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[overall]:
  1. looks fine



[Extreme]:
  1. Rename Another?
  2. 00:15:690 (7) - New combo
  3. 01:13:948 (7) - New combo
  4. 01:26:626 (6) - Add note?
  5. 01:37:368 (7) - repeat 1time?
  6. Maybe Kiai end for 01:56:142


[Hyper]:
  1. 00:56:723 (4) - Reduce for repeat1
  2. 00:57:303 - Add note


[Advanced]:
  1. looks fine.


[Easy]:
  1. looks fine

overall nice map
nothing found~
go go Ranked!
posted

mjw5150 wrote:

as your req~

[General]
tags里面不加上KONAMI么(嘛 其实加不加都无所谓 加不加看你自己了 好吧>_< 那不加啦

[Extreme]
00:48:594 (3) - 唔...3.5x的jump是不是有点大了 建议调小点 因為是Extreme 所以不改啦~
01:18:787 (6) - 同上 沒改...抱歉....
01:57:884 - 这里调大点音量?50%感觉太小了 okok~

[Hyper]
00:24:981 (6) - 加finish added
01:26:916 - 这个note删掉 然后后面的3个slider提前1/2? 扼... 我覺得還是原本的好>_<
01:57:884 - 同extreme added

[Advance]
00:44:529 - 加个note? ok~
01:27:303 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这5个slider都提前1/2? 還是別了吧
01:57:884 - 同extreme added

[Basic]
fine ^^

给颗星星吧(27颗 这数字真心不吉利lol
posted

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:
  1. looks fine



[Extreme]:
  1. Rename Another? The song is from jubeat lol so ... you know...
  2. 00:15:690 (7) - New combo added
  3. 01:13:948 (7) - New combo added
  4. 01:26:626 (6) - Add note? Nice to find it!!!
  5. 01:37:368 (7) - repeat 1time? lol no
  6. Maybe Kiai end for 01:56:142
no...

[Hyper]:
  1. 00:56:723 (4) - Reduce for repeat1 ok!
  2. 00:57:303 - Add note
ok!

[Advanced]:
  1. looks fine.


[Easy]:
  1. looks fine

overall nice map
nothing found~
go go Ranked! Thanks!!
Fixed~
posted
Hello~M4M

[General]
既然有spinner approach circle就把所有滑条一系列的补齐w

这几个
其实倒数第二第三个不是很重要但是以防万一因为有的MAT会很挑剔w

因为设置了自定义皮肤所以在osz文件里
[Colours]
Combo1 : 244,162,222
Combo2 : 232,250,171
Combo3 : 163,224,200
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
加上红字这一栏

Breeze: RGB数值可以自己定, 这是slider外围的那个颜色, 你用了自定义note, 为了避免其他用自定义skin的玩家不会有奇怪的视觉效果, 所以得加这个
sliderapproachcircle有点粗,三连打叠一起感觉很难看,而且会让人分辨不清

Basic和Extreme的break time与其他diff不一样,同mapper的break time要保持一致

SB有强闪光,建议在Song setup里面的第三个打勾

[Basic]

00:11:045 (1) - 这个spinner对新手来说略短
00:35:819 (2) - 停在00:36:787比较好
00:37:368 (1,2,3,4) - EZ不建议这么叠,新手会不晓得怎么办
00:41:626 (4) - 减掉一个折返00:42:981的地方加个circle?
00:43:561 (1) - 换成00:43:948上的circle
00:48:206 (1) - spinner太短,停在00:49:174试试看?
01:14:529 (2) - 原则上EZ不建议slider叠note
01:16:077 (3,4) - 对EZ来说太难了,EZ尽量不要使用除了两个circle叠在一起以外的stack
01:31:561 (1) - 停在01:32:529
01:36:981 (3,4) - 同前
01:40:658 (2) - del,EZ里尽量不要有红线上的note
01:45:497 (1) - 有多余的绿线,其他diff也有,fix一下

[Advance]
AR+OD全部减1~2
01:04:465 (4) - 减掉两个折返,01:05:239上加circle
其他没啥

[Hyper]
01:56:626 (5) - NC
嗯挑不出啥O O
有些短slider长来回可以做成stream

[Extreme]
00:06:981 (3) - 1 grid right
00:07:755 (6) - 1 grid left
00:23:045 (5) - 拉开
00:34:658 (2) - 2往右移动让2的头和1的头的距离和之前的距离一样,就是>
00:37:561 (3) - 远了,往右边移动
00:42:013 (x) - add circle,调整spacing,就算不加这个note后面那个note的spacing也是会误导人的


以上w。
posted
你好 :) 以下只是建議.(可以無視它.因為 我MOD的不是很好?!OTZ ).

[Basic]
00:23:432 (4) - 在00:23:432 跟00:24:013 加個finish.
00:24:594 (5) - 在00:24:594 跟00:24:981 加個finish.
01:19:174 (2) - 整個加個finish?!.
01:20:142 (1) - 結尾加個finish 如何?!.

[Advanced]
00:23:432 (5,6,7) - 5跟6的頭 和 7 都加個finish吧?.
00:57:497 (4) - 拉成這樣!?. http://puu.sh/6LJI .
01:19:174 (5,6,7,8) - 都加finish.
01:20:142 (1) - 跟basic的一樣~.

[Hyper]
00:23:432 (1) - 頭加個finish~.
00:24:013 (2,4) - 加個finish~?.
01:06:594 (1,2) - 拉成這樣吧?!. http://puu.sh/6LMq 然後2就是把1翻轉過來而已.
01:19:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - OTZ 跟前面難度的MOD一樣了.

[Extreme]
00:23:432 (1,2,3,4) - 若..前面三個難度都有改的話再改成像前面三個那樣吧~.
00:34:271 (1) - 這樣?!. http://puu.sh/6LOk
01:04:852 (6) - 把這個跟01:05:239 的結尾重疊?!.
01:56:336 (1,2) - 頭都加個finish.

抱歉 mod雖然有點少 又或許這些mod的建議幫不上忙 .
但 歌曲好聽 做得很不錯 加油! .
我蠻喜歡這skin的 .
posted

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hello~M4M

[General]
既然有spinner approach circle就把所有滑条一系列的补齐w

这几个
其实倒数第二第三个不是很重要但是以防万一因为有的MAT会很挑剔w

因为设置了自定义皮肤所以在osz文件里
[Colours]
Combo1 : 244,162,222
Combo2 : 232,250,171
Combo3 : 163,224,200
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
ok
加上红字这一栏

Breeze: RGB数值可以自己定, 这是slider外围的那个颜色, 你用了自定义note, 为了避免其他用自定义skin的玩家不会有奇怪的视觉效果, 所以得加这个
sliderapproachcircle有点粗,三连打叠一起感觉很难看,而且会让人分辨不清

Basic和Extreme的break time与其他diff不一样,同mapper的break time要保持一致

SB有强闪光,建议在Song setup里面的第三个打勾 ok
[Basic]

00:11:045 (1) - 这个spinner对新手来说略短 ok
00:35:819 (2) - 停在00:36:787比较好 ok
00:37:368 (1,2,3,4) - EZ不建议这么叠,新手会不晓得怎么办 ok
00:41:626 (4) - 减掉一个折返00:42:981的地方加个circle?沒改
00:43:561 (1) - 换成00:43:948上的circleok
00:48:206 (1) - spinner太短,停在00:49:174试试看?ok
01:14:529 (2) - 原则上EZ不建议slider叠noteok
01:16:077 (3,4) - 对EZ来说太难了,EZ尽量不要使用除了两个circle叠在一起以外的stackok
01:31:561 (1) - 停在01:32:529ok
01:36:981 (3,4) - 同前ok
01:40:658 (2) - del,EZ里尽量不要有红线上的noteok
01:45:497 (1) - 有多余的绿线,其他diff也有,fix一下ok

[Advance]
AR+OD全部减1~2ok
01:04:465 (4) - 减掉两个折返,01:05:239上加circleok
其他没啥

[Hyper]
01:56:626 (5) - NCok
嗯挑不出啥O O
有些短slider长来回可以做成stream

[Extreme]
00:06:981 (3) - 1 grid rightok
00:07:755 (6) - 1 grid leftok
00:23:045 (5) - 拉开ok
00:34:658 (2) - 2往右移动让2的头和1的头的距离和之前的距离一样,就是>ok
00:37:561 (3) - 远了,往右边移动ok
00:42:013 (x) - add circle,调整spacing,就算不加这个note后面那个note的spacing也是会误导人的ok


以上w。
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l1106188 wrote:

你好 :) 以下只是建議.(可以無視它.因為 我MOD的不是很好?!OTZ ). 我也一樣XD
[Basic]
00:23:432 (4) - 在00:23:432 跟00:24:013 加個finish.ok
00:24:594 (5) - 在00:24:594 跟00:24:981 加個finish.ok
01:19:174 (2) - 整個加個finish?!.加一些而已>_<
01:20:142 (1) - 結尾加個finish 如何?!.ok

[Advanced]
00:23:432 (5,6,7) - 5跟6的頭 和 7 都加個finish吧?.ok
00:57:497 (4) - 拉成這樣!?. http://puu.sh/6LJI .差不多吧>_< 但還是改了
01:19:174 (5,6,7,8) - 都加finish.ok
01:20:142 (1) - 跟basic的一樣~.ok

[Hyper]
00:23:432 (1) - 頭加個finish~.ok
00:24:013 (2,4) - 加個finish~?.ok
01:06:594 (1,2) - 拉成這樣吧?!. http://puu.sh/6LMq 然後2就是把1翻轉過來而已.ok
01:19:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - OTZ 跟前面難度的MOD一樣了.ok

[Extreme]
00:23:432 (1,2,3,4) - 若..前面三個難度都有改的話再改成像前面三個那樣吧~.ok
00:34:271 (1) - 這樣?!. http://puu.sh/6LOk 好像沒差多少 所以沒改了lol
01:04:852 (6) - 把這個跟01:05:239 的結尾重疊?!. ok
01:56:336 (1,2) - 頭都加個finish.ok

抱歉 mod雖然有點少 又或許這些mod的建議幫不上忙 .
但 歌曲好聽 做得很不錯 加油! . 謝謝啊!!~~
我蠻喜歡這skin的 .
posted
Hi hi!

Overall
我覺得approach circle太肥(或太糊)...
所以總覺得要AR+1才看得清楚

[Basic]
01:36:206 (1) - ?!?!

[Advanced]
maybe AR+1

[Hyper]
maybe AR+1
這個難度你可以修難點(和Extreme比太簡單了) 例如:
00:52:658 (x) - 可以放三連打
01:36:110 (x) - 加個note
終盤部分可以放二連

01:18:690 (8) - 挪上面一點
01:01:755 (6) - 孤單的clap

[Extreme]
雖然剛開始的節奏簡單了點 有了尾殺補強還不錯
但是尾殺的節奏我覺得不太對 我只修改節奏而已 給你參考Download: Y&Co. feat. Karin - Sweet Rain (bossandy) [Extreme_mod].osu

00:36:981 (2) - 太大聲了
00:42:400 (x) - 加個note?
00:52:755 (x) - ^
01:05:142 (x) - ^ (不過這裡...應該是不可能吧)
01:14:336 (3) - 太大聲
01:30:787 (1) - 取消new combo
01:36:110 (x) - 加個note?

================

音效我覺得還不錯
所以沒指出什麼
主要是節奏部分
有些slider很好看

如果extreme的節奏有改什麼最好寫出來喔:D
posted
Hello ~ Sorry, I'm late ;~;

General :
  1. Skin :
    1. Your approachcircle is too thick, it's pleasant to play, it makes stream hard to read and double almost unreadable. Please, remove it ? :/ (And don't forget to fullsubmit)
      It looks so weird D:
  2. The epilepsie warning hides the notes at the beginning of the map. It's not very playable. Try to do something to fix this problem like storyboarding the warning.
  3. normal-hitnormal2 is almost inaudible, and you can't have silenced or inaudible hitsounds in your map because it's very very confusing. The player must have a hint which indicate him that he succesfully clicked the note. Instead of using this normal-hitnormal2, I think you ought to use the default hitnormal with volume 65% or make the hitsound louder.



Basic :
  1. 00:59:045 (1) - This spinner is too short for the easiest difficulty, even if auto get 3000 bonus, remove the spinner and map this part.
  2. 01:23:819 (1,2,3,4) - Make these notes audible. And you can't use the music to hitsound your notes :/
  3. 01:36:206 - You have 2 notes on the same tick here !


Advanced :
  1. 00:00:787 (3,4) - This double sounds kinda weird. According to me, it would be better if you only have a slider which start at 00:00:787. And make it more audible please.
  2. 00:35:432 - A clap is missing here
  3. 00:40:852 - A clap is missing here
  4. 01:22:271 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Make these notes audible. And you can't use the music to hitsound your notes :/


Hyper :
  1. 00:00:594 (3,4,5) - Make them louder .__.
  2. 00:07:465 (4) - A clap is missing here
  3. 01:16:077 (1,2) - I don't understand why you end this slider on blue ticks, there is nothing mappable on these ticks here. It sounds weird and it's confusing. You ought to end them 1/4 earlier
  4. 01:22:271 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these notes audible. And you can't use the music to hitsound your notes :/


Extreme :
  1. 00:00:594 (2,3,4,5) - Make them louder
  2. 00:04:852 (5) - Add a new combo mark on this note because you start an new pattern.
  3. 00:06:110 - Add a circle here. Even if it should be 1/6 here, 1/4 is fine and more playable than 1/6 which is uh. Or maybe move 00:06:206 (10) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse like you did with 00:36:981 (2).
  4. 01:21:110 - Remove this short break which is useless and looks ugly.
  5. 01:22:658 - Same as above
  6. 01:22:271 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Make these notes audible. And you can't use the music to hitsound your notes :/
posted
Please, use this normal-hitnormal2, the current one is not enough audible. I increased its volume.
Download: normal-hitnormal2.zip

Edit : Okay, Bubbled ~
posted
[General]
-Your spinner needs to have something visible in the center of it for players to spin around, it also doesn't seem to stay completely centered when spinning, see what you can do to fix that
-You need to include some sort of approach circle in your folder to go with the custom hitcircle/hitcircle overlay (I know you deleted your old one, but you still need one)
-Your spinner circle shouldn't really need to be over 666x666

[Basic]
-This difficulty doesn't have the 0.5 sliders like the other difficulties (which is a good thing) but still has the "Slow" storyboard warning displayed. Remove the code from the .osb file and put it in the other 3 difficulties seperately (go to file - open .osu in notepad and add the lines there)
00:02:529 (5) - it's normally a better idea to avoid short repeating sliders on beginner difficulties when possible (same for the rest of these)
01:48:206 (4,1) - I suggest you separate these, the repeat isn't hidden but it might throw some beginniner players off as you can't see the repeat at first

[Advanced]
00:47:819 (2,3,4) - move this pattern around so the repeat isn't hidden

[Hyper]
00:00:787 (4,5) - I would turn this audio section up as it's pretty hard to hear the votes as it is now
00:15:497 (7,8) - the jump here doesn't fit well with the music
01:19:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - even for a slowed down slider, the spacing is kind of hard to follow while playing. Separate it from the other notes more?

[Extreme]
00:48:206 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't advise having a jump here as it's very unexpected while playing
01:20:142 (1,1,1,2) - sections like this aren't really a good idea when the HP Drain is high (almost makes your HP fall by half), fill it in with a few more notes?

The mapset looks pretty well done in general, but some issues that need to be fixed before this can be approved
posted

James2250 wrote:

[General]
-Your spinner needs to have something visible in the center of it for players to spin around, it also doesn't seem to stay completely centered when spinning, see what you can do to fix that
-You need to include some sort of approach circle in your folder to go with the custom hitcircle/hitcircle overlay (I know you deleted your old one, but you still need one)
-Your spinner circle shouldn't really need to be over 666x666

[Basic]
-This difficulty doesn't have the 0.5 sliders like the other difficulties (which is a good thing) but still has the "Slow" storyboard warning displayed. Remove the code from the .osb file and put it in the other 3 difficulties seperately (go to file - open .osu in notepad and add the lines there)
00:02:529 (5) - it's normally a better idea to avoid short repeating sliders on beginner difficulties when possible (same for the rest of these)
01:48:206 (4,1) - I suggest you separate these, the repeat isn't hidden but it might throw some beginniner players off as you can't see the repeat at first

[Advanced]
00:47:819 (2,3,4) - move this pattern around so the repeat isn't hidden

[Hyper]
00:00:787 (4,5) - I would turn this audio section up as it's pretty hard to hear the votes as it is now
00:15:497 (7,8) - the jump here doesn't fit well with the music
01:19:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - even for a slowed down slider, the spacing is kind of hard to follow while playing. Separate it from the other notes more?

[Extreme]
00:48:206 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't advise having a jump here as it's very unexpected while playing
01:20:142 (1,1,1,2) - sections like this aren't really a good idea when the HP Drain is high (almost makes your HP fall by half), fill it in with a few more notes?

The mapset looks pretty well done in general, but some issues that need to be fixed before this can be approved


Fixed!
posted
As James haven' rechecked it for over 2 months, I guess I can recheck.

General :
  1. The tag "spboxer3" is missing in all difficulties except in the taiko one.
  2. spinner-background, fail-background, BG, BG2, BG3, BG4 are all in a PNG format, so their sizes are big, you should convert them into a JPG format, it would make the download faster for people who have a slow internet connection (such as me :P)


Sp3's Jubiko :
  1. The hit sound volume is kinda low (the music is louder than them, it's not very pleasant to play :/), consider increasing it.


Fix and I will rebubble.
posted

KuraiPettan wrote:

As James haven' rechecked it for over 2 months, I guess I can recheck.

General :
  1. The tag "spboxer3" is missing in all difficulties except in the taiko one.
  2. spinner-background, fail-background, BG, BG2, BG3, BG4 are all in a PNG format, so their sizes are big, you should convert them into a JPG format, it would make the download faster for people who have a slow internet connection (such as me :P)


Sp3's Jubiko :
  1. The hit sound volume is kinda low (the music is louder than them, it's not very pleasant to play :/), consider increasing it.


Fix and I will rebubble.
Fixed!
posted
Let's rebubble this !
posted
As per request...

[General]
  1. Skin: Your spinner-background.jpg has too large dimensions. It is 1024x768 when maximum allowed is 1023x692. A few pixels above won't hurt anyone, but this picture is much larger. You should cut it down to 1024x692 (or 1023x692).
  2. Skin: Your cursor.png is 79x79, while maximum allowed is 63x63. You need to resize this.
  3. Storyboard: Many of your white.png flashes are mistimed. Some are too early some are too late. You should fix them so they come right where they need to come.
    Some examples:



[Extreme]
  1. 00:12:594 (1) - This slider is incorrectly snapped. The end is not on a blue tick. Fix it so it's on a blue tick please.
  2. 00:42:206 - You have 2 timing sections here, remove one.
  3. 00:42:206 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Making combos like this is unnecessary. Try this: remove new combo from 00:42:594 (1) and 00:42:981 (1), then put a new combo on 00:43:174 (2). This makes more sense if you ask me.


[Sp3's Jubiko]
  1. Use circle size 5 please, so the difficulty has more standard settings.


[Advanced]
  1. 00:42:206 - You have 2 timing sections here, remove one.


[Basic]
  1. 00:11:045 (1) - This spinner is too short for the easiest diff and the slider after it comes too soon. You should try to map some kind of a slider instead.
  2. 00:42:206 - You have 2 timing sections on this spot, remove one.
  3. 00:48:206 (1) - This spinner is too short for the easiest diff. Try this: http://puu.sh/b1x4.
  4. 01:31:561 (1) - This spinner is WAY too short for easiest diff. Remove it completely. Also add a break at 01:26:916.


There you go. Contact me once you fix your stuff.
posted

lolcubes wrote:

[Sp3's Jubiko]
  1. Use circle size 5 please, so the difficulty has more standard settings.
OK 你幫我改一下就好了~ 記得要改喔!!!
posted
I really apologize for taking this long but I was busy and had some issues. Well, in any case, I like how you applied the changes, so...

Ranked!

edit: also have a happy new year!
posted
fav this song :D
posted
Happy new year
新的一年就有rank
好兆頭耶:D
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