dkingo wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue, not my type of song but I'll try

mod

[EZ]

1. 00:45:532 - Feels weird when it's empty, try to put 1/1 notes or just a LN Fixed
2. 01:21:972 (81972|2,82443|3,82914|2,83543|2,83857|3,84171|2) - Not good hand balance for EZ diff, you can move 01:22:914 (82914|1,83229|0,83543|1) - 1 col left Agree
3. 02:21:344 (141344|2) - Move to col 4, fits better with the pitch I'd rather not, if another modder mention this, I'll fix it
4. 03:46:475 - Same as above, try to add some 1/1 notes Fixed
5. 04:14:747 (254747|0,254904|1) - Move 1 col right, will be better when pattern changes a bit I like it that way though

[SC]

1. 00:08:307 (8307|1) - Move to col 4 so it doesn't go in order Fixed
2. 00:26:841 (26841|3) - Move to col 3, I think this jack isn't necessary Fixed
3. 00:27:155 (27155|3) - Move to col 1 Nah, this fits the pitch better
4. 00:48:202 - Why 4 notes here? Can't hear anything special The sound there is more stressed than the first 2. If anyone address this again, I'll fix it
5. 00:49:694 (49694|1,49773|2,49852|1,49930|2,50009|1,50087|2,50166|1) - I think stair is better than trill here, trill is a bit too hard to play Imo, I think the opposite so nah
6. 01:19:302 (79302|0) - Move to col 2 with the pitch Fixed
7. 01:26:841 - The volume doesn't change, keep using 1 LN Fixed
8. 01:38:621 - Here should be triple instead of 01:38:464 - Fixed
9. 01:49:616 - The sounds are same, you should unify the pattern by using same amount of note Fixed
10. 02:20:872 (140872|2,140951|3) - Ctrl+G Fixed
11. 02:22:600 - Use triple to this sound Fixed
12. 02:26:684 (146684|1,146841|3,146841|1,146998|1,146998|3,147155|3,147155|1,147312|3,147312|1,147469|3) - These jacks are too scared,
    need to rearrange Fixed
13. 03:55:585 (235585|3) - Move to col 3
14. 04:07:051 (247051|1) - Move to col 1
15. 04:11:448 (251448|2) - Move to col 4 All fixed
16. 04:18:045 - Here is a beat that you can map Added

Alright that's all~

Good luck!

1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc)
2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
5. Also i have bad english
6. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

hello, m4m from YOUR queue (poop), havent posted it, will post soon. Also nice song

DISCLAIMER

1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc) But I don't want my map to be a pp farming map...
2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
5. Also i have bad english
6. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless

1|2|3|4

Venus

00:12:077 (12077|2) - i think it should me in col 2 since ln is already coming in col 3 Fixed
00:25:270 (25270|0) - col 2 What is the different
00:34:537 (34537|1,34694|3) - switch position Fixed
00:42:548 (42548|1,42626|1,42705|1) - 00:42:626 (42626|3,42705|3) - its okay if you want to map with so much minijack but playability is more important tbh, and i think you should avoid that 3 jacks in a row, and also 00:42:705 - shouldnt be triples, my suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8215684 I fixed so that the jack isn't that insane to play with but I still have to pass ur suggestion
00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1) - 1/8 will do it for playability Nah
00:45:218 (45218|1) - delete, doubles is enough Fixed
00:45:401 (45401|2,45427|3,45454|0,45480|1,45506|2) - again, 1/8 Nah
00:46:344 (46344|2,46370|1,46396|0,46422|3,46448|2) - ^ ^
00:47:103 (47103|3,47103|0,47155|1,47208|2,47260|3,47312|2,47365|3,47417|1,47417|2,47417|0) - idk how to explain this change so osu.ppy.sh/ss/8215731 will explain for hand balance, and you can ctrl+h in 00:47:731 - , 00:48:359 - ,and 00:48:988 - Fixed
00:50:244 (50244|2,50270|3,50297|0) - 1/8, 1/12 start in 00:50:323 - They r the same
01:00:611 (60611|3,60925|2,61239|0,61553|3) - ln should be 1/4 long based on 25% playback
01:03:124 (63124|1,63438|2,63752|0,64066|3) - ^ All fixed
01:04:223 (64223|1,64302|2) - shift 1 column to the right Fixed
01:05:637 (65637|1,65951|2,66265|3,66579|1) - 1/4 ln All 1/4 LNs are fixed
01:06:422 (66422|0) - col 3 All changing col are fixed
01:11:527 (71527|2,71605|0) - switch position Fixed
01:15:689 (75689|2,76003|0,76318|3,76632|2) - 1/4 ln
01:33:909 (93909|0,93909|3) - 1 note will do Fixed
01:36:422 (96422|0,96422|3,96422|1) - ^ ^
01:36:893 (96893|0,96893|1,96893|3) - 2 note Fixed
01:44:040 (104040|3) - ooooooooooo (ghost)
01:44:668 (104668|2) - ^ All fixed
01:48:359 (108359|1,108359|0,108359|2) - give quad for the cymbal Nah
01:49:302 (109302|3,109302|0,109302|2,109302|1) - triple only
01:52:914 (112914|2) - col 2 for aesthethic
01:54:328 (114328|1) - 1/2 ln Nope then 01:54:564 (114564|0) - col 2 for playability
02:13:412 (133412|1,133412|2) - ooo (ghost?) They are kicks, listen carefully, the same to all ur oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
02:14:668 (134668|2,134668|1) - oooo (ghost??)
02:17:181 (137181|3,137181|2,137181|0) - ctrl+h and then delete the one on col 4 Nope
02:18:438 (138438|0,138438|1) - ooooo (ghost???)
02:19:694 (139694|3,139694|2) - oooooo (ghost????)
02:20:951 (140951|1,140951|0) - ooooooo (ghost?????)
02:22:757 (142757|1,142757|3) - oooooooo (ghost??????) Now all of these notes are used to symbolized the stress of each sound
02:22:836 (142836|0) - col 4 Nope
02:22:914 (142914|3) - delete (double is enough) Can't because it is this part's pattern
02:23:700 (143700|1) - ooooooooo (ghost???????)
02:24:014 (144014|1,144014|3) - oooooooooo (ghost????????)
02:24:092 (144092|0) - shift to col 2, add note on col 4, 02:24:171 (144171|3) - delete Nope
02:24:956 (144956|0,144956|3) - ooooooooooo (ghost?????????)
02:25:270 (145270|1,145270|3) - oooooooooooo (ghost??????????)
02:25:353 - add note col 4 02:25:427 (145427|0) - delete Nope
02:25:663 (145663|0) - ghost Fixed
02:26:213 (146213|2,146213|3) - ghost!
02:26:527 (146527|0,146527|2) - ghost!!
02:31:082 (151082|0,151082|1) - delete these, playability is more important than cymbals(?) If other addressed this again then I'll fix it
02:31:710 (151710|0,151736|1,151763|2,151789|3,151815|0,151841|1,151867|2,151893|3,151920|0,151946|1,151972|2,151998|3) - 1/8, rest of it 1/12 they are the same
03:14:433 (194433|3,194472|0,194511|2,194551|1,194590|0,194629|3,194668|1,194708|2,194747|3,194786|0,194825|2,194865|1,194904|0,194943|3,194982|1,195022|2) - i think you should be following piano and kick sound instead that roll since its louder Nah
03:46:789 (226789|1) - delete It is for the bass
04:17:496 (257496|1,257496|2,257653|1,257653|2) - i think these should be 1 note Nope
04:18:752 (258752|1,258831|1) - bad time to have a minijack I don't see it is a bad time to use jack but rather good time to use jack
04:19:773 (259773|0,259799|1,259825|2,259852|3,259878|1,259904|2,259930|3,259956|0,259982|1,260009|2) - you could place it better than this
04:29:825 (269825|2,269852|1,269878|0,269904|3,269930|2,269956|1,269982|0,270009|3,270035|2,270061|1) - ^ All fixed
04:21:605 (261605|2,261632|1,261658|0) - shift this one to the right and 04:21:658 (261658|3) - to col 1 and ctrl+h for 04:21:658 (261658|3) - ?
04:27:626 - missing note Fixed
04:31:239 (271239|3,271318|3,271396|3) - no 3 jack when holding ln Kinda... fixed?
04:31:605 (271605|3,271632|2) - switch Fixed

sv:
04:37:993 - normalize this, way to slow

Welp, somehow this diff got harder

SHD

00:26:527 (26527|1) - ghost
00:38:150 (38150|2) - ^
00:45:375 - you can place a ln to replace that weird... shredder(?) sound
00:52:836 (52836|1) - ghost
00:54:092 (54092|2) - ^
00:55:349 (55349|2) - ^
00:56:763 - missing note
00:57:862 (57862|0) - ghost
00:59:119 (59119|1) - ^
01:00:375 (60375|3) - ^
01:02:888 (62888|1) - ^
01:04:145 (64145|0) - ^
01:05:401 (65401|2) - ^
01:06:658 (66658|1) - ^
01:07:914 (67914|3) - ^
01:09:171 (69171|2) - ^
01:10:427 (70427|0) - ^
01:12:941 (72941|2) - ^
01:14:197 (74197|0) - ^
01:15:454 (75454|1) - ^
01:17:967 (77967|3) - ^
02:04:459 (124459|1) - no minijack while holding ln
02:04:459 (124459|1) - missing note
02:04:459 (124459|1) - ^
02:35:166 (155166|1,155166|3,155480|3,155480|1,155794|3,155794|1,156108|1,156108|3,156265|2,156422|0,156422|1,156579|3) - what is this?
02:38:071 (158071|1) - ghost
02:39:328 (159328|2) - ^
02:39:799 - missing
02:43:098 (163098|1) - ghost
02:44:354 (164354|1) - ^
02:48:124 (168124|2) - ^
02:49:380 (169380|2) - ^
02:50:637 (170637|2) - ^
02:52:993 (172993|0,173150|0) - ^
03:16:946 (196946|0) - unnecessary
03:39:799 (219799|3) - ghost
03:44:197 (224197|2) - ^
03:45:454 (225454|2) - ^
03:48:752 (228752|2) - ^
03:50:009 (230009|2) - ^
03:53:307 - missing note
03:53:935 - ^
03:58:176 (238176|0) - white line
03:58:962 (238962|2) - ghost
03:59:433 (239433|2) - white line
04:01:946 (241946|0) - ^
04:03:202 (243202|3) - ^
04:04:459 (244459|0) - ^
song repeat, i think you can selfmod

I think that's all, sorry if my mod too offensive Not at all (^w^)b

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

Rotf, oooo *ghost sound*

Anyway, hurray +0,01 star rating

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

hello, m4m from YOUR queue (poop), havent posted it, will post soon. Also nice song

DISCLAIMER

1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc)
2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
5. Also i have bad english
6. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless

1|2|3|4

SHD

00:26:527 (26527|1) - ghost Fixed
00:38:150 (38150|2) - ^ Im still hearing a note here (really quiet tho)
00:45:375 - you can place a ln to replace that weird... shredder(?) sound Yeah indeed but im still wondering if i want to actually map it or not, thanks for the suggestion
For the next ghost notes i agree with half of them in fact. You're right some of them are too much but some of them are 100% legit, ill detail those i removed only
00:52:836 (52836|1) - ghost Removed
00:54:092 (54092|2) - ^
00:55:349 (55349|2) - ^ Removed
00:56:763 - missing note Right
00:57:862 (57862|0) - ghost Removed
00:59:119 (59119|1) - ^
01:00:375 (60375|3) - ^ Removed
01:02:888 (62888|1) - ^ Removed
01:04:145 (64145|0) - ^
01:05:401 (65401|2) - ^ Removed
01:06:658 (66658|1) - ^
01:07:914 (67914|3) - ^ Removed
01:09:171 (69171|2) - ^
01:10:427 (70427|0) - ^ Removed
01:12:941 (72941|2) - ^ Removed
01:14:197 (74197|0) - ^
01:15:454 (75454|1) - ^ Removed
01:17:967 (77967|3) - ^
02:04:459 (124459|1) - no minijack while holding ln Fixed
02:04:459 (124459|1) - missing note Too bad i think you missed you copy paste T^T
02:04:459 (124459|1) - ^ ^
02:35:166 (155166|1,155166|3,155480|3,155480|1,155794|3,155794|1,156108|1,156108|3,156265|2,156422|0,156422|1,156579|3) - what is this? I found the LN too long and i think those could be nice to recover the rythm after that short break -also will be better with HS-
02:38:071 (158071|1) - ghost Those notes belong to a pattern that is some sort of an extension of the drum mapping. Ill give more sense to them with HS
02:39:328 (159328|2) - ^ ^
02:39:799 - missing Sorry i will reject those ghosts for the same reason as above
02:43:098 (163098|1) - ghost
02:44:354 (164354|1) - ^
02:48:124 (168124|2) - ^
02:49:380 (169380|2) - ^
02:50:637 (170637|2) - ^
02:52:993 (172993|0,173150|0) - ^
03:16:946 (196946|0) - unnecessary True, dont know what i had in mind with this o-o
03:39:799 (219799|3) - ghost
Pretty much the same comment as above about those ghosts
03:44:197 (224197|2) - ^
03:45:454 (225454|2) - ^
03:48:752 (228752|2) - ^
03:50:009 (230009|2) - ^
03:53:307 - missing note Fixed
03:53:935 - ^ Fixed
03:58:176 (238176|0) - white line Sorry i dont understand what you mean by that :s
03:58:962 (238962|2) - ghost
03:59:433 (239433|2) - white line Im lost ~
04:01:946 (241946|0) - ^
04:03:202 (243202|3) - ^
04:04:459 (244459|0) - ^
song repeat, i think you can selfmod Yup sure thing ! ^w^)/

I think that's all, sorry if my mod too offensive

Sparhten wrote:

from your m4m que!

A Lie's HD

02:41:448 the pitch changes here even though the notes are mapped to the base wouldnt hurt to follow the pitch and move from 3,4-1,2 then the next two from 3,4-2,3 and leaving the last two in place. Ami mention this too for me, so i'll change it

02:46:475 not as pronounced but ^ ^

02:51:501 ^ ^

02:39:249 try a note here to match consistency of earlier rhythm added

01:29:825 i personally dont like prioritising the drum beats over the electronics with no real reason to switch up until 01:31:487 to make the diff easier >.>

01:46:789 hitting two inners here might feel uncomfortable try switching the first set from 2,3 to 1,2 remaked whole part with better consistency

sorry for not much but from what i can see there isnt much to find, looks good! hope you get ranked soon!

_Gaster wrote:

The mapset

HD... then SC?? Just make it MX, Moku's SC and SHD... Although Venus is a nice diff name for it. Fixed

SC

00:51:815 - Feels kinda dull. Why not add some drums. Just a bit. That and 03:57:783 - this part. Also fixed

_Gaster wrote:

The mapset

HD... then SC?? Just make it MX, Moku's SC and SHD... Although Venus is a nice diff name for it.

Moku's SHD

00:50:244 - Moku's SC.
01:52:365 (112365|1) - What...? I don't hear anything here... 01:53:621 (113621|1) - too. Okay your headset is not broken or anything, its pretty much a ghost note in fact, but i dont think mapping is always fitting the song as much as possible. For this diff i took some freedom to add notes that will make more sense with proper HS, sorry for the confusion.
01:54:249 (114249|3) - Are you guys really sure about this? ^
01:55:977 (115977|2) - I still really can't hear it. Maybe my headset is broken?... ^

01:57:391 (117391|1) - Oh okay I hear it now.
01:58:647 (118647|2) - Seems to have been put 01:58:962 - here instead, though. That wont fit with the pattern im doing for the kiai

01:59:904 (119904|2) - I still can't hear it.
02:02:417 (122417|2) - Seems like it should be 02:02:260 - here... Same as above

02:13:490 (133490|2,133647|1) - What?? Okay those are clearly ghost notes and maybe i overdid here, i just dont want to have too much empty spaces for a 4.6*

Okay, now I'm pretty convinced my headset is somehow busted...

Madoka2574 wrote:

From your queue

I love this song!Hoping it to be ranked!

Venus

01:00:615 - add a note in column 3 I think that you're modding my map before I updated Venus so....
01:01:789 - add a note in column 2
01:02:967 - I suggest adding a note here Fixed
01:05:480 - ^ Fixed
01:06:736 (66736|2,66815|3,66893|2) - like this I prefer mine better
01:07:993 - add a note in column 3,bcs u always use 2 notes to express the sound Fixed
01:11:605 (71605|2,71763|3,71920|2) - I think it can be like this to be similar with 01:01:396 (61396|2,61475|0,61553|2,61632|0,61710|2,61867|0) - (including the note I suggested) Fixed
01:13:019 - add a note in column 1 as I said above Fixed
01:16:867 (76867|3) - like this Fixed
01:17:260 - add a note in column 4 and 01:17:731 - in column 1 Fixed
01:19:616 - 01:19:852 - 01:20:087 - 01:20:323 - I think it feels good to add a note Fixed in 01:19:852 and 01:20:087
01:24:485 (84485|0,84485|3,84721|0,84721|2,84956|0,84956|1,85192|0,85192|2) - 01:25:742 (85742|3,85742|1,85977|3,85977|2) - 01:26:370 (86370|0,86370|1,86605|1,86605|2) - I suggest these long notes lasting for 1/2 beats to meet the sound Fixed
01:41:763 - add a note in column 1 The reason why I don't add a note there is because the bass start at 01:41:841
01:42:548 (102548|1) - change it to short LN like after Fixed
01:50:872 (110872|2) - LN 1/2 Nope, listen it again
02:41:448 (161448|3,161763|1,162077|0) - delete I don't see the reason
02:46:475 - ^ ^
02:51:501 - ^ ^
03:02:181 (182181|0) - delete ^
03:07:208 (187208|3) - delete ^
03:40:192 (220192|1) - like this Fixed
04:04:852 - add a note like u did here 04:12:391 - Fixed
04:11:763 - I think it should be like this or if u just want to place the durm note then like this Fixed... kinda
04:17:731 (257731|1,257888|1) - like this Nope
04:19:982 - Nope
04:27:705 - 04:27:862 - audible sound but no note? Fixed
And for the SV: I'm going to delete the SV so
02:46:160 - 02:51:187 - 03:01:867 - 03:06:893 - I think there should be SV changes
02:51:030 - add 2 notes in column 2 and 3 feels good and meet the sound,which is not the clap sound though.And then 02:51:030 - speed up(maybe 2x?)
For all the SV above I think the changes are a bit extreme.Maybe 0.25x and 2x can be better?

I mod for nearly 3 hours since I'm not experienced Otherwise I would have modded more diffs.
Hope my mod will be of help

Madoka2574 wrote:

Well I'd like to explain something
01:06:736 - I just think there should be 2 notes(The same reason huh~) Fixed
01:50:872 (110872|2) - Here I guess we are talking about different instruments XD Maybe lol
02:41:448 (161448|3,161763|1,162077|0) - Bcs the tones are different and I would prefer different patterns to show it~ Understood but I'd rather stay the same
04:17:731 (257731|1) - I think the sound is not heavy enough to make a jack,and 04:17:967 - a sound.(what is this intrument called?)I also hear the sound here 04:17:810 - Maybe u only placed the durm note but the sound 04:17:967 - is loud enough to add a note. I'm focusing on the drum so no
These are my opinions.Just for reference
What a pity that you deleted all the SVs Me too but I have to

Column :
|1|2|3|4|

Sarahkuai wrote:

FROM THIS THREAD

Column :
|1|2|3|4|

SC

01:32:024 - add 1 note column 1 Nah
02:07:757 - missing note? you should add 1 note on column 2 or 4 His intention is to map the main sound? so nope
02:08:386 - ^ same problem, column 1 or 3 ^
02:10:977 - add 1 note, this sound like this one 02:11:213 (131213|1,131213|0,131213|3) - Although the sounds are the same, it will create jack so nope
02:26:213 (146213|2) - move to column 2 I don't see why
02:30:297 - add 1 note Fixed
02:30:925 - ^ same problem because why don't you change it to 2-1-2-1-2-1-2... pattern? from 02:29:904 - to 02:31:003 - Fixed
02:35:166 (155166|1,155166|3,155480|3,155480|1,155794|3,155794|1) - lmao.. what's this pattern do? ghost note? i'm sorry but I don't feel the pitch is here, are you trying to arranger or something? fixed
02:45:218 - add 1 note
02:45:846 - ^
02:55:270 - ^
02:55:899 - ^
03:08:464 - ^
03:09:092 - ^
03:09:721 - ^
03:10:977 - ^
03:11:605 - ^
03:12:234 - ^
03:12:862 - ^
03:13:490 - ^
03:14:119 - ^ All fixed
04:15:768 - ^ Main sound

good luck

OwenF04 wrote:

Helloooo

from your modding queue

Note, these are all suggestions. if i made a mistake or you disagree do not apply it.

like you said, i will do three diffs to equal what i want from my mod.

i noticed halfway through modding that kiai time differs between difficulties. i mean, i don't know if it's allowed but i wouldn't recommend it It's acceptable

Venus

00:16:632 (16632|1,17888|0) - why are these seperate sliders? the sound is kept They're different sound

00:38:621 (38621|0) - start this here 00:38:307 Nope

00:41:448 (41448|0,41527|1,41605|3,41684|0) - odd pattern. why don't you make it this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8670520 for pitch relevancy But it is pitch relevant

00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1) - even though it's a bit of a slur, i think it is 1/8, i can kind of make out slight dips of volume inbetween, snapped at 1/8. if you agree, you'll need to change them, but it's up to you. won't mention them all I'm telling you that's 1/12

02:36:108 - i think you should extend this thing to 02:37:365 as it is more prominent than the piano. debatable though I'd prefer staying the same

03:42:548 - why did you miss a note? The sound there is smaller than the others so yeah...

MX

01:51:815 - why don't you do this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8670598 for PR applied

02:07:208 (127208|3,127208|1,127365|1,127365|0,127365|3) - first, the two sounds are the same intensity, yet one is a double and the other is a triple. maybe change this. The second sound is more intensified than the first one (and 02:07:836 (127836|3,127836|0,127993|0,127993|1,127993|2) ). the second problem is that those two differ from these two (02:08:464 (128464|3,128464|2,128464|0,128621|3,128621|0,128621|2,128621|1) and 02:09:092 (129092|0,129092|3,129092|1,129249|0,129249|3,129249|2,129249|1) ). why this is i don't know, there is barely any change in intensity. and, the last two have one as a triple, and the other as a quad. should probably make them the same The last 2 one are more stressed so I do that

02:37:051 (157051|3,157129|2,157208|1,157286|0,157365|3,157365|1) - CTRL+H for PR I don't see any point doing that

EZ

01:01:867 (61867|1) - why is this not a LN? Fixed

01:04:380 (64380|1) - ^^ ^

01:14:433 (74433|3) - ^^ ^

02:41:448 (161448|1,161763|2,162077|3) - make these doubles as you can barely hear the piano through the drum I'd do that if it wasn't EZ diff, same to other


02:46:475 (166475|0,166789|1,167103|2) - ^^

02:51:501 (171501|3,171815|2,172129|1) - ^^

nice set. best of luck

_Gaster wrote:

I don't see Moku's diff at all... That's odd.