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mancuso_JM_
Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja

General:
Yo elgiria el mismo slider tick rate para todas las dificultades pero ustedes ven , mapean mejor que yo :P

Normal:
00:43:688 (5): New Combo
03:27:870 (3):Creo que si eliminas esta nota suena mejor

Hard:
00:19:688 (x): Agrega una nota aqui creo que suena bien
02:04:415 (1): Saca el New Combo
02:04:961 (2): New Combo

i_k's Insane:
00:33:324 (6): Esta nota creo que no sigue el ritmo, yo la eliminaria pero tu eliges
01:26:233 (7): New Combo
01:57:597 (5): New Combo
02:04:412 (x): Agrega una nota con FINISH
02:20:506 (8): Quizas Finish??
02:53:501 (7): New Combo
03:31:961 (spin): Finish?? creo que suena mejor que whistle

Solo estas recomendaciones tu ves si las tomas o las dejas jajaj suerte!!!!! ;)
Topic Starter
Kei

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja xDD

General:
Yo elgiria el mismo slider tick rate para todas las dificultades pero ustedes ven , mapean mejor que yo :P Haha al rato lo converso con Kyon aver si cambia su tick rate o no.

Normal:
00:43:688 (5): New Combo No.. pero en vez de ponerle New Combo a (5) se lo puse a (4).
03:27:870 (3):Creo que si eliminas esta nota suena mejor Uh.. no :c lo siento ;u;''

Hard:
00:19:688 (x): Agrega una nota aqui creo que suena bien Ok :D
02:04:415 (1): Saca el New Combo Hmm D: Lo dejaré como está y si alguien más lo menciona lo quito.
02:04:961 (2): New Combo ^

Solo estas recomendaciones tu ves si las tomas o las dejas jajaj suerte!!!!! ;) Jaja~ Gracias por todo! ya que hasta me moddeaste sin que yo te haya pedido c:
jossieP

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja



unrequested mod \o/

i_k's Insane:
00:33:324 (6): Esta nota creo que no sigue el ritmo, yo la eliminaria pero tu eliges queda vacio x3
01:26:233 (7): New Combo el nuevo combo tendria solo 3 objects
01:57:597 (5): New Combo nope o/
02:04:412 (x): Agrega una nota con FINISH =o
02:20:506 (8): Quizas Finish?? suena bien sin el finish
02:53:501 (7): New Combo sadfasdfasdf
03:31:961 (spin): Finish?? creo que suena mejor que whistle asfdaerwer
=o no new file?
Vergence

Hi~

Easy
01:18:052 (5) - New combo ?
01:22:415 (5) - ^
02:09:870 (2) - Make this a mirror of (1) w/o reverse slider
02:52:142 (1) - Move it somewhere to prevent overlap with (3)
02:55:688 (6) - One grid down

Hard
00:40:145 (7) - Align this with (5 and 6) ?

i_K's Insane
Fine~
_______________________________________________-
That's all~
jossieP

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

i_K's Insane
Fine~
FINE?? O-O
Topic Starter
Kei

DragonSparta wrote:


Hi~

Easy
01:18:052 (5) - New combo ? Ok
01:22:415 (5) - ^ Ok!
02:09:870 (2) - Make this a mirror of (1) w/o reverse slider Yeah :D
02:52:142 (1) - Move it somewhere to prevent overlap with (3) ^
02:55:688 (6) - One grid down Done

Hard
00:40:145 (7) - Align this with (5 and 6) ? Done

i_K's Insane
Fine~ Yay!
_______________________________________________-
That's all~ Thanks!
mochi
[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section

[hard] : the circle/slider placement in this difficulty looks very beautiful :)
03:17:506 - useless timing section
Topic Starter
Kei

qilliam wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section

[hard] : the circle/slider placement in this difficulty looks very beautiful :) Omg! Thanks a lot >//<
03:17:506 - useless timing section
Edited :3
poisonedblood
I'm modding this because we definitely need more Gakupo songs ranked. :)
Everything I say is a suggestion, you don't have to change anything you don't want to.

Blue : You don't have to change anything, it's just a suggestion
Red : You should look at this

[Normal]

You don't have to add circles where I suggest you put some, if you would ever want to add more it would be at these spots.
Look at them and see, I don't even expect you to add any circles unless you think it's a good idea.
If I say you could turn it into a slider, I find it fine the way it is. But if you wanted to you could turn it into one.
Look at them and see, I don't even expect you to add any sliders unless you think it's a good idea.
Any normal slider I say you could add could be turned into a slider with a reverse arrow and it would still be fine.

[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] You could make it a slider, or add a circle on [00:01:961].
[00:09:052] Maybe add a reverse arrow or a circle?
[00:12:597] - [00:12:870] You could make it a slider, or add a circle on [00:12:870].
[00:16:688] - [00:17:233] You could make a slider or add circles at the start and end.
Or you could add a circle on [00:16:688] and a slider on [00:16:961] - [00:17:233]


[00:37:688] The note isn't really on anything, maybe move it to [00:37:961] or delete it and start the slider on [00:37:961]?

[00:39:052] Maybe add a circle?
[00:39:324] - [00:40:415] Maybe turn this into a slider with a reverse arrow?
[00:40:961] - [00:41:233] This could be turned into a slider.
[00:42:324] Maybe start the slider here and end it at [00:43:415]?
[00:45:324] - [00:45:870] Maybe change it into a reverse slider?

[00:46:415] I don't find this note necessary.
[00:50:779] ^

[00:53:506] You could add a reverse arrow instead of this circle.
[00:55:415] Maybe add a circle?
[00:56:506] ^
[00:56:779] - [00:57:052] You could make this into a slider.
[00:59:233] Maybe add a circle?
[01:00:324] ^
[01:01:415] ^
[01:01:688] - [01:02:233] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:04:142] Maybe add a circle?
[01:04:415] - [01:04:688] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:06:870] Maybe add a circle?
[01:07:142] - [01:07:415] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:08:506] ^
[01:09:597] You could remove the reverse arrow, add a circle here and add a slider from [01:09:870] - [01:10:961].
[01:11:506] - [01:12:052] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:12:597] - [01:13:142] ^
[01:14:506] Maybe add a circle?
[01:14:779] - [01:15:324] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:16:961] - [01:17:506] ^
[01:18:052] - [01:18:597] ^
[01:18:870] Maybe add a circle?
[01:20:233] - [01:20:779] Maybe make it into a slider?
[01:21:324] - [01:21:870] ^
[01:22:415] - [01:22:961] ^
[01:23:233] Maybe add a circle?
[01:25:415] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [01:24:870] - [01:25:415]
[01:26:506] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [01:25:961] - [01:26:506]
[01:47:779] Maybe add a circle?
[01:48:052] - [01:48:324] Maybe make it into a slider?
[01:49:415] Maybe add a circle?

[01:51:870] Delete this note.

[01:52:142], [01:52:688], [01:53:233] Maybe add circles here? Maybe put a slider from [01:52:415] - [01:52:961]?
[01:54:597] Maybe add a reverse arrow so the slider ends here instead of this circle?

[01:56:233] I don't find this note necessary.

[01:57:052] Maybe add a circle?
[01:57:324] - [01:57:870] Maybe make it into a slider?
[01:58:142] Maybe add a circle?

[02:00:597] I don't find this note necessary, instead move it to [02:00:870]?

[02:01:961] Maybe add a circle?
[02:02:233] - [02:02:779] Maybe make it a slider? You could put a reverse arrow at [02:02:779] so it ends at [02:03:324].
[02:05:233] Maybe add a circle?
[02:06:324] ^
[02:06:870] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [02:06:597] - [02:07:142].
[02:07:415] Maybe add a circle?
[02:09:597] ^
[02:10:688] ^
[02:11:233] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [02:10:961] - [02:11:233].
[02:13:415] Maybe add a circle?
[02:16:142] ^

[02:18:870] Maybe start the spinner here?

[02:22:142] Maybe add a circle?
[02:23:233] Maybe add a circle? or add a slider from [02:23:233] - [02:23:506].
[02:24:597] - [02:25:142] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:25:688] Maybe add a circle? This is only circle I think you should not ignore.
[02:25:688] - [02:30:052] You could add something on every beat here if you wanted. You could make a bunch of sliders here.
[02:31:415] - [02:31:688] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:39:870] - [02:40:415] ^
[02:52:961] Maybe add a circle?
[02:54:597] - [02:55:142] You could make a slider here, or add a circle on [02:54:870].
[02:55:415] - [02:55:688] You could make a slider here, or add a circle on [02:55:415].
[02:58:415] - [02:58:961] You could make it into a slider.
[02:59:233] Maybe add a circle?
[03:01:961] ^
[03:03:597] ^
[03:03:870] - [03:04:415] Maybe make it a slider? or add a circle on [03:04:142].
[03:06:324] Move the slider so it starts here and ends at [03:06:870].
[03:07:142] Maybe add a circle?
[03:07:415] - [03:07:961] Maybe add a slider? or add a circle on the start and end.
[03:08:233] - [03:08:506] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[03:09:597] - [03:13:142] You could add something on every beat here if you wanted. You could make a bunch of sliders here.
[03:13:688] - [03:14:233] You could turn it into a slider.
[03:14:779] - [03:15:324] ^
[03:15:870] - [03:16:415] ^
[03:16:688] Maybe add a circle?
[03:24:870] - [03:25:415] You could make a slider or add circles at the start and the end.
[03:25:688] - [03:25:961] You could make a slider or add a circle on [03:25:961].
[03:27:052] - [03:27:324] You could turn it into a slider.
[03:27:597] Maybe add a circle?
[03:27:870] - [03:28:415] You could turn it into a slider.
[03:28:688] Maybe add a circle?
[03:29:779] ^
[03:30:052] - [03:30:324] Maybe make it a slider, or add a circle on [03:30:324].




[Hard]

[00:03:597] I don't find this note necessary.
[00:12:324] ^
[00:37:688] Is this note necessary?
[01:09:733] Maybe start the spinner here?
[01:13:415] I don't find this note necessary.
[01:56:233] ^
[02:05:370] Maybe move the circle on [02:05:506] here?
[02:18:461] If you keep just a circle here you could start the spinner on [02:18:870].
[02:22:279] Start the reverse arrow slider here, add a an arrow so it still ends where it did at first.
[02:24:324] Maybe start the spinner here. I think it sound less weird like this.
[02:26:915] Add a circle? or add a slider from [02:26:915] - [02:27:052].
[02:27:188] Start the slider from [02:27:324] here. Make it longer so it ends where it originally ended.
[02:30:324] Maybe extend the spinner so it ends here. I think it sounds better.
[02:49:415] I don't find this note necessary.
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary?
[02:55:688] ^
[02:58:415] Maybe remove the slider and just keep a circle here?
[03:02:506] I don't find this note necessary.
[03:06:870] ^
[03:08:370] - [03:08:779] Maybe make a slider, or just move the circle from [03:08:506] to [03:08:370].
[03:17:097] Maybe end the slider here?
[03:21:733] Maybe move the circle from [03:21:870] here?
[03:24:324] I don't find this note necessary.


[Insane]

[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] Add a slider?
[00:03:733] Start the slider here? add a circle on [00:03:597]?
[00:11:506] Add a circle?
[00:42:461] Add something here. A circle, starting the slider here and adding a reverse arrow maybe? Maybe making 3 consecutive 1/4 note sliders?
[00:46:824] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:08:642] It would be better if the slider started here. Make it longer so it still ends where it is originally.
[01:12:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:13:688] ^
[01:15:870] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:46:552] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:46:824] ^
[01:48:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:55:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:55:552] ^
[01:58:552] Add a circle, or make it a 1/4 slider with [01:58:688] or move the circle at [01:58:688] here.
[02:09:733] Add something here. Maybe a circle, an extra reverse arrow, make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:14:097] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:16:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[02:18:461] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:21:324] - [02:21:597] Maybe add a slider?
[02:22:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:27:188] Add something here. Maybe add a reverse arrow or add a circle?
[02:30:870] - [02:31:006] Add a slider or a circle on start and the end.
[02:31:279] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:31:552] ^
[02:35:370] Add something here. Maybe a circle?
[02:35:915] ^
[02:42:188] ^
[02:59:506] ^
[03:04:006] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[03:05:233] Add something here. A circle or add a reverse arrow on the last slider.
[03:13:961] Add either a circle or make a 1/2 note slider with [03:13:688].
[03:25:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider.

Edit: For Insane the only problem I found that in some places the beats weren't on some lyric parts.
The note already placed go well with the beat, so I wanted to leave it up to you if you wanted to add something on those notes.
jossieP

poisonedblood wrote:

[Insane]

[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] Add a slider?
[00:03:733] Start the slider here? add a circle on [00:03:597]?
[00:11:506] Add a circle?
[00:42:461] Add something here. A circle, starting the slider here and adding a reverse arrow maybe? Maybe making 3 consecutive 1/4 note sliders?
[00:46:824] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:08:642] It would be better if the slider started here. Make it longer so it still ends where it is originally.
[01:12:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:13:688] ^
[01:15:870] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:46:552] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:46:824] ^
[01:48:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:55:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:55:552] ^
[01:58:552] Add a circle, or make it a 1/4 slider with [01:58:688] or move the circle at [01:58:688] here.
[02:09:733] Add something here. Maybe a circle, an extra reverse arrow, make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:14:097] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:16:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[02:18:461] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:21:324] - [02:21:597] Maybe add a slider?
[02:22:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:27:188] Add something here. Maybe add a reverse arrow or add a circle?
[02:30:870] - [02:31:006] Add a slider or a circle on start and the end.
[02:31:279] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:31:552] ^
[02:35:370] Add something here. Maybe a circle?
[02:35:915] ^
[02:42:188] ^
[02:59:506] ^
[03:04:006] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[03:05:233] Add something here. A circle or add a reverse arrow on the last slider.
[03:13:961] Add either a circle or make a 1/2 note slider with [03:13:688].
[03:25:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider.
I see this are just "add something here suggest" maybe you should give more varied suggest than that, anyway Im not gonna change nothing...
Topic Starter
Kei

poisonedblood wrote:

[Hard]

[00:03:597] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
[00:12:324] ^ I do (Again).
[00:37:688] Is this note necessary? Sounds weird without that note.
[01:09:733] Maybe start the spinner here? I think that's unrankeable.
[01:13:415] I don't find this note necessary. If I delete that note it would cut the rhythm.
[01:56:233] ^ Same as above. I put these notes to keep the player clicking something instead of waiting Gackpoid to sing again.
[02:05:370] Maybe move the circle on [02:05:506] here? I agree here~
[02:18:461] If you keep just a circle here you could start the spinner on [02:18:870]. Uhm no, I like how it is.
[02:22:279] Start the reverse arrow slider here, add a an arrow so it still ends where it did at first. D: I'll change this if someone mentions it again.
[02:24:324] Maybe start the spinner here. I think it sound less weird like this. Same as above about spinner.
[02:26:915] Add a circle? or add a slider from [02:26:915] - [02:27:052]. Sounds weird .-.
[02:27:188] Start the slider from [02:27:324] here. Make it longer so it ends where it originally ended. Why?
[02:30:324] Maybe extend the spinner so it ends here. I think it sounds better. Same thing I said about spinners.
[02:49:415] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary? Well i'm not really sure about changing this, so i'll leave as it is till someone else mentions it.
[02:55:688] ^ ^
[02:58:415] Maybe remove the slider and just keep a circle here? That ruins the rhytm imo.
[03:02:506] I don't find this note necessary. But I do! Yes, again.
[03:06:870] ^ ^
[03:08:370] - [03:08:779] Maybe make a slider, or just move the circle from [03:08:506] to [03:08:370]. o_o
[03:17:097] Maybe end the slider here? No, sorry .-.
[03:21:733] Maybe move the circle from [03:21:870] here? That doesn't sound good o_o
[03:24:324] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
Sorry for not accepted most of your sugerences .u.'
About your suggestions to [Normal], I'll not change anything (Sorry again). I think those sugerences makes everything more difficult.
When I mapped that difficulty I aimed for a easy Normal with simple rhythm and easy to understand to new players.
Note that this mapset doesn't have an Easy, so, that's why this Normal is so easy and simple.
Also, when you suggest me to replace notes with sliders that sounds like a little change but it means to fix AAAALL spacings.
Anyway, thanks for your voluntary mod ^u^ I appreciate it, and I hope you can understand what I'm trying to tell you :? .
poisonedblood
I looked at the New Combos,
everything are small suggestions.
Feel free to ignore anything I said for insane though.
Star~ because I want to see this map ranked.

[Easy]

[02:07:142] Is this New Combo necessary?


[Hard]

[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary?
[02:53:097] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:53:506]?
[02:54:188] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:54:597]?
[02:55:688] Is this New Combo necessary?
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:28:415] ^


[Insane]

[00:05:506] Remove New Combo?
[00:06:188] or [00:05:915], Start the New Combo here instead of on [00:06:597]?
[00:08:370] or [00:08:097], Start the New Combo here instead of on [00:07:688]?
[00:08:779] Remove New Combo?
[00:12:733] or [00:12:461], Start the New Combo here instead of on [00:13:142]?
[00:15:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:15:324]?
[00:29:779] Remove New Combo?
[00:30:324] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:30:870]?
[00:31:824] Remove New Combo?
[00:34:142] Remove this New Combo and add a New Combo on [00:33:597] and [00:34:961] instead?
[00:36:597] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:36:870]?
[00:38:506] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:39:324]?
[00:42:597] Remove New Combo?
[00:43:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:44:233]?
[00:46:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:46:415]?
[00:49:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:49:415]?
[00:51:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:51:324]?
[00:54:597] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [00:54:324]?
[01:02:233] Remove New Combo?
[01:02:779] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [01:03:324]?
[01:06:324] Remove New Combo?
[01:06:733] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [01:07:142]?
[01:09:188] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [01:08:779]?
[01:15:597] or [01:16:006], Start the New Combo here instead of on [01:16:415]?
[01:16:961] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:16:961]?
[01:18:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:18:324]?
[01:19:688] Remove New Combo?
[01:20:233] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:20:915]?
[01:21:324] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:21:870]?
[01:22:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:22:961]?
[01:43:279] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:46:415] or [01:46:688], Start the New Combo here instead of on [01:46:961] and add a New Combo on [01:47:779]?
[01:50:779] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:50:233]?
[01:55:142] or [01:55:415], Start the New Combo here instead of on [01:55:688]?
[01:56:506] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:01:006] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:01:688]?
[02:10:142] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:09:870]?
[02:12:733] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:11:779]?
[02:13:688] Remove New Combo?
[02:14:506] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:15:052]?
[02:19:688] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:27:597] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:27:324]?
[02:34:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:34:142]?
[02:36:052] Remove New Combo?
[02:43:142] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:52:142] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:51:870]?
[02:53:097] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:56:233] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:57:052]?
[02:58:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:58:961]?
[03:00:597] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:01:688]?
[03:07:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:08:233]?
[03:09:324] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:10:142]?
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:13:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:14:233]?
[03:16:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:17:506]?
[03:18:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:18:597]?
[03:20:233] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:21:324]?
[03:22:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:22:961]?
[03:24:870] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:25:142]?
[03:28:415] Maybe add a New Combo?
Topic Starter
Kei

poisonedblood wrote:

I looked at the New Combos,
everything are small suggestions.
Feel free to ignore anything I said for insane though.
Star~ because I want to see this map ranked. Thanks *-* I'll do my best!

[Easy]

[02:07:142] Is this New Combo necessary? Uhmm I'm not sure about this. >o<


[Hard]

[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary? Again >o< Not sure.
[02:53:097] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:53:506]? Sorry but no ;u;
[02:54:188] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:54:597]? No >o<
[02:55:688] Is this New Combo necessary? Not sure about removing it.
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo? Yeah :'D
[03:28:415] ^ Yes C:!

Thanks again for your help >o< I'll do my best to get this map ranked.
Teru21
Hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue sorry for the late :o late :o late :o late :o late :o and late :o :o :o modding...... so.. here we go..

[i k's insane]
01:10:142 - http://puu.sh/7b93
01:12:324 (1,2) - grid : 1 time to the right
01:25:961 (6) - grid: one time down
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (only suggestion)http://puu.sh/7b9M
01:45:324 (5) - http://puu.sh/7bao
02:39:052 (1) - 4 times up http://puu.sh/7baU
02:40:142 (3) - 3 times down

thats all!! Good Luck :D
Takos
Hi~ >w</
Mod accepted from my queue.

General
Is there a reason why the Kiai times are split up? Fix it~
Manually set Audio leadin to 1000 for all diffs. It's missing in the Insane diff.

i_k's Insane

00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a neat triangle? http://puu.sh/7JXZ
01:03:324 (1) - This slider can have a beter shape~
01:12:324 (1,2) - 1 grid right
01:15:597 (6) - 1 grid left
01:19:279 (4) - Ctrl+R?
01:22:415 (5) - Overlapping with previous notes doesn't look pretty ;w;
01:22:961 (1,2,3,4) - Position Suggestion~ http://puu.sh/7JZ2
02:02:506 (4,5,6) - Maybe place this in the middle of the triangle(1,2,3)? http://puu.sh/7JZA
02:39:052 (1,2,3,4) - Place this in the center~
02:46:688 (5) - 2 grids left

Hard

I recommend 1.0x spacing but the mapping is done...
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a equilateral triangle...
02:34:142 (10) - The position is quite random. Perhaps move it to the right so it fits the previous slider's curve?
02:47:506 (1) - Move right so it doesn't touch the next slider?
02:52:415 (1) - Remove NC
02:55:688 (1) - ^
03:15:324 (5) - Stack with the end of 03:14:233 (3) - ?

Normal
02:14:506 (3,1,2,3,4) - Start this from the y-axis~

Nice song~
Good luck for rank~
Neptunus
here we go ~
Genaral: i_k's insane: I suggest a Slider Tick Rate of 2

Normal:
solid enough

Hard:
00:53:915 (2,3,1) - BIG anti jump, not favourable, please closer these two 00:54:324 (3,1) -
02:52:142 (1,1) - these 2 notes not consist a "creative-style" , rather than that, a mis-leading
03:04:961 (1,2,3) - the only and suddenly jump in this time period, closer them please

i_k's insane:
solid enough

that's it
good luck on ranking~
jossieP
ohmygodihavetoredownloadcauseofkei'snewname /.\

qilliam wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section
Removed :)

poisonedblood wrote:

Edit: For Insane the only problem I found that in some places the beats weren't on some lyric parts.
The note already placed go well with the beat, so I wanted to leave it up to you if you wanted to add something on those notes.
hmm maybe I dont map lyrics, I map the music

Teru21 wrote:

[i k's insane]
01:10:142 - http://puu.sh/7b93 - huh?
01:12:324 (1,2) - grid : 1 time to the right - time what?????.... just say 1 grid right <.<
01:25:961 (6) - grid: one time down b
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (only suggestion)http://puu.sh/7b9M ?
01:45:324 (5) - http://puu.sh/7bao - :/
02:39:052 (1) - 4 times up http://puu.sh/7baU b
02:40:142 (3) - 3 times down b

Takos wrote:

i_k's Insane[/color]
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a neat triangle? http://puu.sh/7JXZ
01:03:324 (1) - This slider can have a beter shape~ yeah it can...
01:12:324 (1,2) - 1 grid right
01:15:597 (6) - 1 grid left ffff
01:19:279 (4) - Ctrl+R? rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
01:22:415 (5) - Overlapping with previous notes doesn't look pretty ;w; overlap????
01:22:961 (1,2,3,4) - Position Suggestion~ http://puu.sh/7JZ2
02:02:506 (4,5,6) - Maybe place this in the middle of the triangle(1,2,3)? http://puu.sh/7JZA its on the base
02:39:052 (1,2,3,4) - Place this in the center~ :roll:
02:46:688 (5) - 2 grids left

Neptunus wrote:

Genaral: i_k's insane: I suggest a Slider Tick Rate of 2 - no, thank you!!
Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu (Kei) [i_k's Insane].osu
mancuso_JM_
Hey vaga :P no lo dejes morir please!!
Topic Starter
Kei

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey vaga :P no lo dejes morir please!!
ASDF! Es que estaba ocupada con el liceo D: Ya lo actualizo
mancuso_JM_

Kei wrote:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey vaga :P no lo dejes morir please!!
ASDF! Es que estaba ocupada con el liceo D: Ya lo actualizo
Fucking Liceo que nos arruina a todos jajaj :D
Topic Starter
Kei
Updated!
-Baby Strawberry-
Hihi~!
Here's my modding~!

General
SPOILER
delete .osb then fullsub again.
nothing else~! such a purple skin~!

【i_k's Insane】diff
SPOILER
OD 6 or 7 plz, or people will get annoyed with a very low acc and this is a long song.
00:27:597 (2) - up 1 grid?
00:33:597 (7) - better shape plz.. http://puu.sh/aduO
01:00:052 (8) - better shape..
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump?
01:12:733 (3) - left 1 grid
01:24:052 (5) - better shape
01:45:324 (5) - ^
01:50:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust the note with the DS off, make the note on the same spot
01:57:597 (5) - NC
02:02:779 (5) - put it some where else?
02:03:870 (7) - not a good time for a jump.
02:05:506 (4) - may be like this?http://puu.sh/advP
02:06:597 (7) - NC
02:07:142 (1) - remove NC
02:08:779 (7) - NC
02:09:870 (1) - remove nc
02:11:233 (4) - NC
02:11:779 (1) - remove nc
02:12:733 (3) - NC
02:13:142 (6) - better shape
02:13:688 (1) - remove NC
02:15:051 (1) - remove NC
02:15:324 (2) - NC
02:20:506 (8) - NC?
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - can u make them not blocking 5?
02:37:415 (1,2,3) - jump?
02:43:142 (6) - NC
02:54:597 (1) - better shape http://puu.sh/adwX
02:56:915Form here the NC was weird for me again...
03:29:506 (1,2,3,4) - move not blocking 5
in fact, this diff is like a rough copy in my view, everything is not that neat especially for the sliders. so plz make them better looking if possible. Also, add a break at the second half.

【Hard】diff
SPOILER
00:43:688 (5) - left 1 grid?
00:47:233 (2) - can u make it not blocking?
00:51:052 (3,4,5) - these 3 can use a same symmetric shape and it will give u a better effect.
01:21:597 (4) - up 1 grid?
01:29:506 break right after the spinner http://puu.sh/adz7
02:34:142 (10,1) - i don't think a jump is suitable
02:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - jump~!
02:49:415 (1) - remove?
02:58:142 (5) - remove finish at tail
03:18:597 (2) - just a suggestion:http://puu.sh/adzZ
This diff is a lot better than the insane...
and nice hit sound~!
【Normal】diff
SPOILER
00:19:142 00:19:688 actually u can add 2 notes..
00:57:051 (4) - spacing
00:58:142 (6) - ^
01:11:506 (1,2,3) - make these more round?
02:18:870spinner start at here?
02:52:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make this part like this?http://puu.sh/adBt this sound better to me, and u dont have a break, these slow notes can also be regarded as the break
03:10:961 (3) - move this to form a better star..
Good~!

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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
Good luck~!
Since i am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.
Topic Starter
Kei

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Hihi~!
Here's my modding~!

General
SPOILER
delete .osb then fullsub again. Done
nothing else~! such a purple skin~!

【Hard】diff
SPOILER
00:43:688 (5) - left 1 grid? Uhm.. okay.
00:47:233 (2) - can u make it not blocking? I like how it is
00:51:052 (3,4,5) - these 3 can use a same symmetric shape and it will give u a better effect. Ok.
01:21:597 (4) - up 1 grid? Uh.. ok.
01:29:506 break right after the spinner http://puu.sh/adz7 Done.
02:34:142 (10,1) - i don't think a jump is suitable Sorry but I'll keep the jump.
02:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - jump~! Done.
02:49:415 (1) - remove? Nope, sorry.
02:58:142 (5) - remove finish at tail ^
03:18:597 (2) - just a suggestion:http://puu.sh/adzZ I think that the current one is okay.
This diff is a lot better than the insane... Well.. I didn't mapped the Insane. It's a guest difficulty.
and nice hit sound~! Thanks :3

【Normal】diff
SPOILER
00:19:142 00:19:688 actually u can add 2 notes.. Ok!
00:57:051 (4) - spacing Fixed.
00:58:142 (6) - ^ ^
01:11:506 (1,2,3) - make these more round? Nah, that's unnecesary. Doing that little change would ruin all the next note's spacing.
02:18:870spinner start at here? No ;-;
02:52:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make this part like this?http://puu.sh/adBt this sound better to me, and u dont have a break, these slow notes can also be regarded as the break Nope again, sorry.
03:10:961 (3) - move this to form a better star.. Done
Good~!

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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
Good luck~!
Since i am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.

Thanks a lot for your mod!
jossieP

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

【i_k's Insane】diff
SPOILER
OD 6 or 7 plz, or people will get annoyed with a very low acc and this is a long song. 7
00:27:597 (2) - up 1 grid?
00:33:597 (7) - better shape plz.. http://puu.sh/aduO it is the same design with a different shape =v= so no
01:00:052 (8) - better shape..
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump?
01:12:733 (3) - left 1 grid
01:24:052 (5) - better shape
01:45:324 (5) - ^
01:50:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust the note with the DS off, make the note on the same spot what?
01:57:597 (5) - NC
02:02:779 (5) - put it some where else? where?
02:03:870 (7) - not a good time for a jump.
02:05:506 (4) - may be like this?http://puu.sh/advP
02:06:597 (7) - NC
02:07:142 (1) - remove NC
02:08:779 (7) - NC
02:09:870 (1) - remove nc
02:11:233 (4) - NC
02:11:779 (1) - remove nc
02:12:733 (3) - NC
02:13:142 (6) - better shape
02:13:688 (1) - remove NC
02:15:051 (1) - remove NC
02:15:324 (2) - NC
02:20:506 (8) - NC?
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - can u make them not blocking 5? what blocking?
02:37:415 (1,2,3) - jump?
02:43:142 (6) - NC
02:54:597 (1) - better shape http://puu.sh/adwX
02:56:915Form here the NC was weird for me again...
03:29:506 (1,2,3,4) - move not blocking 5
in fact, this diff is like a rough copy in my view, everything is not that neat especially for the sliders. so plz make them better looking if possible. Also, add a break at the second half. =v= what copy?


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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
... ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.
Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu (Kei) [i_k's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Kei
Updated~
mancuso_JM_
IRC Mod Bla Bla Caca xD.

Mod
00:36 *mancusojuanmattos is editing (Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33143]
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : fuck que duda que me agarre
01:00 <Kei> : weee decime :3
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : en la Normal
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:56:779
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas entre un New Combo pero no se
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : porque despues me viene la duda mas adelante
01:01 <Kei> : ah
01:01 <Kei> : mm..
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:02:779 quizas remover el New Combo
01:02 <Kei> : bueno ese combo lo agrego
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : y agregarlo en 01:04:415
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : duda duda
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:02 <Kei> : fuuuu xD
01:03 <Kei> : mm
01:03 <Kei> : ami me parece que esta bien como esta
01:03 <Kei> : pero el primer combo que me dijiste
01:03 <Kei> : si es mejor
01:03 <Kei> : mm..
01:03 <Kei> : si c:
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : kei estas?
01:28 <Kei> : ah si
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : t hago el mod por aca nomas?
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : es poco
01:30 <Kei> : ok :D
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : bien :)
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : empiezo?
01:30 <Kei> : Si
01:30 <Kei> : que dificultad primero?
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : General
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : esto es re bobo pero ta
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : borra el .osb file de la carpeta y luego full submit
01:31 <Kei> : ah cierto o:
01:31 <Kei> : ok!
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : en Normal y Hard
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : Audio Lead-In 500 creo que esta bien
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : tarda mucho en empezar con 1004
01:33 <Kei> : listo
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : Normal y Hard de vuelta
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : desde 00:01:688-00:19:688
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : no escucho los soft hitnormal
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : suenan bajo
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : recien empiezo a escuchar los hitsound cuando agregas Hitfinishes y Hitwhistles
01:35 <Kei> : osea
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias subir el sample a 90%
01:35 <Kei> : 00:01:688 (1) -
01:35 <Kei> : desde ahi
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : siip
01:35 <Kei> : o.o hasta el break?
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : si
01:35 <Kei> : bien
01:35 <Kei> : voy :3
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : osea mapea toda la cancion con 90%
01:36 <Kei> : listo
01:36 <mancusojuanmattos> : ahora la Normal
01:37 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:19:142 (5)-
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : Suena fuera de lugar ese (5)
01:38 <Kei> : que tiene :3?
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : es raro
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : como que no me va en el tick blanco
01:39 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias moverlo 1/2 adelante
01:41 <Kei> : o.o
01:41 <Kei> : y y
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:41 <Kei> : pero pero pero
01:41 <Kei> : si le pongo eso
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : capaz que soy yo
01:41 <Kei> : no queda mejor si le pongo una nota
01:41 <Kei> : en
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:415 (6) -
01:42 <Kei> : digo
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:142 (5) -
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : no habia visto eso
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : buena idea
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:42 <Kei> : weeee :B
01:42 <Kei> : lo pongo xD
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : sigo
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:51:052 (3)-
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo por cambio de voz
01:45 <Kei> : agregado
01:45 <Kei> : o:
01:45 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:26:779 (6)-
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo de vuelta
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:48 <Kei> : O:
01:48 <Kei> : aver
01:48 <Kei> : cierto
01:48 <Kei> : listo :B
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:25:688 (x)-
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : Una Nota aqui + New Combo en esta nota
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : ya que la voz empieza aca
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : puedes apilarla con 02:26:233
01:50 <Kei> : si
01:50 <Kei> : :D eso iba a hacer xD
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : jaja :D
01:51 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que por el New Combo que hablamos hoy
01:52 <mancusojuanmattos> : deberia ir uno en 02:58:415 (3)-
01:52 <Kei> : o:!
01:52 <Kei> : agregado
01:53 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que en Normal nada mas
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : Hard
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:18:597 (1,1,1,1)-
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : No soy muy amante de este (1,1,1,1) usualmente no siguen la song
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que (1,2,3,4) juega mejor
01:57 <Kei> : voy
01:57 <Kei> : arreglaba una cosita
01:58 <Kei> : en cuanto a
01:58 <Kei> : eso de 1,1,1,1
01:58 <Kei> : podria sacar el new combo de la nota que esta en 00:19:006 -
01:58 <Kei> : y la siguiente
01:58 <Kei> : y dejar new combo en la ultima
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : si puede ser
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : queda mejor que 1,1,1,1
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : :P
01:59 <Kei> : :D y
01:59 <Kei> : aver lo otro que me dijiste
02:00 <Kei> : ah nada
02:00 <Kei> : xD
02:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : :P
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:18:324 (5)-
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:01 <Kei> : o: cierto
02:01 <Kei> : xD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : al igual que en 01:22:688 (6)-
02:02 <Kei> : agregado tambien
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
02:02 <Kei> : cuantos errores se me pasan
02:02 <Kei> : XD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : son pequeñas cosas
02:03 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver creo que me queda una cosa
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:31:961 (7)-
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : encontre solo esas cosas
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : asdsasa
02:05 <Kei> : O:
02:05 <Kei> : listo! Gracias :D
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : ups creo que se me paso algo
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : te acordas del 1,1,1,1
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : que quedo en 1,2,3,1
02:06 <Kei> : si
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:37:142 usaste casi lo mismo con 1,2,3,4
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas al (4) debes agregrle un NC
02:08 <Kei> : cierto
02:08 <Kei> : para que quede igual o:
jossieP

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

IRC Mod Bla Bla Caca xD.

Mod
00:36 *mancusojuanmattos is editing (Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33143]
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : fuck que duda que me agarre
01:00 <Kei> : weee decime :3
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : en la Normal
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:56:779
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas entre un New Combo pero no se
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : porque despues me viene la duda mas adelante
01:01 <Kei> : ah
01:01 <Kei> : mm..
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:02:779 quizas remover el New Combo
01:02 <Kei> : bueno ese combo lo agrego
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : y agregarlo en 01:04:415
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : duda duda
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:02 <Kei> : fuuuu xD
01:03 <Kei> : mm
01:03 <Kei> : ami me parece que esta bien como esta
01:03 <Kei> : pero el primer combo que me dijiste
01:03 <Kei> : si es mejor
01:03 <Kei> : mm..
01:03 <Kei> : si c:
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : kei estas?
01:28 <Kei> : ah si
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : t hago el mod por aca nomas?
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : es poco
01:30 <Kei> : ok :D
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : bien :)
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : empiezo?
01:30 <Kei> : Si
01:30 <Kei> : que dificultad primero?
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : General
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : esto es re bobo pero ta
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : borra el .osb file de la carpeta y luego full submit
01:31 <Kei> : ah cierto o:
01:31 <Kei> : ok!
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : en Normal y Hard
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : Audio Lead-In 500 creo que esta bien
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : tarda mucho en empezar con 1004
01:33 <Kei> : listo
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : Normal y Hard de vuelta
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : desde 00:01:688-00:19:688
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : no escucho los soft hitnormal
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : suenan bajo
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : recien empiezo a escuchar los hitsound cuando agregas Hitfinishes y Hitwhistles
01:35 <Kei> : osea
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias subir el sample a 90%
01:35 <Kei> : 00:01:688 (1) -
01:35 <Kei> : desde ahi
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : siip
01:35 <Kei> : o.o hasta el break?
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : si
01:35 <Kei> : bien
01:35 <Kei> : voy :3
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : osea mapea toda la cancion con 90%
01:36 <Kei> : listo
01:36 <mancusojuanmattos> : ahora la Normal
01:37 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:19:142 (5)-
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : Suena fuera de lugar ese (5)
01:38 <Kei> : que tiene :3?
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : es raro
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : como que no me va en el tick blanco
01:39 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias moverlo 1/2 adelante
01:41 <Kei> : o.o
01:41 <Kei> : y y
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:41 <Kei> : pero pero pero
01:41 <Kei> : si le pongo eso
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : capaz que soy yo
01:41 <Kei> : no queda mejor si le pongo una nota
01:41 <Kei> : en
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:415 (6) -
01:42 <Kei> : digo
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:142 (5) -
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : no habia visto eso
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : buena idea
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:42 <Kei> : weeee :B
01:42 <Kei> : lo pongo xD
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : sigo
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:51:052 (3)-
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo por cambio de voz
01:45 <Kei> : agregado
01:45 <Kei> : o:
01:45 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:26:779 (6)-
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo de vuelta
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:48 <Kei> : O:
01:48 <Kei> : aver
01:48 <Kei> : cierto
01:48 <Kei> : listo :B
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:25:688 (x)-
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : Una Nota aqui + New Combo en esta nota
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : ya que la voz empieza aca
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : puedes apilarla con 02:26:233
01:50 <Kei> : si
01:50 <Kei> : :D eso iba a hacer xD
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : jaja :D
01:51 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que por el New Combo que hablamos hoy
01:52 <mancusojuanmattos> : deberia ir uno en 02:58:415 (3)-
01:52 <Kei> : o:!
01:52 <Kei> : agregado
01:53 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que en Normal nada mas
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : Hard
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:18:597 (1,1,1,1)-
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : No soy muy amante de este (1,1,1,1) usualmente no siguen la song
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que (1,2,3,4) juega mejor
01:57 <Kei> : voy
01:57 <Kei> : arreglaba una cosita
01:58 <Kei> : en cuanto a
01:58 <Kei> : eso de 1,1,1,1
01:58 <Kei> : podria sacar el new combo de la nota que esta en 00:19:006 -
01:58 <Kei> : y la siguiente
01:58 <Kei> : y dejar new combo en la ultima
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : si puede ser
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : queda mejor que 1,1,1,1
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : :P
01:59 <Kei> : :D y
01:59 <Kei> : aver lo otro que me dijiste
02:00 <Kei> : ah nada
02:00 <Kei> : xD
02:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : :P
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:18:324 (5)-
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:01 <Kei> : o: cierto
02:01 <Kei> : xD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : al igual que en 01:22:688 (6)-
02:02 <Kei> : agregado tambien
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
02:02 <Kei> : cuantos errores se me pasan
02:02 <Kei> : XD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : son pequeñas cosas
02:03 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver creo que me queda una cosa
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:31:961 (7)-
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : encontre solo esas cosas
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : asdsasa
02:05 <Kei> : O:
02:05 <Kei> : listo! Gracias :D
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : ups creo que se me paso algo
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : te acordas del 1,1,1,1
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : que quedo en 1,2,3,1
02:06 <Kei> : si
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:37:142 usaste casi lo mismo con 1,2,3,4
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas al (4) debes agregrle un NC
02:08 <Kei> : cierto
02:08 <Kei> : para que quede igual o:
1 hora de irc mod \:D/
mancuso_JM_
jaja fue bastante cortado, elimine unas cosas personales mias y de kei xD que no pertenecian al mod :P
Topic Starter
Kei
Fue 1 hora de pura emoción (?) LOL
Qliphoth_old
Okay.
jossieP
@xMatryoshka > ????
Qliphoth_old
Nothing, just kidding xD
jossieP
this is not an off-topic thread...
Topic Starter
Kei
Hola :3 (?)
Louis Cyphre
[Hard]
I dislike a lot that you have used stacky spacing (no grid space between notes)
00:54:597 (1) - too sudden jump
Difficulty is full of crooked sliders like these: 00:06:052 (1) - 00:43:688 (5) - 00:59:915 (4) - 01:58:551 (6) - 01:59:506 (1) - 02:07:551 (6) - etc
and ugly overlaps like these: 00:47:233 (2) - 01:20:779 (3,5) - 01:22:961 (2,4) - etc

[Insane]
overmapped - overmapped...
00:30:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - square awkward style streams with big distance ;w;

no-no map needs more work, no kudosu please.
Leorda
Hello there

General
* spinner-approachcircle is blend from spinner, try make it darker?
* Inconsistent kiai time (Source : AIBat) puu.sh/cmbg


Normal

00:42:597 (1) - Remove new combo? Like others?
00:46:415 (1,2,3) - This pattern is doesn't following the vocal, try make this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212572
01:23:506 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider for good rhythm?
02:07:142 (1) - Remove new combo for pattern?
02:25:688 (1) - Add whistle, since it's downbeat?
02:28:961 (7,8,1) - This stacks is makes boring for beginner, try making a good pattern?
02:30:324 (2) - This slider is kinda make sense if the slider is follow the vocal. Try move to 02:30:597, end at 02:31:142 and add note at 02:30:324. You should end up like this http://puu.sh/clYQ
02:52:142 (1) - Would be nice if this move to 02:52:415, since the slider is fit to the vocal
03:21:324 (5) - Spacing error here


Hard
* I like the blanket combo <3

00:36:597 ~ 01:10:961 - This sections is lacks of hitsound, try adding whistle, like other diff
00:47:233 (2) - I don't like if this slider overlapper by previous slider (Nazi)
01:20:233 (1) - Add whistle?
01:54:052 (7,8) - I think these pattern is good for following vocal http://puu.sh/cm3u
02:05:370 (4) - Perhaps, replace this into a slider that end at 02:05:642 for following vocal?
02:18:461 (4) - Whistle at head slider is doesn't fit, IMO
02:21:324 (1) - This slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's hard to understand for players, look at test mode
02:26:233 (2) - ^
02:29:097 (1) - Add whistle?


i_k's Insane

* I agree with Lucifer, this diff is overmapped. If you have a stream (e.g. 00:04:415 (1,2,3,4,5)) or triplets (00:28:688 (3,4,5)), try ask yourself with one question : "Is this streams and triplets are fit to music?". If you say no, then you have to remove the notes inside the stream/triplets and change a new pattern

00:30:324 (2,3) - Try make a same slider as 00:29:779 (1) to avoiding players for confusing
00:49:006 (4) - I feel this object is overlapped by hitbursts
00:56:506 (1) - End this slider at 00:56:779 and add note at 00:57:052 for following vocal?
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - This finish hitsound are not fit, IMO
02:43:688 (8) - New combo for stanza? Like others?


Not bad for me, PM me for reheck (since this map is too old)
Topic Starter
Kei

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

General
* spinner-approachcircle is blend from spinner, try make it darker? Done.
* Inconsistent kiai time (Source : AIBat) puu.sh/cmbg Fixed.


Normal

00:42:597 (1) - Remove new combo? Like others? Ok!
00:46:415 (1,2,3) - This pattern is doesn't following the vocal, try make this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212572 ^
01:23:506 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider for good rhythm? ^
02:07:142 (1) - Remove new combo for pattern? ^
02:25:688 (1) - Add whistle, since it's downbeat? ^
02:28:961 (7,8,1) - This stacks is makes boring for beginner, try making a good pattern? Now It's better, I guess.
02:30:324 (2) - This slider is kinda make sense if the slider is follow the vocal. Try move to 02:30:597, end at 02:31:142 and add note at 02:30:324. You should end up like this http://puu.sh/clYQ Done.
02:52:142 (1) - Would be nice if this move to 02:52:415, since the slider is fit to the vocal ^
03:21:324 (5) - Spacing error here Oh you're right. Fixed.

I've improved a bit this difficulty with your suggestions. Now it looks and sounds better.

Hard
* I like the blanket combo <3 Yay! c:

00:36:597 ~ 01:10:961 - This sections is lacks of hitsound, try adding whistle, like other diff Added whistles.
00:47:233 (2) - I don't like if this slider overlapper by previous slider (Nazi) It seems like noone likes it so I changed it.
01:20:233 (1) - Add whistle? Ok
01:54:052 (7,8) - I think these pattern is good for following vocal http://puu.sh/cm3u Sounds nice c:
02:05:370 (4) - Perhaps, replace this into a slider that end at 02:05:642 for following vocal? ^
02:18:461 (4) - Whistle at head slider is doesn't fit, IMO I like how it sounds there.
02:21:324 (1) - This slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's hard to understand for players, look at test mode Fixed.
02:26:233 (2) - ^ ^
02:29:097 (1) - Add whistle? Yeah.


Not bad for me, PM me for reheck (since this map is too old) Ok. I'm waiting for Kyon's update. Thank you~
Santa Claw
The creator is No.D, you should put the name in the Source/Tags.
In i_k's insane, 01:24:052 (5) - LOL.
Besides the name of the creator, everything (diffs, hitsounds, etc.) is awesome and should be ranked :D
Topic Starter
Kei

Santa Claw wrote:

The creator is No.D, you should put the name in the Source/Tags. I added it to Source, since most of the Vocaloid songs have Creator Name in Source.
In i_k's insane, 01:24:052 (5) - LOL.
Besides the name of the creator, everything (diffs, hitsounds, etc.) is awesome and should be ranked :D Thanks for your help and support :)
jossieP

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

i_k's Insane

* I agree with Lucifer, this diff is overmapped. If you have a stream (e.g. 00:04:415 (1,2,3,4,5)) or triplets (00:28:688 (3,4,5)), try ask yourself with one question : "Is this streams and triplets are fit to music?". If you say no, then you have to remove the notes inside the stream/triplets and change a new pattern - ok Ill change many stuff :3

00:30:324 (2,3) - Try make a same slider as 00:29:779 (1) to avoiding players for confusing
00:49:006 (4) - I feel this object is overlapped by hitbursts
00:56:506 (1) - End this slider at 00:56:779 and add note at 00:57:052 for following vocal?
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - This finish hitsound are not fit, IMO
02:43:688 (8) - New combo for stanza? Like others?
:3

Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu (Kei) [i_k's Insane].osu
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