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Topic Starter
Oh hi.
Normal
Okay, you don't need so many angles in your sliders. They're not fun to be seen overused like this. Try to balance how much you use Bevelled, Curved, and straight sliders so that one sight doesn't get bland. Try not to use it much so that we don't generally see the same thing over and over again. Just use the Angle-curve sliders every so often, not every ten seconds.
That's all.
Hard
01:20:233 Combo
7 - What the hell? This just looks bad. I'm sorry, but that slider looks like a broken croissant.
01:24:870 Combo
2,3 - Replace these with two hitcircles each. A line of four sliders in a row just disappoints me. I mean honestly.
01:52:142 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles.
3 - Replace this with two hitcircles. This is just stupid. We don't need FIVE FREAKING SLIDERS in a row. This isn't Love-Coloured Master Spark.
01:56:506 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles. It's okay to have a three-circle stream. Just don't start every combo with a slider (besides the previous combo but still)
02:38:779 Combo
6,7 - Start a new combo with one of these. Even in a hard map, a streak of ten circles in one combo just looks bad.
02:43:142 Combo
4,5 - Same as above. Basically, if the hitcircle rate gets above 8 without there having been a stream, it just doesn't look good at all.
02:52:415 Combo
2,3,4,5 - Please, don't make stacks of two hitcircles one after the other. It just doesn't look right.
02:53:779 Combo
1,2,3,4 - See above.
(Basically, see above for every combo that does this.)
I'm sorry, but when there are almost as many sliders as there are circles, in a HARD map, that's just bad. Please, replace some of those with hitcircles. I really don't want to see a second incarnation of a certain Marisa Kirisame theme's map.
i_k
Nothing I can really identify, since I have absolutely no skill with modding Insane maps, but I will say that the distance snap needs to be lowered a bit.
The map is nice, just too many damn sliders. I hope it gets ranked after a bit of work.
Normal
Okay, you don't need so many angles in your sliders. They're not fun to be seen overused like this. Try to balance how much you use Bevelled, Curved, and straight sliders so that one sight doesn't get bland. Try not to use it much so that we don't generally see the same thing over and over again. Just use the Angle-curve sliders every so often, not every ten seconds.
That's all.
Hard
01:20:233 Combo
7 - What the hell? This just looks bad. I'm sorry, but that slider looks like a broken croissant.
01:24:870 Combo
2,3 - Replace these with two hitcircles each. A line of four sliders in a row just disappoints me. I mean honestly.
01:52:142 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles.
3 - Replace this with two hitcircles. This is just stupid. We don't need FIVE FREAKING SLIDERS in a row. This isn't Love-Coloured Master Spark.
01:56:506 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles. It's okay to have a three-circle stream. Just don't start every combo with a slider (besides the previous combo but still)
02:38:779 Combo
6,7 - Start a new combo with one of these. Even in a hard map, a streak of ten circles in one combo just looks bad.
02:43:142 Combo
4,5 - Same as above. Basically, if the hitcircle rate gets above 8 without there having been a stream, it just doesn't look good at all.
02:52:415 Combo
2,3,4,5 - Please, don't make stacks of two hitcircles one after the other. It just doesn't look right.
02:53:779 Combo
1,2,3,4 - See above.
(Basically, see above for every combo that does this.)
I'm sorry, but when there are almost as many sliders as there are circles, in a HARD map, that's just bad. Please, replace some of those with hitcircles. I really don't want to see a second incarnation of a certain Marisa Kirisame theme's map.
i_k
Nothing I can really identify, since I have absolutely no skill with modding Insane maps, but I will say that the distance snap needs to be lowered a bit.
The map is nice, just too many damn sliders. I hope it gets ranked after a bit of work.
Topic Starter
Esupanitix wrote:
Oh hi.
Normal
Okay, you don't need so many angles in your sliders. They're not fun to be seen overused like this. Try to balance how much you use Bevelled, Curved, and straight sliders so that one sight doesn't get bland. Try not to use it much so that we don't generally see the same thing over and over again. Just use the Angle-curve sliders every so often, not every ten seconds. I like how it looks D:
That's all.
Hard
01:20:233 Combo
7 - What the hell? This just looks bad. I'm sorry, but that slider looks like a broken croissant. Ok
01:24:870 Combo
2,3 - Replace these with two hitcircles each. A line of four sliders in a row just disappoints me. I mean honestly. Ok
01:52:142 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles.Ok
3 - Replace this with two hitcircles. This is just stupid. We don't need FIVE FREAKING SLIDERS in a row. This isn't Love-Coloured Master Spark. Fixed. Just don't kill me o.ò
01:56:506 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles. It's okay to have a three-circle stream. Just don't start every combo with a slider (besides the previous combo but still) Ok
02:38:779 Combo
6,7 - Start a new combo with one of these. Even in a hard map, a streak of ten circles in one combo just looks bad. Ok
02:43:142 Combo
4,5 - Same as above. Basically, if the hitcircle rate gets above 8 without there having been a stream, it just doesn't look good at all. Ok
02:52:415 Combo
2,3,4,5 - Please, don't make stacks of two hitcircles one after the other. It just doesn't look right. I like it in this way .-.
02:53:779 Combo
1,2,3,4 - See above.
(Basically, see above for every combo that does this.)
I'm sorry, but when there are almost as many sliders as there are circles, in a HARD map, that's just bad. Please, replace some of those with hitcircles. I really don't want to see a second incarnation of a certain Marisa Kirisame theme's map.
i_k
Nothing I can really identify, since I have absolutely no skill with modding Insane maps, but I will say that the distance snap needs to be lowered a bit.
The map is nice, just too many damn sliders. I hope it gets ranked after a bit of work. Fixed most of things. Thanks for your mod c:
Hey there 
Normal
03:15:870 (1) Remove new combo
I know, only to remove a new combo for one diff isn't very good
but I think this diff had enough improvement.
Hard
...Nothing to say at all o.O I'm a bit confused that I didn't found out something...
Guest Diff
00:15:324 (1) I don't like this slider^^
00:16:142 (1) Remove this circle, because it doesn't sound good for me
00:30:597 (2) This hidden circles confuses
00:43:415 (3) Put this circle 1 field above, it looks besser and more "symmetrical" to 4 and 5
00:54:324 (1) Same like above
02:34:688 (3) How about changing the colour of this circle?
02:45:597 (1) Put this circle above the end of slider (2)
02:56:233 (6) New combo
02:57:052 (1) Remove new combo
Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least
Vortex
Normal
03:15:870 (1) Remove new combo
I know, only to remove a new combo for one diff isn't very good
but I think this diff had enough improvement.Hard
...Nothing to say at all o.O I'm a bit confused that I didn't found out something...
Guest Diff
00:15:324 (1) I don't like this slider^^
00:16:142 (1) Remove this circle, because it doesn't sound good for me
00:30:597 (2) This hidden circles confuses
00:43:415 (3) Put this circle 1 field above, it looks besser and more "symmetrical" to 4 and 5
00:54:324 (1) Same like above
02:34:688 (3) How about changing the colour of this circle?
02:45:597 (1) Put this circle above the end of slider (2)
02:56:233 (6) New combo
02:57:052 (1) Remove new combo
Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least
Vortex
Topic Starter
Vortex wrote:
Hey there
Normal
03:15:870 (1) Remove new combo Uhmm.. I don't know :c If I remove that combo then the combo goes to 10 and I think that is a high combo number x.x I'll remove it if someone mentions it again.
I know, only to remove a new combo for one diff isn't very good
Hard
...Nothing to say at all o.O I'm a bit confused that I didn't found out something... Really?
Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least
Vortex
Hi
[Normal]
00:46:415 - try adding a note here?
00:50:779 - ^, omitting notes on white lines isn't too friendly to new players
[Hard]
00:39:052 (3) - imo rotating 180 would be better
others fine for me
[i_k's Insane]
00:08:370 (3) - this slider is not that good-looking imo, maybe make it straight, or simply replace with 2 circles?
00:08:779 (1) - end this 1/4 earlier and move 00:09:461 (2) to 00:09:324 - ?
00:15:324 (1) - end 1/4 earlier and move 00:16:142 (2,3) - to 00:16:006 - , fits the song better imo
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - maybe make an equilateral triangle here?
00:44:642 - add note?
00:52:142 (2) - maybe make this by copy/paste/rotating 00:51:324 (1) - . Looks better imo
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump like you did before? ._.
01:17:642 (1) - this spacing was readable, but unreasonable. I'd suggest DS here.
02:24:051 (1,3) - fix the shapes of those sliders please = = those really are ugly...
Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~
[Normal]
00:46:415 - try adding a note here?
00:50:779 - ^, omitting notes on white lines isn't too friendly to new players
[Hard]
00:39:052 (3) - imo rotating 180 would be better
others fine for me
[i_k's Insane]
00:08:370 (3) - this slider is not that good-looking imo, maybe make it straight, or simply replace with 2 circles?
00:08:779 (1) - end this 1/4 earlier and move 00:09:461 (2) to 00:09:324 - ?
00:15:324 (1) - end 1/4 earlier and move 00:16:142 (2,3) - to 00:16:006 - , fits the song better imo
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - maybe make an equilateral triangle here?
00:44:642 - add note?
00:52:142 (2) - maybe make this by copy/paste/rotating 00:51:324 (1) - . Looks better imo
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump like you did before? ._.
01:17:642 (1) - this spacing was readable, but unreasonable. I'd suggest DS here.
02:24:051 (1,3) - fix the shapes of those sliders please = = those really are ugly...
Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~
Topic Starter
Cirno wrote:
Hi
[Normal]
00:46:415 - try adding a note here? Added.
00:50:779 - ^, omitting notes on white lines isn't too friendly to new players Added.
[Hard]
00:39:052 (3) - imo rotating 180 would be better Ok
others fine for me
Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ Thanks!! *-*
Normal:
-Tick rate 1?
00:34:688 - This break ends too early, perhaps reinsert it?
00:55:688 (2) - Too close to (1)
01:30:052 - This break starts too late
01:44:506 - ends too early
01:53:506 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider?
Hard:
00:19:688 ~ 00:36:052 - reinsert this break
01:21:870 (5,7) - remove the whistle from the body of these sliders?
02:53:779 (1) - remove NC?
02:56:233 (1,2) - perhaps go back to 1.0x here?
i_k's Insane:
00:08:370 (3) - replace with 2 notes?
00:18:188 (6) - ^
00:21:461 (3) - ^
00:44:779 (3) - too close to (2)
00:49:415 (1) - remove NC
00:50:233 (3) - add NC
00:56:506 (1) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider
00:57:870 (6) - ^
00:58:688 (2) - (nazi) make this vertical? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137651
01:01:688 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? Note: I'm going to stop pointing these out here, if you agree please go through the map and remove any whistles in the future
01:30:052 - reinsert this break
02:13:142 (6,1) - Switch NCs?
02:27:870 (1) - Remove NC
02:53:097 (1,3) - Switch NCs?
03:04:142 (5) - too far from (4)
03:14:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any particular reason this group is spaced closer? If not, space it normally please~
03:19:961 (4) - too far from (3)
03:20:779 (6,1) - Switch NCs?
03:25:142 (5) - Add NC, remove NC from 03:25:961 (1), add NC on 03:27:324 (6), then remove NC from 03:28:415 (1)?
Nice map~
-Tick rate 1?
00:34:688 - This break ends too early, perhaps reinsert it?
00:55:688 (2) - Too close to (1)
01:30:052 - This break starts too late
01:44:506 - ends too early
01:53:506 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider?
Hard:
00:19:688 ~ 00:36:052 - reinsert this break
01:21:870 (5,7) - remove the whistle from the body of these sliders?
02:53:779 (1) - remove NC?
02:56:233 (1,2) - perhaps go back to 1.0x here?
i_k's Insane:
00:08:370 (3) - replace with 2 notes?
00:18:188 (6) - ^
00:21:461 (3) - ^
00:44:779 (3) - too close to (2)
00:49:415 (1) - remove NC
00:50:233 (3) - add NC
00:56:506 (1) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider
00:57:870 (6) - ^
00:58:688 (2) - (nazi) make this vertical? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137651
01:01:688 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? Note: I'm going to stop pointing these out here, if you agree please go through the map and remove any whistles in the future
01:30:052 - reinsert this break
02:13:142 (6,1) - Switch NCs?
02:27:870 (1) - Remove NC
02:53:097 (1,3) - Switch NCs?
03:04:142 (5) - too far from (4)
03:14:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any particular reason this group is spaced closer? If not, space it normally please~
03:19:961 (4) - too far from (3)
03:20:779 (6,1) - Switch NCs?
03:25:142 (5) - Add NC, remove NC from 03:25:961 (1), add NC on 03:27:324 (6), then remove NC from 03:28:415 (1)?
Nice map~
Vortex wrote:
Guest Diff you mean me right? =o
00:15:324 (1) I don't like this slider^^ fffffffffff
00:16:142 (1) Remove this circle, because it doesn't sound good for me sound worst without it for me
00:30:597 (2) This hidden circles confuses fk yeah
00:43:415 (3) Put this circle 1 field above, it looks besser and more "symmetrical" to 4 and 5 hmmmm iòmg
00:54:324 (1) Same like above
02:34:688 (3) How about changing the colour of this circle? why??
02:45:597 (1) Put this circle above the end of slider (2) where?
02:56:233 (6) New combo nope >w<
02:57:052 (1) Remove new combo ^
Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least
Vortex
Cirno wrote:
Hi hi :3~
[i_k's Insane]
00:08:370 (3) - this slider is not that good-looking imo, maybe make it straight, or simply replace with 2 circles? ohmygodmyslidersareveryveryuglyx.x
00:08:779 (1) - end this 1/4 earlier and move 00:09:461 (2) to 00:09:324 - ? god no x3
00:15:324 (1) - end 1/4 earlier and move 00:16:142 (2,3) - to 00:16:006 - , fits the song better imo fffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuu
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - maybe make an equilateral triangle here? Im not symetrical but anyway
00:44:642 - add note? yeah
00:52:142 (2) - maybe make this by copy/paste/rotating 00:51:324 (1) - . Looks better imo almost the same :/
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump like you did before? ._. 1,0x spacing
01:17:642 (1) - this spacing was readable, but unreasonable. I'd suggest DS here. poison-chan :/
02:24:051 (1,3) - fix the shapes of those sliders please = = those really are ugly... ohmygodmyslidershapesareuglyasiam
Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ ;w;
Your message is too short.pieguy1372 wrote:
i_k's Insane: pieguy :3~
00:08:370 (3) - replace with 2 notes? ok
00:18:188 (6) - ^ ^
00:21:461 (3) - ^ ^
00:44:779 (3) - too close to (2) already fixed
00:49:415 (1) - remove NC wwwwwww
00:50:233 (3) - add NC uuuuuuu
00:56:506 (1) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider cant remember when I put this O_o
00:57:870 (6) - ^
00:58:688 (2) - (nazi) make this vertical? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137651 vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
01:01:688 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? Note: I'm going to stop pointing these out here, if you agree please go through the map and remove any whistles in the future Im sorry T^T
01:30:052 - reinsert this break
02:13:142 (6,1) - Switch NCs? nope =o
02:27:870 (1) - Remove NC yup
02:53:097 (1,3) - Switch NCs? wwerwer
03:04:142 (5) - too far from (4) =OOO
03:14:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any particular reason this group is spaced closer? If not, space it normally please~ .,.,.,.
03:19:961 (4) - too far from (3) closer
03:20:779 (6,1) - Switch NCs? xvzvzxv
03:25:142 (5) - Add NC, remove NC from 03:25:961 (1), add NC on 03:27:324 (6), then remove NC from 03:28:415 (1)? hope maked it right T^T
Nice map~ thanks for you :3
Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu (Keilara) [i_k's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Woah I'm really really late.
pieguy 1372
pieguy1372 wrote:
Normal:
-Tick rate 1? Uhmm no D:
00:34:688 - This break ends too early, perhaps reinsert it? Okay
00:55:688 (2) - Too close to (1) Theyre ok to me >-> I'll leave it as it is
01:30:052 - This break starts too late Fixed
01:44:506 - ends too early
01:53:506 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? Yeah!
Hard:
00:19:688 ~ 00:36:052 - reinsert this break
01:21:870 (5,7) - remove the whistle from the body of these sliders? Ok!
02:53:779 (1) - remove NC? Ok
02:56:233 (1,2) - perhaps go back to 1.0x here? No D:
Nice map~ Thanks for your mod
Anyway... Updated.GLF09 wrote:
Tengo el presentimiento de que te diste muchas stars
xD Y en cuanto a tí... El nuevo sistema de stars requiere que moddees maps de otras personas para dar prioridad a tu map, con el propósito de aprender de los demás maps de la gente. Ya no se pueden dar stars porque sí como antes, ahora valen Kudosu.. y si querés que tu map no quede ignorado vas a tener que usar los Kudosus en tu propio map ya que ahora gran mayoría las usará para sus propios maps.. si te dan una star ahora, a esa persona si que le gusto el map, o le interesó la canción. Es obvio que iba a tener muchas estrellitas mias ._. What's the point?
Normal
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2
00:12:597- Spacing cuz far
01:30:052- why break drag here ?
Hard
00:12:597- Remove new combo
00:13:142- New combo
Insane
Break times should be similar to diff
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2
00:12:597- Spacing cuz far
01:30:052- why break drag here ?
Hard
00:12:597- Remove new combo
00:13:142- New combo
Insane
Topic Starter
HellDawn wrote:
Normal
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 Ok~
00:12:597- Spacing cuz far Fixed
01:30:052- why break drag here ? Good question xDU Fixed
Hard
00:12:597- Remove new combo Uh no :c sorry.
00:13:142- New combo ^
Thanks!
Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja
General:
Yo elgiria el mismo slider tick rate para todas las dificultades pero ustedes ven , mapean mejor que yo
Normal:
00:43:688 (5): New Combo
03:27:870 (3):Creo que si eliminas esta nota suena mejor
Hard:
00:19:688 (x): Agrega una nota aqui creo que suena bien
02:04:415 (1): Saca el New Combo
02:04:961 (2): New Combo
i_k's Insane:
00:33:324 (6): Esta nota creo que no sigue el ritmo, yo la eliminaria pero tu eliges
01:26:233 (7): New Combo
01:57:597 (5): New Combo
02:04:412 (x): Agrega una nota con FINISH
02:20:506 (8): Quizas Finish??
02:53:501 (7): New Combo
03:31:961 (spin): Finish?? creo que suena mejor que whistle
Solo estas recomendaciones tu ves si las tomas o las dejas jajaj suerte!!!!!
General:
Yo elgiria el mismo slider tick rate para todas las dificultades pero ustedes ven , mapean mejor que yo
Normal:
00:43:688 (5): New Combo
03:27:870 (3):Creo que si eliminas esta nota suena mejor
Hard:
00:19:688 (x): Agrega una nota aqui creo que suena bien
02:04:415 (1): Saca el New Combo
02:04:961 (2): New Combo
i_k's Insane:
00:33:324 (6): Esta nota creo que no sigue el ritmo, yo la eliminaria pero tu eliges
01:26:233 (7): New Combo
01:57:597 (5): New Combo
02:04:412 (x): Agrega una nota con FINISH
02:20:506 (8): Quizas Finish??
02:53:501 (7): New Combo
03:31:961 (spin): Finish?? creo que suena mejor que whistle
Solo estas recomendaciones tu ves si las tomas o las dejas jajaj suerte!!!!!
Topic Starter
mancusojuanmattos wrote:
Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja xDD
General:
Yo elgiria el mismo slider tick rate para todas las dificultades pero ustedes ven , mapean mejor que yo
Normal:
00:43:688 (5): New Combo No.. pero en vez de ponerle New Combo a (5) se lo puse a (4).
03:27:870 (3):Creo que si eliminas esta nota suena mejor Uh.. no :c lo siento ;u;''
Hard:
00:19:688 (x): Agrega una nota aqui creo que suena bien Ok
02:04:415 (1): Saca el New Combo Hmm D: Lo dejaré como está y si alguien más lo menciona lo quito.
02:04:961 (2): New Combo ^
Solo estas recomendaciones tu ves si las tomas o las dejas jajaj suerte!!!!!
=o no new file?mancusojuanmattos wrote:
Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja
unrequested mod \o/
i_k's Insane:
00:33:324 (6): Esta nota creo que no sigue el ritmo, yo la eliminaria pero tu eliges queda vacio x3
01:26:233 (7): New Combo el nuevo combo tendria solo 3 objects
01:57:597 (5): New Combo nope o/
02:04:412 (x): Agrega una nota con FINISH =o
02:20:506 (8): Quizas Finish?? suena bien sin el finish
02:53:501 (7): New Combo sadfasdfasdf
03:31:961 (spin): Finish?? creo que suena mejor que whistle asfdaerwer
Hi~
Easy
01:18:052 (5) - New combo ?
01:22:415 (5) - ^
02:09:870 (2) - Make this a mirror of (1) w/o reverse slider
02:52:142 (1) - Move it somewhere to prevent overlap with (3)
02:55:688 (6) - One grid down
Hard
00:40:145 (7) - Align this with (5 and 6) ?
i_K's Insane
Fine~
_______________________________________________-
That's all~
FINE?? O-ODragonSparta wrote:
Hi~
i_K's Insane
Fine~
Topic Starter
DragonSparta wrote:
Hi~
Easy
01:18:052 (5) - New combo ? Ok
01:22:415 (5) - ^ Ok!
02:09:870 (2) - Make this a mirror of (1) w/o reverse slider Yeah
02:52:142 (1) - Move it somewhere to prevent overlap with (3) ^
02:55:688 (6) - One grid down Done
Hard
00:40:145 (7) - Align this with (5 and 6) ? Done
i_K's Insane
Fine~ Yay!
_______________________________________________-
That's all~ Thanks!
[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section
[hard] : the circle/slider placement in this difficulty looks very beautiful
03:17:506 - useless timing section
03:17:506 - useless timing section
[hard] : the circle/slider placement in this difficulty looks very beautiful
03:17:506 - useless timing section
Topic Starter
Edited :3qilliam wrote:
[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section
[hard] : the circle/slider placement in this difficulty looks very beautiful
03:17:506 - useless timing section
I'm modding this because we definitely need more Gakupo songs ranked.
Everything I say is a suggestion, you don't have to change anything you don't want to.
Blue : You don't have to change anything, it's just a suggestion
Red : You should look at this
Edit: For Insane the only problem I found that in some places the beats weren't on some lyric parts.
The note already placed go well with the beat, so I wanted to leave it up to you if you wanted to add something on those notes.
Everything I say is a suggestion, you don't have to change anything you don't want to.
Blue : You don't have to change anything, it's just a suggestion
Red : You should look at this
[Normal]
You don't have to add circles where I suggest you put some, if you would ever want to add more it would be at these spots.
Look at them and see, I don't even expect you to add any circles unless you think it's a good idea.
If I say you could turn it into a slider, I find it fine the way it is. But if you wanted to you could turn it into one.
Look at them and see, I don't even expect you to add any sliders unless you think it's a good idea.
Any normal slider I say you could add could be turned into a slider with a reverse arrow and it would still be fine.
[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] You could make it a slider, or add a circle on [00:01:961].
[00:09:052] Maybe add a reverse arrow or a circle?
[00:12:597] - [00:12:870] You could make it a slider, or add a circle on [00:12:870].
[00:16:688] - [00:17:233] You could make a slider or add circles at the start and end.
Or you could add a circle on [00:16:688] and a slider on [00:16:961] - [00:17:233]
[00:37:688] The note isn't really on anything, maybe move it to [00:37:961] or delete it and start the slider on [00:37:961]?
[00:39:052] Maybe add a circle?
[00:39:324] - [00:40:415] Maybe turn this into a slider with a reverse arrow?
[00:40:961] - [00:41:233] This could be turned into a slider.
[00:42:324] Maybe start the slider here and end it at [00:43:415]?
[00:45:324] - [00:45:870] Maybe change it into a reverse slider?
[00:46:415] I don't find this note necessary.
[00:50:779] ^
[00:53:506] You could add a reverse arrow instead of this circle.
[00:55:415] Maybe add a circle?
[00:56:506] ^
[00:56:779] - [00:57:052] You could make this into a slider.
[00:59:233] Maybe add a circle?
[01:00:324] ^
[01:01:415] ^
[01:01:688] - [01:02:233] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:04:142] Maybe add a circle?
[01:04:415] - [01:04:688] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:06:870] Maybe add a circle?
[01:07:142] - [01:07:415] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:08:506] ^
[01:09:597] You could remove the reverse arrow, add a circle here and add a slider from [01:09:870] - [01:10:961].
[01:11:506] - [01:12:052] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:12:597] - [01:13:142] ^
[01:14:506] Maybe add a circle?
[01:14:779] - [01:15:324] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:16:961] - [01:17:506] ^
[01:18:052] - [01:18:597] ^
[01:18:870] Maybe add a circle?
[01:20:233] - [01:20:779] Maybe make it into a slider?
[01:21:324] - [01:21:870] ^
[01:22:415] - [01:22:961] ^
[01:23:233] Maybe add a circle?
[01:25:415] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [01:24:870] - [01:25:415]
[01:26:506] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [01:25:961] - [01:26:506]
[01:47:779] Maybe add a circle?
[01:48:052] - [01:48:324] Maybe make it into a slider?
[01:49:415] Maybe add a circle?
[01:51:870] Delete this note.
[01:52:142], [01:52:688], [01:53:233] Maybe add circles here? Maybe put a slider from [01:52:415] - [01:52:961]?
[01:54:597] Maybe add a reverse arrow so the slider ends here instead of this circle?
[01:56:233] I don't find this note necessary.
[01:57:052] Maybe add a circle?
[01:57:324] - [01:57:870] Maybe make it into a slider?
[01:58:142] Maybe add a circle?
[02:00:597] I don't find this note necessary, instead move it to [02:00:870]?
[02:01:961] Maybe add a circle?
[02:02:233] - [02:02:779] Maybe make it a slider? You could put a reverse arrow at [02:02:779] so it ends at [02:03:324].
[02:05:233] Maybe add a circle?
[02:06:324] ^
[02:06:870] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [02:06:597] - [02:07:142].
[02:07:415] Maybe add a circle?
[02:09:597] ^
[02:10:688] ^
[02:11:233] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [02:10:961] - [02:11:233].
[02:13:415] Maybe add a circle?
[02:16:142] ^
[02:18:870] Maybe start the spinner here?
[02:22:142] Maybe add a circle?
[02:23:233] Maybe add a circle? or add a slider from [02:23:233] - [02:23:506].
[02:24:597] - [02:25:142] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:25:688] Maybe add a circle? This is only circle I think you should not ignore.
[02:25:688] - [02:30:052] You could add something on every beat here if you wanted. You could make a bunch of sliders here.
[02:31:415] - [02:31:688] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:39:870] - [02:40:415] ^
[02:52:961] Maybe add a circle?
[02:54:597] - [02:55:142] You could make a slider here, or add a circle on [02:54:870].
[02:55:415] - [02:55:688] You could make a slider here, or add a circle on [02:55:415].
[02:58:415] - [02:58:961] You could make it into a slider.
[02:59:233] Maybe add a circle?
[03:01:961] ^
[03:03:597] ^
[03:03:870] - [03:04:415] Maybe make it a slider? or add a circle on [03:04:142].
[03:06:324] Move the slider so it starts here and ends at [03:06:870].
[03:07:142] Maybe add a circle?
[03:07:415] - [03:07:961] Maybe add a slider? or add a circle on the start and end.
[03:08:233] - [03:08:506] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[03:09:597] - [03:13:142] You could add something on every beat here if you wanted. You could make a bunch of sliders here.
[03:13:688] - [03:14:233] You could turn it into a slider.
[03:14:779] - [03:15:324] ^
[03:15:870] - [03:16:415] ^
[03:16:688] Maybe add a circle?
[03:24:870] - [03:25:415] You could make a slider or add circles at the start and the end.
[03:25:688] - [03:25:961] You could make a slider or add a circle on [03:25:961].
[03:27:052] - [03:27:324] You could turn it into a slider.
[03:27:597] Maybe add a circle?
[03:27:870] - [03:28:415] You could turn it into a slider.
[03:28:688] Maybe add a circle?
[03:29:779] ^
[03:30:052] - [03:30:324] Maybe make it a slider, or add a circle on [03:30:324].
[Hard]
[00:03:597] I don't find this note necessary.
[00:12:324] ^
[00:37:688] Is this note necessary?
[01:09:733] Maybe start the spinner here?
[01:13:415] I don't find this note necessary.
[01:56:233] ^
[02:05:370] Maybe move the circle on [02:05:506] here?
[02:18:461] If you keep just a circle here you could start the spinner on [02:18:870].
[02:22:279] Start the reverse arrow slider here, add a an arrow so it still ends where it did at first.
[02:24:324] Maybe start the spinner here. I think it sound less weird like this.
[02:26:915] Add a circle? or add a slider from [02:26:915] - [02:27:052].
[02:27:188] Start the slider from [02:27:324] here. Make it longer so it ends where it originally ended.
[02:30:324] Maybe extend the spinner so it ends here. I think it sounds better.
[02:49:415] I don't find this note necessary.
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary?
[02:55:688] ^
[02:58:415] Maybe remove the slider and just keep a circle here?
[03:02:506] I don't find this note necessary.
[03:06:870] ^
[03:08:370] - [03:08:779] Maybe make a slider, or just move the circle from [03:08:506] to [03:08:370].
[03:17:097] Maybe end the slider here?
[03:21:733] Maybe move the circle from [03:21:870] here?
[03:24:324] I don't find this note necessary.
[Insane]
[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] Add a slider?
[00:03:733] Start the slider here? add a circle on [00:03:597]?
[00:11:506] Add a circle?
[00:42:461] Add something here. A circle, starting the slider here and adding a reverse arrow maybe? Maybe making 3 consecutive 1/4 note sliders?
[00:46:824] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:08:642] It would be better if the slider started here. Make it longer so it still ends where it is originally.
[01:12:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:13:688] ^
[01:15:870] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:46:552] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:46:824] ^
[01:48:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:55:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:55:552] ^
[01:58:552] Add a circle, or make it a 1/4 slider with [01:58:688] or move the circle at [01:58:688] here.
[02:09:733] Add something here. Maybe a circle, an extra reverse arrow, make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:14:097] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:16:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[02:18:461] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:21:324] - [02:21:597] Maybe add a slider?
[02:22:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:27:188] Add something here. Maybe add a reverse arrow or add a circle?
[02:30:870] - [02:31:006] Add a slider or a circle on start and the end.
[02:31:279] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:31:552] ^
[02:35:370] Add something here. Maybe a circle?
[02:35:915] ^
[02:42:188] ^
[02:59:506] ^
[03:04:006] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[03:05:233] Add something here. A circle or add a reverse arrow on the last slider.
[03:13:961] Add either a circle or make a 1/2 note slider with [03:13:688].
[03:25:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider.
You don't have to add circles where I suggest you put some, if you would ever want to add more it would be at these spots.
Look at them and see, I don't even expect you to add any circles unless you think it's a good idea.
If I say you could turn it into a slider, I find it fine the way it is. But if you wanted to you could turn it into one.
Look at them and see, I don't even expect you to add any sliders unless you think it's a good idea.
Any normal slider I say you could add could be turned into a slider with a reverse arrow and it would still be fine.
[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] You could make it a slider, or add a circle on [00:01:961].
[00:09:052] Maybe add a reverse arrow or a circle?
[00:12:597] - [00:12:870] You could make it a slider, or add a circle on [00:12:870].
[00:16:688] - [00:17:233] You could make a slider or add circles at the start and end.
Or you could add a circle on [00:16:688] and a slider on [00:16:961] - [00:17:233]
[00:37:688] The note isn't really on anything, maybe move it to [00:37:961] or delete it and start the slider on [00:37:961]?
[00:39:052] Maybe add a circle?
[00:39:324] - [00:40:415] Maybe turn this into a slider with a reverse arrow?
[00:40:961] - [00:41:233] This could be turned into a slider.
[00:42:324] Maybe start the slider here and end it at [00:43:415]?
[00:45:324] - [00:45:870] Maybe change it into a reverse slider?
[00:46:415] I don't find this note necessary.
[00:50:779] ^
[00:53:506] You could add a reverse arrow instead of this circle.
[00:55:415] Maybe add a circle?
[00:56:506] ^
[00:56:779] - [00:57:052] You could make this into a slider.
[00:59:233] Maybe add a circle?
[01:00:324] ^
[01:01:415] ^
[01:01:688] - [01:02:233] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:04:142] Maybe add a circle?
[01:04:415] - [01:04:688] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:06:870] Maybe add a circle?
[01:07:142] - [01:07:415] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:08:506] ^
[01:09:597] You could remove the reverse arrow, add a circle here and add a slider from [01:09:870] - [01:10:961].
[01:11:506] - [01:12:052] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:12:597] - [01:13:142] ^
[01:14:506] Maybe add a circle?
[01:14:779] - [01:15:324] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[01:16:961] - [01:17:506] ^
[01:18:052] - [01:18:597] ^
[01:18:870] Maybe add a circle?
[01:20:233] - [01:20:779] Maybe make it into a slider?
[01:21:324] - [01:21:870] ^
[01:22:415] - [01:22:961] ^
[01:23:233] Maybe add a circle?
[01:25:415] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [01:24:870] - [01:25:415]
[01:26:506] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [01:25:961] - [01:26:506]
[01:47:779] Maybe add a circle?
[01:48:052] - [01:48:324] Maybe make it into a slider?
[01:49:415] Maybe add a circle?
[01:51:870] Delete this note.
[01:52:142], [01:52:688], [01:53:233] Maybe add circles here? Maybe put a slider from [01:52:415] - [01:52:961]?
[01:54:597] Maybe add a reverse arrow so the slider ends here instead of this circle?
[01:56:233] I don't find this note necessary.
[01:57:052] Maybe add a circle?
[01:57:324] - [01:57:870] Maybe make it into a slider?
[01:58:142] Maybe add a circle?
[02:00:597] I don't find this note necessary, instead move it to [02:00:870]?
[02:01:961] Maybe add a circle?
[02:02:233] - [02:02:779] Maybe make it a slider? You could put a reverse arrow at [02:02:779] so it ends at [02:03:324].
[02:05:233] Maybe add a circle?
[02:06:324] ^
[02:06:870] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [02:06:597] - [02:07:142].
[02:07:415] Maybe add a circle?
[02:09:597] ^
[02:10:688] ^
[02:11:233] Maybe add a circle? or make a slider from [02:10:961] - [02:11:233].
[02:13:415] Maybe add a circle?
[02:16:142] ^
[02:18:870] Maybe start the spinner here?
[02:22:142] Maybe add a circle?
[02:23:233] Maybe add a circle? or add a slider from [02:23:233] - [02:23:506].
[02:24:597] - [02:25:142] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:25:688] Maybe add a circle? This is only circle I think you should not ignore.
[02:25:688] - [02:30:052] You could add something on every beat here if you wanted. You could make a bunch of sliders here.
[02:31:415] - [02:31:688] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:39:870] - [02:40:415] ^
[02:52:961] Maybe add a circle?
[02:54:597] - [02:55:142] You could make a slider here, or add a circle on [02:54:870].
[02:55:415] - [02:55:688] You could make a slider here, or add a circle on [02:55:415].
[02:58:415] - [02:58:961] You could make it into a slider.
[02:59:233] Maybe add a circle?
[03:01:961] ^
[03:03:597] ^
[03:03:870] - [03:04:415] Maybe make it a slider? or add a circle on [03:04:142].
[03:06:324] Move the slider so it starts here and ends at [03:06:870].
[03:07:142] Maybe add a circle?
[03:07:415] - [03:07:961] Maybe add a slider? or add a circle on the start and end.
[03:08:233] - [03:08:506] Maybe turn it into a slider?
[03:09:597] - [03:13:142] You could add something on every beat here if you wanted. You could make a bunch of sliders here.
[03:13:688] - [03:14:233] You could turn it into a slider.
[03:14:779] - [03:15:324] ^
[03:15:870] - [03:16:415] ^
[03:16:688] Maybe add a circle?
[03:24:870] - [03:25:415] You could make a slider or add circles at the start and the end.
[03:25:688] - [03:25:961] You could make a slider or add a circle on [03:25:961].
[03:27:052] - [03:27:324] You could turn it into a slider.
[03:27:597] Maybe add a circle?
[03:27:870] - [03:28:415] You could turn it into a slider.
[03:28:688] Maybe add a circle?
[03:29:779] ^
[03:30:052] - [03:30:324] Maybe make it a slider, or add a circle on [03:30:324].
[Hard]
[00:03:597] I don't find this note necessary.
[00:12:324] ^
[00:37:688] Is this note necessary?
[01:09:733] Maybe start the spinner here?
[01:13:415] I don't find this note necessary.
[01:56:233] ^
[02:05:370] Maybe move the circle on [02:05:506] here?
[02:18:461] If you keep just a circle here you could start the spinner on [02:18:870].
[02:22:279] Start the reverse arrow slider here, add a an arrow so it still ends where it did at first.
[02:24:324] Maybe start the spinner here. I think it sound less weird like this.
[02:26:915] Add a circle? or add a slider from [02:26:915] - [02:27:052].
[02:27:188] Start the slider from [02:27:324] here. Make it longer so it ends where it originally ended.
[02:30:324] Maybe extend the spinner so it ends here. I think it sounds better.
[02:49:415] I don't find this note necessary.
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary?
[02:55:688] ^
[02:58:415] Maybe remove the slider and just keep a circle here?
[03:02:506] I don't find this note necessary.
[03:06:870] ^
[03:08:370] - [03:08:779] Maybe make a slider, or just move the circle from [03:08:506] to [03:08:370].
[03:17:097] Maybe end the slider here?
[03:21:733] Maybe move the circle from [03:21:870] here?
[03:24:324] I don't find this note necessary.
[Insane]
[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] Add a slider?
[00:03:733] Start the slider here? add a circle on [00:03:597]?
[00:11:506] Add a circle?
[00:42:461] Add something here. A circle, starting the slider here and adding a reverse arrow maybe? Maybe making 3 consecutive 1/4 note sliders?
[00:46:824] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:08:642] It would be better if the slider started here. Make it longer so it still ends where it is originally.
[01:12:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:13:688] ^
[01:15:870] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:46:552] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:46:824] ^
[01:48:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:55:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:55:552] ^
[01:58:552] Add a circle, or make it a 1/4 slider with [01:58:688] or move the circle at [01:58:688] here.
[02:09:733] Add something here. Maybe a circle, an extra reverse arrow, make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:14:097] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:16:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[02:18:461] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:21:324] - [02:21:597] Maybe add a slider?
[02:22:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:27:188] Add something here. Maybe add a reverse arrow or add a circle?
[02:30:870] - [02:31:006] Add a slider or a circle on start and the end.
[02:31:279] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:31:552] ^
[02:35:370] Add something here. Maybe a circle?
[02:35:915] ^
[02:42:188] ^
[02:59:506] ^
[03:04:006] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[03:05:233] Add something here. A circle or add a reverse arrow on the last slider.
[03:13:961] Add either a circle or make a 1/2 note slider with [03:13:688].
[03:25:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider.
Edit: For Insane the only problem I found that in some places the beats weren't on some lyric parts.
The note already placed go well with the beat, so I wanted to leave it up to you if you wanted to add something on those notes.
I see this are just "add something here suggest" maybe you should give more varied suggest than that, anyway Im not gonna change nothing...poisonedblood wrote:
[Insane]
[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] Add a slider?
[00:03:733] Start the slider here? add a circle on [00:03:597]?
[00:11:506] Add a circle?
[00:42:461] Add something here. A circle, starting the slider here and adding a reverse arrow maybe? Maybe making 3 consecutive 1/4 note sliders?
[00:46:824] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:08:642] It would be better if the slider started here. Make it longer so it still ends where it is originally.
[01:12:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:13:688] ^
[01:15:870] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:46:552] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:46:824] ^
[01:48:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:55:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:55:552] ^
[01:58:552] Add a circle, or make it a 1/4 slider with [01:58:688] or move the circle at [01:58:688] here.
[02:09:733] Add something here. Maybe a circle, an extra reverse arrow, make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:14:097] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:16:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[02:18:461] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:21:324] - [02:21:597] Maybe add a slider?
[02:22:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:27:188] Add something here. Maybe add a reverse arrow or add a circle?
[02:30:870] - [02:31:006] Add a slider or a circle on start and the end.
[02:31:279] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:31:552] ^
[02:35:370] Add something here. Maybe a circle?
[02:35:915] ^
[02:42:188] ^
[02:59:506] ^
[03:04:006] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[03:05:233] Add something here. A circle or add a reverse arrow on the last slider.
[03:13:961] Add either a circle or make a 1/2 note slider with [03:13:688].
[03:25:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider.
Topic Starter
Sorry for not accepted most of your sugerences .u.'poisonedblood wrote:
[Hard]
[00:03:597] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
[00:12:324] ^ I do (Again).
[00:37:688] Is this note necessary? Sounds weird without that note.
[01:09:733] Maybe start the spinner here? I think that's unrankeable.
[01:13:415] I don't find this note necessary. If I delete that note it would cut the rhythm.
[01:56:233] ^ Same as above. I put these notes to keep the player clicking something instead of waiting Gackpoid to sing again.
[02:05:370] Maybe move the circle on [02:05:506] here? I agree here~
[02:18:461] If you keep just a circle here you could start the spinner on [02:18:870]. Uhm no, I like how it is.
[02:22:279] Start the reverse arrow slider here, add a an arrow so it still ends where it did at first. D: I'll change this if someone mentions it again.
[02:24:324] Maybe start the spinner here. I think it sound less weird like this. Same as above about spinner.
[02:26:915] Add a circle? or add a slider from [02:26:915] - [02:27:052]. Sounds weird .-.
[02:27:188] Start the slider from [02:27:324] here. Make it longer so it ends where it originally ended. Why?
[02:30:324] Maybe extend the spinner so it ends here. I think it sounds better. Same thing I said about spinners.
[02:49:415] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary? Well i'm not really sure about changing this, so i'll leave as it is till someone else mentions it.
[02:55:688] ^ ^
[02:58:415] Maybe remove the slider and just keep a circle here? That ruins the rhytm imo.
[03:02:506] I don't find this note necessary. But I do! Yes, again.
[03:06:870] ^ ^
[03:08:370] - [03:08:779] Maybe make a slider, or just move the circle from [03:08:506] to [03:08:370]. o_o
[03:17:097] Maybe end the slider here? No, sorry .-.
[03:21:733] Maybe move the circle from [03:21:870] here? That doesn't sound good o_o
[03:24:324] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
About your suggestions to [Normal], I'll not change anything (Sorry again). I think those sugerences makes everything more difficult.
When I mapped that difficulty I aimed for a easy Normal with simple rhythm and easy to understand to new players.
Note that this mapset doesn't have an Easy, so, that's why this Normal is so easy and simple.
Also, when you suggest me to replace notes with sliders that sounds like a little change but it means to fix AAAALL spacings.
Anyway, thanks for your voluntary mod ^u^ I appreciate it, and I hope you can understand what I'm trying to tell you
.I looked at the New Combos,
everything are small suggestions.
Feel free to ignore anything I said for insane though.
Star~ because I want to see this map ranked.
everything are small suggestions.
Feel free to ignore anything I said for insane though.
Star~ because I want to see this map ranked.
[Easy]
[02:07:142] Is this New Combo necessary?
[Hard]
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary?
[02:53:097] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:53:506]?
[02:54:188] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:54:597]?
[02:55:688] Is this New Combo necessary?
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:28:415] ^
[Insane]
[00:05:506] Remove New Combo?
[00:06:188] or [00:05:915], Start the New Combo here instead of on [00:06:597]?
[00:08:370] or [00:08:097], Start the New Combo here instead of on [00:07:688]?
[00:08:779] Remove New Combo?
[00:12:733] or [00:12:461], Start the New Combo here instead of on [00:13:142]?
[00:15:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:15:324]?
[00:29:779] Remove New Combo?
[00:30:324] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:30:870]?
[00:31:824] Remove New Combo?
[00:34:142] Remove this New Combo and add a New Combo on [00:33:597] and [00:34:961] instead?
[00:36:597] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:36:870]?
[00:38:506] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:39:324]?
[00:42:597] Remove New Combo?
[00:43:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:44:233]?
[00:46:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:46:415]?
[00:49:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:49:415]?
[00:51:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:51:324]?
[00:54:597] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [00:54:324]?
[01:02:233] Remove New Combo?
[01:02:779] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [01:03:324]?
[01:06:324] Remove New Combo?
[01:06:733] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [01:07:142]?
[01:09:188] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [01:08:779]?
[01:15:597] or [01:16:006], Start the New Combo here instead of on [01:16:415]?
[01:16:961] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:16:961]?
[01:18:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:18:324]?
[01:19:688] Remove New Combo?
[01:20:233] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:20:915]?
[01:21:324] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:21:870]?
[01:22:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:22:961]?
[01:43:279] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:46:415] or [01:46:688], Start the New Combo here instead of on [01:46:961] and add a New Combo on [01:47:779]?
[01:50:779] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:50:233]?
[01:55:142] or [01:55:415], Start the New Combo here instead of on [01:55:688]?
[01:56:506] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:01:006] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:01:688]?
[02:10:142] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:09:870]?
[02:12:733] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:11:779]?
[02:13:688] Remove New Combo?
[02:14:506] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:15:052]?
[02:19:688] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:27:597] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:27:324]?
[02:34:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:34:142]?
[02:36:052] Remove New Combo?
[02:43:142] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:52:142] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:51:870]?
[02:53:097] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:56:233] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:57:052]?
[02:58:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:58:961]?
[03:00:597] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:01:688]?
[03:07:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:08:233]?
[03:09:324] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:10:142]?
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:13:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:14:233]?
[03:16:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:17:506]?
[03:18:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:18:597]?
[03:20:233] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:21:324]?
[03:22:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:22:961]?
[03:24:870] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:25:142]?
[03:28:415] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:07:142] Is this New Combo necessary?
[Hard]
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary?
[02:53:097] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:53:506]?
[02:54:188] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:54:597]?
[02:55:688] Is this New Combo necessary?
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:28:415] ^
[Insane]
[00:05:506] Remove New Combo?
[00:06:188] or [00:05:915], Start the New Combo here instead of on [00:06:597]?
[00:08:370] or [00:08:097], Start the New Combo here instead of on [00:07:688]?
[00:08:779] Remove New Combo?
[00:12:733] or [00:12:461], Start the New Combo here instead of on [00:13:142]?
[00:15:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:15:324]?
[00:29:779] Remove New Combo?
[00:30:324] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:30:870]?
[00:31:824] Remove New Combo?
[00:34:142] Remove this New Combo and add a New Combo on [00:33:597] and [00:34:961] instead?
[00:36:597] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:36:870]?
[00:38:506] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:39:324]?
[00:42:597] Remove New Combo?
[00:43:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:44:233]?
[00:46:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:46:415]?
[00:49:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:49:415]?
[00:51:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [00:51:324]?
[00:54:597] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [00:54:324]?
[01:02:233] Remove New Combo?
[01:02:779] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [01:03:324]?
[01:06:324] Remove New Combo?
[01:06:733] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [01:07:142]?
[01:09:188] Start a New Combo here. Maybe delete the one on [01:08:779]?
[01:15:597] or [01:16:006], Start the New Combo here instead of on [01:16:415]?
[01:16:961] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:16:961]?
[01:18:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:18:324]?
[01:19:688] Remove New Combo?
[01:20:233] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:20:915]?
[01:21:324] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:21:870]?
[01:22:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:22:961]?
[01:43:279] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:46:415] or [01:46:688], Start the New Combo here instead of on [01:46:961] and add a New Combo on [01:47:779]?
[01:50:779] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:50:233]?
[01:55:142] or [01:55:415], Start the New Combo here instead of on [01:55:688]?
[01:56:506] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:01:006] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:01:688]?
[02:10:142] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:09:870]?
[02:12:733] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:11:779]?
[02:13:688] Remove New Combo?
[02:14:506] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:15:052]?
[02:19:688] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:27:597] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:27:324]?
[02:34:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:34:142]?
[02:36:052] Remove New Combo?
[02:43:142] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:52:142] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:51:870]?
[02:53:097] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:56:233] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:57:052]?
[02:58:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [02:58:961]?
[03:00:597] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:01:688]?
[03:07:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:08:233]?
[03:09:324] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:10:142]?
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:13:688] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:14:233]?
[03:16:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:17:506]?
[03:18:052] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:18:597]?
[03:20:233] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:21:324]?
[03:22:415] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:22:961]?
[03:24:870] Maybe Start the New Combo here instead of at [03:25:142]?
[03:28:415] Maybe add a New Combo?
Topic Starter
poisonedblood wrote:
I looked at the New Combos,
everything are small suggestions.
Feel free to ignore anything I said for insane though.
Star~ because I want to see this map ranked. Thanks *-* I'll do my best!
[Easy]
[02:07:142] Is this New Combo necessary? Uhmm I'm not sure about this. >o<
[Hard]
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary? Again >o< Not sure.
[02:53:097] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:53:506]? Sorry but no ;u;
[02:54:188] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:54:597]? No >o<
[02:55:688] Is this New Combo necessary? Not sure about removing it.
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo? Yeah :'D
[03:28:415] ^ Yes C:!
Thanks again for your help >o< I'll do my best to get this map ranked.
Hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue sorry for the late 
late late late late and late modding...... so.. here we go..
[i k's insane]
01:10:142 - http://puu.sh/7b93
01:12:324 (1,2) - grid : 1 time to the right
01:25:961 (6) - grid: one time down
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (only suggestion)http://puu.sh/7b9M
01:45:324 (5) - http://puu.sh/7bao
02:39:052 (1) - 4 times up http://puu.sh/7baU
02:40:142 (3) - 3 times down
thats all!! Good Luck
late late late late and late modding...... so.. here we go..[i k's insane]
01:10:142 - http://puu.sh/7b93
01:12:324 (1,2) - grid : 1 time to the right
01:25:961 (6) - grid: one time down
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (only suggestion)http://puu.sh/7b9M
01:45:324 (5) - http://puu.sh/7bao
02:39:052 (1) - 4 times up http://puu.sh/7baU
02:40:142 (3) - 3 times down
thats all!! Good Luck
Hi~ >w</
Mod accepted from my queue.
General
Is there a reason why the Kiai times are split up? Fix it~
Manually set Audio leadin to 1000 for all diffs. It's missing in the Insane diff.
i_k's Insane
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a neat triangle? http://puu.sh/7JXZ
01:03:324 (1) - This slider can have a beter shape~
01:12:324 (1,2) - 1 grid right
01:15:597 (6) - 1 grid left
01:19:279 (4) - Ctrl+R?
01:22:415 (5) - Overlapping with previous notes doesn't look pretty ;w;
01:22:961 (1,2,3,4) - Position Suggestion~ http://puu.sh/7JZ2
02:02:506 (4,5,6) - Maybe place this in the middle of the triangle(1,2,3)? http://puu.sh/7JZA
02:39:052 (1,2,3,4) - Place this in the center~
02:46:688 (5) - 2 grids left
Hard
I recommend 1.0x spacing but the mapping is done...
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a equilateral triangle...
02:34:142 (10) - The position is quite random. Perhaps move it to the right so it fits the previous slider's curve?
02:47:506 (1) - Move right so it doesn't touch the next slider?
02:52:415 (1) - Remove NC
02:55:688 (1) - ^
03:15:324 (5) - Stack with the end of 03:14:233 (3) - ?
Normal
02:14:506 (3,1,2,3,4) - Start this from the y-axis~
Nice song~
Good luck for rank~
Mod accepted from my queue.
General
Is there a reason why the Kiai times are split up? Fix it~
Manually set Audio leadin to 1000 for all diffs. It's missing in the Insane diff.
i_k's Insane
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a neat triangle? http://puu.sh/7JXZ
01:03:324 (1) - This slider can have a beter shape~
01:12:324 (1,2) - 1 grid right
01:15:597 (6) - 1 grid left
01:19:279 (4) - Ctrl+R?
01:22:415 (5) - Overlapping with previous notes doesn't look pretty ;w;
01:22:961 (1,2,3,4) - Position Suggestion~ http://puu.sh/7JZ2
02:02:506 (4,5,6) - Maybe place this in the middle of the triangle(1,2,3)? http://puu.sh/7JZA
02:39:052 (1,2,3,4) - Place this in the center~
02:46:688 (5) - 2 grids left
Hard
I recommend 1.0x spacing but the mapping is done...
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a equilateral triangle...
02:34:142 (10) - The position is quite random. Perhaps move it to the right so it fits the previous slider's curve?
02:47:506 (1) - Move right so it doesn't touch the next slider?
02:52:415 (1) - Remove NC
02:55:688 (1) - ^
03:15:324 (5) - Stack with the end of 03:14:233 (3) - ?
Normal
02:14:506 (3,1,2,3,4) - Start this from the y-axis~
Nice song~
Good luck for rank~
here we go ~
Genaral: i_k's insane: I suggest a Slider Tick Rate of 2
Normal:
solid enough
Hard:
00:53:915 (2,3,1) - BIG anti jump, not favourable, please closer these two 00:54:324 (3,1) -
02:52:142 (1,1) - these 2 notes not consist a "creative-style" , rather than that, a mis-leading
03:04:961 (1,2,3) - the only and suddenly jump in this time period, closer them please
i_k's insane:
solid enough
that's it
good luck on ranking~
Genaral: i_k's insane: I suggest a Slider Tick Rate of 2
Normal:
solid enough
Hard:
00:53:915 (2,3,1) - BIG anti jump, not favourable, please closer these two 00:54:324 (3,1) -
02:52:142 (1,1) - these 2 notes not consist a "creative-style" , rather than that, a mis-leading
03:04:961 (1,2,3) - the only and suddenly jump in this time period, closer them please
i_k's insane:
solid enough
that's it
good luck on ranking~
ohmygodihavetoredownloadcauseofkei'snewname /.\
Removedqilliam wrote:
[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section
hmm maybe I dont map lyrics, I map the musicpoisonedblood wrote:
Edit: For Insane the only problem I found that in some places the beats weren't on some lyric parts.
The note already placed go well with the beat, so I wanted to leave it up to you if you wanted to add something on those notes.
Teru21 wrote:
[i k's insane]
01:10:142 - http://puu.sh/7b93 - huh?
01:12:324 (1,2) - grid : 1 time to the right - time what?????.... just say 1 grid right <.<
01:25:961 (6) - grid: one time down b
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (only suggestion)http://puu.sh/7b9M ?
01:45:324 (5) - http://puu.sh/7bao - :/
02:39:052 (1) - 4 times up http://puu.sh/7baU b
02:40:142 (3) - 3 times down b
Takos wrote:
i_k's Insane[/color]
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a neat triangle? http://puu.sh/7JXZ
01:03:324 (1) - This slider can have a beter shape~ yeah it can...
01:12:324 (1,2) - 1 grid right ↑
01:15:597 (6) - 1 grid left ffff
01:19:279 (4) - Ctrl+R? rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
01:22:415 (5) - Overlapping with previous notes doesn't look pretty ;w; overlap????
01:22:961 (1,2,3,4) - Position Suggestion~ http://puu.sh/7JZ2
02:02:506 (4,5,6) - Maybe place this in the middle of the triangle(1,2,3)? http://puu.sh/7JZA its on the base
02:39:052 (1,2,3,4) - Place this in the center~
02:46:688 (5) - 2 grids left
Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu (Kei) [i_k's Insane].osuNeptunus wrote:
Genaral: i_k's insane: I suggest a Slider Tick Rate of 2 - no, thank you!!
Hey vaga no lo dejes morir please!!
no lo dejes morir please!!
Topic Starter
ASDF! Es que estaba ocupada con el liceo D: Ya lo actualizomancusojuanmattos wrote:
Hey vaga
Fucking Liceo que nos arruina a todos jajajKei wrote:
ASDF! Es que estaba ocupada con el liceo D: Ya lo actualizomancusojuanmattos wrote:
Hey vaga
Topic Starter
Updated!
♪Hihi~!
♪Here's my modding~!
♪General
♪【i_k's Insane】diff
♪【Hard】diff
♪【Normal】diff
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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
Good luck~!
Since i am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.
♪Here's my modding~!
♪General
SPOILER
♪delete .osb then fullsub again.
♪nothing else~! such a purple skin~!
♪nothing else~! such a purple skin~!
♪【i_k's Insane】diff
SPOILER
OD 6 or 7 plz, or people will get annoyed with a very low acc and this is a long song.
00:27:597 (2) - up 1 grid?
00:33:597 (7) - better shape plz.. http://puu.sh/aduO
01:00:052 (8) - better shape..
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump?
01:12:733 (3) - left 1 grid
01:24:052 (5) - better shape
01:45:324 (5) - ^
01:50:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust the note with the DS off, make the note on the same spot
01:57:597 (5) - NC
02:02:779 (5) - put it some where else?
02:03:870 (7) - not a good time for a jump.
02:05:506 (4) - may be like this?http://puu.sh/advP
02:06:597 (7) - NC
02:07:142 (1) - remove NC
02:08:779 (7) - NC
02:09:870 (1) - remove nc
02:11:233 (4) - NC
02:11:779 (1) - remove nc
02:12:733 (3) - NC
02:13:142 (6) - better shape
02:13:688 (1) - remove NC
02:15:051 (1) - remove NC
02:15:324 (2) - NC
02:20:506 (8) - NC?
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - can u make them not blocking 5?
02:37:415 (1,2,3) - jump?
02:43:142 (6) - NC
02:54:597 (1) - better shape http://puu.sh/adwX
02:56:915Form here the NC was weird for me again...
03:29:506 (1,2,3,4) - move not blocking 5
in fact, this diff is like a rough copy in my view, everything is not that neat especially for the sliders. so plz make them better looking if possible. Also, add a break at the second half.
00:27:597 (2) - up 1 grid?
00:33:597 (7) - better shape plz.. http://puu.sh/aduO
01:00:052 (8) - better shape..
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump?
01:12:733 (3) - left 1 grid
01:24:052 (5) - better shape
01:45:324 (5) - ^
01:50:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust the note with the DS off, make the note on the same spot
01:57:597 (5) - NC
02:02:779 (5) - put it some where else?
02:03:870 (7) - not a good time for a jump.
02:05:506 (4) - may be like this?http://puu.sh/advP
02:06:597 (7) - NC
02:07:142 (1) - remove NC
02:08:779 (7) - NC
02:09:870 (1) - remove nc
02:11:233 (4) - NC
02:11:779 (1) - remove nc
02:12:733 (3) - NC
02:13:142 (6) - better shape
02:13:688 (1) - remove NC
02:15:051 (1) - remove NC
02:15:324 (2) - NC
02:20:506 (8) - NC?
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - can u make them not blocking 5?
02:37:415 (1,2,3) - jump?
02:43:142 (6) - NC
02:54:597 (1) - better shape http://puu.sh/adwX
02:56:915Form here the NC was weird for me again...
03:29:506 (1,2,3,4) - move not blocking 5
in fact, this diff is like a rough copy in my view, everything is not that neat especially for the sliders. so plz make them better looking if possible. Also, add a break at the second half.
♪【Hard】diff
SPOILER
and nice hit sound~!00:43:688 (5) - left 1 grid?
00:47:233 (2) - can u make it not blocking?
00:51:052 (3,4,5) - these 3 can use a same symmetric shape and it will give u a better effect.
01:21:597 (4) - up 1 grid?
01:29:506 break right after the spinner http://puu.sh/adz7
02:34:142 (10,1) - i don't think a jump is suitable
02:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - jump~!
02:49:415 (1) - remove?
02:58:142 (5) - remove finish at tail
03:18:597 (2) - just a suggestion:http://puu.sh/adzZ
This diff is a lot better than the insane...
00:47:233 (2) - can u make it not blocking?
00:51:052 (3,4,5) - these 3 can use a same symmetric shape and it will give u a better effect.
01:21:597 (4) - up 1 grid?
01:29:506 break right after the spinner http://puu.sh/adz7
02:34:142 (10,1) - i don't think a jump is suitable
02:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - jump~!
02:49:415 (1) - remove?
02:58:142 (5) - remove finish at tail
03:18:597 (2) - just a suggestion:http://puu.sh/adzZ
This diff is a lot better than the insane...
♪【Normal】diff
SPOILER
00:19:142 00:19:688 actually u can add 2 notes..
00:57:051 (4) - spacing
00:58:142 (6) - ^
01:11:506 (1,2,3) - make these more round?
02:18:870spinner start at here?
02:52:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make this part like this?http://puu.sh/adBt this sound better to me, and u dont have a break, these slow notes can also be regarded as the break
03:10:961 (3) - move this to form a better star..
Good~!
00:57:051 (4) - spacing
00:58:142 (6) - ^
01:11:506 (1,2,3) - make these more round?
02:18:870spinner start at here?
02:52:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make this part like this?http://puu.sh/adBt this sound better to me, and u dont have a break, these slow notes can also be regarded as the break
03:10:961 (3) - move this to form a better star..
Good~!
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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
Good luck~!
Since i am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry- wrote:
♪Hihi~!
♪Here's my modding~!
♪GeneralSPOILER♪delete .osb then fullsub again. Done
♪nothing else~! such a purple skin~!
♪【Hard】diffSPOILERand nice hit sound~! Thanks :300:43:688 (5) - left 1 grid? Uhm.. okay.
00:47:233 (2) - can u make it not blocking? I like how it is
00:51:052 (3,4,5) - these 3 can use a same symmetric shape and it will give u a better effect. Ok.
01:21:597 (4) - up 1 grid? Uh.. ok.
01:29:506 break right after the spinner http://puu.sh/adz7 Done.
02:34:142 (10,1) - i don't think a jump is suitable Sorry but I'll keep the jump.
02:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - jump~! Done.
02:49:415 (1) - remove? Nope, sorry.
02:58:142 (5) - remove finish at tail ^
03:18:597 (2) - just a suggestion:http://puu.sh/adzZ I think that the current one is okay.
This diff is a lot better than the insane... Well.. I didn't mapped the Insane. It's a guest difficulty.
♪【Normal】diffSPOILER00:19:142 00:19:688 actually u can add 2 notes.. Ok!
00:57:051 (4) - spacing Fixed.
00:58:142 (6) - ^ ^
01:11:506 (1,2,3) - make these more round? Nah, that's unnecesary. Doing that little change would ruin all the next note's spacing.
02:18:870spinner start at here? No ;-;
02:52:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make this part like this?http://puu.sh/adBt this sound better to me, and u dont have a break, these slow notes can also be regarded as the break Nope again, sorry.
03:10:961 (3) - move this to form a better star.. Done
Good~!
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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
Good luck~!
Since i am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.
Thanks a lot for your mod!
Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu (Kei) [i_k's Insane].osu-Baby Strawberry- wrote:
♪【i_k's Insane】diffSPOILEROD 6 or 7 plz, or people will get annoyed with a very low acc and this is a long song. 7
00:27:597 (2) - up 1 grid?
00:33:597 (7) - better shape plz.. http://puu.sh/aduO it is the same design with a different shape =v= so no
01:00:052 (8) - better shape..
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump?
01:12:733 (3) - left 1 grid
01:24:052 (5) - better shape
01:45:324 (5) - ^
01:50:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust the note with the DS off, make the note on the same spot what?
01:57:597 (5) - NC
02:02:779 (5) - put it some where else? where?
02:03:870 (7) - not a good time for a jump.
02:05:506 (4) - may be like this?http://puu.sh/advP
02:06:597 (7) - NC
02:07:142 (1) - remove NC
02:08:779 (7) - NC
02:09:870 (1) - remove nc
02:11:233 (4) - NC
02:11:779 (1) - remove nc
02:12:733 (3) - NC
02:13:142 (6) - better shape
02:13:688 (1) - remove NC
02:15:051 (1) - remove NC
02:15:324 (2) - NC
02:20:506 (8) - NC?
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - can u make them not blocking 5? what blocking?
02:37:415 (1,2,3) - jump?
02:43:142 (6) - NC
02:54:597 (1) - better shape http://puu.sh/adwX
02:56:915Form here the NC was weird for me again...
03:29:506 (1,2,3,4) - move not blocking 5
in fact, this diff is like a rough copy in my view, everything is not that neat especially for the sliders. so plz make them better looking if possible. Also, add a break at the second half. =v= what copy?
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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
... ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.
Topic Starter
Updated~