1. Add a pause-overlay to avoid skin mixing, please.
2. Those black bars in the BG look a bit odd, are those intentional?. I edited the BG a bit to remove them, here it is if you want to use it.
   
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  About the spinner-spam:

1. 00:30:444 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Spinners tend to be the most difficult object for rookies so for these ones I suggest to join 2 of them into a single one so it's a bit easier.
2. 01:16:666 (1,1,1,1) - For these ones the rhythm is way more easy to follow, plus there aren't any other objects after them, I guess there's no problem here.
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4. 01:11:111 (4) - A NC might be needed here, consider adding it.
5. 01:15:999 (1) - The current time of this slider seems a bit iffy, rookies will have to wait some seconds before hitting it so it will be really hard to hit it accurately due to the low AR. You should start this slider here: 01:15:555 - This will it will suit this diff better.

1. The current AR seems a bit too high sometimes. I think that due to the high BPM, AR:4 can work perfectly fine for this diff, consider using it.
2. 01:08:666 (2) - This circle was hard to see while playing, I strongly suggest to re-arrange the pattern to make the circle more visible. (All you need to do is select the patterns from here: 01:08:666 (2) - to here: 01:16:444 - and them move them some grid down)

1. 00:04:444 (3) - I didn't have problems with this while playing but you might want to fix this spacing. (Tweaking (2) a bit should be enough)
2. Quite nice, no major problems here.

1. I suggest to save AR:9 for [Champion] and use 8 for this one.
2. Woah, those sliders... nothing else worth pointing out~

1. Due to some hidden reverse arrows some repeating sliders might turn out unrankable, mainly these ones: 00:44:444 (1) & 01:15:999 (3,1,2,1). I'm not 100% sure if this diff will get affected even if it's going for approval, you better check those sliders with some BATs.

I suggest to save AR:9 for [Champion] and use 8 for this one.

Add a pause-overlay to avoid skin mixing, please.

Due to some hidden reverse arrows some repeating sliders might turn out unrankable, mainly these ones: 00:44:444 (1) & 01:15:999 (3,1,2,1). I'm not 100% sure if this diff will get affected even if it's going for approval, you better check those sliders with some BATs.

IMO the difficulty jump from [Advanced] to [Experienced] is too big.
And I mean playing it, not by star rating.
Aside that it's a pretty good mapset.
Star~

I am not so agree with using taiko hitsound here, original is still fine.

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When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file). The same logic applies to hitbursts, cursors, numbers, and anything else of this nature. If you didn't intend to skin an element in the set, then using the templateskin's version is okay. Setting a SkinPreference is also acceptable (e.g. forcing the default skin).

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