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Misanthropy
00:01:530 (3) - even though you want variety, I would still just make this a 1/2 slider for consistency with other similar sounds
00:06:162 (4,5) - looks too much like a 1/2 gap given the spacing you gave 00:05:901 (3,4) - is a 1/4
00:07:383 (6) - If you want to map this sound then there should be a stream here, as you can't map it once and then ignore it in other parts
00:07:470 (7,8) - map the sound on the blue tick here between these 2 notes
00:12:180 (1) - not really a fan of overlapping this sldier with a stream as I think it doesn't look nice but tmaybe thats just me
00:13:575 (1) - would start a triple at the end of this slider as I feel that the sounds should be cliackable
00:45:397 (2,3) - the sound here is 1/8 and not 1/4
01:05:018 (5,7) - would delete these 2 for more emphasis on the louder sounds on the other notes, you also didn't map the sound on this notes at 01:04:670 (2,3) - between these 2 on the red tick
01:07:897 (1) - nc not needed, it also takes away form the importance you gave the nc on 01:08:071 (1) -
01:22:501 (5) - the sound you mapped this onto is present throughout almost the entire ki9ai and most of the time you did not map it so also don't do that here
01:22:763 (7,8) - makes this like one of those 3/4 sliders as you mapped it like that previously
01:24:158 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - They aren't in groups of 3 with distinct sounds on the 1's, so make it an accelaerator stream if you still want the increased intensity as this spacing increase ins't very logical
01:27:123 (5,1) - overlap pls ( did not mention it that much but this is a really easy fix
01:29:652 (5) - again, would delete this note for more emphasis on the heavy sounds but it's just a preference
01:33:664 (3) - don't hear something important on this blue tick
01:52:763 (1) - this doesn't feel like kiai to me, would just turn it off
Also try and incorporate some more sliders/reverses in this section as it's really always the exact same rhythm for a long time
This map is ok rhythm wise but needs work on aesthetics as you have a tone of overlaps and stacks where it just doesn't look good like 00:32:490 (3,1) - 00:33:536 (2,6) - 00:35:978 (1,7) - 00:38:071 (3,5) - (this one is really bad, sliderart should fit perfectly into other sliderart)
Some triples are also very questionable in this map
Gl with the map
00:01:530 (3) - even though you want variety, I would still just make this a 1/2 slider for consistency with other similar sounds
00:06:162 (4,5) - looks too much like a 1/2 gap given the spacing you gave 00:05:901 (3,4) - is a 1/4
00:07:383 (6) - If you want to map this sound then there should be a stream here, as you can't map it once and then ignore it in other parts
00:07:470 (7,8) - map the sound on the blue tick here between these 2 notes
00:12:180 (1) - not really a fan of overlapping this sldier with a stream as I think it doesn't look nice but tmaybe thats just me
00:13:575 (1) - would start a triple at the end of this slider as I feel that the sounds should be cliackable
00:45:397 (2,3) - the sound here is 1/8 and not 1/4
01:05:018 (5,7) - would delete these 2 for more emphasis on the louder sounds on the other notes, you also didn't map the sound on this notes at 01:04:670 (2,3) - between these 2 on the red tick
01:07:897 (1) - nc not needed, it also takes away form the importance you gave the nc on 01:08:071 (1) -
01:22:501 (5) - the sound you mapped this onto is present throughout almost the entire ki9ai and most of the time you did not map it so also don't do that here
01:22:763 (7,8) - makes this like one of those 3/4 sliders as you mapped it like that previously
01:24:158 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - They aren't in groups of 3 with distinct sounds on the 1's, so make it an accelaerator stream if you still want the increased intensity as this spacing increase ins't very logical
01:27:123 (5,1) - overlap pls ( did not mention it that much but this is a really easy fix
01:29:652 (5) - again, would delete this note for more emphasis on the heavy sounds but it's just a preference
01:33:664 (3) - don't hear something important on this blue tick
01:52:763 (1) - this doesn't feel like kiai to me, would just turn it off
Also try and incorporate some more sliders/reverses in this section as it's really always the exact same rhythm for a long time
This map is ok rhythm wise but needs work on aesthetics as you have a tone of overlaps and stacks where it just doesn't look good like 00:32:490 (3,1) - 00:33:536 (2,6) - 00:35:978 (1,7) - 00:38:071 (3,5) - (this one is really bad, sliderart should fit perfectly into other sliderart)
Some triples are also very questionable in this map
Gl with the map