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Topic Starter
Kei

ikari_kyon wrote:

winber1 wrote:

General
i_k's insane

00:04:943 (5) - try this rhythm?: what rhythm :(?
00:09:443 (2) - unstack? nope >w<
00:34:398 (2) - move note 1/4 tick forward and rearrange spacing souns better, thanks :)
01:24:034 (5) - i wuold rather play five notes than have 1 repeat slider, but that's just me o.o
01:46:534 (x) - add note
01:46:806 (x) - ^
if you add those notes. then i would rearrange 01:46:397 (3,4,5,6) - so that it makes more sense rather than have a weird jump at 01:46:806 (6,1) - ok I didnt get you x3
01:53:488 (9) - new combo new :3
02:22:124 (2,3) - i would space this a little further apart. spaced =o

--nothing is really wrong with the diff, but you could follow vocals a little more. many times you just follow something else or just make up some sort of drum beat (that, although makes sense, i think could be made more interesting and fun to play) thanks x3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[i_k's Insane]
00:35:779 (7,1) - do you think it's too hard..? I dont know :?
02:19:688 (7) - should end 1/4 earlier. ok

Don't want to focus on certain places to fix (because it's really...there are many of them), you may pay more attention to the flow, and also the structure (i mean try to put notes in a more good-looking way) thanks .w.
Updated.
winber1

ikari_kyon wrote:

winber1 wrote:

General
i_k's insane
00:04:943 (5) - try this rhythm?: what rhythm :(?
fkfkfk...
oops, and i think i lost that image somewhere lol. sorry >_> i wasn't paying attention. it was just a suggestion so it wasn't a big deal anyways.
hitmefast
normal

clean the sliders omg :O
tags:gackpoid ikari_kyon?? add name of song and artist maybe? check tags pls :X
offset in: 00:02:230

00:01:684 delete
01:00:320^
01:04:684 delete or add hitsound
01:58:139 move this slider here 01:58:411
02:02:502 add hitsound

hard

offset + tags also

02:41:233 solve this slider pls
02:46:552 ^
02:51:052 ^
02:54:597 ^
02:55:006 ^

insane

offset + tags too...

03:12:052 (opinion)change finish sound to wistle/normal?
03:17:506 make it clean
please clean the 'inherited points'

nice insane ^^

also nice strange sliders for normal and hard xd


star~ :3
Topic Starter
Kei

hitmefast wrote:

normal

clean the sliders omg :O ;_____;
tags:gackpoid ikari_kyon?? add name of song and artist maybe? check tags pls :X No. El nombre de la canción y Artista ya cuentan como Tags, no es necesario ponerlos denuevo como Tag. Esto también pasa con Source.
offset in: 00:02:230 Ok.

00:01:684 delete No D:
01:00:320^ ^
01:04:684 delete or add hitsound ^ (No delete, y hitsound ya tiene.)
01:58:139 move this slider here 01:58:411 Ok.
02:02:502 add hitsound ? ;__;

hard

offset + tags also Ok offset. No tags.

02:41:233 solve this slider pls Ok.
02:46:552 ^ ^
02:51:052 ^ ^
02:54:597 ^ ^
02:55:006 ^ ^

insane

offset + tags too... Yo le cambié el offset, pero no tags.

also nice strange sliders for normal and hard xd Me gusta hacer diseños con los sliders c:

star~ :3 Gracias por la star y por moddear :D/ Hubieses moddeado en español. Hablamos español Kyon y yo :3
jossieP

hitmefast wrote:

insane

offset + tags too... tags?¿?¿? :?

03:12:052 (opinion)change finish sound to wistle/normal? normal sound set??? I dont like it
03:17:506 make it clean where is the garbage?
please clean the 'inherited points' :?

nice insane ^^ thanks? =o

no modifications, no new file...
hitmefast

Keilara wrote:

hitmefast wrote:

normal

clean the sliders omg :O ;_____;
tags:gackpoid ikari_kyon?? add name of song and artist maybe? check tags pls :X No. El nombre de la canción y Artista ya cuentan como Tags, no es necesario ponerlos denuevo como Tag. Esto también pasa con Source.
offset in: 00:02:230 Ok.

00:01:684 delete No D:
01:00:320^ ^
01:04:684 delete or add hitsound ^ (No delete, y hitsound ya tiene.)
01:58:139 move this slider here 01:58:411 Ok.
02:02:502 add hitsound ? ;__;

hard

offset + tags also Ok offset. No tags.

02:41:233 solve this slider pls Ok.
02:46:552 ^ ^
02:51:052 ^ ^
02:54:597 ^ ^
02:55:006 ^ ^

insane

offset + tags too... Yo le cambié el offset, pero no tags.

also nice strange sliders for normal and hard xd Me gusta hacer diseños con los sliders c:

star~ :3 Gracias por la star y por moddear :D/ Hubieses moddeado en español. Hablamos español Kyon y yo :3

hehe es la mania XD
te agrego ;3 os agrego ;3

haver si algun dia hacemos una collab o una guest ^^
Topic Starter
Kei

hitmefast wrote:

hehe es la mania XD
te agrego ;3 os agrego ;3

haver si algun dia hacemos una collab o una guest ^^
Genial n-n yo también te agregué. Espero que podamos hablar c:
[Shalon]
Normal
fine

Hard
00:51:597 (4,5) - why don't you use the same slider with00:51:051 (3) ?
01:09:733 (8) - how about delete it?
02:18:461 (4) - delete and replace it with 02:18:597 (5). (If you'll follow it, make the slider more longer)

03:15:052 (4) - stack it with 03:13:688 (1)

use more new combo.

Insane
00:09:596 - add a note?
fine.
Topic Starter
Kei

[Shalon] wrote:

Normal
fine :0!!

Hard
00:51:597 (4,5) - why don't you use the same slider with00:51:051 (3) ? Ok.
01:09:733 (8) - how about delete it? No D:
02:18:461 (4) - delete and replace it with 02:18:597 (5). (If you'll follow it, make the slider more longer) Ok!

03:15:052 (4) - stack it with 03:13:688 (1) Done

use more new combo. Ok. I added more new combos in this update. Thanks for your mod and star c:
Hernan
:)
jossieP

hitmefast wrote:

haver si algun dia hacemos una collab o una guest ^^ collabs no x.x
jossieP

[Shalon] wrote:

Insane
00:09:596 - add a note? feels weird x3 srry
fine. thanks :)
Roddie
Hey. ^^

General
  1. i_k's Insane has a different preview point than Normal and Hard.
  2. I don't think the lead-in time is necessary for Normal and Hard.
  3. i_k's Insane has a different Offset than Hard and Normal. I recommend using Hard's and Normal's Offset. Don't forget to resnap all the notes and the timing points (Green Lines).

Normal
  1. 01:58:415 (8)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
  2. 02:04:415 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
  3. 02:21:324 (1)-^
  4. 02:26:233 (1)-Add a finish.
  5. 03:13:688- I think it's better to start off the kiai time on 03:14:233.
  6. 03:27:051 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.

Hard
  1. 01:03:324 (2)-Add a finish.
  2. 02:04:415 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
  3. 02:13:142 (2)-^?
  4. 02:26:233 (2)-^
  5. 02:30:597 (2)-Add a finish.
  6. 02:34:961 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning?
  7. 02:39:324 (3)-^?
  8. 02:4&:506 (1)-Add a finish on the end.

i_k's Insane
  1. 00:36:869 (1)-Add a finish on the end.
  2. 00:48:323 (2, 3, 4, 5)-Fix the spacing on these by using the distance snap.
  3. 01:10:688 (1)-Add a finish?
  4. 01:16:415 (1)-^
  5. 01:17:324 (1)^?
  6. 01:28:415 (9)-Add a finish on the beginning?
  7. 01:42:597 (3)-^
  8. 01:44:777 (1)-Add a finish.
  9. 01:46:959 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  10. 01:55:687 (1)-^?
  11. 02:04:414 (1)-^?
  12. 02:21:869 (1)-Add a finish?
  13. 02:36:596 (5)-Add a finish on the end.
  14. 02:48:051 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning?
  15. 02:52:414 (9)-^?
  16. 02:54:596 (1)-^
  17. 02:55:414 (4)-Add a finish on the end?
  18. 03:00:596 (8)-^
  19. 03:05:505 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
  20. 03:07:687 (1)-Put a new combo here.
  21. 03:14:233 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  22. 03:18:596 (7)-Put a new combo here?
  23. 03:19:960 (4)-Remove new combo?
  24. 03:20:778 (6)-Put a new combo here?

And that's it. Good luck, Keilara~ :D

Here's a star.
jossieP

Roddie wrote:

i_k's Insane
  1. 00:36:869 (1)-Add a finish on the end. nope
  2. 00:48:323 (2, 3, 4, 5)-Fix the spacing on these by using the distance snap. It is spaced to x1,2 but I had rearranged it
  3. 01:10:688 (1)-Add a finish? nope
  4. 01:16:415 (1)-^ yeah
  5. 01:17:324 (1)^? There is non object here
  6. 01:28:415 (9)-Add a finish on the beginning? yeah
  7. 01:42:597 (3)-^ yes
  8. 01:44:777 (1)-Add a finish. hmm yeah
  9. 01:46:959 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. nope
  10. 01:55:687 (1)-^? ok
  11. 02:04:414 (1)-^? nope
  12. 02:21:869 (1)-Add a finish? nope
  13. 02:36:596 (5)-Add a finish on the end. yup
  14. 02:48:051 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? ya
  15. 02:52:414 (9)-^? aya
  16. 02:54:596 (1)-^ ya
  17. 02:55:414 (4)-Add a finish on the end? ok
  18. 03:00:596 (8)-^ www
  19. 03:05:505 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning? there is no object here
  20. 03:07:687 (1)-Put a new combo here. why :?
  21. 03:14:233 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. nope
  22. 03:18:596 (7)-Put a new combo here? yeah
  23. 03:19:960 (4)-Remove new combo? w erqrwq
  24. 03:20:778 (6)-Put a new combo here? better on 03:21:324


Here's a star. thanks ><
Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu (Keilara) [i_k's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Kei

Roddie wrote:

General
  1. i_k's Insane has a different preview point than Normal and Hard. Oh D: Now it has the same preview point as in Normal and Hard.
  2. I don't think the lead-in time is necessary for Normal and Hard. :c
  3. i_k's Insane has a different Offset than Hard and Normal. I recommend using Hard's and Normal's Offset. Don't forget to resnap all the notes and the timing points (Green Lines). Fixed

Normal
  1. 01:58:415 (8)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Fixed
  2. 02:04:415 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning? Added
  3. 02:21:324 (1)-^ Added
  4. 02:26:233 (1)-Add a finish. Added
  5. 03:13:688- I think it's better to start off the kiai time on 03:14:233. This applies to the other difficulties? :?
  6. 03:27:051 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Fixed

Hard
  1. 01:03:324 (2)-Add a finish.Added
  2. 02:04:415 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?^
  3. 02:13:142 (2)-^? ^
  4. 02:26:233 (2)-^ ^
  5. 02:30:597 (2)-Add a finish. ^
  6. 02:34:961 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? ^
  7. 02:39:324 (3)-^? ^
  8. 02:4&:506 (1)-Add a finish on the end. Ok! >:0

And that's it. Good luck, Keilara~ :D

Here's a star. Thanks for everything Roddie \:D/
- Rche -
first time to hear gackpoid's voice.
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i don't like the hitsounds in kiai.
the finish doesn't match the custom whistle good imo...

[normal]
01:57:870 (7,8) - spacing?
good diff.

[hard]
02:15:051 (9) - whistle at start?
02:21:870 (2) - i thought there should a kiai here... but anyway.

[insane]
it's somewhat noisy...
also there are quite many nazi issues...align the objects more carefully...
00:08:370 (3) - ugly slider...
00:41:506 (6) - i guess whistle at end but not start would be better.
00:58:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - way too noisy.
01:04:142 (2,3,4,5) - alignment
01:12:324 (1,2) - put it in exactly horizontally centre
01:18:870 (3,4) - make them exactly horizontal...?
01:44:370 (8) - make it exactly vertical...
03:10:142 (1,2) - alignment
i think whistle is quite overused in this diff.
consider using the custom whistle in other diffs and then remap hitsounds?

star for gackpoid.
make it the first ranked gackpoid map!
Topic Starter
Kei

justnobody wrote:

first time to hear gackpoid's voice. Yeah :c There's no Gackpoid ranked map.
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i don't like the hitsounds in kiai. D:!!
the finish doesn't match the custom whistle good imo...

[normal]
01:57:870 (7,8) - spacing? ? D: Roddie told me the same, and I already fixed it.
good diff. *O* Thanks!

[hard]
02:15:051 (9) - whistle at start? ok
02:21:870 (2) - i thought there should a kiai here... but anyway. .-. if someone mentions that again I'll add kiai.

star for gackpoid. Thanks for your mod&star! c:
make it the first ranked gackpoid map! I'm aiming for that! I support Gackpoid :3
mancuso_JM_
star 8-)
Snepif
nice~
bipolarmen98
buuen mapa ^^

:3 :) :D ;) 8-) :lol:

espero que lo aprueben pronto ^^


Topic Starter
Kei

bipolarmen98 wrote:

buuen mapa ^^

:3 :) :D ;) 8-) :lol:

espero que lo aprueben pronto ^^

Snepif wrote:

nice~

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

star 8-)
Gracias c:
poisonchan
Heeya :D Modding your map as your request.
Hope it helps :D

[!] = Need to be changed.
[?] = Suggestion.
[.] = If possible, change.

[General]
- Preview point must be the same in all diffs, you should fix it:
  • Hard: 71233
    i_k's Insane: 71370
    Normal: 71233
- You have the sliderfollowcircle.png add in your mapset, since it is a custom skin, I suggest you making the whole 'pack' (The other elements) or removing it. Otherwise it can look odd/weird. [Yes, having such element - alone - in the mapset is allowed, but is preferable if you complete the mapset with a few other elements at least.]

- What about these as the combo colours: (Don't forget: If you decide to change it, you must change in all the difficulties)
  • Combo1 : 222,114,182
    Combo2 : 172,40,187
    Combo3 : 189,132,175
    Combo4 : 255,255,255
[Normal]
00:09:324 (4) - I saw that you tried to make it symmetrical, to be 'perfectly' done, should be like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122197 ?
00:16:961 (3) - This overlap can be improved if you move the beat to the left, don't forget to modify (4)'s position aswell. *nazi* ?]
00:19:688 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:34:961 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:46:688 (4) - New combo ?
01:10:961 (5) - ^
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:44:779 - Drag the end of the Break here.
01:47:779 (2) - New combo.
02:07:142 (4) - ^
02:24:597 (1) - This slider is too short, making it too harder for a normal.
03:28:961 (6) - Uh, don't add the red point in the slider, it is making an odd look. What about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122204 instead?

[Hard]
00:02:233 (2) - I can't understand why there is 2 points in the slider: http://puu.sh/3PrL. Remove the one who is in the middle of the line.
00:03:870 (5) - New Combo ?
00:04:415 (6) - Follow the distance spacing, it is looking like a force jump. Maybe something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122207 [Don't forget to add the new combo on (5) ]
00:08:506 (5) - New Combo ?
00:12:597 (6) - ^
00:19:688 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:35:506 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:37:688 (6) - New Combo.
00:37:961 (1) - Move it closer to the previous note.
00:50:233 (2) - Move this beat a bit down and right, so it wont overlap the 00:49:688 (1), don't forget to apply the changes on (3) and (4) [In (4), move the low point in the slider 1 tick to the right, same with (5) but in this case, change the high point.), and move 6-7 to the side aswell.
00:55:142 (2) - Same thing about the overlap on (1). [Don't forget to fix the rest of the combo]
01:13:415 (7) - Move this beat a little to the right, so won't overlap the previous note.
01:14:915 (3) - Stack this note. Don't forget to fix the spacing of the next note.
01:17:233 (3) - Same thing about overlap. Don't forget to change the following notes.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:45:324 - Drag the end of the Break here.
01:58:551 (5) - I suggest flipping it vertically.
02:05:779 (5) - New combo.
02:06:597 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:37:142 (7) - New combo, also, try a different spacing like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122234 ?
02:49:415 (3) - New Combo
02:51:870 (10) - Remove this beat.
02:52:142 (1) - Fix the Spacing
02:52:415 (2) - New Combo
02:53:506 (7) - ^
03:07:142 (6) - New Combo
03:07:688 (1) - Remove new combo
03:16:142 (6) - New combo
03:24:597 (7) - New combo
03:25:142 (1) - Remove new combo

[i_k's Insane]
00:23:097 (6) - New combo, and if possible, make it less 'overlapped' by the previous stream. [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122218 ?]
00:27:461 (6) - New combo.
00:31:824 (6) - New combo.
00:41:233 (5) - ^
00:45:461 (4) - ^
01:08:779 (1,2,3) - Blind pattern. If possible, unstack the notes from the previous pattern, and try following a 'free' spacing pattern? [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122220]
01:09:870 (5) - New combo. Try a spacing like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122223 maybe?
01:13:824 (6) - New combo.
01:17:642 (6) - ^
01:20:915 (6) - ^ + Make it less overlapped with the previous note.
01:24:052 (5) - New combo.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:37:142 - Drag the end of the Break here.
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Ok, I'm not going to complete the mod till the end of the diff, cause I guess you should check it yourself and try improving your map according to the tips I gave you. ^-^ If you need any help with that, poke me in game, and I will be happy to help. ^-^
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Hope it helps :3
If you need any help or a recheck, poke me in game, or send me a Forum PM.
Topic Starter
Kei

poisonchan wrote:

Heeya :D Modding your map as your request.
Hope it helps :D Yay \c:/

[!] = Need to be changed.
[?] = Suggestion.
[.] = If possible, change.

[General]
- Preview point must be the same in all diffs, you should fix it:
  • Hard: 71233
    i_k's Insane: 71370 Fixed
    Normal: 71233
- You have the sliderfollowcircle.png add in your mapset, since it is a custom skin, I suggest you making the whole 'pack' (The other elements) or removing it. Otherwise it can look odd/weird. [Yes, having such element - alone - in the mapset is allowed, but is preferable if you complete the mapset with a few other elements at least.] Uhm.. I'm not sure. I think I'll make the other skin elements.

- What about these as the combo colours: (Don't forget: If you decide to change it, you must change in all the difficulties)
  • Combo1 : 222,114,182
    Combo2 : 172,40,187
    Combo3 : 189,132,175
    Combo4 : 255,255,255
ºoº Nice. Changed. It's better now.

[Normal]
00:09:324 (4) - I saw that you tried to make it symmetrical, to be 'perfectly' done, should be like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122197 ? :c You're right. Fixed.
00:16:961 (3) - This overlap can be improved if you move the beat to the left, don't forget to modify (4)'s position aswell. *nazi* ?] Ok!
00:19:688 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:34:961 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:46:688 (4) - New combo ? ^
01:10:961 (5) - ^ ^
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here. ^
01:44:779 - Drag the end of the Break here. ^
01:47:779 (2) - New combo. Added.
02:07:142 (4) - ^ Added.
02:24:597 (1) - This slider is too short, making it too harder for a normal. Oh :c Deleted and added a note insted.
03:28:961 (6) - Uh, don't add the red point in the slider, it is making an odd look. What about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122204 instead? Ok.

[Hard]
00:02:233 (2) - I can't understand why there is 2 points in the slider: http://puu.sh/3PrL. Remove the one who is in the middle of the line. Removed.
00:03:870 (5) - New Combo ? Added.
00:04:415 (6) - Follow the distance spacing, it is looking like a force jump. Maybe something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122207 [Don't forget to add the new combo on (5) ] Fixed.
00:08:506 (5) - New Combo ? Added
00:12:597 (6) - ^ ^
00:19:688 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:35:506 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:37:688 (6) - New Combo. Added.
00:37:961 (1) - Move it closer to the previous note. Ok.
00:50:233 (2) - Move this beat a bit down and right, so it wont overlap the 00:49:688 (1), don't forget to apply the changes on (3) and (4) [In (4), move the low point in the slider 1 tick to the right, same with (5) but in this case, change the high point.), and move 6-7 to the side aswell. Done.
00:55:142 (2) - Same thing about the overlap on (1). [Don't forget to fix the rest of the combo] Fixed.
01:13:415 (7) - Move this beat a little to the right, so won't overlap the previous note. ^
01:14:915 (3) - Stack this note. Don't forget to fix the spacing of the next note. Stacked.
01:17:233 (3) - Same thing about overlap. Don't forget to change the following notes. Fixed too.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:45:324 - Drag the end of the Break here.
01:58:551 (5) - I suggest flipping it vertically. Ok!
02:05:779 (5) - New combo. Added.
02:06:597 (1) - Remove new combo. Removed.
02:37:142 (7) - New combo, also, try a different spacing like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122234 ? Ok. Now is much better :D
02:49:415 (3) - New Combo Added.
02:51:870 (10) - Remove this beat. Removed.
02:52:142 (1) - Fix the Spacing Fixed.
02:52:415 (2) - New Combo Added
02:53:506 (7) - ^ ^
03:07:142 (6) - New Combo ^
03:07:688 (1) - Remove new combo Removed
03:16:142 (6) - New combo Added.
03:24:597 (7) - New combo ^
03:25:142 (1) - Remove new combo Removed.

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Hope it helps :3
If you need any help or a recheck, poke me in game, or send me a Forum PM. Thank You! c:! Your mod was very helpful to me. I'll ask you for re-check later, when Kyon finish to make changes to his difficulty.
jossieP

poisonchan wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
00:23:097 (6) - New combo, and if possible, make it less 'overlapped' by the previous stream. [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122218 ?]
00:27:461 (6) - New combo.
00:31:824 (6) - New combo.
00:41:233 (5) - ^
00:45:461 (4) - ^
01:08:779 (1,2,3) - Blind pattern. If possible, unstack the notes from the previous pattern, and try following a 'free' spacing pattern? [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122220]
01:09:870 (5) - New combo. Try a spacing like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122223 maybe?
01:13:824 (6) - New combo.
01:17:642 (6) - ^
01:20:915 (6) - ^ + Make it less overlapped with the previous note.
01:24:052 (5) - New combo.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:37:142 - Drag the end of the Break here.
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Ok, I'm not going to complete the mod till the end of the diff, cause I guess you should check it yourself and try improving your map according to the tips I gave you. ^-^ If you need any help with that, poke me in game, and I will be happy to help. ^-^
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kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu (Keilara) [i_k's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Kei

ikari_kyon wrote:

poisonchan wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
00:23:097 (6) - New combo, and if possible, make it less 'overlapped' by the previous stream. [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122218 ?]
00:27:461 (6) - New combo.
00:31:824 (6) - New combo.
00:41:233 (5) - ^
00:45:461 (4) - ^
01:08:779 (1,2,3) - Blind pattern. If possible, unstack the notes from the previous pattern, and try following a 'free' spacing pattern? [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122220]
01:09:870 (5) - New combo. Try a spacing like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122223 maybe?
01:13:824 (6) - New combo.
01:17:642 (6) - ^
01:20:915 (6) - ^ + Make it less overlapped with the previous note.
01:24:052 (5) - New combo.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:37:142 - Drag the end of the Break here.
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Ok, I'm not going to complete the mod till the end of the diff, cause I guess you should check it yourself and try improving your map according to the tips I gave you. ^-^ If you need any help with that, poke me in game, and I will be happy to help. ^-^
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kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Updated
Megurine Luka
Hi. Mod Time.

[General]
I don't like the fin sound :o
And also some sliders look very strange when you add these red dots

[Normal]
00:18:587 (4) - fin
01:18:052 (5,6,7) - 01:26:779 (6) - this slider doesn't look so nice
01:54:597 (6) - add fin
01:55:415 (2) - del fin
02:07:415 (2,3) - 02:11:506 (4,5) - 02:21:324 (1) - del fin
02:40:415 (3) - spacing. SV change will affect spacing. it is difficult for new players to identify the spacing change
02:59:506 (6) - add whistle
03:07:688 (4) - ^
03:16:142 (2,3,4) - ^
03:20:779 (4) - ^
03:27:051 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:36:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - makes it smoother, I mean the note 2
00:37:961 (1) - 00:51:597 (4) - 1 gird up
00:52:142 (5) - 2 grid up
00:55:142 (2) - The hit sound in 1st kiai time is very good. But problem is still the fin sound. That really destroy the hearing
01:55:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - smoother
02:01:415 (4,5) - 2 grid down
02:22:415 (3) - 02:44:779 (4) - 02:58:142 (5) - one grid up, this slider is diff from 4&6
03:19:688 (4) - looks weird

[i_k's insane]
It's best for you to share the same start point with the other 2 diff
00:13:688 (3) - 00:36:052 (1) - spacing
00:07:006 (2) - put it in the same line with the slider
00:40:142 (3) - put it at the end of last slider
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - sudden noise.. don't use that sound effect. or you can control the volume from lower to higher, so does 01:54:870 (1,2,3)
01:27:052 (11) - 2 grid left
02:09:324 - change into a short slider and a circle

02:12:051 (2) - make the slider prettier
02:13:688 (1) - 02:26:779 (3) - change into a shorter reversible slider
02:30:870 - add note
02:39:324~02:46:961 - try 0.75x
02:41:506 (2) -

Try to have more changes in mapping type. Some parts look similar

Star. Still have a lot to work on :)
Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
Kei

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod Time.

[General]
I don't like the fin sound :o Yeah, it doesn't really fit to the song. I'll search for other later.
And also some sliders look very strange when you add these red dots

[Normal]
00:18:587 (4) - fin ok
01:18:052 (5,6,7) - Ok
01:26:779 (6) - this slider doesn't look so nice ;___;
01:54:597 (6) - add fin ok
01:55:415 (2) - del fin Ok?
02:07:415 (2,3) - Ok
02:11:506 (4,5) - ok
02:21:324 (1) - del fin No :c
02:40:415 (3) - spacing. SV change will affect spacing. it is difficult for new players to identify the spacing change ah fixed
02:59:506 (6) - add whistle added
03:07:688 (4) - ^ added
03:16:142 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:20:779 (4) - ^ ^
03:27:051 (1,2) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:36:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - makes it smoother, I mean the note 2 Oh ok c:
00:37:961 (1) - ^
00:51:597 (4) - 1 gird up moved
00:52:142 (5) - 2 grid up ^
00:55:142 (2) - ^
The hit sound in 1st kiai time is very good. But problem is still the fin sound. That really destroy the hearing Yeah :c Like I said before, i'll search for another fin sound later.
01:55:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - smoother Ok
02:01:415 (4,5) - 2 grid down moved
02:22:415 (3) - Ok
02:44:779 (4) - Ok
02:58:142 (5) - one grid up, this slider is diff from 4&6 Replaced this slider with 4/6 slider
03:19:688 (4) - looks weird D:!! I'll keep this one :c

Star. Still have a lot to work on :) I'll do my best to improve more my map c:
Good Luck :D Thank you ^o^/!!
jossieP

Megurine Luka wrote:

[i_k's insane]
It's best for you to share the same start point with the other 2 diff really? =O
00:13:688 (3) - that way
00:36:052 (1) - spacing respaced
00:07:006 (2) - put it in the same line with the slider why =o
00:40:142 (3) - put it at the end of last slider ah? it is at the end, I think
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - sudden noise.. don't use that sound effect. or you can control the volume from lower to higher, so does 01:54:870 (1,2,3) :(
01:27:052 (11) - 2 grid left lefty
02:09:324 - change into a short slider and a circle reversible

02:12:051 (2) - make the slider prettier Im ugly x3
02:13:688 (1) - oh no
02:26:779 (3) - change into a shorter reversible slider reversible and weird xD
02:30:870 - add note oh no
02:39:324~02:46:961 - try 0.75x x.x
02:41:506 (2) - cant see xD


Try to have more changes in mapping type. Some parts look similar It calls patterns :3

Star. Still have a lot to work on :) tired~ =w=
Good Luck :D yup thanks
Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu (Keilara) [i_k's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Kei

ikari_kyon wrote:

Megurine Luka wrote:

[i_k's insane]
It's best for you to share the same start point with the other 2 diff really? =O
00:13:688 (3) - that way
00:36:052 (1) - spacing respaced
00:07:006 (2) - put it in the same line with the slider why =o
00:40:142 (3) - put it at the end of last slider ah? it is at the end, I think
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - sudden noise.. don't use that sound effect. or you can control the volume from lower to higher, so does 01:54:870 (1,2,3) :(
01:27:052 (11) - 2 grid left lefty
02:09:324 - change into a short slider and a circle reversible

02:12:051 (2) - make the slider prettier Im ugly x3
02:13:688 (1) - oh no
02:26:779 (3) - change into a shorter reversible slider reversible and weird xD
02:30:870 - add note oh no
02:39:324~02:46:961 - try 0.75x x.x
02:41:506 (2) - cant see xD


Try to have more changes in mapping type. Some parts look similar It calls patterns :3

Star. Still have a lot to work on :) tired~ =w=
Good Luck :D yup thanks

Updated
InfernoWonderland
*0* Simplemente vas a ser la mejor creadora de beatmap de todo osu!!
Sabes porque eh!!! porque!!! pues porque eres una Master!!!! xD haha
Tienes creatividad y habilidad *u* ritmo y demas (eso sono a rima :0)
Y has una de Yopopi Topopoi Supopopi~ xD hahaha
Asi que sigue GO GO GO!!! :D
Megurine Luka
Come back to shoot a pink star to support Gakupo.

:)

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Topic Starter
Kei

Megurine Luka wrote:

Come back to shoot a pink star to support Gakupo.

:)

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*0* Thank you a lot Luka ~ ^O^/ I'll do my best
Esupanitix
Oh hi.

Normal
Okay, you don't need so many angles in your sliders. They're not fun to be seen overused like this. Try to balance how much you use Bevelled, Curved, and straight sliders so that one sight doesn't get bland. Try not to use it much so that we don't generally see the same thing over and over again. Just use the Angle-curve sliders every so often, not every ten seconds.

That's all.

Hard
01:20:233 Combo
7 - What the hell? This just looks bad. I'm sorry, but that slider looks like a broken croissant.

01:24:870 Combo
2,3 - Replace these with two hitcircles each. A line of four sliders in a row just disappoints me. I mean honestly.

01:52:142 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles.
3 - Replace this with two hitcircles. This is just stupid. We don't need FIVE FREAKING SLIDERS in a row. This isn't Love-Coloured Master Spark.

01:56:506 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles. It's okay to have a three-circle stream. Just don't start every combo with a slider (besides the previous combo but still)

02:38:779 Combo
6,7 - Start a new combo with one of these. Even in a hard map, a streak of ten circles in one combo just looks bad.

02:43:142 Combo
4,5 - Same as above. Basically, if the hitcircle rate gets above 8 without there having been a stream, it just doesn't look good at all.

02:52:415 Combo
2,3,4,5 - Please, don't make stacks of two hitcircles one after the other. It just doesn't look right.

02:53:779 Combo
1,2,3,4 - See above.

(Basically, see above for every combo that does this.)

I'm sorry, but when there are almost as many sliders as there are circles, in a HARD map, that's just bad. Please, replace some of those with hitcircles. I really don't want to see a second incarnation of a certain Marisa Kirisame theme's map.

i_k
Nothing I can really identify, since I have absolutely no skill with modding Insane maps, but I will say that the distance snap needs to be lowered a bit.


The map is nice, just too many damn sliders. I hope it gets ranked after a bit of work.
Topic Starter
Kei

Esupanitix wrote:

Oh hi.

Normal
Okay, you don't need so many angles in your sliders. They're not fun to be seen overused like this. Try to balance how much you use Bevelled, Curved, and straight sliders so that one sight doesn't get bland. Try not to use it much so that we don't generally see the same thing over and over again. Just use the Angle-curve sliders every so often, not every ten seconds. I like how it looks D:

That's all.

Hard
01:20:233 Combo
7 - What the hell? This just looks bad. I'm sorry, but that slider looks like a broken croissant. Ok

01:24:870 Combo
2,3 - Replace these with two hitcircles each. A line of four sliders in a row just disappoints me. I mean honestly. Ok

01:52:142 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles.Ok
3 - Replace this with two hitcircles. This is just stupid. We don't need FIVE FREAKING SLIDERS in a row. This isn't Love-Coloured Master Spark. Fixed. Just don't kill me o.ò

01:56:506 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles. It's okay to have a three-circle stream. Just don't start every combo with a slider (besides the previous combo but still) Ok

02:38:779 Combo
6,7 - Start a new combo with one of these. Even in a hard map, a streak of ten circles in one combo just looks bad. Ok

02:43:142 Combo
4,5 - Same as above. Basically, if the hitcircle rate gets above 8 without there having been a stream, it just doesn't look good at all. Ok

02:52:415 Combo
2,3,4,5 - Please, don't make stacks of two hitcircles one after the other. It just doesn't look right. I like it in this way .-.

02:53:779 Combo
1,2,3,4 - See above.

(Basically, see above for every combo that does this.)

I'm sorry, but when there are almost as many sliders as there are circles, in a HARD map, that's just bad. Please, replace some of those with hitcircles. I really don't want to see a second incarnation of a certain Marisa Kirisame theme's map.

i_k
Nothing I can really identify, since I have absolutely no skill with modding Insane maps, but I will say that the distance snap needs to be lowered a bit.


The map is nice, just too many damn sliders. I hope it gets ranked after a bit of work. Fixed most of things. Thanks for your mod c:
Vortex_old
Hey there :)

Normal
03:15:870 (1) Remove new combo

I know, only to remove a new combo for one diff isn't very good :P but I think this diff had enough improvement.

Hard
...Nothing to say at all o.O I'm a bit confused that I didn't found out something...

Guest Diff
00:15:324 (1) I don't like this slider^^
00:16:142 (1) Remove this circle, because it doesn't sound good for me
00:30:597 (2) This hidden circles confuses
00:43:415 (3) Put this circle 1 field above, it looks besser and more "symmetrical" to 4 and 5
00:54:324 (1) Same like above :)
02:34:688 (3) How about changing the colour of this circle?
02:45:597 (1) Put this circle above the end of slider (2)
02:56:233 (6) New combo
02:57:052 (1) Remove new combo

Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least :D

Vortex
Topic Starter
Kei

Vortex wrote:

Hey there :) Hi :D/

Normal
03:15:870 (1) Remove new combo Uhmm.. I don't know :c If I remove that combo then the combo goes to 10 and I think that is a high combo number x.x I'll remove it if someone mentions it again.

I know, only to remove a new combo for one diff isn't very good :P but I think this diff had enough improvement. Don't worry. It's ok c:

Hard
...Nothing to say at all o.O I'm a bit confused that I didn't found out something... Really? :D? Woohoo! That makes me happy c:

Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least :D Don't worry n.n we all have a start :3 Good luck with your modding and thanks for checking my map~ ^u^

Vortex
Cirno
Hi

[Normal]
00:46:415 - try adding a note here?
00:50:779 - ^, omitting notes on white lines isn't too friendly to new players

[Hard]
00:39:052 (3) - imo rotating 180 would be better
others fine for me

[i_k's Insane]
00:08:370 (3) - this slider is not that good-looking imo, maybe make it straight, or simply replace with 2 circles?
00:08:779 (1) - end this 1/4 earlier and move 00:09:461 (2) to 00:09:324 - ?
00:15:324 (1) - end 1/4 earlier and move 00:16:142 (2,3) - to 00:16:006 - , fits the song better imo
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - maybe make an equilateral triangle here?
00:44:642 - add note?
00:52:142 (2) - maybe make this by copy/paste/rotating 00:51:324 (1) - . Looks better imo
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump like you did before? ._.
01:17:642 (1) - this spacing was readable, but unreasonable. I'd suggest DS here.
02:24:051 (1,3) - fix the shapes of those sliders please = = those really are ugly...

Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~
Topic Starter
Kei

Cirno wrote:

Hi

[Normal]
00:46:415 - try adding a note here? Added.
00:50:779 - ^, omitting notes on white lines isn't too friendly to new players Added.

[Hard]
00:39:052 (3) - imo rotating 180 would be better Ok
others fine for me

Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ Thanks!! *-*
pieguyn
Normal:

-Tick rate 1?

00:34:688 - This break ends too early, perhaps reinsert it?
00:55:688 (2) - Too close to (1)
01:30:052 - This break starts too late
01:44:506 - ends too early :?
01:53:506 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider?

Hard:

00:19:688 ~ 00:36:052 - reinsert this break :cry:
01:21:870 (5,7) - remove the whistle from the body of these sliders?
02:53:779 (1) - remove NC?
02:56:233 (1,2) - perhaps go back to 1.0x here?

i_k's Insane:

00:08:370 (3) - replace with 2 notes?
00:18:188 (6) - ^
00:21:461 (3) - ^
00:44:779 (3) - too close to (2)
00:49:415 (1) - remove NC
00:50:233 (3) - add NC
00:56:506 (1) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider
00:57:870 (6) - ^
00:58:688 (2) - (nazi) make this vertical? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137651
01:01:688 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? Note: I'm going to stop pointing these out here, if you agree please go through the map and remove any whistles in the future
01:30:052 - reinsert this break :cry:
02:13:142 (6,1) - Switch NCs?
02:27:870 (1) - Remove NC
02:53:097 (1,3) - Switch NCs?
03:04:142 (5) - too far from (4)
03:14:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any particular reason this group is spaced closer? If not, space it normally please~
03:19:961 (4) - too far from (3)
03:20:779 (6,1) - Switch NCs?
03:25:142 (5) - Add NC, remove NC from 03:25:961 (1), add NC on 03:27:324 (6), then remove NC from 03:28:415 (1)?

Nice map~
jossieP

Vortex wrote:

Guest Diff you mean me right? =o
00:15:324 (1) I don't like this slider^^ fffffffffff
00:16:142 (1) Remove this circle, because it doesn't sound good for me sound worst without it for me
00:30:597 (2) This hidden circles confuses fk yeah
00:43:415 (3) Put this circle 1 field above, it looks besser and more "symmetrical" to 4 and 5 hmmmm iòmg
00:54:324 (1) Same like above :) asdfasdfasdfasdf
02:34:688 (3) How about changing the colour of this circle? why??
02:45:597 (1) Put this circle above the end of slider (2) where?
02:56:233 (6) New combo nope >w<
02:57:052 (1) Remove new combo ^

Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least :D =OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Vortex

Cirno wrote:

Hi hi :3~

[i_k's Insane]
00:08:370 (3) - this slider is not that good-looking imo, maybe make it straight, or simply replace with 2 circles? ohmygodmyslidersareveryveryuglyx.x
00:08:779 (1) - end this 1/4 earlier and move 00:09:461 (2) to 00:09:324 - ? god no x3
00:15:324 (1) - end 1/4 earlier and move 00:16:142 (2,3) - to 00:16:006 - , fits the song better imo fffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuu
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - maybe make an equilateral triangle here? Im not symetrical but anyway
00:44:642 - add note? yeah
00:52:142 (2) - maybe make this by copy/paste/rotating 00:51:324 (1) - . Looks better imo almost the same :/
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump like you did before? ._. 1,0x spacing
01:17:642 (1) - this spacing was readable, but unreasonable. I'd suggest DS here. poison-chan :/
02:24:051 (1,3) - fix the shapes of those sliders please = = those really are ugly... ohmygodmyslidershapesareuglyasiam

Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ ;w;

pieguy1372 wrote:

i_k's Insane: pieguy :3~

00:08:370 (3) - replace with 2 notes? ok
00:18:188 (6) - ^ ^
00:21:461 (3) - ^ ^
00:44:779 (3) - too close to (2) already fixed
00:49:415 (1) - remove NC wwwwwww
00:50:233 (3) - add NC uuuuuuu
00:56:506 (1) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider cant remember when I put this O_o
00:57:870 (6) - ^
00:58:688 (2) - (nazi) make this vertical? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137651 vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
01:01:688 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? Note: I'm going to stop pointing these out here, if you agree please go through the map and remove any whistles in the future Im sorry T^T
01:30:052 - reinsert this break :cry: somebody's fault
02:13:142 (6,1) - Switch NCs? nope =o
02:27:870 (1) - Remove NC yup
02:53:097 (1,3) - Switch NCs? wwerwer
03:04:142 (5) - too far from (4) =OOO
03:14:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any particular reason this group is spaced closer? If not, space it normally please~ .,.,.,.
03:19:961 (4) - too far from (3) closer
03:20:779 (6,1) - Switch NCs? xvzvzxv
03:25:142 (5) - Add NC, remove NC from 03:25:961 (1), add NC on 03:27:324 (6), then remove NC from 03:28:415 (1)? hope maked it right T^T

Nice map~ thanks for you :3
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