Hello! Hoping for M4M as a fellow Infected Mushroom mapper. If not, thats okay too.
Hope that helped! Good luck. Osu needs much more Infected Mushrooms maps so I'm supporting any decent IM maps I've found.
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- I am confused a bit about what sounds you map during intro part. If you map vocals then 00:23:835 must be mapped and if you map that distorted synth then 00:25:904 (2) 00:22:110 (1) - etc - shouldn't exist at all. My bet is on former. I'd put circle here 00:42:110 aswell to both improve the rythm and reflect that faint "a" pitch change in "agga-a-ain".
- 01:36:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I failed to see the logic about emphasizing here. 01:37:628 (3) - and 01:36:938 (3,2,3,2) - those are the only distinct sounds worth emphasizing yet there are no change in spacing or angles there.
- I am pretty sure I'm not the first one to tell you this, but 01:45:559 (2,3) - here really should be a tripple. And don't defend your choice by saying "I follow the lyrics". If that was the case 01:44:696 (2) - that would have been skipped.
- 01:56:421 (1,2,3) - you even have tripple here so uhmm ^^^^^
- 01:44:696 (2) - 01:55:731 (2) - and other "one" in the song: I really suggest you to somehow reflect the absence of note in voice here somehow. Judging by the theme of your map you'd want to avoid sliders here for dem juicy pp so you can stack 01:44:696 (2) - under 01:44:524 (1) - or something along the lines of reducing ds. Those^ apply for the whole map.
- 02:41:162 (3) - why skipping those 1/4 sounds? You mapped them 02:34:266 (4,5,6) - here and those are much more quiet. 02:45:300 (3) - those Can be skipped I guess for the sake of reflecting chill part of the song but mapping them anyway and just giving them low SD could work aswell.
- 03:00:042 (2,3) - tripple here
- 03:32:455 (1) - Imo its very confusing that a repeating slider that looks just like the 4 before it is twice as long. The are no way to tell the length of such slider so by making him look the same you practically guarantee that the player will misread it on his 1st play.
- 03:37:197 (2) - Imo this one is bad. You are already skipping every blue tick just before that and this particular sound is not that much different to have only it mapped. I'd just stick to 1/2 here.
- 03:43:490 (1) - and probably 2-4 others are confusing
- 03:49:697 (1,2,3,4) - I like those sliders but I think they disrupt the flow too much while nothing really changes in music. Basically player goes from quick motion to full stop twice.
- 04:22:110 (1,2,3,4) - ^ basicaly 04:22:110 (1,2,3,4) - and 04:23:490 (1,2,3,4) - sound relatively the same but play completely differently
- 05:04:179 (2,3) - tripple
- 05:15:214 (2,3) - ^
- 05:17:283 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I would strongly suggest to remake those into sliders: vocals are much more noticable here and they are going slower than the metronome rythm so it will be very easy for player to press circles later than needed.
- 05:31:766 (1,2,3,4) - flow
- During the outro, I'd emphasize the strong snares like 05:42:800 (4) - and 05:44:179 (3) - much more given you use hitsounds that are very loud for them.
- 05:45:559 (3) - you've missed clap here.
Hope that helped! Good luck. Osu needs much more Infected Mushrooms maps so I'm supporting any decent IM maps I've found.