Abraxos wrote:

i was redirected here

venus

playability
let's do a bit of math shall we
00:43:647 (43647|3,43667|2,43687|1,43706|0,43726|3,43746|2,43765|1,43785|0,43804|3,43824|2,43844|1,43863|0,43883|3) -
191 bpm 1/16s roughly translate to 764 bpm streams, in this case jumptrills

now we compare
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/350094 - 1/8 234 bpm bursts, 468 bpm realtime
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/770127 - 1/8 256 bpm jumptrills, 512 bpm realtime

you want to know the similarities between these two maps with their bursts and yours? theyre very awful to play
whats worse is how your burst is way faster than the two i listed, and the two listed are already infamous enough for how garbage they are

i dont recommend you charting something this hard when youre this new into the scene - hard DOES NOT MEAN good; get that into your head

no kds

riunosk wrote:

m4m 1 2 3 4
important! ; before you start reading through my mod, please note that im not there to throw hate or flame you, im just attempting to help improve the chart

General

why is the first beat not at 00:00:297 - ? i dont see a reason why it should be much later than that

etsu

01:30:925 (90925|2,91003|1,91082|3) - maybe 4 3 2 for more even flow
02:01:396 (121396|0,121475|1,121553|2) - flip to 4 3 2 to reduce focus on 1
02:58:569 (178569|3,178726|3) - is lower pitched than 02:59:825 (179825|2,179982|2) - , so flip these two
04:16:632 (256632|3,256632|0,256867|3,256867|0,257260|3,257260|0,257496|3,257496|0) - why not vary these? /*are right

i have no words to describe what i just saw
i suggest a remap for this mapset

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Curiossity wrote:

Ice - Zetsu MOD

From Curiossity's Mania Marathon M4M Modding Queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3

I'll go ahead and mod the whole diff, cause stopping half way through isn't my style @.@

Venus

00:41:527 (41527|1,41527|3) - Why is this a double, the violin sound isn't any louder. Should probably be single

00:42:155 - There's 1/4th piano notes starting here, maybe you should map them? Feels weird not to, idunno

00:46:867 - You could probably fit in a note here for the violin, as well as other places between kicks in this section (i.e. here 00:47:496 - and here 00:48:124 (48124|2) - etc.)

00:47:103 (47103|0,47103|3,47142|1,47181|2,47221|3,47260|0,47299|1,47338|2,47378|3) - First, if these are following the piano, then i believe they should be 1/6th notes. Second, why follow the piano here and not before? Try to stay consistent.

00:47:731 (47731|3,47731|0,47770|2,47810|1,47849|0,47888|3,47927|2,47967|1,48006|0) - ^, etc

00:58:019 - Note here? Also, pay attention to consistent layering, not quite sure about it in this section but it's something to look out for.

01:03:045 - See above. Goes for many other places in this part as well.

01:11:291 (71291|0) - Starting here, the drums are at 1/3 beats. Map accordingly.

01:16:946 (76946|0) - Here, you focus exclusively on the synth and not the drums anymore, which is a strange transition to make. It would be better if you mapped both at the same time (paying attention to layering) as it could make for some more interesting and challenging patterns.

01:24:249 (84249|1) - According to your patterning, this should be a double and 01:24:407 (84407|2,84407|1) - should be a single.

01:27:469 (87469|1) - More consistency issues. Last time you had a five burst every other note was a double (kinda), but now the last three are all doubles. I don't think they got more intense either.

01:29:511 (89511|3) - And here, you ignore the synth you've been mapping previously and start just mapping the kicks. Although this might be justifiable, I'm just pointing out the sudden change in allocation of notes. It might be better to have something like a jumpstream here instead.

01:33:595 - You should probably map this sound here, and layer it more strongly elsewhere. Feels strange not hitting it.

01:35:480 (95480|3) - Now you layer it really strongly. Try to stay consistent within these individual sections, it's what holds the map together.

01:37:365 (97365|3) - Here, this sound is a triple but 01:34:852 (94852|3) - here it's only a double. Also the note that follows right after goes from a double to a quad. Change these to be the same, as well as 01:39:878 (99878|3) -

01:42:155 (102155|3) - Ghost note, every place where the synth doesn't play. This section should probably be all five note bursts, essentially.

01:47:103 (107103|3) - Alright, so I see that you're consistent in going straight to 1/2 hands for when the kicks come in, which is good. But this note as well as 01:47:260 (107260|2) - should probably be triples, just to follow patterning.

01:48:045 (108045|3) - Make this a quad for the bigger sound?

01:49:302 (109302|3) - ^

01:51:972 (111972|3) - Maybe not a double

01:53:386 (113386|3) - This note is not emphasized enough for the sound

Yeah, in general this section has issues with layering since you've got the four column LN patterns going on. Maybe break one of the LNs to provide additional emphasis on the larger sounds.

02:02:810 (122810|2) - But here you map it with 1/2 LNs instead of the four column pattern you had last time.

02:06:108 (126108|1,126265|2,126736|0) - These should be more than a single note. Double, if not triple. Also, sick place for SVs here, if you want to add them.

02:07:208 (127208|3,127208|1,127365|0,127365|3,127365|1) - Same sound, different layering.

02:07:836 (127836|0,127836|2,127993|3,127993|2,127993|0) - and 02:08:464 (128464|3,128464|0,128621|1,128621|3,128621|0) - Same.

02:10:349 (130349|1,130349|2,130427|3) - Make this part a jumptrill, the sounds on every 1/4th are the same.

02:11:763 (131763|1) - Add a note on 2

02:12:234 (132234|3) - Maybe remove one of these LNs, having two makes it feel more akin to a kick when there's /nothing/ in the music

02:12:548 (132548|2) - Starting here, more piano that you could probably map

02:20:715 (140715|1,140715|2,140715|0,140872|0,140872|3,140872|1,140872|2) - I've just started to ignore these, honestly, where the same sound is given different number of notes. Maybe it's intentional, for aesthetics or something. I'll make a general remark at the end and probably not mention it that much anymore.

02:22:836 - There should be a note here for the kick. This appears multiple times in this section as well.

02:32:024 (152024|0,152051|1,152077|2,152103|3,152129|0,152155|1,152181|2,152208|3,152234|0,152260|1,152286|2,152312|3) - The pitch changes here for these notes, maybe switch up the pattern to show this.

02:32:338 (152338|0) - Why no 1/4 violin notes here?

02:33:752 (153752|0) - Should probably just be a triple

02:33:988 (153988|3) - Long LN here?

02:36:108 (156108|3,156134|2,156160|1,156187|0,156213|3,156239|2,156265|1,156291|0,156318|3,156344|2,156370|1,156396|0) - Not sure that this pattern really works here. The drums were loud a beat or so ago, not so much right now. Consider remaking this part, so that the pattern itself shows the fading of the drums (1/8 -> 1/6 -> 1/4 -> 1/6 -> 1/8, or something similar. See Mat's Architecture map for an example.) Although this might not be a super idea, since the pacing of the drums doesn't really change, the volume does, and you probably need to show that somehow. I'm just throwing out ideas.

02:37:365 (157365|3) - You completely ignore the drums in this part.

03:14:433 (194433|3) - The other time you had 1/12 burst, it was alright since the sound was something like 1/16 - way too crazy. Here, though, I'm fairly confident it's only 1/8, so you should probably switch the mapping here to that. Also incorporate the kicks into the pattern. i.e. 03:14:433 (194433|3) - 03:14:590 (194590|2) - 03:14:747 (194747|3) - 03:14:825 (194825|1) - 03:14:904 (194904|2) - 03:14:982 (194982|0) - kicks. and 03:15:061 (195061|3) - too

03:36:422 (216422|0) - Poor violin

03:46:632 (226632|1) - Why this jack? There's another sound 1/4 after the second note here but you don't map that

03:54:485 (234485|0,234511|1,234537|2,234564|3,234590|0,234616|1,234642|2) - Shouldn't be 1/12, but 1/8th. Goes for other bursts in this section as well

Everything else I have to say is just a rehash of what I've covered above.

Yeah. So, there's a few consistency issues here. I feel like you switch too quickly between mapping different instruments, and in this complex of a song (especially in the hardest diff) you really should be trying to express all of them and use creative patterning techniques to bring them together. You should also pay a keen eye to what patterns you're giving to what sounds, as I feel this diff hasn't been really consistent on that.

I do like the SVs, though, as well as the feel of the map. Hopefully some of what I've said is helpful, and remember, these are all just suggestions. I'll probably come back and go over it again if you want me to. Just let me know. Good luck!

Mentholzzz wrote:

OWO

General
* delete the source , this song doesn't from the game "Team Grimoire" or anime "Team Grimoire" , you can put "Team Grimoire"
* add tag "Grimoire of Darkness" because the song is from this album.

Easy
00:27:941 (27941|0,28569|1,29197|2,29825|3) - Ctrl-H for pr Fixed
02:37:365 - until 03:07:522 - why u use the jump for the air(?) sound ? , i suggest to put the note to the percussion or the piano instead ,example>>(percussion) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8076012 or (piano) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8076093 Nah, this part focuses on the bass (?) sound
03:36:893 (216893|0) - move to col.3 for hand balance Fixed
03:56:527 - add note for a loud sound , for example >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8075917 Fixed

Venus
00:47:103 (47103|0,47103|3,47142|1,47181|2,47221|3,47260|0,47299|1,47338|2,47378|3) - the piano here is in 1/6
00:47:731 (47731|3,47731|0,47770|2,47810|1,47849|0,47888|3,47927|2,47967|1,48006|0) - ^
00:48:359 (48359|3,48359|0,48399|1,48438|2,48477|3,48516|0,48556|1,48595|2,48634|3) - ^
00:48:988 (48988|0,48988|3,49027|2,49066|1,49105|0,49145|3,49184|2,49223|1,49263|0) - ^ All fixed
00:57:155 (57155|1,57312|1,57469|1,57626|1,57783|1) - i suggest to move 00:57:626 (57626|1) - to col.3 Fixed
01:22:129 (82129|1) - move to col.1 Nah, I'm good with that
01:23:150 - why double here? as well as 01:23:307 - & 01:23:621 - & 01:24:249 - & 01:24:407 - & 01:28:176 - & 01:28:333 - & 01:28:647 - & 01:28:962 - Because the sound there is more stressed than other
01:31:003 - double here Fixed
01:43:883 - why double here? as well as 01:44:354 - & 01:44:511 - & 01:46:867 - & 01:47:024 - Fixed
01:53:857 (113857|0) - make this one LN Fixed
01:59:590 - remove one note Fixed
02:50:715 - add note here Fixed
02:50:872 - and here Fixed
04:23:582 (263582|2) - ghost note? Fixed
04:23:268 (263268|1,263307|2,263346|3,263386|0,263425|1,263464|2,263503|3) - the piano here is 1/6
04:23:896 (263896|2,263935|1,263975|0,264014|3,264053|2,264092|1,264132|0) - ^
04:24:524 (264524|1,264564|2,264603|3,264642|0,264681|1,264721|2,264760|3) - ^
04:25:153 (265153|1,265192|2,265231|3,265270|2,265310|1,265349|0,265388|1) - ^
04:33:320 (273320|2,273359|1,273399|0,273438|2,273477|1,273516|3,273556|2) - ^
04:33:948 (273948|2,273988|1,274027|0,274066|2,274105|1,274145|0,274184|3) - ^
04:34:577 (274577|1,274616|2,274655|0,274655|3,274694|1,274734|2,274773|3,274812|0) - ^
04:35:205 (275205|2,275205|0,275244|1,275283|3,275323|0,275323|2,275362|1,275401|2,275441|3) - ^ All fixed

cpotfangirl wrote:

Yo!

From mine and Vortex- modding queue

Very stressed atm since I've got alot of requests undone because of my recent 42 hour silence ughhhhhh, will do what I can

Venus difficulty

00:06:579 (6579|2) - This slider should end here 00:08:935 -

00:17:888 (17888|1) - And this slider should end here 00:19:459 -

00:37:993 (37993|1) - And this slider should end here 00:40:506 - All fixed

00:42:155 (42155|2) - Feels like this is a ghost note, if you're mapping to indicate the background piano there should be notes before 00:42:077 - and after 00:42:234 - Fixed

00:43:922 - Feel like there should be a note here Now I just've noticed Fixed

00:44:276 - And a slider here Nah, i think it is ok there

00:44:590 - and sliders from here to here 00:45:218 - Fixed

I know it's hard to avoid in 1/8th mapping and high bpm, but be aware of these minijacks 00:46:396 (46396|0,46475|0) - 00:50:480 (50480|3,50558|3) -
It is my intention so nah
00:54:014 (54014|0,54171|0,54328|0,54485|0) - Try and move the last a column or two to the right, makes for better gameplay Fixed

01:32:496 - If this sound is mapped as a triple then this one should be aswell 01:32:810 - same goes for other doubles/triples in that part Fixed

01:37:365 - This should be the quad, as indicated by the sound > not this one 01:37:522 - since you've mapped these sounds 01:37:993 - as quads Fixed

01:47:731 (107731|0,107731|1,107888|1,107888|0,107888|2,108045|1,108045|0,108045|3,108045|2) - Don't understand why these are mapped with different amounts of notes Fixed

01:52:600 - Add a note to emphasize the drum sound

01:53:386 - ^

01:53:857 - ^

01:57:626 - ^

01:58:883 - ^

02:01:710 - ^

02:09:721 - ^

02:10:977 - ^

02:11:920 - ^ All fixed

02:13:333 - Don't understand these quads wooooooooooooo Fixed

02:24:014 (144014|1,144092|1) - Try and avoid this jack Fixed

02:22:286 - 02:27:312 - 02:28:569 - These should be quads, since you've mapped the other ones like quads Fixed

02:40:820 (160820|3,160820|2,160820|0,160977|2,160977|1,161134|0,161134|3) - Try and replace these with sliders, better emphasizes the piano sound, shouldn't be doubles aswell since there's no drum Fixed

02:48:516 - 02:50:244 - 02:53:857 - 03:06:422 - 03:07:051 - 03:07:679 - Missing notes Fixed

03:38:150 - Add a note

03:39:407 - ^

03:39:721 - ^

03:43:176 - ^

03:43:490 - ^

03:44:433 - ^

03:48:516 - ^

03:49:773 - ^

04:08:307 - ^

04:08:621 - ^

04:09:564 - ^

04:09:878 - ^ All fixed

04:17:260 - 04:17:731 - Feel like you can add some notes inbetween these parts to emphasize the drum Fixed

Should really add notes here 04:20:035 - and here 04:20:061 - Feels kinda weird ending it just like that while playing Fixed

04:21:658 - Add a note

04:26:684 - ^ All fixed

04:27:626 (267626|2,267705|0) - Make these doubles, make this 04:27:783 - a double and add a note here 04:27:862 - don't know why this ain't a trill All fixed

04:28:255 - You should really map after the piano, just like you've done here 04:33:281 - don't add in breaks like this Rather than adding piano notes as your suggestion, I'll remove the piano notes before this part

04:36:736 - Add a note on the third column Nah, nobody like 1/8 jack

I feel like alot of the "add a note" are justified since you've done it on other parts like this 03:49:459 - and the map is already such a high star rating that skipping drum emphasization like this is unnecessary

That's it for my mod, I'll check the other diffs later, just gotta finish the other mods

Captain Cusheen wrote:

M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/608798

SC

00:46:867 (46867|1) - move this ln to collumn 4 Nah, I don't see the reason to do that
00:54:328 (54328|1) - this ln should end riiiight 00:55:113 - there Fixed but rather ending it in 00:55:113 , it end in 00:54:956
then add ln ._. Nope
00:59:354 (59354|2) - same ^
01:01:867 (61867|2) - same ^
01:04:380 (64380|0) - same ^
03:35:480 (215480|0) - up to 03:36:344 - I prefer trills :3 but optional since SHD has trills uwu Nope, it would be hard, I want this part to be easy
03:37:993 - add note

[boxes= Shd] Fixed
00:48:359 - why does this part has one note but 00:47:103 - and 00:47:731 - have two notes ._. ?
00:48:988 - same for this one ?
[/box]

Mykaterasu wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue.
Lanes 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 respectively

I have a habit of hounding on the same mistakes over and over. If something is talked about and it appears a lot, I'll just say it appears a lot and it's up to you find them all.

Initially I was going to mod Venus and SC but after modding Venus and looking at SC I saw how much of the mod applied to both, so I only modded Venus.

Venus

• If I bullet pointed the following paragraph in mod form it would take ages so I'll just talk about it in prose instead.
  
  For me, this difficulty has been very haphazardly assembled. It just doesn't seem to uphold current ranked quality standards for me at this point in time. LNs don't really feel special when they're used, because they're pretty much used in every section for a multitude of things. The use of repeated lanes feels random at some points, like the osu!standard to osu! mania converter was used to map them. This happens for jacks too; they feel arbitrarily placed sometimes without logical function because they come about from placing certain chords/patterns together (see 01:28:255 (88255|3,88333|3) - 01:28:883 (88883|2,88962|2) - 01:54:485 (114485|0,114564|3,114642|3,114642|0) - 02:06:501 (126501|2,126579|2) - ). When you look at the end result the jack becomes more prominent than the chord/pattern variation and you end up with a bad jack usage rather than a good chord/pattern variation. It's OK to use repeated lanes, jacks and LNs but I don't think the way you've used them has been entirely effective here. This all combined with sometimes odd choice of flow and balance creates some very unpleasant game-play (see things like 01:00:611 (60611|3,60611|1,60768|2,60925|2,61082|0,61082|3,61239|3,61239|0,61396|2,61475|0,61553|2,61553|3,61632|0,61710|2) - ) where your command of the lanes felt very weak. That said, just because I dislike how you've done this map, it doesn't mean I don't have criticism to give aside from that. I won't talk about the generic things like this in the mod because applying it comes about from understanding my alternate perspective and opinion that might end up rewriting the whole map.
  
  Basically, just think about what I've said here. At some point if any part of you thinks it's right, you'll know it. For the rest of the mod, I'll just go at what I think is wrong with what you've done objectively poorly here.

1. 00:10:349 (10349|0,10977|1,11605|0,12234|1,12862|0,13490|1,14119|0,14747|1) - This is really boring to play. LNs grab attention and they just stay on the left-hand side for so long.
2. 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - These chords are both the same in the music, thematically it would be better to make them the same instead of symmetrical. This stylistic mapping choice that gives repeated chords of the same note numbers more interest, ignore if you wish.
3. 00:42:234 (42234|3,42391|1,42548|0,42705|1,42862|2) - Doesn't feel representative of the strings because it doesn't follow them by pitch relevancy. Pitch relevancy in LNs can make or break them sometimes, especially when a pitch relevant solution is possible/plausible.
4. 00:43:019 (43019|3,43019|0,43019|1,43176|1,43176|2,43176|3,43176|0) - 3 notes -> 4 but before that 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - 3 -> 3 and then 00:44:276 (44276|1,44276|3,44276|2,44433|0,44433|1,44433|2) - 3 -> 3 again. Very unclear chord structure. This happens multiple times from what I can see. 00:46:946 (46946|3,46946|1,46946|2) - 00:47:574 (47574|2,47574|0,47574|3,47574|1) - etc...
5. 00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1,43962|3,43962|0) - Why not this? Flows much better and represents it much better too.
6. 00:45:473 (45473|1) - Check your snapping.
7. 00:52:993 - Why did you choose to omit a note here? Feels really odd not have a note in lane 3.
8. 00:55:585 (55585|2,55899|3,56213|1,56527|0) - These are too staccato to be LNs for me.
9. 01:27:941 (87941|2,88098|2,88255|2,88412|2,88569|2,88726|2,88883|2,88962|2,89119|2) - This lane is taking a little too much. This happens in other places too, such as 01:48:202 (108202|1,108359|1,108516|1,108674|1,108831|1,108988|1,109145|1,109302|1,109459|1) - here and 02:24:642 (144642|3,144799|3,144956|3,145113|3,145270|3,145427|3,145585|3,145742|3,145899|3,145977|3,146056|3,146213|3,146370|3,146527|3,146684|3,146841|3,146998|3) - here. Take a look at the whole map lane by lane and see when you've got repeated usage of a key for an exceedingly long time.
10. 02:08:935 (128935|1,128962|2,128988|3,129014|0,129040|1,129066|2) - 02:09:564 (129564|2,129590|1,129616|0,129642|3,129668|2,129694|1) - This is a 1/8th rhythm, not a 1/12th.
11. 02:12:548 - There's a 1/4 piano rhythm going on in this section. It'd be nice to play some of it.
12. 02:41:134 (161134|3,161134|0,161448|2,161448|0,161448|1,161448|3) - Equate your SV distances properly. This is clearly far too short.
    Total distance travelled = (0.01*3) + (1.50*1) = 1.53 units.
    Target distance = (1.00*4) = 4 units.
    2 and a half odd units short.
    Make the exit after 02:42:391 (162391|3,162391|1,162391|0,162391|2) - this chord readable when you fix it. If you don't know how, consult one of the many guides that people have written on mania SVs. I won't talk about SVs again, so check them all yourself.
    EDIT - I ended up writing a quick pastebin on mania SV calibration, which can be found here.
13. 02:57:783 - The piano is lost here. It's just 1/2 2 and 3 note chords without any purpose in accenting one instrument or another. It was getting to that point in the previous section, but now it's not present anymore.
14. 03:37:365 (217365|2,217365|0,217443|3,217443|1,217522|2,217600|3,217600|1) - This arrangement of doubles doesn't represent the music at all. You don't have to overuse doubles just because you want the star rating to be high.

Overall, as I said - I'm not a massive fan of the song or how this is mapped, but to each their own. Good luck with the mapset.

Mykaterasu wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue.
Lanes 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 respectively

I have a habit of hounding on the same mistakes over and over. If something is talked about and it appears a lot, I'll just say it appears a lot and it's up to you find them all.

Initially I was going to mod Venus and SC but after modding Venus and looking at SC I saw how much of the mod applied to both, so I only modded Venus.

Venus

• If I bullet pointed the following paragraph in mod form it would take ages so I'll just talk about it in prose instead.
  
  For me, this difficulty has been very haphazardly assembled. It just doesn't seem to uphold current ranked quality standards for me at this point in time. LNs don't really feel special when they're used, because they're pretty much used in every section for a multitude of things. The use of repeated lanes feels random at some points, like the osu!standard to osu! mania converter was used to map them. This happens for jacks too; they feel arbitrarily placed sometimes without logical function because they come about from placing certain chords/patterns together (see 01:28:255 (88255|3,88333|3) - 01:28:883 (88883|2,88962|2) - 01:54:485 (114485|0,114564|3,114642|3,114642|0) - 02:06:501 (126501|2,126579|2) - ). When you look at the end result the jack becomes more prominent than the chord/pattern variation and you end up with a bad jack usage rather than a good chord/pattern variation. It's OK to use repeated lanes, jacks and LNs but I don't think the way you've used them has been entirely effective here. This all combined with sometimes odd choice of flow and balance creates some very unpleasant game-play (see things like 01:00:611 (60611|3,60611|1,60768|2,60925|2,61082|0,61082|3,61239|3,61239|0,61396|2,61475|0,61553|2,61553|3,61632|0,61710|2) - ) where your command of the lanes felt very weak. That said, just because I dislike how you've done this map, it doesn't mean I don't have criticism to give aside from that. I won't talk about the generic things like this in the mod because applying it comes about from understanding my alternate perspective and opinion that might end up rewriting the whole map.
  
  Basically, just think about what I've said here. At some point if any part of you thinks it's right, you'll know it. For the rest of the mod, I'll just go at what I think is wrong with what you've done objectively poorly here. I can see what you meant here. Will take your advice

1. 00:10:349 (10349|0,10977|1,11605|0,12234|1,12862|0,13490|1,14119|0,14747|1) - This is really boring to play. LNs grab attention and they just stay on the left-hand side for so long. Fixed
2. 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - These chords are both the same in the music, thematically it would be better to make them the same instead of symmetrical. This stylistic mapping choice that gives repeated chords of the same note numbers more interest, ignore if you wish. Yeah, I don't think that that's suitable for my mapset
3. 00:42:234 (42234|3,42391|1,42548|0,42705|1,42862|2) - Doesn't feel representative of the strings because it doesn't follow them by pitch relevancy. Pitch relevancy in LNs can make or break them sometimes, especially when a pitch relevant solution is possible/plausible. Fixed
4. 00:43:019 (43019|3,43019|0,43019|1,43176|1,43176|2,43176|3,43176|0) - 3 notes -> 4 but before that 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - 3 -> 3 and then 00:44:276 (44276|1,44276|3,44276|2,44433|0,44433|1,44433|2) - 3 -> 3 again. Very unclear chord structure. This happens multiple times from what I can see. 00:46:946 (46946|3,46946|1,46946|2) - 00:47:574 (47574|2,47574|0,47574|3,47574|1) - etc... I don't really understand what you're really mean by this one
5. 00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1,43962|3,43962|0) - Why not this? Flows much better and represents it much better too. I changed that part but it is not the same as your suggestion
6. 00:45:473 (45473|1) - Check your snapping. Fixed
7. 00:52:993 - Why did you choose to omit a note here? Feels really odd not have a note in lane 3. ?
8. 00:55:585 (55585|2,55899|3,56213|1,56527|0) - These are too staccato to be LNs for me. Nah, I think it is even suit for that part
9. 01:27:941 (87941|2,88098|2,88255|2,88412|2,88569|2,88726|2,88883|2,88962|2,89119|2) - This lane is taking a little too much. This happens in other places too, such as 01:48:202 (108202|1,108359|1,108516|1,108674|1,108831|1,108988|1,109145|1,109302|1,109459|1) - here and 02:24:642 (144642|3,144799|3,144956|3,145113|3,145270|3,145427|3,145585|3,145742|3,145899|3,145977|3,146056|3,146213|3,146370|3,146527|3,146684|3,146841|3,146998|3) - here. Take a look at the whole map lane by lane and see when you've got repeated usage of a key for an exceedingly long time. Fixed
10. 02:08:935 (128935|1,128962|2,128988|3,129014|0,129040|1,129066|2) - 02:09:564 (129564|2,129590|1,129616|0,129642|3,129668|2,129694|1) - This is a 1/8th rhythm, not a 1/12th. Fixed
11. 02:12:548 - There's a 1/4 piano rhythm going on in this section. It'd be nice to play some of it. I'd rather focus on the main sound than the piano
12. 02:41:134 (161134|3,161134|0,161448|2,161448|0,161448|1,161448|3) - Equate your SV distances properly. This is clearly far too short.
    Total distance travelled = (0.01*3) + (1.50*1) = 1.53 units.
    Target distance = (1.00*4) = 4 units.
    2 and a half odd units short. I changed it to x3.5
    Make the exit after 02:42:391 (162391|3,162391|1,162391|0,162391|2) - this chord readable when you fix it. If you don't know how, consult one of the many guides that people have written on mania SVs. I won't talk about SVs again, so check them all yourself. I think it is not that hard to read
    EDIT - I ended up writing a quick pastebin on mania SV calibration, which can be found here.
13. 02:57:783 - The piano is lost here. It's just 1/2 2 and 3 note chords without any purpose in accenting one instrument or another. It was getting to that point in the previous section, but now it's not present anymore. Fixed
14. 03:37:365 (217365|2,217365|0,217443|3,217443|1,217522|2,217600|3,217600|1) - This arrangement of doubles doesn't represent the music at all. You don't have to overuse doubles just because you want the star rating to be high.

Overall, as I said - I'm not a massive fan of the song or how this is mapped, but to each their own. Good luck with the mapset.

dkingo wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue, not my type of song but I'll try

mod

[EZ]

1. 00:45:532 - Feels weird when it's empty, try to put 1/1 notes or just a LN Fixed
2. 01:21:972 (81972|2,82443|3,82914|2,83543|2,83857|3,84171|2) - Not good hand balance for EZ diff, you can move 01:22:914 (82914|1,83229|0,83543|1) - 1 col left Agree
3. 02:21:344 (141344|2) - Move to col 4, fits better with the pitch I'd rather not, if another modder mention this, I'll fix it
4. 03:46:475 - Same as above, try to add some 1/1 notes Fixed
5. 04:14:747 (254747|0,254904|1) - Move 1 col right, will be better when pattern changes a bit I like it that way though

[SC]

1. 00:08:307 (8307|1) - Move to col 4 so it doesn't go in order Fixed
2. 00:26:841 (26841|3) - Move to col 3, I think this jack isn't necessary Fixed
3. 00:27:155 (27155|3) - Move to col 1 Nah, this fits the pitch better
4. 00:48:202 - Why 4 notes here? Can't hear anything special The sound there is more stressed than the first 2. If anyone address this again, I'll fix it
5. 00:49:694 (49694|1,49773|2,49852|1,49930|2,50009|1,50087|2,50166|1) - I think stair is better than trill here, trill is a bit too hard to play Imo, I think the opposite so nah
6. 01:19:302 (79302|0) - Move to col 2 with the pitch Fixed
7. 01:26:841 - The volume doesn't change, keep using 1 LN Fixed
8. 01:38:621 - Here should be triple instead of 01:38:464 - Fixed
9. 01:49:616 - The sounds are same, you should unify the pattern by using same amount of note Fixed
10. 02:20:872 (140872|2,140951|3) - Ctrl+G Fixed
11. 02:22:600 - Use triple to this sound Fixed
12. 02:26:684 (146684|1,146841|3,146841|1,146998|1,146998|3,147155|3,147155|1,147312|3,147312|1,147469|3) - These jacks are too scared,
    need to rearrange Fixed
13. 03:55:585 (235585|3) - Move to col 3
14. 04:07:051 (247051|1) - Move to col 1
15. 04:11:448 (251448|2) - Move to col 4 All fixed
16. 04:18:045 - Here is a beat that you can map Added

Alright that's all~

Good luck!

1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc)
2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
5. Also i have bad english
6. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

hello, m4m from YOUR queue (poop), havent posted it, will post soon. Also nice song

DISCLAIMER

1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc) But I don't want my map to be a pp farming map...
2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
5. Also i have bad english
6. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless

1|2|3|4

Venus

00:12:077 (12077|2) - i think it should me in col 2 since ln is already coming in col 3 Fixed
00:25:270 (25270|0) - col 2 What is the different
00:34:537 (34537|1,34694|3) - switch position Fixed
00:42:548 (42548|1,42626|1,42705|1) - 00:42:626 (42626|3,42705|3) - its okay if you want to map with so much minijack but playability is more important tbh, and i think you should avoid that 3 jacks in a row, and also 00:42:705 - shouldnt be triples, my suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8215684 I fixed so that the jack isn't that insane to play with but I still have to pass ur suggestion
00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1) - 1/8 will do it for playability Nah
00:45:218 (45218|1) - delete, doubles is enough Fixed
00:45:401 (45401|2,45427|3,45454|0,45480|1,45506|2) - again, 1/8 Nah
00:46:344 (46344|2,46370|1,46396|0,46422|3,46448|2) - ^ ^
00:47:103 (47103|3,47103|0,47155|1,47208|2,47260|3,47312|2,47365|3,47417|1,47417|2,47417|0) - idk how to explain this change so osu.ppy.sh/ss/8215731 will explain for hand balance, and you can ctrl+h in 00:47:731 - , 00:48:359 - ,and 00:48:988 - Fixed
00:50:244 (50244|2,50270|3,50297|0) - 1/8, 1/12 start in 00:50:323 - They r the same
01:00:611 (60611|3,60925|2,61239|0,61553|3) - ln should be 1/4 long based on 25% playback
01:03:124 (63124|1,63438|2,63752|0,64066|3) - ^ All fixed
01:04:223 (64223|1,64302|2) - shift 1 column to the right Fixed
01:05:637 (65637|1,65951|2,66265|3,66579|1) - 1/4 ln All 1/4 LNs are fixed
01:06:422 (66422|0) - col 3 All changing col are fixed
01:11:527 (71527|2,71605|0) - switch position Fixed
01:15:689 (75689|2,76003|0,76318|3,76632|2) - 1/4 ln
01:33:909 (93909|0,93909|3) - 1 note will do Fixed
01:36:422 (96422|0,96422|3,96422|1) - ^ ^
01:36:893 (96893|0,96893|1,96893|3) - 2 note Fixed
01:44:040 (104040|3) - ooooooooooo (ghost)
01:44:668 (104668|2) - ^ All fixed
01:48:359 (108359|1,108359|0,108359|2) - give quad for the cymbal Nah
01:49:302 (109302|3,109302|0,109302|2,109302|1) - triple only
01:52:914 (112914|2) - col 2 for aesthethic
01:54:328 (114328|1) - 1/2 ln Nope then 01:54:564 (114564|0) - col 2 for playability
02:13:412 (133412|1,133412|2) - ooo (ghost?) They are kicks, listen carefully, the same to all ur oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
02:14:668 (134668|2,134668|1) - oooo (ghost??)
02:17:181 (137181|3,137181|2,137181|0) - ctrl+h and then delete the one on col 4 Nope
02:18:438 (138438|0,138438|1) - ooooo (ghost???)
02:19:694 (139694|3,139694|2) - oooooo (ghost????)
02:20:951 (140951|1,140951|0) - ooooooo (ghost?????)
02:22:757 (142757|1,142757|3) - oooooooo (ghost??????) Now all of these notes are used to symbolized the stress of each sound
02:22:836 (142836|0) - col 4 Nope
02:22:914 (142914|3) - delete (double is enough) Can't because it is this part's pattern
02:23:700 (143700|1) - ooooooooo (ghost???????)
02:24:014 (144014|1,144014|3) - oooooooooo (ghost????????)
02:24:092 (144092|0) - shift to col 2, add note on col 4, 02:24:171 (144171|3) - delete Nope
02:24:956 (144956|0,144956|3) - ooooooooooo (ghost?????????)
02:25:270 (145270|1,145270|3) - oooooooooooo (ghost??????????)
02:25:353 - add note col 4 02:25:427 (145427|0) - delete Nope
02:25:663 (145663|0) - ghost Fixed
02:26:213 (146213|2,146213|3) - ghost!
02:26:527 (146527|0,146527|2) - ghost!!
02:31:082 (151082|0,151082|1) - delete these, playability is more important than cymbals(?) If other addressed this again then I'll fix it
02:31:710 (151710|0,151736|1,151763|2,151789|3,151815|0,151841|1,151867|2,151893|3,151920|0,151946|1,151972|2,151998|3) - 1/8, rest of it 1/12 they are the same
03:14:433 (194433|3,194472|0,194511|2,194551|1,194590|0,194629|3,194668|1,194708|2,194747|3,194786|0,194825|2,194865|1,194904|0,194943|3,194982|1,195022|2) - i think you should be following piano and kick sound instead that roll since its louder Nah
03:46:789 (226789|1) - delete It is for the bass
04:17:496 (257496|1,257496|2,257653|1,257653|2) - i think these should be 1 note Nope
04:18:752 (258752|1,258831|1) - bad time to have a minijack I don't see it is a bad time to use jack but rather good time to use jack
04:19:773 (259773|0,259799|1,259825|2,259852|3,259878|1,259904|2,259930|3,259956|0,259982|1,260009|2) - you could place it better than this
04:29:825 (269825|2,269852|1,269878|0,269904|3,269930|2,269956|1,269982|0,270009|3,270035|2,270061|1) - ^ All fixed
04:21:605 (261605|2,261632|1,261658|0) - shift this one to the right and 04:21:658 (261658|3) - to col 1 and ctrl+h for 04:21:658 (261658|3) - ?
04:27:626 - missing note Fixed
04:31:239 (271239|3,271318|3,271396|3) - no 3 jack when holding ln Kinda... fixed?
04:31:605 (271605|3,271632|2) - switch Fixed

sv:
04:37:993 - normalize this, way to slow

Welp, somehow this diff got harder

SHD

00:26:527 (26527|1) - ghost
00:38:150 (38150|2) - ^
00:45:375 - you can place a ln to replace that weird... shredder(?) sound
00:52:836 (52836|1) - ghost
00:54:092 (54092|2) - ^
00:55:349 (55349|2) - ^
00:56:763 - missing note
00:57:862 (57862|0) - ghost
00:59:119 (59119|1) - ^
01:00:375 (60375|3) - ^
01:02:888 (62888|1) - ^
01:04:145 (64145|0) - ^
01:05:401 (65401|2) - ^
01:06:658 (66658|1) - ^
01:07:914 (67914|3) - ^
01:09:171 (69171|2) - ^
01:10:427 (70427|0) - ^
01:12:941 (72941|2) - ^
01:14:197 (74197|0) - ^
01:15:454 (75454|1) - ^
01:17:967 (77967|3) - ^
02:04:459 (124459|1) - no minijack while holding ln
02:04:459 (124459|1) - missing note
02:04:459 (124459|1) - ^
02:35:166 (155166|1,155166|3,155480|3,155480|1,155794|3,155794|1,156108|1,156108|3,156265|2,156422|0,156422|1,156579|3) - what is this?
02:38:071 (158071|1) - ghost
02:39:328 (159328|2) - ^
02:39:799 - missing
02:43:098 (163098|1) - ghost
02:44:354 (164354|1) - ^
02:48:124 (168124|2) - ^
02:49:380 (169380|2) - ^
02:50:637 (170637|2) - ^
02:52:993 (172993|0,173150|0) - ^
03:16:946 (196946|0) - unnecessary
03:39:799 (219799|3) - ghost
03:44:197 (224197|2) - ^
03:45:454 (225454|2) - ^
03:48:752 (228752|2) - ^
03:50:009 (230009|2) - ^
03:53:307 - missing note
03:53:935 - ^
03:58:176 (238176|0) - white line
03:58:962 (238962|2) - ghost
03:59:433 (239433|2) - white line
04:01:946 (241946|0) - ^
04:03:202 (243202|3) - ^
04:04:459 (244459|0) - ^
song repeat, i think you can selfmod

I think that's all, sorry if my mod too offensive Not at all (^w^)b

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

Rotf, oooo *ghost sound*

Anyway, hurray +0,01 star rating

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

hello, m4m from YOUR queue (poop), havent posted it, will post soon. Also nice song

DISCLAIMER

1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc)
2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
5. Also i have bad english
6. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless

1|2|3|4

SHD

00:26:527 (26527|1) - ghost Fixed
00:38:150 (38150|2) - ^ Im still hearing a note here (really quiet tho)
00:45:375 - you can place a ln to replace that weird... shredder(?) sound Yeah indeed but im still wondering if i want to actually map it or not, thanks for the suggestion
For the next ghost notes i agree with half of them in fact. You're right some of them are too much but some of them are 100% legit, ill detail those i removed only
00:52:836 (52836|1) - ghost Removed
00:54:092 (54092|2) - ^
00:55:349 (55349|2) - ^ Removed
00:56:763 - missing note Right
00:57:862 (57862|0) - ghost Removed
00:59:119 (59119|1) - ^
01:00:375 (60375|3) - ^ Removed
01:02:888 (62888|1) - ^ Removed
01:04:145 (64145|0) - ^
01:05:401 (65401|2) - ^ Removed
01:06:658 (66658|1) - ^
01:07:914 (67914|3) - ^ Removed
01:09:171 (69171|2) - ^
01:10:427 (70427|0) - ^ Removed
01:12:941 (72941|2) - ^ Removed
01:14:197 (74197|0) - ^
01:15:454 (75454|1) - ^ Removed
01:17:967 (77967|3) - ^
02:04:459 (124459|1) - no minijack while holding ln Fixed
02:04:459 (124459|1) - missing note Too bad i think you missed you copy paste T^T
02:04:459 (124459|1) - ^ ^
02:35:166 (155166|1,155166|3,155480|3,155480|1,155794|3,155794|1,156108|1,156108|3,156265|2,156422|0,156422|1,156579|3) - what is this? I found the LN too long and i think those could be nice to recover the rythm after that short break -also will be better with HS-
02:38:071 (158071|1) - ghost Those notes belong to a pattern that is some sort of an extension of the drum mapping. Ill give more sense to them with HS
02:39:328 (159328|2) - ^ ^
02:39:799 - missing Sorry i will reject those ghosts for the same reason as above
02:43:098 (163098|1) - ghost
02:44:354 (164354|1) - ^
02:48:124 (168124|2) - ^
02:49:380 (169380|2) - ^
02:50:637 (170637|2) - ^
02:52:993 (172993|0,173150|0) - ^
03:16:946 (196946|0) - unnecessary True, dont know what i had in mind with this o-o
03:39:799 (219799|3) - ghost
Pretty much the same comment as above about those ghosts
03:44:197 (224197|2) - ^
03:45:454 (225454|2) - ^
03:48:752 (228752|2) - ^
03:50:009 (230009|2) - ^
03:53:307 - missing note Fixed
03:53:935 - ^ Fixed
03:58:176 (238176|0) - white line Sorry i dont understand what you mean by that :s
03:58:962 (238962|2) - ghost
03:59:433 (239433|2) - white line Im lost ~
04:01:946 (241946|0) - ^
04:03:202 (243202|3) - ^
04:04:459 (244459|0) - ^
song repeat, i think you can selfmod Yup sure thing ! ^w^)/

I think that's all, sorry if my mod too offensive

Sparhten wrote:

from your m4m que!

A Lie's HD

02:41:448 the pitch changes here even though the notes are mapped to the base wouldnt hurt to follow the pitch and move from 3,4-1,2 then the next two from 3,4-2,3 and leaving the last two in place. Ami mention this too for me, so i'll change it

02:46:475 not as pronounced but ^ ^

02:51:501 ^ ^

02:39:249 try a note here to match consistency of earlier rhythm added

01:29:825 i personally dont like prioritising the drum beats over the electronics with no real reason to switch up until 01:31:487 to make the diff easier >.>

01:46:789 hitting two inners here might feel uncomfortable try switching the first set from 2,3 to 1,2 remaked whole part with better consistency

sorry for not much but from what i can see there isnt much to find, looks good! hope you get ranked soon!

_Gaster wrote:

The mapset

HD... then SC?? Just make it MX, Moku's SC and SHD... Although Venus is a nice diff name for it. Fixed

SC

00:51:815 - Feels kinda dull. Why not add some drums. Just a bit. That and 03:57:783 - this part. Also fixed

_Gaster wrote:

The mapset

HD... then SC?? Just make it MX, Moku's SC and SHD... Although Venus is a nice diff name for it.

Moku's SHD

00:50:244 - Moku's SC.
01:52:365 (112365|1) - What...? I don't hear anything here... 01:53:621 (113621|1) - too. Okay your headset is not broken or anything, its pretty much a ghost note in fact, but i dont think mapping is always fitting the song as much as possible. For this diff i took some freedom to add notes that will make more sense with proper HS, sorry for the confusion.
01:54:249 (114249|3) - Are you guys really sure about this? ^
01:55:977 (115977|2) - I still really can't hear it. Maybe my headset is broken?... ^

01:57:391 (117391|1) - Oh okay I hear it now.
01:58:647 (118647|2) - Seems to have been put 01:58:962 - here instead, though. That wont fit with the pattern im doing for the kiai

01:59:904 (119904|2) - I still can't hear it.
02:02:417 (122417|2) - Seems like it should be 02:02:260 - here... Same as above

02:13:490 (133490|2,133647|1) - What?? Okay those are clearly ghost notes and maybe i overdid here, i just dont want to have too much empty spaces for a 4.6*

Okay, now I'm pretty convinced my headset is somehow busted...

Madoka2574 wrote:

From your queue

I love this song!Hoping it to be ranked!

Venus

01:00:615 - add a note in column 3 I think that you're modding my map before I updated Venus so....
01:01:789 - add a note in column 2
01:02:967 - I suggest adding a note here Fixed
01:05:480 - ^ Fixed
01:06:736 (66736|2,66815|3,66893|2) - like this I prefer mine better
01:07:993 - add a note in column 3,bcs u always use 2 notes to express the sound Fixed
01:11:605 (71605|2,71763|3,71920|2) - I think it can be like this to be similar with 01:01:396 (61396|2,61475|0,61553|2,61632|0,61710|2,61867|0) - (including the note I suggested) Fixed
01:13:019 - add a note in column 1 as I said above Fixed
01:16:867 (76867|3) - like this Fixed
01:17:260 - add a note in column 4 and 01:17:731 - in column 1 Fixed
01:19:616 - 01:19:852 - 01:20:087 - 01:20:323 - I think it feels good to add a note Fixed in 01:19:852 and 01:20:087
01:24:485 (84485|0,84485|3,84721|0,84721|2,84956|0,84956|1,85192|0,85192|2) - 01:25:742 (85742|3,85742|1,85977|3,85977|2) - 01:26:370 (86370|0,86370|1,86605|1,86605|2) - I suggest these long notes lasting for 1/2 beats to meet the sound Fixed
01:41:763 - add a note in column 1 The reason why I don't add a note there is because the bass start at 01:41:841
01:42:548 (102548|1) - change it to short LN like after Fixed
01:50:872 (110872|2) - LN 1/2 Nope, listen it again
02:41:448 (161448|3,161763|1,162077|0) - delete I don't see the reason
02:46:475 - ^ ^
02:51:501 - ^ ^
03:02:181 (182181|0) - delete ^
03:07:208 (187208|3) - delete ^
03:40:192 (220192|1) - like this Fixed
04:04:852 - add a note like u did here 04:12:391 - Fixed
04:11:763 - I think it should be like this or if u just want to place the durm note then like this Fixed... kinda
04:17:731 (257731|1,257888|1) - like this Nope
04:19:982 - Nope
04:27:705 - 04:27:862 - audible sound but no note? Fixed
And for the SV: I'm going to delete the SV so
02:46:160 - 02:51:187 - 03:01:867 - 03:06:893 - I think there should be SV changes
02:51:030 - add 2 notes in column 2 and 3 feels good and meet the sound,which is not the clap sound though.And then 02:51:030 - speed up(maybe 2x?)
For all the SV above I think the changes are a bit extreme.Maybe 0.25x and 2x can be better?

I mod for nearly 3 hours since I'm not experienced Otherwise I would have modded more diffs.
Hope my mod will be of help

Madoka2574 wrote:

Well I'd like to explain something
01:06:736 - I just think there should be 2 notes(The same reason huh~) Fixed
01:50:872 (110872|2) - Here I guess we are talking about different instruments XD Maybe lol
02:41:448 (161448|3,161763|1,162077|0) - Bcs the tones are different and I would prefer different patterns to show it~ Understood but I'd rather stay the same
04:17:731 (257731|1) - I think the sound is not heavy enough to make a jack,and 04:17:967 - a sound.(what is this intrument called?)I also hear the sound here 04:17:810 - Maybe u only placed the durm note but the sound 04:17:967 - is loud enough to add a note. I'm focusing on the drum so no
These are my opinions.Just for reference
What a pity that you deleted all the SVs Me too but I have to

Column :
|1|2|3|4|

Sarahkuai wrote:

FROM THIS THREAD

Column :
|1|2|3|4|

SC

01:32:024 - add 1 note column 1 Nah
02:07:757 - missing note? you should add 1 note on column 2 or 4 His intention is to map the main sound? so nope
02:08:386 - ^ same problem, column 1 or 3 ^
02:10:977 - add 1 note, this sound like this one 02:11:213 (131213|1,131213|0,131213|3) - Although the sounds are the same, it will create jack so nope
02:26:213 (146213|2) - move to column 2 I don't see why
02:30:297 - add 1 note Fixed
02:30:925 - ^ same problem because why don't you change it to 2-1-2-1-2-1-2... pattern? from 02:29:904 - to 02:31:003 - Fixed
02:35:166 (155166|1,155166|3,155480|3,155480|1,155794|3,155794|1) - lmao.. what's this pattern do? ghost note? i'm sorry but I don't feel the pitch is here, are you trying to arranger or something? fixed
02:45:218 - add 1 note
02:45:846 - ^
02:55:270 - ^
02:55:899 - ^
03:08:464 - ^
03:09:092 - ^
03:09:721 - ^
03:10:977 - ^
03:11:605 - ^
03:12:234 - ^
03:12:862 - ^
03:13:490 - ^
03:14:119 - ^ All fixed
04:15:768 - ^ Main sound

good luck

OwenF04 wrote:

Helloooo

from your modding queue

Note, these are all suggestions. if i made a mistake or you disagree do not apply it.

like you said, i will do three diffs to equal what i want from my mod.

i noticed halfway through modding that kiai time differs between difficulties. i mean, i don't know if it's allowed but i wouldn't recommend it It's acceptable

Venus

00:16:632 (16632|1,17888|0) - why are these seperate sliders? the sound is kept They're different sound

00:38:621 (38621|0) - start this here 00:38:307 Nope

00:41:448 (41448|0,41527|1,41605|3,41684|0) - odd pattern. why don't you make it this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8670520 for pitch relevancy But it is pitch relevant

00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1) - even though it's a bit of a slur, i think it is 1/8, i can kind of make out slight dips of volume inbetween, snapped at 1/8. if you agree, you'll need to change them, but it's up to you. won't mention them all I'm telling you that's 1/12

02:36:108 - i think you should extend this thing to 02:37:365 as it is more prominent than the piano. debatable though I'd prefer staying the same

03:42:548 - why did you miss a note? The sound there is smaller than the others so yeah...

MX

01:51:815 - why don't you do this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8670598 for PR applied

02:07:208 (127208|3,127208|1,127365|1,127365|0,127365|3) - first, the two sounds are the same intensity, yet one is a double and the other is a triple. maybe change this. The second sound is more intensified than the first one (and 02:07:836 (127836|3,127836|0,127993|0,127993|1,127993|2) ). the second problem is that those two differ from these two (02:08:464 (128464|3,128464|2,128464|0,128621|3,128621|0,128621|2,128621|1) and 02:09:092 (129092|0,129092|3,129092|1,129249|0,129249|3,129249|2,129249|1) ). why this is i don't know, there is barely any change in intensity. and, the last two have one as a triple, and the other as a quad. should probably make them the same The last 2 one are more stressed so I do that

02:37:051 (157051|3,157129|2,157208|1,157286|0,157365|3,157365|1) - CTRL+H for PR I don't see any point doing that

EZ

01:01:867 (61867|1) - why is this not a LN? Fixed

01:04:380 (64380|1) - ^^ ^

01:14:433 (74433|3) - ^^ ^

02:41:448 (161448|1,161763|2,162077|3) - make these doubles as you can barely hear the piano through the drum I'd do that if it wasn't EZ diff, same to other


02:46:475 (166475|0,166789|1,167103|2) - ^^

02:51:501 (171501|3,171815|2,172129|1) - ^^

nice set. best of luck

_Gaster wrote:

I don't see Moku's diff at all... That's odd.