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aran - Graces of Heaven

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AmatsuYzu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 07 de abril de 2017 at 09:14:12 p.m.

Artist: aran
Title: Graces of Heaven
Source: c84 album by Hardcore Tano*C, Hardcore Syndrome 7
Tags: FainT Marathon Graces Of Heaven Aran Hardcore Syndrome 7 Dance Music FeelIt Technical jumpy harcoredance Universe SENPAII!!! Hardcore Tano*C c84 album
BPM: 174
Filesize: 9883kb
Play Time: 06:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Universe (6.56 stars, 1577 notes)
Download: aran - Graces of Heaven
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The Universe is filled with different styles!

Warning fast sliders midway (mostly technical), 2 streamy sections, beware of slow slider after spinner of the streamy section.

One of my favorites songs from the album <3!

Ranked please :)!



FainT was here~
Vaarka
It's a fun map if you want jump practice, but there are a few things that I think could improve it.

At the beginning, you have these kind of jumps: 00:00:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
And then during the Kiai part, you have these kind of jumps: 01:51:740 (1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3) -
- The thing I wanted to point out is that your jumps right at the start are rather large and difficult, similar to the ones during your second Kiai part. I think you should tone down the jumps in the beginning a little, since it's the start of the map and a bit more calm. You don't need to tone them down much, but I think bringing them in a little would help.
- Also, starting with this slider: 06:04:153 (1) - the music is toning down as it reaches towards the end of the song. It looks like you're already doing it a little, but making the jumps get a little closer as the music calms down and gets more quiet towards the end would probably fit the ending well.

03:24:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't quite understand some of the spacing in streams like this one, where some of it is rather spaced, and then gets less spaced as you reach the end of it. I can see the pattern, but I'm asking why it's like that.

03:38:809 (3,4) - Some of your return sliders at the ends of streams are placed on red ticks, and it kind of throws me off a little.
So for ones like these: 03:20:878 (3,4) - I think they could be changed a little, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7721469

Fun map though ;)
Topic Starter
AmatsuYzu

Vaarka wrote:

It's a fun map if you want jump practice, but there are a few things that I think could improve it.

At the beginning, you have these kind of jumps: 00:00:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
And then during the Kiai part, you have these kind of jumps: 01:51:740 (1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3) -
- The thing I wanted to point out is that your jumps right at the start are rather large and difficult, similar to the ones during your second Kiai part. I think you should tone down the jumps in the beginning a little, since it's the start of the map and a bit more calm. You don't need to tone them down much, but I think bringing them in a little would help.
- Also, starting with this slider: 06:04:153 (1) - the music is toning down as it reaches towards the end of the song. It looks like you're already doing it a little, but making the jumps get a little closer as the music calms down and gets more quiet towards the end would probably fit the ending well.

03:24:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't quite understand some of the spacing in streams like this one, where some of it is rather spaced, and then gets less spaced as you reach the end of it. I can see the pattern, but I'm asking why it's like that.

03:38:809 (3,4) - Some of your return sliders at the ends of streams are placed on red ticks, and it kind of throws me off a little.
So for ones like these: 03:20:878 (3,4) - I think they could be changed a little, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7721469

Fun map though ;)
I want my map ranked and I was looking for mods, you certainly gave me ideas of what to fix and what could be better in my.
Return sliders are placed on red ticks because the song calls it and I can't change that but I can change the spacing on stream to make them more comfortable for movement and flow with the music.
I'm glad you enjoyed my map and it will be more fun!
Thanks!
Dekze_old_1
Me gusta el mapa, esta genial, pero hay algunas cosas que deberias cambiar.

Aca te dejo lo que tenes que cambiar :

00:01:050 (1) - El slider esta muy lejos, ponelo mas cerca y doblalo
00:02:429 (1) - Igual con este
00:02:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Hace que los jumps solo vayan para una sola dirección y el slider hace lo mismo que dije antes
00:05:188 (1) - Acerca el slider y doblalo
00:06:567 (1) - Acomoda la posicion del slider, doblandolo y poniendolo un poco mas cerca
00:07:947 (1) - Ese slider tendria que estar mas al centro y doblado
00:08:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Aca hace lo mismo que dije en el 00:02:774
00:10:705 (1) - Ponelo mas cerca y doblalo
00:12:084 (1) - Acomoda el spacing
00:14:843 (1) - Podrias doblarlo y reducir el spacing como los otros
00:16:222 (1) - Lo de arriba
00:17:602 (1) - Lo de arriba x2
00:18:981 (1) - Lo de arriba x3
00:44:153 (1,2) - Creo que quedaria mejor si estuvieran en la misma posicion
00:46:912 (1,2) - Podrias cambiarlo por un slider
00:49:671 (1,2) - Podria quedar mejor en el mismo lugar
00:52:429 (1,2) - Creo que quedaria mejor en la misma posicion
01:05:016 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Reduci el spacing
01:26:912 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Igualmente reducilo
01:39:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - Aca igual, reduci el spacing
02:12:774 (1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - El spacing reducilo aca tambien
03:07:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,1,1,1) - El spacing también
04:02:774 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - El kiai no tendria que estar activado ahi

Nota Adicional y Opcional : Cambiar el CS a 4
Topic Starter
AmatsuYzu

skyfox2000 wrote:

Me gusta el mapa, esta genial, pero hay algunas cosas que deberias cambiar.

Aca te dejo lo que tenes que cambiar :

00:01:050 (1) - El slider esta muy lejos, ponelo mas cerca y doblalo
00:02:429 (1) - Igual con este
00:02:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Hace que los jumps solo vayan para una sola dirección y el slider hace lo mismo que dije antes
00:05:188 (1) - Acerca el slider y doblalo
00:06:567 (1) - Acomoda la posicion del slider, doblandolo y poniendolo un poco mas cerca
00:07:947 (1) - Ese slider tendria que estar mas al centro y doblado
00:08:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Aca hace lo mismo que dije en el 00:02:774
00:10:705 (1) - Ponelo mas cerca y doblalo
00:12:084 (1) - Acomoda el spacing
00:14:843 (1) - Podrias doblarlo y reducir el spacing como los otros
00:16:222 (1) - Lo de arriba
00:17:602 (1) - Lo de arriba x2
00:18:981 (1) - Lo de arriba x3
00:44:153 (1,2) - Creo que quedaria mejor si estuvieran en la misma posicion
00:46:912 (1,2) - Podrias cambiarlo por un slider
00:49:671 (1,2) - Podria quedar mejor en el mismo lugar
00:52:429 (1,2) - Creo que quedaria mejor en la misma posicion
01:05:016 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Reduci el spacing
01:26:912 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Igualmente reducilo
01:39:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - Aca igual, reduci el spacing
02:12:774 (1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - El spacing reducilo aca tambien
03:07:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,1,1,1) - El spacing también
04:02:774 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - El kiai no tendria que estar activado ahi

Nota Adicional y Opcional : Cambiar el CS a 4

Gracias por mod!
Tomare en consideración lo de cambiar sliders del principio, el spacing en el segundo kiai posiblemente lo deje igual almenos que reciba otra consideracion similar, en el tercer kiai el spacing lo hice acorde al ritmo de la cancion y ajustando al slider velocity buscando de por si una parte tecnica, mi idea con el map es tener en cada parte algo diferente, es decir, un estilo diferente para adaptar acorde como es la cancion.
_FainT_
Me encanta el map !!!!!
facundo sanchez
nice job
_Devi-Sama_
I agree with what Vaarka is saying, I really enjoy the map and I like her (or his) ideas.
MatherFxcker
Tu map es esta re copado, ¡Segui asi!=) :D
_FainT_
03:17:602 (1,1,1,2) - this part fells no sense on rythmin i think ;w;
Topic Starter
AmatsuYzu

_FainT_ wrote:

03:17:602 (1,1,1,2) - this part fells no sense on rythmin i think ;w;

Actually it does but because of you I came with another idea that could flow well with the music there (I should the pace).
Thanks for letting me think of other possibilities ;) .
[ - Ayumi - ]
Esta re bueno tu mapa, mejor que el mio. :'v

Pd: Por alguna extraña razon de la life, llegue aca. a.e
facundo sanchez
ezequiel-TM
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