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EdJean & Aeolus - EdJean - Alien Invasion (Aeolus Remix)

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paydayzcool
SG
373 posts
Joined October 2014
paydayzcool
Hi there, NM as promised from p/5938745#p5938745,

Generally, your Easy diff should be less than 1.45 stars. This here feels like a normal diff. So I reckon you should simplify the patterns.

00:08:220 (3,4) - Uh oh, I'm very worried about circular flow here. It just got burned.
00:12:478 (1) - How about making this slider a horizontal mirror of 00:10:929 (3)?
00:20:994 (3,1) - Maybe try https://puu.sh/vfqcz/decec7827b.png for better flow?
01:08:220 (1) - ctrl+h,ctrl+j this. Feels better imo.
02:07:058 (1,3) - Try not to overlap notes in easy imo.
03:13:252 (1) - Wrong direction. Should be inside the curve of the slider, e.g: https://puu.sh/vfqsm/31e02fa9d0.png (Ignore the 2 in the background.)
03:18:671 (4) - Up to you, but ctrl+j?
03:25:639 (1) - I can see that you are trying to point out symmetry, but the flow between this note and the previous one is missing.
03:28:736 (1) - ^
03:31:832 (1) - It seems more fitting for this slider to be placed further down. In easy diffs, we are looking for flow. (Or well, at least I am, not sure about others.)
03:34:929 (1) - Repeating this slider more than once can confuse beginner or newer players. Also, in accordance with the above suggestion, flow is dead in this last phrase.
00:05:123 (3) - ctrl+g. Needs to flow better to the next note.
00:11:316 (3) - ^
00:19:445 (2,4) - I'm worried about this unclean overlap. Imo, try this: https://puu.sh/vfqOd/ede9e1c413.png
00:28:736 (2) - ctrl+g this note. Better flow and gives you more space with placing notes.
00:33:381 (4) - Why are we going backwards? That kills the flow. https://puu.sh/vfqU5/71f3bdce2e.png
00:34:155 (1,2) - Try this: https://puu.sh/vfqZa/d4e295d621.png
01:29:897 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Too repetitive. It becomes dull.
02:43:832 (1,2) - I can tell that these sliders are different, please keep them the same shape.

I reckon the other diffs are as good as they are. Just focus on cleaning up the Easy and Normal diffs. :)
_MiaoFUuU_
CN
314 posts
Joined April 2014
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_MiaoFUuU_

paydayzcool wrote:

Generally, your Easy diff should be less than 1.45 stars. This here feels like a normal diff. So I reckon you should simplify the patterns. don‘t worry ，although diff is over 1.45 as N,it is fine for easy

00:08:220 (3,4) - Uh oh, I'm very worried about circular flow here. It just got burned. √
00:12:478 (1) - How about making this slider a horizontal mirror of 00:10:929 (3)? √
00:20:994 (3,1) - Maybe try https://puu.sh/vfqcz/decec7827b.png for better flow? Keep cause i think this flow is ok
01:08:220 (1) - ctrl+h,ctrl+j this. Feels better imo. √
02:07:058 (1,3) - Try not to overlap notes in easy imo. √
03:13:252 (1) - Wrong direction. Should be inside the curve of the slider, e.g: https://puu.sh/vfqsm/31e02fa9d0.png (Ignore the 2 in the background.) √i change a little~
03:18:671 (4) - Up to you, but ctrl+j? √ not ctrl+j but i will put it up a little
03:25:639 (1) - I can see that you are trying to point out symmetry, but the flow between this note and the previous one is missing.
03:28:736 (1) - ^ not bad cause it can make it more easy at the end
03:31:832 (1) - It seems more fitting for this slider to be placed further down. In easy diffs, we are looking for flow. (Or well, at least I am, not sure about others.)√ ok put it down
03:34:929 (1) - Repeating this slider more than once can confuse beginner or newer players. Also, in accordance with the above suggestion, flow is dead in this last phrase. √

I reckon the other diffs are as good as they are. Just focus on cleaning up the Easy and Normal diffs. :)
thanks for modding~ :)
[Kamiya]
KR
572 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]

paydayzcool wrote:

Hi there, NM as promised from p/5938745#p5938745,
00:05:123 (3) - ctrl+g. Needs to flow better to the next note.clear
00:11:316 (3) - ^clear
00:19:445 (2,4) - I'm worried about this unclean overlap. Imo, try this: https://puu.sh/vfqOd/ede9e1c413.pngclear
00:28:736 (2) - ctrl+g this note. Better flow and gives you more space with placing notes.
00:33:381 (4) - Why are we going backwards? That kills the flow. https://puu.sh/vfqU5/71f3bdce2e.pngI changed to another style
00:34:155 (1,2) - Try this: https://puu.sh/vfqZa/d4e295d621.pngstructure very important, no change
01:29:897 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Too repetitive. It becomes dull.
02:43:832 (1,2) - I can tell that these sliders are different, please keep them the same shape.


I reckon the other diffs are as good as they are. Just focus on cleaning up the Easy and Normal diffs. :)
thanks for your modding~ :)

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Lobelia
CN
782 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
[ Sagittarius A ]
00:05:316 (4,5,6) - 这么强三个音。。感觉可以拆开更刺激，我乱说的，不过好像真可以QWQ，后面还有些类似的。。。就现在这样也挺好
00:27:961 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:31:058 (1,1,2) - 这两组我觉得应该是一个节奏的吧。。我看后面好像都是跟的31秒那种梗，27秒那里要不要统一呢？
00:47:316 (3,4) - 00:48:864 (3,4) - 感觉都可以ctrl+g一下
01:30:284 (1) - NC取消，然后01:30:671 (3) - NC，再01:31:058 (1) - NC取消。。后面以此类推我觉得这样NC比较适合音乐感觉
01:33:381 (2,3,1) - 这就是个人感觉了。。我觉得这一段的重叠貌似都打起来不是很舒服，因为按照我上面一条NC思路走的话。。我是觉得不会做到三个连续重叠感觉。。。不过要是你觉得那个NC思路和你思路不一致。。。就忽略这个吧QWQ
02:08:994 (3,4,5) - 这里要不要拆开啊，滑条尾后面跟着好重的三连感觉打击感好差 02:14:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 搞成这样的就舒服很多
02:58:929 (1,2,3) - 03:00:477 (1,2,3) - 02:59:703 (1,2,3) - 感觉这几组的三连间距换成逐渐加大比较好，现在打起来感觉忽大忽小，不是那么顺手03:05:123 (1,2,3) - 后面这一块类似
02:11:703 (1,2,1) - 这里我不是很懂为什么突然要1/4短滑，打的时候也是突然一愣听不懂
QWQ妙芙大师好厉害，看起来很赞，抓抓细节又是一张神图
打个小广告。。。不想摸就算了，我音效还没上QWQ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596564
[Kamiya]
KR
572 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]

[ Abhor ] wrote:

打个小广告。。。不想摸就算了，我音效还没上QWQ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596564
帮你多打一个QWQ
_MiaoFUuU_
CN
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ Sagittarius A ]
00:05:316 (4,5,6) - 这么强三个音。。感觉可以拆开更刺激，我乱说的，不过好像真可以QWQ，后面还有些类似的。。。就现在这样也挺好 这里还是不改啦，感觉叠起来强点
00:27:961 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:31:058 (1,1,2) - 这两组我觉得应该是一个节奏的吧。。我看后面好像都是跟的31秒那种梗，27秒那里要不要统一呢？主要是想不一样，就是变换性多点~qwq
00:47:316 (3,4) - 00:48:864 (3,4) - 感觉都可以ctrl+g一下 √
01:30:284 (1) - NC取消，然后01:30:671 (3) - NC，再01:31:058 (1) - NC取消。。后面以此类推我觉得这样NC比较适合音乐感觉 √
01:33:381 (2,3,1) - 这就是个人感觉了。。我觉得这一段的重叠貌似都打起来不是很舒服，因为按照我上面一条NC思路走的话。。我是觉得不会做到三个连续重叠感觉。。。不过要是你觉得那个NC思路和你思路不一致。。。就忽略这个吧QWQ 这part的排列我re一下
02:08:994 (3,4,5) - 这里要不要拆开啊，滑条尾后面跟着好重的三连感觉打击感好差 02:14:800 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 搞成这样的就舒服很多 主要是跟前面的一样，后面的换节奏就变了
02:58:929 (1,2,3) - 03:00:477 (1,2,3) - 02:59:703 (1,2,3) - 感觉这几组的三连间距换成逐渐加大比较好，现在打起来感觉忽大忽小，不是那么顺手03:05:123 (1,2,3) - 后面这一块类似 √ 我最后两个改成短滑条，距离不好改~懒呢~
02:11:703 (1,2,1) - 这里我不是很懂为什么突然要1/4短滑，打的时候也是突然一愣听不懂 √
QWQ妙芙大师好厉害，看起来很赞，抓抓细节又是一张神图
打个小广告。。。不想摸就算了，我音效还没上QWQ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/596564
摸啊，有kd怎么能不水
谢谢阿伯千里送摸~~ :)那就再抓抓细节
suli
CN
18 posts
Joined September 2016
suli
你好 :) 说好的水摸
[ Hard ]
00:21:768 (1,3) - 这两个滑条尾叠在一起会不会更好
00:48:090 (1,1,1) - 保持等距会不会好点
02:00:865 (1,2) - 好像包的不太好
02:07:058 (1,2,3) - 这里也是弄成等距会不会更好
03:34:929 (1) - 这里变成一次折返+单点会不会好点，Easy就是这样做的
[ Sagittarius A ]
00:21:381 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的强音可以拉大一点距离吧，后面也是
00:46:155 (2,3,4,5) - 这1/8有点吓人啊
02:11:703 (1) - 这里拆成一次折返和单点会不会更好
03:34:929 (1,2,3,4) - 间距有点微妙
美丽，好像也没什么我这种萌新可以摸的
就这样水一下吧，祝早日RANK
神图，大师不愧是大师
_MiaoFUuU_
CN
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

SuliZ wrote:

你好 :) 说好的水摸
[ Hard ]
00:21:768 (1,3) - 这两个滑条尾叠在一起会不会更好 √
00:48:090 (1,1,1) - 保持等距会不会好点这里不是很懂你的意思
02:00:865 (1,2) - 好像包的不太好 √
02:07:058 (1,2,3) - 这里也是弄成等距会不会更好同上
03:34:929 (1) - 这里变成一次折返+单点会不会好点，Easy就是这样做的 √
[ Sagittarius A ]
00:21:381 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的强音可以拉大一点距离吧，后面也是 √
00:46:155 (2,3,4,5) - 这1/8有点吓人啊保留
02:11:703 (1) - 这里拆成一次折返和单点会不会更好 √
03:34:929 (1,2,3,4) - 间距有点微妙 没问题啊，这里我开ds放的
美丽，好像也没什么我这种萌新可以摸的
就这样水一下吧，祝早日RANK
神图，大师不愧是大师
谢摸~~
Kyuukai
FR
1,426 posts
Joined December 2014
Kyuukai
ay, will mod only till the 1st break since u've modded a 1:30 drain map on my mapset

Easy
00:07:445 (2,3) - a Easy player will missread this, you should really change it
00:15:574 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:22:929 (3,5) - ^
00:43:058 (4,2) - ^
01:17:123 (4,1) - I don't know if you are allowed to put 1/2 sliders in a Easy diff tho
01:17:510 (1,3) - This overlap is not good for an Easy diff
01:33:768 (2,3,4) - Too hard to read for a Easy player
01:36:865 (2,3,4) - ^

Hard
00:03:574 (2,3) - Bad overlap
00:17:123 (1,2,3) - The player might missread this, you should move 1
00:21:768 (1,3) - overlap
00:22:929 (4,1) - The player might missread this, you should move 1
00:27:574 (1,1) - Too hard to read, you should move the slider reverse
00:38:800 (1,2,3) - flow
01:14:026 (1,1) - Too hard to read, you should move the slider reverse

Good luck !
Juiceys
US
528 posts
Joined June 2016
Juiceys
M4M ( Modding 2 diffs since drain time )

Hyper:

01:34:155 (5) - Why cut the jumps on the loud drum beats starting here? feels like an awkward transition breaking from a consistent pattern in the middle of a rythmn
02:43:832 (1) - This overlap looks really sloppy to me I'd just make it so they dont overlap here
00:12:090 (6) - Huge jump here? not on a very apparent noise imo
00:53:510 (2) - the whole whistle pattern here really hurts my ears tbh
01:18:284 (3) - Why's the jump here so mega compared the other ones

Hard:
00:54:671 (2,1,2) - Why'd we nerf all the jumps in the middle of this section, the music is the same here
02:23:703 (1) - I'd increase the DS here and other similar noises since it's a hard and can get away with jumps a
02:41:897 (4,1) - Not the neatest overlap
_MiaoFUuU_
CN
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Kyuukai wrote:

ay, will mod only till the 1st break since u've modded a 1:30 drain map on my mapset

Easy
00:07:445 (2,3) - a Easy player will missread this, you should really change it √
00:15:574 (1,2,3,4) - ^ √
00:22:929 (3,5) - ^ stack no change，it‘s no problem for "N" easy
00:43:058 (4,2) - ^↑
01:17:123 (4,1) - I don't know if you are allowed to put 1/2 sliders in a Easy diff tho √ all of like that 1/2 sliders i will del
01:17:510 (1,3) - This overlap is not good for an Easy diff try
01:33:768 (2,3,4) - Too hard to read for a Easy player stack no change too
01:36:865 (2,3,4) - ^↑

Hard
00:03:574 (2,3) - Bad overlap I don't think overlap must be bad，so no change
00:17:123 (1,2,3) - The player might missread this, you should move 1 it look stack at the end will confuse player but at here rhythm，stack at the stress slider end will type more better
00:21:768 (1,3) - overlap ↑
00:22:929 (4,1) - The player might missread this, you should move 1 ↑
00:27:574 (1,1) - Too hard to read, you should move the slider reverse to hard to read no mean player can't play it ，so no change
00:38:800 (1,2,3) - flow √
01:14:026 (1,1) - Too hard to read, you should move the slider reverse ↑

Good luck !
thanks for modding :)
_MiaoFUuU_
CN
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Juiceys wrote:

M4M ( Modding 2 diffs since drain time )


Hard:
00:54:671 (2,1,2) - Why'd we nerf all the jumps in the middle of this section, the music is the same here mapping base on drums it Intensive or not，i think no problem here
02:23:703 (1) - I'd increase the DS here and other similar noises since it's a hard and can get away with jumps a √ ok ，i will increase a little ds in this part
02:41:897 (4,1) - Not the neatest overlap i d't think overlap must be bad for mapping so no change
thanks for modding :)
Ellyu
CN
398 posts
Joined May 2014
Ellyu

Juiceys wrote:

M4M ( Modding 2 diffs since drain time )

Hyper:

01:34:155 (5) - Why cut the jumps on the loud drum beats starting here? feels like an awkward transition breaking from a consistent pattern in the middle of a rythmni put slider when there's a snare.
02:43:832 (1) - This overlap looks really sloppy to me I'd just make it so they dont overlap herefixed
00:12:090 (6) - Huge jump here? not on a very apparent noise imofixed
00:53:510 (2) - the whole whistle pattern here really hurts my ears tbhnot my fault. I use the hitsound from the top diff ;w;
01:18:284 (3) - Why's the jump here so mega compared the other onesfixed a little

thanks for mod
https://puu.sh/vlXR0/126092758a.osu
PandaHero
RU
584 posts
Joined November 2011
PandaHero
woah, this map is so cool :o
Pata-Mon
CN
1,431 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
req by 肌肉男 虽然现在好像是小妹妹

[General]
  1. 感觉还是缺了一个真正的Insane．主难度明显是ex．


[Easy]
  1. 00:04:349 (2) - 这种要强行塞的话还是加个音效比较好．其实低难度音效不嫌多．后面00:07:445 (2) - 00:10:542 (2) - 等等都是


[Normal]
  1. 其实用这么高的sv和这么低的ds挺不好的……一般来说note多的地方才需要强调，结果现在这样等于是滑条里走得要比外面还快
  2. 类似于我在easy里说的，00:05:123 - 这类地方加一点音效，要么就换种节奏，比如00:04:736 - 开始一个1.5拍滑条然后00:05:510 - 放一个note
  3. 00:07:445 (2) - ……都是
  4. 00:29:510 (3,4) - 这类地方就这么下节奏未免太无聊了……例1：https://puu.sh/vzMx3/833755792d.png 例2：https://puu.sh/vzMx2/fd14dfdfaa.png 后面也是
  5. 00:42:671 (4,5) - 别叠．实际上根据你这段的节奏下法，00:43:058 - 这里怎么看都应该用一个滑条尾填上
  6. kiai严重缺音效．你塞得这么爆多加点音效
  7. 01:14:413 (1,2,3) - 大哥
  8. 大概都是类似的问题 自查吧


[Hard]
  1. 00:57:381 (1) - 碰血条
  2. 01:57:574 - 这类地方真的不建议空，太响了．这段后面有些地方类似（如果滑条盖过去的那种漏音还好，再或者是你很清楚地跟了别的轨也没关系，但是这里彻底空掉还stack就很违和）


[Hyper]
  1. 00:15:865 (2) - 00:26:703 (2) - 这段大量类似的音你全都没跟，只跟了这俩，没道理
  2. 00:42:187 - 前后类似的都跟了
  3. 02:13:542 (2) - 前后类似的没跟
  4. 02:45:381 (1) - 跟后面三个一样拆开
  5. 最后一小段也是类似问题．总之这难度排列基本没什么说，就是一方面是跟轨统一，另一方面是总体难度分布的问题，现在几个kiai比其他部分难太多了，像00:14:994 - 之前这类好几段都完完全全是hard难度．其实ds不变，把背景音有三连的都加上，一样能和高潮部分很强烈地区分开，但难度分布会更合理一些．现在很多地方感觉是随机加，效果并不好


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GL
Ellyu
CN
398 posts
Joined May 2014
Ellyu

Pata-Mon wrote:

req by 肌肉男 虽然现在好像是小妹妹

[Hyper]
  1. 00:15:865 (2) - 00:26:703 (2) - 这段大量类似的音你全都没跟，只跟了这俩，没道理不是随机跟的，这里这种hat音全跟的话切指太复杂，甚至比很多目前市场上的insane都要难控acc，而且那样节奏跟主难度基本没区别了。我跟hat的方式是选择在段落衔接处加。比如说00:15:865 (2,3) - 是在合成器出现时加，00:26:703 (2,3) - 是这一段的末尾，00:40:639 (2,3) - 也是在新合成器出现时加，00:45:284 (2,3) - 则是这一段的末尾，这样还能起到一点过渡和标记梗的作用。后面思考方式也是类似的
  2. 00:42:187 - 前后类似的都跟了
  3. 02:13:542 (2) - 前后类似的没跟
  4. 02:45:381 (1) - 跟后面三个一样拆开这个是我疏漏了，改了
  5. 最后一小段也是类似问题．总之这难度排列基本没什么说，就是一方面是跟轨统一，另一方面是总体难度分布的问题，现在几个kiai比其他部分难太多了，像00:14:994 - 之前这类好几段都完完全全是hard难度．其实ds不变，把背景音有三连的都加上，一样能和高潮部分很强烈地区分开，但难度分布会更合理一些．现在很多地方感觉是随机加，效果并不好
    事实上我也有类似想法，但我觉得这曲子如果真的很严谨的跟轨的话（特别是跟hat），会使谱面难度大幅上升而且很单调，另外我觉得kiai部分目前并不是很难，小间距的kick slider其实还算好打，甚至比单点要好打，毕竟屙屎目前系统对滑条判定还蛮松的。



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GL
谢摸owo:https://puu.sh/vzVfz/b4e2dc66f9.osu
另外我ID改了，考虑下要不要把handsome muscle加进tag里不！！！好羞耻
_MiaoFUuU_
CN
314 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
_MiaoFUuU_

Pata-Mon wrote:

[General]
  1. 感觉还是缺了一个真正的Insane．主难度明显是ex．这个I差不多就是ex，hm的hyper做不到I标就只能这样啦


[Easy]
  1. 00:04:349 (2) - 这种要强行塞的话还是加个音效比较好．其实低难度音效不嫌多．后面00:07:445 (2) - 00:10:542 (2) - 等等都是 本来hitnormal就对这这些鼓点了，这里不加了




[Hard]
  1. 00:57:381 (1) - 碰血条 √
  2. 01:57:574 - 这类地方真的不建议空，太响了．这段后面有些地方类似（如果滑条盖过去的那种漏音还好，再或者是你很清楚地跟了别的轨也没关系，但是这里彻底空掉还stack就很违和）这里跟着旋律下，主要是原地停留可以带过最后那个音
谢摸~ :)
[Kamiya]
KR
572 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 其实用这么高的sv和这么低的ds挺不好的……一般来说note多的地方才需要强调，结果现在这样等于是滑条里走得要比外面还快
  2. 类似于我在easy里说的，00:05:123 - 这类地方加一点音效，要么就换种节奏，比如00:04:736 - 开始一个1.5拍滑条然后00:05:510 - 放一个note嘛。再考虑一下
  3. 00:07:445 (2) - ……都是嘛。再考虑一下

  4. 00:29:510 (3,4) - 这类地方就这么下节奏未免太无聊了……例1：https://puu.sh/vzMx3/833755792d.png 例2：https://puu.sh/vzMx2/fd14dfdfaa.png 后面也是
  5. 00:42:671 (4,5) - 别叠．实际上根据你这段的节奏下法，00:43:058 - 这里怎么看都应该用一个滑条尾填上
  6. kiai严重缺音效．你塞得这么爆多加点音效
  7. 01:14:413 (1,2,3) - 大哥
  8. 大概都是类似的问题 自查吧


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GL
没回的基本改完了

谢摸

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280,304,186284,2,0,P|232:320|156:296,1,130,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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144,152,187832,2,0,B|292:152,1,130,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,100,188606,6,0,B|372:152|372:152|348:220,1,130,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Reimoe wrote:

:3摸不动 射个星吧
谢啦_(:зゝ∠)_
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