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Cho-E - Amputator

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XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
pretty nice...

like how u are using the original r300k version with the in-game sounds :-)
mine is without the in-game sounds (just bg and voice)

you can surely use my skin..just give me credits alright :-)

and one more thing:

here is a normal+: diff..u can add it if u want

Download: Cho-E - Amputator (Equivalent) [X3 TOMIX STYLE].osu
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
Solid mapping work ~

[Normal Style] is quite slow, you might even consider making it [Easy Style] and turning down the settings by one, just a thought. The break should also be dragged to 00:45:120. And get those new combos placed.

[Hard Style], I would advise removing the overlap at 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:58:453 (2,3). You don't have overlap in the other parts of the beatmap so this would help to improve consistency.

Edit:
First kiai time should start at 01:20:120 and end at 01:37:897.
Second kiai time should start at 01:55:675 and already ends at 02:13:453.

Edit 2:
There's a simple storyboard below in the .zip file. Simply extract all the files and place them into the Song Folder and see if you like it.

That's all I have to say, really. Good luck with ranking and all that.

Download: Amputator Storyboard.zip
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old

SapphireGhost wrote:

Solid mapping work ~

[Normal Style] is quite slow, you might even consider making it [Easy Style] and turning down the settings by one, just a thought. The break should also be dragged to 00:45:120. And get those new combos placed. You know, I am a slow mapper <3

[Hard Style], I would advise removing the overlap at 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5)Changed the pattern and 01:58:453 (2,3)Nope. You don't have overlap in the other parts of the beatmap so this would help to improve consistency.

Edit:
First kiai time should start at 01:20:120 and end at 01:37:897.
Second kiai time should start at 01:55:675 and already ends at 02:13:453.
Sound better

Edit 2:
There's a simple storyboard below in the .zip file. Simply extract all the files and place them into the Song Folder and see if you like it.
Lol, thanks

That's all I have to say, really. Good luck with ranking and all that.

XepherX3 wrote:

pretty nice...

like how u are using the original r300k version with the in-game sounds :-)
mine is without the in-game sounds (just bg and voice)

you can surely use my skin..just give me credits alright :-)

and one more thing:

here is a normal+: diff..u can add it if u want

[attachment=0:ddeb3]Cho-E - Amputator (Equivalent) [X3 TOMIX STYLE].osu[/attachment:ddeb3]
Atm, I dont think i will force skin. Let the player have their own way of skin etc. Tbh, I do like to have some normal in my mapset, but there is something inside it doesn't please me much. When we both online, maybe we can disscuss about it further
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Kite
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Joined July 2009
Kite
;)
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
Thanks for some suggestion and test play kite <3
TKiller
4,390 posts
Joined May 2009
TKiller
I should speak the stuff out with teke, I was kinda agressive that day.

And a mapset can fit two insanes anyway :D
Charsi
231 posts
Joined November 2009
Charsi
aaalright, take this star, quite good map with quite nice song!
Uan
Former osu! Champion: #1
176 posts
Joined August 2009
Uan
Good maps and Song~:D
S.T.A.R!!
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
Thanks for star and test play Uan <3

SPOILER
Jaffar
Jaffar
nice
Young Link 4
21 posts
Joined January 2011
Young Link 4
Nice maps and nice song.
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
Hey Equivalent. Here's my mod as promised.

[General]:
  1. Storyboard: The dark background can be smaller. Also you probably don't need it at all. Try checking these topics about some additional information:
    viewtopic.php?f=20&t=55177
    viewtopic.php?f=60&t=43552
    I have recently found out about these myself thanks to some good people, and these will improve the performance of your SB (weaker machines won't choke on it).
[Hard Style]:
  1. 00:28:453 (10) - I think the clap should be on the start of the slider, not the end.
  2. 00:30:675 (6) - ^
  3. 00:31:786 (7) - Add a Clap.
  4. 00:34:008 (4) - Add a Clap.
  5. 00:34:703 (8) - Add a Clap.
  6. 00:35:675 (5) - This note would be a really good candidate for a new combo. Musical reasons (2 stanzas per combo used so far atleast, with the exception of this combo which is a pattern). Also remove clap, sounds better without it imo.
  7. 00:36:231 (6) - If you changed the above (5) into a new combo, this note needs some better placing. Maybe something like this?
  8. 00:40:675 (6) - New combo.
  9. 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern got me. It's not really hard or anything just may be slightly hard for a "hard" difficulty. In any case, make (9) a new combo.
  10. 00:44:842 (1) - Remove new combo from this note and place it closer to the note before it (and all others) so they don't have some big spacing irregularities.
  11. 00:47:064 - Add a note here to follow the voice, feels kinda empty without it.
  12. 00:47:758 (1) - Don't like this spinner at all, it doesn't really follow the voice either. I suggest you remove it and map the voice and beats instead. Here is a suggestion: http://puu.sh/3qmx (this is how it looked before @timeline). I didn't do any spacings or anything on the field, but I think notes that would exist like that on the timeline would match the music much better. Also notice how the new combo is on the big white tick, which means removing new combo from 00:49:286 (1).
  13. 00:52:064 (7,8) - Reverse these, meaning 8 should be where 7 starts on the timeline and after it 7 should come. Like this. Fits the music much better.
  14. 01:02:342 (9) - New combo. This means removing new combo from 01:03:731 (1). Also try to fix the spacing between (10) and (1) so it's more or less equal to their distance of their sliders.
  15. 01:06:786 (9) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:07:897 (1).
  16. 01:20:953 (1,2,3,4) - These felt weird, because I heard voice better than the rest of the stuff, and it's not really matching it. Looking at the timeline, I suggest this. Don't forget to add a clap on 5. Sounds much better.
  17. 01:22:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as the above pretty much, try to follow both the drumline and voice here.
  18. 01:29:008 (8) - New combo.
  19. 01:29:842 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I won't really say anything about these, they are alright, but if possible try to map the voice here as well, just like I gave you an example before. The song is quite dynamic and mapping 1/2s doesn't really make it interesting.
  20. 01:42:342 (5) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:44:008 (1).
  21. 01:55:675 (9) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:57:897 (1).
  22. 02:00:120 (5) - New combo.
  23. 02:14:008 (1) - Clap on the start of the slider.
  24. 02:16:786 (1) - Remove clap from the start of the slider.
  25. 02:17:342 (2) - Add a clap to the start of the slider.
  26. 02:21:231 (4,5) - I think you should remove these and map the drums instead. 2 short streams would feel much more fun. (3+5)
  27. 02:22:342 (6) - After you do the change above, this would be a much better spot for a new combo. Remove it from 02:23:453 (1) afterwards.
  28. 02:30:258 - Since you mapped a stream which follows the drums for the ending, add a note here to complete the drumline. Also add a clap on it.
  29. 02:30:119 (5,1,2,3,4) - Clap on all of these.
[Normal Style]:
  1. OD+1. OD3 in a normal when an easier diff is present isn't that nice, considering this normal is slightly harder than an average normal as well.
  2. In general, the diff looks nice but it could look better if you used 1.1x distance snap mostly, because the circles and sliders touch eachother and doesn't look that nice. This is only a personal complaint and don't think of this as a really bad thing though.
  3. 00:34:842 (3) - This one is really confusing for a normal diff. Ending on a blue tick when next note is a circle is a bad thing for easier diffs.
    It's slightly hard as well, but that's perfectly fine. I suggest this. Adding a slider there fits the music and while it requires slightly more work (cause you don't wait), it will be much easier to continue playing cause of a more familiar rhythm. Don't forget to put claps on both start and end as well.
  4. 00:59:564 (1) - Clap.
  5. 01:00:398 (4) - Clap on the slider end.
  6. 01:01:786 (1) - Claps on every arrow and the start, leave the end as it is now.
  7. 01:02:620 (2) - This slider doesn't sound so good. Maybe try this?
  8. 01:04:008 (1) - Clap.
  9. 01:04:564 (3,4) - These would sound much better if you reversed the position in the timeline. Like this. This also enables you to place claps better (which means clap on the slider end once you reverse them on the timeline).
  10. 01:06:231 (2) - Clap.
  11. 01:08:453 (3) - Clap.
  12. 01:08:731 (4) - This slider also doesn't sound so good. Maybe shift it by 1/2 and add a circle in it's place? Like this. Also don't forget to add a clap on the slider end.
  13. 01:10:675 (1) - Clap on start.
  14. 01:12:897 (3) - Clap on start.
  15. 01:15:120 (2) - Clap.
  16. 01:17:341 (3) - Clap.
  17. 01:17:620 (4) - Same as 01:08:731.
  18. 01:39:564 (1) - Clap.
  19. 01:41:786 (5) - Clap.
  20. 01:44:008 (1) - End this slider at 01:44:564, it sounds bad like it is now.
  21. 01:45:120 - Add a circle and put a clap on it.
  22. 01:46:231 (3,4) - Clap on these.
  23. 01:48:453 (1) - Clap on the start.
  24. 01:55:120 (1) - Claps on the start and the arrows.
  25. 02:06:786 (1,2,3,4) - These don't look nice spacing wise. I suggest you fix them so their transitions between them is the same. This is what I mean, check the spacing between them.
  26. 02:12:341 (6,7) - Claps on these.
[Easy Style]:
  1. Why not use biggest circle size for this diff?
  2. 00:35:120 - Because you started with a slider at 00:26:231 (1), this spot seems kinda empty. Maybe place a circle, or even 2 circles? Like this. Don't forget to put claps on these as well. Not terribly hard for an easy and adds some spice and removes emptiness.
  3. 00:43:453 (5) - Clap at the end.
  4. 01:05:120 (3) - This slider seems misplaced. I see that you're trying to follow the voice here as much as possible and this one is really off in that case. Not by itself, but because there is nothing at 01:04:564. I suggest to remove this slider entirely and map a longer one on that big white tick, like this.
  5. 01:08:592 (1) - This spinner doesn't really fit imo. It's kinda short as well. Try something like this. Also notice how I placed a new combo on that (5) you have there.
  6. 01:13:453 - Add a note here, your choice if you want to make your slider return once more or add a circle.
  7. 01:14:842 (5) - New combo.
  8. 01:49:564 (4) - New combo.
  9. 01:52:897 (1) - Clap at the start and at the end.
  10. 01:55:120 (1) - Clap at the start.
  11. 02:04:008 - Add a note here, your choice if it's a circle or another repeat of the previous slider. Don't forget to add a clap on it.
  12. 02:12:342 (5) - Claps on start, arrow and the end.
  13. 02:15:676 (5) - New combo, remove it from 02:16:786 (1) afterwards.
  14. 02:17:897 (2) - New combo, remove it from 02:19:564 (1) afterwards.
  15. 02:20:120 (2) - New combo.
  16. 02:22:064 (5) - Clap.
  17. 02:22:342 (6) - New combo, remove it from 02:22:897 (1) afterwards.
  18. 02:29:564 (2) - Clap?
Uh quite a long post actually, I liked the song quite alot as well.
Apologies for some combo nazi, but that's just the way how I see them better. If you're really sure your combos are just what you really want then you don't need to change all of them I suppose.
Nothing terribly wrong with the mapsets but I did leave some suggestions and comments. Hope you like them.

Good luck~ :3

edit: some corrections.
Last edited by lolcubes , edited 2 times in total.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
Atm, I dont think i will force skin. Let the player have their own way of skin etc. Tbh, I do like to have some normal in my mapset, but there is something inside it doesn't please me much. When we both online, maybe we can disscuss about it further
it's better if you put it on a pm..i'm not online that often anymore..this could be graved or ranked by the time we are both online :D
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Good beatmap and good SB ;)
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
SPOILER

lolcubes wrote:

Hey Equivalent. Here's my mod as promised. Thanks <3

[General]:
  1. Storyboard: The dark background can be smaller. Also you probably don't need it at all. Try checking these topics about some additional information:
    viewtopic.php?f=20&t=55177
    viewtopic.php?f=60&t=43552
    I have recently found out about these myself thanks to some good people, and these will improve the performance of your SB (weaker machines won't choke on it).
It was courtesy from SG, I dont even know anything about SB

[Hard Style]:
  1. 00:28:453 (10) - I think the clap should be on the start of the slider, not the end. My mistake
  2. 00:30:675 (6) - ^ Done
  3. 00:31:786 (7) - Add a Clap. Done
  4. 00:34:008 (4) - Add a Clap.^
  5. 00:34:703 (8) - Add a Clap.^
  6. 00:35:675 (5) - This note would be a really good candidate for a new combo. Musical reasons (2 stanzas per combo used so far atleast, with the exception of this combo which is a pattern). Also remove clap, sounds better without it imo.I remove the clap, but no change for new combo
  7. 00:36:231 (6) - If you changed the above (5) into a new combo, this note needs some better placing. Maybe something like this?
  8. 00:40:675 (6) - New combo.I'll stay
  9. 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern got me. It's not really hard or anything just may be slightly hard for a "hard" difficulty. In any case, make (9) a new combo. Yup, I'll stay stick with it, there is nothing wrong there. No changes in new combo though
  10. 00:44:842 (1) - Remove new combo from this note and place it closer to the note before it (and all others) so they don't have some big spacing irregularities.Make it consistent with the notes before but the new combo stay
  11. 00:47:064 - Add a note here to follow the voice, feels kinda empty without it.Yup
  12. 00:47:758 (1) - Don't like this spinner at all, it doesn't really follow the voice either. I suggest you remove it and map the voice and beats instead. Here is a suggestion: http://puu.sh/3qmx (this is how it looked before @timeline). I didn't do any spacings or anything on the field, but I think notes that would exist like that on the timeline would match the music much better. Also notice how the new combo is on the big white tick, which means removing new combo from 00:49:286 (1).I remove the spinner, your right, but i stick with my combos
  13. 00:52:064 (7,8) - Reverse these, meaning 8 should be where 7 starts on the timeline and after it 7 should come. Like this. Fits the music much better.Yup
  14. 01:02:342 (9) - New combo. This means removing new combo from 01:03:731 (1). Also try to fix the spacing between (10) and (1) so it's more or less equal to their distance of their sliders.I'll stay, this is actually for the indicate the changes in spacing change, It got time gap in between anyway
  15. 01:06:786 (9) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:07:897 (1).I'll stay
  16. 01:20:953 (1,2,3,4) - These felt weird, because I heard voice better than the rest of the stuff, and it's not really matching it. Looking at the timeline, I suggest this. Don't forget to add a clap on 5. Sounds much better. I'll stay with my silly jump pattern
  17. 01:22:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as the above pretty much, try to follow both the drumline and voice here.^
  18. 01:29:008 (8) - New combo.Ok
  19. 01:29:842 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I won't really say anything about these, they are alright, but if possible try to map the voice here as well, just like I gave you an example before. The song is quite dynamic and mapping 1/2s doesn't really make it interesting. I fine with mine here
  20. 01:42:342 (5) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:44:008 (1).I'll stay
  21. 01:55:675 (9) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:57:897 (1).^
  22. 02:00:120 (5) - New combo.^
  23. 02:14:008 (1) - Clap on the start of the slider.Forgot
  24. 02:16:786 (1) - Remove clap from the start of the slider. Yup
  25. 02:17:342 (2) - Add a clap to the start of the slider.Yup
  26. 02:21:231 (4,5) - I think you should remove these and map the drums instead. 2 short streams would feel much more fun. (3+5) I'll stay with my boring stuff
  27. 02:22:342 (6) - After you do the change above, this would be a much better spot for a new combo. Remove it from 02:23:453 (1) afterwards. ^
  28. 02:30:258 - Since you mapped a stream which follows the drums for the ending, add a note here to complete the drumline. Also add a clap on it. ok, but not the clap
  29. 02:30:119 (5,1,2,3,4) - Clap on all of these.Nope
[Normal Style]:
  1. OD+1. OD3 in a normal when an easier diff is present isn't that nice, considering this normal is slightly harder than an average normal as well.Maybe your right
  2. In general, the diff looks nice but it could look better if you used 1.1x distance snap mostly, because the circles and sliders touch eachother and doesn't look that nice. This is only a personal complaint and don't think of this as a really bad thing though.I stay with 1.0x
  3. 00:34:842 (3) - This one is really confusing for a normal diff. Ending on a blue tick when next note is a circle is a bad thing for easier diffs.
    It's slightly hard as well, but that's perfectly fine. I suggest this. Adding a slider there fits the music and while it requires slightly more work (cause you don't wait), it will be much easier to continue playing cause of a more familiar rhythm. Don't forget to put claps on both start and end as well.I'll stay with it
  4. 00:59:564 (1) - Clap.Ok
  5. 01:00:398 (4) - Clap on the slider end.yup
  6. 01:01:786 (1) - Claps on every arrow and the start, leave the end as it is now. Nope
  7. 01:02:620 (2) - This slider doesn't sound so good. Maybe try this? I'll stay
  8. 01:04:008 (1) - Clap. yup
  9. 01:04:564 (3,4) - These would sound much better if you reversed the position in the timeline. Like this. This also enables you to place claps better (which means clap on the slider end once you reverse them on the timeline).I'll stay, where this will disrupt my pattern balance
  10. 01:06:231 (2) - Clap.k
  11. 01:08:453 (3) - Clap. Yup
  12. 01:08:731 (4) - This slider also doesn't sound so good. Maybe shift it by 1/2 and add a circle in it's place? Like this. Also don't forget to add a clap on the slider end. nope
  13. 01:10:675 (1) - Clap on start.k
  14. 01:12:897 (3) - Clap on start. ^
  15. 01:15:120 (2) - Clap.^
  16. 01:17:341 (3) - Clap.
  17. 01:17:620 (4) - Same as 01:08:731.Nope
  18. 01:39:564 (1) - Clap.Yup
  19. 01:41:786 (5) - Clap. yup
  20. 01:44:008 (1) - End this slider at 01:44:564, it sounds bad like it is now. k
  21. 01:45:120 - Add a circle and put a clap on it. k
  22. 01:46:231 (3,4) - Clap on these.yup
  23. 01:48:453 (1) - Clap on the start. Yup
  24. 01:55:120 (1) - Claps on the start and the arrows.nope
  25. 02:06:786 (1,2,3,4) - These don't look nice spacing wise. I suggest you fix them so their transitions between them is the same. This is what I mean, check the spacing between them.fix it, changes of grid level during that time
  26. 02:12:341 (6,7) - Claps on theseok.
[Easy Style]:
  1. Why not use biggest circle size for this diff?Nope
  2. 00:35:120 - Because you started with a slider at 00:26:231 (1), this spot seems kinda empty. Maybe place a circle, or even 2 circles? Like this. Don't forget to put claps on these as well. Not terribly hard for an easy and adds some spice and removes emptiness.Nope
  3. 00:43:453 (5) - Clap at the end. k
  4. 01:05:120 (3) - This slider seems misplaced. I see that you're trying to follow the voice here as much as possible and this one is really off in that case. Not by itself, but because there is nothing at 01:04:564. I suggest to remove this slider entirely and map a longer one on that big white tick, like this.Yup
  5. 01:08:592 (1) - This spinner doesn't really fit imo. It's kinda short as well. Try something like this. Also notice how I placed a new combo on that (5) you have there.Nah
  6. 01:13:453 - Add a note here, your choice if you want to make your slider return once more or add a circle.circle
  7. 01:14:842 (5) - New combo.ya
  8. 01:49:564 (4) - New combo. ok
  9. 01:52:897 (1) - Clap at the start and at the end.yup
  10. 01:55:120 (1) - Clap at the start.nope
  11. 02:04:008 - Add a note here, your choice if it's a circle or another repeat of the previous slider. Don't forget to add a clap on it.k
  12. 02:12:342 (5) - Claps on start, arrow and the end. nope
  13. 02:15:676 (5) - New combo, remove it from 02:16:786 (1) afterwards.ok
  14. 02:17:897 (2) - New combo, remove it from 02:19:564 (1) afterwards. k
  15. 02:20:120 (2) - New combo.yup
  16. 02:22:064 (5) - Clap.ok
  17. 02:22:342 (6) - New combo, remove it from 02:22:897 (1) afterwards.ok
  18. 02:29:564 (2) - Clap?It got one
Uh quite a long post actually, I liked the song quite alot as well.
Apologies for some combo nazi, but that's just the way how I see them better. If you're really sure your combos are just what you really want then you don't need to change all of them I suppose.On easy, mostly I used, but not in hard/normal
Nothing terribly wrong with the mapsets but I did leave some suggestions and comments. Hope you like them.

Good luck~ :3

edit: some corrections.

Edit: XepherX, maybe I 'll just use my own difficulty
akupp
505 posts
Joined February 2010
akupp
Star~~ >.<
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
1.6 sliver velocity is kinda slow for a 108 bpm song
just saying
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
o/
Only one suggestion.

[Hard Style]
-00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - after saw it in editor I noticed than that was actually a stream an not little jumps with (1,2) notes, like
00:36:786 (1,2), and that was the only part than I miss, so maybe fully compress that stream or make it like 00:35:120 (1,2,3,4,5).

And NO Kudo for that.

Nice map :> star~
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
@ Charles445 : I know it quite slow, but intended to be hybrid hard + normal. Coz I do know there is far more harder "hard" than this. And for me, it play nicely

@Astom: thanks for your suggestions, I know most people trip off there first try, but it nothing wrong there actually, just a tiny challenge to pass the map :P . I'll stick with it for now <3

Hanyuu, AStom and Charles445 thanks for the star
Kaona
494 posts
Joined August 2010
Kaona
love love love~ <3
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
very cute >w<
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
~General~
Add an epilepsy warning for all the diffs?
Love this song <3

~Hard Style~
Besides the streams, it isn't really that difficult - and 1.6 SV? why so slow? O_O
Increase OD by 2?
00:43:731 (3) - this note feels odd/ randomly added. Remove it or remap this combo to something that fits the music better?
01:54:564 - what's the purpose of this timing section?

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old

Haneii wrote:

~General~
Add an epilepsy warning for all the diffs? I dont see the need for it
Love this song <3 <3

~Hard Style~
Besides the streams, it isn't really that difficult - and 1.6 SV? why so slow? O_O Explained before
Increase OD by 2? I'll stick with my setup for now
00:43:731 (3) - this note feels odd/ randomly added. Remove it or remap this combo to something that fits the music better? >.< I found it seem to be fine as it is now
01:54:564 - what's the purpose of this timing section? It for volume changes

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Thanks mod and star. thanks to akupp, Kaona and Ryuu too for star
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii

Equivalent wrote:

It for volume changes
But you didn't change the volume o.o

Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
Oops, supposed to be 01:37:897 is 40%
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Since noone seems to be making a diff here we go http://puu.sh/3efB
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old

Natteke wrote:

Since noone seems to be making a diff here we go http://puu.sh/3efB
Will look at it Natteke <3 But from my exp, your maps are great with the slightest error on it

edit: I changed your diff name to Natteke Style, If you happen not to like it, tell me
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Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
I might need to add more hitsounds, but atm i'm abroad for a while and can't get on osu!.
Mitiai
138 posts
Joined December 2010
Mitiai
T_T
I was writing mod for your map for a 30 minutes and then closed my Google Chrome T___T
Call me in osu, I will try to mod again in IRC.

~star
Mitiai
138 posts
Joined December 2010
Mitiai
[Hard Style]
IRC Modded.

[Natteke Style]
00:44:147 - add note.
00:44:703 - remove note.
01:46:231 - new combo?
02:23:314 (3) - all notes before it were under the slider but this note isn't. Looks weird. ><

Great song and map.
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
Thanks for your time, I will look at it later, just dont expect much, i'm a slow mapper ~.~
BexyChobo
34 posts
Joined October 2010
BexyChobo
great map
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Hard:

A bit hard for a Hard IMO with all the streams and what no, but it'll do.

Normal:

The only problem here is that you can't decide whether or not you want 1/2s to touch each other. Take 01:50:675 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3,4,5 don't touch each other, but 5,6,7 do.

This inconsistency makes the map ugly and can make it hard to read; the notes touching and not touching are read as different distances. So, please decide on one or the other and then fix it. Thank you.

Easy:

00:57:342 (2) - Make this so it doesn't touch (1), please.
01:25:675 (2) - ^

BTW, tell me to recheck the map after Natteke gets off his lazy ass and this is moved to Pending. I don't star WIP maps as a matter of principle, so please tell me. Thanks.
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
General
- Natteke is "he", not "she". :D
- Your comboburst is 438x767.
Quote from Official Ranking Submission Criteria.
Don't make skinned elements larger than template skin dimensions. This is especially true for combobusts.
template comboburst is 388x767. Fix + Full submit please.
- Make kiai time similar for all diffs. 01:20:120 - 01:37:897 + 01:55:675 - 02:13:453

Natteke Style
00:35:258 - add note
00:53:314 - ^
02:31:231 - disable this kiai

Hard Style
00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - keep spacing constantly. Hard to read for the 1st time
00:57:620 - add note
00:58:036 - remove note
01:36:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - disagree with this combo. Placing of notes is wrong. Listen music again.
02:02:064 - add note
02:11:231 (8) - add nc

Normal Style
AR -1
00:35:258 (x) - add 1/4 slider as before (like 1,2,3)?

Easy Style
01:16:786 (2) - end of this slider must be on 01:17:897 (high white tick, 1/2 earlier)
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke

Ekaru wrote:

BTW, tell me to recheck the map after Natteke gets off his lazy ass and this is moved to Pending. I don't star WIP maps as a matter of principle, so please tell me. Thanks.
Fawk off, im not lazy, I don't have a computer right now and have to use library and it doesn't allow to install games
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old

Ekaru wrote:

Hard:

A bit hard for a Hard IMO with all the streams and what no, but it'll do. xD

Normal:

The only problem here is that you can't decide whether or not you want 1/2s to touch each other. Take 01:50:675 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3,4,5 don't touch each other, but 5,6,7 do.

This inconsistency makes the map ugly and can make it hard to read; the notes touching and not touching are read as different distances. So, please decide on one or the other and then fix it. Thank you.Easy fix

Easy:

00:57:342 (2) - Make this so it doesn't touch (1), please. Ok
01:25:675 (2) - ^ Ok

BTW, tell me to recheck the map after Natteke gets off his lazy ass and this is moved to Pending. I don't star WIP maps as a matter of principle, so please tell me. Thanks.He still not around till 18th August
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old

Aleks719 wrote:

General
- Natteke is "he", not "she". :D
- Your comboburst is 438x767.Even if 438x767, I don't see it bothering the gameplay
Quote from Official Ranking Submission Criteria.
Don't make skinned elements larger than template skin dimensions. This is especially true for combobusts.
template comboburst is 388x767. Fix + Full submit please.
- Make kiai time similar for all diffs. 01:20:120 - 01:37:897 + 01:55:675 - 02:13:453 Mine have my own, Natteke have his own and that not a big issue

Natteke Style
00:35:258 - add note
00:53:314 - ^
02:31:231 - disable this kiai

Hard Style
00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - keep spacing constantly. Hard to read for the 1st timeI will keep it for now.
00:57:620 - add note Nope
00:58:036 - remove note^
01:36:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - disagree with this combo. Placing of notes is wrong. Listen music again.It play fine
02:02:064 - add note i guess, nope
02:11:231 (8) - add nc ok

Normal Style
AR -1 I will keep it for now
00:35:258 (x) - add 1/4 slider as before (like 1,2,3)?Nope

Easy Style
01:16:786 (2) - end of this slider must be on 01:17:897 (high white tick, 1/2 earlier)Nope
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
hihi~ :)
some suggestions, and i'll skip Natteke's diff as you said in my queue:

[General]
comboburst may be a little bit untidy, and to be honest, it's quite large. maybe you would like to find an experienced skin maker to help the picture more clear.

[Easy Style]
00:59:008(2) - make the overlapping perfectly.
01:55:120(T) - the kiai should starts at 01:55:675.

[Normal Style]
00:35:258(x) - add a slider here, which ends on 00:35:397.
01:01:786(1,2) - 01:47:897(x) - hmm...maybe add a note here?
01:55:120(T) - the kiai should starts at 01:55:675.

[Hard Style]
00:37:758(4) - i think this note is unnecessary...remove it plz.
00:43:453(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - creative spacing, fine for me...but idk what MATs/BATs would say. so please use normal spacing here.
01:07:897(1,2,3,4,5) - it's better to remove (2) and (4).
01:52:620(x) - add a note here.
01:55:120(T) - the kiai should starts at 01:55:675.

that's all~
so
star~
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~ :)
some suggestions, and i'll skip Natteke's diff as you said in my queue:

[General]
comboburst may be a little bit untidy, and to be honest, it's quite large. maybe you would like to find an experienced skin maker to help the picture more clear.~.~ I just remove it, actually that just a speed work without looking twice

[Easy Style]
00:59:008(2) - make the overlapping perfectly.Lol, quite hard to interpret, but I get what you mean
01:55:120(T) - the kiai should starts at 01:55:675.Nope

[Normal Style]
00:35:258(x) - add a slider here, which ends on 00:35:397. lol,k
01:01:786(1,2) - [attachment=0:59a96]sdgsew.PNG[/attachment:59a96]01:47:897(x) - hmm...maybe add a note here? k
01:55:120(T) - the kiai should starts at 01:55:675.nope

[Hard Style]
00:37:758(4) - i think this note is unnecessary...remove it plz.Nope
00:43:453(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - creative spacing, fine for me...but idk what MATs/BATs would say. so please use normal spacing here.Was intended to be like it, but I do know it trips many many people first time play, including Uan too. I just decided to make stay there till I moved it to pending, here is the time
01:07:897(1,2,3,4,5) - it's better to remove (2) and (4). k
01:52:620(x) - add a note here.Maybe you're right
01:55:120(T) - the kiai should starts at 01:55:675.I like where it is now

that's all~
so
star~
Thanks <3
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[All diffs]
I highly suggest slider tick rate 2.

[Natteke Style]
End the kiai?

[Hard Style]
I dont really know what you were going for with your combos so imma do a full combo mod, please excuse me:
Combo mod
00:27:897 (6) - New combo.
00:31:786 (7) - New combo.
00:34:008 (4,7) - New combo.
00:36:231 (6,1) - Switch New combo.
00:41:231 (7) - New combo.
00:49:008 (6,1) - Switch New combo.
00:50:953 (6) - New combo for new lyrical sentence.
00:53:175 (1) - Remove new combo this is still part of the previous pattern.
00:53:731 (4) - New combo.
00:59:842 (6) - New combo.
01:02:342 (9) - New combo.
01:03:731 (1,2) - Switch new combo.
01:05:953 (6) - New combo.
01:07:897 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:12:897 (7) - New combo.
01:20:953 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:33:453 (5) - New combo.
01:55:675 (9) - New combo.
02:00:120 (5) - New combo.
02:06:786 (4) - New combo.
02:24:564 (5) - New combo.
02:26:786 (5) - New combo.
02:29:008 (3) - New combo.

00:55:397 (X) - Add a note? Feels better to continue the rythm you've been using.
00:57:620 (X) - ^
01:03:731 (1) - Feels like it should go 1/2 earlier.
01:07:620 (X) - Add a note, fits better for me.
01:16:508 (X) - Fells pretty empty, i suggest add a note here.
01:25:397 (X) - You could add a note here and go with a diamond pattern
01:26:508 (X) - Another note in here fits better.
01:32:342 (3,4) - These sliders dont fit the music at all, i recommend you use some notes instead.
01:34:286 (X) - A note here would fit nicely to fill this gap.
01:35:397 (6) - It's really awkward to have a slider cover from an offbeat to the downbeat, specially coz there's a new lyric on the downbeat starting that normally would have a new combo, so i'd suggest you break this sldier into a 1/4 slider and a note with new combo.
01:37:342 (7) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and then put a note at where this slider used to end, since the held lyric is ending sooner which is what im guessing it was following because the background sounds have a constant rythm and nothing held, and since it's the start of a new lyric should probably have a new combo too.
01:38:175 (8,1) - Feels too empty i'd suggest adding 2 1/2 notes in between these.
01:40:397 (2,3,4) - Sound really awkward.
01:45:953 (5) - This slider sounds awkward too.
01:47:620 (X) - Add a note to follow the lyrics better and it feels too empty.
01:52:064 (10) - Either move to the next white tick or remove, since it sounds pretty off.
01:52:620 (1) - If you removed the previous one, move this to the earlier white tick, otherwise remove it really.
01:55:675 - Start the 2nd kiai here, the downbeat of the song, doesnt make much sense to start on the build up, let alone in middle of an stream.
02:02:064 (X) - Add a note here too please ;_;
02:02:342 (1,2,3) - Sounds really awkward.
02:06:508 (X) - Add a note here to fill in this gap, it sounds better.
02:07:342 (5,6) - You could add a note in between these 2 for a triplet, since the vocal has some sort of triplet on it.
02:09:842 (2) - Sounds better 1/4 later.
02:16:508 (X) - Could use a note here.
02:19:286 (X) - ^
02:22:203 (X) - Could use a note here with a new combo otherwise new combo on the next note.
02:23:175 (X) - Could use a note here too.
02:25:397 (X) - ^
02:27:620 (X) - ^

[Normal Style]
Combo mod
01:01:786 (1,2) - Switch new combo.
01:41:786 (5) - New combo.
01:46:786 (6,1) - Switch New combo.
01:51:231 (6) - New combo.
02:02:341 (5) - New combo.
02:11:230 (5) - New combo.
02:24:564 (5) - New combo.
00:28:731 (5) - A slider ending in the downbeat like this is pretty awkward, very rarely ends up being good since the slider's strong point is the start, not the end, i suggest you break this up into notes, if you do, new combo on the downbeat note.
00:30:675 (1) - ^
00:32:897 (5) - ^
00:34:842 (3,4) - remove (4) and make (3) into a repeat slider that lasts until (4) ended
00:36:786 (4) - I'd suggest a 1/2 repeat slider instead.
00:39:008 (8) - ^
00:44:564 - Why a kiai fountain right before a break?!
00:48:242 - This break doesnt make much sense to me.
00:54:564 (2,3) - Sounds weird because (2) is mapped to a note that stays held until 1/4 before (3) ends.
00:57:897 (1) - Didnt expect a sudden switch to main beat from lyrics but that's me.
01:04:564 (3,4) - (3)'s lyric is held until the end of (4) hence making (4) pointless.
01:08:731 (4) - Start the slider from the middle of where it currently is, and turn the slider's start into a note, also slider would be better ending at 01:09:564.
01:10:675 (1) - Uhh where's the held note in this slider?
01:14:842 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - What you did on the first combo fits the second and viceversa ._.
01:37:897 (1) - I'd suggest adding another repeat to this slider.
01:51:231 (6) - I'd suggest adding a hitsound finish here, to enphasize the pitch increase
01:55:675 - Start the 2nd kiai here, the downbeat of the song, doesnt make much sense to start on the build up.
02:13:453 ~ (end) - The difficulty suddenly decreases and the map becomes an [Easy] why?

Whew only one more diff to go X_X
[Easy Style]
Combo Mod
00:29:564 (4) - New combo.
00:34:008 (3) - New combo.
00:37:897 (3) - New combo.
00:37:897 (3,1) - Switch new combo.
00:42:342 (4) - New combo.
01:39:564 (3) - New combo.
02:26:231 (1,2) - Switch new combo.
00:26:231 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really this whole combo would have been better if you didnt start (1) with a slider, since you're making 3 sliders end on a downbeat making it really awkward sounding.
00:35:120 (X) - Adding a note here fits better..
00:44:564 - Why a kiai fountain right before a break?
I dont think that break fits tbh...
01:07:897 (5,6) - These stacked 1/2s are hard for new players to follow correctly
01:08:592 (1) - Spinner is kinda short for the easiest diff.
01:10:675 (1) - Note is too close to spinner for the easiest diff.
01:13:453 (4) - Hidden by a comboburst and can barely be seen, i wouldnt mind if this was a harder diffs, but newbies had a hard time noticing stuff like this.
01:41:786 (5) - You know already what i would say about splitting this in 2 because of the downbeat note, also new combo on the downbeat note, otherwise, new combo on this slider.
01:55:675 - Start the 2nd kiai here, the downbeat of the song, doesnt make much sense to start on the build up.
02:03:175 (4) - No kick sliders on the easiest difficulty please.
02:07:897 (4,5,6) - I already said something about stacked 1/2s so you probably can tell i will repeat the same thing.
02:21:786 (3,4,1) - I'd recommend unstacking these not only because of being stacked 1/2s but also since (1) is part of a new musical pattern doesnt make much sense to stack it together with the pervious one.
02:24:008 (3) - You know what by now =P

Ok guess your map needs way more work before i come here to recheck, wouldnt hurt to get some more mods as well, Good Luck!~
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