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Camellia feat. Nanahira - EDM Jumpers [OsuMania]

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Crumpey
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 9 February 2019 at 4:31:39 AM

Artist: Camellia feat. Nanahira
Title: EDM Jumpers
BPM: 145
Filesize: 5196kb
Play Time: 05:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. MX - 4Key (3.82 stars, 2817 notes)
Download: Camellia feat. Nanahira - EDM Jumpers
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[box=ChangeLog]Update 1: 17/3/2017 - Time to map! Begun intro (timed and checked)
Update 2: 17/3/2017 - Offset reset, fixed, 25 seconds mapped
Update 3: 17/3/2017 - Fixed notes that were juuust out of time, finished the into
Update 4: 18/3/2017 - Added first steam (47 seconds done)
Update 5: 18/3/2017 - Added second steam
Update 6: 18/3/2017 - Reworked second stream, getting player opinions
Update 7: 18/3/2017 - Removed 2 notes on second stream and continued on mapping (1:06 done)
Update 8: 19/3/2017 - Did later sections that followed the same bits, added a bit in the middle of the song, finished outro
Update 9: 20/3/2017 - Added more onto the first and second section, also added (Temporary) one handed trills at the end of the second section (awaiting player feedback)
Update 10: 21/3/2017 - Surprise, i finished the song (wooooo) there are a few parts of the song i find questionable myself and ill work on those in my free time. other then that...
Update 11: 21/3/2017 - randomly forgot notes, nice one me XD

We are ready for modding!!!!

Update 12: 23/3/2017 - (PotassiumF MOD) Advice was good and needed, song feels alot nice to play, especially in the ln sections, also added notes towards the end that the mod pointed out

Update 13: 15/4/2017 -(wamster2 MOD) almost all changes were implemented, solid mod

Update 14 : 30/5/2017 -(Asherz007's mod) took a while, all changes besides vocal mapping has been fixed thanks
Update 15 : 22/6/2017 - almost been a month, made kiai time interesting wooooaaaahhh stars everywhere

Update 16 : 21/1/2018 - 6months later almost HOLY SHIT I DIDNT RESPOND TO A MOD IN 7 MONTHS IM SO SORRY
I do plan to continue this. its a great song. look forward to maybe seeing more updates soon


Update 17 : 1/3/2018 - Small patterning revisions, returning to focus somewhat in improving this map

Update 18 : 1/3/2018 - More patterning revision during stream sections[

Update 19: 9/2/2019 - wow almost a fucking year later, lets atleast try and improve this
/box]
first ranked EDM Jumpers???
Lefrave
Oh~! Would be pleasing to see this ranked! Finish it, wanna mod it. lol

+1 random person willing to support the map.
Topic Starter
Crumpey
So long as i'm not too busy ill be working on this, thanks for your support ^u^.
Should be done within a week or two.

~looking forward to that mod ;)
PotassiumF
n a n a h i r a

irc memes
18:13 CrumpetFiddler: yo potass bby
18:13 *CrumpetFiddler is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1242241 Camellia feat. Nanahira - EDM Jumpers]
18:13 PotassiumF: hey fasm
18:13 PotassiumF: fam*
18:13 CrumpetFiddler: how u been
18:13 PotassiumF: good
18:16 CrumpetFiddler: eyy
18:17 PotassiumF: got the map now
18:17 PotassiumF: gonna play through it now
18:17 CrumpetFiddler: coolio
18:18 CrumpetFiddler: aaah
18:18 CrumpetFiddler: it wont let me spec
18:18 CrumpetFiddler: rip
18:18 CrumpetFiddler: o there we go
18:24 CrumpetFiddler: what the fuck
18:24 PotassiumF: lemme quickly go into edit
18:25 PotassiumF: releases like 00:18:861 - should be avoided imo
18:25 PotassiumF: it might make sense because of the music, but they feel bad to play
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: sh
18:26 PotassiumF: better to time them with the start of the next note
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: ah
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: just link them up ya think?
18:26 PotassiumF: yeah
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: also
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: this area
18:27 CrumpetFiddler: feels like shits missing
18:27 CrumpetFiddler: but i cant find what it is
18:27 CrumpetFiddler: v
18:27 CrumpetFiddler: 04:10:275 (250275|1,250275|3) -
18:27 PotassiumF: also in 00:15:654 - even though the sound emphasis is the same in the music the notes switch from 2 to 1
18:27 PotassiumF: and its like that for all of those parts
18:29 PotassiumF: i think that part is fine
18:30 PotassiumF: but if you want to add something you could add more LNs on the 2nd and 4th columns that come in after the 1st and 3rd column ones
18:31 PotassiumF: so like [1,3], 2, 4 or [1,3], 4, 2
18:31 CrumpetFiddler: hmm i think ill consider that
18:32 CrumpetFiddler: when that part came on was it odd to play or
18:32 CrumpetFiddler: nah
18:32 PotassiumF: one more thing also
18:32 PotassiumF: 03:29:102 -
18:32 PotassiumF: the notes just stop there
18:32 PotassiumF: kinda just feels/sounds weird
18:32 CrumpetFiddler: oh
18:32 PotassiumF: since the part is still going, but theres a sudden change
18:32 CrumpetFiddler: you think chuck some besides the ln
18:32 PotassiumF: in notes
18:33 PotassiumF: yeah maybe
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: cause i did consider that i just thought maybe after the chorus people needed a lil stamina break
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: but fuck em XD
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: ill do that
18:33 PotassiumF: obviously not much you can do with 2 columns tho :/
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: ill make it into one
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: thats not a massive dealk
18:33 PotassiumF: ah yeah
18:33 PotassiumF: that works
18:34 CrumpetFiddler: also with this note, what should i do with it?
18:34 CrumpetFiddler: 00:15:654 (15654|3) -
18:36 PotassiumF: maybe if you add another one on 1st column and then another one of the next on the 4th\
18:36 PotassiumF: in that case you leave the release timing as is
18:37 PotassiumF: only thing is then you would have to change the pattern at 00:13:792 -
18:37 PotassiumF: since it becomes way too much with another [1,4],[2,3] pattern soon after
18:40 CrumpetFiddler: alright that makes sense
18:40 CrumpetFiddler: somethin like this feel better?
18:40 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7633705
18:40 PotassiumF: ye i think that seems better
18:41 CrumpetFiddler: also trying to keep to the beat
18:41 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7633714
18:44 PotassiumF: lol
18:45 CrumpetFiddler: ill tweak it a bit
Topic Starter
Crumpey

PotassiumF wrote:

n a n a h i r a

irc memes
18:13 CrumpetFiddler: yo potass bby
18:13 *CrumpetFiddler is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1242241 Camellia feat. Nanahira - EDM Jumpers]
18:13 PotassiumF: hey fasm
18:13 PotassiumF: fam*
18:13 CrumpetFiddler: how u been
18:13 PotassiumF: good
18:16 CrumpetFiddler: eyy
18:17 PotassiumF: got the map now
18:17 PotassiumF: gonna play through it now
18:17 CrumpetFiddler: coolio
18:18 CrumpetFiddler: aaah
18:18 CrumpetFiddler: it wont let me spec
18:18 CrumpetFiddler: rip
18:18 CrumpetFiddler: o there we go
18:24 CrumpetFiddler: what the fuck
18:24 PotassiumF: lemme quickly go into edit
18:25 PotassiumF: releases like 00:18:861 - should be avoided imo
18:25 PotassiumF: it might make sense because of the music, but they feel bad to play
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: sh
18:26 PotassiumF: better to time them with the start of the next note
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: ah
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: just link them up ya think?
18:26 PotassiumF: yeah
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: also
18:26 CrumpetFiddler: this area
18:27 CrumpetFiddler: feels like shits missing
18:27 CrumpetFiddler: but i cant find what it is
18:27 CrumpetFiddler: v
18:27 CrumpetFiddler: 04:10:275 (250275|1,250275|3) -
18:27 PotassiumF: also in 00:15:654 - even though the sound emphasis is the same in the music the notes switch from 2 to 1
18:27 PotassiumF: and its like that for all of those parts
18:29 PotassiumF: i think that part is fine
18:30 PotassiumF: but if you want to add something you could add more LNs on the 2nd and 4th columns that come in after the 1st and 3rd column ones
18:31 PotassiumF: so like [1,3], 2, 4 or [1,3], 4, 2
18:31 CrumpetFiddler: hmm i think ill consider that
18:32 CrumpetFiddler: when that part came on was it odd to play or
18:32 CrumpetFiddler: nah
18:32 PotassiumF: one more thing also
18:32 PotassiumF: 03:29:102 -
18:32 PotassiumF: the notes just stop there
18:32 PotassiumF: kinda just feels/sounds weird
18:32 CrumpetFiddler: oh
18:32 PotassiumF: since the part is still going, but theres a sudden change
18:32 CrumpetFiddler: you think chuck some besides the ln
18:32 PotassiumF: in notes
18:33 PotassiumF: yeah maybe
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: cause i did consider that i just thought maybe after the chorus people needed a lil stamina break
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: but fuck em XD
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: ill do that
18:33 PotassiumF: obviously not much you can do with 2 columns tho :/
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: ill make it into one
18:33 CrumpetFiddler: thats not a massive dealk
18:33 PotassiumF: ah yeah
18:33 PotassiumF: that works
18:34 CrumpetFiddler: also with this note, what should i do with it?
18:34 CrumpetFiddler: 00:15:654 (15654|3) -
18:36 PotassiumF: maybe if you add another one on 1st column and then another one of the next on the 4th\
18:36 PotassiumF: in that case you leave the release timing as is
18:37 PotassiumF: only thing is then you would have to change the pattern at 00:13:792 -
18:37 PotassiumF: since it becomes way too much with another [1,4],[2,3] pattern soon after
18:40 CrumpetFiddler: alright that makes sense
18:40 CrumpetFiddler: somethin like this feel better?
18:40 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7633705
18:40 PotassiumF: ye i think that seems better
18:41 CrumpetFiddler: also trying to keep to the beat
18:41 CrumpetFiddler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7633714
18:44 PotassiumF: lol
18:45 CrumpetFiddler: ill tweak it a bit
Thanks for the mod buddy
wamster2
Hello!!

MX
00:45:188 (45188|3,45188|1) - remove? if you listen at 25%, you will notice that the sound of the note does not fit
00:45:861 (45861|1) - add a note? bass sound here
01:17:619 (77619|2) - remove? not a strong sound here
01:26:826 (86826|2,86930|3,87137|2,87240|0,87447|1,87654|1,87757|2,87964|0,88068|1,88171|3,88275|2,88482|2,88585|0,88792|1,88895|2,89102|1,89309|0,89413|3,89619|0,89723|3,89826|0) - you can make this notes doubles since they have different sound from the rest, and revise the pattern in that area.. (Just my opinion... its up to you if you want to apply)
01:31:119 (91119|0) - remove? no sound here at 25%
01:45:033 - can add LN here
01:45:240 - here too
01:55:895 (115895|2,116102|2) - delete? no sound here
02:00:447 - missed a note?
02:10:068 (130068|3,130068|2) - either delete 1 note or make it LN since it has a long sound here
02:10:895 (130895|2,130895|0) - delete 1 note? soft sound
02:12:551 (132551|3,132551|1) - ^
02:18:861 (138861|2) - delete? no sound here
03:03:447 (183447|1) - add a note? strong sound here
04:12:861 - missing a note?
04:23:309 (263309|0,263309|2) - delete 1 note? not too strong sound

Sorry if poor mod >w<,, but hope it helps at least
Topic Starter
Crumpey

wamster2 wrote:

Hello!!

MX
00:45:188 (45188|3,45188|1) - remove? if you listen at 25%, you will notice that the sound of the note does not fit
00:45:861 (45861|1) - add a note? bass sound here
01:17:619 (77619|2) - remove? not a strong sound here
01:26:826 (86826|2,86930|3,87137|2,87240|0,87447|1,87654|1,87757|2,87964|0,88068|1,88171|3,88275|2,88482|2,88585|0,88792|1,88895|2,89102|1,89309|0,89413|3,89619|0,89723|3,89826|0) - you can make this notes doubles since they have different sound from the rest, and revise the pattern in that area.. (Just my opinion... its up to you if you want to apply)
01:31:119 (91119|0) - remove? no sound here at 25%
01:45:033 - can add LN here
01:45:240 - here too
01:55:895 (115895|2,116102|2) - delete? no sound here
02:00:447 - missed a note?
02:10:068 (130068|3,130068|2) - either delete 1 note or make it LN since it has a long sound here
02:10:895 (130895|2,130895|0) - delete 1 note? soft sound
02:12:551 (132551|3,132551|1) - ^
02:18:861 (138861|2) - delete? no sound here
03:03:447 (183447|1) - add a note? strong sound here
04:12:861 - missing a note?
04:23:309 (263309|0,263309|2) - delete 1 note? not too strong sound

Sorry if poor mod >w<,, but hope it helps at least
some imo were not needed but alot of it was, thanks bud
Asherz007
It's not really a mod, but a playtest~ (Replay link here)

Since it's around my difficulty (and I was bored), I decided to give this a go. A pretty solid map. Replay might be more useful than the mod thingies down below.



Mod/Playtest stuff
Streams streams streams... not my favourite, but definitely a challenge here. That being said, the triples in the kiai were a nightmare to nail down properly. But maybe that's just me. Alternatively, you know that synthy sound that comes in? You could map triples to those, and where that doesn't occur, like at 01:33:654 (93654|3,93654|2,93654|0), you could do doubles.

Hitsounds soft/custom sampleset pls >.<

0|1|2|3

  1. 00:13:378 (13378|1) - I think this needs more than just the single here; why not end 00:10:275 (10275|2) at 00:11:930 instead?
  2. 00:32:826 (32826|0,32826|2) - Is it meant to be like 00:30:137 (30137|3,30240|1,30344|0,30344|2)? Because I hear the same things here.
  3. 00:33:240 (33240|1,33240|2) - ^
  4. 00:39:033 (39033|0,39033|2,39447|0,39447|3,39861|3,39861|1,39861|0) - Personal preference, but you could do a double-triple-quad here. (Or like at 02:24:964 (144964|1,144964|3,144964|0,145378|3,145378|2,145378|0,145792|3,145792|1,145792|2,145792|0))
  5. 00:51:861 (51861|1) - 1/8 stream should start here I think.
  6. Pretty strong vocal thing at 00:53:102. You sure you wanna miss it out?
  7. 01:01:895 (61895|2) - Whoopsy daisy. Okay, I actually see what you're trying in a way, but the attack of the note is on the 1/1, even if the loudest bit is where you've put the note.
  8. Note at 01:13:585 for vocals (and to fill the space)? Same at 01:20:206?
  9. 01:31:119 (91119|0,91171|1,91223|2,91275|3) - Whoopsy daisy. (Move forward 1/8)
  10. 01:33:240 (93240|3) - This needs to be a triple imo. Remove 01:32:826 (92826|2) for it?
  11. 01:33:344 (93344|0) - Move to col 1
  12. 01:54:861 (114861|1,114964|2,114964|3,115068|1,115171|0,115275|2,115275|3,115378|1,115482|0,115585|1,115585|3,115688|2,115792|1,115792|0,115999|1,115999|3,116206|1,116206|0) - Looks like a pattern inconsistency. Something like this maybe?

I'll do more later... probably.

Even more modding things
  1. 01:57:240 (117240|1,117240|0,117654|1,117861|0,117861|2,118068|2,118068|3,118068|0,118068|1) - This doesn't quite properly represent the audio imo. I went with something like this but I'm sure there are better ways.
  2. Note at 02:28:171?
  3. 02:31:171 (151171|1) - Move to col 0? (Consistency more than anything)
  4. 1/8 stream starts at 02:37:792
  5. 02:47:826 (167826|2) - Move back 1/4?
  6. 02:52:068 (172068|3,172068|1,172275|0,172275|3,172275|2,172275|1) - Probably better if these (and LN ends) were 1/4 earlier.
  7. 03:15:861 (195861|2,195861|1,196068|3,196068|0,196275|1,196275|2,196482|3,196482|2,196688|0,196688|1) - 1/4 stream instead of 1/2 doubles for consistency?
  8. Maybe want an extra timing point with lower HS volume at 03:20:826. I'd've never have known that the 1/4 stream was justified until I turned SFX completely off.
  9. 03:29:206 (209206|0,210861|1) - I... don't get these. Doesn't seem to be anything in the audio to support both of them.
  10. Extra note at 03:32:413?
  11. 03:45:240 (225240|3,225240|1,225240|0,225240|2) - Should probably be a double rather than a quad.
  12. 03:57:240 fill bar could be done better... (There's probably a few earlier that I overlooked...) I mean, the 1/8 stream finishes on a 1/4 which is a little weird to me, and 03:57:344 (237344|1,237447|2,237551|1,237654|2,237654|0,237757|1,237861|2,237964|1,238068|0) doesn't seem to fit at all.
  13. 04:28:792 (268792|0) - Start on 1/1?
  14. Also, the final section from 04:12:137 until 04:38:619 should be an extra kiai imo. Also, only doubles here instead of those triples earlier? Feels a little inconsistent. Perhaps apply that idea I mentioned before.

Here ends random testplay and mod. Good luck! :)

This song might stay in my head for a while...
Topic Starter
Crumpey

Asherz007 wrote:

It's not really a mod, but a playtest~ (Replay link here)

Since it's around my difficulty (and I was bored), I decided to give this a go. A pretty solid map. Replay might be more useful than the mod thingies down below.



Mod/Playtest stuff
Streams streams streams... not my favourite, but definitely a challenge here. That being said, the triples in the kiai were a nightmare to nail down properly. But maybe that's just me. Alternatively, you know that synthy sound that comes in? You could map triples to those, and where that doesn't occur, like at 01:33:654 (93654|3,93654|2,93654|0), you could do doubles.

Hitsounds soft/custom sampleset pls >.<

0|1|2|3

  1. 00:13:378 (13378|1) - I think this needs more than just the single here; why not end 00:10:275 (10275|2) at 00:11:930 instead?
  2. 00:32:826 (32826|0,32826|2) - Is it meant to be like 00:30:137 (30137|3,30240|1,30344|0,30344|2)? Because I hear the same things here.
  3. 00:33:240 (33240|1,33240|2) - ^
  4. 00:39:033 (39033|0,39033|2,39447|0,39447|3,39861|3,39861|1,39861|0) - Personal preference, but you could do a double-triple-quad here. (Or like at 02:24:964 (144964|1,144964|3,144964|0,145378|3,145378|2,145378|0,145792|3,145792|1,145792|2,145792|0))
  5. 00:51:861 (51861|1) - 1/8 stream should start here I think.
  6. Pretty strong vocal thing at 00:53:102. You sure you wanna miss it out?
  7. 01:01:895 (61895|2) - Whoopsy daisy. Okay, I actually see what you're trying in a way, but the attack of the note is on the 1/1, even if the loudest bit is where you've put the note.
  8. Note at 01:13:585 for vocals (and to fill the space)? Same at 01:20:206?
  9. 01:31:119 (91119|0,91171|1,91223|2,91275|3) - Whoopsy daisy. (Move forward 1/8)
  10. 01:33:240 (93240|3) - This needs to be a triple imo. Remove 01:32:826 (92826|2) for it?
  11. 01:33:344 (93344|0) - Move to col 1
  12. 01:54:861 (114861|1,114964|2,114964|3,115068|1,115171|0,115275|2,115275|3,115378|1,115482|0,115585|1,115585|3,115688|2,115792|1,115792|0,115999|1,115999|3,116206|1,116206|0) - Looks like a pattern inconsistency. Something like this maybe?

I'll do more later... probably.

Even more modding things
  1. 01:57:240 (117240|1,117240|0,117654|1,117861|0,117861|2,118068|2,118068|3,118068|0,118068|1) - This doesn't quite properly represent the audio imo. I went with something like this but I'm sure there are better ways.
  2. Note at 02:28:171?
  3. 02:31:171 (151171|1) - Move to col 0? (Consistency more than anything)
  4. 1/8 stream starts at 02:37:792
  5. 02:47:826 (167826|2) - Move back 1/4?
  6. 02:52:068 (172068|3,172068|1,172275|0,172275|3,172275|2,172275|1) - Probably better if these (and LN ends) were 1/4 earlier.
  7. 03:15:861 (195861|2,195861|1,196068|3,196068|0,196275|1,196275|2,196482|3,196482|2,196688|0,196688|1) - 1/4 stream instead of 1/2 doubles for consistency?
  8. Maybe want an extra timing point with lower HS volume at 03:20:826. I'd've never have known that the 1/4 stream was justified until I turned SFX completely off.
  9. 03:29:206 (209206|0,210861|1) - I... don't get these. Doesn't seem to be anything in the audio to support both of them.
  10. Extra note at 03:32:413?
  11. 03:45:240 (225240|3,225240|1,225240|0,225240|2) - Should probably be a double rather than a quad.
  12. 03:57:240 fill bar could be done better... (There's probably a few earlier that I overlooked...) I mean, the 1/8 stream finishes on a 1/4 which is a little weird to me, and 03:57:344 (237344|1,237447|2,237551|1,237654|2,237654|0,237757|1,237861|2,237964|1,238068|0) doesn't seem to fit at all.
  13. 04:28:792 (268792|0) - Start on 1/1?
  14. Also, the final section from 04:12:137 until 04:38:619 should be an extra kiai imo. Also, only doubles here instead of those triples earlier? Feels a little inconsistent. Perhaps apply that idea I mentioned before.

Here ends random testplay and mod. Good luck! :)

This song might stay in my head for a while...
took a while aha but i got around to doing this The only things i believe i didnt implement was mapping to the vocals as i think that thats pretty bad aha thanks for the mod bby
Madoka2574
Hi.From your queue :)
Easy
OD8 and HP8 are really high for a normal diff.
The diff's name should be NM to be consistant with MX.
Since I don't know whether you will change the pattern after you finish this diff so I skip.

MX
Hitsound volume is too high.
00:29:102 (29102|0,29102|1) - Ctrl+H
00:30:240 (30240|1,30344|2) - Ctrl+H
00:32:619 (32619|3,32826|0,33033|3) - Ctrl+H
00:33:240 (33240|1,33240|2,33447|0,33447|3) - making it a small stream will be better
00:40:585 - 00:40:792 - sound but no note?
00:42:240 - 00:42:447 - ^
00:43:482 - delete.I think there's no sound.
00:44:619 - → 00:44:826 - vocal sound
You really missed many notes in this part.Why?
00:45:809 - add a note
00:46:688 - ^
00:57:654 - ^ and change the pattern
00:59:309 - add a note
01:02:619 - ^
01:04:895 (64895|2,64895|0,64999|3,64999|1) - I think u can make jacks here
01:06:137 - like this https://puu.sh/wwgF4/0b01bd27c7.png
01:06:447 - 01:06:551 - add a note
01:59:102 - 01:59:206 - 01:59:516 - 01:59:619 - add a note.Was it done on purpose?
02:16:171 - add a note.
The other parts are similar so that's all.
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