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From my queue t/594747
Infected Oni
From my queue t/594747
- 00:44:179 (19,20,21,22) - I feel like you could add a few d notes in here to make a more interesting rhythm and better transition into the stream following this pattern. (the selector is on 00:44:869 (23) - ) I would reccomend filling some of the empty spaces with dons like the example above.
- 00:46:766 (37) - Delete this note, there is no sound there
- 01:20:559 (265,266,267,268,269) - Maybe change this to kdddk because kkddd is weird and this pattern keeps it to the music
- 02:00:042 (5) - Perhaps make this a d so that there is more emphasis on the next k
- 02:11:076 (76,77,78,79,80) - kkddk sounds better here
- 03:24:179 (63) - You could start adding triplets beyond this point so that the transition into the streams isnt as abrupt
- 04:34:869 (27,28,29,30,31) - Imo kdkkd would be a better replacement for the kdkkk in this part
- 05:19:524 (5) - maybe make this a d for more emphasis on the triplet kkk after it
- 05:25:214 (41,42) - make this a triplet