Lince Cosmico wrote:
Thanks dude , i hope it gets ranked too ;w;cooldude4232 wrote:
Coming over from my NM queue
Found this map really fun, and didn't really find any huge problems, most of what I put is mostly smaller detailsDecieved
- from here 00:49:697 (1) to here 01:12:800 (1) it feels like the flow stays counterclockwise for a bit to long, maybe switch it up a bit yah its because its the purpose, intil the "long stream"
- 02:34:524 (1,2,3) - I think these objects should be blanketed wat no, i thiink its fine already
- 03:04:524 (3,4,5,6) - you should have the kind of "shakey?" stream that you use here 03:15:559 (3,4,5,6) because it's a similar sound and it looks cool IMO Done on every similar part ( 05:08:662 - and 03:04:524 -
- 03:33:145 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this streams kinks sound a bit off, you should put one here 03:33:490 (6) and here 03:34:179 (5) similar to what you did for this stream 03:31:076 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) Why does everyone talks about this one! its not that bad imo
- 03:42:800 (1) - similar idea, this stream kink feels out of place
- 03:44:179 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinks should be placed here 03:44:524 (6) and here 03:45:214 (5) im not following claps there
- 03:49:697 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern of two sliders right on top of each other breaks what you were doing previously by having them spaced as jumps, so you should place them in the same way you did the others actually the first one is different (or second zzz) in purpose,
- 04:39:352 (1) - remove NC here done on both similar parts
- 04:52:455 (1) - this repeat slider feels like it goes on for a tad too long i wanted it to look like that cuz you could confuse it with the fastest ones
- 05:05:042 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - the spacing differences in these jumps feel kind of random im taking stacks as reference
- 05:25:559 (1) - why do you have one long repeater when you use two shorter ones like these 05:23:490 (1,2) throughout the whole section its consistent , i did on every long sound i had, you can hear a long "tuuuuuuuuuuum" after the 4combo streams, i dont see why does people complain a lot about this, i did it in every kiai at the same similar points tho
- 05:38:662 (1) - just have two 1/4 sliders here, the repeater feels out of place it doesn't imo, i used that to add emphasis 05:38:662 (1,2,3) - with this
- 05:48:317 (3,4) - make this slider 1/8 of a beat shorter, not a lot of people expect a 1/8 jump to a normal circle, even after a buzz slider its 1/6, also the spacing is just too low so people would be able to get x300 there
- 06:14:179 (1) - this slider ends on a really strong drum beat and I think you should have a clickable object not adding it cuz emphasis reasons (both)
- 06:19:697 (2) - ^
Anyways, really fun map, hope it gets ranked
Updated~Lince Cosmico wrote:
so much red here, but i still love u annie, dont take me wrong ok, thanksShiratoi wrote:
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[lince]
i think slider tick rate 2 is a bit too much.. especially at the beginning o shit true, fixed
00:28:662 (3) - although this is more of personal preference, there isnt really a sound that indicates a slider art change like this so i would just make it a regular slider when i hear it, the only think i can do is to hear something here 00:29:007 - , thats why i did it, to represent that sound but idk maybe im just thinking that its there and its not, but ill keep it
00:31:421 (2) - i dont think theres a sound here (?) you were pretty much following the vocals beforehand so maybe delete this note to keep consistency? (and 00:32:455 (2) - as well) i did answer this before, there's where the sound does change
00:35:559 (1,2) - spacing here is kind of small compared to what youve been doing i.e. 00:32:455 (2,1) - . ctrk+g this slider to make it more easier to read? i did ctrl+G and spaced it a bit more (basically i stacked the sliderend of the slider 2 with the circle 2 of the next combo)
00:46:248 - to keep with the curves, maybe curve this as well? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7690146 i think it fits really good being straight
00:48:317 (3,4) - dont really get the stack here since the stronger beat should be on the second beat so i think you should stack these instead 00:48:145 (2,3) - (applies to others as well i.e. 00:51:076 (3,4) - ) i tried to do a 2-2 combo with 00:47:973 (1,2,3,4) - all of these are the same sound, but i didn't want to make full jump (cuz it would be a full jumpy map and i dont want that) so i did stack these as "other way to interpret the sound" making it 2 different ways
00:48:317 (3) - also NC for the downbeat nope
00:57:973 (1,6) - blanket this xD why should I ? :V
01:09:869 (4) - i think you should ctrl+g the rhythm here 01:09:869 (4,1) - to make the more prominent beat clickable 01:10:214 (1,2,3) - i want the circle 1 to be part clickable and also part of the jump
01:26:938 (1) - normal sampleset to keep it consistent with 01:25:559 (1) - ? it doesnt really sounds good lol
01:43:490 - the 1-2 jumps are pretty random here.. the music doesnt really call for it so maybe change it up a bit music does
01:50:300 (4,1) - consider spacing this out from the stream for the noice downbeat emphasis i map thinks as how would i like to play it, and im not a big fan of separated streams tbh
01:58:662 - add a note here for a nice kiai finisher? i wonder about it, but since there's where the vocals starts doing "the break" i dont see why should i put a note there
02:15:042 (6,1) - spacing here is kind of weak. stronger sound here but 02:14:869 (5,6) - is spaced more than this. should be the other way around imo hmm i think its fine tho
02:16:248 (7,8) - another thing on emphasis, the sound from 7-8 is not that larger so i would decrease the spacing to make 02:16:593 (1) - stand out more done
02:42:110 (2) - ctrl+g this slider to match the spacing you were doing in this section? woah seems better, done
02:49:352 (9,1) - increase the spacing here like you did here 02:50:731 (8,1) - . itlll compliment the song much more its suposed to get more intense while the time pass i think
03:10:214 (2,1) - pls emphasis the downbeat moarrr allahu akbar
03:15:817 (6,1) - lalala increase spacing from the stream to slider? same reason as last time
03:20:731 (3,4) - the flow here kind of destroys the counter clockwise flow you were building up here 03:18:662 - plus the sound isnt too big so no reason for flow change thats the purpose of that pattern, after that is where the next part starts, so i kinda killed the clockwise there
03:32:455 (1,2) - wats dis spacing. if you say its for emphasis, you shouldve spaced it out on parts like 03:31:335 (4,1) - plus its not really landing on a prominent sound like 03:30:731 (2,1) - is so maybe just decrease spacing wat, its the same spacing to all the other streams LOL
03:53:145 - i kind of understood the overlap things before like 03:49:697 - but this one doesnt really make sense imo since the sound is completely different.. what does it have to do with the overlap thing? xD, also 03:53:145 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is all a build-up pattern
03:51:076 - also, try to make this the same rhythm as 03:49:697 (1,2,3,4) - since you know, same sound but i dont want to spam kicksliders everytime that sounds LOL, i just switch patterns there
03:59:697 - flow here for this stream is really awkward to move in so maybe rotate it 90 degrees and put it upright its breaking the flow, thats why its like that
04:13:490 (2,3) - swap the spacing here to make the 2 easier to read? applies to others as well done :3
04:22:110 - so like you do this kind of spacing here but change it up here 04:23:490 - which is kind of inconsistent in spacing imo so make them the same spacing? like overlap these 2 04:23:490 (1,2) - instead of 04:23:490 (1,3) - or fix 04:22:110 - by ctrl+g spacing here 04:22:455 (2,3) - i actually started "other part" there (i should divide parts in bookmarks tbh LOL) so i changed the whole pattern including spacing
04:52:455 - this slider feels awfully extended which makes it kind of boring xD i think you should continue the stream until 04:53:145 - or so zzzzz i cant really help it, sadly it does start there so i wont make the stream be longer for that :/
05:06:766 (3) - kind of weird rhythm here with the slider ending on the prominent beat but it does play good k_hand:
05:49:352 (2,3) - hahahahhaha blanket fix pls u caught me
05:58:317 (3) - maybe make this consistent flow wise to the other sliders since theyre the same sound its not the same sound tho, there's a strong sound that sounds on every sliderhead of these 3 sliders
06:14:869 (4,5) - large spacing for no reason imo.. if anything, 06:15:042 (5,1) - should be larger instead i made it higher cuz the 06:14:697 (2,3,4,5) - sounds from here are louder
06:26:248 - add a note for dat nice finish i dont want :c
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