I apologize for that long of the delay, I had some important things to tackle with
Thanks! Your mod definitely was really helpful to clarify some of the issues that I've missedGarden wrote:
General
- use this instead for the unicode title -> Alice in Misanthrope -厭世アリス- Fixed
- 01:19:277 - set kiai to the redline too, now its conflicting with the green one Fixed
EasyNormal
- 02:20:693 (1) - this rhythm pattern is inappropriate for beginners to read, I suggest https://puu.sh/yxzAF/4829c34757.png to simplify things Fixed according to your suggestion
Hard
- 00:10:419 (3,1) - spacing is off from what you generally apply to 1/2 gaps (1.0x) Fixed
- 00:12:861 (2,3) - should be 1.1x like other 1/1 gaps ^
- 00:13:209 (3,1) - should be 1.0x instead like i mentioned before. please use consistent spacing for a certain gap, and check the rest of the map yourself ^
- 00:16:349 - I feel this note should be clickable, ctrl-g 00:15:651 (2,3) - rhythm maybe? Fixed
- 00:54:104 (1) - a bit offscreen under 4:3 resolution Fixed
- 01:52:067 (3) - should nc refering to 01:43:695 (1,2) - etc. Fixed
- 00:13:558 (1,2) - spacing is kinda inconsistent here Fixed
- 00:16:698 (2,3) - 02:05:686 (2,3) - make the 1/4 gap clearer by overlapping the sliders more? https://puu.sh/yxA3Y/7c2e3e414e.png Fixed
- 00:22:871 (4,5,6) - a bit triggered to see the 5-6 spacing inconsistent with 345 lol Fixed
- 00:25:849 (5,6) - the two circles are unsnapped Fixed
- 00:27:949 (2,1) - I don't like the idea of overlapping here, it looks like a 1/4 gap, to achieve similar effects you might wanna stack them instead Fixed
- 00:33:175 (5) - nc? Fixed
- 00:45:035 (3,4) - visually too close, I suggest adjusting this way https://puu.sh/yxAl0/cddd8ae338.png Fixed according to your suggestion
- 00:53:407 (3,4,5,1) - suffered from similar issue, you can just move 00:54:104 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - the whole thing down Fixed
Collab InsaneInsane
- 00:38:756 (2) - ctrl-g + nc maybe, now they seem too close as 1/1 gap Fixed
- 01:57:649 (6) - nc like 01:54:858 (1) - Fixed
Misanthropy
- 00:39:366 - I think this should be clickable as well like your previous triplets I think I'll keep it as it is just to create more variety
- 00:42:943 (1,4) - only this jump pattern is full triangle (1 4 stacking) , maybe modify a bit to be consistent with your general patterning Fixed
- 02:18:252 (2,3) - maybe you wanna do the stack but spacing is too small all in a sudden when the music doesn't suggest so, random suggestion: https://puu.sh/yxBdC/df209020f7.pngFixed
Quality of the set overall is ok, but imo you would need some further detail polishment in your higher difficulties (enh are pretty decent I'd say), but this can be somehow subjective.
- 00:06:149 (2,3) - spacing is too unintuitive to be read as 1/4 gap, can you reduce the spacing here? Fixed
- 00:50:878 (6,1,2) - this is tricky to play, mind unstacking them a bit? like your other streams Fixed
- 01:02:302 (6) - I suggest you add nc here, or the 01:01:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is weird to read Fixed
Good luck with the set and hope my mod helps!
Yup, LeaF is great!sahuang wrote:
I think I downloaded this map at the first month of your submission because it is by LeaF lol