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Hanazawa Kana
厉害了我的喵抚
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

厉害了我的喵抚
捕获楼上,取名 Extra
EncoreW
[Sagittarius A]

前面那段我还是比较倾向于滑条静音的

00:08:123 - 漏音,这里应该是一个5note的串

00:08:220 (4) - 这地方可以拆成两个1/2滑条,把00:08:510 - 这个点填上

00:15:187 - 音量从65直接减到25这个幅度有点太大了,可以在00:15:090 - 这里插一根绿线,放45的音量,做一个过渡

00:30:090 (1,1) - overlap,另外00:30:671 (1) - 这个滑条不是轴对称的,红描点的位置需要调整,差不多是下面的样子
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00:46:445 (7,1) - 这个太难了,1/4滑条也就算了你这个是1/8,而且这四个1/8的间距太小反而感觉不太好读

00:48:090 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不要简单的复制粘贴,可以考虑摆一点上下波动的形状比如下面这样的,一条直线flow用两次感觉并不是那么好
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396,108,48477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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203,100,49252,1,2,0:0:0:0:

00:53:510 (1) - 这一段的音效不太适合用默认的whistle,感觉需要另外一个自定义的音效

00:55:832 (1) - 这个在800*600的分辨率里面已经出屏幕了,肯定不行的

01:29:897 (1) - 这一段无谓的NC太多了,一节2个NC已经够了

01:43:445 (2) - 可以摆一个1/1滑条,因为01:43:832 - 这个地方不是完全空的

01:49:639 (1) - ^

排列没毛病,不过太多的滑条在对称方面还有问题,看着不太舒服
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Speechless wrote:

[Sagittarius A]

前面那段我还是比较倾向于滑条静音的 我音量调低一点

00:08:123 - 漏音,这里应该是一个5note的串

00:08:220 (4) - 这地方可以拆成两个1/2滑条,把00:08:510 - 这个点填上

00:15:187 - 音量从65直接减到25这个幅度有点太大了,可以在00:15:090 - 这里插一根绿线,放45的音量,做一个过渡

00:30:090 (1,1) - overlap,另外00:30:671 (1) - 这个滑条不是轴对称的,红描点的位置需要调整,差不多是下面的样子
431,103,30671,6,0,B|470:70|470:70|507:119|507:119|500:180|500:180|449:172,1,225,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:46:445 (7,1) - 这个太难了,1/4滑条也就算了你这个是1/8,而且这四个1/8的间距太小反而感觉不太好读

00:48:090 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不要简单的复制粘贴,可以考虑摆一点上下波动的形状比如下面这样的,一条直线flow用两次感觉并不是那么好
500,148,48090,5,10,0:0:0:0:
396,108,48477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
294,146,48864,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,100,49252,1,2,0:0:0:0:

00:53:510 (1) - 这一段的音效不太适合用默认的whistle,感觉需要另外一个自定义的音效 这里节奏我没跟鼓点

00:55:832 (1) - 这个在800*600的分辨率里面已经出屏幕了,肯定不行的

01:29:897 (1) - 这一段无谓的NC太多了,一节2个NC已经够了 小re

01:43:445 (2) - 可以摆一个1/1滑条,因为01:43:832 - 这个地方不是完全空的 这里比较安静所以我用圈圈了

01:49:639 (1) - ^

排列没毛病,不过太多的滑条在对称方面还有问题,看着不太舒服

没深蓝色的全改了
谢摸~
paydayzcool
Hi there, NM as promised from p/5938745#p5938745,

Easy
Generally, your Easy diff should be less than 1.45 stars. This here feels like a normal diff. So I reckon you should simplify the patterns.

00:08:220 (3,4) - Uh oh, I'm very worried about circular flow here. It just got burned.
00:12:478 (1) - How about making this slider a horizontal mirror of 00:10:929 (3)?
00:20:994 (3,1) - Maybe try https://puu.sh/vfqcz/decec7827b.png for better flow?
01:08:220 (1) - ctrl+h,ctrl+j this. Feels better imo.
02:07:058 (1,3) - Try not to overlap notes in easy imo.
03:13:252 (1) - Wrong direction. Should be inside the curve of the slider, e.g: https://puu.sh/vfqsm/31e02fa9d0.png (Ignore the 2 in the background.)
03:18:671 (4) - Up to you, but ctrl+j?
03:25:639 (1) - I can see that you are trying to point out symmetry, but the flow between this note and the previous one is missing.
03:28:736 (1) - ^
03:31:832 (1) - It seems more fitting for this slider to be placed further down. In easy diffs, we are looking for flow. (Or well, at least I am, not sure about others.)
03:34:929 (1) - Repeating this slider more than once can confuse beginner or newer players. Also, in accordance with the above suggestion, flow is dead in this last phrase.

Normal
00:05:123 (3) - ctrl+g. Needs to flow better to the next note.
00:11:316 (3) - ^
00:19:445 (2,4) - I'm worried about this unclean overlap. Imo, try this: https://puu.sh/vfqOd/ede9e1c413.png
00:28:736 (2) - ctrl+g this note. Better flow and gives you more space with placing notes.
00:33:381 (4) - Why are we going backwards? That kills the flow. https://puu.sh/vfqU5/71f3bdce2e.png
00:34:155 (1,2) - Try this: https://puu.sh/vfqZa/d4e295d621.png
01:29:897 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Too repetitive. It becomes dull.
02:43:832 (1,2) - I can tell that these sliders are different, please keep them the same shape.

I reckon the other diffs are as good as they are. Just focus on cleaning up the Easy and Normal diffs. :)
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

paydayzcool wrote:

Easy
Generally, your Easy diff should be less than 1.45 stars. This here feels like a normal diff. So I reckon you should simplify the patterns. don‘t worry ,although diff is over 1.45 as N,it is fine for easy

00:08:220 (3,4) - Uh oh, I'm very worried about circular flow here. It just got burned.
00:12:478 (1) - How about making this slider a horizontal mirror of 00:10:929 (3)?
00:20:994 (3,1) - Maybe try https://puu.sh/vfqcz/decec7827b.png for better flow? Keep cause i think this flow is ok
01:08:220 (1) - ctrl+h,ctrl+j this. Feels better imo.
02:07:058 (1,3) - Try not to overlap notes in easy imo.
03:13:252 (1) - Wrong direction. Should be inside the curve of the slider, e.g: https://puu.sh/vfqsm/31e02fa9d0.png (Ignore the 2 in the background.) i change a little~
03:18:671 (4) - Up to you, but ctrl+j? not ctrl+j but i will put it up a little
03:25:639 (1) - I can see that you are trying to point out symmetry, but the flow between this note and the previous one is missing.
03:28:736 (1) - ^ not bad cause it can make it more easy at the end
03:31:832 (1) - It seems more fitting for this slider to be placed further down. In easy diffs, we are looking for flow. (Or well, at least I am, not sure about others.) ok put it down
03:34:929 (1) - Repeating this slider more than once can confuse beginner or newer players. Also, in accordance with the above suggestion, flow is dead in this last phrase.

I reckon the other diffs are as good as they are. Just focus on cleaning up the Easy and Normal diffs. :)
thanks for modding~ :)
[Kamiya]

paydayzcool wrote:

Hi there, NM as promised from p/5938745#p5938745,
Normal
00:05:123 (3) - ctrl+g. Needs to flow better to the next note.clear
00:11:316 (3) - ^clear
00:19:445 (2,4) - I'm worried about this unclean overlap. Imo, try this: https://puu.sh/vfqOd/ede9e1c413.pngclear
00:28:736 (2) - ctrl+g this note. Better flow and gives you more space with placing notes.
00:33:381 (4) - Why are we going backwards? That kills the flow. https://puu.sh/vfqU5/71f3bdce2e.pngI changed to another style
00:34:155 (1,2) - Try this: https://puu.sh/vfqZa/d4e295d621.pngstructure very important, no change
01:29:897 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Too repetitive. It becomes dull.
02:43:832 (1,2) - I can tell that these sliders are different, please keep them the same shape.


I reckon the other diffs are as good as they are. Just focus on cleaning up the Easy and Normal diffs. :)

thanks for your modding~ :)

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252,196,196348,6,0,P|336:228|424:180,1,195,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,144,197123,2,0,P|492:216|464:340,1,195,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,356,197897,2,0,B|368:368|368:368|312:344,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,328,198477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,328,198671,2,0,L|200:328,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,352,199058,2,0,L|96:352,1,65
68,348,199445,6,0,P|44:288|72:224,1,130,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,196,200026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,196,200219,6,0,L|176:196,2,65,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,200,200994,6,0,P|-16:136|12:84,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,32,201768,1,4,0:0:0:0:
156,92,202155,2,0,L|152:164,1,65,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,204,202542,6,0,P|200:308|336:316,1,260,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,204090,2,0,P|472:188|428:320,1,260,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,205639,6,0,B|216:272|216:272|216:84,1,260,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,40,207187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,20,207574,2,0,L|304:150,1,130,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,296,208736,6,0,P|296:336|436:280,1,260,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,136,210284,2,0,P|212:92|92:140,1,260,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,324,211832,6,0,B|216:360|216:360|352:320,1,260,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,240,213381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,213768,2,0,L|232:308,1,130,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,276,214929,6,0,L|412:132,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,215703,2,0,L|320:280,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Lobelia
[ Sagittarius A ]
00:05:316 (4,5,6) - 这么强三个音。。感觉可以拆开更刺激,我乱说的,不过好像真可以QWQ,后面还有些类似的。。。就现在这样也挺好
00:27:961 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:31:058 (1,1,2) - 这两组我觉得应该是一个节奏的吧。。我看后面好像都是跟的31秒那种梗,27秒那里要不要统一呢?
00:47:316 (3,4) - 00:48:864 (3,4) - 感觉都可以ctrl+g一下
01:30:284 (1) - NC取消,然后01:30:671 (3) - NC,再01:31:058 (1) - NC取消。。后面以此类推我觉得这样NC比较适合音乐感觉
01:33:381 (2,3,1) - 这就是个人感觉了。。我觉得这一段的重叠貌似都打起来不是很舒服,因为按照我上面一条NC思路走的话。。我是觉得不会做到三个连续重叠感觉。。。不过要是你觉得那个NC思路和你思路不一致。。。就忽略这个吧QWQ
02:08:994 (3,4,5) - 这里要不要拆开啊,滑条尾后面跟着好重的三连感觉打击感好差 02:14:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 搞成这样的就舒服很多
02:58:929 (1,2,3) - 03:00:477 (1,2,3) - 02:59:703 (1,2,3) - 感觉这几组的三连间距换成逐渐加大比较好,现在打起来感觉忽大忽小,不是那么顺手03:05:123 (1,2,3) - 后面这一块类似
02:11:703 (1,2,1) - 这里我不是很懂为什么突然要1/4短滑,打的时候也是突然一愣听不懂
QWQ妙芙大师好厉害,看起来很赞,抓抓细节又是一张神图
SPOILER
打个小广告。。。不想摸就算了,我音效还没上QWQ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596564
[Kamiya]

[ Abhor ] wrote:

SPOILER
打个小广告。。。不想摸就算了,我音效还没上QWQ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596564
帮你多打一个QWQ
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ Sagittarius A ]
00:05:316 (4,5,6) - 这么强三个音。。感觉可以拆开更刺激,我乱说的,不过好像真可以QWQ,后面还有些类似的。。。就现在这样也挺好 这里还是不改啦,感觉叠起来强点
00:27:961 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:31:058 (1,1,2) - 这两组我觉得应该是一个节奏的吧。。我看后面好像都是跟的31秒那种梗,27秒那里要不要统一呢?主要是想不一样,就是变换性多点~qwq
00:47:316 (3,4) - 00:48:864 (3,4) - 感觉都可以ctrl+g一下
01:30:284 (1) - NC取消,然后01:30:671 (3) - NC,再01:31:058 (1) - NC取消。。后面以此类推我觉得这样NC比较适合音乐感觉
01:33:381 (2,3,1) - 这就是个人感觉了。。我觉得这一段的重叠貌似都打起来不是很舒服,因为按照我上面一条NC思路走的话。。我是觉得不会做到三个连续重叠感觉。。。不过要是你觉得那个NC思路和你思路不一致。。。就忽略这个吧QWQ 这part的排列我re一下
02:08:994 (3,4,5) - 这里要不要拆开啊,滑条尾后面跟着好重的三连感觉打击感好差 02:14:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 搞成这样的就舒服很多 主要是跟前面的一样,后面的换节奏就变了
02:58:929 (1,2,3) - 03:00:477 (1,2,3) - 02:59:703 (1,2,3) - 感觉这几组的三连间距换成逐渐加大比较好,现在打起来感觉忽大忽小,不是那么顺手03:05:123 (1,2,3) - 后面这一块类似 我最后两个改成短滑条,距离不好改~懒呢~
02:11:703 (1,2,1) - 这里我不是很懂为什么突然要1/4短滑,打的时候也是突然一愣听不懂
QWQ妙芙大师好厉害,看起来很赞,抓抓细节又是一张神图
SPOILER
打个小广告。。。不想摸就算了,我音效还没上QWQ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596564
摸啊,有kd怎么能不水
谢谢阿伯千里送摸~~ :)那就再抓抓细节
suli
你好 :) 说好的水摸
[ Hard ]
00:21:768 (1,3) - 这两个滑条尾叠在一起会不会更好
00:48:090 (1,1,1) - 保持等距会不会好点
02:00:865 (1,2) - 好像包的不太好
02:07:058 (1,2,3) - 这里也是弄成等距会不会更好
03:34:929 (1) - 这里变成一次折返+单点会不会好点,Easy就是这样做的
[ Sagittarius A ]
00:21:381 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的强音可以拉大一点距离吧,后面也是
00:46:155 (2,3,4,5) - 这1/8有点吓人啊
02:11:703 (1) - 这里拆成一次折返和单点会不会更好
03:34:929 (1,2,3,4) - 间距有点微妙
美丽,好像也没什么我这种萌新可以摸的
就这样水一下吧,祝早日RANK
神图,大师不愧是大师
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

SuliZ wrote:

你好 :) 说好的水摸
[ Hard ]
00:21:768 (1,3) - 这两个滑条尾叠在一起会不会更好
00:48:090 (1,1,1) - 保持等距会不会好点这里不是很懂你的意思
02:00:865 (1,2) - 好像包的不太好
02:07:058 (1,2,3) - 这里也是弄成等距会不会更好同上
03:34:929 (1) - 这里变成一次折返+单点会不会好点,Easy就是这样做的
[ Sagittarius A ]
00:21:381 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的强音可以拉大一点距离吧,后面也是
00:46:155 (2,3,4,5) - 这1/8有点吓人啊保留
02:11:703 (1) - 这里拆成一次折返和单点会不会更好
03:34:929 (1,2,3,4) - 间距有点微妙 没问题啊,这里我开ds放的
美丽,好像也没什么我这种萌新可以摸的
就这样水一下吧,祝早日RANK
神图,大师不愧是大师
谢摸~~
Kyuukai
ay, will mod only till the 1st break since u've modded a 1:30 drain map on my mapset

Easy
00:07:445 (2,3) - a Easy player will missread this, you should really change it
00:15:574 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:22:929 (3,5) - ^
00:43:058 (4,2) - ^
01:17:123 (4,1) - I don't know if you are allowed to put 1/2 sliders in a Easy diff tho
01:17:510 (1,3) - This overlap is not good for an Easy diff
01:33:768 (2,3,4) - Too hard to read for a Easy player
01:36:865 (2,3,4) - ^

Hard
00:03:574 (2,3) - Bad overlap
00:17:123 (1,2,3) - The player might missread this, you should move 1
00:21:768 (1,3) - overlap
00:22:929 (4,1) - The player might missread this, you should move 1
00:27:574 (1,1) - Too hard to read, you should move the slider reverse
00:38:800 (1,2,3) - flow
01:14:026 (1,1) - Too hard to read, you should move the slider reverse

Good luck !
Juiceys
M4M ( Modding 2 diffs since drain time )

Hyper:

01:34:155 (5) - Why cut the jumps on the loud drum beats starting here? feels like an awkward transition breaking from a consistent pattern in the middle of a rythmn
02:43:832 (1) - This overlap looks really sloppy to me I'd just make it so they dont overlap here
00:12:090 (6) - Huge jump here? not on a very apparent noise imo
00:53:510 (2) - the whole whistle pattern here really hurts my ears tbh
01:18:284 (3) - Why's the jump here so mega compared the other ones

Hard:
00:54:671 (2,1,2) - Why'd we nerf all the jumps in the middle of this section, the music is the same here
02:23:703 (1) - I'd increase the DS here and other similar noises since it's a hard and can get away with jumps a
02:41:897 (4,1) - Not the neatest overlap
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Kyuukai wrote:

ay, will mod only till the 1st break since u've modded a 1:30 drain map on my mapset

Easy
00:07:445 (2,3) - a Easy player will missread this, you should really change it
00:15:574 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:22:929 (3,5) - ^ stack no change,it‘s no problem for "N" easy
00:43:058 (4,2) - ^
01:17:123 (4,1) - I don't know if you are allowed to put 1/2 sliders in a Easy diff tho all of like that 1/2 sliders i will del
01:17:510 (1,3) - This overlap is not good for an Easy diff try
01:33:768 (2,3,4) - Too hard to read for a Easy player stack no change too
01:36:865 (2,3,4) - ^

Hard
00:03:574 (2,3) - Bad overlap I don't think overlap must be bad,so no change
00:17:123 (1,2,3) - The player might missread this, you should move 1 it look stack at the end will confuse player but at here rhythm,stack at the stress slider end will type more better
00:21:768 (1,3) - overlap
00:22:929 (4,1) - The player might missread this, you should move 1
00:27:574 (1,1) - Too hard to read, you should move the slider reverse to hard to read no mean player can't play it ,so no change
00:38:800 (1,2,3) - flow
01:14:026 (1,1) - Too hard to read, you should move the slider reverse

Good luck !
thanks for modding :)
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Juiceys wrote:

M4M ( Modding 2 diffs since drain time )


Hard:
00:54:671 (2,1,2) - Why'd we nerf all the jumps in the middle of this section, the music is the same here mapping base on drums it Intensive or not,i think no problem here
02:23:703 (1) - I'd increase the DS here and other similar noises since it's a hard and can get away with jumps a ok ,i will increase a little ds in this part
02:41:897 (4,1) - Not the neatest overlap i d't think overlap must be bad for mapping so no change
thanks for modding :)
Ellyu

Juiceys wrote:

M4M ( Modding 2 diffs since drain time )

Hyper:

01:34:155 (5) - Why cut the jumps on the loud drum beats starting here? feels like an awkward transition breaking from a consistent pattern in the middle of a rythmni put slider when there's a snare.
02:43:832 (1) - This overlap looks really sloppy to me I'd just make it so they dont overlap herefixed
00:12:090 (6) - Huge jump here? not on a very apparent noise imofixed
00:53:510 (2) - the whole whistle pattern here really hurts my ears tbhnot my fault. I use the hitsound from the top diff ;w;
01:18:284 (3) - Why's the jump here so mega compared the other onesfixed a little

thanks for mod
https://puu.sh/vlXR0/126092758a.osu
PandaHero
woah, this map is so cool :o
Pata-Mon
req by 肌肉男 虽然现在好像是小妹妹

[General]
  1. 感觉还是缺了一个真正的Insane.主难度明显是ex.
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:349 (2) - 这种要强行塞的话还是加个音效比较好.其实低难度音效不嫌多.后面00:07:445 (2) - 00:10:542 (2) - 等等都是
[Normal]
  1. 其实用这么高的sv和这么低的ds挺不好的……一般来说note多的地方才需要强调,结果现在这样等于是滑条里走得要比外面还快
  2. 类似于我在easy里说的,00:05:123 - 这类地方加一点音效,要么就换种节奏,比如00:04:736 - 开始一个1.5拍滑条然后00:05:510 - 放一个note
  3. 00:07:445 (2) - ……都是
  4. 00:29:510 (3,4) - 这类地方就这么下节奏未免太无聊了……例1:https://puu.sh/vzMx3/833755792d.png 例2:https://puu.sh/vzMx2/fd14dfdfaa.png 后面也是
  5. 00:42:671 (4,5) - 别叠.实际上根据你这段的节奏下法,00:43:058 - 这里怎么看都应该用一个滑条尾填上
  6. kiai严重缺音效.你塞得这么爆多加点音效
  7. 01:14:413 (1,2,3) - 大哥
  8. 大概都是类似的问题 自查吧
[Hard]
  1. 00:57:381 (1) - 碰血条
  2. 01:57:574 - 这类地方真的不建议空,太响了.这段后面有些地方类似(如果滑条盖过去的那种漏音还好,再或者是你很清楚地跟了别的轨也没关系,但是这里彻底空掉还stack就很违和)
[Hyper]
  1. 00:15:865 (2) - 00:26:703 (2) - 这段大量类似的音你全都没跟,只跟了这俩,没道理
  2. 00:42:187 - 前后类似的都跟了
  3. 02:13:542 (2) - 前后类似的没跟
  4. 02:45:381 (1) - 跟后面三个一样拆开
  5. 最后一小段也是类似问题.总之这难度排列基本没什么说,就是一方面是跟轨统一,另一方面是总体难度分布的问题,现在几个kiai比其他部分难太多了,像00:14:994 - 之前这类好几段都完完全全是hard难度.其实ds不变,把背景音有三连的都加上,一样能和高潮部分很强烈地区分开,但难度分布会更合理一些.现在很多地方感觉是随机加,效果并不好
懒摸了 反正打过一次好像总体ok

GL
Ellyu

Pata-Mon wrote:

req by 肌肉男 虽然现在好像是小妹妹

[Hyper]
  1. 00:15:865 (2) - 00:26:703 (2) - 这段大量类似的音你全都没跟,只跟了这俩,没道理不是随机跟的,这里这种hat音全跟的话切指太复杂,甚至比很多目前市场上的insane都要难控acc,而且那样节奏跟主难度基本没区别了。我跟hat的方式是选择在段落衔接处加。比如说00:15:865 (2,3) - 是在合成器出现时加,00:26:703 (2,3) - 是这一段的末尾,00:40:639 (2,3) - 也是在新合成器出现时加,00:45:284 (2,3) - 则是这一段的末尾,这样还能起到一点过渡和标记梗的作用。后面思考方式也是类似的
  2. 00:42:187 - 前后类似的都跟了
  3. 02:13:542 (2) - 前后类似的没跟
  4. 02:45:381 (1) - 跟后面三个一样拆开这个是我疏漏了,改了
  5. 最后一小段也是类似问题.总之这难度排列基本没什么说,就是一方面是跟轨统一,另一方面是总体难度分布的问题,现在几个kiai比其他部分难太多了,像00:14:994 - 之前这类好几段都完完全全是hard难度.其实ds不变,把背景音有三连的都加上,一样能和高潮部分很强烈地区分开,但难度分布会更合理一些.现在很多地方感觉是随机加,效果并不好
    事实上我也有类似想法,但我觉得这曲子如果真的很严谨的跟轨的话(特别是跟hat),会使谱面难度大幅上升而且很单调,另外我觉得kiai部分目前并不是很难,小间距的kick slider其实还算好打,甚至比单点要好打,毕竟屙屎目前系统对滑条判定还蛮松的。

懒摸了 反正打过一次好像总体ok

GL
谢摸owo:https://puu.sh/vzVfz/b4e2dc66f9.osu
另外我ID改了,考虑下要不要把handsome muscle加进tag里不!!!好羞耻
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Pata-Mon wrote:

[General]
  1. 感觉还是缺了一个真正的Insane.主难度明显是ex.这个I差不多就是ex,hm的hyper做不到I标就只能这样啦
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:349 (2) - 这种要强行塞的话还是加个音效比较好.其实低难度音效不嫌多.后面00:07:445 (2) - 00:10:542 (2) - 等等都是 本来hitnormal就对这这些鼓点了,这里不加了


[Hard]
  1. 00:57:381 (1) - 碰血条
  2. 01:57:574 - 这类地方真的不建议空,太响了.这段后面有些地方类似(如果滑条盖过去的那种漏音还好,再或者是你很清楚地跟了别的轨也没关系,但是这里彻底空掉还stack就很违和)这里跟着旋律下,主要是原地停留可以带过最后那个音
谢摸~ :)
[Kamiya]

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 其实用这么高的sv和这么低的ds挺不好的……一般来说note多的地方才需要强调,结果现在这样等于是滑条里走得要比外面还快
  2. 类似于我在easy里说的,00:05:123 - 这类地方加一点音效,要么就换种节奏,比如00:04:736 - 开始一个1.5拍滑条然后00:05:510 - 放一个note嘛。再考虑一下
  3. 00:07:445 (2) - ……都是嘛。再考虑一下

  4. 00:29:510 (3,4) - 这类地方就这么下节奏未免太无聊了……例1:https://puu.sh/vzMx3/833755792d.png 例2:https://puu.sh/vzMx2/fd14dfdfaa.png 后面也是
  5. 00:42:671 (4,5) - 别叠.实际上根据你这段的节奏下法,00:43:058 - 这里怎么看都应该用一个滑条尾填上
  6. kiai严重缺音效.你塞得这么爆多加点音效
  7. 01:14:413 (1,2,3) - 大哥
  8. 大概都是类似的问题 自查吧
懒摸了 反正打过一次好像总体ok

GL
没回的基本改完了

谢摸

fix
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Title:EdJean - Alien Invasion (Aeolus Remix)
TitleUnicode:EdJean - Alien Invasion (Aeolus Remix)
Artist:EdJean & Aeolus
ArtistUnicode:EdJean & 丶Aeolus
Creator:_MiaoFUuU_
Version:Kamiya's Normal
Source:
Tags:UFO attack universe war Space ship 51 Area planet galaxy earth Meteorite Human science and technology lastday destroy
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Moe
:3摸不动 射个星吧
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Reimoe wrote:

:3摸不动 射个星吧
谢啦_(:зゝ∠)_
elena2705
Hi~
You asked me mod this. So...
You have already had ranked maps, so i think you will say that my suggetions will not so helpfull for you. But I play in osu a lot, so some things confused me, so...

Easy

01:02:026 (1) - make this slider symmetrical;
02:11:703 (3,4) - maybe like this:

03:08:606 (1) - not needs new combo;
02:57:768 (1) - maybe distinguish this slider in one combo, so that underline the sound;
03:00:865 (1) - ^
03:03:961 (1) - ^
03:10:155 (1) - ^
03:16:348 (1) - ^

Kamiya's Normal

00:54:284 (5) - why here new combo, but father no combo like this?
01:14:413 (1) - new combo, 01:15:961 (6) - continue combo;
02:20:607 (1) - like in Easy;
02:23:703 (1) - ^
02:26:800 (1) - ^
02:39:187 (1) - ^
02:36:865 (3) - why new combo? Delete it;
02:38:413 (2) - ^
03:04:736 (1) - Why new combo?
03:11:703 (1) - father in place like this, there is no new combo, but why here it is?
03:20:219 (1) - continue combo.

Hard

00:05:510 (4) - increase this slider to yellow stick;
00:11:703 (4) - ^
I became entangled in combo... But something exactly not good.
I like this diff!!! Easy to play and understand)

Every diffs easy to play :)
And about sounds. How did you come up with japanese sounds in dubstep song??>_< It's really cool!!! ;)
Good luck :D
[Kamiya]
:?

elena2705 wrote:

Kamiya's Normal

00:54:284 (5) - why here new combo, but father no combo like this?clear
01:14:413 (1) - new combo, 01:15:961 (6) - continue combo;clear
02:20:607 (1) - like in Easy;
02:23:703 (1) - ^
02:26:800 (1) - ^
02:39:187 (1) - ^
02:36:865 (3) - why new combo? Delete it;clear
02:38:413 (2) - ^clear
03:04:736 (1) - Why new combo?clear
03:11:703 (1) - father in place like this, there is no new combo, but why here it is?
03:20:219 (1) - continue combo.clear
no answer=no fix

thank you for your modding :)

Try
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 140510
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 91,15574,40349,52736,77510,89897,102284,114671,127058,140607,142929,165381,177768,202542,214929
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:EdJean - Alien Invasion (Aeolus Remix)
TitleUnicode:EdJean - Alien Invasion (Aeolus Remix)
Artist:EdJean & Aeolus
ArtistUnicode:EdJean & 丶Aeolus
Creator:_MiaoFUuU_
Version:Kamiya's Normal
Source:
Tags:UFO attack universe war Space ship 51 Area planet galaxy earth Meteorite Human science and technology lastday destroy handsome muscle
BeatmapID:1262755
BeatmapSetID:587985

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,102484,113471
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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214929,-100,4,1,3,60,0,0


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Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 150,45,255
Combo4 : 0,128,192
Combo5 : 128,0,0

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Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

elena2705 wrote:

Hi~
You asked me mod this. So...
You have already had ranked maps, so i think you will say that my suggetions will not so helpfull for you. But I play in osu a lot, so some things confused me, so...

Easy

01:02:026 (1) - make this slider symmetrical;
02:11:703 (3,4) - maybe like this:

03:08:606 (1) - not needs new combo;
02:57:768 (1) - maybe distinguish this slider in one combo, so that underline the sound;
03:00:865 (1) - ^
03:03:961 (1) - ^
03:10:155 (1) - ^
03:16:348 (1) - ^




Hard

00:05:510 (4) - increase this slider to yellow stick; no change cause stack will make the triple appear Unsymmetric
00:11:703 (4) - ^
I became entangled in combo... But something exactly not good.
I like this diff!!! Easy to play and understand)

Every diffs easy to play :)
And about sounds. How did you come up with japanese sounds in dubstep song??>_< It's really cool!!! ;)
Good luck :D
Thank you~~ :)
sahuang
Sorry for late

General
Inconsistent Values: Artist Unicode
Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap5.wav
normal-hitwhistle5.wav
Easy and Ellyu's Hyper: Timings: 02:20:607 - volume and kiai inconsistent

Easy
00:43:445 (1) - inconsistent 其他地方都在跟音乐
01:07:445 (4,1) - ds+逆着的flow
为什么这边ds突然1.0了,前面一直0.9x,01:17:510 - 进入calm part还是1.0x
01:20:607 (1,3) - blanket
01:23:316 (4,2) - easy不要出现这样的叠,因为新手反应不过来
02:02:413 (3,4) - 突然1/2
02:04:736 (2,3,4) - 太难了
02:20:607 - 为什么要红线,bpm没变吧。。然后ds、怎么一下子1.1了
02:58:542 (1,1,1) - etc为什么nc
DS变化太多了,感觉有点不行

Normal
00:35:703 (3) - 建议逆时针转一个小角度会更好看
00:38:026 (2,3,4) - 一样。。需要polish一下,现在难看
00:55:639 (4) - 删了。。串太长了
01:00:865 (6,1) - overlap了
01:06:478 (4) - 也删了,串太长
这个kiai感觉有点问题。。首先节奏太密了,easy都没有什么1/2,这边一下子一堆叠上去。第二做的太不整洁了。。。你看看01:10:929 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:52:736 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这些。。感觉角度和位置摆放都很不整齐,有时候红点有时候弧。最后的话节奏也有点问题,01:09:768 (1,2,3) - 01:03:574 (4,5,6,7) - 00:57:381 (4,5,6) - etc一个音乐居然那么多种密度不同的节奏。
01:29:897 (1,2) - 01:32:220 (2,1,2) - 等等blanket太随意了
类似的就不举了,总之这个diff需要加强。。

Hard
00:14:897 (4,5) - 删了吧。。这些没什么音
01:35:316 (1,1) - 03:07:832 (3,1) - 有点几把
03:30:284 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以和00:11:510 (2,3,4) - 前面consistent
注意一下NC,太多了,然后kiai设定自己的diff最好一样

Hyper
00:17:316 (2,4) - 这个叠有点不好看啊
00:30:090 (3,5) - 01:26:026 (5,1) - 同上
01:05:123 (1,2) - 这个折返应该是unrankable
03:16:348 (1,2) - 没叠好?
03:27:187 (1) - 和后面比少一个折返啊
kiai不错

A
00:08:897 (3) - 这个蓝线起不好,白线的音也没突出,00:13:542 (2) - 这个也是,白线比蓝线音明显
01:32:607 (2,3,1) - 等等为什么stack
02:38:219 (2,1) - 这间距有点难
02:49:252 (1) - etc不确定是不是1/8,感觉有点overmap
03:24:865 (3,4,5,6,7) - 03:31:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - 为什么34间距那么大
kiai想法不错,但我觉得整张图还是有点乱

加油 :)
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

My Angel Azusa wrote:

Sorry for late

General
Inconsistent Values: Artist Unicode 改了
Unused hitsounds: 删了
normal-hitclap5.wav
normal-hitwhistle5.wav
Easy and Ellyu's Hyper: Timings: 02:20:607 - volume and kiai inconsistent

Easy
00:43:445 (1) - inconsistent 其他地方都在跟音乐
01:07:445 (4,1) - ds+逆着的flow
为什么这边ds突然1.0了,前面一直0.9x,01:17:510 - 进入calm part还是1.0x
01:20:607 (1,3) - blanket
01:23:316 (4,2) - easy不要出现这样的叠,因为新手反应不过来
02:02:413 (3,4) - 突然1/2
02:04:736 (2,3,4) - 太难了
02:20:607 - 为什么要红线,bpm没变吧。。然后ds、怎么一下子1.1了 重音位置变了
02:58:542 (1,1,1) - etc为什么nc 有个摸说加个区分度的,你说不NC就不NC了
DS变化太多了,感觉有点不行 那3段密集的都全部1X其余我都换成0.9了


Hard
00:14:897 (4,5) - 删了吧。。这些没什么音
01:35:316 (1,1) - 03:07:832 (3,1) - 有点几把
03:30:284 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以和00:11:510 (2,3,4) - 前面consistent
注意一下NC,太多了,然后kiai设定自己的diff最好一样 没必要的我删NC了


A
00:08:897 (3) - 这个蓝线起不好,白线的音也没突出,00:13:542 (2) - 这个也是,白线比蓝线音明显
01:32:607 (2,3,1) - 等等为什么stack keep 可能因为没跳梗。。
02:38:219 (2,1) - 这间距有点难 第一次可能会被坑?主要是我这里没miss过,试过几次都顺手,keep
02:49:252 (1) - etc不确定是不是1/8,感觉有点overmap 个人感觉1/8有爆发感,打起来也很爽啊
03:24:865 (3,4,5,6,7) - 03:31:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - 为什么34间距那么大
kiai想法不错,但我觉得整张图还是有点乱 233风格比较奇葩,主要是UFO的曲就做的放开一点了,前边后边还拉了几个类似UFO的滑条....

加油 :)
好,谢摸啦~~ :)
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

My Angel Azusa wrote:

Sorry for late

General
Inconsistent Values: Artist Unicode 改了
Unused hitsounds: 删了
normal-hitclap5.wav
normal-hitwhistle5.wav
Easy and Ellyu's Hyper: Timings: 02:20:607 - volume and kiai inconsistent

Easy
00:43:445 (1) - inconsistent 其他地方都在跟音乐
01:07:445 (4,1) - ds+逆着的flow
为什么这边ds突然1.0了,前面一直0.9x,01:17:510 - 进入calm part还是1.0x
01:20:607 (1,3) - blanket
01:23:316 (4,2) - easy不要出现这样的叠,因为新手反应不过来
02:02:413 (3,4) - 突然1/2
02:04:736 (2,3,4) - 太难了
02:20:607 - 为什么要红线,bpm没变吧。。然后ds、怎么一下子1.1了 重音位置变了
02:58:542 (1,1,1) - etc为什么nc 有个摸说加个区分度的,你说不NC就不NC了
DS变化太多了,感觉有点不行 那3段密集的都全部1X其余我都换成0.9了


Hard
00:14:897 (4,5) - 删了吧。。这些没什么音
01:35:316 (1,1) - 03:07:832 (3,1) - 有点几把
03:30:284 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以和00:11:510 (2,3,4) - 前面consistent
注意一下NC,太多了,然后kiai设定自己的diff最好一样 没必要的我删NC了


A
00:08:897 (3) - 这个蓝线起不好,白线的音也没突出,00:13:542 (2) - 这个也是,白线比蓝线音明显
01:32:607 (2,3,1) - 等等为什么stack keep 可能因为没跳梗。。
02:38:219 (2,1) - 这间距有点难 第一次可能会被坑?主要是我这里没miss过,试过几次都顺手,keep
02:49:252 (1) - etc不确定是不是1/8,感觉有点overmap 个人感觉1/8有爆发感,打起来也很爽啊
03:24:865 (3,4,5,6,7) - 03:31:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - 为什么34间距那么大
kiai想法不错,但我觉得整张图还是有点乱 233风格比较奇葩,主要是UFO的曲就做的放开一点了,前边后边还拉了几个类似UFO的滑条....

加油 :)
好,谢摸啦~~ :)
update 3diff
[Kamiya]
remapDone!

recheck plz~

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68,160,126671,2,0,L|68:236,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,280,127058,6,0,P|132:304|204:276,1,140,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,228,127832,1,6,0:0:0:0:
328,312,128220,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,224,128607,2,0,P|400:156|372:92,1,140,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,64,129187,2,0,L|272:64,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,64,129768,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,64,130155,6,0,P|52:132|80:196,1,140,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,252,130929,1,6,0:0:0:0:
232,204,131316,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,300,131703,2,0,P|312:320|380:288,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,212,132478,1,6,0:0:0:0:
328,212,132865,1,2,0:0:0:0:
370,296,133252,5,10,0:0:0:0:
424,93,134026,1,6,0:0:0:0:
221,38,134800,1,10,0:0:0:0:
167,241,135574,1,6,0:0:0:0:
296,92,136349,2,0,P|364:68|424:96,1,140,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,164,137123,2,0,P|292:188|229:161,1,140,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,116,137897,6,0,L|168:256,1,140,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,299,138671,2,0,L|228:158,1,140,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,48,140607,6,0,B|112:188,1,140,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,252,141381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,252,141574,2,0,L|212:164,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,108,142155,2,0,B|296:176|296:176|272:248,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,142929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,143123,2,0,L|316:328,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,143703,6,0,L|444:184,1,140,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,144477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,144671,2,0,L|348:208,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,145252,2,0,B|256:204|256:204|276:136,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,52,146026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,52,146219,2,0,L|224:52,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,52,146800,6,0,B|121:114|121:114|153:182,1,140,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,147574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,147768,2,0,L|260:272,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,324,148348,6,0,B|358:261|358:261|326:193,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,176,148929,2,0,L|248:108,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,108,149316,2,0,L|168:36,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,64,149897,6,0,L|140:204,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,204,150477,2,0,L|212:272,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,272,150864,2,0,L|292:344,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,324,151445,6,0,B|412:252|412:252|384:184,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,108,152219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,108,152413,2,0,L|264:108,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,152800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,108,152994,6,0,B|144:180|144:180|172:248,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,252,153768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,252,153961,2,0,L|236:180,1,70,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,154542,2,0,B|340:68|340:68|408:96,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,112,155123,2,0,L|448:184,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,212,155510,2,0,L|484:284,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,336,156090,6,0,B|336:364|336:364|268:336,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,324,156671,2,0,L|228:248,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,224,157059,2,0,L|188:152,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,116,157639,6,0,L|96:260,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,224,158413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,224,158606,2,0,L|188:152,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,104,158994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,56,159187,6,0,B|248:36|248:36|320:56,1,140,6|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,88,159961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,88,160155,2,0,L|412:168,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,256,160736,6,0,B|344:276|344:276|272:256,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,240,161316,2,0,L|228:168,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,136,161703,2,0,L|196:64,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,36,162284,6,0,L|104:192,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,204,162865,2,0,L|144:276,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,300,163252,2,0,L|184:372,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,340,163832,6,0,L|276:200,1,140,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,164606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,164800,2,0,B|308:92|308:92|340:104,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,124,165187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,148,165381,6,0,B|424:176|436:200|436:200|456:244|428:280|428:280|404:312|404:348|404:348|404:312|356:288,1,280,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,166929,6,0,B|180:300|168:276|168:276|148:232|176:196|176:196|200:164|200:128|200:128|200:164|248:188,1,280,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,228,168477,6,0,B|396:252|360:244|360:244|328:236|292:264|292:264|328:236|332:192|332:192|336:160|316:132,1,280,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,170026,2,0,B|164:76|200:84|200:84|232:92|268:64|268:64|232:92|228:136|228:136|224:168|244:196,1,280,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,328,171574,6,0,B|336:360|280:332|280:332|232:308|176:316|176:316|232:308|240:252,1,280,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,80,173123,2,0,B|280:48|336:76|336:76|384:100|440:92|440:92|384:100|376:156,1,280,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,288,174671,6,0,B|251:268|255:236|255:236|264:188|295:164|295:164|264:188|220:176|220:176|180:168|156:196,1,280,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,244,176220,2,0,B|365:264|361:296|361:296|352:344|321:368|321:368|352:344|396:356|396:356|436:364|460:336,1,280,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,148,177768,6,0,B|348:120|348:120|280:148,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,184,178542,2,0,L|200:254,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,304,178929,1,4,0:0:0:0:
104,300,179316,2,0,B|76:232|76:232|100:168,1,140,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,84,180090,2,0,L|240:84,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,180477,1,4,0:0:0:0:
364,84,180865,6,0,B|392:152|392:152|368:216,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,304,181639,2,0,L|224:304,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,304,182026,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,264,182413,2,0,L|112:120,1,140,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,76,182994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,76,183187,2,0,L|184:76,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,183574,2,0,L|292:108,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,183961,6,0,L|336:236,1,140,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,296,184736,2,0,L|195:296,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,185123,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,204,185510,2,0,B|88:132|88:132|112:68,1,140,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,72,186284,2,0,L|288:72,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,72,186671,1,4,0:0:0:0:
424,72,187058,6,0,B|448:144|448:144|424:208,1,140,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,288,187832,2,0,L|292:288,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,288,188219,1,4,0:0:0:0:
180,356,188606,2,0,B|156:288|156:288|176:220,1,140,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,189187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,189381,2,0,L|264:176,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,208,189768,2,0,L|384:208,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,208,190155,6,0,B|484:156|444:96|444:96|396:120|360:88|360:88|324:60|276:80,1,280,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,80,191510,1,10,0:0:0:0:
156,80,191703,2,0,P|128:144|160:208,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,232,192284,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,232,192477,2,0,L|268:264,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,280,192865,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,252,193252,6,0,L|400:176,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,148,193639,2,0,L|364:72,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,28,194026,2,0,L|224:88,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,120,194800,5,0,0:0:0:0:
76,52,195187,2,0,P|48:128|72:184,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,264,195961,2,0,L|200:264,1,70,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,264,196348,6,0,B|276:280|276:320|276:320|276:280|296:256|296:256|320:224|304:176|304:176|336:192|368:176,1,280,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,68,197703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,68,197897,2,0,B|380:44|380:44|316:68,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,60,198477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,60,198671,2,0,L|196:88,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,76,199058,2,0,L|76:104,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,112,199445,6,0,P|16:176|40:240,1,140,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,276,200026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,276,200219,2,0,L|156:276,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,300,200606,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,364,200994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,312,201381,2,0,L|344:172,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,202155,2,0,L|252:206,1,70,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,202542,6,0,P|148:312|176:240,1,280,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,76,204090,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,192,204671,2,0,L|372:104,1,70,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,205639,6,0,P|76:72|104:144,1,280,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,276,207187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,308,207574,2,0,L|336:164,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,56,208736,6,0,B|428:20|356:60|356:60|288:20|220:64,1,280,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,128,210284,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,208,210865,2,0,L|172:124,1,70,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,324,211832,6,0,B|176:360|248:320|248:320|316:360|384:316,1,280,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,213381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,96,213768,2,0,L|312:240,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,228,214929,6,0,L|116:80,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,56,215703,2,0,L|216:200,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
:) 希望满意
萨皇摸的我就不改了 反正不过关的话我就一定是要remap的 所以我remap现在重新po一下
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_MiaoFUuU_
@萨皇 他被禁烟了,我帮他po一下改摸

Hyper
00:17:316 (2,4) - 这个叠有点不好看啊 改了
00:30:090 (3,5) - 01:26:026 (5,1) - 同上 这两个还好啊
01:05:123 (1,2) - 这个折返应该是unrankable 改了
03:16:348 (1,2) - 没叠好? 改了
03:27:187 (1) - 和后面比少一个折返啊 如果说的是跟这两个比03:33:381 (1,2) - ,那么我觉得没问题,前面的这些都只折返一次是为了让谱面更整洁,最后这两个是特别的,放一个特殊的来做结尾我觉得无甚不妥
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