mod!



Updated
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IRC con mi baka
2017-05-13 21:52 -Sh1n1-: holly suena muy bien
2017-05-13 21:53 game rock: Gracias >ww<
2017-05-13 21:54 game rock: Me alegro mucho que te guste :33 lo que quiero es que le gusten a los players y se sientan comodos, no que me guste a mi ya que debo pensar en los demás, porque ellos son los que van a jugarlo
2017-05-13 22:01 game rock: me fascina es la parte kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkd
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: siiii
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: muchos misearan ahi
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: xDD
2017-05-13 22:01 game rock: XDDDDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: yo muy raro las misseo
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: xD
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: orz yo podri pasarla pero hay un 1/6 por ahi que me bajo la autoestima
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: xDDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: D:
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: XDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: culpa la song (???)
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: ACTION runs
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: sep
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: por cierto
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: xDD
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: hay un doble ddk ddk
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: que no se siente muy natural que sigamos
2017-05-13 22:03 game rock: donde?
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: en varias partes como
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:570 (119,120,121,122,123,124) -
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: aun estoy testeando para saber que parte cambiar
2017-05-13 22:03 game rock: ah vale owo
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: orz
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: maldita laptop
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: se me reinicia a cualquier momento
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: aaah ya vi el ddk ddk
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: pero no solo es el ddk
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: osea
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: solamente está al principio y al final
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: por la consistencia
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: si
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: pero a lo que voy es
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: que 00:24:056 (114,115,116,117,118) - esta overmapeado
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: que eso pudo haber ido en
2017-05-13 22:08 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:742 -
2017-05-13 22:08 -Sh1n1-: y los dos tripletes pudieron estar atras
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo no se si te guste
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: mover
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:142 (115) - hacia 00:23:970 -
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:656 (120) - hacia 00:24:827 -
2017-05-13 22:10 -Sh1n1-: y cambiar esa ultima nota a k
2017-05-13 22:10 game rock: suena bien :3
2017-05-13 22:12 -Sh1n1-: luego de eso
2017-05-13 22:12 game rock: 00:35:199 - aqui lo aplique igual
2017-05-13 22:12 -Sh1n1-: en 00:25:856 -
2017-05-13 22:13 -Sh1n1-: nice baka, lo que em encanta es nuestros estilos son parecidos pero me has superado por mucho
2017-05-13 22:13 -Sh1n1-: yo normalmente no podria hacer un mapa asi
2017-05-13 22:13 game rock: claro que no te he superado e.e
2017-05-13 22:13 game rock: tu eres pro
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: yo no soy pro
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: baka
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: bueno
2017-05-13 22:14 game rock: que hago en 00:25:856 - ?
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: aaa
2017-05-13 22:14 game rock: si lo eres, baka
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: esque
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:742 (120,121,122,123,124,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) -
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: se siente demasiado repetitivo (respecto a los quintuplets
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: por lo que si eliminas 00:25:856 (130) -
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: suena mucho mejor tbh
2017-05-13 22:15 -Sh1n1-: eso seria todo en esa seccion
2017-05-13 22:15 game rock: eso te iba a decir xDD
2017-05-13 22:15 -Sh1n1-: xD
2017-05-13 22:16 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:16 game rock: 00:36:827 - la quite igual allí
2017-05-13 22:16 -Sh1n1-: sip, tu ya sabes como es la consistencia <3
2017-05-13 22:18 game rock: cual es el siguiente?
2017-05-13 22:18 game rock: shi<3
2017-05-13 22:21 -Sh1n1-: mmm
2017-05-13 22:21 -Sh1n1-: joder mapeaste muy bien
2017-05-13 22:21 game rock: baka, no se si es mejor que me dejes mod, debo irme en minutos ;;
2017-05-13 22:21 game rock: es tarde acá
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: :c
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: resiste un poco baka
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: no es que pueda encontrar mucho
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: como consejo
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: te podria decir que
2017-05-13 22:22 game rock: vale baka disculpa si te estoy apresurando
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: 00:45:142 (292,293,294,295) - agregar variedad con esos dobles
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: noo te preocupes baka
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: esque esta bien
2017-05-13 22:23 game rock: como que variedad? le agregue notas?
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: nop
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: osea
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: tu sabes que la consistencia tmb puede trabajarse en secciones verdad
2017-05-13 22:23 game rock: aja?
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: jodeeeeer maldita laptoppppp
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-05-13 22:24 game rock: XDDD
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: como seguia diciendo
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: ese dk dk 00:45:142 (292,293,294,295) -
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: se siente demasiado repetitivo en todo el kiai
2017-05-13 22:25 game rock: podría hacerle un Ctrl G
2017-05-13 22:25 game rock: no?
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: ajam
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: al principio
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: dk dk
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: luego kd kd
2017-05-13 22:26 -Sh1n1-: y luego dk kk
2017-05-13 22:26 -Sh1n1-: algo de tres o 4 variedades y luego repetirlo todo denuevo
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo tu kiai esta dividido en 3 partes
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: listo
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: primero dk dk
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: okas
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: luego?
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: luego dk kd
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: kk dk
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: kd dk
2017-05-13 22:28 game rock: 00:51:142 (343,344,345,346) - en estas partes igual debo hacerlo verdad?
2017-05-13 22:29 -Sh1n1-: ajam la siguiente seccion depende a como vaya tu consistencia
2017-05-13 22:30 game rock: hecho
2017-05-13 22:30 -Sh1n1-: listo
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: alguna otra parte que guardaste consistencia ahi?
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: los otros kiais?
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: por lo visto no
2017-05-13 22:31 game rock: nop
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: los otros tienen sonidos diferentes
2017-05-13 22:31 game rock: Sip
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: 01:00:742 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466) -
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: esta muy bonito pero
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: como es largo
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: me parece que lo comenzaste muy antes
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo el death stream debio empezar mas o menos en 01:01:427 -
2017-05-13 22:33 -Sh1n1-: asi que 01:01:342 - y 01:01:170 - no creo que deberian tener nota
2017-05-13 22:35 game rock: hecho bakita :3
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: 02:09:913 (143) - igual ahi
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: no lo siento tan necesario
2017-05-13 22:36 game rock: vale
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: y 02:09:827 (142) - podria seguir con el k
2017-05-13 22:38 -Sh1n1-: no es que me vuelva picky xd pero que sigues en 02:06:313 - 02:06:485 - ?
2017-05-13 22:38 game rock: yupi xDD :3
2017-05-13 22:39 game rock: quise variedad xd
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: con?
2017-05-13 22:40 game rock: pero si quieres los elimino
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: no es por mi gusto, solo que se siente sobremapeado para una parte tan calmada
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: sobretodo porque 02:06:742 (121,122,123,124,125) - es mas prominente
2017-05-13 22:41 -Sh1n1-: pero 02:06:056 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - tiene mas notas cuando no hay muchas baterias prominentes
2017-05-13 22:41 -Sh1n1-: si me dejo entender xd
2017-05-13 22:41 game rock: si xD
2017-05-13 22:42 game rock: las elimino
2017-05-13 22:42 game rock: sha owo
2017-05-13 22:43 game rock: y en el kiai no te preocupes ya varie esto 02:13:427 (172,173,174,175) -
2017-05-13 22:44 -Sh1n1-: si me di cuenta
2017-05-13 22:44 -Sh1n1-: (y) baka
2017-05-13 22:46 -Sh1n1-: 03:17:542 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - hay como odio eso
2017-05-13 22:46 -Sh1n1-: xDD
2017-05-13 22:48 game rock: XDDDD JAJAJA
2017-05-13 22:50 -Sh1n1-: 04:24:056 - ahi no quieres usar 1/6?
2017-05-13 22:52 game rock: Nop, no lo quiero complicar mucho ewe
2017-05-13 22:52 game rock: aparte no me gusta mucho el 1/6 tampoco xD
2017-05-13 22:52 -Sh1n1-: <3
2017-05-13 22:52 -Sh1n1-: mis dedos te lo agradecen
2017-05-13 22:53 game rock: jajajaja <3
2017-05-13 22:54 -Sh1n1-: bueno creo que eso es todo
2017-05-13 22:56 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: entonces posteo
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: el irc
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: suerte baka
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: dale baka, te aagradezco un miilon de gracias :D/
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: te debo una grande
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: no me debes nada baka
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: <3
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: para eso estamos
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-Sh1n1- wrote:

IRC con mi baka
2017-05-13 21:52 -Sh1n1-: holly suena muy bien
2017-05-13 21:53 game rock: Gracias >ww<
2017-05-13 21:54 game rock: Me alegro mucho que te guste :33 lo que quiero es que le gusten a los players y se sientan comodos, no que me guste a mi ya que debo pensar en los demás, porque ellos son los que van a jugarlo
2017-05-13 22:01 game rock: me fascina es la parte kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkd
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: siiii
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: muchos misearan ahi
2017-05-13 22:01 -Sh1n1-: xDD
2017-05-13 22:01 game rock: XDDDDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: yo muy raro las misseo
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: xD
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: orz yo podri pasarla pero hay un 1/6 por ahi que me bajo la autoestima
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: xDDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: D:
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: XDDD
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: culpa la song (???)
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: ACTION runs
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: sep
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: por cierto
2017-05-13 22:02 game rock: xDD
2017-05-13 22:02 -Sh1n1-: hay un doble ddk ddk
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: que no se siente muy natural que sigamos
2017-05-13 22:03 game rock: donde?
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: en varias partes como
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:570 (119,120,121,122,123,124) -
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:03 -Sh1n1-: aun estoy testeando para saber que parte cambiar
2017-05-13 22:03 game rock: ah vale owo
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: orz
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: maldita laptop
2017-05-13 22:06 -Sh1n1-: se me reinicia a cualquier momento
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: aaah ya vi el ddk ddk
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: pero no solo es el ddk
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: osea
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: solamente está al principio y al final
2017-05-13 22:07 game rock: por la consistencia
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: si
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: pero a lo que voy es
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: que 00:24:056 (114,115,116,117,118) - esta overmapeado
2017-05-13 22:07 -Sh1n1-: que eso pudo haber ido en
2017-05-13 22:08 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:742 -
2017-05-13 22:08 -Sh1n1-: y los dos tripletes pudieron estar atras
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo no se si te guste
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: mover
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:142 (115) - hacia 00:23:970 -
2017-05-13 22:09 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:656 (120) - hacia 00:24:827 -
2017-05-13 22:10 -Sh1n1-: y cambiar esa ultima nota a k
2017-05-13 22:10 game rock: suena bien :3
2017-05-13 22:12 -Sh1n1-: luego de eso
2017-05-13 22:12 game rock: 00:35:199 - aqui lo aplique igual
2017-05-13 22:12 -Sh1n1-: en 00:25:856 -
2017-05-13 22:13 -Sh1n1-: nice baka, lo que em encanta es nuestros estilos son parecidos pero me has superado por mucho
2017-05-13 22:13 -Sh1n1-: yo normalmente no podria hacer un mapa asi
2017-05-13 22:13 game rock: claro que no te he superado e.e
2017-05-13 22:13 game rock: tu eres pro
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: yo no soy pro
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: baka
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: bueno
2017-05-13 22:14 game rock: que hago en 00:25:856 - ?
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: aaa
2017-05-13 22:14 game rock: si lo eres, baka
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: esque
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: 00:24:742 (120,121,122,123,124,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136) -
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: se siente demasiado repetitivo (respecto a los quintuplets
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: por lo que si eliminas 00:25:856 (130) -
2017-05-13 22:14 -Sh1n1-: suena mucho mejor tbh
2017-05-13 22:15 -Sh1n1-: eso seria todo en esa seccion
2017-05-13 22:15 game rock: eso te iba a decir xDD
2017-05-13 22:15 -Sh1n1-: xD
2017-05-13 22:16 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:16 game rock: 00:36:827 - la quite igual allí
2017-05-13 22:16 -Sh1n1-: sip, tu ya sabes como es la consistencia <3
2017-05-13 22:18 game rock: cual es el siguiente?
2017-05-13 22:18 game rock: shi<3
2017-05-13 22:21 -Sh1n1-: mmm
2017-05-13 22:21 -Sh1n1-: joder mapeaste muy bien
2017-05-13 22:21 game rock: baka, no se si es mejor que me dejes mod, debo irme en minutos ;;
2017-05-13 22:21 game rock: es tarde acá
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: :c
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: resiste un poco baka
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: no es que pueda encontrar mucho
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: como consejo
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: te podria decir que
2017-05-13 22:22 game rock: vale baka disculpa si te estoy apresurando
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: 00:45:142 (292,293,294,295) - agregar variedad con esos dobles
2017-05-13 22:22 -Sh1n1-: noo te preocupes baka
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: esque esta bien
2017-05-13 22:23 game rock: como que variedad? le agregue notas?
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: nop
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: osea
2017-05-13 22:23 -Sh1n1-: tu sabes que la consistencia tmb puede trabajarse en secciones verdad
2017-05-13 22:23 game rock: aja?
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: jodeeeeer maldita laptoppppp
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-05-13 22:24 game rock: XDDD
2017-05-13 22:24 -Sh1n1-: como seguia diciendo
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: ese dk dk 00:45:142 (292,293,294,295) -
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: se siente demasiado repetitivo en todo el kiai
2017-05-13 22:25 game rock: podría hacerle un Ctrl G
2017-05-13 22:25 game rock: no?
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: ajam
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: al principio
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: dk dk
2017-05-13 22:25 -Sh1n1-: luego kd kd
2017-05-13 22:26 -Sh1n1-: y luego dk kk
2017-05-13 22:26 -Sh1n1-: algo de tres o 4 variedades y luego repetirlo todo denuevo
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo tu kiai esta dividido en 3 partes
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: listo
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: primero dk dk
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: okas
2017-05-13 22:27 -Sh1n1-: luego?
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: luego dk kd
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: kk dk
2017-05-13 22:27 game rock: kd dk
2017-05-13 22:28 game rock: 00:51:142 (343,344,345,346) - en estas partes igual debo hacerlo verdad?
2017-05-13 22:29 -Sh1n1-: ajam la siguiente seccion depende a como vaya tu consistencia
2017-05-13 22:30 game rock: hecho
2017-05-13 22:30 -Sh1n1-: listo
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: alguna otra parte que guardaste consistencia ahi?
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: los otros kiais?
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: por lo visto no
2017-05-13 22:31 game rock: nop
2017-05-13 22:31 -Sh1n1-: los otros tienen sonidos diferentes
2017-05-13 22:31 game rock: Sip
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: 01:00:742 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466) -
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: esta muy bonito pero
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: como es largo
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: me parece que lo comenzaste muy antes
2017-05-13 22:32 -Sh1n1-: por ejemplo el death stream debio empezar mas o menos en 01:01:427 -
2017-05-13 22:33 -Sh1n1-: asi que 01:01:342 - y 01:01:170 - no creo que deberian tener nota
2017-05-13 22:35 game rock: hecho bakita :3
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: 02:09:913 (143) - igual ahi
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: no lo siento tan necesario
2017-05-13 22:36 game rock: vale
2017-05-13 22:36 -Sh1n1-: y 02:09:827 (142) - podria seguir con el k
2017-05-13 22:38 -Sh1n1-: no es que me vuelva picky xd pero que sigues en 02:06:313 - 02:06:485 - ?
2017-05-13 22:38 game rock: yupi xDD :3
2017-05-13 22:39 game rock: quise variedad xd
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: con?
2017-05-13 22:40 game rock: pero si quieres los elimino
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: no es por mi gusto, solo que se siente sobremapeado para una parte tan calmada
2017-05-13 22:40 -Sh1n1-: sobretodo porque 02:06:742 (121,122,123,124,125) - es mas prominente
2017-05-13 22:41 -Sh1n1-: pero 02:06:056 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - tiene mas notas cuando no hay muchas baterias prominentes
2017-05-13 22:41 -Sh1n1-: si me dejo entender xd
2017-05-13 22:41 game rock: si xD
2017-05-13 22:42 game rock: las elimino
2017-05-13 22:42 game rock: sha owo
2017-05-13 22:43 game rock: y en el kiai no te preocupes ya varie esto 02:13:427 (172,173,174,175) -
2017-05-13 22:44 -Sh1n1-: si me di cuenta
2017-05-13 22:44 -Sh1n1-: (y) baka
2017-05-13 22:46 -Sh1n1-: 03:17:542 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - hay como odio eso
2017-05-13 22:46 -Sh1n1-: xDD
2017-05-13 22:48 game rock: XDDDD JAJAJA
2017-05-13 22:50 -Sh1n1-: 04:24:056 - ahi no quieres usar 1/6?
2017-05-13 22:52 game rock: Nop, no lo quiero complicar mucho ewe
2017-05-13 22:52 game rock: aparte no me gusta mucho el 1/6 tampoco xD
2017-05-13 22:52 -Sh1n1-: <3
2017-05-13 22:52 -Sh1n1-: mis dedos te lo agradecen
2017-05-13 22:53 game rock: jajajaja <3
2017-05-13 22:54 -Sh1n1-: bueno creo que eso es todo
2017-05-13 22:56 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: entonces posteo
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: el irc
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: suerte baka
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: dale baka, te aagradezco un miilon de gracias :D/
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: te debo una grande
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: >.<
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: no me debes nada baka
2017-05-13 22:57 game rock: <3
2017-05-13 22:57 -Sh1n1-: para eso estamos
Muchísimas gracias baka >ww< te agradezco mucho :3 >//<


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yo

[Mod]
00:20:199 - change kat ?

00:47:542 - maybe change note like this to don to make consistency with 00:46:170 - (also a good mirror)
00:53:027 - ^
00:58:513 - ^

how about delete 01:56:027 (68,69) - and place note in 01:55:942 - | 01:56:113 - sounds more important here
03:15:827 - pattern doesn't friendly to hit at this point, maybe try place kkkdddkkkdddkkddk

03:58:342 - same reason ^, try mirror the pattern kkdkkdkkdkk instead dkkkdkkkdkkkd

05:14:285 - change kat ?

that's all from me
good luck
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[R] wrote:

yo

[Mod]
00:20:199 - change kat ? Fixed

00:47:542 - maybe change note like this to don to make consistency with 00:46:170 - (also a good mirror) No, I want to variate a bit and keep the melody.
00:53:027 - ^ ^
00:58:513 - ^ ^

how about delete 01:56:027 (68,69) - and place note in 01:55:942 - | 01:56:113 - sounds more important here I add a k 01:55:942 - and a d 01:56:113 -
03:15:827 - pattern doesn't friendly to hit at this point, maybe try place kkkdddkkkdddkkddk Amazing!, Fixed

03:58:342 - same reason ^, try mirror the pattern kkdkkdkkdkk instead dkkkdkkkdkkkd No, I better leave it as it is.

05:14:285 - change kat ? Sure

that's all from me
good luck
Thank you so much >ww<


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