Kei wrote:

Hello. Wow this map is very very old. I hope you get it ranked soon.

[Insane]

1. 01:13:222 (6,7) - To follow better the voice, i think that you should make this 2 notes a slider instead. not,fix.
   
   Well I don't see anything that really should be changed. I like how it is but I see room for improvement imo. I don't get your combo patterns but I guess that they're ok.

That's all. Good luck!

Muya wrote:

[KSHR's Hard]
00:08:145 - サークル追加 (00:06:991 (6,7) - にstack?)
fixed そのあとの(1)のスライダーも少し位置を変えました

00:12:991 (3,4,5) - ここのスペーシングを一定にしてください
00:14:260にスライダー速度を変えるsectionが追加されているのが原因で数値が変わってるのかも no changed

01:04:683 (3) - このスライダーの終わりを01:04:914にfixed

Kei wrote:

[General]

1. The bg size is 800x599. I don't know if this is really a problem but if so, it should be 800x600.
   800*600>BG size = unrankable. need to fix. thank you
   
2. [KSHR's Hard] has a different kiai than the other diffs. For consistency, this diff kiai has to start at 00:44:722 like the other diffs instead of starting at 00:44:606. Oh and also, all the kiais of all diffs aren't on downbeat. This is surely because you changed the timing and u didn't snapped all of them properly. Please fix this.
   unified kiai time

[KSHR's Hard]

1. 00:01:222 (1) - Like I said in the Normal diff, this nc is really unnecessary imo. I suggest you to remove it. fixed
2. 00:39:299 (2) - Perhaps add a finish at the start of this slider? sounds good to me.agree with your suggestion! fixed
3. 00:44:606 (1) - I don't agree about this nc here. It doesn't follow the voice at all. To follow it better I suggest you to remove this combo and add nc at 00:45:530 (5) instead so it fits more with the voice and also, with your combo patterns in general.
   Yes, this nc doesn't follow the vocal of this song. It means that slider speed changes. I think that this nc need for it. so no chaged
4. 01:10:683 (3) - How about adding a Finish at the start of this slider? sounds good! fixed
5. 01:18:068 - Like I said about this in the normal diff, 5% volume is not rankable. Please change it to at least 15%.ok, fixed
   
   Pretty good and clean diff. I like the patterns and the rhythm. Thank you =w=

KSHR wrote:

＞Jupiter
kiai timeをInsaneに揃えました
アップする前に一度ちゃんと揃えられているか念のため確認してもらえると嬉しです！
それともう一点！
BGのサイズだけど、最低のサイズが800*600でそれより縦横どちらか一方でも小さいとunrakになっちゃいます
もしそのサイズのBGがなかったら俺のフォルダに同じ画像でサイズがrankableのがあるので声かけてくださいー

Kei wrote:

[suraimu's Normal]

1. 00:00:530 (1) - This nc alone like this looks and feels.. awkward.. I think that the next combo (00:01:453 (1)) is quite unnecessary. I suggest you to remove it to avoid very short combos.
2. 00:04:222 (1) - ^ Another.. unnecessary nc in my opinion. I suggest you to remove this one too.
3. 00:11:606 (1) - ^
4. 00:18:068 (1) - ^ Just avoid very short combos. Try to make combos between 3~6 in normal diffs. Long combos are bad but short ones aren't good. I don't recommend you to do this nc. I also think that removing the nc here would follow more the vocals.
5. 00:23:606 (1) - ^ also, you should remove the nc because you added nc to 00:21:760 (1) already so that's enough.
6. 00:27:299 (1) - Kinda unnecessary nc in my opinion. I suggest again to remove this nc to follow better the music and to avoid unnecessary short combos.
7. 00:30:068 (3,1) - The space between this 2 notes feels very empty. Maybe make 3 a slider like this to keep following the music? If you do this you should consider making this combo suggestions: add nc to 00:30:068 (3) and remove nc of 00:30:991 (1). It will sound and fit way better with the music.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:35:606 (1) - Why is here a nc? according to the music, you should remove nc here and add it to 00:36:991 (2) instead, and then to finish, remove nc of 00:37:914 (1).
9. 00:41:606 (1) - Another unnecesary nc. Please remove it. It doesn't make sense in my opinion.
10. 00:42:991 (1) - ^
11. 00:55:799 (1) - ^
12. 01:12:991 (1) - ^
13. 01:18:068 - Hitsounds volume at 5% is not rankable. Please change it to at least 15%.

Strawberry wrote:

[Insane]
00:43:453 (1) - remove NC then add NC to 00:43:914 (1) -
00:55:453 (5) - why you add NC there instead of 00:54:991 (8) - ?? then also add NC to 00:55:799 (2) -

That's all I find. moe map

Strawberry wrote:

[KSHR's Hard]
HP Drain-1? please let me reserve this suggestion
00:06:530 (1) - add NC.
00:17:145 (5) - add NC rather than 00:18:068 (3) -
00:18:991 (5) - ^
00:25:683 (1) - remove NC. then add it at 00:26:376 (1) -
00:35:606 (4) - add NC
00:40:106 - add a note here.follow the voice instead of drum as the other place in this diff.
00:40:222 (4) - add reverse
00:42:991 (8) - add NC rather than 00:43:683 (1) -
01:05:606 (5) - add NC

Strawberry wrote:

[suraimu's Normal]
`Why use slider tick rate 2?I think rate 1 is better o.o
00:19:453 - add NC rather than 00:19:914 (2) - ?
00:23:606 (5) - ^ (rather than 00:25:453 (1) -
00:26:837 - add NC
00:52:453 (1) - I think it's hard to catch the ryhthm for beginners.
00:59:837 (1,2) - a bit overlap,try to fix
01:08:837 (1) - add NC?
01:09:760 (2) - remove NC?
01:12:991 (2) - add NC?

All fix!!

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:08:145 - remove this note not,fix
00:25:799 - make this slider shorter and put on white tick not,fix
00:30:530(4,5) - stack better not,fix
00:55:453(5,1) - stack this sliders not,fix
00:56:376 - this note touch HD line correct it fixed

Katty Pie wrote:

Hard

00:08:145 - remove this notes
this note follow the drum. no changed
00:17:145(1,2) - stack better
I stacked perfectly and saved. but, their spacing is not 0.00x.
(please open and check my dif after stacking perfectly)

Suzully wrote:

最大動画解像度は4:3なら800*600、16:9なら848*480

-Gamu- wrote:

ﾟ*｡(ｏ'∀')b｡*ﾟこんにちは♪

Request from the in-game..

[General]


●soft-slidersideを入れることをオヌヌメ。　無音のね。　他の譜面見れば　すぐ手に入るよ

●この譜面のフォーラムのタイトルが　 NANA - Explorer World Explorer World (Short Ver.)　となっているんで、直しましょう。
まぁ、直さなくてもいいけど、気になるｗ　http://puu.sh/B5wi

●Tagsに "opening" と "hentai"　を追加？　

●Letterboxっていうやつ　チェックいらないのでは？　http://puu.sh/B5Du

●ビデオの解像度が1280*720とバカでかい状態です。下に書いてある通りです。

Suzully wrote:

最大動画解像度は4:3なら800*600、16:9なら848*480

[Jupiter]



●00:21:068 (1,2) - x:136 y:328に移動させると　きれいかも
●00:30:876 (6) - ここでは、前のスライダーの終点にピッタリ重ねるよりもずらしたほうが良い。曲が言っている　(spacing 0.8x or 1.0xあたりがいい）

こんだけしか見つからなかったよ：３

fight!

こんだけでごめんね

-Gamu- wrote:

[KSHR]

●Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at: 00:37:495 (snap to 00:37:453) こういうのって直さなくてもいいんだっけ、覚えてない。一様書いた
00:37:495 (T) - これ自分でも確認したら、その直前の00:37:395 (T) と全く同じ内容だった・・ ていうわけで削除しておきました！ thanks!

●全然みつからないんだけど（怒）　神ですか？　ハイ　ｋｓｈｒさんは神です not 神!!

S MoMo wrote:

うぉぉぉおおおおおおおおナイス選曲だぁあああああああああああああああああああああああ
ひゃっはあああああああああああああああああああああああああああああああ
ぜひランクドを！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
みーこ！！！みーこ！！！

……スズノネやってきます

1. 01:16:222 - 曲よりhitsoundが早いので恐らく赤線追加する必要あり。
   僕的に76290くらいだと思うけどまぁアテにならないのでプロに頼んで下さい
   (もし不安なら最後のnote消してそこからspinnerにすれば大丈夫だと思います)
   
2. BGの容量が800x600にしてはちょっと大きいです。　200~300kbくらいがベスト
3. VideoもややShortにしては余分な感じがします。(10MB超えててMATに指摘された事もあります)
   もし機会があったら容量減らしてみて下さい。
   
4. Kiai timeの提案
   #1 Kiai 00:44:722 ~ 00:55:799 -
   #2 Kiai 00:59:491 ~ 01:14:376 -

• AR+2　現在のだとHDより低いので変更をオススメします

1. 00:19:453 (4) - 7 combosは最低難易度にはちょっと長いのでここで区切ってみましょう
2. 00:43:914 - backの音が消えるとこなのでfinishは適切じゃないです。
3. 00:46:222 (3) - 始点のfinishは要らないと思います　あってないですし
4. 00:48:068 (2) - ^
5. 00:49:914 (2) - ^
6. 00:51:760 (2) - ここはまぁ合ってるからいいかな
   ただ終点の音と比べると始点の音はだいぶ弱いので外すor音量下げるはした方が良いと思います
7. 00:53:606 (2) - ^
8. 00:54:530 (1,2) - 最低難易度なので(2)はsliderで
9. 01:00:991 (2) - remove finish from beginning
10. 01:02:837 (2) - ^
11. 01:04:684 (2) - ^
12. 01:14:376 (1) - 01:14:837 - にドラムがあるのでそっち拾いませんか？最低でも終点のclapはあってない＆浮いてるので削除で

1. 00:00:760 - note追加？00:08:145 (4) - にはあるので
2. 00:06:530 (1,2) - sliderslideが煩いのでデフォのwhistle使いたかったらC:2使いましょう
3. 00:07:914 (3) - 00:00:530 (1) - こっちは笛なので統一しませんか？
4. 00:22:453 (5) - 終点finish
5. 00:29:837 (1,2) - switch newcombos
6. 00:33:760 (2,3) - 終点clap？
7. 00:43:337 (2,1) - (2)のrepeat1つ増やして00:43:683 (1) - を右に1個ずらした方が音に合う
8. 00:46:568 (6) - 始点finish
9. 00:48:414 (4) - ^
10. 00:50:260 (4) - ^
11. 00:53:953 (4) - ^
12. 01:01:337 (5) - ^
13. 01:06:299 (4) - 01:05:030 (4) - とかと比べるとこのfinishが凄い大げさに感じるから少し音量下げてみるとか
14. 01:13:453 (3,4) - 音取りの提案というか　http://puu.sh/ChtR

• HD+1推奨 HardがOD5HD6なので～

1. 00:34:106 (2) - finish
2. 00:40:914 (9,10) - 3連打に変更？
3. 00:44:145 (2) - ここでdrumはなってないのでclap外した方がいいです
4. 01:06:530 (6) - 小さめでfinishいれてみては？
5. 01:06:991 (3) - 始点finish
6. 01:12:530 (2) - ^
7. 01:15:645 - vocalがここに乗るので(1)を伸ばしてみるとか？

• • 00:36:991 (1) - Delete this slider. Add a circle here and another one at 00:37:453 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on the second circle.
  • 00:41:606 (4) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:42:530 (1) - Remove "New Combo".

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • 00:01:222 (2) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:14:376 (5) - ^

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • 00:01:222 (2) - Add "New Combo"
  • 00:02:376 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:05:837 (1) - ^
  • 00:06:068 (2) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:07:453 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:09:760 (1) - ^
  • 00:11:606 (5) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:12:299 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:13:222 (1) - ^

Melophobia wrote:

[ハゲ] ハゲてねぇよ

1. 00:00:760 - note追加？00:08:145 (4) - にはあるので
2. 00:06:530 (1,2) - sliderslideが煩いのでデフォのwhistle使いたかったらC:2使いましょう
3. 00:07:914 (3) - 00:00:530 (1) - こっちは笛なので統一しませんか？
4. 00:22:453 (5) - 終点finish
5. 00:29:837 (1,2) - switch newcombos
6. 00:33:760 (2,3) - 終点clap？
7. 00:43:337 (2,1) - (2)のrepeat1つ増やして00:43:683 (1) - を右に1個ずらした方が音に合う
8. 00:46:568 (6) - 始点finish
9. 00:48:414 (4) - ^
10. 00:50:260 (4) - ^
11. 00:53:953 (4) - ^
12. 01:01:337 (5) - ^
13. 01:06:299 (4) - 01:05:030 (4) - とかと比べるとこのfinishが凄い大げさに感じるから少し音量下げてみるとか
14. 01:13:453 (3,4) - 音取りの提案というか　http://puu.sh/ChtR

all fixed!

xxheroxx wrote:

[KSHR's Hard]

• • HP Drain Rate: 5 please let me reserve this suggestion
  • 00:01:222 (2) - Add "New Combo". nah
  • 00:14:376 (5) - ^ fixed

Melophobia wrote:

o/

[General]

1. 01:16:222 - 曲よりhitsoundが早いので恐らく赤線追加する必要あり。
   僕的に76290くらいだと思うけどまぁアテにならないのでプロに頼んで下さい
   (もし不安なら最後のnote消してそこからspinnerにすれば大丈夫だと思います) プロに頼んでみます
   
2. BGの容量が800x600にしてはちょっと大きいです。　200~300kbくらいがベスト fixed
3. VideoもややShortにしては余分な感じがします。(10MB超えててMATに指摘された事もあります)
   もし機会があったら容量減らしてみて下さい。むむむ
   
4. Kiai timeの提案
   #1 Kiai 00:44:722 ~ 00:55:799 -
   #2 Kiai 00:59:491 ~ 01:14:376 - fixed

[Insane]

• HD+1推奨 HardがOD5HD6なので～ fixed

1. 00:34:106 (2) - finish fixed
2. 00:40:914 (9,10) - 3連打に変更？ noooooo
3. 00:44:145 (2) - ここでdrumはなってないのでclap外した方がいいです fixed
4. 01:06:530 (6) - 小さめでfinishいれてみては？ fixed
5. 01:06:991 (3) - 始点finish fixed
6. 01:12:530 (2) - ^ fixed
7. 01:15:645 - vocalがここに乗るので(1)を伸ばしてみるとか？not,fiiiix

難しい曲なのに良く出来てると思います～頑張って！

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Insane]

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • 00:01:222 (2) - Add "New Combo"
  • 00:02:376 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:05:837 (1) - ^
  • 00:06:068 (2) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:07:453 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:09:760 (1) - ^
  • 00:11:606 (5) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:12:299 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:13:222 (1) - ^

All fix~

Nice beatmap, good job~

-Gamu- wrote:

[suraimu]

●HP Drainを-1?　そうすれば、バランス良いfixed
●00:11:606 (4) - x:232 y:184にすれば、　良いfixed
●00:40:222 (3) - 　これだけAIModでエラーでたよ。修正のしようがなかったのでそのままにしました。。。　どうしても問題がある場合はその部分を作り直します。。。
●00:59:376 (2) - 普通にサークル１個にしたほうが初心者に良いfixed[/color]

Melophobia wrote:

[suraimu's Normal]

• AR+2　現在のだとHDより低いので変更をオススメします-Gamu-さんの提案を採用しました。

1. 00:19:453 (4) - 7 combosは最低難易度にはちょっと長いのでここで区切ってみましょうfixed
2. 00:43:914 - backの音が消えるとこなのでfinishは適切じゃないです。hitosoundを削除して音を小さくしました。
3. 00:46:222 (3) - 始点のfinishは要らないと思います　あってないですしfixed
4. 00:48:068 (2) - ^fixed
5. 00:49:914 (2) - ^fixed
6. 00:51:760 (2) - ここはまぁ合ってるからいいかな
   ただ終点の音と比べると始点の音はだいぶ弱いので外すor音量下げるはした方が良いと思います削除しました。
7. 00:53:606 (2) - ^fixed
8. 00:54:530 (1,2) - 最低難易度なので(2)はsliderで(1)と繋げて長いスライダーにしました。
9. 01:00:991 (2) - remove finish from beginningfixed
10. 01:02:837 (2) - ^fixed
11. 01:04:684 (2) - ^fixed
12. 01:14:376 (1) - 01:14:837 - にドラムがあるのでそっち拾いませんか？最低でも終点のclapはあってない＆浮いてるので削除でfixed

xxheroxx wrote:

[suraimu's Normal]

• • 00:36:991 (1) - Delete this slider. Add a circle here and another one at 00:37:453 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on the second circle. ignore
  • 00:41:606 (4) - Add "New Combo". fixed
  • 00:42:530 (1) - Remove "New Combo". fixed