fhana - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY

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Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Kencho wrote:

m4m
圖有進步,以下是強迫症摸
[Easy]
  1. 01:15:766 (1) - 太長了這個折返,換成普通的1/1、2/1物件吧
clear
[OblivioN's Normal]
  1. 00:30:210 (4,5) - 沒疊好clear
  2. 00:43:322 (6,7) - 01:00:433 (6,7) - 01:14:655 (6,7) - ^
clear
[Hard]
  1. 00:31:655 (3) - 這個藍線起的折返很奇怪,我建議00:31:655 - 用圓圈,然後折返改成三下clear
  2. 按照你00:46:655 (1,2) - 的NC,00:48:433 (5,1) - NC應該互換,順便00:49:099 - 也要NCclear
  3. 01:08:211 (5,1) - 包的好難看啊,還是說沒特意要包,如果是沒特意那就把01:08:655 (1,2) - 往下放,這種半包不包的感覺最不好了clear
  4. 01:12:211 (1,2) - 我建議疊一下,因為你後面01:13:099 (3,4) - 疊了,不然這個地方看起來不夠一致。當然疊完之後34要往右移一點clear
  5. 01:13:544 (4,1) - DS太遠了,縮小一點,或者你可以把01:13:988 (1,2) - 旋轉逆時針90度。另外01:14:433 (2,3) - 你可以用同一個弧度的滑條,這樣兩個不同弧度的看著難受而且沒有一致性。Eg: http://puu.sh/vkGYc/147691d476.jpg
clear
[Dynamix's Insane]
  1. https://puu.sh/vkH8R/df384941fa.png 朋友,一大堆重複綠線啊clear,我的锅。
  2. 01:24:655 (1) - 歪了,和前面四個圈不在一條直線上
[Another]
  1. 感覺叫Insane會比較好,Another就變成好像這個set不是自己的clear
  2. 00:39:766 (2) - 感覺放的和下一個物件離得有點遠,往下放一點clear
  3. 00:40:988 - 這裡有個vocal,空了怪難受的,建議加個圓圈疊在00:41:099 (1) - 上(記得00:40:877 (3) - 也要疊上),或者00:40:877 (3) - 直接改成滑條clear
  4. 00:43:544 (3,6,1) - 明顯沒疊好,但其實問題是出在00:43:322 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個梗你沒有用複製的方法而是手擺所以物件並不在一條直線上,https://puu.sh/vkFVL/300aae3258.jpg 要弄在一條直線上的物件很簡單,放好了12然後複製一份,把複製的1放到原本2的位置,然後刪掉複製的1,這樣複製的2就變成了3,然後再複製一遍,如此類推,https://puu.sh/vkG0D/5f26ea4f04.jpg 完成之後的效果。然後你再把00:43:766 (5) - 重新拉一下然後複製到00:44:211 (1) - ctrl+H+J,就可以得到完美的梗了clear
  5. 00:46:544 (7,8) - 由於前面三個都是從上往下,你這第四個變成從下往上就顯得一致性不夠好了,我建議一整組考慮換個方法,比如說四方形或者像你後面00:47:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 兩個從左到右,兩個從右到左。 Eg: https://puu.sh/vkFFq/8d52edd5e7.jpgclear
  6. 00:45:877 (3,5,7) - 這幾個可以分別NC一下以示強調,00:47:654 (3,5,7) - sameclear
  7. 01:20:655 (2,3,4,5,1) - 弄個正五角形吧,現在這個形狀還有滑條的形狀導致這個梗一來不好打二來不好看,用Ctrl+Shift+D生成一個1.0x DS和54度的五角形,然後換一下順序,再重新拉一下滑條就可以了。我個人建議像 https://puu.sh/vkFr1/a0af3beab7.jpg 這樣的不錯,滑條用三點就夠了
clear
感谢球爷QAQ
Kencho
@Kamiya 你沒更新人哥的難度啊
另外Insane裡面00:43:766 (5) - 和00:44:210 (1) - 互換一下啊,像你原本的放的那樣,00:44:099 (6) - 疊到00:43:544 (3) -
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Kencho wrote:

@Kamiya 你沒更新人哥的難度啊
另外Insane裡面00:43:766 (5) - 和00:44:210 (1) - 互換一下啊,像你原本的放的那樣,00:44:099 (6) - 疊到00:43:544 (3) -脑子笨。。clear
记得昨天就更新的了

这下完了。 人哥打死我了要

重新更新了。
Kencho
Tags有問題
imouto's Extra: "kobayashi san chi no maidragon opening anime maid dragon OblivioN Karen Dynamix imoutosan PataMon gxytcgxytc"
"Pata-Mon" 這裡少了個 -
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Kencho wrote:

Tags有問題
imouto's Extra: "kobayashi san chi no maidragon opening anime maid dragon OblivioN Karen Dynamix imoutosan PataMon gxytcgxytc"
"Pata-Mon" 這裡少了個 -
改好啦~
Yuii-
Hey, just a really quick check because you're planning to push this forward.

Can you call someone to check the offset? I find it to be -3/-4 off (meaning, it should be -681/2).

Hitsounds on the Insane difficulty are inaudible. Bump them to 60%, at the very least. Currently they blend waaaay too much with the background music.
Double-check hitsounds on imouto's Extra, please. Stuff like 01:01:322 (5) - 01:04:321 (2) - 01:08:655 (1) - 01:21:988 (3) - 01:24:877 (2) - etc. etc. having no hitsounding whatsoever makes no sense. Hitsounds need to be rechecked on this difficulty before it gets iconned.
Something similar happens with OblivioN's Normal, check hitsounding on these two difficulties.
On Easy, the clap on tail at 01:20:210 - sounds really random, I would suggest you to remove it.

Hitsounding aside,
01:16:433 (1,2) - 01:19:988 (1,2) - on imouto's Extra. These two patterns are a massive difficulty spike due to how the break the spacing in such a short period of time. It would be nice if you could gather more opinions before pushing this forward.
00:56:655 (3,4,1) - on imouto's Extra. Visually speaking, this pattern looks quite bad, stacking kinda breaks the aesthetics.
@Dynamic: Check AiMod.

That's all.
Good luck with the mapset!
Fushimi Rio

Yuii- wrote:

Hey, just a really quick check because you're planning to push this forward.

Hitsounds on the Insane difficulty are inaudible. Bump them to 60%, at the very least. Currently they blend waaaay too much with the background music.
Double-check hitsounds on imouto's Extra, please. Stuff like 01:01:322 (5) - 01:04:321 (2) - 01:08:655 (1) - 01:21:988 (3) - 01:24:877 (2) - etc. etc. having no hitsounding whatsoever makes no sense. Hitsounds need to be rechecked on this difficulty before it gets iconned.
I could agree with most parts you mentioned... But 01:01:322 (5) - ? Even soft-sample of 90% volume is already quite loud, or more than just 'noticeable'. Besides the vocal on 01:01:322 - is obviously relatively weak, in order to stress the latter vocal on 01:01:544 - . I didn't see there's any reason to add additional hitsounds to emphasize the vocal or something else here.
Other parts were fixed.


Hitsounding aside,
01:16:433 (1,2) - 01:19:988 (1,2) - on imouto's Extra. These two patterns are a massive difficulty spike due to how the break the spacing in such a short period of time. It would be nice if you could gather more opinions before pushing this forward.
Generally speaking these whole pattern is as difficult as 00:15:322 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - or 00:47:322 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - . It feels like a difficulty spike because the former kiai is mapped in a easier way.
For myself I could play these two patterns easily... I used to ask some players to testplay it. Actually for most players they could follow the spacing change in their 2nd try (even 1st try), since they've met this kind of jumps in the former patterns. As for players who are not good at 270bpm single taps, reducing spacing won't change much unless I remove all those 1/4 patterns, which is rather meaningless.

00:56:655 (3,4,1) - on imouto's Extra. Visually speaking, this pattern looks quite bad, stacking kinda breaks the aesthetics.
ok

That's all.
Good luck with the mapset!
Kencho
Dynamix怎麼一直沒出現過呢,第一頁那幾個人的mod都沒回覆過,然後Normal也是,前面兩頁的mod都沒人回覆,也不知道是改了還是沒改,@Kamiya 如果是幫他們改,也要把前面幾個人的mod也回覆了,因為現在mapper有責任要回覆每個人的mod,上次沒注意就被strike了
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Yuii- wrote:

Hey, just a really quick check because you're planning to push this forward.

Can you call someone to check the offset? I find it to be -3/-4 off (meaning, it should be -681/2).checked,the offset is no problem.

Hitsounds on the Insane difficulty are inaudible. Bump them to 60%, at the very least. Currently they blend waaaay too much with the background music.
Something similar happens with OblivioN's Normal, check hitsounding on these two difficulties.clear,checked and remaked
On Easy, the clap on tail at 01:20:210 - sounds really random, I would suggest you to remove it.clear

Hitsounding aside,
01:16:433 (1,2) - 01:19:988 (1,2) - on imouto's Extra. These two patterns are a massive difficulty spike due to how the break the spacing in such a short period of time. It would be nice if you could gather more opinions before pushing this forward.
00:56:655 (3,4,1) - on imouto's Extra. Visually speaking, this pattern looks quite bad, stacking kinda breaks the aesthetics.
@Dynamic: Check AiMod.checked and deleted those

That's all.
Good luck with the mapset!
thank you for modding :)
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

kanor wrote:

[Dynamix]
Kiai的音效听起来挺违和的,感觉和gder下节奏的思路不太对得上......要不要试试让gder自己给一个音效吧

handsome muscle wrote:

CQ
谱面没什么问题,但是全图连个sv变化都没有,而且滑条速度普遍偏慢,有点对不起这歌的丰富节奏就先这样了

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M from karen


[Dynamix's Insane]
  1. 00:26:766 (4,5) - 这里节奏不太舒服,因为前面你是把vocal做成clickable的,比如00:26:544 (3) - 这样
  2. 01:02:766 - 前面感觉上也是更优先vocal,而且这里vocal密度不高所以这vocal更加突出了,还是clickable好
re了遍音效 没问题了

handsome muscle wrote:

Normal
00:30:210 (4,5) - 既然这图里这种1/2都没叠,这里就最好也不叠,其实nm一般都要叠的,但这歌bpm比较低,可以问一下别人clear
00:57:988 (1,2,3) - 低难度建议不要这样叠,还有blanket也有问题clear
blanket问题挺多的,有什么原因吗

因为OblivioN的号是被ban状态只能由我这个助理帮她回复。

CQ IN-GAME 确认过 所以我在这里统一回复了~ :)

thank you for modding
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

khy200610140 wrote:

insane diff以上的都好有挑戰性-0- 對小的太有挑戰性了Orz
好多地方都不知道說不說好 怕是有特別含義才放的這麼跳的0.0
[Hard]
這種00:01:766 (2,3) - ,00:05:322 (2,3) - ,00:08:877 (2,3) - 後面等等ds沒問題嗎 我覺得應該是刻意的OAO 我是覺得能玩但不知道新手(?)會不會覺得奇怪不会。
00:23:766 (1,2) - 試試把1和2的位置調換?
01:09:988 (4) - 飛出去了ww 要的效果
01:20:655 (3,4,5,6) - 試試疊在一起? 因為其他位置的4連都是疊在一起的

[another]
00:23:322 (3,4,5) - 試試3和4疊在5的一起 好像只有這個位置的2連是這個間距的(不知道有沒有看錯不需要吧,感觉节奏合适



gl :)
谢谢摸
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Kencho wrote:

Dynamix怎麼一直沒出現過呢,第一頁那幾個人的mod都沒回覆過,然後Normal也是,前面兩頁的mod都沒人回覆,也不知道是改了還是沒改,@Kamiya 如果是幫他們改,也要把前面幾個人的mod也回覆了,因為現在mapper有責任要回覆每個人的mod,上次沒注意就被strike了
Dynamix我也在游戏碰到,碰到就问好了 回复工作我来做,OblivioN的号被ban,我能联系到本人就也是我替代回复。

都回复完毕~
Kencho
Hard忘了說點東西

01:19:321 - 這裡重音不該用滑條尾,所以01:19:099 (5,6) - 換一下比較好,就像你前面01:17:322 (5,1) - 一樣,然後記得NC從01:19:321 - 開始,不要在01:19:766 (1) - NC

01:22:877 (4) - NC

Edit : 00:22:766 (3) - 藍線折返沒改,和00:31:655 (3,1) - 一樣的,另外00:31:766 (1) - 不要NC
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Kencho wrote:

Hard忘了說點東西

01:19:321 - 這裡重音不該用滑條尾,所以01:19:099 (5,6) - 換一下比較好,就像你前面01:17:322 (5,1) - 一樣,然後記得NC從01:19:321 - 開始,不要在01:19:766 (1) - NCclear

01:22:877 (4) - NCclear
Edit : 00:22:766 (3) - 藍線折返沒改,和00:31:655 (3,1) - 一樣的,另外00:31:766 (1) - 不要NCclear
改好了 :)
Kencho
Looks good now
Bubbled!
Sotarks
o.o
Xexxar
Video quality here is pretty lacking. I suggest editing this to a higher quality version or using mine. Your filesize can be larger so use this video for better quality:

https://puu.sh/vsjG0/61e3afc4d5.avi (good video name)
Topic Starter
[Kamiya]

Xexxar wrote:

Video quality here is pretty lacking. I suggest editing this to a higher quality version or using mine. Your filesize can be larger so use this video for better quality:

https://puu.sh/vsjG0/61e3afc4d5.avi (good video name)
Thank you so much for your suggest :) But i think this video is too large than my video's size.(21MB's video maybe someone cant download it)So I do not change.(actually, I Can't Download it......... :?:?

Download it(Spend me 2hours....)ok upload it and Thank you so much for your suggest :)
Kencho
ok
Rebubbled!
Kibbleru
before i check this, can u increase the rhythm density in the kiai for easy diff otherwise spread wouldn't be that good
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