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Kitamura Eri - Be Starters! (TV Size)

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doraran
:)
biwako
Star~
lovhin456
Hi hi ~ <3

General;
- Everything is okk ~

Easy;
- 00:02:559 (2) >> The slider sounds better to me if it starts here
- 00:10:952 >> Start the spinner here ?
- 01:01:309 >> May be too soon after the spinner
- I'm concerned about the spinner at the end being too short for an Easy, also the spinner at the end ends on a blue tick while on Normal it ends on a white tick

Normal;
- 00:01:845 (2) >> Start the slider here instead ?
- 00:04:702 (2) >> ^
- 00:10:952 >> Start the spinner here ?
- 01:23:274 >> Add a note ?

Hard;
- 00:29:881 >> Remove the repeat and add just a note on 00:30:595, the repeat just doesn't seem right to me

Vicho's Insane;
- Is kinda weird you start before the metronome starts ~
- 01:26:667 >> Add a note with clap ?

* Star ~
frost-b-spec
god kenezz 8-)
Vicho

lovhin456 wrote:

Vicho's Insane;
- Is kinda weird you start before the metronome starts ~ Lol, I don't know what are trying to say :Z
- 01:26:667 >> Add a note with clap ? Orz, no.. Sounds weird :<
Topic Starter
Kenezz

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi hi ~ <3 Hi hi ^w^/

General;
- Everything is okk ~

Easy;
- 00:02:559 (2) >> The slider sounds better to me if it starts here uhmm imo sounds better where it is now
- 00:10:952 >> Start the spinner here ? no >:
- 01:01:309 >> May be too soon after the spinner nup D:
- I'm concerned about the spinner at the end being too short for an Easy, also the spinner at the end ends on a blue tick while on Normal it ends on a white tick Fixed the spinner at the end~ aaand I can't see a big problem with respect to the size of the spinners

Normal;
- 00:01:845 (2) >> Start the slider here instead ? ehmm i fix this part respect your suggestion :3
- 00:04:702 (2) >> ^ ^
- 00:10:952 >> Start the spinner here ? nup
- 01:23:274 >> Add a note ? ok

Hard;
- 00:29:881 >> Remove the repeat and add just a note on 00:30:595 (?), the repeat just doesn't seem right to me I leave like this~

* Star ~
Thanks my bakamoe <33 haha
Astom
o/
Shirakawa Kotori
☆~
[Loli]Dark
Star=w=
ertyukjh010
:)
Topic Starter
Kenezz
Thanks for the stars <3
Yakety Saxer
Holy--- I love the Taiko level :D also the Insane is really nice :)
yuki
:D star
YaMaO04
:)
kirinoimouto22
Thanks Kenezz! This is my favorite op in this new anime season *-*
Star for you *-*
Topic Starter
Kenezz
haha thanks for your support ^w^/
vivere
Holap

[Easy]
  1. 00:58:095 (3) - Move esta nota hacia: 00:58:274 ? la verdad suena feo si la dejas donde esta...
  2. 00:58:274 - Al final del slider tienes que dejar dos ticks blancos de espacio antes del (1). Asi los principiantes tienen mas tiempo para recuperarse.
  3. 01:09:881 (4) - New combo?
  4. 01:26:845 (1) + spinner - al spinner lo veo muy corto y muy "matador" D: tal vez podrías borrar el circle y el spinner y reemplazarlo por un slider?
    256,260,86845,2,0,B|384:168|128:112|257:31,1,280
[Normal]
  1. 00:54:167 (3) - Agrega un clap al final del slider.
  2. 01:03:452 (4) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:702 (2,4) - Agrega whistle al comienzo de los sliders.
  2. 01:03:452 (3) - Agrega un clap también al final del slider ?
  3. 01:06:131 (3) - ^ ?
[Vicho's Insane]
  1. 00:28:452 (7) - Agrega un New combo aquí. Esta es la única parte donde veo que el combo llega hasta 13 y no le veo la necesidad ya que se puede simplificar :P
Eso es todo Bakanezz. Star \^^/

PD: oye >.< ya se que no es necesario... pero de paso borra el osb <3
Mithos
From my modding Queue:

Some sliders could have been smoother, and some work with the hitsounds would be good. Nothing wrong here warranting a difficulty break down though. Looking forward to it being approved.
spboxer3
[General]
If you don't need .osb you can delete it!

[Easy]
AR = 3 (?)
00:52:738 (1) - move to 00:52:559 - and finish at 00:53:452 -
00:53:988 (2) - same as ^

[Normal]
00:23:809 - finish?
00:57:738 (4) - finish at 00:58:274 - and 00:58:274 (1) - start 00:58:363 -

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
00:11:934 (40,41,42,43) - I don't like this... but it's all fine
01:26:309 (424,425,426) - x x X?

other all fine :)
star~!
Topic Starter
Kenezz

vivere wrote:

Holap Hello o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:58:095 (3) - Move esta nota hacia: 00:58:274 ? la verdad suena feo si la dejas donde esta... imo no suena mal pero lo tomare en cuenta aunque en normal es igual y no posteaste la sugerencia...
  2. 00:58:274 - Al final del slider tienes que dejar dos ticks blancos de espacio antes del (1). Asi los principiantes tienen mas tiempo para recuperarse. estoy consciente de eso pero lo dejare así aver que pasa
  3. 01:09:881 (4) - New combo? ah se me paso, thnx
  4. 01:26:845 (1) + spinner - al spinner lo veo muy corto y muy "matador" D: tal vez podrías borrar el circle y el spinner y reemplazarlo por un slider? nup
    256,260,86845,2,0,B|384:168|128:112|257:31,1,280
[Normal]
  1. 00:54:167 (3) - Agrega un clap al final del slider. mejor un whistle para preservar el patrón del clap ;>
  2. 01:03:452 (4) - ^ ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:702 (2,4) - Agrega whistle al comienzo de los sliders. oki
  2. 01:03:452 (3) - Agrega un clap también al final del slider ? =o suena cool
  3. 01:06:131 (3) - ^ ? ^
Eso es todo Bakanezz. Star \^^/ Thanks <3

PD: oye >.< ya se que no es necesario... pero de paso borra el osb <3 noo xDDD!

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
If you don't need .osb you can delete it! teheee

[Easy]
AR = 3 (?) no >,,<
00:52:738 (1) - move to 00:52:559 no- and finish at 00:53:452 - uhm best whistle~
00:53:988 (2) - same as ^ ^

[Normal]
00:23:809 - finish? nup
00:57:738 (4) - finish at 00:58:274 (?) - and 00:58:274 (1) - start 00:58:363 -

other all fine :) :>
star~!
Thanks for the mod~
Mucha_old
:D
E1rA
Nice Map!
Hinacle
= =+
ziin

spboxer3 wrote:

If you don't need .osb you can delete it!
If you don't need osb you don't have to delete it.

[general]
This map is nearly perfect, and should be ranked in a short time. Everything I suggest is minor, map's completely ready right now. I'm only pointing out some strange rhythms. One odd thing about rhythm games is that more notes = easier. The note at the end of the song is harder to hit on easy and normal because you have to sightread the note or know it's coming. To help this, you can either stick the note on the end of a slider, or map the 2 notes before it (in a repeating slider or something). Or just not do anything. It's fine.

[easy]
perfect
01:26:845 (1) - I missed this note

[normal]
01:04:524 (2) - This would sound better if you added a note at 01:04:702. Circle, slider, slider would work well.
01:26:845 (1) - I missed this note again.

[hard]
00:35:774 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this was awkward due to the offbeat sliders. Adding a circle or two would help
01:02:560 (5,1) - combine these to a longer slider. Actually reverse them, so slider first, then circle.
01:05:059 (4) - add repeat?
01:16:131 (2,3) - reverse
01:26:845 - the one time I can hit this note and you deprive me of that :(. take off the repeat and add a circle, or better yet, delete (4), and make the rhythm circle repeat circle.

[vicho]
Pretty much every 1/4 is overmapped. Let me know if you want me to point it out, but I'm not going to waste my time for someone who doesn't care about mapping to the music and just wants to make up fancy rhythms.

This is how far I got before I gave up
Delete these
00:06:845 (1) -
00:09:702 (7) -
00:12:381 (6) - no slider
00:15:149 (9) -
00:16:220 (3) -
00:17:649 (9) -
00:22:917 (1) - no slider
00:23:542 (4) -
00:27:292 (2) -
00:29:792 (10) -

Add these
00:11:845 -
00:11:934 -
00:23:363 -
00:23:720 -
00:23:899 -
00:24:077 -
00:26:756 -
00:26:934 -
00:28:184 -
00:28:363 -
00:31:220 -
suzutsukikanade
ma-ma-mayochiki! *_*
Vicho

ziin wrote:

[vicho]
Pretty much every 1/4 is overmapped. Let me know if you want me to point it out, but I'm not going to waste my time for someone who doesn't care about mapping to the music and just wants to make up fancy rhythms. Oh God, you're silly, you're talking like if you have more experience of mapping :P

This is how far I got before I gave up
Delete these
00:06:845 (1) -
00:09:702 (7) -
00:12:381 (6) - no slider
00:15:149 (9) -
00:16:220 (3) -
00:17:649 (9) -
00:22:917 (1) - no slider
00:23:542 (4) -
00:27:292 (2) -
00:29:792 (10) -

Add these
00:11:845 -
00:11:934 -
00:23:363 -
00:23:720 -
00:23:899 -
00:24:077 -
00:26:756 -
00:26:934 -
00:28:184 -
00:28:363 -
00:31:220 -

Hahaha! It's my mapping style, if you don't like it, sorry :P
Topic Starter
Kenezz

ziin wrote:

spboxer3 wrote:

If you don't need .osb you can delete it!
If you don't need osb you don't have to delete it. baka me

[general]
This map is nearly perfect, and should be ranked in a short time. Everything I suggest is minor, map's completely ready right now. I'm only pointing out some strange rhythms. One odd thing about rhythm games is that more notes = easier. The note at the end of the song is harder to hit on easy and normal because you have to sightread the note or know it's coming. To help this, you can either stick the note on the end of a slider, or map the 2 notes before it (in a repeating slider or something). Or just not do anything. It's fine.

[easy]
perfect
01:26:845 (1) - I missed this note ok, thanks for the observation, changed for a slider

[normal]
01:04:524 (2) - This would sound better if you added a note at 01:04:702. Circle, slider, slider would work well. ok
01:26:845 (1) - I missed this note again. Really? xD slider time~

[hard]
00:35:774 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this was awkward due to the offbeat sliders. Adding a circle or two would help you're right, it is a little weird but you think of this?
01:02:560 (5,1) - combine these to a longer slider. Actually reverse them, so slider first, then circle. i leave like this :3
01:05:059 (4) - add repeat? mmm nup
01:16:131 (2,3) - reverse uh ok
01:26:845 - the one time I can hit this note and you deprive me of that :(. take off the repeat and add a circle, or better yet, delete (4), and make the rhythm circle repeat circle. remove the repeat and add a note here, fixed~~
Thaaanks

EDIT: Thanks for the stars guys \^w^/
Boom-PA0
star :D
Boom-PA0
star :D
ziin

Vicho-kun wrote:

Oh God, you're silly, you're talking like if you have more experience of mapping
I have 20+ years of experience with music. Just because it doesn't really matter to most people doesn't mean I'm not right.

And just in case you missed it, I meant what I said about the map being rankable/nearly perfect. That includes your diff.
Leorda
Hello

Easy
01:01:310 (1) - Too near from spinner (look the timeline) for easy diff. You should move further away from spinner, or the beginner player will hard to reach this after the spinner is complete

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Normal
01:26:934 (1) - Not sure if this spinner is little bit short

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Hard
00:22:381 (3) - Finish+clap at head slider is sound noisy for me

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Vicho's Insane
00:03:095 (6) - This object is touch the HP Bar

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I can't find something wrong, sorry
atom4200
Star!!! :lol: 8-)
Topic Starter
Kenezz

Leorda wrote:

Hello

Easy
01:01:310 (1) - Too near from spinner (look the timeline) for easy diff. You should move further away from spinner, or the beginner player will hard to reach this after the spinner is complete I am aware of this, therefore it continues like this

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Normal
01:26:934 (1) - Not sure if this spinner is little bit short Again ^

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Hard
00:22:381 (3) - Finish+clap at head slider is sound noisy for me Bye bye Clap xD

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I can't find something wrong, sorry >_<
Thanks Leo o/
elmauri11
Me encanta este opening...!! El mapa tambien esta genial sobre todo el insane!! espero que sea aprobado pronto :D ... Estrella!!
iFap
I really love this map i hope it get's ranked soon.
also i star'd
benzali
Nice Map ! Nice Song ! i hope this map will Ranked Soon !
Love the Anime as well..
winber1
i don't have anything important to say ._.

Vicho's

00:03:988 (9) - new combo?
00:04:167 (1) - remove combo?
00:41:309 (9) - new combo?
00:41:488 (1) - remove combo?
01:24:702 (x) - some reason i really want a note here :/ though it seems like you didn't put one there on purpose

Hard

00:45:238 (3,4) - center around the y-axis? ._.
01:26:845 (1) - put this in the center?

some symmetrical patterns could have followed the music/vocals a little more, but they're fine.

Normal

00:06:667 (3) - not perfectly stacked

Easy

00:02:738 (2) - ok this note starts in a really weird spot. i like this rhythm much better: ...
SPOILER

here's the code if you want.. but it's not hard to make at all.. so yea idk.
164,96,1309,2,0,B|256:28|348:96,1,200,2|0
404,156,2560,2,0,B|420:264|336:336,1,200,2|2
174,334,4167,6,0,B|91:263|107:155,1,200,2|2
164,96,5417,2,0,B|256:28|348:96,1,200,2|0
01:25:595 (2,3) - yea, i know these two notes are far apart concerning timing, but i still wouldn't space them like this..

Awesome map! :3

Star~~
aoonikishi
It is very cool!
This beatmap is very good.
star (・∀・)
Topic Starter
Kenezz

winber1 wrote:

i don't have anything important to say ._. u.u

Hard

00:45:238 (3,4) - center around the y-axis? ._. ._.
01:26:845 (1) - put this in the center? ok~

some symmetrical patterns could have followed the music/vocals a little more, but they're fine. Which? xD

Normal

00:06:667 (3) - not perfectly stacked it's ok :3

Easy

00:02:738 (2) - ok this note starts in a really weird spot. i like this rhythm much better: ... ok thanks~
SPOILER
[attachment=0:4d89f]screenshot103.jpg[/attachment:4d89f]
here's the code if you want.. but it's not hard to make at all.. so yea idk.
164,96,1309,2,0,B|256:28|348:96,1,200,2|0
404,156,2560,2,0,B|420:264|336:336,1,200,2|2
174,334,4167,6,0,B|91:263|107:155,1,200,2|2
164,96,5417,2,0,B|256:28|348:96,1,200,2|0
01:25:595 (2,3) - yea, i know these two notes are far apart concerning timing, but i still wouldn't space them like this.. hahaha sorry! fixed~

Awesome map! :3 Thanks :3

Star~~
Thanks winber :>
Vicho

winber1 wrote:

Vicho's

00:03:988 (9) - new combo?
00:04:167 (1) - remove combo?
00:41:309 (9) - new combo?
00:41:488 (1) - remove combo?
01:24:702 (x) - some reason i really want a note here :/ though it seems like you didn't put one there on purpose
All done~

Download: Kitamura Eri - Be Starters! (TV Size) (Kenezz) [Vicho's Insane].osu
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