u's - Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

_Meep_

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-03-17T21:45:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 18 February 2018 at 11:46:55 PM

Artist: u's
Title: Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size)
Source: ラブライブ! School idol project
Tags: love live muse hata aki mori shintarou sunrise opening Kin Pachiru Walaowey Nardoxyribonucleic
BPM: 196
Filesize: 4195kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Expert (4.85 stars, 341 notes)
Hard (3.69 stars, 278 notes)
Kin's Normal (2.37 stars, 188 notes)
Nardo's Muzukashii (2.99 stars, 381 notes)
Nardo's Oni (3.94 stars, 501 notes)
Pachiru's Easy (1.82 stars, 120 notes)
Walao's Master (5.05 stars, 344 notes)

Download: u's - Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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bring back the 2014
bring back the meme
bring back more love live
bring back the meep hard expert d
bring forth the pachiru easy gd
bring forth the kin normal gd
bring forth the walaowey extra gd
bring forth the nardoxyribonucleic oni gd

For those who want a harder challenge,
Go play Cerulean Veyron's diff!

SIF naming \/

yes i know im pro player :^)

Last edited by _Meep_ 2018-02-18T14:47:47+00:00, edited 57 times in total.

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2017-03-17T21:46:05+00:00

went over some stuff

2017-03-17 21:21 _Meep_: oki wanna testo now
2017-03-17 21:21 _Meep_: 5 hours later lo
2017-03-17 21:24 StarrStyx: sure
2017-03-17 21:24 _Meep_: http://puu.sh/uNyIS/53711000ab.osz
2017-03-17 21:27 StarrStyx: i find some of the spacing choices questionable lol
2017-03-17 21:27 _Meep_: wutface
2017-03-17 21:28 _Meep_: :(
2017-03-17 21:29 StarrStyx: for example
2017-03-17 21:29 _Meep_: ?
2017-03-17 21:29 StarrStyx: 00:52:393 (3,4,5,6) - i dont see a need for antiflow here
2017-03-17 21:29 StarrStyx: 01:02:189 (3,4,5,6) - same here
2017-03-17 21:29 _Meep_: Hmm
2017-03-17 21:30 _Meep_: true,but I just felt that the antiflow would emphasize the claps 01:02:801 (7) - more
2017-03-17 21:30 _Meep_: rather than having all in one flow,then changing it simply for one note
2017-03-17 21:30 StarrStyx: 01:04:025 (3,1,2,3) - the spacing between objects before these is quite large so the closer circles kinda put me off
2017-03-17 21:31 StarrStyx: well..
2017-03-17 21:31 _Meep_: its calm movement,afterwards the snap to 01:04:791 (1) - will emphasize the tune change
2017-03-17 21:32 StarrStyx: for the first bit, i dont rly understand your way of emphasis tbh
2017-03-17 21:33 StarrStyx: and, if i had to remove every note
2017-03-17 21:33 StarrStyx: the song just doesnt have... much to emphasize
2017-03-17 21:33 _Meep_: The first part of the song is just smooth flow :thonkin:
2017-03-17 21:33 StarrStyx: you mean before kiai righte
2017-03-17 21:33 StarrStyx: right*
2017-03-17 21:34 _Meep_: yes
2017-03-17 21:34 StarrStyx: then why antiflow in the second half? lol
2017-03-17 21:34 StarrStyx: i get that its chorus but
2017-03-17 21:34 StarrStyx: the intensity just doesnt change that much
2017-03-17 21:34 StarrStyx: imo
2017-03-17 21:35 _Meep_: it feels pretty different to me o-o
2017-03-17 21:36 StarrStyx: since im looking at it 00:35:556 (3) - move this to the right a bit, seems too cramped atm
2017-03-17 21:36 _Meep_: moved
2017-03-17 21:36 StarrStyx: and honestly even though the chorus might have intensity changes, it still isnt enough to say like
2017-03-17 21:37 StarrStyx: to go from smooth flow > tricky patterns
2017-03-17 21:37 _Meep_: its tricky? o-o
2017-03-17 21:37 StarrStyx: to most i'd do here is like, increase spacing but thats about it for emphasis
2017-03-17 21:37 _Meep_: I just thought that it felt a bit harder to do
2017-03-17 21:37 StarrStyx: well, thats what i feel like on sightread lol
2017-03-17 21:38 StarrStyx: and even on second try still felt tricky
2017-03-17 21:38 _Meep_: 01:02:189 (3,4,5,6) - Are these the only kinds of anti-flow in the chorus or?
2017-03-17 21:38 StarrStyx: i did include this one tho 00:52:393 (3,4,5,6) - 
2017-03-17 21:39 _Meep_: yea,kinda same thing xd
2017-03-17 21:39 _Meep_: anything else
2017-03-17 21:39 _Meep_: ??
2017-03-17 21:39 StarrStyx: ok something else
2017-03-17 21:39 StarrStyx: 01:01:117 (1,2,3) - 
2017-03-17 21:39 StarrStyx: ????
2017-03-17 21:39 StarrStyx: i remembered now
2017-03-17 21:39 StarrStyx: this is one of the few things like
2017-03-17 21:39 StarrStyx: no
2017-03-17 21:39 StarrStyx: pls
2017-03-17 21:39 _Meep_: i guess,well the kickslider+note is a triple sound
2017-03-17 21:40 _Meep_: a normal triple wouldn't do for me,idk,i just tried and it felt gay ;v
2017-03-17 21:40 StarrStyx: this is another tricky spot i nearly misses
2017-03-17 21:40 StarrStyx: *missed
2017-03-17 21:40 StarrStyx: and honestly that is just d
2017-03-17 21:40 _Meep_: d?
2017-03-17 21:41 StarrStyx: like, you could have just put the kickslider pointing to the circle and the distance between those 2 dont need to be that large...
2017-03-17 21:41 _Meep_: I mean,well
2017-03-17 21:41 StarrStyx: my suggestion https://puu.sh/uNAc3/c99883924c.png
2017-03-17 21:41 _Meep_: i just feel that notes get emphasized more if the kickslider itself doesn't face the note
2017-03-17 21:41 _Meep_: but in this case,I guess you're right
2017-03-17 21:42 _Meep_: because for the first one I did make it face the note
2017-03-17 21:42 _Meep_: but the 2nd I didnt
2017-03-17 21:42 StarrStyx: ic
2017-03-17 21:42 StarrStyx: tbh facing or not doesnt rly make any difference
2017-03-17 21:42 StarrStyx: and in this case its rly tricky compared to most of the map
2017-03-17 21:43 _Meep_: Hmm
2017-03-17 21:43 _Meep_: so its like a small diff spike that shouldn't be there?
2017-03-17 21:43 StarrStyx: something like that, yea
2017-03-17 21:44 _Meep_: I see
2017-03-17 21:44 _Meep_: I'll review on what you said
2017-03-17 21:44 _Meep_: and probably make something less confusing
2017-03-17 21:44 _Meep_: xd
2017-03-17 21:44 StarrStyx: :d

Pachiru

osu! Alumni

2,957 posts

Joined June 2013

Pachiru 2017-03-18T13:56:46+00:00

i claim the easy and normal slot okay?????????

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-03-18T14:07:21+00:00

Pachiru wrote:
i claim the easy and normal slot okay?????????

yes okay ;3

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-03-18T15:40:17+00:00

⭐⭐

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

sdafsf 2017-03-18T16:01:51+00:00

insane

00:00:658 (1,3) - pull the sliderend down a bit to make blanket nicer
00:14:434 - make this clickable
00:16:576 (1) - this slider should start 00:16:423 - here since the vocal is very dominant
00:18:107 - make this clickable too
00:19:331 - ^
00:22:393 (1,2,2) - uncool overlap
00:24:229 - this clickable too. dunno i just feel it would make a good emphesis on the slider heads afterwards and there are sounds there anyways. i wont point out the rest of the you get what i mean i think.
00:36:780 (1) - this is too undermapped imo
00:43:209 (4) - nc here instead of 00:43:515 (1) - here because 1/1 gap
00:50:709 (1,2,1) - use consistent spacing here. would look nicer
00:53:311 (1,2) - swap nc because of 1/1 gap
00:54:995 (1,1) - overlap could be better
01:03:107 (1,2,1) - remove nc on both 1s and nc the 2 because of 1/1 gap
01:17:801 (1,2,3) - this rhythm doesnt seem right in my eyes https://puu.sh/uOFBc.jpg this seem better i think
01:26:372 (2) - this can be spaced more

hard

00:05:250 (1) - why nc here? seems too much
00:26:219 (4,1) - id map this as one slider since the vocal is very strong
00:28:515 - circle here?
00:44:587 (7,3) - stack these?
00:46:882 - circle here?
00:55:607 (4,5) - its a clean type of overlap but i dont like when heads are under slider bodies
00:56:678 - circle here?
01:11:143 (1,2) - uhh... check ai mod
01:23:005 (2,1) - blanket

gl!

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-03-18T16:30:08+00:00

sdafsf wrote:
insane
00:00:658 (1,3) - pull the sliderend down a bit to make blanket nicer Fixed
00:14:434 - make this clickable even though there is a clap here, not gona put any note since im only going to map the active sounds/notes
00:16:576 (1) - this slider should start 00:16:423 - here since the vocal is very dominant cant cuz the transition from the vocals to the mini guitar part wouldn't be smooth/nice to play
00:18:107 - make this clickable too vocalz
00:19:331 - ^ ^
00:22:393 (1,2,2) - uncool overlap why not ;/
00:24:229 - this clickable too. dunno i just feel it would make a good emphesis on the slider heads afterwards and there are sounds there anyways. i wont point out the rest of the you get what i mean i think. yea, I know you want me to map those claps,but not all claps have to be mapped,and they aren't that powerful so its fine to leave it.
00:36:780 (1) - this is too undermapped imo though I did the same thing with 00:32:495 (1) - xd, I'll leave it as it is because I dont want to map every single vocal
00:43:209 (4) - nc here instead of 00:43:515 (1) - here because 1/1 gap unchanged since 1. its a big white tick 2. theres a tune change at the end of the sliderend of (4) so NCing the slider just for a downbeat at a sliderend is a bit awkward,so the next note :>
00:50:709 (1,2,1) - use consistent spacing here. would look nicer Fixed
00:53:311 (1,2) - swap nc because of 1/1 gap big white tick NCing
00:54:995 (1,1) - overlap could be better rotated by 3 degrees
01:03:107 (1,2,1) - remove nc on both 1s and nc the 2 because of 1/1 gap no cuz theres the chimes,but because of this I will NC the first part of the chorus that repeated this rhythm.
01:17:801 (1,2,3) - this rhythm doesnt seem right in my eyes https://puu.sh/uOFBc.jpg this seem better i think I kept everything to 1/2 and 1/4 for a long time,so suddenly changing it to 3/4 is a bit inconsistent rhythm-wise imo and it would feel pretty uncomfortable
01:26:372 (2) - this can be spaced more wanted it to end in the middle c:

hard
00:05:250 (1) - why nc here? seems too much Fixed
00:26:219 (4,1) - id map this as one slider since the vocal is very strong cant because theres the piano sounds on 00:26:372 -
00:28:515 - circle here? dont really see a reason/need for this tbh
00:44:587 (7,3) - stack these? Fixed
00:46:882 - circle here? not exactly but changed the entire part(somewhat) because of added circle somewhere near there)
00:55:607 (4,5) - its a clean type of overlap but i dont like when heads are under slider bodies it feels natural to play and tbh doesnt really look too bad,unless people really hate it i will change it
00:56:678 - circle here? vocals
01:11:143 (1,2) - uhh... check ai mod Fixed, im a genius :L
01:23:005 (2,1) - blanket Fixed

gl!

thanks for mod

Hythes

68 posts

Joined March 2016

Hythes 2017-03-19T09:39:47+00:00

Hard

00:21:321 (1) - this was the vocal get harder if you mind remove the slider and place 3 circle at Ko! Ko! Ro!
00:33:719 (1) - decrease the slider, sound better than before
01:17:801 (1) - i feel weird from this time until 01:18:413
01:25:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice Ending, Lol

Expert

00:49:331 - 00:50:709 i think not all player at that skill can 300 all of this pattern.. what about makes star pattern and remove the stream 00:50:097 (1,2,3)
00:34:331 - decrease the length slider to 00:34:255, i dont know why, maybe better than before
01:02:343 (1,2) - remove this two circle and drag the slider to this time, i have bad feeling of that stream

I'm still beginner so Good Luck!

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-03-19T10:23:25+00:00

hanif1711 wrote:
Hard
00:21:321 (1) - this was the vocal get harder if you mind remove the slider and place 3 circle at Ko! Ko! Ro! Fixed
00:33:719 (1) - decrease the slider, sound better than before I understand she stops her vocals earler,but it sounds better if i just let the slider play to the main beat
01:17:801 (1) - i feel weird from this time until 01:18:413 moved one or two sliders,idk if that helps
01:25:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice Ending, Lol thanks xd
Expert
00:49:331 - 00:50:709 i think not all player at that skill can 300 all of this pattern.. what about makes star pattern and remove the stream 00:50:097 (1,2,3) Its pretty easy for a player who plays 4.7* well and can fc iirc, I had no problems playing it and most of the testplayers could that were below 50k. The notes are pretty close and this is actually easy compared to your 2k17 pp maps
00:34:331 - decrease the length slider to 00:34:255, i dont know why, maybe better than before doesnt sound right ;/
01:02:343 (1,2) - remove this two circle and drag the slider to this time, i have bad feeling of that stream 01:03:413 - this note would be ignored if i do that so cant

I'm still beginner so Good Luck!

just to say, 3 notes isn't called a stream,its called a triple, a stream is when there are more than 5 notes
Thanks for the mod! I'll edit this later and reply to your mod accordingly!

Pachiru

osu! Alumni

2,957 posts

Joined June 2013

Pachiru 2017-03-19T12:29:30+00:00

:thinking:

osu file format v14

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400,356,76576,6,0,B|348:368|348:368|292:356,1,100
224,280,77189,2,0,B|178:270|178:270|126:282,1,100
48,204,77801,2,0,L|36:92,2,100
125,281,78719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,196,79025,6,0,P|208:128|196:88,1,100
311,98,79638,2,0,P|303:147|315:195,1,100
343,301,80250,2,0,B|294:287|257:337|257:337|211:285|167:305,1,200
74,249,81168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,139,81474,6,0,B|161:79|161:79|255:114|255:114|350:83|350:83|429:143,2,400
180,336,84536,2,0,P|256:360|320:336,1,150
256,68,85760,2,0,L|256:180,1,100
256,192,86372,12,0,88515,0:0:0:0:

Dendy

Dendy 2017-03-20T06:50:30+00:00

H e l l o T h e r e!

Expert

00:11:219 (5,1) - seems pretty uncomfortable when you playing it, maybe you can just make it spaced a bit?
00:08:923 (3,1) - maybe you will stack them, like on 00:05:250 (3,1)?
00:13:515 (3,4,5) - make 1/2 beats little bit spaced and make them look like triangle, as the rhythm go on its very changed on 00:15:811 (2,3,4,5,6) but sound is clearly the same
00:18:260 (2,3) - suggestion, maybe you can make it oval flow?
00:31:882 (2,3,4) - make them less stack, like in 00:32:342 (6,7)
01:19:025 (1,2) - you can improve your flow
00:54:536 (1,2) - ^
01:08:617 (3,4) - make it blanket

gl in further mapping

Kami-senpai

608 posts

Joined January 2015

Kami-senpai 2017-03-21T14:58:25+00:00

moddu desu

naisu qt bg

Expert

00:02:954 (1) - might look a little less weird if you did it like this

00:21:627 (2) - might be better flow if ctrl g

00:32:342 (6,7,1) - maybe straighten this out. the curve right now makes 7 sort of seem out of place

00:37:699 (2) - NC here maybe to help with 1/1 gap, 00:38:005 (1) - NC off here and 00:38:617 (3) - NC on here

00:42:903 (3) - 1/1 gap here seems really sudden and feels sort of weird, there's also a guitar sound on the red tick so i think it would be better as 1/2 slider

00:44:434 (6,1,2) - small gap plus stack makes it play sort of weird and cramped, I would just unstack. Also 00:44:587 (1) - NC off here and 00:44:740 (2) - NC on here

00:46:270 (2,2) - stack maybe

00:52:240 (2,3,4) - such a sudden big jump OwO maybe just make 00:52:087 (1,2) - bigger so its not too big of a shock

00:55:607 (1) - maybe move this so the slider head isnt covered by 00:54:995 (1) - ? sort of messy looking rn

01:20:556 (2,3) - ctrl g these maybe. i don't really like how the linear jumps play at this part since it's still kiai time and pretty intense

can't find anything with hard diff cuz im a noob

osu needs more love live

Nowaie

1,021 posts

Joined December 2014

Nowaie 2017-03-21T19:56:01+00:00

irc log

20:57 *DTM9 Nowa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1243280 u's - Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size) [Expert]]
20:57 DTM9 Nowa: Here we go baybe
20:58 *_Meep_ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1243280 u's - Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size) [Expert]]
20:58 _Meep_: negative offset
20:58 *_Meep_ ok_hand:
20:58 _Meep_: xd
20:58 DTM9 Nowa: :ok_hand:
20:59 DTM9 Nowa: Not sure if the expert as a difficulty name is fitting since it's more like an insane/another for what the song/BPM suggests
20:59 _Meep_: safest mapping 2k17
20:59 _Meep_: lolo
20:59 _Meep_: nono
20:59 _Meep_: look at beatmap desc
20:59 _Meep_: u will know why
20:59 DTM9 Nowa: I should educate myself more with these fucking game difficulties
20:59 DTM9 Nowa: kms
21:00 _Meep_: XD
21:00 _Meep_: its fine
21:02 DTM9 Nowa: 00:03:872 (1) - I personally don't think the NC fits here.. Maybe you could NC 00:04:178 (2) - as it would be more fitting for it by begin mapped on a cymbal or just leave out the NCs once and for all for that pattern?
21:02 _Meep_: hmm
21:02 _Meep_: removed then xd
21:02 _Meep_: and nc'd 00:01:729 (3) -
21:03 _Meep_: q00:04:178 (3) - this too
21:03 DTM9 Nowa: 00:02:954 (1,1,2) - I'd personally see these as a single pattern thus a single combo but you do what you do
21:04 _Meep_: whatevs ;/ rankable in both ways xd
21:05 DTM9 Nowa: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-7MJdeIZb3w Prepare your holes and put that song to play on the background since...
21:05 DTM9 Nowa: 00:02:954 (1,2) - the first bump(s) are not exactly in the same spot 
21:05 _Meep_: LOL
21:06 _Meep_: moved down some pixels to fit
21:06 DTM9 Nowa: xd
21:06 _Meep_: lele
21:07 DTM9 Nowa: Just a thought but these 00:19:025 (2,3) - could follow similar style of repeating the movement like here 00:17:801 (1,2) - 
21:07 _Meep_: hmm
21:07 _Meep_: true but
21:07 _Meep_: how ;/
21:09 DTM9 Nowa: Just some way that the player has to go roughly back to where they started the slider from, for (bad) example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622834
21:10 _Meep_: ok done
21:10 _Meep_: idk if this makes it more confusing :thinking:
21:11 DTM9 Nowa: It uses a similar style that you did for similar stylish vocals
21:12 _Meep_: yea
21:12 _Meep_: kk then,will do
21:12 DTM9 Nowa: If you don't want to move them that much back you could try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622858 since it still keeps the reverting movement but just not as much
21:12 _Meep_: yea i'll go with 2nd one
21:12 _Meep_: xd
21:12 DTM9 Nowa: =w=b
21:14 DTM9 Nowa: 00:33:413 (2) - This could be a little bit more curved to meet the curveture of the slider before it
21:14 _Meep_: done xd
21:17 DTM9 Nowa: 00:31:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I know that this can be played just fine but some of the movement you have used here you did not suit here 00:40:913 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - for some reason
21:18 DTM9 Nowa: so maybe you could choose to do the little bit harder version (first one) or the version utilizing straight flow (second one) for both of the patterns?
21:18 DTM9 Nowa: 00:40:913 (1,1) - Also a double NC which you did not do on the first one
21:18 _Meep_: ok moved 00:32:189 (5) - to the right so as to not make the pattern to hard
21:19 _Meep_: I think I rather do the 2nd version
21:19 _Meep_: straight flow seems more fitting
21:19 DTM9 Nowa: Umm i'd personally say that moving the 5 doesn't really help
21:19 _Meep_: oshit
21:19 DTM9 Nowa: One minute i'll show what i exactly mean
21:21 _Meep_: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622938
21:21 _Meep_: changed to this
21:21 _Meep_: placed the triple topleft of the wave slider
21:21 _Meep_: placed note 5 above it
21:21 DTM9 Nowa: I guess that would work
21:22 DTM9 Nowa: I'll draw you something still so you understand why i pointed it out
21:22 _Meep_: its plays well i guess
21:22 _Meep_: sure
21:24 DTM9 Nowa: The placement of the 2|3|4 may force the player into a circular flow so the movement would end up looking like this http://puu.sh/uTqO9/a1f3cbc0cf.png
21:24 DTM9 Nowa: The transition from 4 to 5 and 5 to 6 would be quite awkwardly feeling after that
21:24 _Meep_: Yea,kinda get what you mean,saw testplayers had some trouble with it
21:25 DTM9 Nowa: Personally i'd say that people who understand they do not need circular flow do it just fine but it usually tricks people to do that
21:26 _Meep_: I mean,the whole map is pretty much in smooth flow
21:26 _Meep_: until that point
21:26 _Meep_: therefore it may feel mroe confusing
21:26 DTM9 Nowa: Pretty much yeah
21:27 DTM9 Nowa: Another indirect concern was the quick constant changing in the straight flow on here 00:32:189 (5,6,7,1) - but it's not like that bad
21:27 DTM9 Nowa: Doable, may not be the optimal choice but doable
21:28 _Meep_: it would be hard to make it aesthetically pleasing and because I wanted that kind of 'reverse flow because its a new part' kind of thing
21:28 DTM9 Nowa: Yeah and it works nicely by that way
21:29 _Meep_: any other bigger issues?
21:30 DTM9 Nowa: I'm trying to message three people at the same time .-.
21:30 DTM9 Nowa: It takes a sec to write stuff down
21:30 _Meep_: oshit LOL
21:30 _Meep_: actually i gtg go XD
21:30 DTM9 Nowa: fak
21:31 DTM9 Nowa: I'll cont to the thread
21:31 _Meep_: so if you have any issues,post em on the thread when ur free XD
21:31 _Meep_: nvm then
21:31 _Meep_: next time xd
21:31 _Meep_: dw i have it all savelogged

Cont from IRC mod

00:44:434 (6,1) - 00:46:576 (3,4) - 00:49:331 (4,5) - I don't really see a reason to use this kind of low DS on a respectively dense part (exceptionally the last pair of objects since the 5 is mapped on a damn cymbal), maybe you could open the ideology little bit more behind these

00:50:709 (1,2,1) - Maybe space these all equally?

00:56:831 (1,2,3) - and 01:06:627 (1,2,3) - You could even out the spacing here aswell since the second slider is much closer to the donut slider than the outer curved slider Spacing differences shouldn't matter, just make it look like a nice wi-fi icon

01:25:607 (1,2) - Since these two are mapped on a similar vocal beat wouldn't it be a good idea to stack them and after that start some kind of a jumpy pattern?

That's all i found from the expert xd GL my man

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-03-22T10:51:07+00:00

DendyMudak wrote:
H e l l o T h e r e!

Expert
00:11:219 (5,1) - seems pretty uncomfortable when you playing it, maybe you can just make it spaced a bit? If I do people may confuse it with a 3/4 slider so no
00:08:923 (3,1) - maybe you will stack them, like on 00:05:250 (3,1)? they are twp dofferent things tho ._.
00:13:515 (3,4,5) - make 1/2 beats little bit spaced and make them look like triangle, as the rhythm go on its very changed on 00:15:811 (2,3,4,5,6) but sound is clearly the same Fixed
00:18:260 (2,3) - suggestion, maybe you can make it oval flow? idk what that is and feels weird ==
00:31:882 (2,3,4) - make them less stack, like in 00:32:342 (6,7) The less stacking on the first one is because I wanted to emphasize more on the 2nd triple than the first,making them both the same would be boring and would not reflect the song well
01:19:025 (1,2) - you can improve your flow Intended
00:54:536 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:08:617 (3,4) - make it blanket No reason to do so, the previous jumps are pretty high in DS and if i were to blanket this one it would feel out of place.

gl in further mapping

Kami-senpai wrote:
moddu desu

naisu qt bg

Expert
00:02:954 (1) - might look a little less weird if you did it like this nah ;/

00:21:627 (2) - might be better flow if ctrl g people would be confused about where the next slider would be if I do that,so rather not

00:32:342 (6,7,1) - maybe straighten this out. the curve right now makes 7 sort of seem out of place Fixed

00:37:699 (2) - NC here maybe to help with 1/1 gap, 00:38:005 (1) - NC off here and 00:38:617 (3) - NC on here fixed

00:42:903 (3) - 1/1 gap here seems really sudden and feels sort of weird, there's also a guitar sound on the red tick so i think it would be better as 1/2 slider vocals

00:44:434 (6,1,2) - small gap plus stack makes it play sort of weird and cramped, I would just unstack. Also 00:44:587 (1) - NC off here and 00:44:740 (2) - NC on here moved a tiny bit, no NC changes because the sudden NC on the red tick is to show a new 'part' of the vocals.

00:46:270 (2,2) - stack maybe Fixed... lol

00:52:240 (2,3,4) - such a sudden big jump OwO maybe just make 00:52:087 (1,2) - bigger so its not too big of a shock Fixed a bit -.-

00:55:607 (1) - maybe move this so the slider head isnt covered by 00:54:995 (1) - ? sort of messy looking rn Fixed

01:20:556 (2,3) - ctrl g these maybe. i don't really like how the linear jumps play at this part since it's still kiai time and pretty intense Fixed

can't find anything with hard diff cuz im a noob

osu needs more love live

DTM9 Nowa wrote:

irc log

20:57 *DTM9 Nowa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1243280 u's - Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size) [Expert]]
20:57 DTM9 Nowa: Here we go baybe
20:58 *_Meep_ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1243280 u's - Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size) [Expert]]
20:58 _Meep_: negative offset
20:58 *_Meep_ ok_hand:
20:58 _Meep_: xd
20:58 DTM9 Nowa: :ok_hand:
20:59 DTM9 Nowa: Not sure if the expert as a difficulty name is fitting since it's more like an insane/another for what the song/BPM suggests
20:59 _Meep_: safest mapping 2k17
20:59 _Meep_: lolo
20:59 _Meep_: nono
20:59 _Meep_: look at beatmap desc
20:59 _Meep_: u will know why
20:59 DTM9 Nowa: I should educate myself more with these fucking game difficulties
20:59 DTM9 Nowa: kms
21:00 _Meep_: XD
21:00 _Meep_: its fine
21:02 DTM9 Nowa: 00:03:872 (1) - I personally don't think the NC fits here.. Maybe you could NC 00:04:178 (2) - as it would be more fitting for it by begin mapped on a cymbal or just leave out the NCs once and for all for that pattern?
21:02 _Meep_: hmm
21:02 _Meep_: removed then xd
21:02 _Meep_: and nc'd 00:01:729 (3) -
21:03 _Meep_: q00:04:178 (3) - this too
21:03 DTM9 Nowa: 00:02:954 (1,1,2) - I'd personally see these as a single pattern thus a single combo but you do what you do
21:04 _Meep_: whatevs ;/ rankable in both ways xd
21:05 DTM9 Nowa: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-7MJdeIZb3w Prepare your holes and put that song to play on the background since...
21:05 DTM9 Nowa: 00:02:954 (1,2) - the first bump(s) are not exactly in the same spot 
21:05 _Meep_: LOL
21:06 _Meep_: moved down some pixels to fit
21:06 DTM9 Nowa: xd
21:06 _Meep_: lele
21:07 DTM9 Nowa: Just a thought but these 00:19:025 (2,3) - could follow similar style of repeating the movement like here 00:17:801 (1,2) - 
21:07 _Meep_: hmm
21:07 _Meep_: true but
21:07 _Meep_: how ;/
21:09 DTM9 Nowa: Just some way that the player has to go roughly back to where they started the slider from, for (bad) example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622834
21:10 _Meep_: ok done
21:10 _Meep_: idk if this makes it more confusing :thinking:
21:11 DTM9 Nowa: It uses a similar style that you did for similar stylish vocals
21:12 _Meep_: yea
21:12 _Meep_: kk then,will do
21:12 DTM9 Nowa: If you don't want to move them that much back you could try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622858 since it still keeps the reverting movement but just not as much
21:12 _Meep_: yea i'll go with 2nd one
21:12 _Meep_: xd
21:12 DTM9 Nowa: =w=b
21:14 DTM9 Nowa: 00:33:413 (2) - This could be a little bit more curved to meet the curveture of the slider before it
21:14 _Meep_: done xd
21:17 DTM9 Nowa: 00:31:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I know that this can be played just fine but some of the movement you have used here you did not suit here 00:40:913 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - for some reason
21:18 DTM9 Nowa: so maybe you could choose to do the little bit harder version (first one) or the version utilizing straight flow (second one) for both of the patterns?
21:18 DTM9 Nowa: 00:40:913 (1,1) - Also a double NC which you did not do on the first one
21:18 _Meep_: ok moved 00:32:189 (5) - to the right so as to not make the pattern to hard
21:19 _Meep_: I think I rather do the 2nd version
21:19 _Meep_: straight flow seems more fitting
21:19 DTM9 Nowa: Umm i'd personally say that moving the 5 doesn't really help
21:19 _Meep_: oshit
21:19 DTM9 Nowa: One minute i'll show what i exactly mean
21:21 _Meep_: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622938
21:21 _Meep_: changed to this
21:21 _Meep_: placed the triple topleft of the wave slider
21:21 _Meep_: placed note 5 above it
21:21 DTM9 Nowa: I guess that would work
21:22 DTM9 Nowa: I'll draw you something still so you understand why i pointed it out
21:22 _Meep_: its plays well i guess
21:22 _Meep_: sure
21:24 DTM9 Nowa: The placement of the 2|3|4 may force the player into a circular flow so the movement would end up looking like this http://puu.sh/uTqO9/a1f3cbc0cf.png
21:24 DTM9 Nowa: The transition from 4 to 5 and 5 to 6 would be quite awkwardly feeling after that
21:24 _Meep_: Yea,kinda get what you mean,saw testplayers had some trouble with it
21:25 DTM9 Nowa: Personally i'd say that people who understand they do not need circular flow do it just fine but it usually tricks people to do that
21:26 _Meep_: I mean,the whole map is pretty much in smooth flow
21:26 _Meep_: until that point
21:26 _Meep_: therefore it may feel mroe confusing
21:26 DTM9 Nowa: Pretty much yeah
21:27 DTM9 Nowa: Another indirect concern was the quick constant changing in the straight flow on here 00:32:189 (5,6,7,1) - but it's not like that bad
21:27 DTM9 Nowa: Doable, may not be the optimal choice but doable
21:28 _Meep_: it would be hard to make it aesthetically pleasing and because I wanted that kind of 'reverse flow because its a new part' kind of thing
21:28 DTM9 Nowa: Yeah and it works nicely by that way
21:29 _Meep_: any other bigger issues?
21:30 DTM9 Nowa: I'm trying to message three people at the same time .-.
21:30 DTM9 Nowa: It takes a sec to write stuff down
21:30 _Meep_: oshit LOL
21:30 _Meep_: actually i gtg go XD
21:30 DTM9 Nowa: fak
21:31 DTM9 Nowa: I'll cont to the thread
21:31 _Meep_: so if you have any issues,post em on the thread when ur free XD
21:31 _Meep_: nvm then
21:31 _Meep_: next time xd
21:31 _Meep_: dw i have it all savelogged

Cont from IRC mod

00:44:434 (6,1) - 00:46:576 (3,4) - 00:49:331 (4,5) - I don't really see a reason to use this kind of low DS on a respectively dense part (exceptionally the last pair of objects since the 5 is mapped on a damn cymbal), maybe you could open the ideology little bit more behind these Fixed the first two pairs,the third one is staying since I wanted to copy the previous sliders, the part isn't THAT intense compared to the next few jumsp and I see no need to simply raise the DS because its a clap

00:50:709 (1,2,1) - Maybe space these all equally? Fixed,but blame stacking for that one pixel off error ==

00:56:831 (1,2,3) - and 01:06:627 (1,2,3) - You could even out the spacing here aswell since the second slider is much closer to the donut slider than the outer curved slider Spacing differences shouldn't matter, just make it look like a nice wi-fi icon eh.... done

01:25:607 (1,2) - Since these two are mapped on a similar vocal beat wouldn't it be a good idea to stack them and after that start some kind of a jumpy pattern? hmm,I wanted the song to end in the middle, and going with the 120 angles would be best because its comfortable for players to play

That's all i found from the expert xd GL my man

Thanks for the mod guys!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2017-03-23T12:29:48+00:00

aaaaaaaaa

e
00:01:729 (2,1,2) - im prefer you put 1/2 reverse slider cause 3 circle on red tick its hard to read it/click it for newbie
00:12:597 (1) - circle here and 1/1 slider on the next white tick (the rhtyhm a bit awkward here cause its not really fit with the music)
00:22:393 (1) - ^
00:28:668 - the slider should be started here cause the vocal and drum looks strong here
00:30:046 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm http://prnt.sc/enhc6b for emphatize the intrument well
00:39:689 (1,2) - newbie player will confused if you put the slider on red tick suddenly
00:46:576 (1,2) - reverse it for make it a bit easier to read it
00:49:485 - the slider should be start here (listen carefully,the vocal and intrument strong here)
00:56:372 (1) - 3/2 reverse slider here for emphatize the vocal and cymball more
01:06:168 (1) - 3/2 reverse slider here (for vocal and intrument too at the red tick)
01:10:301 - the vocal and intrument looks strong here
01:12:903 (3) - 3/2 reverse slider here for better rhythm (the vocal seems strong for this one)
01:17:801 (3) - ^
01:19:025 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm http://prnt.sc/enhfml
01:21:474 (1) - i think you tried to emphatize the intrument here but its really accurate.the second cymbal at - 01:22:546 and the third cymbal at 01:23:770
01:24:536 (2) - reverse slider here for emphatize the drum roll at 01:25:454 -
01:26:372 (1) - the slider should be ended on big white tick (the vocal stop there)

gl

Pachiru

osu! Alumni

2,957 posts

Joined June 2013

Pachiru 2017-04-01T20:33:32+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
aaaaaaaaa

e Next time please at least write "ez" to know, because I was searching for the mod during ages...
00:01:729 (2,1,2) - im prefer you put 1/2 reverse slider cause 3 circle on red tick its hard to read it/click it for newbie It's impossible to do a reverse for this type of rhythm, don't worry I tried before your mod.
00:12:597 (1) - circle here and 1/1 slider on the next white tick (the rhtyhm a bit awkward here cause its not really fit with the music)
00:22:393 (1) - ^ Not fixed, because I tried, and I didn't liked the rhythm. And also because I want to keep this note 00:23:617 (3) - clickable.
00:28:668 - the slider should be started here cause the vocal and drum looks strong here That would be to hard and unpredictable for a player to click on this slider, since this part is pretty full of clickable white ticks.
00:30:046 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm http://prnt.sc/enhc6b for emphatize the intrument well Didn't changed, because I wanted to keep that 00:30:964 (3) - reverse slider, due to the background sound, and to me it looks good like that.
00:39:689 (1,2) - newbie player will confused if you put the slider on red tick suddenly
00:46:576 (1,2) - reverse it for make it a bit easier to read it I didn't fixed the slider for the moment. But I think I'll fix it if further mods ask me to.
00:49:485 - the slider should be start here (listen carefully,the vocal and intrument strong here) I want to avoid 1/2 gap as much as possible, so no.
00:56:372 (1) - 3/2 reverse slider here for emphatize the vocal and cymball more Nope, because I don't want to use hard rhythm, because I think that the diff is hard enough.
01:06:168 (1) - 3/2 reverse slider here (for vocal and intrument too at the red tick) Same.
01:10:301 - the vocal and intrument looks strong here Yes, but that would be very hard to play for an Easy diff.
01:12:903 (3) - 3/2 reverse slider here for better rhythm (the vocal seems strong for this one)
01:17:801 (3) - ^ No, because there is no reason to do it, since I used a basic 1/1 rhythm, and that fit pretty good.
01:19:025 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm http://prnt.sc/enhfml I prefer my rhythm since it's easier, and it fit good with this situation, since it's calm.
01:21:474 (1) - i think you tried to emphatize the intrument here but its really accurate.the second cymbal at - 01:22:546 and the third cymbal at 01:23:770 Kept this slider, because I like it the way how is it emphasize the song, with the slider curves, and since it's an calm part, I dont' want to make something hard here.
01:24:536 (2) - reverse slider here for emphatize the drum roll at 01:25:454 -
01:26:372 (1) - the slider should be ended on big white tick (the vocal stop there)

gl

Thanks for modding, but next time, try to use a better form (like lists) for mods, because it was pretty hard to answer to it, also try to go further in your mods to make the mapper understand well you wanna say, because sometimes I was like "meh what he wants me to change ;-;" you see? Otherwise, there was a lot of interesting stuffs.
Arigato~

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Title:Bokura wa Ima no Naka de (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:僕らは今のなかで (TV Size)
Artist:u's
ArtistUnicode:μ's
Creator:_Meep_
Version:Pachiru's Easy
Source:
Tags:
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BeatmapSetID:587139

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,008 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2017-04-07T16:45:25+00:00

Hi, here is the Oni guest difficulty as requested. (no kd)

https://puu.sh/vcuRO.rar

Please add my name to tags, thank you :3

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2017-04-09T06:07:44+00:00

I know you want to make the diff names according to the actual game, but naming the "insane" diff as Expert will cause alot of confusion here :/

expert
00:31:117 (1) - cud be more symmetrical at the end
00:39:076 (3,1) - this stack

00:51:015 (2,1) - ^
00:45:046 (3,5) - its better to stack these 2 instead?

easy
ok. some rhythms are skipping over strong beats here..
01:21:474 (1) - the repeat and end of the slider doesn't really follow the music at all here, please do something different
00:27:597 (1,2) - try

SPOILER

00:30:658 (2,3,4) -

SPOILER

00:45:352 (2,3) - try 3/2 repeat slider here
00:56:372 (1,2) - ^
01:12:903 (3,4) - ^
01:17:801 (3,4) - ^
00:55:301 - u can add circle
01:04:331 (1,2,3) - rhythm inconsistent 00:54:536 (1,2) -
01:06:168 (1,2) - 3/2 slider and circle - ok 01:06:168 (1,2,3,4) - this entire part is kinda inconsistent with the first part.
01:09:229 (1,2,3) -

SPOILER

01:19:025 (1,2,3) -

SPOILER

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-04-09T06:39:17+00:00

H E L L O T H E R E

Kin's Normal

00:16:270 (3,1) - sounds undermapped
00:26:066 (3,1) - ^
00:46:882 (7,1) - ^
01:18:260 (4) - move this alittle bit upward

Hard

00:43:362 (3,4) - blanket?
Idk your hard diff is soo clean cant really fnd that much mistakes xd

Expert

00:02:954 (1) - weird slider
00:36:780 (1) - ^
00:05:250 (3,1) - why not overlap this with the sliderend?
00:12:138 (3,1,2) - stack?
00:31:882 (2,3,4) - stack this
00:32:342 (6,7,1) - ^
00:41:678 (1,2,3) - ^
00:42:138 (5,6,1) - ^
00:42:903 (3,4) - overlap this
00:53:311 (1,2) - ^
01:03:107 (1,2) - ^
00:48:719 (2,3) - put some flow into this I guess?
00:49:485 (1,2) - blanket?

Gudluck and also dunt forget that M4M xd

Swell

119 posts

Joined October 2013

Swell 2017-04-09T11:14:38+00:00

Hey there, random mod cause I'm bored. Only doing the Expert diff cause I'm bad at explaining things for other diffs rn lol.

Expert

00:21:321 (1) - 00:36:780 (1) - Regarding 00:21:321 (1) - Here is weird cause you have the first slider, and the same sound happens for the next 2 but they are represented through simple shapes and kinda messes with the cursor movement. As 1 is slower due to how the slider has to travel compared to 2 and 3.
Next is 00:36:780 (1) - This slider is weird cause you end up sitting at the base of the slider for a bit without any real reason to do so. You end up ignoring other vocals for intensity. So why try to do so for the backup all of sudden? I think removing the red points near the sliderhead would feel better to play

00:30:658 (4,5,1) - So I'm unsure about this one. But 4 covers up the reverse tail of 1, this may lead to people breaking as they head for 5 and not notice the reverse in time by the time they reach that point. Could warrant some discussion imo.

00:53:311 (1,2) - 01:03:107 (1,2) - I'm guessing you have the sudden stop in motion here for the bells? The issue here is that the bells happen more than one time. So you can either A.) Try to emphasize the bell more than just the single hit-circle here. You don't follow up on that second bell at all so it kinda feels awkward to play through the map expecting the hit for the next bell but it never happens since you go back to vocals. Or B.) You just focus completely on the vocals. I think you could get away with this as the vocal is extended and it would feel more natural to be moving as it's just what we've been doing the whole time up until this point.

anna apple

1,245 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-04-10T11:01:51+00:00

kds pls

General

nice Source/ Tags
hitsounding is below basic in most sections because you don't have a kick sound, you mainly just clap every now and then.

Expert

00:16:423 (6) - this should be NC because of how you do other ncs, for a song like this it would make most sense if you just used regular downbeat NCs since there isn't much special with the red ticks you decided to nc.
00:13:362 (2,3,4,5) - comparing this rhythm to 00:14:127 (2,3,4) - one is just filler to the drum sounds on one ONLY maps the vocals you shouldn't switch ideas like this. also in future parts you focus on vocals so you should proabbly change the first part.
00:29:434 (6,7) - you have tended to make vocals clickable so putting them to slider ends in this part doens't match with prior parts.
00:31:117 (1) - I don't think 4 disapears quickly enough for the reverse arrow of 1 to be visible in time for the player to be able to read it.
00:32:342 (6,7,1) - this looks like you didn't notice it, so what happens is the green point that changes SV affects what the actual distance numbers mean, so for lower sv, a distance of 1.0 could be a distance of .5 in the sv used prior. make these even u fuk
00:33:719 (1) - if you are going for the vocals focus you shouldn't skip over beats like 00:34:178 - 00:37:087 - and 00:37:240 -
00:36:780 (1) - this shape has a negative impact on gameplay and doesn't match overall slider designs
00:39:689 (1) - why does this have a bump, there is no change where your bump is.
00:42:903 - why stop motion for a 1/1 gap when the song is still continuing
00:53:311 (1) - 01:03:107 (1) - there shouldn't be a stop in motion here since the vocal here is the same vocal 00:53:617 (2) - . Also if you are "stopping because of the bells" you failed to execute this on the other bell sounds that occur 00:53:923 - 00:54:536 - 00:54:995 - etc

Hard

why don't you use the same custom hitsound as in top diff? soft-hitclap.wav
00:11:525 (1,2,3) - you can make a jump to this, but I would avoid making it look so similar to the 1/1 gap you have here 00:12:138 (3,1) -
00:49:944 (2,3) - how come you only really make 2 spots with noticeable spacing empahsis like this

Pachiru's Easy

00:12:597 (1) - you make the pickup beat clickable and then the strong downbeat indicating a new phrase on the repeat of this slider. 00:12:903 - should be clickable.
00:28:515 (2) - you should make the gap to this 3/2 instead of 1/1 because the strong beat of vocals and instrumentals exists on the red tick here 00:28:668 -
00:30:964 (3) - similarly this slider ends up skipping strong beats on red ticks also to map weaker sounds even though it seems in your interest to map these stronger sounds after referencing the way you made your intro
00:47:495 - 00:47:189 - 00:55:301 - forcing symmetry causes you to skip strong sounds like these.

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-04-13T06:59:34+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
I know you want to make the diff names according to the actual game, but naming the "insane" diff as Expert will cause alot of confusion here :/

expert
00:31:117 (1) - cud be more symmetrical at the end TRIED
00:39:076 (3,1) - this stack :(
00:51:015 (2,1) - ^ :(
00:45:046 (3,5) - its better to stack these 2 instead? fixed

JeirYagtama wrote:
H E L L O T H E R E

Expert
00:02:954 (1) - weird slider
00:36:780 (1) - ^
00:05:250 (3,1) - why not overlap this with the sliderend?
00:12:138 (3,1,2) - stack?
00:31:882 (2,3,4) - stack this
00:32:342 (6,7,1) - ^
00:41:678 (1,2,3) - ^
00:42:138 (5,6,1) - ^
00:42:903 (3,4) - overlap this
00:53:311 (1,2) - ^
01:03:107 (1,2) - ^
00:48:719 (2,3) - put some flow into this I guess?
00:49:485 (1,2) - blanket?
Gudluck and also dunt forget that M4M xd
i dont see any reason to change any of this lol,u gotta see the mapper's intention in doing something rather than trying to force your style into others
Swell wrote:
Hey there, random mod cause I'm bored. Only doing the Expert diff cause I'm bad at explaining things for other diffs rn lol.

Expert

00:21:321 (1) - 00:36:780 (1) - Regarding 00:21:321 (1) - Here is weird cause you have the first slider, and the same sound happens for the next 2 but they are represented through simple shapes and kinda messes with the cursor movement. As 1 is slower due to how the slider has to travel compared to 2 and 3.
Next is 00:36:780 (1) - This slider is weird cause you end up sitting at the base of the slider for a bit without any real reason to do so. You end up ignoring other vocals for intensity. So why try to do so for the backup all of sudden? I think removing the red points near the sliderhead would feel better to play

The first 3/4 slider should be fine,I didnt want to go for any consistency in tg that part and I dont see a need to.
The second slider however you do have a point, however I wanted the pause at the start of the slider because the vocals felt slow and I wanted to emphasize that part.

00:30:658 (4,5,1) - So I'm unsure about this one. But 4 covers up the reverse tail of 1, this may lead to people breaking as they head for 5 and not notice the reverse in time by the time they reach that point. Could warrant some discussion imo.

eh if kibbie doesn thave any problem with it I dont

00:53:311 (1,2) - 01:03:107 (1,2) - I'm guessing you have the sudden stop in motion here for the bells? The issue here is that the bells happen more than one time. So you can either A.) Try to emphasize the bell more than just the single hit-circle here. You don't follow up on that second bell at all so it kinda feels awkward to play through the map expecting the hit for the next bell but it never happens since you go back to vocals. Or B.) You just focus completely on the vocals. I think you could get away with this as the vocal is extended and it would feel more natural to be moving as it's just what we've been doing the whole time up until this point.

I mapped to the vocals(purely)[Other than the parts that come after that weird slider and kickslider] and therefore I want to have a pause so i can emphasize both the bells AND the vocals more.
bor wrote:
kds pls

General
nice Source/ Tags lel
hitsounding is below basic in most sections because you don't have a kick sound, you mainly just clap every now and then. lel

Expert
00:16:423 (6) - this should be NC because of how you do other ncs, for a song like this it would make most sense if you just used regular downbeat NCs since there isn't much special with the red ticks you decided to nc.fixed
00:13:362 (2,3,4,5) - comparing this rhythm to 00:14:127 (2,3,4) - one is just filler to the drum sounds on one ONLY maps the vocals you shouldn't switch ideas like this. also in future parts you focus on vocals so you should proabbly change the first part. Its 'spam of notes -> sliders to emphasize vocals -> spam of notes -> sliders to emphasize vocals', I think its consistent enough and doesn't need to be changed
00:29:434 (6,7) - you have tended to make vocals clickable so putting them to slider ends in this part doens't match with prior parts. mapped to the instruments because the notes after it are mainly to the instruments that ignore the vocals
00:31:117 (1) - I don't think 4 disapears quickly enough for the reverse arrow of 1 to be visible in time for the player to be able to read it. if kibbie is ok with it im ok with it ;/
00:32:342 (6,7,1) - this looks like you didn't notice it, so what happens is the green point that changes SV affects what the actual distance numbers mean, so for lower sv, a distance of 1.0 could be a distance of .5 in the sv used prior. make these even u fuk nu, why should I adapt to an sv change XD It doesn't matter whether the player is able to hit it or not lol
00:33:719 (1) - if you are going for the vocals focus you shouldn't skip over beats like 00:34:178 - 00:37:087 - and 00:37:240 - if you do realise, this part is one of the parts where their vocals had a pause and therefore it is difficult to predict the rhythm. therefore I used a reverse slider to play thuis so players won't have much emphasize the slider therefore it is fine why am i using so many therefore lol
00:36:780 (1) - this shape has a negative impact on gameplay and doesn't match overall slider designs emphasize them vocals
00:39:689 (1) - why does this have a bump, there is no change where your bump is. why not >_>
00:42:903 - why stop motion for a 1/1 gap when the song is still continuing how I felt the song should play, and also my style
00:53:311 (1) - 01:03:107 (1) - there shouldn't be a stop in motion here since the vocal here is the same vocal 00:53:617 (2) - . Also if you are "stopping because of the bells" you failed to execute this on the other bell sounds that occur 00:53:923 - 00:54:536 - 00:54:995 - etc vocals and my style

Hard
why don't you use the same custom hitsound as in top diff? soft-hitclap.wav FIXED
00:11:525 (1,2,3) - you can make a jump to this, but I would avoid making it look so similar to the 1/1 gap you have here 00:12:138 (3,1) - NO BUT NC CHANGE
00:49:944 (2,3) - how come you only really make 2 spots with noticeable spacing empahsis like this UH IDK WHY AM I USING CAPS LOL UH BECAUSE THE MUSIC RISES

THANKS GUYZ

phox

69 posts

Joined April 2011

phox 2017-04-15T16:11:22+00:00

was asked to testplay veyron's extra

00:51:321 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i don't get what this part is mapped to? it's definitely not the vocals (the 'ta' is even completely skipped over in the slider body), it's not the bells in the background either (a bell sound is also skipped over in the slider body as well)

no kds pls

anna apple

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Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-04-18T10:26:02+00:00

You should explain what "your style" decides when to stop the motion then instead of just stating "its my style", because when i look its just random. For the similarities that exist in the music there should exist more 1/1 gaps without motion as I have stated, if there was a specific reason the song does something I missed you need to state it, otherwise you are just inconsistent.

_Meep_

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Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-04-18T23:14:16+00:00

pyroflayer wrote:
You should explain what "your style" decides when to stop the motion then instead of just stating "its my style", because when i look its just random. For the similarities that exist in the music there should exist more 1/1 gaps without motion as I have stated, if there was a specific reason the song does something I missed you need to state it, otherwise you are just inconsistent.

Its how I intepret the song. People may have a view of 'oh this is the chorus better not put 1/1 gaps so that there is momentum and they dont stop moving',for me its because 'oh its the chorus,well who cares its still part of the song,because the vocals did stop so I'll stop it as well.

anna apple

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Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-04-19T04:38:36+00:00

_Meep_ wrote:
pyroflayer wrote:
You should explain what "your style" decides when to stop the motion then instead of just stating "its my style", because when i look its just random. For the similarities that exist in the music there should exist more 1/1 gaps without motion as I have stated, if there was a specific reason the song does something I missed you need to state it, otherwise you are just inconsistent.

Its how I intepret the song. People may have a view of 'oh this is the chorus better not put 1/1 gaps so that there is momentum and they dont stop moving',for me its because 'oh its the chorus,well who cares its still part of the song,because the vocals did stop so I'll stop it as well.

the vocal's clearly hold from 00:53 :158 - to 00:53:464 -

its the same logic with the vocal from 00:52:087 - to 00:52:852 - , in this case why not pause at the end of this vocal?

why not also pause in places like 00:54:689 - 00:55:148 -

its very clear in all these cases that each vocal is a hold

either ways its clear you are not only mapping the vocals, in case you are mapping more of a filler type rhythm, which would mean it would make most sense to map the sounds 00:53:464 - and 01:03:260 -

also with your logic maybe you should consider skipping more sounds where you could interpret pauses like 01:16:423 (5) - .

but as I said, there are held vocals at where you pause the music. just because there is no articulation there doesn't mean the sound isn't there. But again you are not mapping ONLY the vocals, you map a lot of drum/guitar sounds and sounds exist at those points. You can't just say "its how I interpret the song" because there are more locations in this song that are similar to the ones I point out and you chose to not create this 1/1 pause in movement and rhythm.

_Meep_

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Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-04-19T15:15:54+00:00

pyroflayer wrote:
You should explain what "your style" decides when to stop the motion then instead of just stating "its my style", because when i look its just random. For the similarities that exist in the music there should exist more 1/1 gaps without motion as I have stated, if there was a specific reason the song does something I missed you need to state it, otherwise you are just inconsistent.

Its how I intepret the song. People may have a view of 'oh this is the chorus better not put 1/1 gaps so that there is momentum and they dont stop moving',for me its because 'oh its the chorus,well who cares its still part of the song,because the vocals did stop so I'll stop it as well.

the vocal's clearly hold from 00:53 :158 - to 00:53:464 -

its the same logic with the vocal from 00:52:087 - to 00:52:852 - , in this case why not pause at the end of this vocal?

why not also pause in places like 00:54:689 - 00:55:148 -

its very clear in all these cases that each vocal is a hold

either ways its clear you are not only mapping the vocals, in case you are mapping more of a filler type rhythm, which would mean it would make most sense to map the sounds 00:53:464 - and 01:03:260 -

also with your logic maybe you should consider skipping more sounds where you could interpret pauses like 01:16:423 (5) - .

but as I said, there are held vocals at where you pause the music. just because there is no articulation there doesn't mean the sound isn't there. But again you are not mapping ONLY the vocals, you map a lot of drum/guitar sounds and sounds exist at those points. You can't just say "its how I interpret the song" because there are more locations in this song that are similar to the ones I point out and you chose to not create this 1/1 pause in movement and rhythm.

fuk i cant explain this from phone i need to get on my comp :thinking:

gime a few weeeks to reply so I can sneak off to a gaming cafe or somethin

_Meep_

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Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-04-22T05:28:41+00:00

pyroflayer wrote:
the vocal's clearly hold from 00:53 :158 - to 00:53:464 -

its the same logic with the vocal from 00:52:087 - to 00:52:852 - , in this case why not pause at the end of this vocal?

why not also pause in places like 00:54:689 - 00:55:148 -

its very clear in all these cases that each vocal is a hold

either ways its clear you are not only mapping the vocals, in case you are mapping more of a filler type rhythm, which would mean it would make most sense to map the sounds 00:53:464 - and 01:03:260 -

also with your logic maybe you should consider skipping more sounds where you could interpret pauses like 01:16:423 (5) - .

but as I said, there are held vocals at where you pause the music. just because there is no articulation there doesn't mean the sound isn't there. But again you are not mapping ONLY the vocals, you map a lot of drum/guitar sounds and sounds exist at those points. You can't just say "its how I interpret the song" because there are more locations in this song that are similar to the ones I point out and you chose to not create this 1/1 pause in movement and rhythm.

issue solved in irc on discord,so ok

CucumberCuc

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Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-04-22T18:07:34+00:00

Hi :3

[Pachiru's Easy]
00:07:699 (5) move slightly right
01:07:699 (3) move slightly down (Distance Snap complains)

[Kin's Normal]
00:40:454 (2,3) To make a closer ((Distance Snap complains)

[Hard]
00:43:974 (4,5) move slightly down or move end slider slightly up

[Expert]
Jumps to the beginning of the kiai I seem a bit big, make them closer

[Veyron's Extra]
It seems to me that CS 5,5 somehow too...

Cerulean Veyron

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Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2017-04-22T19:08:43+00:00

phox wrote:
00:51:321 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - i don't get what this part is mapped to? it's definitely not the vocals (the 'ta' is even completely skipped over in the slider body), it's not the bells in the background either (a bell sound is also skipped over in the slider body as well)

Neither the vocals nor the distinguished bells, there's another track of instrument that's going on. In which is the drums that kinda sounds a little bit low on volume (if you could hear it with a lower playback rate of course), pretty much closely to be a kind of a background music. It's one of the reasons that I were to map this part of rhythm with triple circles. And for the speed-up slider, I varied it in order to follow the ride sound which is still in track after the triples starting on 00:51:780 -. So having this kind of structure wouldn't hurt as an Extra difficulty as long as it follow the music correctly.

CucumberCuc wrote:
[Veyron's Extra]
It seems to me that CS 5,5 somehow too...

If you mean by the kiai being a bit jumpy with the current circle size, it sounds pretty much worthy to be a little jumpy along with the impact of the song in my opinion. Since the distance spacing is still not affected due to the change of slider velocity in the kiai part, or the small circles around their placements isn't close to being some random screen jumps or whatso, there's a possibility of being tolerable in gameplay.

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-04-22T23:01:36+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
easy
ok. some rhythms are skipping over strong beats here.. its my style
01:21:474 (1) - the repeat and end of the slider doesn't really follow the music at all here, please do something different its my style
00:27:597 (1,2) - try
SPOILER
its my style
00:30:658 (2,3,4) -
SPOILER
its my style
00:45:352 (2,3) - try 3/2 repeat slider here its my style
00:56:372 (1,2) - ^ its my style
01:12:903 (3,4) - ^ its my style
01:17:801 (3,4) - ^ its my style
00:55:301 - u can add circle its my style
01:04:331 (1,2,3) - rhythm inconsistent 00:54:536 (1,2) - its my style
01:06:168 (1,2) - 3/2 slider and circle - ok 01:06:168 (1,2,3,4) - this entire part is kinda inconsistent with the first part. its my style
01:09:229 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER
its my style
01:19:025 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER
its my style

thanks for the mod, applied everything, indeed the rhythm here was pretty cancer

azertyuiop^polikjuhtydsqEDHJUYKILOLIKJHGF

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Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2017-04-23T11:47:16+00:00

hi im modder c:

weeee

[Pachiru's Easy]

rip rhytms uh oh

00:00:658 (1,2) - can we just make these sliders? no need to have this as circles when we can have slider leniency instead (save the noob acc :c)
00:02:954 (1,2,1) - same here, you can just create a reverse slider
01:04:331 (1) - this should end here 01:04:331 (1) - and should be a reverse slider. as it is now, you create a reeeeaally awkward disconnect in rhythm with this 01:04:944 (2,3) - from 1/1 on downbeats to 1 1/2 on off beats, it can easily be fixed by changing your rhythm choice
01:16:270 (4) - remove this and make 01:15:352 (3) - a reverse slider. again, switching between downbeats, off beats, and on and off 1/1 rhythm is confusing even to people who can play higher than easy diffs
01:24:536 (2) - to bridge the gap between 01:25:760 (3) - better (both rhythmically and literally, there is a big ass gap in between them LOL), make this a reverse slider and just blanket 01:25:760 (3) - or smth idk LOL

Cute diff just fix your rhythms

[Expert]

~~Change diff name to Insane lol~~
the end of 00:09:076 (1) - can blanket 00:09:842 (3) - better for sure, like this: ... 00:08:923 (3) - can be moved around accordingly no issue
00:23:770 (1,2) - ctrl + right arrow x2 for my OCD plz c:

rename top diff to master if u want to use the original diff names for consistency u kno

its short cus im gya xd

Last edited by Yoshimaro 2017-04-23T11:50:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-04-23T11:49:46+00:00

- Yoshimaro - wrote:
hi im modder c:

weeee

Cute diff just fix your rhythms[/notice]

[Expert]
Change diff name to Insane lol see map desc lol
the end of 00:09:076 (1) - can blanket 00:09:842 (3) - better for sure, like this: ... 00:08:923 (3) - can be moved around accordingly no issue Fixed
00:23:770 (1,2) - ctrl + right arrow x2 for my OCD plz c:Fixed

its short cus im gya xd

thanks dad xd

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

_Meep_ 2017-04-23T19:04:12+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi :3
[Expert]
Jumps to the beginning of the kiai I seem a bit big, make them closer

this is what you call a proper difficulty spike

edit: forgot to edit last post sorry exdee

anna apple

1,245 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-04-24T03:21:13+00:00

_Meep_ wrote:
pyroflayer wrote:
the vocal's clearly hold from 00:53 :158 - to 00:53:464 -

its the same logic with the vocal from 00:52:087 - to 00:52:852 - , in this case why not pause at the end of this vocal?

why not also pause in places like 00:54:689 - 00:55:148 -

its very clear in all these cases that each vocal is a hold

either ways its clear you are not only mapping the vocals, in case you are mapping more of a filler type rhythm, which would mean it would make most sense to map the sounds 00:53:464 - and 01:03:260 -

also with your logic maybe you should consider skipping more sounds where you could interpret pauses like 01:16:423 (5) - .

but as I said, there are held vocals at where you pause the music. just because there is no articulation there doesn't mean the sound isn't there. But again you are not mapping ONLY the vocals, you map a lot of drum/guitar sounds and sounds exist at those points. You can't just say "its how I interpret the song" because there are more locations in this song that are similar to the ones I point out and you chose to not create this 1/1 pause in movement and rhythm.
issue solved in irc on discord,so ok

I don't see changes ?

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2017-04-29T08:25:43+00:00

very soon

tm

Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Silky 2017-05-02T15:40:19+00:00

my english is bad, i hope ur understanding

Pachiru

00:31:423 (46,47) - try this? i think this rhythm is more fit in vocal than current one.
SPOILER
00:45:352 (62,63,64,65,66) - umm... imo, this really weird, i dont recommend to place slider tail on downbeat(or strong sound) .
SPOILER
01:00:046 (81,82) - ^
SPOILER

Kin

AR-1?
00:21:321 (1) - offscreen(very little tho)
SPOILER
01:12:597 (1) - is this nc really necessary...?

Hard

00:12:444 (4) - add nc?
00:19:485 (2,3,4,1) - imo this overlap is a bit hard to read for hard players, i recommend to unstack them.
00:44:587 (7,1) - ds is a bit off
SPOILER
00:49:944 (2,3) - imo this jump is too difficult for Hard diff, you should nerf this or try this
SPOILER

Expert

01:24:995 - add finish?

gl

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2017-05-04T13:06:58+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
[Kin's Normal]
00:40:454 (2,3) To make a closer ((Distance Snap complains) it will only make it harder with inconsistent spacing

Kanau wrote:
Kin
AR-1? changed to 5.2
00:21:321 (1) - offscreen(very little tho) ye, fixed
SPOILER
01:12:597 (1) - is this nc really necessary...? I forgot to remove it after copy paste. Fixed
gl

thanks for mod!

Normal Updated

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Dragontail

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Dragontail 2017-05-11T02:45:44+00:00

Lol I forgot to mod.

Pachiru's Easy
- Why no NC's?
- Spacing is off, use distance snap.
- 00:29:434, try making it using waypoints, it is a strong sound
-00:49:638 do not use this slider shape please, not very easy to read.
- Stack note onto slider at 00:55:301, undermapped section
- General: Make strong sounds with curves or waypoints normal sliders do not show any strongness.
- I would reccomend stacking notes over sliders a little more often

Kin's Normal
- At 01:11:678 move note to left a bit and change slider so that it is facing in a left slant. For flow purposes. Also change sliders after that to fit maybe?
- Delete last note because that is overmap and make spinner longer

By the way, your hard is too difficult so you need an advanced. Good luck with your mapset!

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