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Hihi, sorry for being so late. Just to let you know I haven't forgot about this set, gonna post here. Some miscommunication between myself and sorcerer made us confused as to which BN would be here first, so it's actually me now. Gonna placeholder here since I have easter holiday, but I should mod monday or tuesday <:
posted
Helloooooooooooooooooooooooo

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General
]

  1. Difficulty Spread : - The AR in Sinnyi's Rain should really be increased to 9 or the top diff should be reduced to 9. The spread changes randomly and it doesn't really fit tbh.
    - Why is the top diff CS4.6? Please reduce it to 4.2 or something, this creates such a big gap, including the above point.
  2. Background Size : Good
  3. Unsnapped objects : Good
  4. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : Good
  5. Metadata Issues : Source please
  6. Timeline Issues :
  7. Combo Colors : Not a big fan of the combo colors. They really stand out against the background of the map. I'd change them to something more pastel-y like the background suggests.
  8. Unused Hitsounds : Good
  9. Hitsounds Issues : Good
  10. Unused Files / Other : Good
[
Cup
]

General



  1. 00:14:947 (4,1) - The distance is pretty far here despite being a weaker sound. I'd suggest reducing this distance a bit
  2. 00:23:009 (2,3) - You're missing the strong vocal at 00:23:384 - here, I feel like you should drag this to 00:23:197 - for a better rhythm
  3. 00:52:259 (3,4,1) - Right facing flow into an immediate long distance to the left that's also antiflow is really not recommended in a difficulty like this.
  4. 00:57:884 (2) - Not sure why this is a repeat slider, you've just done a circle normally for structure like this
  5. 01:14:009 (2) - seems a tiny bit dense, maybe remove the repeat?
[
Salad
]

General



  1. Please try to go through and make some dashes more visually clear. Some dashes like 00:08:384 (2,1) - are noticeably increased distance-wise but are easily walkable. I won't point them all out though, so please try to do it yourself
  2. 00:11:759 (3,1) - Strong sound, add a dash maybe?
  3. 00:14:572 (4,5,1) - Shouldn't all be dashes here, maybe increase 00:14:572 (4,5) - and reduce the distance between 00:14:947 (5,1) - .
  4. 00:20:572 (3,1) - I don't feel this should be a dash, it's not that strong. Maybe reduce this?
  5. 00:38:572 (3,1) - Increase dash distance here
  6. 00:47:197 (2,3) - Doesn't feel like this needs a dash, reduce this?
  7. Kiai suffers from the same issue I listed in my first point. Please fix it <:
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Platter
]

General



  1. 00:14:384 (4,5,6) - This is pretty much an antiflow HDash and is therefore unrankable. The HDash moves to the right and then immediately the player needs to make a large leftwards jump, which fits the definition of antiflow, so it'll need to be changed.
  2. The difficulty is nice but there's way too many hyperdashes here and almost no normal dashes. Please try to swap out some of the HDashes for regular dashes in places where the stuff isn't that strong.
[
Rain
]

General



  1. 00:07:447 (5,6,7,8,9) - Please remove the 1/8 here, if you listen closely, the 1/8 doesn't even exist. Just leave it as 1/4.
  2. 00:58:634 (4,1) - Seems really squished here, try moving 00:59:009 (1) - to x:210 and then doing something like this maybe?
  3. 01:41:947 - I'd consider making this a 1/2 slider so that way you can get a nice HDash to 01:42:322 (1) -
[
Angel
]

General



  1. 00:03:040 (4) - Overmapped 1/4, delete this :o
  2. 00:06:697 (3,4) - Dunno if you need an HDash between here, I'd rather see one between 00:06:884 (4,5) -
  3. 00:07:259 (6) - Overmapped 1/4, delete the blue tick
  4. 00:11:572 (3,4) - Why's there an HDash between here? There's nothing extraordinary about that sound
  5. 00:12:134 (1) - No need to extend this to 1/4, reduce to the red tick for a 1/2 dash
  6. 00:13:259 (4) - Maybe reduce the distance to and from this note and make a dash between 00:13:447 (5,6) - ?
  7. 00:28:634 (2,3) - I'd ctrl+g this rhythm the vocal should be played as a slider, not a circle.
  8. 00:38:947 (1) - Please make this a C-Curve, this plays so bad :(
  9. 01:44:947 (6,7) - Why are these 1/4 hypers, there doesn't even feel like there's 1/4 sounds there lol
  10. 01:47:947 (4,5) - As above
  11. 01:52:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should 100% be a 1/1 slider, there's no 1/4 at all lol
  12. This diff has some pretty serious overmapping issues, please take a deeper look and try to fix some of them yourself.

Call me after you've made the appropriate fixes.
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Ascendance wrote:

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Rain
]

General



  1. 00:07:447 (5,6,7,8,9) - Please remove the 1/8 here, if you listen closely, the 1/8 doesn't even exist. Just leave it as 1/4. ya
  2. 01:41:947 - I'd consider making this a 1/2 slider so that way you can get a nice HDash to 01:42:322 (1) - 1/1 dashes are cute since the player has to hold dash for longer
posted

Ascendance wrote:

Helloooooooooooooooooooooooo

[
General
]

  1. Difficulty Spread : - The AR in Sinnyi's Rain should really be increased to 9 or the top diff should be reduced to 9. The spread changes randomly and it doesn't really fit tbh.
    - Why is the top diff CS4.6? Please reduce it to 4.2 or something, this creates such a big gap, including the above point.
    Will talk to Xetopia about AR and CS
  2. Metadata Issues : Source please Is this ok: http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/otonokizaka/release.html#cd57
  3. Combo Colors : Not a big fan of the combo colors. They really stand out against the background of the map. I'd change them to something more pastel-y like the background suggests. Up to Xetopia I guess, will assist them if needed
[
Rain
]

General



  1. 00:58:634 (4,1) - Seems really squished here, try moving 00:59:009 (1) - to x:210 and then doing something like this maybe? applied
I changed the AR (and OD) to 8.8 for now, 9 is a bit high for this Rain imo

Thanks for modding!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: angel.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 66228
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1822,15322,27322,39322,51322,66322,78322,90322,102322,120134
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Angelic Angel (Movie Edit)
TitleUnicode:Angelic Angel (Movie Edit)
Artist:u's
ArtistUnicode:μ's
Creator:Xetopia
Version:Sinnyi's Rain
Source:ラブライブ! The School Idol Movie
Tags:love live project 高坂穂乃果 Kousaka Honoka 園田海未 Sonoda Umi 南ことり Minami Kotori 矢澤にこ Yazawa Niko Nico 絢瀬絵里 Ayase Eri Eli 東條希 Toujou Nozomi 西木野真姫 Nishikino Maki 小泉花陽 Koizumi Hanayo 星空凛 Hoshizora Rin 新田恵海 Nitta Emi 三森すずこ Mimori Suzuko 内田彩 Uchida Aya 徳井青空 Tokui Sora 南條愛乃 Nanjou Yoshino 楠田亜衣奈 Kusuda Aina 堀絵梨子 Hori Eriko Pile 久保ユリカ Kubo Yurika 飯田里穂 Iida Riho Muse Sinnoh Sanyi
BeatmapID:1393396
BeatmapSetID:588051

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.8
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

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posted

Ascendance wrote:

Helloooooooooooooooooooooooo

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General
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  1. Difficulty Spread : - The AR in Sinnyi's Rain should really be increased to 9 or the top diff should be reduced to 9. The spread changes randomly and it doesn't really fit tbh.
    - Why is the top diff CS4.6? Please reduce it to 4.2 or something, this creates such a big gap, including the above point.
    - cs 4.4, ar 9.2
  2. Background Size : Good
  3. Unsnapped objects : Good
  4. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : Good
  5. Metadata Issues : Source please http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/otonokizak ... .html#cd57
  6. Timeline Issues :
  7. Combo Colors : Not a big fan of the combo colors. They really stand out against the background of the map. I'd change them to something more pastel-y like the background suggests. - reworked combocolors
  8. Unused Hitsounds : Good
  9. Hitsounds Issues : Good
  10. Unused Files / Other : Good
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Cup
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General



  1. 00:14:947 (4,1) - The distance is pretty far here despite being a weaker sound. I'd suggest reducing this distance a bit - fixed
  2. 00:23:009 (2,3) - You're missing the strong vocal at 00:23:384 - here, I feel like you should drag this to 00:23:197 - for a better rhythm - alright, done
  3. 00:52:259 (3,4,1) - Right facing flow into an immediate long distance to the left that's also antiflow is really not recommended in a difficulty like this. - ok, i made 1/1 reverse on left side
  4. 00:57:884 (2) - Not sure why this is a repeat slider, you've just done a circle normally for structure like this - removed repeat, and made 1/1 slider
  5. 01:14:009 (2) - seems a tiny bit dense, maybe remove the repeat? - but then we're missing strong sound at 01:14:009 (2) -
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Salad
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General



  1. Please try to go through and make some dashes more visually clear. Some dashes like 00:08:384 (2,1) - are noticeably increased distance-wise but are easily walkable. I won't point them all out though, so please try to do it yourself
  2. 00:11:759 (3,1) - Strong sound, add a dash maybe? - okay? moved to x224
  3. 00:14:572 (4,5,1) - Shouldn't all be dashes here, maybe increase 00:14:572 (4,5) - and reduce the distance between 00:14:947 (5,1) - . alright, donee
  4. 00:20:572 (3,1) - I don't feel this should be a dash, it's not that strong. Maybe reduce this? ok
  5. 00:38:572 (3,1) - Increase dash distance here - ok
  6. 00:47:197 (2,3) - Doesn't feel like this needs a dash, reduce this? - yep
  7. Kiai suffers from the same issue I listed in my first point. Please fix it <: - ok owo
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Platter
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General



  1. 00:14:384 (4,5,6) - This is pretty much an antiflow HDash and is therefore unrankable. The HDash moves to the right and then immediately the player needs to make a large leftwards jump, which fits the definition of antiflow, so it'll need to be changed. - Fixed i guess
  2. The difficulty is nice but there's way too many hyperdashes here and almost no normal dashes. Please try to swap out some of the HDashes for regular dashes in places where the stuff isn't that strong[/b] - ww ok, made less hdashes
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Angel
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General



  1. 00:03:040 (4) - Overmapped 1/4, delete this :o - haa ok
  2. 00:06:697 (3,4) - Dunno if you need an HDash between here, I'd rather see one between 00:06:884 (4,5) - - owo looks cute ;D
  3. 00:07:259 (6) - Overmapped 1/4, delete the blue tick - ok w
  4. 00:11:572 (3,4) - Why's there an HDash between here? There's nothing extraordinary about that sound - removed hdash
  5. 00:12:134 (1) - No need to extend this to 1/4, reduce to the red tick for a 1/2 dash - okie
  6. 00:13:259 (4) - Maybe reduce the distance to and from this note and make a dash between 00:13:447 (5,6) - ?
  7. 00:28:634 (2,3) - I'd ctrl+g this rhythm the vocal should be played as a slider, not a circle. - reworked pattern
  8. 00:38:947 (1) - Please make this a C-Curve, this plays so bad :( - OK
  9. 01:44:947 (6,7) - Why are these 1/4 hypers, there doesn't even feel like there's 1/4 sounds there lol - removed this shiet
  10. 01:47:947 (4,5) - As above - ^
  11. 01:52:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should 100% be a 1/1 slider, there's no 1/4 at all lol - HAHAHHA LOL, fixed
  12. This diff has some pretty serious overmapping issues, please take a deeper look and try to fix some of them yourself. - reworked some patterns and removed overmapped moments

Call me after you've made the appropriate fixes.
posted
Top diff:

  1. 00:07:447 (3) - unsnapped
  2. 00:07:728 (4,1) - why is this distance so far now? please reduce it
  3. You missed my suggestion at 00:13:072 -, try something like this to give 1 some more emphasis.
  4. 00:39:040 (6,8) - Overmapped, delete these
  5. 01:00:322 (1) - unsnapped
  6. 01:26:009 (2,3) - shouldn't the hdash be to the strong vocal downbeat on 01:26:384 -
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Ascendance wrote:

Top diff:

  1. 00:07:447 (3) - unsnapped - fixed
  2. 00:07:728 (4,1) - why is this distance so far now? please reduce it - k
  3. You missed my suggestion at 00:13:072 -, try something like this to give 1 some more emphasis. - oh lol,
    sorry. Done
  4. 00:39:040 (6,8) - Overmapped, delete these - :ok_hand:
  5. 01:00:322 (1) - unsnapped - fixed
  6. 01:26:009 (2,3) - shouldn't the hdash be to the strong vocal downbeat on 01:26:384 - fixed
Thanks. Updated
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Alright, looking good!
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owo
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uwu
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owu
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owo
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Давай, ещё чуть чуть.
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uwo
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OwO

Recheck man here to recheck! Literally just two points on the cup

[Cup]
  1. 01:16:634 (1,2,3) - This spacing is a bit high, would lower to around 1.40x ds across this at most
  2. 01:54:322 (1) - Possible to move this to x:256 to lower the distance?
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Sorcerer wrote:

OwO

Recheck man here to recheck! Literally just two points on the cup

[Cup]
  1. 01:16:634 (1,2,3) - This spacing is a bit high, would lower to around 1.40x ds across this at most - ok
  2. 01:54:322 (1) - Possible to move this to x:256 to lower the distance? - np done
Thanks <3 And haaaa made minor changes in platter. Updated!
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UwU
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owo
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Конгратулейшон
I knew what u can do it
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Grats owo
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