00:22:342 (1,2,3) - I am a big fan of huge sliders but here it overlaps with the 2 shorter ones and it just doesn't look nice.
fixed00:27:860 (1,2,3) - ^
fixed00:33:377 (1,2,3) - ^
fixed00:38:894 (1,2,3) - Here it's a little bit alright since they all come from/ go to the same point and don't intersect. but if youa re removing the others then also change this one
fixed00:44:411 (1,2) - normal overlap
fixed00:47:170 (1,2,3) - misleading spacing (looks like a 1/2 gap but is actually a 1/4) [color=#0000FF0]fixed[/color]
00:48:205 (4) - Don't make this loop into itself
fixed00:49:929 (1,2) - Normal overlap
fixed00:51:136 (3,4,5) - Uneven spacing
fixed00:52:687 (6,8) - Overlap
fixed00:55:446 (1,2) - Overlap
fixed00:56:653 (3,5) - Overlap
fixed01:00:963 (1,2) - Overlap (you probably made a pattern once and then just copied it lol)
yes, i did, 01:02:170 (3,4,5) - Uneven spacing, these are all 1/4
fixed01:05:274 (1,2,3) - Since this is the only triple in the slow section you can maybe change this into a reverse slider so it doesn't feel unexpected
fixed01:05:274 (1,2,3,7) - overlap
fixed01:20:791 (5,6,7) - I wouldn't make back and forths in this map overlap, maybe make it like this
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/JKlSsq5.png fixed01:22:342 (4,6,1) - ^ and 4 overlaps with 1
fixed01:24:584 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - weird jump
fixed 01:25:101 (1) - Remove NC
fixed01:38:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Don't make the slider intersect with the stream
fixedI like the way you handled the repetetive pattern here
Thanks02:03:722 (8,9,10,11,12) - You mapped this pattern in the music twice and now you do it different, I also don't hear a burst.
I realise my mistake, i misintepreted the strong sounds to be 8 and 12 when it is 10, 12. I restructured the entire section so that part is a 1/4 beat into a triple instead of a 5 note stream. Thanks for pointing this out 02:06:480 (9,10,11,12,13) - ^ + overlap with 02:06:136 (7)
fixed02:09:584 (12,13,1) - keep spacing equal
fixed02:10:618 (3,5) - Overlap
fixed02:10:791 (4,7) - ^
fixed02:17:860 (11,12,1) - The music does warrant a change in spacing but not this much
fixed02:21:653 (3,4) - Immediate overlap
fixed02:21:998 (4,5,6) - unequal spacing
fixed02:23:808 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe place a break here for a small part of it so when you finish it your hand doesn't hurt.
fixed02:45:791 (1,2,3) - Same as the start so im not going to repeat it
fixed03:10:101 (2,3) - Ugly spacing
fixed03:11:653 (7) - Don't make sliders loop into themselves
fixed03:16:136 (4,5,6) - Unequal spacing
fixed03:17:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Why a triple and jumps, the music is really calm for this part
fixed, replaced with a calming long slider03:29:411 (3,4,1,1) - Slider and stream intersect
fixedThe jumps in the following part have the same spacing/pattern as the start at 01:17:515 (1), so look there for any problems with it
noted03:52:860 (4,6,2) - Overlap
fixed04:07:515 (2,4) - Overlap
fixed04:07:515 (2,4) - Overlap, you can put the circle perfectly on the sliderend to fix this
It becomes slightly harder to read if there is a stack under the slider. I anchor is to Slider 1 instead which places note 4 firmly between the 2 sliders04:16:136 (1,3,6,1) - Ugy overlap between these
fixed04:18:549 (3,5) - overlap
fixed04:27:687 (4) - I would space this a bit more
fixed04:35:963 (9,10,1) - Dont make the last slider intersect the stream
fixed04:49:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - You forced yourself into a corner here and got alot of overlap
I think I ran out of slider ideas, or got a bit lazy. My bad.04:58:205 (1) - Slider ends in itself again
fixedOverall I still very much liked the map and without overlap only 5% of the porblems would still be there so,
Gl with the map
Ps:I Love the song