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t+pazolite - Pumpin' Junkies [Taiko]
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00:10:298 (1,2) - Add a circle
00:30:825 - ^
00:42:667 (1) - d 00:45:035 (1) - here too
01:03:825 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) add a blue circle
00:30:825 - ^
00:42:667 (1) - d 00:45:035 (1) - here too
01:03:825 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) add a blue circle
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[Oni]
00:10:298 (1) - the sound is the same with 00:10:139 (1) - it should be k
00:10:456 (1) - heavy sound here, d is better
00:10:771 (1) - ^
00:23:246 - add a d cuz u always use this rhythm like the former 00:21:982 (1,1) - and the backward 00:25:771 (1,1) - and there's the same rythm here
00:30:983 (1) - k, the reason is the same with what I said above. You always use d+k to represent the rhythm and the sound which should be put k here is a little delayed to 00:30:983 (1) but it still need to be emphasized
00:30:825 - it's blank here but there's the same sound with 00:30:193 (1,1,1) - so I suggest u to put something here
00:40:456 (1) - k cuz there's a finish and u followed the same sound here 00:39:193 (1) - too
00:41:404 (1) - cuz there're drum and finish sounds, changing to d is better
00:41:719 (1) - and this can be k
00:42:193 (1,1,1) - these can be k cuz the drum sounds here are smaller than 00:42:035 (1) -
00:42:667 (1) - d
00:43:930 (1) - d
00:45:035 (1) - almost no sound here, it should not be d
00:45:193 (1) - d
00:45:509 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:47:246 (1,1,1) - the three are the same drum sounds but this one 00:47:404 (1) - is heavier than others, so it should be d and other can be k
00:50:246 (1) - the same sound with 00:50:088 (1) -
00:50:561 (1) - k
00:51:351 - it's not good to be blank here cuz there's a drum sound and u follow it very often.
01:01:614 (1) - d
01:03:825 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I think this part can be more simple cuz there're less sounds
00:47:719 (1) - d
00:48:983 (1) - d
01:11:719 (1) - d, the same sound with the former but it's a little bit louder
01:44:246 (1) - sound becomes heavier here, it can be d
01:45:351 (1,1) - u always follow the two sounds before. why are they two k?
I think the most problematic in the kiai part is that there're many same rhythms which also appears in other parts but u follow them with different k/d like 01:50:878 (1,1,1) - with 00:52:772 (1,1,1,1,1) -
ok small mod
( the song is too long and too many rhythms and problems are the same orz
I'm sorry if my English is not good to express what I want to say.
00:10:298 (1) - the sound is the same with 00:10:139 (1) - it should be k
00:10:456 (1) - heavy sound here, d is better
00:10:771 (1) - ^
00:23:246 - add a d cuz u always use this rhythm like the former 00:21:982 (1,1) - and the backward 00:25:771 (1,1) - and there's the same rythm here
00:30:983 (1) - k, the reason is the same with what I said above. You always use d+k to represent the rhythm and the sound which should be put k here is a little delayed to 00:30:983 (1) but it still need to be emphasized
00:30:825 - it's blank here but there's the same sound with 00:30:193 (1,1,1) - so I suggest u to put something here
00:40:456 (1) - k cuz there's a finish and u followed the same sound here 00:39:193 (1) - too
00:41:404 (1) - cuz there're drum and finish sounds, changing to d is better
00:41:719 (1) - and this can be k
00:42:193 (1,1,1) - these can be k cuz the drum sounds here are smaller than 00:42:035 (1) -
00:42:667 (1) - d
00:43:930 (1) - d
00:45:035 (1) - almost no sound here, it should not be d
00:45:193 (1) - d
00:45:509 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:47:246 (1,1,1) - the three are the same drum sounds but this one 00:47:404 (1) - is heavier than others, so it should be d and other can be k
00:50:246 (1) - the same sound with 00:50:088 (1) -
00:50:561 (1) - k
00:51:351 - it's not good to be blank here cuz there's a drum sound and u follow it very often.
01:01:614 (1) - d
01:03:825 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I think this part can be more simple cuz there're less sounds
00:47:719 (1) - d
00:48:983 (1) - d
01:11:719 (1) - d, the same sound with the former but it's a little bit louder
01:44:246 (1) - sound becomes heavier here, it can be d
01:45:351 (1,1) - u always follow the two sounds before. why are they two k?
I think the most problematic in the kiai part is that there're many same rhythms which also appears in other parts but u follow them with different k/d like 01:50:878 (1,1,1) - with 00:52:772 (1,1,1,1,1) -
ok small mod
( the song is too long and too many rhythms and problems are the same orzI'm sorry if my English is not good to express what I want to say.
gl
hi m4m~ (｡◕‿◕｡)
[ Oni ]
OD 9 is so hard X(
suitable 4~5
kiai point is a few. recommand to add more.
How about Preview Point 03:48:351 (1) - ?
00:10:456 (1,1) - DD? this part sounds only bass.
00:16:140 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - add some more note. because dududududududu(?) sound start and same pattern is bored.
00:30:666 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - so many d. how about kkkkk k d?
00:40:139 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^. recommand to change some d to k.
00:43:930 (1) - d?
00:46:456 (1) - ^
00:48:983 (1) - ^ -> i think these part (the part that start new bar) is better d more than k. But this is my thought. so after this line, not write same thing
00:51:509 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - many of these same pattern is in this map. Recommand to follow melody line or change color.
01:00:351 (1) - d next to only d stream is hard to catch beat.
01:07:140 (2) - add d.
01:09:667 (2) - ^
01:58:693 (2) - add d?
02:03:746 (2) - ^
02:08:798 (2) - add k
02:24:351 (1,1) - ctrl g. same reason 01:00:351 (1) -
02:43:930 (1) - k. reason ^
03:15:509 (1,1) - long and second break time. Put simple pattern like d k d k.
03:48:193 (2) - add k
I like this song and i think this is awesome map xD
But you tend to use same pattern in this map. It may causes boring, even same color.
Good luck~
[ Oni ]
OD 9 is so hard X(
suitable 4~5
kiai point is a few. recommand to add more.
How about Preview Point 03:48:351 (1) - ?
00:10:456 (1,1) - DD? this part sounds only bass.
00:16:140 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - add some more note. because dududududududu(?) sound start and same pattern is bored.
00:30:666 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - so many d. how about kkkkk k d?
00:40:139 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^. recommand to change some d to k.
00:43:930 (1) - d?
00:46:456 (1) - ^
00:48:983 (1) - ^ -> i think these part (the part that start new bar) is better d more than k. But this is my thought. so after this line, not write same thing
00:51:509 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - many of these same pattern is in this map. Recommand to follow melody line or change color.
01:00:351 (1) - d next to only d stream is hard to catch beat.
01:07:140 (2) - add d.
01:09:667 (2) - ^
01:58:693 (2) - add d?
02:03:746 (2) - ^
02:08:798 (2) - add k
02:24:351 (1,1) - ctrl g. same reason 01:00:351 (1) -
02:43:930 (1) - k. reason ^
03:15:509 (1,1) - long and second break time. Put simple pattern like d k d k.
03:48:193 (2) - add k
I like this song and i think this is awesome map xD
But you tend to use same pattern in this map. It may causes boring, even same color.
Good luck~